建议信

推荐第1篇：如何写建议信

如何写建议信

建议信是书信的一种形式，属于应用文体。建议信是写信人向收信人就某事提出自己的建议或忠告。有可能是写给个人，就其遇到某个文体提出自己的看法或观点；也可能是写给某个组织或机构，就改进某方面的问题提出自己的建议或忠告。

写作指导

建议信要写出写信的目的、建议的内容、提出建议的理由和根据。理由要合情合理，语气要礼貌。

建议信通常采用“三段式结构”：

第一段：开门见山，科学、委婉地提出有针对性的建议

第二段：围绕建议，展开说明。

首先，阐述建议的理由和根据，然后根据对方的实际情况进行分析，最后预测自己

的建议会给对方带来良好的影响，在本段的开头，写信人也可以说明自己提出该建议的前提。

第三段：简单予以希望，希望收信人一定采纳自己的建议，并相信该建议会对对方有所帮助。

写建议信要注意：

1.建议要具有说服性，必须具有充分的理由和根据，展示出自己独特的见解。

2.语气用词要得体。在劝说对方接受你的建议时，应该注意措辞，慎用Must等命令性词汇，要用协商性、试探性的语气提出建议，避免用生硬说教的口吻。

3.要传达特定的信息。首先要点名写信的牧师是提建议；然后简要描述问题，提出建议并具体分析所提出的建议；最后真诚地希望对方能接受自己的建议，并礼貌地结束全文。

4.结构要合理。要合理安排所有内容，使文章有条理、符合逻辑。

常用表达：

1.建议信开头常用句式

I’m writing to expre mun views/ideas about...

I’m writing to give some suggestions to ...

I will try my best to make some constructive suggestions...

Here I’d like to give my advice on...

I’d like to suggest that...

You’ve asked me for some advice on...and I’ll try t make some suggestions.

Thanks for trusting me.It’s my great pleasure to give you some suggestions/advice/tips.

I’m sorry to hear/learn that...

2.表达建议的常用句式

I would like to suggest that...

If I were you,I would...

As far as I am concerned.../In my opinion...

It seems better that...

Why not...?

I would be a good idea if ...

For one thing...for another...

In the first place/Firstly/First...Secondly//Second...Last but not least...

推荐第2篇：英文建议信

英文建议信范文 A hotel you stayed in recently asked guests to write to the manager and suggest ways in which they could improve their service.Write a letter to the manager, explain who you are, say what you liked about the hotel, and suggest ways in which they could be improved.（建议信） 亲爱的经理： 我是看过你们给最近落脚贵宾馆的客人的邀请函后写此信的，你们在信中邀请客人做些提议， 以便你们可以进一步改善服务。 Dear Manager, I’m writing in response to your invitation to guests who have recently stayed at your hotel to suggest ways in which you could further improve your service.我上个月曾入住贵宾馆，发现你们的客户服务非常好。事实上，你们的每一名员工，从经理 到房间清洁工都彬彬有礼、乐于助人，无一例外。房间的标准远远超过了我的期盼。 I was a guest at your hotel last month and I found that the level of customer service was excellent.Indeed, every member of your staff, from the manager to the room-cleaning maid, was, without exception, extremely polite and helpful.The standard of the rooms was far beyond what I had expected.然而，我发现宾馆的餐厅早上八点半便停止供应早餐了。因为我是在度假，很希望能够在九 点半左右吃早餐，这样情况下就做不到了。我也跟其他几位客人谈过，他们也表达了同样的 失望。还有，我感到如果你们能够提供中文报纸，那中国客人的住宿质量将大幅提升，要知 道：过去的几年里，中国住客的人数一直处于上升中。 However, I found that the hotel restaurant stopped serving breakfast at 8:30am.As I was on holiday, I would have liked to take my breakfast at around 9:30, thus I was unable to do so.I also spoke to several other guests who expreed the same disappointment.In addition, I feel that if you could supply newspapers in Chinese, the quality of stay for Chinese speakers, of whom the number has been on a steady rise in the past few years, would be considerably enhanced.我很希望知道自己的建议是否在你们不断提升整体服务的过程中派上了用场。 期盼受到您的回复。 您真诚的：Kenny Gao I would be happy to know if my suggestions have turned out to be useful in your constant improvement of your overall service.Looking forward to your reply.Yours faithfully, Kenny Gao

推荐第3篇：公司建议信

对公司发展的意见和建议

尊敬的领导：

从到本公司X年之余,也算是公司的老员工了,很荣幸能够在这里工作，在这段时间里，我目睹了公司奔发展,并伴随着公司一起成长。现对于公司的发展，我提以下几点建议，希望我的这些建议能对公司的发展有所帮助。

一、建议公司建立职工培训制度

俗话说：要想立其行，必先利其器。员工培训是员工入职必要的阶段。

现在招聘的职工很多都是刚出大学校门的毕业生，对于本公司产品比较陌生甚至于不懂，如果不经过培训就直接进入工作，会造成很多盲目的工作。建议公司对于新来员工进行专业知识的培训及开展有识之士对员工的专业讲课，使新来员工快速掌握本公司产品的相关业务技能及谈判技巧，从而更加有效的发挥每个员工的价值，为公司做出自己的贡献。

二、建议公司建立职工晋升机制

对初来员工经过培训经过相关的知识考核，并建立相关制度，充分实现能者上，弱者下，末位淘汰，并进行相关职务及相应薪水的调整，使每个员工都有主人翁意识和不断进取的态度，在不断竞争的良性循环中更加强大。

三、职责分配制度

通俗讲，各行其职，各负其责。公司对相关职能部门相关权利职责进行明确规定，避免重复交叉管理，造成不利于企业发展的因素，从而使公司更加有序进行。

以上建议以上是我个人的一些想法和建议，不妥之处，还请领导多多包涵和原谅。

建议人：XXX

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期：XX年X月XX日

推荐第4篇：工信部门建议

罗山

服务企业症结及建议

症结:一是落实服务企业承诺打折扣,如在招引项目签订合同时明确服务的内容但落地后迟迟兑现不了,造成企业不满意;二是服务机制不健全,不配套,由于机构改革机制体制变化,我县产业集聚 区\\石材园区承担了大量发展工业经重任,而工信局却被冷落,处于尴尬境界,存在有弱现象。 建议:对近年签约的项目全面排查,对落地项目建立问题台账,并逐一协调解决,对新签约项目加强双项考察,增强双方慎承诺,重兑现意识,确保引进项目能够蒎地建设电.二是能够理顺工作体制机制,细化工作责任,确保服务企业落实到位

南湾

二、开展企业服务症结及建议

（一）症结：个别项目承诺的优惠政策未兑现，影响企业投资积极性；项目部分手续办理程序繁杂、周期过长，项目区土地房屋征收困难，导致项目开工滞后。

（二）建议：建议依法依规落实项目优惠政策，落实项目手续限期办结制，加大加快土地房屋征收进度，切实推进项目早落地、早开工、早建设

四、对策和建议 狮河

1、推动企业转型升级。围绕我区主导产业和产业布局，引导中小企业调整产业、产品结构；希望政府加大对企业研发投入，开发先进适用的技术、工艺和设备，研制适销对路的新产品；支持企业加大信息技术应用，着力推进设计研发信息化、生产装备数字化、生产过程智能化和经营管理网络化，促进信息化与工业化融合。

2、加大政策扶持力度。配套设立区中小企业发展专项资金，对中小企业进行创业资助，对中小企业产品结构调整和科技成果转化、技术改造项目进行贴息，对中小企业社会化服务体系进行资助等。积极组织企业申报中央和省财政扶持中小企业发展的技改、信息化建设、淘汰落后产能等项目和资金，加大跑项争资力度。

3、优化企业发展环境。进一步严格落实“五禁止、十不准”，切实减轻企业负担。简化政府审批流程，真正实现一站式办公，提高行政效率。继续落实领导联系企业制度，建立服务企业直通车和定期现场办公制度，积极帮助企业解决实际困难。

4、完善产业集聚区建设。加快金牛产业集聚区的基础设施和公共服务体系建设，为中小企业提供“企业集中布局、产业集群发展、资源集约利用、功能集合构建”配套设施齐备、成本低廉的发展平台。 潢川

工信部门开展企业服务症结及建议 症结：

1、工信部门是新组建的经济管理服务部门，业务工作多、业务知识涵盖面宽，工作具体、细微，对业务工作人员要求高。而我市缺乏对全市企业服务人员系统全面的培训，也没有有计划、有步骤的培训计划。

2、企业服务工作缺少有力抓手，助推企业发展缺少有效措施。

3、企业服务办公联席会议的作用有待加强。建议：

1、加强企业服务工作人员的业务培训力度，提高企业服务工作人员政治待遇。

2、增加企业服务经费，研究制定行之有效的企业发展扶助措施。

3、强化企业服务办公联席会议作用，解决具体问题。

三、对策和建议

结合我县实际，借鉴发达地区的成功经验，提出如下对策建议：

商城

（一）放宽市场准入，促进全民创业。对于各类市场主体，按照国家有关法律、政策要求以及城市规划要求，设立统一的规模经济标准、质量技术标准、环境保护标准等。积极创造条件，鼓励和引导民营资本重点参与供水、供气、供热、绿化、环保、交通等基础设施建设，鼓励和推进民营资本投资全县农村文化、卫生、医疗、旅游和非义务教育等，激活投资主体。

（二）解决工业民营经济发展融资难、用工难、用地难问题。一是政府部门和金融部门要加大对工业民营企业的资金支持力度，及时掌握企业发展动态，提高其在市场经济条件下的抗风险能力，建议政府设立中小企业发展扶助基金。积极发展以工业民营经济为主要对象的中小型商业银行和投资公司。鼓励民间资本参与工业民营经济发展的信用担保体系建设，严格按照有关法律和规定设立信用担保机构，建立多种资金来源、多种组织形式参与多个层次的担保体系，以解决现行金融体制改革框架下工业民营经济融资的瓶颈性制约。 同时，要积极鼓励工业民营企业建立互助担保基金，支持个体工商户、农民实行联户联保等。二是加大培训力度，解决工业民营企业招工难问题。人社部门要充分发挥导向作用，加强用工培训，提高人员技能，为工业民营企业提供急需的高素质人才。要充分用好项目载体，以项目培育人才、以项目引进人才、以项目留住人才。要大力开展劳动竞赛和生产比武活动，挖掘树立工业民营经济战线的生产管理典型，增强工业民营经济战线的创业意识、技术意识和人才意识，鼓励广大干部职工在车间、生产线上实践成才、学习成才、科研成才，不断提升全县工业民营经济人才队伍素质和总量。要大力推进企业文化建设，针对企业实际，推行人性化管理，最大程度满足员工精神和物质需求，解决企业留人难问题。同时，要建立健全相关工作机制，注重做好人才储备工作，为企业发展提供后备力量。三是帮助工业民营企业解决用地问题。加快“人地挂钩”试点工作，积极争取建设用地指标。积极开展“增减挂钩”工作，加大农村闲置建设用地复垦整理力度，按照先拆后建的原则，用好城乡建设用地增减挂钩政策，争取周转指标。开展工业项目供地排查清理工作，按合同约定据实核查投资强度、容积率等指标，对土地低效利用的项目限期整改，提升土地利用效率。

（三）提高服务效能，创优工业民营经济发展环境。一是进一步优化舆论环境，利用各种传媒工具和形式，广泛宣传中小企业对富民强县的重要作用，宣传企业家的先进事迹，形成谁发展谁光荣的社会舆论氛围。二是进一步优化政务环境，把是否有利于个体私营经济发展作为衡量工作的尺度，要多服务、多帮忙、多设路标，简化办事程序。突破全县工业企业在创新发展过程中存在的瓶颈问题，为中小企业提供外贸、技术、金融、法律、信息、能源等全方位的政策支持。三是进一步优化法制环境。坚决保护工业民营经济业主利益，对侵犯工业民营经济合法财产的案件，依法及时查处。四是进一步优化市场环境。坚决打击偷税漏税、制假售假、走私贩私等扰乱市场经济秩序的行为，保障绝大多数守法、规范经营的企业健康发展。

（四）规范工业企业管理，提高自身素质。一要健全完善现代企业制度。构建权责明确、运转协调、有效制衡的法人治理结构，真正建立起现代企业制度。二要实施好“金桶工程”，有效提升企业管理水平。支持鼓励企业进行管理创新，广泛应用先进管理方法和手段，加强财务管理、内控机制、风险管控等各类基础管理，培育先进企业文化，全面提升现代管理水平。加快转换企业经营机制，深化内部制度改革，建立有效的激励约束机制。三要高度重视企业家队伍建设。要从全局和战略的高度加强企业家队伍建设，深入谋划企业经营管理人才特别是高层次人才的发展工作，通过高端人才公开选聘等多种方式，引进一批年富力强的高素质企业管理人才。要加强企业家的培育工作，着力提高企业家的战略决策能力、经营管理能力、市场应变能力、开拓创新能力、风险防范能力和驾驭局面能力，打造一支具有较高综合素质的企业家队伍。四要推进中小企业信息化建设，鼓励企业加快应用电子信息技术步伐，提高生产过程的自动化、控制智能化和管理信息化水平。做好电子商务推广工作。引导中小企业树立新型营销观念，积极加入市“品品在线”或自建网络销售平台，开展网络销售、网络采购、网上谈判等电子商务活动，有效促进电子商务的发展进程。

（五）加强对外合作，帮助工业企业开拓市场。继续组织县内优秀工业民营企业参加第十二届中国国际中小企业博览会，鼓励指导各级各部门开展各种形式的展销、展会活动，鼓励支持县内工业民营企业参加各种全国或国际性展览会，促使更多的商城工业民营企业名优产品走向全国、走向世界。

（六）创新管理机制体制，强化协调指导。继续推行领导干部和部门联系企业制度，“一对一”协调解决企业在生产经营过程遇到的困难和问题，严格兑现有关优惠政策。积极引导工业民营企业诚实守信依法经营，引导和加强企业在发展过程中的道德建设和信用建设，自觉遵守国家法律法规，自决依法经营，努力提高经营管理水平，不断增强市场竞争能力，防范市场风险和经营风险。对诚信纳税的企业给于鼓励和表彰，努力推动建立诚信经营的良性循环机制，营造良好的信用氛围。引导、帮助个私企业进行观念创新、组织创新、技术创新，提高工业民营经济参与国内市场竞争的能力。鼓励和支持中小企业成立协会，为工业民营企业提供各种服务，建立向工业民营经济发布政策和经济信息的制度，引导工业民营经济按照地方经济发展方向和市场需求健康有序和谐发展。

光山 工信部门开展企业服务的症结及建议

（一）症结：一是工信部门服务企业无抓手。由于职能有限，服务有点心有余而力不足，很多工作工信部门协调力度有限；二是工信部门的担保机构，在企业融资担保时受制于银行。

（二）建议：一是要构建担保公司与银行间的和谐机制，凡担保公司担保的企业贷款银行要降低贷款利息；另外，要广泛开展助保金贷款模式。二是要整合农民工培训资金，发挥职业学校的培训作用。三要不折不扣地落实国家对中小微企业税收、用地等各种优惠政策。

潢川经济开发区 建议

1、建设市局加大对企业政策性资金的扶持力度。

2、建议市里积极组织协调，加快土地报批和土地指标争取。

3、建议市里整合教育资源，加大对企业职业工人的培训。

淮滨

建议：

工信部门作为企业服务部门，无任何实质性服务措施，建议在工信部门成立企业投诉平台，受理企业在运营过程中遇到的问题，直接上报领导，并要求相关单位限期解决。

推荐第5篇：高中英语作文,建议信

篇1：高中英语作文--建议信

建议信(1)-----阐释原因；提出建议类

请你代表你班同学给校长写一封信，反映一下你校食堂的几点问题，以引起学校重视，并针对问题提出两条合理建议。问题包括：

1.菜价昂贵，菜市单一；2.排队时间长，浪费午休时间；3.味道不佳，浪费现象严重。

注意：1.词数不少于120； 2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；3.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇: 食堂 canteen dear principal, recently, many students are discuing the problems of the canteen.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ i sincerely hope you can adopt my suggestions.thank you! yours, li hua 作文范文： dear principal, some students think the prices of the dishes are too high and that the choices are too limited.another concern is that the time spent in waiting is so long that we have le time to have a rest.meanwhile, some students think that the taste of the food is awful, which leads to a lot of waste.the prices be more reasonable and the choices of dishes be more various.需注意的词汇、表达：

1.delicious waiting taste(n.味道) tasty (adj.可口的) cook (n.厨师) cooker (n.炊具) price 价格

2.lower /bring down the price 降低价格 3.at a lower/reasonable price 以较低的价格 4.varieties of dishes 种类多样的菜品 5.for one thing,„„.for another,„„

6.make sb (not)do sth 7.wait /stand in line / in a queue for a long time 8.the kinds of food are .表达食堂出现的问题： 9.the prices of dishes are so high that many of us can’t afford them. 10.there are so few dishes to choose from, which is far from satisfactory./ which can’t satisfy our needs. 11.it takes us so much time to stand in line, which decreases our time of rest at noon.12.the food in the canteen doesn’t taste . the taste of food in the canteen isn’t 13.the food in the canteen tastes so bad that a lot of food is left and wasted 14.it’s a waste of time to stand in line for a long time. 15.the food in the canteen tastes so bad, which leads to a severe phenomenon of wasting food.16.in the long run, it’s bad for our health and study. 17.it goes without saying that it will influence our sleep in the afternoon.表达提出的建议： 18.improving the taste of the food is also a good solution to the problems.19.i think it’s neceary to provide more kinds of food.20.it’s high time that we took measures to solve the problems. so it’s high time for us to take measures 21.to solve the problems, i think the canteen should set up a new figure(形象) and improve the present condition to satisfy the students’ needs. 22.we hope the canteen can provide us with dishes of a high quality at a reasonable price.23.the canteen should open more windows so that we needn’t wait so long. 24.as far as i’m concerned, the canteen should attach importance to the quality.what’s more, different kinds of food should be provided. 25.measures are supposed to be taken to improve the conditions of the canteen. 建议模板： dear „., i’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to„„.(引出话题).here are a few suggestions.first of all, it is important to do sth.then, it also helps to do sth.besides, it should be a good idea to do sth. 建议句型积累：

1.many ways can contribute to solving the problem, but i think the following may be the most effective ones. 2.i’d like to make some suggestions on „„.3.it’s of great importance for sb to do sth. it’s neceary for sb to do sth 4.it would be a good idea for sb to do sth./ it would be a better idea if„„.5.it contributes /helps a lot if „„„ 6.i suggest that „../ my suggestion is that „ it’s better to do sth 8.measures are supposed to be taken to do sth we are supposed to take effective measures to do sth 9.it’s high time that sb sth./ it’s high time for sb to do sth 建议信(2)-----阐释原因；提出建议类

假定你是中学生李华。在一位名叫sad mother的学生家长的博客上，你看到如下内容。请你根据博客内容、写作要点和要求，用英语给这位家长回复。

i’m the mother of a fourteen-year-old.recently i have found that my daughter told lies to me.the other day she told me that she did well in the final exam.however i found out she failed in math and english.what should i do? 写作要点：

1.表明了解她的问题；2.帮她分析孩子撒谎的原因； 3.提出至少两条建议 要求： 1.短文须写在答题卡的指定区域。 2.短文词数不少于100（不含已写好的部分）。 3.内容充实，结构完整，语意连贯。 4.书写需清晰、工整。

hi，sad mother， i have learned that_____________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________

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___________________________________________________________________________ 作文范文： hi,sad mother, she is afraid you will punish her if she tells you the truth.besides, nowadays, parents put too much preure on their kids.in order not to let you down, she lie . –heart talk with her, making her know being honest is more important than scores.in addition, don’t be too strict.微小的) mistakes. 需要注意积累的词汇、短语、和句子：

daughter女儿 expectation 期望 be worried / concerned about 担心 calm down 冷静下来 at a lo 迷惑不解 keep in touch with 保持联系 be strict with sb in sth 在某方面对某人要求严格 heart-to-heart 推心置腹的

idea 注意想法 test 测试 text 文本 cheat 欺骗 want sb to do sth 想让某人做某事

1.it was because she didn’t want to let you down that she pretended to achieve high scores.2.she isn’t aware that the lies have hurt both you and herself. 3.being a teenager, she needs to be encouraged.and it’s you who can do this.4.it is probably your high expectations to her that makes her decide to lie. 5.you should figure out the reason why she lied to you before solving the problem.6.it goes without saying that lying is bad behavior. 7.the reason why she didn’t tell you the truth may be that she didn’t want to let you down. 8.it is suggested that you should have a face-to-face talk with her so that she might open her heart to you. 9.to avoid the lies, you should encourage her rather than blame her when she fails in exams 10.the reason that leads to the problem may be various. 11.confronted with (面对) these problems, you should take a series of effective measures to help you daughter. 13.it’s suggested that you should attach more importance to physical and mental health.moreover, it’s better to encourage her to do what she wants.改错：

1.there are some advice. 2.don’t sad. 3.you should give her more encourage. 4.she may afraid that if she fails in the exam, you will punish her. 5.if she has difficulty in learning, you should inspire she and help she out.6.she doesn’t want you angry.7.please not to be so worried. 8.one of the reason is that she isn’t dare to tell you the truth.9.because she afraid parents. 10.so she don’t want to mention it.11.you should apology to her. 12.you’d better to encourage her to be a honest people.13.you’d better be care about her health and study.14.i’m very understand your condition.15.she may doesn’t want you to be angry. 建议信(3) 为了帮助中学生健康成长，某中学英文报开辟了“heart-to-heart”专栏。假设你是该栏目的编辑jamie，收到一封署名为worried的求助信。信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰：近日容易发脾气，使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请用英文给该同学写一封回信。 内容要点如下： 1．表示理解并给予安慰； 2．提出建议并说明理由。 注意：

1．词数120左右； 2．信中不能出现与本人相关的信息；

3．信的开头与结尾已为你拟好，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：temper n.脾气，情绪 hi worried， i’m sorry to know that you’re having such a had time at the moment. yours, jamie hi worried, im sorry to know that youre having such a bad time at the moment.the truth is that everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be going wrong, i quite understand how you are feeling now and there is no need to worry about it so much.the important thing is to learn to control your temper so that you may not do or say anything you’ll regret.here are three useful tips. yours, jamie highlights: 1.first, you are supposed to figure out what makes you upset,and then keep away from it.2.what’s more, you are supposed to take an active part in outdoor activities to relax. 3.to solve the problem as soon as poible, you can open your heart to a good friend, talking about your trouble. 4.carried by two, burdens are lighter. 5.it’s high time that you should relieve your preure. 6.measures are supposed to be taken to control your temper. 7.there is no denying that everyone will lose his temper when something unexpected happens.8.instead of being angry, what is important for you is to learn to control your temper from now on. 建议信(4) 高二下期已经过去半学期，高三已经在向同学们招手。随着学习和心理压力日益加大，一些同学的正常生活受到影响，如睡眠不好，身体也开始亮起了红灯。请你根据以下要点，给学校的英语刊物写一篇稿子，向同学们提出建议，并简述理由或举例说明:

1、劳逸结合；

2、健康饮食；

3、适当锻炼；

4、保持乐观心态。注意：

1、短文必须包括所列内容；

2、词数120左右；

3、文章开头已给出；

4、写成一篇完整的短文，不要逐条列举。

作文范文：

preventing them sleeping well and causing problems with their health.in order to improve the condition, i’d like to offer some advice. i sincerely hope that the suggestions above will be of great help to you.句型及短语积累： 1.my advice is as follows.2.the following is my advice. 3.finally, remain optimistic about your future.such a positive attitude towards life can be helpful in lifting your spirits. 4.then it also helps to take proper exercise.not only can it strengthen your health, but also it can make you feel relaxed. 5.go outdoors and play team games with your friends as it is an effective way to keep healthy.6.second, you may as well take some exercise, which is a good way to keep healthy. 7.third, go outdoors and take exercise.not only can it help students keep healthy, but also it is a good way to reduce preure. 9.second, you are supposed to eat healthy food as it will offer students enough energy. 10.in addition, you must eat healthy food so as to keep fit, which is of great importance to your study.11.as an old saying goes, “all work and no play makes jack a dull boy”. 12.gone are the days when we were at senior 2 and the senior 3 is saying hello to us. 13.go out to breathe fresh air and relax your brain. 14.keeping a healthy diet is eential to you, which helps you keep fit. 15.the most important thing i think is to seek for the balance between study and pleasure. 16.keep a balance between study and relaxation 17.keep fit/healthy keep( in) good health keep in good condition/shape keep in a good state of health 18.with time going by /as time goes by 19.take exercise 纠错: 1.exercise everyday so that you will be much stronger.2.remain a optimistic attitude towards life 3.eat more vegetables, which can strength your health.4.in addition, have a balanced diet can keep your health.5.only if you believe in yourself you can carry on as normal.6.take good rest 7.under preure of study, not only do our lives affected, but also we are in poor condition.(两处错) 8.last but not least, remain optimistic is a good way to lift your spirits.9.taking exercise properly contributes to make you full of energy.10.you should eat something which agrees with you . 11.at the same time, we are faced with much stre that results in many students can’t sleep well. 12.here are some advice on how to solve it. 13.only you ensure enough nutrition can you study better. 14.finally, keep an optimistic attitude to life, it will be helpful in lifting your spirits.15.write---_________---___________---____________(写出过去式,过去分词,现在分词) occur---______________---______________---__________ 篇2：建议信英语作文

英语写作练习：a letter for advice dear mi wang, i’m a student from guizhou experimental high school.i have a problem.i argued with my best friend lisa for some very tiny things and said some bad words to her a few days ago.then, we never talk to each other any more.now, i feel quite lonely sometimes and don’t want to lose my best friend.i know she must be hurt by my words, and i am not sure that she still want to be my friend or not? i do want to change this situation, but i don’t know how.i would be grateful if you could give me some advice. yours, jim what is jim’s problem? if you were mi wang, what would you say? dear jim, （写作模板） im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to (引出主题). here are a few suggestions.first, it is important to

.then, it also helps to .besides, it should be a good idea to .you can also .(此三句不同的句式提出建议) as to

, i suggest (有时根据需要具体到某一反面).in addition, (其他建议).im sure (预测可能的结果，给对方以行动的信心和决心).im looking forward to (表达愿望). sincerely yours, mi wang 英语建议信格式提出建议常用句型i suggest that„ why not do„? why don’t you do„? you would better do/ not do„ if i were you，i would„„ it seems to me that you could„„ i think it would be more beneficial if you could„„ i feel that it would be beneficial if„ you may consider doing„ as you may agree that i would like to suggest that„

英语建议信格式-结尾常用句式

i hope that my suggestions are helpful for your decision-making anyway. i would be more than happy to see improvement in this regard. i believe that you will take my suggestions into serious account. i would be ready to discu about this matter with you to further details. whatever you decide to do， good luck with your studies/work！ 写作中常用连接词： （1）表选择关系或对等关系的连接词：either„or„，neither„nor, or, as well as„, and, both„and„

（2）表因果关系或对等关系的连接词：therefore, so, as a result, as the result of „，because of, due to „,owing to, thanks to等。

（3）表时间顺序的连接词：the moment, as soon as, at first, then, later, meanwhile, at the beginning, in the end, before long, for the first（second„）time, the minute等。

（4）表转折关系的连接词：yet, and yet, but , while, on the contrary, on the other hand, however, at the same time（然而）等。

（5）表解释说明的连接词：that is, that is to say, in other words, such as, for instance, and so on, etc.and the like等。

（6）表递进关系的连接词：not only„but (also), what’s more, whats worse, besides, in addition, worse still, moreover, above all等。

（7）表示总结的连接词：in a word, on the whole, in short, briefly, in brief, to sum up, in all 练习：假定你是李华，你的英国朋友peter来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文。请你根据下列要点写回信。 要点：⑴ 参加中文学习班；⑵ 看中文书刊、电视； ⑶ 学唱中文歌曲； ⑷ 交中国朋友。

注意：可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；开头语已给出。

dear peter, best wishes, li hua 篇3：高中英语作文 建议信(如何学英语) 写作

假如你是李华，你刚收到了你的朋友王梅的电子邮件，她在邮件里向你询问在高中如何学好英语。请你根据下列的内容给她写封回信。

1.上课认真听讲，做好笔记，课后及时复习；

2.词汇是基础，每天早上花半个小时的时间背诵单词，朗读课文；

3.课外多与同学用英语交流，提高听力和口语能力；

4.每天坚持写日记。

注意：1.词数120—150词左右，短文的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总数；

2.内容可适当发挥，注意行文连贯。 dear wang mei, i’m very glad to have received your e-mail. best wishes! yours, li hua dear wang mei, i’m very glad to have received your e-mail.now i’m writing to give you some advice on how to learn english well in high school.first of all,you should listen to the teacher carefully and take notes in cla so that 众所周知),vocabulary is of great importance / eential.you should spend half an hour in the morning reciting words and reading texts aloud.what’s more,try to your clamates in english out of cla.in this way you can improve your listening and spoken english quickly.last but not least,you should keeping a diary,which helps improve your written english and helps you go over/review the words and expreions that you have learnt. i hope these suggestions will be of use to you.remember:where there is a will,there is a way.有志者事竟成 /the man who has made up his mind to win will never say “impoible”.一个决心要成功的人是从来不会说“不可能的”。

best wishes! yours, li hua 篇4：高中英语建议信作文

dear peter, here are a few suggestions.first, it is important to take a chinese course, as youll be able to learn from the teachers and practice with your fellow students.then, it also helps to watch tv and read books, newspapers, and magazines in chinese whenever poible.besides, it should be a good idea to learn and sing chinese songs, because by doing so youll learn and remember chinese words more easily.in addition, you can also make more chinese friends.they will tell you a lot about china and help you learn chinese. try writing to me in chinese next time. 写作注意问题 ? 一是单词拼写要正确，大小写等。开头结尾部分的语法要正确。 ? 二是选择多种表达方式，例如给出的不同的提建议的句式。 ? 三是结构要清晰，三段式，有过渡词。

? 四是卷面要整洁。 ? 五是字数要够，答题卡上划得横线部分尽量写满，最多剩一行 篇5：2015英语作文常用句型及建议信的模板

1.重点句型

1).it’s adj for sb to do 做„对某人来说

2).„ so „ that „ 如此„ 以至于„

„ too „ to do 太„ 而不能„

such „ that „ 如此„ 以至于„

3).not„until„ 直到„才„ 例: i didn’t go to bed until my mother came back. 4).the reason why + 句子 is that + 句子 „ 的原因是„

例：the reason why he got angry was that she told him a lie. 5).that is why + 句子 那是„的原因

6).that is because + 句子 那是因为„

7).it is said that + 句子 据说„ 例：it is reported that + 句子 据报道„

8).there is no doubt that + 句子 毫无疑问„

9).it goes without saying that + 句子 不言而喻，毫无疑问

10).there is no need to do 没必要做„

11).there is no point in doing 做某事毫无意义

12）.as is known to all, +句子 众所周知

as we all know, +句子 据我们所知

it is generally/ publicly known / considered that„, 众所周知

13) find it + adj to do„ 觉得/发现做„ 是„的。

例︰i find it neceary to take down notes while listening. 14) not only„but also 不但„而且..... 例︰in just three years, she had not only finished all the leons, but also received her doctor’s degree. 15)in order to 为了....例︰he worked very hard in order to realize his dream.19) 就我的看法„„；我认为„„in my opinion, as far as i’m concerned 20) 随着人口的增加„„ with the increase/growth of the population, „

随着科技的进步„„ with the advance of science and technology, „

21).since + s + 过去式, s + 现在完成式. to senior high school, he has worked very hard. 2. 1.had do 最好(不)做

2.how what about doing „怎么样? 3.i should do 我认为你应该„

4.i advice that you should do 我建议你做„

5.if would do„ 我要是你的话，我会做„

6.it’s best to do 最好做„

7.why don’t you do„? 为什么不„

3.兴趣

1.like doing 2.enjoy doing 3.be doing 喜欢做„ 4.be keen on n/doing 喜欢做„

5.prefer to do a rather than do b 宁愿做a也不愿做b 6.be in doing = show/ take great interest in n / doing 4. 1.try to do做„ 2.strive to do 努力做„

3.try to do = do one’s best to do 竭尽全力做„

4.make 例：since he went 提建议 better (not) about / think you suggest / i were you, i not do / why 表示喜欢和感/ love fond of interested 努力做„ 努力one’s best efforts to do = make every effort to do 尽力做„

5.do what sb can (do ) to do 尽力做„

6.spare no effort to do 不遗余力的做„

7.do what / everything sb.can to do 尽某人全力做„

5.打算做„ / 计划做„

1.intend to do 打算做„ 2.be going to do 打算做„

3.decide 决定做„ 4.determine to do决定做„

5.be determined to do决定做„ 6.make up one’s mind to do 6. 1.want would like to do 想做„ 2.hope to do 希望做„

3.expect 期待着做„ 4.wish to do 希望做„

5.consider doing 考虑做„

7.宾语的动词

1.finish practice 练习suggest建议 consider 考虑

mind enjoy 喜欢 +doing 2.look doing 盼望做„ keep on doing 坚持做„

dream 想做„ can’t help doing 情不自禁地做„

keep prevent sb.from doing 阻止某人做„

be doing be busy with + 名词 忙于做„

spend money (in )doing spend time / money on + 名词 花费时间做„a good time / enjoy oneself doing 玩得开心

have have problem / have difficulty (in) doing 做„有困难

/ plan to do 下定决心做„ 表示想/希望 to do= to do 只加doing 作完成 介意 固定句型

forward to of doing 梦/ stop / busy (in ) time / trouble / 或 with + 名词 have fun / have 8.学习用定语从句

先行词+关系词+定语从句

高中英语满分书信作文模板——建议信

dear ______, ①you have asked me for my advice about ______ , and i will try to make some suggestions here. ②in my opinion, _____（建议的内容）. ③i would appreciate it very much if you could consider my suggestions.i will be looking forward to your reply. yours sincerely, li ming 高中英语满分书信作文模板——请求信

dear ______ , ①i am writing ask to _____（请求的内容）. ②could you please ___________-②would you mind ___________③i wonder if you could___________ ⑥thank you for your attention to these requests..⑧i look forward to a favorable reply. yours sincerely, li ming 高中英语满分书信作文模板——询问信

dear ______ , ①i am ______（自我介绍）.②i am writing to see if it is poible for you to provide me with information regarding ______（要询问的内容）. ③first of all, what are ______（第一个问题）? ④secondly, when will ______（第二个问题）? ⑤thirdly, is ______（第三个问题）? ⑥i would also like to inquire ______（将最重要的问题单独成段）.⑦could you be so kind as to send me some relevant booklets on the above-mentioned aspects? ⑧thank you for you kindne, and your prompt attention to this letter will be highly appreciated. yours sincerely, li ming 假设你是新华中学的学生张华，班里从外地转来一名同学李明，他一时无法融入新的班集体中，感到很苦恼。

推荐第6篇：如何写英文建议信

To Whom It May Concern,

As a student of this university, I would like to take the opportunity to expre my appreciation for your kind aistance as always.Meanwhile, I feel that it would be beneficial to expre my views concerning the quality of the library service.

In the first place, I find that most keyboards of the library computers are in poor operation, which brings much inconvenience to the users.I would also recommend the library to improve the efficiency of purchasing new books and subscribing to academic journals.Last but not least, the study rooms need to be furnished with a better lighting system.

I hope that you take my suggestions into serious consideration.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

译文：

有关负责人：

作为本校学生，首先我想利用这个机会对于您一直以来的帮助表示感谢。同时，我也想对图书馆的服务提出一些建议，相信将有助于服务的提高。

首先，我发现图书馆电脑的大部分键盘都有操作上的问题，给用户带来很多不便。我也想建议图书馆提高购买新书和定购学术期刊的工作效率。最后，自习教室的照明系统也需要进一步的改进。

我希望您能够认真考虑我的建议。

您真诚的，

闪光词汇及词组：

: 利用这个机会

: adj.有益的

keyboard: n.键盘

purchase: v.购买

: 定购

: 安装有

: 照明系统

万能句型： 李明

I would like to take the opportunity to expre my appreciation for your kind aistance as always.

I feel that it would be beneficial to expre my views concerning...

In the first place...I would also recommend...Last but not least...

I hope that you take my suggestions into serious consideration.（2）Directions:

Write a letter to the president of your college about the unpleasant conditions of the university dormitory, and suggesting poible solutions

You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.

Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter.Use \"Li Ming\" instead.Do not write the addre.

范文：

Dear Sir,

As I am a freshman, I feel that it is my obligation to make some suggestions concerning the basic conditions of our dormitory.

Generally speaking, the dormitory building situates in a satisfying environment and is well-equipped.However, there are two unpleasant aspects that cause inconvenience to us: 1) the heating system is in need of improvement-it fails to maintain warmth in our rooms during the winter; 2) the furniture is not designed in a practical manner -there lacks a shelf to place books.

I would be more than happy if my proposal could be considered and positive changes take place in these regards.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

译文：

尊敬的校长：

作为本校的一名大一新生，我觉得就学生宿舍条件提出一些建议是我应有的责任。

总的来说，我们的宿舍楼环境良好、设备齐全。但是，仍然存在一些不尽人意的方面，给我们的生活带来了不便：

1、冬天室内暖气不足，供暖系统需要进一步改进；

2、家具设计不合理，没有供我们放书的书架。

如果您能够考虑我的这些建议并使学校在以上方面做出改进，我将感激不尽。您真诚的，

李明

闪光词汇及词组：

: n.义务，责任

: 总的来说

: v.处于

: adj.设备齐全的

maintain: v.保持，维持

place: v.放置

: 以......的方式

万能句型：

A freshman as I am, I feel that it is my obligation to make some suggestions concerning...

I would be more than happy if my proposals could be considered and positive changes take place in these regards.

Propose proposal

Recommend recommendation

Put forward my proposal

You could consider doing something

If I were you，I would….

Were I you, I would

Had it not been for…

If it had not been for your kind/help

My suggestions are as follows:

Complain/ expre my diatisfaction/

Much to my regret, I write this to place/file a complaint against…Calligraphypeckingoperafacialmake-up

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推荐第7篇：高中英语建议信作文

篇1：高中英语作文--建议信

建议信(1)-----阐释原因；提出建议类

请你代表你班同学给校长写一封信，反映一下你校食堂的几点问题，以引起学校重视，并针对问题提出两条合理建议。问题包括：

1.菜价昂贵，菜市单一；2.排队时间长，浪费午休时间；3.味道不佳，浪费现象严重。

注意：1.词数不少于120； 2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；3.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇: 食堂 canteen dear principal, recently, many students are discuing the problems of the canteen.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ i sincerely hope you can adopt my suggestions.thank you! yours, li hua 作文范文： dear principal, some students think the prices of the dishes are too high and that the choices are too limited.another concern is that the time spent in waiting is so long that we have le time to have a rest.meanwhile, some students think that the taste of the food is awful, which leads to a lot of waste.the prices be more reasonable and the choices of dishes be more various.需注意的词汇、表达：

1.delicious waiting taste(n.味道) tasty (adj.可口的) cook (n.厨师) cooker (n.炊具) price 价格

2.lower /bring down the price 降低价格 3.at a lower/reasonable price 以较低的价格 4.varieties of dishes 种类多样的菜品 5.for one thing,„„.for another,„„

6.make sb (not)do sth 7.wait /stand in line / in a queue for a long time 8.the kinds of food are .表达食堂出现的问题： 9.the prices of dishes are so high that many of us can’t afford them. 10.there are so few dishes to choose from, which is far from satisfactory./ which can’t satisfy our needs. 11.it takes us so much time to stand in line, which decreases our time of rest at noon.12.the food in the canteen doesn’t taste . the taste of food in the canteen isn’t 13.the food in the canteen tastes so bad that a lot of food is left and wasted 14.it’s a waste of time to stand in line for a long time. 15.the food in the canteen tastes so bad, which leads to a severe phenomenon of wasting food.16.in the long run, it’s bad for our health and study. 17.it goes without saying that it will influence our sleep in the afternoon.表达提出的建议： 18.improving the taste of the food is also a good solution to the problems.19.i think it’s neceary to provide more kinds of food.20.it’s high time that we took measures to solve the problems. so it’s high time for us to take measures 21.to solve the problems, i think the canteen should set up a new figure(形象) and improve the present condition to satisfy the students’ needs. 22.we hope the canteen can provide us with dishes of a high quality at a reasonable price.23.the canteen should open more windows so that we needn’t wait so long. 24.as far as i’m concerned, the canteen should attach importance to the quality.what’s more, different kinds of food should be provided. 25.measures are supposed to be taken to improve the conditions of the canteen. 建议模板： dear „., i’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to„„.(引出话题).here are a few suggestions.first of all, it is important to do sth.then, it also helps to do sth.besides, it should be a good idea to do sth. 建议句型积累：

1.many ways can contribute to solving the problem, but i think the following may be the most effective ones. 2.i’d like to make some suggestions on „„.3.it’s of great importance for sb to do sth. it’s neceary for sb to do sth 4.it would be a good idea for sb to do sth./ it would be a better idea if„„.5.it contributes /helps a lot if „„„ 6.i suggest that „../ my suggestion is that „ it’s better to do sth 8.measures are supposed to be taken to do sth we are supposed to take effective measures to do sth 9.it’s high time that sb sth./ it’s high time for sb to do sth 建议信(2)-----阐释原因；提出建议类

假定你是中学生李华。在一位名叫sad mother的学生家长的博客上，你看到如下内容。请你根据博客内容、写作要点和要求，用英语给这位家长回复。

i’m the mother of a fourteen-year-old.recently i have found that my daughter told lies to me.the other day she told me that she did well in the final exam.however i found out she failed in math and english.what should i do? 写作要点：

1.表明了解她的问题；2.帮她分析孩子撒谎的原因； 3.提出至少两条建议 要求： 1.短文须写在答题卡的指定区域。 2.短文词数不少于100（不含已写好的部分）。 3.内容充实，结构完整，语意连贯。 4.书写需清晰、工整。

hi，sad mother， i have learned that_____________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________________________ 作文范文： hi,sad mother, she is afraid you will punish her if she tells you the truth.besides, nowadays, parents put too much preure on their kids.in order not to let you down, she lie . –heart talk with her, making her know being honest is more important than scores.in addition, don’t be too strict.微小的) mistakes. 需要注意积累的词汇、短语、和句子：

daughter女儿 expectation 期望 be worried / concerned about 担心 calm down 冷静下来 at a lo 迷惑不解 keep in touch with 保持联系 be strict with sb in sth 在某方面对某人要求严格 heart-to-heart 推心置腹的

idea 注意想法 test 测试 text 文本 cheat 欺骗 want sb to do sth 想让某人做某事

1.it was because she didn’t want to let you down that she pretended to achieve high scores.2.she isn’t aware that the lies have hurt both you and herself. 3.being a teenager, she needs to be encouraged.and it’s you who can do this.4.it is probably your high expectations to her that makes her decide to lie. 5.you should figure out the reason why she lied to you before solving the problem.6.it goes without saying that lying is bad behavior. 7.the reason why she didn’t tell you the truth may be that she didn’t want to let you down. 8.it is suggested that you should have a face-to-face talk with her so that she might open her heart to you. 9.to avoid the lies, you should encourage her rather than blame her when she fails in exams 10.the reason that leads to the problem may be various. 11.confronted with (面对) these problems, you should take a series of effective measures to help you daughter. 13.it’s suggested that you should attach more importance to physical and mental health.moreover, it’s better to encourage her to do what she wants.改错：

1.there are some advice. 2.don’t sad. 3.you should give her more encourage. 4.she may afraid that if she fails in the exam, you will punish her. 5.if she has difficulty in learning, you should inspire she and help she out.6.she doesn’t want you angry.7.please not to be so worried. 8.one of the reason is that she isn’t dare to tell you the truth.9.because she afraid parents. 10.so she don’t want to mention it.11.you should apology to her. 12.you’d better to encourage her to be a honest people.13.you’d better be care about her health and study.14.i’m very understand your condition.15.she may doesn’t want you to be angry. 建议信(3) 为了帮助中学生健康成长，某中学英文报开辟了“heart-to-heart”专栏。假设你是该栏目的编辑jamie，收到一封署名为worried的求助信。信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰：近日容易发脾气，使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请用英文给该同学写一封回信。 内容要点如下： 1．表示理解并给予安慰； 2．提出建议并说明理由。 注意：

1．词数120左右； 2．信中不能出现与本人相关的信息；

3．信的开头与结尾已为你拟好，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：temper n.脾气，情绪 hi worried， i’m sorry to know that you’re having such a had time at the moment. yours, jamie hi worried, im sorry to know that youre having such a bad time at the moment.the truth is that everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be going wrong, i quite understand how you are feeling now and there is no need to worry about it so much.the important thing is to learn to control your temper so that you may not do or say anything you’ll regret.here are three useful tips. yours, jamie highlights: 1.first, you are supposed to figure out what makes you upset,and then keep away from it.2.what’s more, you are supposed to take an active part in outdoor activities to relax. 3.to solve the problem as soon as poible, you can open your heart to a good friend, talking about your trouble. 4.carried by two, burdens are lighter. 5.it’s high time that you should relieve your preure. 6.measures are supposed to be taken to control your temper. 7.there is no denying that everyone will lose his temper when something unexpected happens.8.instead of being angry, what is important for you is to learn to control your temper from now on. 建议信(4) 高二下期已经过去半学期，高三已经在向同学们招手。随着学习和心理压力日益加大，一些同学的正常生活受到影响，如睡眠不好，身体也开始亮起了红灯。请你根据以下要点，给学校的英语刊物写一篇稿子，向同学们提出建议，并简述理由或举例说明:

1、劳逸结合；

2、健康饮食；

3、适当锻炼；

4、保持乐观心态。注意：

1、短文必须包括所列内容；

2、词数120左右；

3、文章开头已给出；

4、写成一篇完整的短文，不要逐条列举。

作文范文：

preventing them sleeping well and causing problems with their health.in order to improve the condition, i’d like to offer some advice. i sincerely hope that the suggestions above will be of great help to you.句型及短语积累： 1.my advice is as follows.2.the following is my advice. 3.finally, remain optimistic about your future.such a positive attitude towards life can be helpful in lifting your spirits. 4.then it also helps to take proper exercise.not only can it strengthen your health, but also it can make you feel relaxed. 5.go outdoors and play team games with your friends as it is an effective way to keep healthy.6.second, you may as well take some exercise, which is a good way to keep healthy. 7.third, go outdoors and take exercise.not only can it help students keep healthy, but also it is a good way to reduce preure. 9.second, you are supposed to eat healthy food as it will offer students enough energy. 10.in addition, you must eat healthy food so as to keep fit, which is of great importance to your study.11.as an old saying goes, “all work and no play makes jack a dull boy”. 12.gone are the days when we were at senior 2 and the senior 3 is saying hello to us. 13.go out to breathe fresh air and relax your brain. 14.keeping a healthy diet is eential to you, which helps you keep fit. 15.the most important thing i think is to seek for the balance between study and pleasure. 16.keep a balance between study and relaxation 17.keep fit/healthy keep( in) good health keep in good condition/shape keep in a good state of health 18.with time going by /as time goes by 19.take exercise 纠错: 1.exercise everyday so that you will be much stronger.2.remain a optimistic attitude towards life 3.eat more vegetables, which can strength your health.4.in addition, have a balanced diet can keep your health.5.only if you believe in yourself you can carry on as normal.6.take good rest 7.under preure of study, not only do our lives affected, but also we are in poor condition.(两处错) 8.last but not least, remain optimistic is a good way to lift your spirits.9.taking exercise properly contributes to make you full of energy.10.you should eat something which agrees with you . 11.at the same time, we are faced with much stre that results in many students can’t sleep well. 12.here are some advice on how to solve it. 13.only you ensure enough nutrition can you study better. 14.finally, keep an optimistic attitude to life, it will be helpful in lifting your spirits.15.write---_________---___________---____________(写出过去式,过去分词,现在分词) occur---______________---______________---__________ 篇2：高中英语建议信作文

dear peter, here are a few suggestions.first, it is important to take a chinese course, as youll be able to learn from the teachers and practice with your fellow students.then, it also helps to watch tv and read books, newspapers, and magazines in chinese whenever poible.besides, it should be a good idea to learn and sing chinese songs, because by doing so youll learn and remember chinese words more easily.in addition, you can also make more chinese friends.they will tell you a lot about china and help you learn chinese. try writing to me in chinese next time. 写作注意问题 ? 一是单词拼写要正确，大小写等。开头结尾部分的语法要正确。 ? 二是选择多种表达方式，例如给出的不同的提建议的句式。 ? 三是结构要清晰，三段式，有过渡词。

? 四是卷面要整洁。 ? 五是字数要够，答题卡上划得横线部分尽量写满，最多剩一行 篇3：建议信英语作文

英语写作练习：a letter for advice dear mi wang, i’m a student from guizhou experimental high school.i have a problem.i argued with my best friend lisa for some very tiny things and said some bad words to her a few days ago.then, we never talk to each other any more.now, i feel quite lonely sometimes and don’t want to lose my best friend.i know she must be hurt by my words, and i am not sure that she still want to be my friend or not? i do want to change this situation, but i don’t know how.i would be grateful if you could give me some advice. yours, jim what is jim’s problem? if you were mi wang, what would you say? dear jim, （写作模板） im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to (引出主题). here are a few suggestions.first, it is important to

.then, it also helps to .besides, it should be a good idea to .you can also .(此三句不同的句式提出建议) as to

, i suggest (有时根据需要具体到某一反面).in addition, (其他建议).im sure (预测可能的结果，给对方以行动的信心和决心).im looking forward to (表达愿望). sincerely yours, mi wang 英语建议信格式提出建议常用句型i suggest that„ why not do„? why don’t you do„? you would better do/ not do„ if i were you，i would„„ it seems to me that you could„„ i think it would be more beneficial if you could„„ i feel that it would be beneficial if„ you may consider doing„ as you may agree that i would like to suggest that„

英语建议信格式-结尾常用句式

i hope that my suggestions are helpful for your decision-making anyway. i would be more than happy to see improvement in this regard. i believe that you will take my suggestions into serious account. i would be ready to discu about this matter with you to further details. whatever you decide to do， good luck with your studies/work！ 写作中常用连接词：

（1）表选择关系或对等关系的连接词：either„or„，neither„nor, or, as well as„, and, both„and„

（2）表因果关系或对等关系的连接词：therefore, so, as a result, as the result of „，because of, due to „,owing to, thanks to等。

（3）表时间顺序的连接词：the moment, as soon as, at first, then, later, meanwhile, at the beginning, in the end, before long, for the first（second„）time, the minute等。

（4）表转折关系的连接词：yet, and yet, but , while, on the contrary, on the other hand, however, at the same time（然而）等。

（5）表解释说明的连接词：that is, that is to say, in other words, such as, for instance, and so on, etc.and the like等。

（6）表递进关系的连接词：not only„but (also), what’s more, whats worse, besides, in addition, worse still, moreover, above all等。

（7）表示总结的连接词：in a word, on the whole, in short, briefly, in brief, to sum up, in all 练习：假定你是李华，你的英国朋友peter来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文。请你根据下列要点写回信。 要点：⑴ 参加中文学习班；⑵ 看中文书刊、电视； ⑶ 学唱中文歌曲； ⑷ 交中国朋友。

注意：可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；开头语已给出。

dear peter, best wishes, li hua 篇4：高中英语作文 建议信(如何学英语) 写作

假如你是李华，你刚收到了你的朋友王梅的电子邮件，她在邮件里向你询问在高中如何学好英语。请你根据下列的内容给她写封回信。

1.上课认真听讲，做好笔记，课后及时复习；

2.词汇是基础，每天早上花半个小时的时间背诵单词，朗读课文；

3.课外多与同学用英语交流，提高听力和口语能力；

4.每天坚持写日记。

注意：1.词数120—150词左右，短文的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总数；

2.内容可适当发挥，注意行文连贯。

dear wang mei, i’m very glad to have received your e-mail. best wishes! yours, li hua dear wang mei, i’m very glad to have received your e-mail.now i’m writing to give you some advice on how to learn english well in high school.first of all,you should listen to the teacher carefully and take notes in cla so that 众所周知),vocabulary is of great importance / eential.you should spend half an hour in the morning reciting words and reading texts aloud.what’s more,try to your clamates in english out of cla.in this way you can improve your listening and spoken english quickly.last but not least,you should keeping a diary,which helps improve your written english and helps you go over/review the words and expreions that you have learnt. i hope these suggestions will be of use to you.remember:where there is a will,there is a way.有志者事竟成 /the man who has made up his mind to win will never say “impoible”.一个决心要成功的人是从来不会说“不可能的”。

best wishes! yours, li hua 篇5：高中英语建议信和倡议书作文精心整理

建议信

how to write a letter for advice ⑴ 说明建议的内容；

⑵ 提出具体建议的原因；

⑶ 指出采纳建议的益处。

注意事项：语言要委婉、礼貌，顾及对方感受。

directions: for this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a letter.suppose you are zhang ying.write a letter to xiao wang, a schoolmate of yours who is going to visit you during the summer holiday for a week.you should write at least 100 words according to the suggestions given below in chinese.

1、表示欢迎。

2、提出对度假安排的建议。

3、祝愿

dear xiao wang, the palace museum, the summer place, the great then使文章结构紧凑

will make you have enough time to appreciate（欣赏） 使自己的安排具有说服力 what you really want to see. them with your own eyes.with more knowledge about these places, you will have a better understanding of chinese history and culture. i am eager to meet you soon in beijing.表达良好的祝愿，符合文体要求

假如你叫孙军，是恩施高中的学生，要给市长写一封信，反映学校门前交通拥挤现象，包括以下要点：

参考词汇: 穿行 thread one’s way 天桥 overpa 范文1 dear mayor, i’m a student of no.1 middle school.here i have something to tell you. i’m looking forward to your reply. yours, sun jun 范文2 dear mayor, i’m a student of no.1 middle school.here i have something to tell you. ①bordering a primary school,/②located next to a primary school, my school faces the main road directly, which always has a traffic jam at the peak time of the whole day.①additionally/②in addition, many parents send their young children to school and fetch them home,① thus making the traffic heavier./②thus causing more serious traffic jams./③thus resulting in more serious traffic jams.there is no denying that we students, threading our way through maes of cars, are exposed to great danger.①seeing these matters, never will i stop urging our government to take some measures.for the sake of improving the quality of traffic, it is significant to build an overpa./②in order to release the stre of traffic problems, i strongly suggest that relevant authorities should take active/effective measures like building an overpa./③from my point of view,/as far as i’m concerned,/in my opinion, some measures are supposed to be taken by government as soon as poible such as building an overpa to improve the conditions of the traffic./④aimed at solving these problems, the government should take some measures immediately, such as building an overpa ahead of our school. i’m looking forward to your reply. yours, sun jun 例1广州某电视台打算开办一个面向中学生观众的英语节目, 新聘任了来自英国的john作为节目编辑助理。现在, john就节目内容向广大中学生征求意见。假如你是学生李华, 建议开办“广州全接触” (all-round guangzhou)节目。请根据以下节目设想给john写信：

dear john，

i know you’re going to set up an english program for middle school students.so i’m writing to suggest a program — “all-round guangzhou”.this program will cover topics like the history, education, famous scenic spots, food and famous people of guangzhou.it would be better to broadcast it on weekends so that we students can have the chance to watch it. besides, you can also invite some middle school students to get involved in the program, which will surely arouse other students’ interest in it.not only will this program help students improve their english, but also get them to know more about the culture of guangzhou so as to introduce guangzhou to foreign visitors.i am sure it will be well-received by the middle school students.i hope you can take my suggestion into consideration. sincerely yours, li hua 例2 假设你是小明的好朋友李华，小明参加了一个英语演讲比赛，他对比赛非常担心，向你求助，请你根据以下内容给他写一封建议信。

[精华点评] 建议信的写作关键在于作者给出建议的语气委婉而中肯, 使对方容易接受。很多考生习惯使用祈使句或者you should的句型表示建议, 这样比较生硬，因此考生转换不同的句型使语言丰富, 如范文中使用了you should..., you had better..., remember to do等句型。在最后祝愿对方成功的时候, 可以用简明扼要的句型, 如wish you good luck / wish you succe / may you succeed, 使文章长短句结合得当。

dear xiaoming, li hua 例3假如你是李华，你刚收到了你的朋友王梅的电子邮件，她在邮件里向你询问在高中如何学好英语。请你根据下列的内容给她写封回信。

1.上课认真听讲，做好笔记，课后及时复习；

2.词汇是基础，每天早上花半个小时的时间背诵单词，朗读课文；

3.课外多与同学用英语交流，提高听力和口语能力；

4.每天坚持写日记。

注意：1.词数120—150词左右，短文的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总数；

2.内容可适当发挥，注意行文连贯。

dear wang mei, i’m very glad to have received your e-mail.now i’m writing to give you some advice on how to learn english well in high school. i hope these suggestions will be of use to you.remember: where there is a will, there is a way./the man who has made up his mind to win will never say “impoible”. best wishes! yours, li hua 例4你是我们学校一名很热心的学生，得知我们校要建设娱乐休闲中心，正在征求同学们的意见，请你根据以下几个方面的提示给校长写一封120词左右的建议信。

1.娱乐休闲中心应该包括乒乓球室和羽毛球室。

2.最好在学生的课余时间开放。

3.尽量不要收费。 4.„„ dear mr.president, firstly, i’d like to suggest that there should be a table-tennis room as well as a badminton court.i think it would do great good if you could build the center with an eye to those students who are interested in playing table-tennis or badminton.secondly, could the center open in our spare time? if so, we will have enough time to make full use of it.thirdly, we will be more than happy if the center is free.as we all know, not every student can afford the extra expense. thank you for reading my letter.i hope you will consider my suggestions.if the center is built, it will greatly enhance student life here on campus. yours sincerely, li hua 倡议书

写倡议书时，尽量使用具有鼓动性和感召力的语言，如名人名言、格言、警句、以及对偶、排比等句式，以提高语言的表达效果。例如，在倡议书的结尾使用下列句子就可起到很好的效果。

“please start from now on! you never know what you can do until you try!”

structure：

1.introduction 发出倡议的根据、原因和目的。

statement of the problem how serious is the problem summary of the proposed solution----in brief, what solution do you propose? 2.body 所倡议的具体内容和要求。

what do you want done? how should it be done? what things or people are needed? when? how much will it cost? 3.conclusion 要表示倡议者的决心和希望

benefits—how will the proposal help the person reading the letter a call to action—what do you want the reader to do 范文欣赏

(introduction of the topic and himself/ threats / proposal) since we water, we should finding this problem.we may take a decade or more to improve the water quality, even though it may cost a lot of money to clean the polluted rivers.|| secondly, (measures / difficulties ) ’s act now to make our world a better place. (foreseeable results/ a call) 例1由于废气、污水、白色垃圾等环境污染已危及到人类的健康与生存, 为鼓励大家节能环保,你们学校将举办一次“低碳行动”的环保活动, 假设你是高三（6）班的一名学生, 将要在这个活动中向全体师生发起“低碳生活”的倡议,以下是倡议的内容：

1.尽量绿色出行：采取步行或自行车方式;2.少喝一次瓶装水；3.尽量不用一次性制品, 如一次性木筷子和塑料袋；4.每周至少手洗衣服一次； 5.每周少开手机、电视一天。

推荐第8篇：感谢信和建议信

感谢信和建议信

1.假设你是李华，曾在美国学校，现现已回国。你想联系你的美国老师Mr.Smith.但没有其联系方式，请根据以下几点给你的美国同学Tom写一封信：

1． 感谢Tom对你英语学习的帮助；

2． 询问Mr.Smith的近况并索要其联系方式；

3． 邀请Tom在春节期间来中国感受中国文化。

注意：1.词数100字左右；

2．可适当增加细节。

2.假设你是新华中学的学生张华，班里从外地转来一名同学李明，他一时无法融入到新的班集

体中，感到很苦恼。请根据下列要点用英语(Q吧)给他写封信：

1、帮他分析原因；

2、给他提出建议；

3、陈述你帮助他的具体打算。注意：词数100字左右 Dear Li Ming, _______________________________________________________________________________ Best regards, Zhang Hua  常见的建议句型：

You should do sth.

You are supposed to do sth.You ought to do sth.

You’d better do sth.Why not do sth?

Why don’t you do sth?

If I were you, I would do sth.

It is beneficial to do sth.Doing sth is another wise choice for you.

I would encourage you to do sth.It is high time that you/we did sth.

1.【范文1】

I am now back China and sound.In this letter I would like to convey my heartfelt appreciation to you for your kind aistance in my English learning when I was in New York.Additionally, your generous help and tender care made me feel warmly welcomed and transformed my first American trip into an unforgettable memory. I have been miing our English profeor, Mr.Smith whose unusual cast of mind, wide and varied knowledge, together with a singular personal charm, combined to exert a strong influence on me.What about him recently? I desire to contact him for some suggestions on improving my listening ability.However, his email addre is not available.So would you mind delivering it to me via the online mailbox? I am more than delighted to invite you to join us to celebrate the Spring Festival -Chinese Lunar New Year so that I can repay your friendship.You can partner with me to have a try in lion dances, which is extremely exciting.And the grand lantern festival parade will be bound to impre you.I aure you that you would enjoy visiting here as I did at you home.With my best regards!

Cordially yours,

Li Hua 【范文2】 Dear Tom,

How are you doing? How time flies! It has been half a year since I came back to China.I mi you so much! Every time I catch sight of our photos taken in America, I just can\'t help thinking of what you have done for me.It was so kind of you to help me practice my spoken English patiently.Besides, you taught me a lot of advanced grammar, which really surprised me.Actually, I shall always remember you shared with me many outstanding English novels, considering that I am extremely interested.Nothing will be able to erase our wonderful memories, and I will cherish them forever.By the way, could you please tell me Mr.Smith’s telephone number and his email addre? I would like to turn to him for some help.What’s more, I remember you are crazy about traditional Chinese culture.The spring festival is around the corner.Why not come to enjoy it? I promise you won’t regret.I’m looking forward to your reply.

Best wishes!

Yours truly,

Li Hua

2.Dear Li Ming,

How are you doing? Our head teacher told me you couldn’t get along well with our clamates.As the vice monitor, I am writing to give you a hand.

In my opinion, there are two reasons accounting for your problem.For one thing, you seldom chat with us, consequently, we don\'t know you well.For another, you are so shy that you have trouble in expreing yourself.

Here are several suggestions for you.First and foremost, you are supposed to talk with others more, so that you can make some close friends.Additionally, you can take part in some after school activities.Last but not least, if I were you, I would often answer questions in cla.

As your friend, I will do my utmost to help you.For example, I will introduce you to my own friends who are as friendly as I am.Hopefully would adapt to the new environment before long! If there is anything else I can do for you, please let me know.

Best wishes!

Yours truly,

Zhang Hua

推荐第9篇：英语信件建议信

二、建议信

Sample 1 21 June 2006

Dear Mary,

Thanks for your last letter.I\'m so glad that you have been able (at last! ) to arrange a holiday in Australia.As I fear I won\'t be able to meet you at the airport when you arrive, nor will I be able to be home until later in the afternoon, so here are some instructions and suggestions.

There is a bus from the airport to the city.It is much cheaper than a cab.Take the bus to the city and ask to get off at Town Hall railway station.

To get to my place in the eastern suburbs you have three options.You can either take a cab, a bus or the train.I suggest you take the train, since the airport bus will leave you right at the station.Get off at Cliff Station.From there you can either walk to my place (about ten minutes) or take a taxi.Probably you should take a taxi as you will have luggage.

When you arrive at my flat, ring the intercom for Flat 2.My friend Lillian will be at home and she will open the front door for you and let you into my flat. Presumably you will be tired and want to sleep.But if you feel like some exercise after that long flight, you could stroll down to Cooper Park, which is only ten minutes away ? you can see it from the window.

Cheers and looking forward to seeing you.

Yours sincerely,

Annie

P.S.I will leave something for breakfast in the fridge.Help yourself to anything you want.

Useful Expreions:

Here are some instructions and suggestions.

May I suggest that we meet at the gate of the university?

I\'d like to suggest you should visit London for at least two days on your way to Scotland.

Considering your present situation, I propose that you should apply for the post.

What I want to suggest is ...

My suggestion is that...

If you..., you had better...

推荐第10篇：作文 建议信 友谊

It is a usual thing to have difficulty in getting along with your clamates at a new cla.Don\'t worry.I hope my advice can help you.Firstly,you should not be shy when your clamates talk with you.Don\'t be afraid of being laughed by them if you want them to get to know you.Secondly, you can learn Putonghua by yourself and have more communication with your clamates.Next ,you should be ready to give a helping hand when your clamates are in trouble.You can help some clamates in study.The best way to earn respect is to devote yourself to study and achieve high grades.Last but not least,you should take part in some outdoor activities with your clamates.I do hope you can get on well with your clamates and make many friends at the news cla soon.You can make it！

第11篇：建议信英语作文

英语写作练习：a letter for advice

dear mi wang,

i’m a student from guizhou experimental high school.i have a problem.i argued with my best friend lisa for some very tiny things and said some bad words to her a few days ago.then, we never talk to each other any more.now, i feel quite lonely sometimes and don’t want to lose my best friend.i know she must be hurt by my words, and i am not sure that she still want to be my friend or not? i do want to change this situation, but i don’t know how.i would be grateful if you could give me some advice.

yours, jim what is jim’s problem? if you were mi wang, what would you say? dear jim, （写作模板） im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to (引出主题). here are a few suggestions.first, it is important to

.then, it also helps to .besides, it should be a good idea to .you can also .(此三句不同的句式提出建议) as to

, i suggest (有时根据需要具体到某一反面).in addition, (其他建议).im sure (预测可能的结果，给对方以行动的信心和决心).im looking forward to (表达愿望).

sincerely yours,

mi wang

英语建议信格式提出建议常用句型i suggest that… why not do…? why don’t you do…? you would better do/ not do… if i were you，i would…… it seems to me that you could…… i think it would be more beneficial if you could…… i feel that it would be beneficial if… you may consider doing… as you may agree that i would like to suggest that…

英语建议信格式-结尾常用句式

i hope that my suggestions are helpful for your decision-making anyway.

i would be more than happy to see improvement in this regard.

i believe that you will take my suggestions into serious account.

i would be ready to discu about this matter with you to further details.

whatever you decide to do， good luck with your studies/work！ 写作中常用连接词：

（1）表选择关系或对等关系的连接词：either…or…，neither…nor, or, as well as…, and, both…and…

（2）表因果关系或对等关系的连接词：therefore, so, as a result, as the result of …，because of, due to …,owing to, thanks to等。

（3）表时间顺序的连接词：the moment, as soon as, at first, then, later, meanwhile, at the beginning, in the end, before long, for the first（second…）time, the minute等。

（4）表转折关系的连接词：yet, and yet, but , while, on the contrary, on the other hand, however, at the same time（然而）等。

（5）表解释说明的连接词：that is, that is to say, in other words, such as, for instance, and so on, etc.and the like等。

（6）表递进关系的连接词：not only…but (also), what’s more, whats worse, besides, in addition, worse still, moreover, above all等。

（7）表示总结的连接词：in a word, on the whole, in short, briefly, in brief, to sum up, in all 练习：假定你是李华，你的英国朋友peter来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文。请你根据下列要点写回信。 要点：⑴ 参加中文学习班；⑵ 看中文书刊、电视； ⑶ 学唱中文歌曲； ⑷ 交中国朋友。

注意：可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；开头语已给出。

dear peter,

best wishes,

li hua

第12篇：英语书信(建议信)

1.例文脾气暴躁

为了帮助中学生的健康成长，某中学英文报开辟了“heart-to heart” 专栏。假设你是该栏目的编辑jamie，收到一封署名为worried的求助信。信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰：今日容易发脾气使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请用英文给该同学写一封回信。 内容要点如下：

1.表示理解并给予安慰；2.提出建议并说明理由。 注意：1.词数120左右；

2.信中不能出现与本人相关的信息；

3.信的开头和结尾已为你拟好，不计入总词数。

Hi worried,

I’m sorry to know that you’re having such a bad time at the moment.Actually, everyone will have one of those periods when everything seems to be going wrong.Therefore, it is unneceary to be worried.You should learn self-control, which can help avoid saying and doing something that you’ll regret.The following are three suggestions.To begin with, sharing your feelings with your friends and teachers is a good choice as you can remove your negative emotions by doing so.Another effective suggestion is that you should take more physical exercise, which can lift your spirits.Last but not least, keep an optimistic attitude towards life and you will enjoy the pleasure life has brought to you.I hope my suggestions will be of benefit to you.May you get rid of your trouble soon.

Yours, Jamie Hi worried,

I’m sorry to know that you’re having such a bad time at the moment.The truth is that everyone will have one of those periods when things seems to be going wrong, so there is no need to worry too much.What matters most is to learn to control your temper so that you may not do or say anything that you’ll regret.Here are three useful tips:

First, talk to someone you trust about how you feel, which is a good way of letting your anger out without hurting others or yourself.Second, it also helps to go outdoors and play team games with your friends because doing physical exercise is an effective way to get rid of anger.And third, remain positive about your future.Such a positive attitude towards life can be helpful.I feel that my suggestions would be of great benefit if you stick to them.

Yours, Jamie

2.参赛紧张

假如你是李华，你的美国朋友Tom即将参加一个汉语演讲大赛，他为此感到十分紧张。因此，他用电子邮件向你咨询如何克服赛前的紧张情绪。请你根据以下要点给他写一封回信： 1.表示理解并安慰； 2.给出建议并说明理由； 3.表达祝愿

注意：1.词数120左右；

2.可适当增加细节以使行文连贯；

3.信的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。Dear Tom, You wrote to ask for advice on how to get rid of your nervousne right before the Chinese speech contest.What you should keep in mind is that most people feel nervous like you.Just take it easy.The following are my suggestions.To begin with, you should be prepared and understand the subject of your speech completely.The more familiar you are with the subject, the le nervous you feel.Besides, another effective suggestion is that look on your nervousne as a positive thing, which can give you the energy to deliver your speech in an emotive way.Last but not least, as the old saying goes, the confidence is the first secret of succe.So have faith in yourself and you will succeed.I hope you’ll find these suggestions beneficial.May you succeed in the competition.

Yours, Li Hua 3.提高汉语

假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Lisa将于2022年来中国张家口参加冬奥会，她来信向你咨询如何提高汉语水平，请你用英语给她回一封信，提出建议并说明理由。 注意：1.词数120左右；

2.信中不能出现与本人相关的信息。Dear Lisa, Learning that you will come to China for the 2022 Winter Olympic Games, I’m more than delighted.As for how to improve your Chinese, I’d like to give you some suggestions.

To begin with, make more Chinese friends in your daily life, with whom you can practice your spoken Chinese.What’s more, listening to Chinese songs and watching Chinese movies are also good ways, which can help you broaden your horizons and gain a better understanding of Chinese.Last but not least, we can keep in touch with each other by writing letters in Chinese, mainly benefiting your writing level.Keeping a diary is also a great choice.I hope you will find these suggestions beneficial and make great progre in Chinese.

Yours, Lihua 4.读者意见

假定你是高三学生李华，你校英语校刊SunFlower在创刊十周年之际征集读者意见，请你给编辑写封信，提出建议。 注意：1.词数120左右； 2.建议要合理，并给出理由。 Dear editor, Congratulations on the 10th anniversary of sun flower!I like it much mainly for its excellent articles and the profound meanings each paage has.Being a faithful reader, i do hope it will become more popular.In order to better it, I’d like to offer some suggestions.

To start with, it’s better to add some international news as it can broaden our horizons.What’s more, the succe stories of excellent graduates are equally attractive, which help me understand howhard a student can work to achieve his dream.Last but not least, as a senior 3 student, I suggest that you can carry some articles to guide us in our English learning.I hope you would take my suggestions into consideration.May it become better and better.

Yours, Li Hua

第13篇：建议信写作模式（优秀）

建议写作模式

篇章结构

1 首：表明写作意图。陈述事由，注意语气。

2 主体：应该首先肯定对方的优点，然后再写需要改进的地方或针对具体情况提出具体建议或忠告

3 尾：对出的建议进行总结，要注意有礼貌使读者容易接受。

注意事项：写作这类题目时，咱们要注意不要跑题，因为这类题很有可能写成议论文，如“ 我认为，一。。。。。。。二。。。。。，所以要如何如何”。同时咱们应该时刻记住书信的交际功能，要考虑到收信人的感受。在给对方提建议时应该时时说到I 或 YOU ,要让读信人（ 判官）时刻感受到这是一种交流。

建议写作常用句式

1 You have asked for my advice concerning ……… and I will try to make some suggestions.(你问我有关……的事情，我会尝试着提出一些建议.)（首）

2 I hope you will find these suggestions useful/helpful.

具体建议可以采纳的句型:

1 If I were you, I would … (虚拟语气句型)

2 I believe it would be more beneficial if you could…….

3 It would also be a good idea if you could….../ It would be a good idea for you to …… (it充当形式主语).

4 In my personal opinion, it would be wise of you to ---------

第14篇：考研英语作文建议信

考研英语作文建议信

一、信函写作：称呼、正文、落款

1、审题—-判断是个人书信&事务公函

决定：

语域使用：正式：使用礼貌表达，不用缩略语(对公)

半正式：可以使用缩略和口语表达(对私)

非正式：(一般不考)——It depends

呼语： 特定的写信对象：Dear XX

不明确收信人：

2、正文

三段(8句)

3、各种信函内容安排

1)建议信：2007年及2009年

A.基本结构

第一段： ;

第二段： 第三段：

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

B.2007年Part A 真题及解析(建议信)

Directions:

Write a letter to your university library, making suggestions for improving its service.You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.

Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter.Use “Li Ming” instead.Do not write the addre.

To Whom It May Concern,

I am a student in this university who regularly comes to the library to spend my spare time.Generally speaking, the services you offer here are quite good; however, I have some suggestions for you to adopt.And I would like to extend my greatest appreciation if you are so kind as to take my suggestions into consideration.To begin with, will you please prolong the time for reading? In the daytime, most of the students are having claes, so they can’t come to the library.Moreover, some of the books on shelves are out of date.If you are so kind as to provide us consideration.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

C.建议信框架

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

第15篇：建议信的英语作文

篇1：2015英语作文常用句型及建议信的模板

1.重点句型

1).it’s adj for sb to do 做„对某人来说

2).„ so „ that „ 如此„ 以至于„

„ too „ to do 太„ 而不能„

such „ that „ 如此„ 以至于„

3).not„until„ 直到„才„ 例: i didn’t go to bed until my mother came back. 4).the reason why + 句子 is that + 句子 „ 的原因是„

例：the reason why he got angry was that she told him a lie. 5).that is why + 句子 那是„的原因

6).that is because + 句子 那是因为„

7).it is said that + 句子 据说„ 例：it is reported that + 句子 据报道„

8).there is no doubt that + 句子 毫无疑问„

9).it goes without saying that + 句子 不言而喻，毫无疑问

10).there is no need to do 没必要做„

11).there is no point in doing 做某事毫无意义

12）.as is known to all, +句子 众所周知

as we all know, +句子 据我们所知

it is generally/ publicly known / considered that„, 众所周知

13) find it + adj to do„ 觉得/发现做„ 是„的。

例︰i find it neceary to take down notes while listening. 14) not only„but also 不但„而且..... 例︰in just three years, she had not only finished all the leons, but also received her doctor’s degree. 15)in order to 为了....例︰he worked very hard in order to realize his dream.19) 就我的看法„„；我认为„„in my opinion, as far as i’m concerned 20) 随着人口的增加„„ with the increase/growth of the population, „

随着科技的进步„„ with the advance of science and technology, „

21).since + s + 过去式, s + 现在完成式. to senior high school, he has worked very hard. 2. 1.had do 最好(不)做

2.how what about doing „怎么样? 3.i should do 我认为你应该„

4.i advice that you should do 我建议你做„

5.if would do„ 我要是你的话，我会做„

6.it’s best to do 最好做„

7.why don’t you do„? 为什么不„

3.兴趣

1.like doing 2.enjoy doing 3.be doing 喜欢做„ 4.be keen on n/doing 喜欢做„

5.prefer to do a rather than do b 宁愿做a也不愿做b 6.be in doing = show/ take great interest in n / doing 4. 1.try to do做„ 2.strive to do 努力做„

3.try to do = do one’s best to do 竭尽全力做„

4.make 例：since he went 提建议 better (not) about / think you suggest / i were you, i not do / why 表示喜欢和感/ love fond of interested 努力做„ 努力one’s best efforts to do = make every effort to do 尽力做„

5.do what sb can (do ) to do 尽力做„

6.spare no effort to do 不遗余力的做„

7.do what / everything sb.can to do 尽某人全力做„

5.打算做„ / 计划做„

1.intend to do 打算做„ 2.be going to do 打算做„

3.decide 决定做„ 4.determine to do决定做„

5.be determined to do决定做„ 6.make up one’s mind to do 6. 1.want would like to do 想做„ 2.hope to do 希望做„

3.expect 期待着做„ 4.wish to do 希望做„

5.consider doing 考虑做„

7.宾语的动词

1.finish practice 练习suggest建议 consider 考虑

mind enjoy 喜欢 +doing 2.look doing 盼望做„ keep on doing 坚持做„

dream 想做„ can’t help doing 情不自禁地做„

keep prevent sb.from doing 阻止某人做„

be doing be busy with + 名词 忙于做„

spend money (in )doing spend time / money on + 名词 花费时间做„a good time / enjoy oneself doing 玩得开心

have have problem / have difficulty (in) doing 做„有困难

/ plan to do 下定决心做„ 表示想/希望 to do= to do 只加doing 作完成 介意 固定句型

forward to of doing 梦/ stop / busy (in ) time / trouble / 或 with + 名词 have fun / have 8.学习用定语从句

先行词+关系词+定语从句

高中英语满分书信作文模板——建议信

dear ______, ①you have asked me for my advice about ______ , and i will try to make some suggestions here. ②in my opinion, _____（建议的内容）. ③i would appreciate it very much if you could consider my suggestions.i will be looking forward to your reply. yours sincerely, li ming 高中英语满分书信作文模板——请求信

dear ______ , ①i am writing ask to _____（请求的内容）. ②could you please ___________-②would you mind ___________③i wonder if you could___________ ⑥thank you for your attention to these requests..⑧i look forward to a favorable reply. yours sincerely, li ming 高中英语满分书信作文模板——询问信

dear ______ , ①i am ______（自我介绍）.②i am writing to see if it is poible for you to provide me with information regarding ______（要询问的内容）. ③first of all, what are ______（第一个问题）? ④secondly, when will ______（第二个问题）? ⑤thirdly, is ______（第三个问题）? ⑥i would also like to inquire ______（将最重要的问题单独成段）.⑦could you be so kind as to send me some relevant booklets on the above-mentioned aspects? ⑧thank you for you kindne, and your prompt attention to this letter will be highly appreciated. yours sincerely, li ming 假设你是新华中学的学生张华，班里从外地转来一名同学李明，他一时无法融入新的班集体中，感到很苦恼。请根据下列要点用英语给他写封信：

☆帮他分析原因

☆给他提出建议

☆陈述你帮助他的具体打算

篇2：建议信英语作文

英语写作练习：a letter for advice dear mi wang, i’m a student from guizhou experimental high school.i have a problem.i argued with my best friend lisa for some very tiny things and said some bad words to her a few days ago.then, we never talk to each other any more.now, i feel quite lonely sometimes and don’t want to lose my best friend.i know she must be hurt by my words, and i am not sure that she still want to be my friend or not? i do want to change this situation, but i don’t know how.i would be grateful if you could give me some advice. yours, jim what is jim’s problem? if you were mi wang, what would you say? dear jim, （写作模板） im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to (引出主题). here are a few suggestions.first, it is important to

.then, it also helps to .besides, it should be a good idea to .you can also .(此三句不同的句式提出建议) as to

, i suggest (有时根据需要具体到某一反面).in addition, (其他建议).im sure (预测可能的结果，给对方以行动的信心和决心).im looking forward to (表达愿望). sincerely yours, mi wang 英语建议信格式提出建议常用句型i suggest that„ why not do„? why don’t you do„? you would better do/ not do„ if i were you，i would„„ it seems to me that you could„„ i think it would be more beneficial if you could„„ i feel that it would be beneficial if„ you may consider doing„ as you may agree that i would like to suggest that„

英语建议信格式-结尾常用句式

i hope that my suggestions are helpful for your decision-making anyway. i would be more than happy to see improvement in this regard. i believe that you will take my suggestions into serious account. i would be ready to discu about this matter with you to further details. whatever you decide to do， good luck with your studies/work！ 写作中常用连接词：

（1）表选择关系或对等关系的连接词：either„or„，neither„nor, or, as well as„, and, both„and„

（2）表因果关系或对等关系的连接词：therefore, so, as a result, as the result of „，because of, due to „,owing to, thanks to等。

（3）表时间顺序的连接词：the moment, as soon as, at first, then, later, meanwhile, at the beginning, in the end, before long, for the first（second„）time, the minute等。

（4）表转折关系的连接词：yet, and yet, but , while, on the contrary, on the other hand, however, at the same time（然而）等。

（5）表解释说明的连接词：that is, that is to say, in other words, such as, for instance, and so on, etc.and the like等。

（6）表递进关系的连接词：not only„but (also), what’s more, whats worse, besides, in addition, worse still, moreover, above all等。

（7）表示总结的连接词：in a word, on the whole, in short, briefly, in brief, to sum up, in all 练习：假定你是李华，你的英国朋友peter来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文。请你根据下列要点写回信。 要点：⑴ 参加中文学习班；⑵ 看中文书刊、电视； ⑶ 学唱中文歌曲； ⑷ 交中国朋友。

注意：可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；开头语已给出。

dear peter, best wishes, li hua 篇3：英语 建议信 写作指导及模板

应用文

建议信 (letter of suggestion)

一、简介

(1) 建议信写作注意事项 写作目的是提出建议或忠告。不是投诉信，观点要合情合理，注意礼貌当

先。

(2) 写作方法

① 首段： a.简介自己，不要罗嗦；

b.说明目的，注意语气。

② 主体：

a.提出具体建议； b.首先肯定优点，再写改进内容，否则变成投诉信；

c.经常进行交流，注意对方感受，时时提到你和我，否则容易跑题写成议论文，因为内容与议论文相似。

③ 尾段：总结建议，注意礼貌，易于接受。

(3) 写作流程图

二、结构

第一部分：说明写信的目的

套语：

(2) 写此信是要提出我对饭店管理进一步提高和改进的建议——建立我们自己

的网站来吸引更多的客户。

i am writing to you to present what i think on the further improvement of our hotel so as to establish a website of our own to attract more clients. 第二部分：介绍详情、提出建议

套语：

我建议„„

i’d like to suggest that „„

may i suggest that„„

in my opinion „„

i am writing to advise you of „„

if i were you, i would „„

第三部分：提出希望采纳建议，盼望回复

套语：

(1) 请仔细考虑我的建议，谢谢。

please take good consideration of my advice.thanks.

三、示例

writing (30 minutes) directions: for this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a letter.suppose you are zhang ying.write a letter to xiao wang, a schoolmate of yours who is going to visit you during the summer holiday for a week.you should write at least 100 words according to the suggestions given below in chinese.

1、表示欢迎。

2、提出对度假安排的建议。

3、祝愿

建议信模板

dear , ① i am very ______ to know that .① 写信的原因 ② im looking forward to .② 表示欢迎

③ im afraid that ③ 表述建议理由 ④ id like to suggest that first„„then _ .④ 提出建议

⑤ i believe this kind of arrangement will________________ ⑤ 有说服力

⑥ moreover，if _____________ , ⑥ 补充建议

⑦ it is neceary for you to

.

⑦ 提出建议 ⑧ with_______________you will .⑧ 建议理由

⑨ wish_____________________________ ⑨祝愿

a letter to a schoolmate june 23rd, 2001 dear xiao wang, that you are soon if you can stay in beijing only for a week, 表明建议的原因 that you will have a tight schedule 语气亲切，符合说话人身份关系

historic interest. 叙述词和副词 places that you such as 一目了然 the palace museum, the summer place（颐和园）, the great wall; you can visit those places you think le then使文章结构 important. will make you have enough time to appreciate（欣赏） 使自己的安排具有说服力 what you really want to see.really want to be a good about these places, have a better understanding of chinese history and culture. i am eager to meet you soon in beijing. in advance a pleasant trip to beijing.表达良好的祝愿，符合文体要求

best wishes! yours ever, 篇4：高中英语作文--建议信

建议信(1)-----阐释原因；提出建议类

请你代表你班同学给校长写一封信，反映一下你校食堂的几点问题，以引起学校重视，并针对问题提出两条合理建议。问题包括：

1.菜价昂贵，菜市单一；2.排队时间长，浪费午休时间；3.味道不佳，浪费现象严重。

注意：1.词数不少于120； 2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；3.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇: 食堂 canteen dear principal, recently, many students are discuing the problems of the canteen.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ i sincerely hope you can adopt my suggestions.thank you! yours, li hua 作文范文： dear principal, some students think the prices of the dishes are too high and that the choices are too limited.another concern is that the time spent in waiting is so long that we have le time to have a rest.meanwhile, some students think that the taste of the food is awful, which leads to a lot of waste.the prices be more reasonable and the choices of dishes be more various.需注意的词汇、表达：

1.delicious waiting taste(n.味道) tasty (adj.可口的) cook (n.厨师) cooker (n.炊具) price 价格

2.lower /bring down the price 降低价格 3.at a lower/reasonable price 以较低的价格 4.varieties of dishes 种类多样的菜品 5.for one thing,„„.for another,„„

6.make sb (not)do sth 7.wait /stand in line / in a queue for a long time 8.the kinds of food are .表达食堂出现的问题： 9.the prices of dishes are so high that many of us can’t afford them. 10.there are so few dishes to choose from, which is far from satisfactory./ which can’t satisfy our needs. 11.it takes us so much time to stand in line, which decreases our time of rest at noon.12.the food in the canteen doesn’t taste . the taste of food in the canteen isn’t 13.the food in the canteen tastes so bad that a lot of food is left and wasted 14.it’s a waste of time to stand in line for a long time. 15.the food in the canteen tastes so bad, which leads to a severe phenomenon of wasting food.16.in the long run, it’s bad for our health and study. 17.it goes without saying that it will influence our sleep in the afternoon.表达提出的建议： 18.improving the taste of the food is also a good solution to the problems.19.i think it’s neceary to provide more kinds of food.20.it’s high time that we took measures to solve the problems. so it’s high time for us to take measures 21.to solve the problems, i think the canteen should set up a new figure(形象) and improve the present condition to satisfy the students’ needs. 22.we hope the canteen can provide us with dishes of a high quality at a reasonable price.23.the canteen should open more windows so that we needn’t wait so long. 24.as far as i’m concerned, the canteen should attach importance to the quality.what’s more, different kinds of food should be provided. 25.measures are supposed to be taken to improve the conditions of the canteen. 建议模板： dear „., i’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to„„.(引出话题).here are a few suggestions.first of all, it is important to do sth.then, it also helps to do sth.besides, it should be a good idea to do sth. 建议句型积累：

1.many ways can contribute to solving the problem, but i think the following may be the most effective ones. 2.i’d like to make some suggestions on „„.3.it’s of great importance for sb to do sth. it’s neceary for sb to do sth 4.it would be a good idea for sb to do sth./ it would be a better idea if„„.5.it contributes /helps a lot if „„„ 6.i suggest that „../ my suggestion is that „ it’s better to do sth 8.measures are supposed to be taken to do sth we are supposed to take effective measures to do sth 9.it’s high time that sb sth./ it’s high time for sb to do sth 建议信(2)-----阐释原因；提出建议类

假定你是中学生李华。在一位名叫sad mother的学生家长的博客上，你看到如下内容。请你根据博客内容、写作要点和要求，用英语给这位家长回复。

i’m the mother of a fourteen-year-old.recently i have found that my daughter told lies to me.the other day she told me that she did well in the final exam.however i found out she failed in math and english.what should i do? 写作要点：

1.表明了解她的问题；2.帮她分析孩子撒谎的原因； 3.提出至少两条建议 要求： 1.短文须写在答题卡的指定区域。 2.短文词数不少于100（不含已写好的部分）。 3.内容充实，结构完整，语意连贯。 4.书写需清晰、工整。

hi，sad mother， i have learned that_____________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________________________ 作文范文： hi,sad mother, she is afraid you will punish her if she tells you the truth.besides, nowadays, parents put too much preure on their kids.in order not to let you down, she lie . –heart talk with her, making her know being honest is more important than scores.in addition, don’t be too strict.微小的) mistakes. 需要注意积累的词汇、短语、和句子：

daughter女儿 expectation 期望 be worried / concerned about 担心 calm down 冷静下来 at a lo 迷惑不解 keep in touch with 保持联系 be strict with sb in sth 在某方面对某人要求严格 heart-to-heart 推心置腹的

idea 注意想法 test 测试 text 文本 cheat 欺骗 want sb to do sth 想让某人做某事

1.it was because she didn’t want to let you down that she pretended to achieve high scores.2.she isn’t aware that the lies have hurt both you and herself. 3.being a teenager, she needs to be encouraged.and it’s you who can do this.4.it is probably your high expectations to her that makes her decide to lie. 5.you should figure out the reason why she lied to you before solving the problem.6.it goes without saying that lying is bad behavior. 7.the reason why she didn’t tell you the truth may be that she didn’t want to let you down. 8.it is suggested that you should have a face-to-face talk with her so that she might open her heart to you. 9.to avoid the lies, you should encourage her rather than blame her when she fails in exams 10.the reason that leads to the problem may be various. 11.confronted with (面对) these problems, you should take a series of effective measures to help you daughter. 13.it’s suggested that you should attach more importance to physical and mental health.moreover, it’s better to encourage her to do what she wants.改错：

1.there are some advice. 2.don’t sad. 3.you should give her more encourage. 4.she may afraid that if she fails in the exam, you will punish her. 5.if she has difficulty in learning, you should inspire she and help she out.6.she doesn’t want you angry.7.please not to be so worried. 8.one of the reason is that she isn’t dare to tell you the truth.9.because she afraid parents. 10.so she don’t want to mention it.11.you should apology to her. 12.you’d better to encourage her to be a honest people.13.you’d better be care about her health and study.14.i’m very understand your condition.15.she may doesn’t want you to be angry. 建议信(3) 为了帮助中学生健康成长，某中学英文报开辟了“heart-to-heart”专栏。假设你是该栏目的编辑jamie，收到一封署名为worried的求助信。信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰：近日容易发脾气，使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请用英文给该同学写一封回信。 内容要点如下： 1．表示理解并给予安慰； 2．提出建议并说明理由。 注意：

1．词数120左右； 2．信中不能出现与本人相关的信息；

3．信的开头与结尾已为你拟好，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：temper n.脾气，情绪 hi worried， i’m sorry to know that you’re having such a had time at the moment. yours, jamie hi worried, im sorry to know that youre having such a bad time at the moment.the truth is that everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be going wrong, i quite understand how you are feeling now and there is no need to worry about it so much.the important thing is to learn to control your temper so that you may not do or say anything you’ll regret.here are three useful tips. yours, jamie highlights: 1.first, you are supposed to figure out what makes you upset,and then keep away from it.2.what’s more, you are supposed to take an active part in outdoor activities to relax. 3.to solve the problem as soon as poible, you can open your heart to a good friend, talking about your trouble. 4.carried by two, burdens are lighter. 5.it’s high time that you should relieve your preure. 6.measures are supposed to be taken to control your temper. 7.there is no denying that everyone will lose his temper when something unexpected happens.8.instead of being angry, what is important for you is to learn to control your temper from now on. 建议信(4) 高二下期已经过去半学期，高三已经在向同学们招手。随着学习和心理压力日益加大，一些同学的正常生活受到影响，如睡眠不好，身体也开始亮起了红灯。请你根据以下要点，给学校的英语刊物写一篇稿子，向同学们提出建议，并简述理由或举例说明:

1、劳逸结合；

2、健康饮食；

3、适当锻炼；

4、保持乐观心态。注意：

1、短文必须包括所列内容；

2、词数120左右；

3、文章开头已给出；

4、写成一篇完整的短文，不要逐条列举。

作文范文：

preventing them sleeping well and causing problems with their health.in order to improve the condition, i’d like to offer some advice. i sincerely hope that the suggestions above will be of great help to you.句型及短语积累： 1.my advice is as follows.2.the following is my advice. 3.finally, remain optimistic about your future.such a positive attitude towards life can be helpful in lifting your spirits. 4.then it also helps to take proper exercise.not only can it strengthen your health, but also it can make you feel relaxed. 5.go outdoors and play team games with your friends as it is an effective way to keep healthy.6.second, you may as well take some exercise, which is a good way to keep healthy. 7.third, go outdoors and take exercise.not only can it help students keep healthy, but also it is a good way to reduce preure. 9.second, you are supposed to eat healthy food as it will offer students enough energy. 10.in addition, you must eat healthy food so as to keep fit, which is of great importance to your study.11.as an old saying goes, “all work and no play makes jack a dull boy”. 12.gone are the days when we were at senior 2 and the senior 3 is saying hello to us. 13.go out to breathe fresh air and relax your brain. 14.keeping a healthy diet is eential to you, which helps you keep fit. 15.the most important thing i think is to seek for the balance between study and pleasure. 16.keep a balance between study and relaxation 17.keep fit/healthy keep( in) good health keep in good condition/shape keep in a good state of health 18.with time going by /as time goes by 19.take exercise 纠错: 1.exercise everyday so that you will be much stronger.2.remain a optimistic attitude towards life 3.eat more vegetables, which can strength your health.4.in addition, have a balanced diet can keep your health.5.only if you believe in yourself you can carry on as normal.6.take good rest 7.under preure of study, not only do our lives affected, but also we are in poor condition.(两处错) 8.last but not least, remain optimistic is a good way to lift your spirits.9.taking exercise properly contributes to make you full of energy.10.you should eat something which agrees with you . 11.at the same time, we are faced with much stre that results in many students can’t sleep well. 12.here are some advice on how to solve it. 13.only you ensure enough nutrition can you study better. 14.finally, keep an optimistic attitude to life, it will be helpful in lifting your spirits.15.write---_________---___________---____________(写出过去式,过去分词,现在分词) occur---______________---______________---__________ 篇5：高中英语作文 建议信(如何学英语) 写作

假如你是李华，你刚收到了你的朋友王梅的电子邮件，她在邮件里向你询问在高中如何学好英语。请你根据下列的内容给她写封回信。

1.上课认真听讲，做好笔记，课后及时复习；

2.词汇是基础，每天早上花半个小时的时间背诵单词，朗读课文；

3.课外多与同学用英语交流，提高听力和口语能力；

4.每天坚持写日记。

注意：1.词数120—150词左右，短文的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总数；

2.内容可适当发挥，注意行文连贯。

dear wang mei, i’m very glad to have received your e-mail. best wishes! yours, li hua dear wang mei, i’m very glad to have received your e-mail.now i’m writing to give you some advice on how to learn english well in high school.first of all,you should listen to the teacher carefully and take notes in cla so that 众所周知),vocabulary is of great importance / eential.you should spend half an hour in the morning reciting words and reading texts aloud.what’s more,try to your clamates in english out of cla.in this way you can improve your listening and spoken english quickly.last but not least,you should keeping a diary,which helps improve your written english and helps you go over/review the words and expreions that you have learnt. i hope these suggestions will be of use to you.remember:where there is a will,there is a way.有志者事竟成 /the man who has made up his mind to win will never say “impoible”.一个决心要成功的人是从来不会说“不可能的”。

第16篇：考研英语写作技巧建议信

建议信 Letter of Advice

建议信是对收信人就某一问题提出看法、建议或忠告。建议信不同于投诉信，所以写信人一定要注意礼貌当先。建议信一般包括以下内容：首先说明写信的目的，其次，在肯定优点的基础上提出自己的建议或看法（否则别人以为你在投诉，而不是在提建议），最后表达希望采纳建议。

写作“三步走”：普明考研特训营

自我介绍、说明目的—>委婉地提出建议及改进措施，或提出忠告—>礼貌地总结或期盼回复

Tips:

提建议毕竟不是投诉，所以语言一定要委婉、礼貌，顾及他人感情。在提出缺点之前，最好先肯定其优点

（1） 2007年真题

Directions:

Write a litter to your university library, making suggestions for improving its service.

You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.

Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter.Use ―Li Ming‖ instead.

Do not write the addre.范文： To Whom It May Concern,

As a student of this university, I would like to take the opportunity to expre my appreciation for your kind aistance as always.Meanwhile, I feel that it would be beneficial to expre my views concerning the quality of the library service.

In the first place, I find that most keyboards of the library computers are in poor operation, which brings much inconvenience to the users.I would also recommend the library to improve the efficiency of purchasing new books and subscribing to academic journals.Last but not least, the study rooms need to be furnished with a better lighting system.

I hope that you take my suggestions into serious consideration.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

译文：

有关负责人：

作为本校学生，首先我想利用这个机会对于您一直以来的帮助表示感谢。同时，我也想对图书馆的服务提出一些建议，相信将有助于服务的提高。

首先，我发现图书馆电脑的大部分键盘都有操作上的问题，给用户带来很多不便。我也想建议图书馆提高购买新书和定购学术期刊的工作效率。最后，自习教室的照明系统也需要进一步的改进。

我希望您能够认真考虑我的建议。

您真诚的，

李明

闪光词汇及词组：

take the opportunity to: 利用这个机会

beneficial: adj.有益的

keyboard: n.键盘

purchase: v.购买

subscribe to: 定购

be furnished with: 安装有

lighting system: 照明系统

万能句型：普明考研特训营

I would like to take the opportunity to expre my appreciation for your kind aistance as always.I feel that it would be beneficial to expre my views concerning… In the first place…I would also recommend…Last but not least…

I hope that you take my suggestions into serious consideration.

（2）Directions:

Write a letter to the president of your college about the unpleasant conditions of the university dormitory, and suggesting poible solutions

You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.

Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter.Use ―Li Ming‖ instead.

Do not write the addre.

范文：

Dear Sir,

As I am a freshman, I feel that it is my obligation to make some suggestions concerning the basic conditions of our dormitory.

Generally speaking, the dormitory building situates in a satisfying environment and is well-equipped.However, there are two unpleasant aspects that cause inconvenience to us: 1) the heating system is in need of improvement—it fails to maintain warmth in our rooms during the winter; 2) the furniture is not designed in a practical manner –there lacks a shelf to place books.I would be more than happy if my proposal could be considered and positive changes take place in these regards.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

译文：

尊敬的校长：普明考研特训营

作为本校的一名大一新生，我觉得就学生宿舍条件提出一些建议是我应有的责任。

总的来说，我们的宿舍楼环境良好、设备齐全。但是，仍然存在一些不尽人意的方面，给我们的生活带来了不便：

1、冬天室内暖气不足，供暖系统需要进一步改进；

2、家具设计不合理，没有供我们放书的书架。

如果您能够考虑我的这些建议并使学校在以上方面做出改进，我将感激不尽。您真诚的，

李明

闪光词汇及词组：

obligation: n.义务，责任

generally speaking: 总的来说

situates: v.处于

well-equipped: adj.设备齐全的

maintain: v.保持，维持

place: v.放置

in a … manner: 以„„的方式

万能句型：普明考研特训营

A freshman as I am, I feel that it is my obligation to make some suggestions concerning…

I would be more than happy if my proposals could be considered and positive changes take place in these regards.

更多考研资讯请关注普明考研辅导班官网。

第17篇：雅思G类书信(建议信)

题目：

A hotel you stayed in recently asked guests to write to the manager and suggest ways in which they could improve their service.Write a letter to the manager, explain who you are, say what you liked about the hotel, and suggest ways in which they could be improved.（建议信）

范文：

Dear Manager,

I’m writing in response to your invitation to guests who have recently stayed at your hotel to suggest ways in which you could further improve your service.

亲爱的经理：

我是看过你们给最近落脚贵宾馆的客人的邀请函后写此信的，你们在信中邀请客人做些提议，以便你们可以进一步改善服务。

I was a guest at your hotel last month and I found that the level of customer service was excellent.Indeed, every member of your staff, from the manager to the room-cleaning maid, was, without exception, extremely polite and helpful.The standard of the rooms was far beyond what I had expected.

我上个月曾入住贵宾馆，发现你们的客户服务非常好。事实上，你们的每一名员工，从经理到房间清洁工都彬彬有礼、乐于助人，无一例外。房间的标准远远超过了我的期盼。

However, I found that the hotel restaurant stopped serving breakfast at 8:30am.As I was on holiday, I would have liked to take my breakfast at around 9:30, thus I was unable to do so.I also spoke to several other guests who expreed the same disappointment.In addition, I feel that if you could supply newspapers in Chinese, the quality of stay for Chinese speakers, of whom the number has been on a steady rise in the past few years, would be considerably enhanced.

然而，我发现宾馆的餐厅早上八点半便停止供应早餐了。因为我是在度假，很希望能够在九点半左右吃早餐，这样情况下就做不到了。我也跟其他几位客人谈过，他们也表达了同样的失望。还有，我感到如果你们能够提供中文报纸，那中国客人的住宿质量将大幅提升，要知道：过去的几年里，中国住客的人数一直处于上升中。

I would be happy to know if my suggestions have turned out to be useful in your constant improvement of your overall service.

我很希望知道自己的建议是否在你们不断提升整体服务的过程中派上了用场。

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours faithfully,

Kenny Gao

期盼受到您的回复。

您真诚的：

Kenny Gao

第18篇：建议信感谢信高考英语写作

6.建议信

Dear ______，

①You have asked me for my advice with regard to ______ ，and I will try to make some conductive suggestions here.

②In my humble opinion， you would be wise to take the following actions：__(建议的内容)。

③I hope you will find these proposals useful，and I would be ready to discu this matter with you to further details.

Yours sincerely，

Li Ming 8.感谢信

Dear ______ ，

①I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for ______(感谢的原因)。②If it had not been for your aistance in _ (对方给予的具体帮助)，I fear that I would have been ______(没有对方帮助时的后果)。

③Every one agrees that it was you who ______(给出细节)。

④Again，I would like to expre my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.

Yours sincerely，

Li Ming

6.建议信

Dear ______，

①You have asked me for my advice with regard to ______ ，and I will try to make some conductive suggestions here.

②In my humble opinion， you would be wise to take the following actions：__(建议的内容)。

③I hope you will find these proposals useful，and I would be ready to discu this matter with you to further details.

Yours sincerely，

Li Ming 8.感谢信

Dear ______ ，

①I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for ______(感谢的原因)。②If it had not been for your aistance in _ (对方给予的具体帮助)，I fear that I would have been ______(没有对方帮助时的后果)。

③Every one agrees that it was you who ______(给出细节)。

④Again，I would like to expre my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.

Yours sincerely，

Li Ming

6.建议信

Dear ______，

①You have asked me for my advice with regard to ______ ，and I will try to make some conductive suggestions here.

②In my humble opinion， you would be wise to take the following actions：__(建议的内容)。

③I hope you will find these proposals useful，and I would be ready to discu this matter with you to further details.

Yours sincerely，

Li Ming 8.感谢信

Dear ______ ，

①I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for ______(感谢的原因)。②If it had not been for your aistance in _ (对方给予的具体帮助)，I fear that I would have been ______(没有对方帮助时的后果)。

③Every one agrees that it was you who ______(给出细节)。

④Again，I would like to expre my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.

Yours sincerely，

Li Ming

6.建议信

Dear ______，

①You have asked me for my advice with regard to ______ ，and I will try to make some conductive suggestions here.

②In my humble opinion， you would be wise to take the following actions：__(建议的内容)。

③I hope you will find these proposals useful，and I would be ready to discu this matter with you to further details.

Yours sincerely，

Li Ming 8.感谢信

Dear ______ ，

①I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for ______(感谢的原因)。②If it had not been for your aistance in _ (对方给予的具体帮助)，I fear that I would have been ______(没有对方帮助时的后果)。

③Every one agrees that it was you who ______(给出细节)。

④Again，I would like to expre my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.

Yours sincerely，

Li Ming

6.建议信

Dear ______，

①You have asked me for my advice with regard to ______ ，and I will try to make some conductive suggestions here.

②In my humble opinion， you would be wise to take the following actions：__(建议的内容)。

③I hope you will find these proposals useful，and I would be ready to discu this matter with you to further details.

Yours sincerely，

Li Ming 8.感谢信

Dear ______ ，

①I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for ______(感谢的原因)。②If it had not been for your aistance in _ (对方给予的具体帮助)，I fear that I would have been ______(没有对方帮助时的后果)。

③Every one agrees that it was you who ______(给出细节)。

④Again，I would like to expre my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.

Yours sincerely，

Li Ming

6.建议信

Dear ______，

①You have asked me for my advice with regard to ______ ，and I will try to make some conductive suggestions here.

②In my humble opinion， you would be wise to take the following actions：__(建议的内容)。

③I hope you will find these proposals useful，and I would be ready to discu this matter with you to further details.

Yours sincerely，

Li Ming 8.感谢信

Dear ______ ，

①I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for ______(感谢的原因)。②If it had not been for your aistance in _ (对方给予的具体帮助)，I fear that I would have been ______(没有对方帮助时的后果)。

③Every one agrees that it was you who ______(给出细节)。

④Again，I would like to expre my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.

Yours sincerely，

Li Ming

第19篇：给学校的一封建议信

给学校的一封建议信

我想从以下几个方面给学校提一些建议：

一、教学

1.我觉得我们学校的公共课太少了，而且就算是开了，也没有一个好的通知，虽然这些 课老师们都讲的很好，但如果没有人知道的话，也不会有人去，所以我希望我们希望我们以后的公共课可以多一点。

2.大学与高中不同我们需要更多方面的知识，大学的选修可在一定程度上开阔了学生的视野，可学校对选修课的管理的力度不太强，使课的内容良莠不齐，有些大不到目的。

3.有时没课的时候很难找到一个自习室，希望学校能公布一下每节课的空闲教室，好让更多的同学能尽快找到自习室，不会因为找不到教室而不去上自习，而且这样也可以让教室得到充分利用。

二、管理

1.我校的后街虽然卖东西方便了广大同学们，但是后街实在是有的脏乱了，不得不让我们担心这些食品的卫生情况，而且后街人多眼杂，也有部分闲杂人员做些非法的事情比如偷窃等，希望学校联合工商管理部门能加强对后街秩序和卫生的管理。

三、生活

1.宿舍的各类设施坏了之后，很难找人维修，一般在楼管登记很久之后才会有人去维修。

2.放在宿舍楼楼口的纯净水机经常不能使用，而起没人维修，因为开学之前有很多同学花50元买了一张刷水的卡，但近一年下来，钱几乎没怎么少，很多同学都想把卡给退了，但是之前买卡的人也一直不在，想退也退不了，所以同学们怨声很大。

3.我们学校的公寓由于各个宿舍位置不同，所以有些宿舍比较阴暗，室内比较潮湿，而宿舍又不变，所以需要经常晒被子等物品，但是楼顶晒被子的绳子很不好，而且交错着，经常找不到一个晒被子的地方，而且楼顶上的东西由于经常没人所以也很容易丢失，有时候也有错拿情况发生。

4.我校的锅炉房由于在教学区，所以在冬天时候教室很暖和，但把暖气输送到生活区这边的时候就不再那么热，所以宿舍这边就会有点冷，希望学校能想个办法解决一下这个问题。

5.由于西安是一座比较热的城市，虽然我校在郊区但还是感觉有点热，晚上有事也会热的受不了，而宿舍就只有一个电风扇，显然不够，希望学校能尽快解决这个问题。

四、设施

1.如果能在学校里面多设置一些地名文化内涵宣传牌可以用来作为宣传校史，爱校教育的基础平台，我想应该能够让更多的同学了解自己学校的校史并宣传自己的母校，应该比只在校内广播上的宣传力度更大。

2.由于我校刚刚进入新校区，面积较大，地名还未完善起来，一般会以我校的标志性建筑物为参照，但是在这些建筑物周围的面积也很大，以至于很多地方的地名都很模糊，我们刚好可以以一些对我校有突出贡献的人或者值得我校纪念的事情为基础来对这些模糊地带进行命名。

3.在地名所在地设立宣传牌，这样既能突出历史文化，也能间接美化校园环境，使得学校更能充满一种文化氛围和学习气氛，如果并配有相关图片，雕塑，建筑等，效果更佳，而这些图片、雕塑、建筑也可让学生参与策划设计，然后由校方进行裁定并建设，这样既能给学校节省经费又可培养同学们的设计能力，而且我们学校刚好也有设计学院，也能让他们亲身感受到设计的全过程。

4.在入校重要进出处，设立专门物推介。使大家在最方便的地方了解学校。从而进一步深入。学校之大，每个人积极去了解，不现实 所用地名牌本身应有文化意味，且可永久

5.我校的手机信号特别不好，很多时候在宿舍打不通电话，有时候就会耽误一些事情，希望我校能把手机信号进行一下改善。

6我校的投诉制度还是不是很完善，同学们很多都不知道要去哪里保护自己的合法权益，而且就算一些人知道，但在他们投诉之后，有会有种音信全无的感觉，、7.学校的投影仪在夏天到来之后，有时会因为天气太热而无法正常使用，这样会影响老师的教学计划和进度，从而影响学生的学业，所以我希望学校能有专人统计每个多媒体教室的投影仪的状况，并及时对无法正常使用的投影仪进行修炼，从而解决这一问题。

8.学校的自动取款机常常出现问题，多数情况下是里面没钱了，但是银行工作人员却补充不及时，所以取款机一维修就是好几天，同学们就只能到校外去取钱，这对于学生十分不方便，而且很可能会出现一些安全问题，希望学校能给银行方面一个好的交流，一起解决这个问题。五.大学文化

1.大学生不只需要课本上的文化知识，同样需要丰富的课余文化活动，对于刚进校的大一新生，绝大部分时间都在学校，很多同学都因为无事可做且缺乏目标从而沉迷于网络，最终导致无法自拔，导致自己的学业荒废，而且在学习以外的各种能力也没有得到锻炼，而后又由于习惯了这种消极的生活方式，而不再改变，最后只能走入留级，休学的不归路，所以我希望我们能多多开展课余文化活动真正让更多的同学参与进来，然他们有事可做，觉得自己有能力做那些除了打网游以外的事情，从而避免更多的同学陷入网络和感情的陷阱，最终让自己的大学生活变得毫无意义。

2.在班级举行活动时，有时希望能申请到一个有多媒体的教室，给同学们放个电影或是视频什么的以丰富同学们的业余生活，希望学校能简化一下申请多媒体教室的手续，让班级里的活动能够更多，更好，更有效的开展。也让每个班里同学之间不会总用去后街聚餐或是去校外KTV的方式来增进班级团结。这样也可以让班级里的活动更加丰富多彩、更加有文化氛围。

第20篇：给老板的一封建议信

窦总：

你好，这么长时间没有跟你通邮件，也存了很多话要说了。下面是我对工程餐厅的一点看法。如有不当地方，请指正。

1.本餐厅经理对搞餐厅是个外行，不能够做到对餐厅的有效管理。我调查过，通过和他们的深入交谈均反映领导的无能。工程餐厅能有现在的成绩，很大一部分是那些有责任心的老员工的功劳，而让他们尽心尽力工作的原因是他们出于对工作负责任的态度。我跟保洁组、大厨、择菜洗菜阿姨、售饭阿姨聊天的时候他们主动给我透露了经理无能与不会管理。我个人的看法是这样的：经理是有心无力。他想做好，但是不知道该怎么做。另外在意识形态上也对自己的工作不重视。作为餐厅的领导，自己进售饭柜台的时候经常不穿工衣，不戴工帽，在高峰期的时候，经常也可以看到他在各售饭窗口忙来忙去的。想做又不知道怎么做，所以只能在这上面出点力。我觉得这是瞎忙，忙的不是地方。该做的不做，紧要的事情不做，一些零碎的事情倒把自己搞的很忙！也不知道该怎么忙，认为进行岗位操作就是在管理。这不是什么身体力行的事，而是暂时能力有限所致。

2.对餐厅没有管理方法，对员工管理过于松散。我来了很久了，没有发现经理针对餐厅实际情况出台过什么具体措施，哪怕是有什么管理员工的什么办法都行，可是没有。有“等和靠”的心理。我个人觉得经理对员工谈不上什么管理。对有些员工可以开很多绿灯，行很多方便。甚至可以让个别员工享受特殊待遇。这两条对餐厅造成的机会成本相当的大。同时这会让餐厅遭遇很多问题，甚至造成人心不稳。现在餐厅里有些员工在工作时就已经是在混日子了。属于自己分内的事情也会你推我，我推你的。员工内部形成几个小团伙，你一帮我一派的。这对组织的团结很不利，对团队的领导也会造成阻力。

3.没有人在管蔬菜的保鲜与保质。菜买回来基本是不开包的，蔬菜外面有塑料袋包裹着。蔬菜在里面一直闷着，直到用的时候才会拿出来。我举两个例子，我都是有实据的，我对当时的情况做了拍照。24号早上的时候我们进了一批辣椒，买回来后也没有人查看菜的质量。原封不动的在袋子力装着。等到下午3：30分左右的时候，我打开辣椒袋子，发现里面的辣椒已经有1/3都烂了.辣椒遇热解冻就变烂，再加上里面本来买的时候就掺杂了烂的，所以辣椒发腐就很快。于是我把烂的都挑了出来，把好的放再了一起。到第二天下午我再去看的的时候，辣椒又烂了1/5左右。当时的辣椒进价是1.8元/斤，我估计了一下，那些烂的辣椒大概有20斤以上。还有一个例子是藕。我们的藕不知道放了几天，我在24号把它拿出来的时候有一个蛇皮袋里面有3/5的藕都坏掉了，我也对其进行了拍照。这仅仅是两个小的例子而已，像这样蔬菜腐烂的事情每天都有。从来都没有人对这样的事关心过，只有当时在择菜的阿姨会觉得可惜和心痛。我当时看完之后很想掉眼泪，很气愤。扔掉的不仅仅是烂菜，更是员工的工作态度和热情。餐厅都是这个样子，员工肯定也就无所谓了。一方面我们的采购过程有问题，没有人监督和查看，另一方面是我们自己对蔬菜的保管有问题。双方都有责任！而我们自己更是责无旁贷！

4.员工职责划分不清。有的员工干这个也行，干那个也行，不干也行。在什么时间段谁该做什么事情没有一个明确的划分，所以就会导致员工的工作会发生你推给我，我推给你。于是也会导致出现员工之间闹矛盾，内部不团结。餐厅现在就已经出现这样的问题了！

5.财务不透明，不严谨。我所说的透明不是说要透露给员工，而是自己人一看就能明白怎么回事。我举个例子：我们每天都会对学生出售饭票。可是现在竟然出现售出去的饭票回收之后又重新出售。饭票一般都仅限当日使用，可是还会出现好几天前的饭票现在还可以使用。今天卖小笼包的就收到了一个24号的饭票。他们还问了这个能不能用，回答是可以使用。

到晚上登记的时候，会计登记饭票的时候就只登记回收来的饭票，那些反复出售的饭票所得的那部分钱就不知道飞到那里去了。是不是到个人口袋了？或许进到帐里去了？都是个问题。我们出售饭票的地方应该安装一个摄像头进行监管，而且出售饭票的员工不许离开摄像头的监管范围。我们的员工向我偷偷反映过，我们售饭票的两个小女孩会拿着收来的钱去买零食吃。

当然，这样的事情不止一次两次。

6.我严重怀疑会计王达的个人能力和职业道德素养。王达的外表年纪与实际年纪严重不符，21岁的王达却已经略显啤酒肚了。他上班的时候就是随便逛游。要么就在办公室里上上网，处理点事情（当然无聊上网占多数），要么就餐厅大厅里不是跟那些学生美眉聊天，就是随便逛游。很少看见他穿工衣的时候。前天我卖米线所得的饭票不知道怎么就不见了，我立即跟经理沟通。可是他根本就不当回事，跟我说可能是我们内部员工拿去了。晚上登记饭票的时候，王达随便给我那个窗口填了一个数据，我看见他写的是20.我估算了一下，我当天饭票的收入在30左右。而且签字的时候也是他没有经过我同意就替我签的。你可以想象一下这里面的财务漏洞有多大。我再举一个不恰当的例子。我们一个干切配的员工田保院，他刚买了一个诺

基亚手机，花了2000多块。什么型号的我不清楚，但是那部手机带有旋转摄像头。还算高级。我调查过，他的工资是720元/月，他吸的烟是5元或者7元的。每个月除了手机交花费和买烟，还有其他的一点花销，我估计就不剩下什么了。他是从9月份来的，如果从9月份开始攒钱，也不可能攒下那么多的钱。他除了干切配，还会收收饭票。他和经理、王达是一个小团队的。被某个厨师称作经理的\"看门狗\".2000多块的手机，只抽5块或7块的烟，月收入是720，这形成了一个鲜明的对比。当然值得怀疑！我说这个问题的时候，其实已经透露出，餐厅里已经出现抱团现象了。

7.我了解了10月份，11月份，12月份的大概营业额，营业额是直线下滑的。为什么会下滑的这么厉害，除了学生少了这样的客观原因之外有没有什么其他的原因？跟领导管理不善有多大的关系，跟我们自己花色品种少有多大的关系？是否存在贪腐现象？10月份之后员工流失率很高是什么原因？是不是工作太累？是不是员工自己觉得餐厅没有希望？是对领导没有信心还是别的原因呢？这些问题餐厅领导是否意识到了？有多少个问好需要我们去发现啊！

8.人员配置或调配不合理。有些地方能累死人，有些地方却能闲的发慌。怎样进行员工掉配，怎样定岗，工作时间段怎么安排？谁工作，做什么，谁休息，什么时间段休息？谁来安排？由于这些问题没有弄清楚，所以养了一些吃白食的人。有些员工的亲朋好友也在餐厅内吃，甚至有的勤工学生的朋友也会在餐厅蹭饭吃！！

9.勤工人员不规范。我们的勤工人员竟然可以在打卡机的位置！而且某个勤工人员竟然可以去做饭票回收的工作！！我今天又出现了一次饭票不翼而飞的现象。我查了一下，原来是我们的勤工学生替王达回收饭票给收走了，我亲自去问了她一下，原来第一次“丢失”的饭票也是她收走的。谁能保证这里面不会出现问题？勤工学生回收饭票，我们的会计做什么去了，他在忙什么？鬼知道！！

10.办公室的员工到底应该怎么做？有没有明确的职责划分？财务如何规范管理？涉及到差旅费应该怎么报销？是按照实际情况报还是凭主观猜想报？这个过程怎么监管？

我进行了一个个案调查，某员工对会计王达能打40分。对经理无能、没脑子的抱怨有4——5个之多。我不是在说我们的领导的坏话，我个人对刘经理的印象还不错的。我对他是这样的看法：有心无力，没有专业知识，没有受过系统训练，想做但不知道怎么做。抓不住工作重点。需要培养。他还是有些责任心的。这样的成本计算还是留给你吧。也许我看的

还有些表面。或者有些事情我不知道。

下面我想提出我个人的看法：我们对厨师的依赖性很强，打个比方，我们的厨师长张成，他可以享受特殊待遇，一个月好像是1510，加上100元厨师长补助，在加上100元住宿补助。餐厅在外面给他租着房子，但是他嫌冷，在我们二楼有一个单间，里面还有空调。他就负责炒炒菜，订订货。从来没有看见他管过蔬菜为什么会烂那么多，怎么保质保鲜。也不会遵守上班时间。炒完菜就基本找不到人了。所以， 如何降低我们对厨师的依赖性？我们每个餐厅都需要好几个切配员工，又费时又费力，能否考虑半成品的配送？采用配送的利弊在哪里？这是我要提出的问题。

下面对我以上反映的问题做个总结和补充：

1.财务制度怎么健全？怎么严谨？

2.勤工学生怎么使用，安排什么样的岗位？

3.如何规范售票？怎么监管？怎样保证现金的安全？

4.岗位怎样明细化？怎样明确到个人？怎样从根本上解决工作时你推给我我推给你的现象？

5.人员怎么安排最优化，人员不浪费？（即每个操作间最多需要几个人）怎样才能在上班时间没有闲暇的人？

6.怎样做好采购环节？能否考虑统一采购然后根绝餐厅实际情况各餐厅向我们的采购中心订货？餐厅的收货标准是什么？什么样的货可以拒收？谁来监管这个环节？

7.怎样保存蔬菜？是否需要建雪房（即冷库，温度在1——5度之间的称为小雪房，在-18度的称为大雪房）以达到保鲜防腐不浪费的效果。

8.如何做好用量计算？我觉得将用量标准化才能做好用量计算，

9.各操作间的规章制度不明确，无规矩。

10.高峰期前后人员怎么安排

11.售卖窗口的打菜标准是多少？

12.在餐厅内积极推行用餐自助化方式，怎样推行？如何借助学生会的配合？

13.统一员工膳食标准，杜绝浪费。

14.潲水费、纸皮费或者其他费用如何处理？

15.如何在保证工作速度和质量的前提下减少员工的工作时间？是否可采取工时计费？

16.怎样吸引学生，给他们提供什么样的就餐环境？如利用电视电影等；怎样提升餐厅在学生心目中的影响力？我们能给给他们提供哪些有价值的增值服务或免费服务？怎么提升餐厅营业额？

17.怎样向标准化靠近？

18.优秀员工参选标准？怎样评选才公平？

19.如何利用现有人才？

20.餐厅经理的考核标准？

21.各餐厅经理对餐厅的整改意见有没有，如果有，是什么？

22.怎样提高管理层层次？培训的作用有多大？我们用人的成本有多大？

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