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（一）

根据内容提示，写一篇60-80词左右的短文。

内容提要：第21个教师节即将来临，请你根据以下提示给你的英语老师Mi Zhang写一封感谢信，并表示节日的问候。主要内容包括：

1、表示感谢。

2、描述她的教学（如：讲故事，教唱歌，做游戏，举行晚会……；课堂生动有趣，使我们对英语产生兴趣。）。

3、表达节日问候。

Dear Mi Zhang,

Yours

Li Nan

（二）

根据下面表格中所提供的信息，写一篇日记。

注意：

1、内容须包括所提供的信息，要求日记内容完整、正确、通顺。

2、词数60~80左右。

3、日记开头语已为你写好，不算入总词数。

活动时间 5月6日，星期六 集合地点 学校大门口

活动地点 西湖公园

交通方式 公共汽车

出发时间 7：30am 到达时间 8：30am

日程 上午：划船、野餐

下午：做游戏、拍照片、参观博物馆

回程时间 4pm

Saturday, May 6th

I went for an outing with my clamates.

（三）

假如你是Tom，你昨天（5月20日）感冒，发烧、头痛，感觉很累。去看医生，医生要你休息两天，按时吃药，多喝水。所以你想请假两天，回到学校后，一定补上所缺的功课。请给你的老师Mr Smith写一张请假条，60-80词左右。假条的开头、结尾已给出。 单词提示：补上make up

May 20Dear Mr Smith,

Thank you.

Tom

（四）

为了提高你的英语水平，你想寻找一位美国笔友，根据下表提供的信息，写一封电子邮件（开头和结尾已为你写好）。

注意：

1、文章必须包括中文提示和表格中的主要内容。

2、词数：60～80。（已给出的开头和结尾不计算在内）

Name Zhang Lin Sex boy Age 15

Hometown City of Guigang School Ming Yang Middle School

Likes Collect stamps, travel, football, computer games, English songs Dislikes Dance, stay at home, play the piano

June 14

Dear friend,

My name is Zhang Lin.If you want to be a friend of mine, please send an e-mail to me soon.Yours

Zhang Lin

（五）

假如Johnny Brown 是你们的英语老师，请你根据下列表格的内容写一篇英语短文，介绍他的基本情况。词数：60~80左右。

姓名 Johnny Brown 性别 男

年龄 35 国籍 加拿大

工作情况 三年前来到中国，工作勤恳，课上得生动、有趣

业余爱好 运动、旅游，喜欢在课余时间为学生们演奏小提琴

备注 待学生好，是学校最受欢迎的教师之一

（六）

在一次英语班会上,老师请同学们以“Proud of My School”为主题发言。请根据下面所给的提示写一篇发言稿。词数要求在60~80之间。

提示：①What does your school look like?

②What fun do you have at school?

③Why do you like your school?

（七）

假设你是一名导游，请根据下表所提供的信息，用英文向你的游客们介绍一下海口。 位置 海南的东北部

人口 150万

气候 长夏无冬、凉爽宜人

环境 蓝天碧海、空气清新、吸引各地游客

景点 假日海滩、万绿园等

要求：

1、语句通顺，语意连贯、要点写全、书写清晰。

2、词数60～80左右。

3、不要逐字翻译，可紧扣主题,适当发挥。

（八）

请根据下图和表格的提示，写一篇题为：“Saving the Earth”的英语短文。

注意：

1、词数80左右。

2、标题和开头已给出，不计人总词数。

3、内容要点见表格。

人类的不明智之举

1、乱伐树木

2、乱扔垃圾

3、不加处理排放废物

导致的问题

1、土地沙化

2、河水变脏

3、空气质量差

4、全球气温升高

建议 合理化建议至少三条

Saving the Earth

As time goes by, man is making the earth sick.

（九）

如果有下面三种职业供你选择，你最感兴趣或最渴望的是哪一种?写出你的真实想法。 注意：词数60-80，文中不要写出自己的真实姓名和学校。

(十)

假如将来你有了很多钱，这笔钱可以帮助你做三件事情，你会用它来干什么呢？请以“If I have a lot of money…”为题写一篇短文，展开合理的想象，60-80词。

书面表达参考答案

（一）

Dear Mi Zhang,

The twenty-first Teachers, Day is coming.I want to say “Thank you” for your teaching.

You always work hard.You are kind but strict with us.You try to make your claes lively and interesting.You tell us funny stories, teach us English songs and play games with us.We have English parties together.We are all interested in English.With your help, all of us have made great progre.We all love you.Thank you for making English fun.Happy Teachers, Day!

Yours

Li Nan

（二）

It was fine today.I went for an outing with my clamates.We met at our school gate.We got on the bus at seven thirty in the morning and arrived at the West Lake Park at eight thirty.We spent the whole morning boating on the lake.Then we had our picnic lunch.After lunch we played games, took some photos and then went to visit the museum.We had a wonderful time there.We got back at about 4 o,clock.We were very tired, but we were very happy.

（三）

Dear Mr Smith,

I’m sorry I can’t go to school today.I got a bad cold yesterday.I had a high fever and a headache.I coughed a lot.I felt very tired.So my mother took me to see the doctor.The doctor told me to stay in bed for two days, take the medicine on time and drink more water.So I have to ask for two days’ leave.I will work hard to make up the lost leons after I go back to school.

Thanks.

Thank you.

Tom

（四）

Dear friend,

My name is Zhang Lin.I am fifteen years old.I am in the City of Guigang.I am a boy student in Ming Yang Middle School.I like collecting stamps, playing football and computer games.I often sing English songs with my clamates.I enjoy traveling with my parents or friends.I don,t like dancing.I think staying at home all day is terrible.I,m not interested in playing the piano at all.

To improve my English, I want to find a pen-friend in America.If you want to be a friend of mine, please send an e-mail to me soon.

Yours

Zhang Lin

（五）

Johnny Brown is our English teacher.He is 35 years old.He comes from Canada.

Three years ago, he came to China.He works very hard.He can make his

claes very lively and interesting.In his free time, he likes having sports and traveling.After cla, he enjoys playing the violin for the students.He is friendly to the students.He is one of the most popular teachers in our school.

（六）

My school is very big.There are several tall buildings in it.There are more than 2000 students in my school.We have a big playground with lots of trees around it.There are a lot of flowers everywhere.

We have a lot of fun at school every day.After cla we play games and do lots of sports, like playing basketball, football and tennis.We work very hard and do very well in our leons.

I love my school because it’s like a big family.The teachers in my school are very kind to us.I am proud of my school because it is one of the best schools in my heart.

（七）

Good morning, everyone! Welcome to Haikou.Haikou is the capital of Hainan.It,s in the northeast of Hainan and its population is 1,500,000.Here, you can enjoy the fresh air, the blue sky, the clean water and the long white beaches.The weather in Haikou is neither too hot nor too cold.It,s warm all the year round.We can also visit many interesting places, such as the Holiday Beach, the Wanlu Garden and so on.There are lots of visitors every year.Haikou is a good place to be in.I hope you will have a wonderful time in Haikou.

（八）Saving the Earth

As time goes by, man is making the earth sick.People cut down too many trees and leave rubbish everywhere.Factories let out their waste without doing

anything to it.This has caused some serious problems.For example, the land is sandy; the river is dirty; the air is le clean; even the temperature of the earth is rising, and she is shouting for help.What shall we do to save her? My

suggestion is that we should plant more trees, put the rubbish into dustbins and stop factories pouring waste into the air or rivers.We have only one earth, we should do everything to protect it, or we will regret.

（九）Newspaper Reporter

I,m good at writing and reading.I began to read books when I was only seven.So I can write quickly.I was good at drawing, too.Because of this, I was asked to be a school reporter when I was at school.I did a good job about it.I,m also interested in sports, news and music.I,m sure I can easily get on well with other people.So I can easily get information from others.I like traveling.I won,t get tired of the job as a reporter.I believe I can do it well.

(十)If I have a lot of money…

If I have a lot of money, I’ll buy a big house for my parents, because they send

me to school and do a lot of things for me.I hope they can live a more comfortable life.

If I have a lot of money, I’ll travel.I’ll go to Beijing.I’ll visit some places of interest such as the Great Wall, the Summer Palace, Beihai Park, the Palace Museum and so on.

If I have a lot of money, I will plant more trees and flowers in my city.On the one hand, it can make our city more beautiful.On the other hand, it can improve our environment.

(If I have a lot of money, I will give some to charities and help those poor

children who can,t go to school.I will be very happy when I see them studying in the bright clarooms.)

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对比文章

There are two sides of opinions about it.Some people say A is their favorite.They hold their view for the reason that②-----------------（支持A的理由一）What is more, ③-------------理由

二).Moreover, ④---------------(理由三).

While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons.Firstly,-----------------(支持B的理由一).Secondly (besides),⑥------------------（理由二）.Thirdly (finally),⑦------------------(理由三).

From my point of view, I think ⑧----------------（我的观点）.The reason is that ⑨--------------------(原因).As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice.For me, the former is surely a wise choice .

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People, however, differ in their opinions on this matter.Some people hold the idea that ___.In their point of

view, onone hand， _____.On theother hand, _________.Therefore, there is no doubt that _______.

As far as I am concerned, I firmly support the view that ________.It is notonly because ________, but also

because _________.The more _______,

the more ________.

解决方法题型

In recent days, we have to face the problem-----A.

The problem is becoming more and more serious./ The present situation is worrying.First, ------------(说明Ａ的现状)．Second, ---------------(举例进一步说明现状)

Confronted with A, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation./ To our great joy, many measures have been taken to solve the problems.For one thing, ---------------(解决方法一).For another -------------(解决方法二).Finally, --------------(解决方法三).

Personally, I believe that ------ (我的解决方法/ 看法)./ Consequently, I’m confident that a bright future is awaiting us because -----(带来的好处) / if --------------.

说明利弊题型

nowadays many middle schools prefer to ---------.Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows.First, ----------.Besides / What’s more, -------.Meanwhile, -----.

On the other hand,/ However,-----------------------.The most important thing is that ------------.As a result, -----------------------

From the comparison between these positive and negative effects of ,________ we should take it reasonably and do it according to the circumstances we are in.Only by this way can _________.现象解释

Topic

⑴It so happened that_______________⑵Just at the moment,___________.⑶It impreed me most because_______⑷What happened next was _________________.⑸At first,____________.⑹Almost at the same time, ___________.⑺What”s more, ____________⑻As a result,____________⑼As I understand,___________Onone hand,

____________⑾On the other hand___________⑿Therefore,

（二）

I⑴As is known to all____________⑵___ seem to get accustomed to_____⑶In fact_____,..⑷The reasons of _____lie in several aspects.⑸Firstly___, ⑹

Secondly,⑺Thirdly,____________________.⑻Finally,__________________.

⑼As a matter of fact, _________________⑽Onone hand,__________⑾On the

other hand,________________________..⑿Therefore, ____________

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图标作文

As is shown by the figure/percentage in the table/picture,____ has been on rise/ decrease,

significantly/dramatically rising/decreasing from ____ in _____ to _____ in _____.From the

sharp rise/decline in the chart, it goes without saying that _____.

There are at least two good reasons accounting for _____.In one hand, ____.In the other

hand, _____ is due to the fact that ______.In addition, ______ is responsible for _____.

Maybe there are some other reasons to show ______.But itis generally believed that the

above mentioned reasons are commonly convincing.

As far as I am concerned, I hold the point of view that _______.I am sure my opinion is both

sound and well-grounded.

书信作文模板

Your addreMonth, Date, yearReceiver\'s addreDear ...,

I am extremely pleased to hear from you.And I would like to write a letter to tell you

that_____.

……

I will greatly appreciate a response from you at your earliest convenience/I am looking

f0rward to your replies at your earliest convenience.

Best regards for your health and succe.Sincerely yours,

话题作文

Nowadays, there are more and more __ _ in __ _.It is estimated that ___.Why have there

been so many ____? Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows.

The first one is ______.Besides,_____.The third one is _____.To sum up, the main cause of

it is due to _____.It is high time that something were done upon it.For one thing,_____.For

another thing, _____.All these measures will certainly reduce the number of _____.

对比观点作文

_____ is becoming more and more popular recently.There are two sides of opinions of it.

Some people say ____ is their favorite.They hold their view for the reason of ____.What is

more,_____。Moreover,______.

While others think that _____ is a better choice in the following three reasons.Firstly,_____.

Secondly (besides),______.Thirdly (finally),_____.

From my point of view, I think _____.The reason is that _____.As a matter of fact, there

are some other reasons to explain my choice.For me, the former is surely a wise

choice.

日程安排解说词模板

Ladies and Gentlemen/Dear_____,

⑴Welcome to.⑵To begin with,.⑶It’s my pleasure to.⑷Now to

share the schedule with you,.⑸Please keep in mind that.⑹According to

the schedule,.⑺In addition,.⑻As a matter of fact,.⑼During your

visit,.⑽There is no doubt that.⑾I hope that.⑿Thank you very

much for.

道歉信模板

Date:

Dear,

⑴I am very sorry to say/tell you that.⑵Now, I am writing you this letter of apology

to show my deep regret.⑶Please accept my sincere apology.⑷I fear you are unhappy

at.⑸I hope you will understand me and excuse me for.

⑹Let me explain.⑺The rason for my delay/absence was that.⑻I had no way out

because.⑼Thererfore, it,s not in my power to.

⑽Naturally, I want to suggest.⑾I shall be obliged if you will kindly write and tellme

when and where you.⑿We may meet again and I hope to see you soon.

Sincerely yours,

Signature

批评、抱怨信模板

Date:

Dear,

⑴My name is.⑵I am.⑶I want to write you a letter about.⑷

The focus of the complaint is.⑸For one thing,.⑹For another,.⑺

Honestly speaking,.⑻But.⑼Besides,.⑽All in all, there is still

much room for improvement.⑾I do hope.⑿Thank you for your time

and kind consideration.

Sincerely yours,

Signature

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高考英语满分作文范文:A Letter of Thanks(一封感谢信)

时间： 2008-04-08 17:11:41作者：来源：

Dear Mr.John,

How are things going with you in Beijing?

I am writing to show my thanks to you.You tutored me in my spoken English

before you went to Beijing.With your help I made such rapid progre that I won

the first place in the Spoken English Competition of the city.My achievement is owed to your help.Thank you very much.

I have heard that you and your wife will pay a visit to my school.I am very glad at the news.In that case we can see each other again.I am looking forward to your coming.I am sending you a telescope as a small gift.I hope you will like it.

All the best.

Yours,Liu Jie

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基础写作 11----说明文-描写大学生活

大学生活即将开始，你将面对新的学习和生活环境，请根据提示写一篇英语短文，谈谈你打算如何安排你的大学生活。内容要点应包括：

 确定新的学习目标 改进学习方法 学会独立生活 参加各种课外活动  处理好与同学的关系

[写作要求]1．只能使用5个句子表达全部内容；

2．文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

3、信的开关和结尾已为你写好（不计入你所写句数）；

4、已给出的信的开头和结尾不得抄入答题卡.[评分标准]句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。

I will go to college in the near future.After I enter college, I plan to set new goals in my study and improve my way of learning.What’s more, as I am away from my parents, it is neceary for me to learn to live on my own, such as doing some washing and cleaning by myself.In my spare time, I will take part in different kinds of school activities, for example, I will often go to the English Corner to practice my spoken English.In addition, I need to get along well with my clamates and teachers at college.I think I will have a wonderful college life.

基础写作12.---应用文-倡议书

2007年4月29日上午10点到11点，全国亿万学生阳光体育活动在各地大中小学校同时进行。教育部倡导学生：

 每天锻炼一小时 健康工作五十年 幸福生活一辈子

请你根据以上提示，用英语准备一份发言稿，向同学们讲述一下阳光体育活动的有关情况，并就高三学生是否需要每天花一小时锻炼，谈谈你的看法及理由。 注意：

1、发言稿应包括以上所有信息，要有适当发挥。

2、只能使用5个句子表达全部内容。发言稿的开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总句数。

3、参考词汇：阳光体育活动——a national student sports program;教育部——the Ministry of Education

Good afternoon, everyone.

On the morning of April 29, 2007, from 10:00 to 11:00, hundreds of millions of students from primary, middle schools and universities all over China joined in a national student sports program.The Ministry of Education calls on students to exercise for an hour every day, in the hope that they will have good health to work fifty years and enjoy the whole life.Personally, I think it a good idea for us senior 3 students to have daily exercise.It is well worth of taking an hour a day for exercise, which helps us build up our body and keep a clear mind.Therefore, we can work more efficiently.Thank you!

基础写作13.---记叙文-英文稿件

假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华，为校刊英语园地写一篇题为“Our Spring Outing” 的英文稿件。

〔写作内容〕请根据以下内容要点，叙述上周你们班从准备春游到春游结束的完整过程。上周四经班级讨论决定爬山，第二天一大早出发上山，却在山上发现随地乱扔的垃圾。同学们拾捡垃圾，放入垃圾箱中。〔写作要求〕只能使用5个句子表达全部内容。 〔评分标准〕句子结构准确，信息内容完整，可适当增加细节，篇章结构连贯。 Last Thursday, we had a cla meeting to discu where to go for our springouting.We came up with several choices such as going boating, climbing amountain, and going to an amusement park and finally, we decided to go mountainclimbing.

The next day, we set off early in the morning and we enjoyed the warmsunshine and a beautiful view while climbing the mountain.However, when wereached the top, we were shocked to see litter here and there, such as bottles andbanana peels.Then we started to pick up the litter and put the rubbish into thenearby recycling bin and non-recycling bin respectively.基础写作14.---议论文-谈看法

最近，你班召开了高三学生家长会。会后，英语老师要求学生用英语写一篇短文谈谈关于对家长会的看法的。

要点如下：

1、家长会的目的： 相互沟通，提高学习成绩。

2、赞同的观点及理由。

3、不赞同的观点及理由

4、你的观点及理由。

写作要求：

1、只能用5个句子表达全部内容。（开头的句子不计入总数）

2、可适当增加逻辑细节。

Recently a parent’s meeting was held in our school.But different people have different ideas.

Some students think it is of great importance to have the meeting for parents to know more about their children at school.On the contrary, others hold the view that it is no use because they may know their children’s poor marks and improper behavior.Even some parents may scold or beat their children.

In my opinion, to get a better understanding and communication with the teachers and children, parents’ meetings are quite neceary.基础写作15.---写信

假如你在加拿大旅游过，你的笔友李华想留学，要了解加拿大的情况，请你用5句话写信告诉他。开头已经给出。

地理 加拿大是世界第二大国，是世界是湖泊最多的国家。 经济 东部区以渔业、森林为主，中部人口最密集。

留学生活 建议选择东部留学，因为留学生比较少，学费便宜。

医疗 有病一般去诊所，医院费用非常昂贵，建议购买医疗保险，每月54加元写作要求：

1、只能用5个句子表达全部内容。（开头的句子不计入总数）

2、可适当增加逻辑细节。Dear Li Hua,

I am glad to know that you are going to study in Canada, so I am writing to tell you something about this country.

Canada is the second largest country with the largest number of lakes in the world.The majority of people live in the central part of the country, while fishing and forestry are of great importance in the eastern part.I suggest that you (should) choose to study in the east, where not many international students study and tuition is lower.Most people will go to a clinic instead of a hospital, because it is very expensive to see a doctor there.So I advise you to buy hospitalization insurance, which is 54 Canadian dollars a year.基础写作16—记叙文-成语故事

假如你的美国朋友正在学习汉语，他写来电子邮件，向你了解中国成语“掩耳盗铃”的故

事，请你根据以下的写作内容，用英语写出这个故事。 【写作内容】

1.盗铃的念头：深夜里偷窃邻居家挂在屋外的大铃铛。2.钟鸣：掩耳； 3.盗铃：被捉； 4.寓意。

Once upon a time there was a stupid man who went to steal his neighbour’s big bell hung outside the door one night.He tried to get the bell off, but it rang the moment he touched it.He was afraid that someone would hear it, so he covered his ears and got the bell down.Hearing the sound of the bell, a lot of people came to the gate and caught him.The story tells us that we can never fool ourselves by ignoring the facts.基础写作17—应用文-电子邮件

假如你是卜曼宜，你购买了一部某外国公司生产的手机，因有质量问题，要求该公司更换。请根据下列要点，用英文写一封电子邮件。电子邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好。写作内容：

1．问题：用了十天后手机不响铃，不能发短信； 2．该产品已售完，无法更换； 3．型号新，无配件，无法维修。4．没有手机很不方便。5．要求：公司应尽快予以更换 dear Sir,

I am writing to you for the mobile phone of Dephone-S250 I bought on 20th Apr.2008 at Tele Mall in Wuhan, P.R.China.Ten days after that, it didn\'t ring and I couldn’t send any short meages.Then I took it to the seller, but was told that the model had been sold out.Later I went to the repairman，but he said since it was a new model in China, it was impoible to fix it without the right spare parts.I was almost desperate on hearing that because it would be quite inconvenient without the mobile phone for so long a time.Therefore, I require that you send me a new one of the same model as soon as poible.Thank you for your consideration.

Sincerely yours,Bu Manyi 基础写作18—说明文-写短文

假设你是一位心理辅导老师，你的一位学生因为考试成绩不好而向你求助。针对他的情况，请你以Marks Do Not Mean Everything 为题，写一篇短文开导他。 要点：

1． 成绩好坏并不意味着一个学生的优劣；2． 成绩可以通过自身的努力提高； 3． 要学会调整心态，争取进步；4． 只要自己付出，就没有什么可后悔的。 写作要求：

1．必须使用5句子介绍全部所给的内容。

2．将5个句子组织连贯成的一篇短文，使用必要的连接词。Marks Do Not Mean Everything

It is usual that many students’ parents and teachers consider marks as everything, but in fact, marks only show whether one gains more or le achievement in a certain period.It does not mean students who get high marks are top or excellent ones.What’s more, marks can be truly improved if you work hard at your leons.However hard you feel at present, you will be happy in the future, so you should adjust your mind to reality and make up your mind to make progre.As a matter of fact, if you put your heart into your study, whatever the result is, there is nothing left for you to regret.基础写作19---应用文-自荐信-

阅读下面一则广告，按照要求完成写作任务。 EIL International English Summer Camp Volunteer Wanted

EIL was founded in Britain in 1936 with the fundamental aim of international understanding “Learn to live together by living together”.

Requirements: Over 16; good knowledge of English; outgoing; working well with childrenbetween 7-12

Activities: Language study, outdoor recreation and travel Campers: Students from different countries Camp site: Mount Wuyi, Fujian Time: July 26-August 9

Application deadline: July 15.2008

If interested, please e-mail to [写作内容]

假设你是李华，这则广告引起了你的兴趣，请用英文写一封自荐信。要求如下： 1.对夏令营主题的理解；2.根据招聘要求自我介绍；3.参加夏令营的目的。 注意：1.信的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；2.只能用五个句子表达。

Dear sir,

I’m Li Hua from Fujian.When I was reading the advertisement , the aim of this activity impreed me greatly.I think it is instructive to learn to live together by living together.It is such a good opportunity for the only child like me to learn to share and work together that I recommend myself to you without hesitation.

As a boy of 17, I am outgoing, have a good command of English and some experience of working well with children aged from 7 to 12.I think it is a kind of win-win activity, through which I can help take care of the children and meanwhile improve my English, make more friends, and enrich my life during the summer vacation.I am looking forward to your early reply.

Sincerely yours,Li Hua 基础写作20—应用文-回信

假定你是李华，David 是你的美国笔友。他对中国鼓励使用环保购物袋很感兴趣，来信向你询问此事。请你给他写封回信。主要内容如下：

◇ 感谢他的关注。◇ 简要介绍相关情况。◇ 谈谈你的感想。 注意：1.词数100左右，信的格式已为你写好。

2.可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3只能用5 个句子表达全部内容。 4.参考词汇：环抱购物袋---environment-friendly shopping bag; 关注---concern.Dear David,

I’m glad that you’ve noticed our efforts directed towards environmental protection.Thank you for your concern.

As too much use of plastic bags has caused serious white pollution, our government encourages us to use reusable environment-friendly shopping bags, which are made of a variety of material that can be easily treated when they become rubbish.More and more people in China have realized the advantages of such bags and started using them.I believe that the wide use of these shopping bags, one of the many steps we are taking to make our country an even cleaner place, can greatly improve our environment.Yours,Li Hua

推荐第4篇：书面表达

1.幸福是什么?幸福是父母为你营造的温馨的家，幸福是老师望向你的赞许的目光，幸福是孤独时朋友送来的一杯奶茶，幸福是„„ 请以My happine为话题，写一件曾经发生过的令你感到幸福的事情。要求：条理清晰，语言流畅，用词准确, 字迹工整，80-100词。

Happine is important in our life.In fact, happine is always around you if you put your heart into it.

I will never forget one thing.Once, I had a bad mark at a math test.I was shy and afraid to meet my parents.But when I got back home late, my parents knew what happened, they said to me: “It doesn’t matter, my child.Remember we’ll be always beside you when you need help.We believe you can be better next time.Never give up!” I was moved and made up my mind to work harder and harder.

I feel happy.Whenever I am in trouble, I can feel my parents’ love.I want to be a good child for my parents.

2.节约用水水是生命之源。随着水资源的短缺，节约用水是我们每个人的责任，请以此为话题写一篇不少于80字的短文。

★ 范文As we know, water is very important to man, we can’t live without water.The amount of water which is suitable to drink is le and le.But some people don’t care about it.They waste a lot of water in their daily life.Even worse, they pour dirty water into rivers.They throw rubbish into rivers, too.Many rivers and lakes are seriously polluted.Something must be done to stop the pollution.And I think it’s a great shame to waste while millions are in great need of water.I think what we can do is that we have to save every drop of water as poible as we can.For example, we must turn off the tap immediately after we use it.We can use a basin to wash our hands and faces.It’s also a good idea to encourage my friends and family members to join me! Only in this way can we live happily.If we don’t save water, the last drop of water will be a tear-drop of us.I believe if everyone makes a little effort, we can make a big difference.

3.拯救地球地球是我们人类共同的家园，人类只有一个地球。“低碳、环保”已成为当今时代主题。目前，我市英语学会准备在全市中学生中开展以“Save(拯救)our earth”为主题的英文征文活动。现请你根据以下三个方面的提示，写一篇80词左右的短文参评。

1.重要性：只有一个地球2.主要问题：污染、疾病、灾难3.措施：停止污染、保护大自然参考词汇：disaster n.灾难 protect V.保护注意：(1)文中不能出现真实姓名、校名;(2)文章标题已给出，但不计入总词数;(3)可适当发挥，以使行文连贯。

★ 范文Let’s Do Something to Save Our Environment

It is recently reported that some rivers and lakes have dried up in South China.A lot of fishes died.The bottoms of the rivers and lakes have become gra land.The water is becoming le and le because of the bad weather.

So everyone should do something to save our environment.First, we should save every drop of water, such as turning off the taps after using it and recycling the water.For example, we can water the plants and clean the rest room with our used water.Second, we should save energy, such as le turning on the lights and turning off the lights when we leave;Do more walking, more bicycling and le driving and so on.Third, we should ask our government to control the pollution from the factories.

Let’s act now from everything to save our environment.Don’t let our tears be the last drop of water in the world!

4.How to Keep Safe in school”的短文。谈谈你的看法。内容包括： 1.描述一件发生

在你身上或你看到的发生在校园的意外事件（经过与结果）。2.提出解决这种校园意外事件

的建议（至少两条）。3.呼吁每个学生要注意安全

How to Keep Safe in school

Do you know our school life could be dangerous if we are not careful enough.For

example，Last month，my friend Tom fight with a clamate.And Tom chase the clamate.By the time he ran into the clamate , the clamate had already closed the door,so Tom hit the door,and then he send to the hospital soon,and he stay in hospital about two weeks.So,we should know the important of the safe in school.Here are my suggestions.We can\'t fight with others.And we should get on well with our clamates.

What\'s more,we should be careful in our school life.Let\'s keep safe in school,and have a

better life!

5.在一次英语班会上，老师请同学们以“Proud of My School”为主题发言。请根据下

面所给的提示写一篇发言稿。字数要求在80～100词之间。文中不得出现真实的人名、地名。

提示：①What does your school look like？②What fun do you have at school？③Why do you like your school？

Proud of My School

My school is very big with several tall buildings.There are over 1，000 students in my

school.We have a big playground, a bigsoccer court and two basketball courts.There are lots of trees around our school.We have lots of fun at school.After cla we play games and do lots of sports, like a big family.The teachers in my school are as kind to us as our parents.I feel proud of my school because it is one of the best schools in my heart.

6.回顾初中三年成长过程，你一定有很多感受，从学习， 生活，爱好等方面作出自

我评价 ( 毕业 回顾评价)

I have studied in my middle school for three years.I have learned a lot.I have learned not

only how to make friends but also how to talk to others.I have many hobbies.I like sports.I often play basketball, football and volleyball with my friends.Football is my favorite.Of all my subjects, I do best in English and Chinese.But my math andphysics are a little weak.I think I will try my best to learn them well.I hope I can study in No.1 High School

7.假如你是初三学生杨帆，在复习备考阶段遇到烦恼时。你的笔友Mike给过你很多

鼓励。现在请你给他写封回信，感谢他对你的鼓励和帮助。

Dear Mike,

Although I haven‟t written to you for a long time, I‟d like to thank you from my the

bottom of my heart.

Since I failed in the PE test, I‟ve lost interest in studying anything.I believed no matter

how hard I worked.I wouldn‟t realize my dream to be a famous senior high school.It’s you who encouraged me to overcome myself.

What you said is right.Whether to enter an ideal school is not my real goal.The most

important thing is that one should always dream to be better.As long as I try my best with the spirit of not giving up, everything will be OK.

Having a friend like you, I’m sure we’ll make progre together.Thank you.

Yours,

Yang Fan

8.Le Preure, Better Life

Hello, boys and girls!

Preure is a serious problem in today’s world.Students in our cla are under too much preure.Some students can’t get on well with their clamates, while others may worry about their exams.

I’m always under preure, too.M y parents want me to be the top student in cla.So they send me to all kinds of after-claes at weekends.Last Monday eveni ng, I had a talk with my mother.I told her I was not lazy.I really felt tired.I needed time to relax.My mother agreed with me a t last.So I think a conversation with paren ts is neceary to solve the problem.

That’s all.Thank you!

9.Learn to expre thanks

Good morning, boys and girls!The topic of my speech today is “Learn to expre thanks”.

We find some students want to eat well and wear fashionable clothes at school.When they leave school and enter society, they don’t show any sense of thanks.

I think this behavior is not correct.As students, we should learn to expre thanks.The society offers us a chance to receive good education.And our parents also support us to go to school.Our teachers teach us much knowledge, so we should thank them.We should also thank our friends because they give us courage and support.In the future, we should never forget our society, parents, teachers and so on.At present, we should study harder in order to make our world more beautiful.

Thank you for your listening!

10.Growing up with good books（倡议书）

My dear friends,Reading is very important.

We can get knowledge through reading.It can not only open our minds, but also make us cleverer and happier.Our study can be improved if we read more and good books.The more we read, the more we will learn, and the brighter our future will become.

However, some students spend much time in listening to music, watching TV or going on line to play games.It takes much of their spare time.So I would like to suggest that everyone should read more books, especially read claics so that we can spread our Chinese traditional culture to the world.

Let’s start reading now.And let it become a part of our life!

推荐第5篇：书面表达

中考英语书面表达的考点集汇、讲解和训练

【考点扫描】

书面表达是每年中考必考题型，是考查学生交际能力的一个重要组成部分。书面表达通常有三种形式：

1、书信、日记、通知、留言、假条；

2、看图作文；

3、根据汉语提示作文。

无论是那一种书面表达形式，考生所写的短文都要紧扣主题、文理通顺，要素完整，语言准确、得当、格式正确、无大、小写和拼写错误，标点符号正确，能达到交际目的。 【名师解难】 一.训练方法

1.记。认真系统复习和背诵基础知识和优美的句子、句型。中国有句古话，叫“熟读唐诗三百首，不会吟诗也会作”。同样，要使自己具有较强的写作能力，首先应该熟读和背诵一些句型和短文。许多同学写出来的语言根本不符合英语的语言习惯，相当一部分人有对照中文逐字翻译的不良习惯，不去理会中英文的差异。大量的背诵和阅读是提高写作能力的有效办法，同学们若有大量的现成语言积累在脑海里，自己写起文段来，就可以做到脱口而出，或是模仿、套用，甚至发挥。

2.练。每练一篇书面表达题，都要真正学到一点东西，不可贪多而边学边忘。平时可以采用循序渐进、灵活多样的练习方式。从根据提示词写单句开始，到写单句，然后到写几句话，最后到写流利的文段。尽量尝试多种形式的写作，如短信、说明、通知、便条、明信片、看图写作、根据表格或记录写短文等。

3.写。要进行实战写作。要求自己在20分钟内写出100个词的短文，并且质量高、1 内容全、形式正确。这样形成习惯，考试时就能得心应手。 二.应试策略

1.审题目：要切中题意。《中考考试说明》指出，书面表达要切中题意。怎样才能切中题意？就是要认真审题，看到考题后，先不要急于动笔，要仔细看清题目要求的内容。在自己的头脑中构思出一个框架或画面，确定短文的中心思想，不要匆匆下笔，看懂题意，根据图画、图表、提纲或短文提供的资料和信息来审题。审题要审格式、体裁、人物关系、故事情节、主体时态、活动时间、地点等。

2.圈要点：防止遗漏要点。要点是给分的一个重要因素。为了防止写作过程中遗漏要点，同学们要充分发挥自己的观察力，把情景中给出的各个要点逐条列出。

3.列提纲：为写作做好准备。根据文章要点短文的中心思想将主要句型、关键词语记下，形成提纲。

4.定基调：定出时态、人称、顺序、开头、结尾。5.写全文：写短文时要做到以下六个方面：

(1)避免使用汉语式英语，尽量使用自己熟悉的句型。几种句型可交替使用，以避免重复和呆板。

(2)多用简单句型，记事、写人一般都不需要复杂的句型。可适当多使用陈述句、一般疑问句、祈使句和感叹句。不用或少用非谓语或情态动词等较复杂的句型。 (3)注意语法、句法知识的灵活运用。 1）语态、时态要准确无误。

2）主谓语要一致，主语的人称和数要和谓语一致。 3）注意人称代词的宾格形式。

4）注意冠词用法，例如： He is an honest student.中的an不能写成a。

2 5）注意拼写、标点符号和大小写，例如：receive, believe, fourteen, forty, ninth, restaurant等。

(4)描写人物时，要生动具体，例如：

1）外表特征：tall, short, fat, thin, strong, weak, ordinary-looking 等。 2）服饰颜色：red, yellow, blue, white, green, brown, black 等。 3）内心境界：glad, happy, sad, excited, anxious, interested 等。 4）感情描写：love, like, hate, feel, laugh, cry, smile, shout 等。 5）动作描写：come, go, get, have, take, bring, fetch 等。

(5)上下文要连贯。上下文的连贯性也是评分的一条原则，因此同学们应把写好的句子，根据故事情节，事情发生的先后次序（时间或空间），使用一些表示并列、递进等过渡词进行加工整理，使文章连贯、自然、流畅。同学们应注意下面过渡的用法： 1）表示并列关系的：and, as well as, or… 2）表示转折关系的：but, yet, however… 3）表示时间关系的：when, while, after, before, then, after that… 4）表示因果关系的：so, therefore ,as a result… 5）表示目的的：in order to, in order that , so as to, so that… 6）表示列举的：for example , such as… 7）表示总结性的：in general, in all, in a word, generally speaking…

(6)不会表达，另辟蹊径。中考作文给分是以要点和语言准确度而定，不以文采打分。造句越简单准确越好，造复合句容易出错，容易被扣分，阅卷场上有句话：“错误面前人人平等，文采好不加分”。如遇到个别要点表达不出来或难以表达，可采用变通的办法，化难为易，化繁为简。总之，所造句子要正确、得体、符合英语表达习惯。 (6)改病句：认真检查，改正错误。中考作文时，由于时间紧、内容多，同学们出错在所难免。因此，改错这一环节必不可少。中考作文评卷是根据要点、语言准确性、上下 3 文的连贯性来给分，根据错误多少来扣分。因此，中考时花几分钟时间用来检查错误显得尤为重要。检查错误应从以下几个方面入手： 1）格式是否有错。 2）拼写有无错误。 3）语言是否用错。 4）时态、语态错误。 5）标点错误。 6）人称是否用错。 三.注意事项

书面表达要特别注意书写工整，卷面整洁。每年阅卷老师在十来天的时间里要看十几万考生的作文，工作量之大，时间之紧，可想而知。书写是否工整，卷面是否整洁与得分高低直接有关。 【中考范例】

VII.书面表达（共1题，计10分）

假如你叫张强。请根据下面美国朋友Bob的来信内容，结合你自己的情况写一篇语言连惯、符合逻辑的英文回信。

要求：1.认真阅读来信的内容，从中获得你需要的信息。 2.词数：80左右。回信的开头、结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。 注意：回信中不得出现你的真实地址和所在学校的名称。

Hello！I’m your new friend.My name is Bob.I’m fifteen.I’m American.I live in New York.

4 I am a middle school student.I’m good at maths.It is very interesting.My favourite sport is basketball.And I am not only a basketball fan but also a good player.I like pop music.My friends and I often sing pop songs

After school, I am interested in getting on-line.I have known a lot about China from the Internet.Now I’m learning Chinese.I hope I will visit your country one day.Please write to me and tell me something about your life.I’m looking forward to hearing from you.

Bob Dear Bob, _________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________ Yours,

Zhang Qiang 【解析】根据前面提到第六个步骤，我们来写一下这篇书面表达。

5 1.审题目：通过审题目我们可以知道：本篇书面表达应是写一封回信，写信人是张强，收信人是Bob，信的内容应是介绍张强自己的情况。

2.圈要点：根据来信判断，写回信必须包括以下要点：

1、收到对方的来信；

2、愿意和对方交朋友；

3、自己的姓名、年龄和住址；

4、自己的身份、特长和爱好；

5、自己的希望。

3、列提纲：1.got your letter 2.glad to be your friend 3.name, zhang Qiang, fifteen, live in Shanxi 4.a middle school student, like English, like sports, good at drawing, 5.hope we’ll meet in China

4、定基调：1.时态：收到来信用一般过去时，介绍情况用一般现在时，希望用一般将来时。2.人称用第一人称。3.可按提纲的顺序来写。4.开头和结尾题目已经给出。

5、写全文： Dear Bob, I got your letter yesterday.I’m very glad to be your pen friend.My name is Zhang Qiang.I’m fifteen years old, too.I live in Shaanxi.

I’m a middle school student, too.I like English and physics very much.I also like sports, but I’m good at drawing.I know a little about America.Could you tell me something more about your country in your next letter? I hope we’ll meet in China some day.I’m sure we’ll have a good time together. Please write (to) me soon. Yours, Zhang Qiang 6

6、改病句：认真复查一边，如有错误，加以改正。【满分演练】

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华山是中国名山之一。假设外国友人到你校参观后，准备去旅游。请根据以下要点向外国友人简单介绍华山（the Hua Mountain）

1．位于陕西东部，是中国著名的旅游胜地，每年有大批中外游客前去旅游观光。 2．乘汽车去大约要花1个小时；也可以乘火车去。

3．登山便可领略其云海（the sea of clouds）、奇松（wondrous pines）、怪石（unique rocks）等秀丽的风景及清晨美丽的日出。 注意：

1．字数：80词左右。 2．请不要逐字翻译。 （2） 根据提示和要求完成下面短文

假如你（Li Lei）在去年夏令营认识的一个朋友Jim从英国给你寄来一件礼物—— 一件红色的衬衫，并附有一封信。在信中他向你问好，他想知道你近来在忙些什么。请你给他写一封回信（100个词左右）表示感谢。回信要包括以下内容： 1.向Jim问好并对他表示感谢。

2.礼物是你最喜欢的颜色，尺寸很合适，你非常喜欢。

3.告诉Jim你近来很好，上周刚过完生日，生日聚会很热闹。询问Jim的近况，并表示希望他能来中国。

7 注意1.信的格式已经给出。

2.信中不得使用真实的人名、地名。 （3）

根据中文意思和英文提示词语，写出意思连贯、符合逻辑的英文文段。所给英文提示词语必须都用上，中文提示内容不必逐句翻译，每组英文提示所写出的句数不限。

今天是6月23日星期日，天气晴朗。你和你的同学张宏参观了西安市动物园。那里的动物十分有趣，人见人爱。当你看到有位游客在向猴子投喂食物时，就上前阻止并说……

请你用英文写一篇日记，记述今天的经历。（请注意日记格式） 1．fine day, sun, bright 2．visit, Beijing Zoo 3．animal, so interesting, people, love 4．see, visitor, throw…to, stop, say （4）

根据中文设置的情景、英文提示词语以及表格所提供的信息，写出语法正确、意思连贯、符合逻辑的英文文段。 注意1.字数60~80。

2.所给的英文提示词语及表格所提供的信息必须都用上。（可适当发挥） 3.发言稿的开头和结尾已给出。

假设你是张斌，今年暑假你将参加学校组织的赴加拿大“绿色之旅”夏令营活动。请你准备一篇在开营式上的自我介绍发言稿。

name, Zhang Bin, fifteen years old, live in Xi’an, favorite subject, biology…

Dear friends

I’m very glad to introduce myself to you._______________________ _________________________________________________________________________________

That’s all.Thank you for listening.（5）

根据中文提示和英文提示词语写一篇短文。

今年暑假，有一批美国中学生要来你们学校访问。请你写一篇有关西安的简介，以便和他们交流。

注意：1.字数100左右；

2.必须使用所给英文提示。Capital of Shaanxi, Lie in the Northwest, many places of interest, autumn, best season 9 （6） 看图写话。

根据以上四幅图和提示词语，写出一篇语法正确、意思连贯、语句通顺、符合逻辑的短文，开头已给出。 要求：1.叙述要用第三人称。 2.词数60~80个左右。 3.要表达自己的看法或想法。

4.选用下列词语：rush hour, cro, make sure, come over, traffic rules Last Monday, Tim got up at 7:40 in the morning.______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ （7）

请你参考图文提示，写一篇60~80词的短文。 注意：1.语言规范，语意完整，内容丰富。 2.表达符合图意，书写规范。 3.给出自己的观点。 4.文章的开头已给出。

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参考词：pollute, turn off the tap(水龙头)，dry, save(节约 vt.), water resources(水资源) From the pictures we know that ______________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ （8）

请根据下面四幅图，写一篇70个单词左右的短文。文章开头已经给出，不算入总词汇数内。

参考词汇： on fire 着火firefighter n.消防员put out 灭火

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Jack was woken up by the shouting “Fire! Help! Fire! Help!...”

__________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________ （9） 看图写话。

要求：1.根据图画所提供的语境，写出意思连贯、语言流畅、语法准确、符合逻辑的短文。 2.至少使用两种时态，70词以上。不得使用真实姓名、地名、学校名。

3.标题和第一句已给出，但不计入70词之内。

One day Lin Tao and Mei Mei were playing in the garden.___________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ （10）

根据所给图画用英语写一篇约80词的短文。

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假如你所在的学校要出一期英语壁报。你准备就自己经历的一件事写一篇英语短文向壁报投稿。下面五幅图记录了你上个星期六与老师和同学到南河边参加植树活动的全过程。请你就以下五幅图写一篇英文短文。

注意：1.短文内容要包括所有图画中的主要内容 2.词数：70～90

3.生词提示： 桶bucket锄头hoe

________________________________________________________________ 13 ____________________________________________________________________ （12）

请按照下面6幅图和表格的提示，写一篇题为“Changes in Our Hometown”的英语短文。（词数：50~80，不包括已经给出的单词）

内容要点：

过去 现在 旧房 高楼 河水污浊 河水清澈 步行、骑自行车 乘公交车、小汽车 Changes in Our Hometown

Over the past ten years, great changes have taken place in our hometown.In the past 14 ________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________ 【练习答案】

(1) 参考答案：

The Hua Mountain is one of the most famous mountains in China.It lies in the east of Shaanxi.Every year thousands of Chinese and foreigners pay a visit there.It’s not far from here.It takes you about one hour to get there by bus.You can also go there by train.When you are at the top of the mountain, you’ll find clouds, wondrous pines and unique rocks around you.In the early morning when the sun rises, the sky looks very beautiful.It’s really a nice place to visit. (2) 参考答案：

36 Zhonghua street Xi;an, China June21st, 2004 Dear Jim：

How are you? Many thanks for the shirt! I’m very happy to hear from you again.I love the shirt very much, Jim, and red is my favourite colour!

15 You remembered! It’s just my size.Every time I wear it, I will think of you. I’m fine here in China.Last week I had a birthday party.Many of my clamates came and my mother made us a lot of good food.We really had a wonderful time together.How are you doing in England, Jim? I mi you very much.I always mi the days we were together last summer.I hope you can come to China someday.Please write back soon. Your friend, Li Lei

(3) 参考答案：

Sunday June 23rd

It was a fine day today and the sun was bright.I visited Xi’an Zoo with my clamate, Zhang Hong.The animals there were so interesting that all the people loved them.When I saw a visitor throwing food to the monkeys, I went/ran to stop him/her and said, “Animals are our friends and we must take good care of them.”

(4) 参考答案： Dear friends,

I’m very glad to introduce myself to you.My name is Zhang Bin.I’m fifteen years old.I live in Beijing.One of my favorite subjects is biology.I’m

16 interested in drawing.In my free time, I often go camping, draw some pictures of plants, and enjoy the singing of birds in nature.I want to be a biologist when I grow up.

I feel lucky to join you.I hope we can be good friends and do our best to make That’s all.Thank you for listening. (5) 参考答案：

Xi’an is the capital of Shaanxi with a long history.There are many places of interest, such as the Dayan Pagoda, the Xiaoyan Pagoda, the Bell Tower and the Terra Cotta Warriors.Since it lies in the Northwest of China, the winter here is long and it sometimes snows.Autumn is the best season in Xi’an, for it’s neither too cold nor too hot.One of the most famous traditional foods is “Yangroupao”.

(6) 参考答案：

Last Monday, Tim got up at 7:40 in the morning.It was the rush hour.He rode his bike to school very fast.He was croing the street when a car came at that moment.Tim’s bike hit the car and he fell to the ground heavily.The driver was very kind and stopped to make sure that Tim was all right.Then a policeman came over.He told Tim to ride more slowly next time and it was dangerous.Tim thanked him and went to school.All of the young men should obey the traffic rules. 17 (7) 参考答案：

From the pictures we know that much water has been polluted.Some factories are pouring waste water into rivers and lakes.The water becomes dirty and lots of fish have died.Many people often waste water.For example, they often forget to turn off the taps.If we don’t have enough water, land will be dry and crops will die.We can’t live without water.So we should try our best and encourage everyone to protect water resources.We must save water and stop polluting it.If we do that, Things will be much better. (8) 参考答案：

Jack was woken up by the shouting “Fire! Help! Fire! Help!...” What had happened? He looked out of the window.Wow! He found that his neighbour’s house was on fire.Jack jumped off the bed and rushed to the telephone.He made a call to the police.Then, he ran out and helped his neighbour (to) fight against the fire.Soon the fire fighters came and in a short time the fire was put out.And the house owner and fire fighters thanked Jack and his neighbours a lot.(9) 参考答案：

TAKING CARE OF TREES

One day Lin Tao and Mei Mei were playing in the garden.They found

18 that a young tree there was dying.They thought they must save the young tree.Then they put a rope around the tree and watered it.Some days later the tree came back to life again.Their mother saw this and praised them, “You are good children!”

(10) 参考答案：

Yesterday afternoon Li Ping and I were going to school.On the way we saw an old woman croing the street.Suddenly a car paed by very fast.The old woman was frightened and fell down to the ground.The apples in her basket were all out on the street.Immediately, we ran to the old woman, helped her get up and picked up all the apples.Li Ping helped her carry the basket and I helped her cro the street.The old woman thanked us very much. （11） 参考答案： 内容要点：

（1）上星期五老师告诉我们“明天去南河边植树”。 （2）上星期六（第二天）早上六点半我就起床了。 （3）我带着桶去学校，同学们带着桶、锄头在校门口等待。 （4）到南河边，我们开始植树。（也可描写动场面。） （5）看着新种下的树，我们都很高兴。

Last Friday, our teacher told us that we would go to plant trees by the 19 South River the next day.On Saturday morning I got up at six thirty and went to school with a bucket.My clamates were waiting at the school gate with buckets and hoes.

When we got to the South River, we began to plant trees on the river bank.(On the river bank, some students were digging holes, the others were planting or watering the young trees.)

After we finished our work, we were happy to see the young trees we planted on the river bank. （12） 参考答案：

Over the past ten years, great changes have taken place in our hometown.In the past, the houses in our hometown were very poor, but now many people have moved into tall buildings (there are many tall buildings here and there).The water in the rivers was very dirty, but now the rivers are clean and people can swim in them.People used to walk or ride bikes, but now they can take buses or drive their own cars to go to work.走到茶几边，我认出了外婆的杯子，但是哪一个才是妈妈的杯子呢？突然之间，我觉得，自己真得太不了解父母了。当妈妈为我倒水时，我却不知她的杯子是什么样的；当妈妈为我夹我喜欢吃的菜时，我却没想过他们是爱吃淡一点，还是浓一点。。。。。。2009年到了，意味着过去一年的逝去和新的一年的到来。妈妈为我操劳了一整年，仔细想想，现在的我也应该为她做一点点事了。

于是，我决定先将茶沏好再找杯子。学着爸爸平时沏茶的顺序，我先从茶柜

20 里找出了一罐普洱茶，再往烧水的壶里加入水放在电茶炉上烧，接着，我将爸爸已经掰好的普洱茶片拿了两片放在盖碗里，等了一会，水开了，我小心地将水注入盖碗，将盖盖上，把盖碗里第一遍的茶水滤掉，然后再次注水，盖上盖，焖一会才两手并用地将茶水倒入茶海里，因为第一次自己动手，盖碗的烫手是我所没想到的，手忙脚乱的我弄得茶几上一片片的水渍。重复几次这样的程序后，我先帮外婆倒了一杯茶，因为外婆特别喜欢喝茶。当外婆从厨房走出来的时候我已经把茶都给倒好了，这时，外婆才告诉我哪一个是妈妈的杯子。

妈妈起床了，我双手捧着水杯送到她的面前，就像捧着一颗温热的心。妈妈一愣，随即脸上露出了微笑，她一手接过水杯，伸出另一只手将我拉进了她的怀里，那手轻轻柔柔地在我的头上抚摸着，接着妈妈在我的脸上深深地亲了一口。虽然妈妈经常亲我，但这一刻的亲吻却最让我感到幸福。我抬起头对妈妈说：“妈妈快喝吧，要不茶要凉了。”妈妈仰起了脖子，张着嘴巴，“咕咚，咕咚”地喝了几大口。看她那甜蜜蜜的样子，仿佛微苦的普洱茶也是蜜一般甜。

我记得在我小学的时侯，就读过一首曹值的七步诗：“煮豆持作梗，辘毂以为汁；秸在釜下燃，豆在釜中泣；本是同根生，相煎何太急”。那时只知其大意，只知道曹操的长子曹丕继位，他在一些奸臣的影响下，担心他的同胞弟弟曹值篡位，便逼迫曹值在七步之内作出一首诗来，否则处死；结果他的弟弟就在七步之内写出了流传至今的“七步诗”。当时这首诗对曹丕也是一种极大的潮讽。

几个世纪过去了，社会和生活都发生了极大的变化；应该说人的素质也应有所提高；一个人生活在世上，是离不开亲情、友情和爱情的；有人说：打架亲兄弟，上阵父子兵，但是，兄弟姐妹的团结并不是真对与他人打架斗殴，在生活上， 21 事业上应是不可或缺的照应；俗话说“一根筷子容易断，十双筷子断就难”；可见，团结是一种力量，只有团结才有攻不破的堡垒。

然而，就在生活优越的今天，兄弟姐妹往往因为一点小事，一点利益而你争我斗，反目成仇，甚而相残；我和我的朋友在聊天时有时聊及这个问题，有人这样评论：一个人生活在世上，如果不顾亲情，对兄弟姐妹甚至父母于不顾，那他在这个社会上和任何人都不要谈“情”字，特别是友情。

树大分枝，各自成立家庭后，在生活中一些小事是难免发生的，但要看你怎样去对待，把金钱和利益看的太重，那麽，你就会值亲情于不顾；看淡名利，注重亲情才是做人的底线；争则不足，让则有余，在利益和金钱面前，我们何不礼让一点，做一个有道德、有素质、有亲情的人呢？

家和万事兴，团结是一种力量，让我们团结友爱，和睦共处，为个人的事业、为家庭的生活、为国家的兴盛而看重亲情、友情、爱情；把金钱和利益看淡一些吧！ 人过留名，雁去留声，希望在几十年之后，当你离开这个世界的时侯，留给后人的不是唾泣，而是美愉。

今天是她父亲的生日,她要回家和父亲一起过生日.我很理解她的想法,更理解她的思念之情.是的,她父亲已经六十多岁了,为了子女的成长与幸福,含辛茹苦,真的的不容易.话说过来,人一辈子真的很不容易.人年老时非常希望能够和子女在一起,即使不能在一起,哪怕一个电话甚至一个短信,父母也已经很知足了.我由于长期在外,很想念爸爸妈妈.想起过去,心里真的很辛酸,父母亲为了我们的成长真的付出了很多,然而他们现在又生活得怎么样呢?想起过去的一幕一幕,我心里很难受!我很希望做做子女的我们,踏踏实实地做好每一件事情,不让父母担忧,这是最基本的我们应当做的事情. 22 谈到这里我不由自主地想起一部电影《我的兄弟姐妹》,这是一部关于亲情的影片,暂且不管故事的真实性,主要考究它的内涵.主人公齐思甜和哥哥齐忆苦、妹妹奇妙、弟弟齐天生活在一个不富裕却充满温馨和爱的家。然而在一个暴风雪的夜晚，他们的母亲旧病复发，咳得吐血了。父亲背她去医院，却出了意外，他们俩都亡故了。次日，另一家人搬进了四个孩子的家。性格刚强的哥哥无法忍受这个新家庭的种种，无奈地带着弟弟妹妹离开了家。他们开始四处奔波，寻找落脚之处。当实在没有能力照顾弟弟妹妹的时候，他把妹妹齐思甜送给一对正要出国的夫妇；把弟弟送给他的舅妈一家；又把小妹妹带到一对老人家中请他们收养。他自己和弟弟妹妹们便各奔东西……20年后，齐忆苦在北京当上了出租车司机；齐思甜出国受到良好的教育，成了音乐家；齐天成为东北大学学生；齐妙却当上了舞厅小姐。在北京的音乐会上，思甜蓦然回首的瞬间，音乐霎时凝固了。他们四人拥抱在一起，泪水顺着另一支悠扬的乐曲落下，听众的掌声久久不息……终于，他们有了一次永久的重逢。

齐思甜的父亲是一个音乐教师，他们一家人都生活在音乐的天堂里，这也为后来思甜成为音乐家打好了基础。父亲说：“人生路上有许多困难的事情，只要有音乐在，你的灵魂便不再寂寞。”这位父亲是伟大的，他乐观开朗，以身作则。尽管他和蔼可亲，但同时又是一个严厉的父亲。有一回，齐忆苦偷邻居家的鸡蛋，是为了满足妹妹小小的心愿。而他却因此挨了父亲的鞭子，还罚他站在雪地里很久。在父亲被分配到别的地方边劳动边教音乐时，他对这“莫须有的罪名”并没有悲愤倒下，而是瞒着家人当搬运工挨家挨户送木材，还干各种各样的粗活。他也没有一丝怨言，还对孩子说：“我没事。”懂事的孩子们也拿起了工具，帮父亲干活。他哼着小调，阳光幸福地洒在他们脸上。

23 可见,这位父亲是多么伟大，他以他的行动告诉了孩子们音乐的重要性及如何面对生活的苦难。

那么，又是一种什么样的力量，使后来的四个孩子重逢，使他们欢聚，使他们接受心灵的洗礼？

毋庸置疑，是亲情。

寒冷的冬天，四个孩子依偎在车站。他们在为下一餐饭而担心着。“哥，我饿。”、“哥，我冷。”、“哥，我想回家……”弟妹们的话刺痛了哥哥。他说：“只要我还有一口气，就不让你们受委屈。”事实上他也这么做了。如果不是亲情，他又何必活得如此累呢？他又怎能忘记，那一晚，父母临走时对他的嘱咐：“你是哥哥，要照顾好弟弟妹妹。”

生活改变了许多人和事，也改变了他们。但是，亲情是始终不渝的。 最小的妹妹齐妙长大后竟成了舞厅小姐！她离开原来的家后，养父母去世得早，加上无人看管，就开始堕落下去了。她在20年后与齐思甜相遇时，大言不惭地对她说她满足于当前腐朽昏暗的生活方式。但是自那以后，她回忆起以前的一点一滴，又不免伤感和懊悔。她发现自己对不起所有爱她的人，她的良心受到了谴责。于是，亲情的归来使她的精神方面的巨人复活了！她的灵魂才得以解放。

亲情给人以新生，亲情又犹如一支镇心剂。

亲情是心中的太阳，照耀着我们；亲情是温柔的春风，抚摸着我们；亲情如绵绵的春雨，滋润着我们。

亲情是雪，晶莹剔透；亲情也可以是雷，惊天撼地。

亲情可以是灯，温暖柔和；亲情也可以是微弱的烛光，不亮却很辉煌。 不管怎么说，亲情一定是无价的宝藏。

24 没有了亲情，世界变得荒芜、凄凉；没有了亲情，生命则无法繁衍后代；没有了亲情，生活就单调枯燥；没有了亲情，人间也成了地狱。

亲情是沟通两代之间思想交流的桥梁，是一条连结两颗心的纽带。 “兄弟姐妹原是天上掉下的水花，谁也不认得谁。但落在地下后，结成一体，结成冰，化成水，就永远也分不开了。”

“临行密密封，意恐迟迟归”，是亲情。 “我在这头，母亲在那头”，也是亲情。

无价的亲情呵，愿我们在你的鼓舞下，驶向美好灿烂的明天。关于亲情的影片..我看这部影片时,心情很沉重,流泪了.我想,不论一个人的出身是多么卑微,只要我们能够记住亲情的鼓舞与期待,只要我们我们去刻苦努力,只要我们在心理上能够战胜自己,那么我们就是生活的强者!

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推荐第6篇：书面表达

书面表达

1．书面表达（本题20分）根据要求完成短文写作，请将作文写在答题卡指定的位置上。 假如你是一名叫李明（Li Ming）的中学生，看了上述故事后，你想表达自己的看法。 请你给栏目编辑写一封电子邮件，内容包括： 1.你对其中的哪个故事感兴趣？原因是什么？ ．．．．．．．2.你对这个故事所提及的现象的看法。 3.就该现象提出至少两条解决问题的建议。 作文要求：

1.不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名。

2.语句连贯，词数80个左右。作文开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数，也不必抄写在答题卡上。 Dear Editor,

I read the stories on BBC World Have Your Say today,

__________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ Your, Li Ming

2．书面表达(满分15分)

假如你叫李明，是一位高一新生，你的班主任(也是你的英语教师)要求你们在下午的班会课上用英语演讲的形式参与班长(monitor)竞选，请根据图片和文字提示，以“I believe I can” 为题写一篇演讲稿。 要求:

1.短文必须包括三个方面内容：我的优秀品质；我的能力；我将为大家做什么； 2.短文内容可适当发挥，提示词可选用； 3.短文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；

4..短文词数为80左右，开头、结尾部分已给出，不计入总词数。

I believe I can

Good aftemoon, ladies and gentlemen! My name is Li Ming

Thank you!

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从前，我们通讯不便捷，只能通过书信与千里之外的亲朋交流，富有浓浓的亲情。今天，

随着互联网的发展，智能手机（smart-phone）已被广泛使用。人们的交流变得非常的方便，可我们身边的“低头族(phubber)”随处可见，很多人都有同感：“距离近了，可亲情远了。”请根据图中所示，结合表格所提供的信息,以“Refuse to be phubbers”为题写一篇80词左右的短文。

要求：1.短文须包含所有信息，语句通顺、意思连贯,可适当发挥；2.题目与开头已给出，不计入总词数。

参考词汇：1.have effects on 2.concentrate on 3.face-to-face conversation 4.make good use of

Refuse to be phubbers

With the development of the Internet, smart-phones are widely used among people.Phubbers can be seen here and there.

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Refuse to be phubbers

With the development of the Internet, smart-phones are widely used among people.Phubbers can be seen here and there.

Some family members play with their smart –phones while eating with families instead of talking with them.It has effects on the relationship between them.Some people look at their smart-phones while walking even riding or driving.It may increase the danger of causing traffic accidents.Some children want to play with smart-phones before sleeping.It’s bad for their health and their study.

In fact, face-to-face conversations are much more conventient and better than chatting on line by phone.Mobile phones are helpful and neceary tools for modern life.But we should make good use of it to be “healthy” users rather than Phubbers.

【解析】 试题分析：本文要求按图表提示，以“Refuse to be phubbers”为题作文。短文重点是两个方面，一是现象与弊端：揭示现代人用手机的恶习及其产生的危害；二是观点与方式：告诉人们怎样正确的使用手机，利用好这个现代的通讯工具。短文主要用一般现在时态。第三人称或第一称形式。 写作亮点：短文首先结合现代人使用手机的现象，说明了人们使用手机给生活带来的危害，接着告诉

试卷第2页，总3页 人们怎样正确地使用好手机。条理分明，层次清楚。短文包含了提纲的所有信息，语句通顺，意思连贯。文中用了while doing， instead of, rather than等等结构，给短文增色不少。

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参考答案

1．

Dear Editor,

I read the stories on BBC World Have Your Say today.I am interested in Mike\'s story, because I had the same experience when I traveled in Guangzhou.I can\'t stand bad manners in public, either.In fact, I really get angry when people jump the queen and smoke in non-smoking areas.I think it\'s wrong to break the rules in public.In my opinion, we should know more about good manners.On the other hand, we had better stop people around us from being rude.If we can\'t stop them, we can always ask the police or someone like that for help.Yours, 【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇电子邮件。本题所给材料是是根据上文的故事表达自己的感受。写作前先结合要表达的事情确定句子的人称时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。

写作亮点：文章直接谈到作者对麦克的故事感兴趣。文中用到了一些好的句式，如：I can\'t stand bad manners in public, either.；On the other hand, we had better stop people around us from being rude.给文章增色不少。 考点：考查提纲作文。 2．

Good afternoon ladies and gentlemen!

My name is Li Ming! I\'m very glad to be a member of our cla.I want to be monitor for these reasons.

First, I’m hard-working and helpful.I work very hard at my study and do well in all subjects.I am kind and I would like to help you anytime.Second, I am active.I have a lot of hobbies such as playing basketball, singing and dancing.I believe I will guide our cla in the correct direction in study and other fields.I\'m sure we will have a wonderful time during the following three years.That’s all.Thank you! 【解析】

试题分析：本文要求写一篇演讲稿，要按照要求，从：我的优秀品质；我的能力；我将为大家做什么三个方面进行写作。用第一人称形式，我的品质和能力用一般现在时态，我将为大家做的用一般将来时态。要根据演讲稿的特点选择恰当的词语和句型结构，增加语言的感染力。

写作亮点：范文开头简单的自我介绍后直接点题：我要当班长；接着由first, second 等等列出自己想当班长的原因；后面用两个一般将来时的句子说明自己将会怎样当好班长。叙述清楚，结构明晰。文中的I believe I wi11„；I\'m sure we will„充分表达了作者的自信，彰显了作者个性，突出了短文主题，语言精炼，符合演讲稿的特点。 【考点定位】 考查提纲类作文。 3．

Refuse to be phubbers

With the development of the Internet, smart-phones are widely used among people.Phubbers can be seen here and there.Some family members play with their smart –phones while eating with families instead

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of talking with them.It has effects on the relationship between them.Some people look at their smart-phones while walking even riding or driving.It may increase the danger of causing traffic accidents.Some children want to play with smart-phones before sleeping.It’s bad for their health and their study.

In fact, face-to-face conversations are much more conventient and better than chatting on line by phone.Mobile phones are helpful and neceary tools for modern life.But we should make good use of it to be “healthy” users rather than Phubbers.【解析】

试题分析：本文要求按图表提示，以“Refuse to be phubbers”为题作文。短文重点是两个方面，一是现象与弊端：揭示现代人用手机的恶习及其产生的危害；二是观点与方式：告诉人们怎样正确的使用手机，利用好这个现代的通讯工具。短文主要用一般现在时态。第三人称或第一称形式。

写作亮点：短文首先结合现代人使用手机的现象，说明了人们使用手机给生活带来的危害，接着告诉人们怎样正确地使用好手机。条理分明，层次清楚。短文包含了提纲的所有信息，语句通顺，意思连贯。文中用了while doing， instead of, rather than等等结构，给短文增色不少。

【考点定位】图画及提纲类作文。

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推荐第7篇：书面表达

中考中的书面表达题，主要有“补全对话”、“看图填词”、“看图写话”、“看图作答”、“看图完成短文”、“看图完成句子”和“根据提示的内容，完成某项写作”等形式。这类题型的考试目的在于：通过书面形式测试考生口头会话和作简单书面表达的能力。下面作一简单介绍：

一、测试要点

一般说来，测试的主要内容都是以日常生活为背景，进行简单的会话或写作。例如：问候、问路、看病、打电话、购物、自我介绍等功能意念项目和简单的应用文，例如：便条、通知、短信等。一个题目写10个左右的句子，字数为80－100个左右。

二、日常训练与应试注意事项

1.平时要注意句型与对话的学习，注意听说训练，积极参与听说训练的教学活动，以达到会话相当熟练的程度。

2.在会话中，注意常在情景中使用的习惯用语、套语的归纳和应用，做到脱口而出，应对如流。

3.注意口语与书面语的区别及一些特殊的表达方法，做题时一定要瞻前顾后，既要看到前面的内容，又要看到后面的语句；既要符合习惯用法，又要注意表达的准确性。

4.要经常进行日常应用文和命题作文的学习与训练。

三、解题技巧

1.要注意看清题目的要求与提供的情景，需用哪些习惯用语，哪种时态，根据词数限制，应选用哪一种表达方式为最佳。

2.表达要正确，要注意英美人的习惯用语，切忌随心所欲，用中文去对照英文进行翻译。例如：A：How do you do？此题只能选择How do you do?”来回答，除此，无第二种选择。如果从语法和字数方面来考虑，那将会有“How old are you?”“What is your

name?”“Where are you from?”等多种与问句不符的答语。

3.注意在一些交际场合中，习惯使用的客套语。只要根据已知部分，就可推测出未知部分。例如：How are you?回答 可用“fine ” “I ’m fine.Thank you.”如果用“How do you do?”来回答 ，就大错特错了。

4.在写应用文类命题作文或对话时，应注意应用文的格式、人称、动词的时态等用法；写短文或对话时，要注意切题，不写没有把握的句子，切忌为使文章生动，在句中随意增加自己无把握的词，导致中文式英语而影响考试成绩。尽量用自己熟悉的句型和词汇来表达一个完整的意思就可以了。

四、举例分析

1.写短文。以Self Introduction为题，要求写出10个意思连贯、表述正确、无严重语法错误、语言流畅的句子，向新来的老师作自我介绍。第一句已给出：My name is Cheng Hui.分析：该题是要求考生向新来的老师作自我介绍。那么，该短文的写法可从如下三个自然段来写。第一段，向新老师介绍自己在学校学习、生活的情况；第二段向新老师介绍自己在家里与父母之间的关系及生活情况；第三段可以写自己与父母、同学和老师之间相处情况等。

2.写对话。以“A Talk About English Study”为题写一篇对话，要求所问所答必须与英语学习有关，问答表述完整、正确、无严重语法错误、语言流畅、提问不少于5项内容。分析：写对话一要采用问答的形式；二要掌握好对话的内容与中心思想；三要在落笔之前，心里有一个构思计划?即该对话要从哪几方面进行表述?。就该对话而言，可从5个方面的内容进行表达：一是谈对英语这一门学科了解得怎样；二是谈学习英语用了多长时间；三是谈是否在课后还练习讲英语；四是谈英语这门学科是否难学；最后可以说明自己为什么喜欢学习英语。

推荐第8篇：书面表达技巧

2010高考二轮复习英语教案

专题二十一 书面表达

【专题要点】书面表达的体裁、题材、情景具有多样性、实用性。近年来，书面表达取材比较广泛，内容较为丰富，题材多为日常生活和一般交往所涉及的内容。体裁包括记叙文、说明文、应用文和议论文，命题的方式多种多样，主要有文字提示、图画提示和图表提示三种。

【考纲要求】考试大纲对成人高考英语书面表达的要求是“要求考生根据所给情景，用英语写一篇100-150个单词左右的短文。情景包括目的，对象，时间，地点，内容等等，提供情景的形式有图画，图表，提纲等”；要求考生能： 1．准确使用语法和词汇；2．使用一定的句型、词汇，

清楚、连贯地表达自己的意思；英语课程标准中关于成人高考写作的要求为：1．能根据用文字及图表提供的信息写出短文或报告；2．能写出语意连贯且结构完整的短文，叙述事情或表达观点和态度；3．能在写作中做到文体规范、语句通顺。

【教法指引】综观近几年的成人高考英语发展势态：书面表达旨在训练学生对所学语言知识的实践应用，特别是测试学生的语言交际能力和语言知识的活用能力的必考题型，也是成人高考中重要且难度较大的题型，所占分值为25-30分，要在30分钟内写出80－100个词左右的短文。历年来，成人高考英语书面表达主要有以下特点：

一是文体的常用性，即其所涉及的文体有：1.议论文，以摆事实，讲道理的方式表述观点，事物，方法的原则，须具备论点，论据，论证三大要素；2.说明文，用说明作主要表达方式来说明某个事物的形状，性质，功能或形成原因，发生发展过程等；3.应用文，有书信，日记，口头同志，便条，广告，启示，请柬，贺卡，海报等形式，其中信的形式有包括求职信，感谢信，商务信函等；4.记叙文,以记人，叙事为主要内容，以叙述为主要表达方式的一种文体，包括介绍人物地生平事迹，记叙事情发展过程，说明前因后果等。

二是题材的熟悉性，既书面表达的取材主要涉及中学生所体验到的日常生活。

三是内容的控制性，它通过图画，表格，要点等来限定考生的写作内容，使得考生在写作时自由发挥的余地较小。

四是题型的稳定性，由上所述，近年来考试的命题形式主要以图画，表格形式出现，有时以提纲，要点形式出现。

五是要求的渐进性，既成人高考对书面表达的要求在逐年提高，由原来的要求写对，到以前的要求写好，再到现在的要求写出文采，使用高级词汇和复杂结构等，并对由此而产生的错 - 1 -

误采取了宽容的态度。

以30分作文为例，一般评分标准：

A．内容充实，主题突出，覆盖所有知识要点，应用了较多较高级的词汇和语法结构，有效得使用了语句间的连接成分，结构紧凑，给25-30分。

B．内容较充实，能表述作文要求，语法结构和词汇能满足内容要求，有一些错误但不影响全文理解，全文连贯，给21-25分。

C．内容基本充实，尚能表述作文要求，句子简单但能表达内容要求，给15-20分。

D．漏掉或未能写清主要内容，有些内容与主题无关，语言错误影响了读者对写作内容的理解，缺少连贯性，信息未能清楚地传达给读者，给10-15分。

E．明显遗漏主要内容，严重离题，不知所云，字迹潦草，给1-10分。

从高考评卷及平时测验题，学生在做书面表达题时，得分率较低，卷面普遍存在的缺点：1）文不对题（文体格式不规范）；2）离题太远（抓不到要点，该说的不说，不该说的说的太多）；

3）词不达意（有的甚至用汉语标注或留空）；4）病句太多（时态、语态、人称、数等语法）；

5）卷面不工整（字迹潦草、乱涂改、添插箭头满篇飞）。如何指导学生克服上述缺点，少犯错误，提高该题的得分率？因此教师在引导考生复习备考突破该题型时要注意如下几点：

一、遵循循序渐进原则

对书面表达题型的训练要从简单到复杂的顺序进行，可以从一些简单的看图作文-记叙文着手；可以从单句-复杂句着手；可以从单段-多段；从不分段到分段等着手对学生进行训练。

二、点拨技巧，事半功倍

分析要求和阅卷情况，在平时的训练中要让考生养成良好的做题习惯如：

1.养成审题的习惯

1）审题时要明确体裁，掌握格式

学生的书面表达往往存在不讲究逻辑、文体和格式的现象，所以很有必要让学生明确常见的几种文体和格式。就中学阶段，最常见的 文体有：应用文（书信、通知、日记、便条）、记叙文和说明文。近十年书面表达内容题材不外乎上述三种文体。若是记叙文，要弄清事件的时间、地点、人物、原因和结果；若是说明文，要了解说明的主旨以及说明的顺序；若是以图画形式提供情景，即看图作文，首先应看懂每幅图的意思，还要弄懂几幅图之间的关系。

2）抓住要点，一一对应。

能否找出覆盖主要内容所有要点是得高分的关键，评分标准一般分五个档次，要点越齐全，得高分 的可能性就越大；反之，若欠缺要点或描述与表达内容要点无关的，得分当然低。

一般要求找出5--6个要点，可先用汉语或用keywords列出，

2.养成谋篇布局，谨慎用词的习惯

1）谋篇布局是审题的结果，也是写好文章的关键。一篇优秀的文章都是层次分明，思路清晰，要求达到此标准，必须依据提示进行分段构思，合理布局。

2）选词造句，点石成金。

书面表达要求用100词左右写出包含5--6个要点的短文。从近几年高考英语参考答案看，一般都以8－10个句子组成一篇文章。若用较少于8句话来表达，则句子容易复杂冗长，容易失控；若用多于10句话来表述，则句子零乱与琐碎，文章缺乏整体感。且大多数用简单句，少数用并列句和复合句。

因此，在教学中首先应对简单句五种基本句型以及“there be存在结构”等进行强化训练，然后对并列句、复合句进行适当的训练，使学生获得了扎实的句子结构基础知识，从而从根本上为迅速提高书面表达能力打下了扎实的基础；在平时训练中提醒学生在做题时，要善于避生就熟，当遇到某一难以直接表达的要点时，不妨变通一下，进行“曲线”表达。

3.养成合理安排，联句成文的习惯

书面表达不仅仅是“句子堆积”,要注意文章的连贯性和逻辑性。如何使文章上下衔接自然、紧凑。用好各种连接词，对写出一篇有“英语味”的文章很重要。要求学生按照合理的顺序或按一定的写作线索选用适应的连接词，将句子连珠成串，使各句连成结构紧凑、层次分明、语义连贯的短文。因此，在引导考生复习备考时，教师可介绍一些常用连接成分。如下面表格中是写作中经常用到的一些连接词：

4.养成检查修改，卷面整洁的习惯

做书面表达时，力求用词准确。作文写完后应认真阅读，检查文章中的拼写和标点错误、语法错误、逻辑错误等；检查词数是否符合要求；检查内容要点是否全面，删繁就简，使表达更加精炼，措词更加恰当。定稿后应认真誊写，要求书写规范、正确、美观，并保持卷面整洁。从参加阅卷者都有这样的体会：要在比较短的时间里，阅读完一篇作文，当看到那些字迹潦草卷面不整洁的，心情就特别烦，评分可能比想象的要低；而看到那些书写规范、卷面整洁的，就倍感爽心悦目，有可能得到比较高的分数，这也是情理之中的事情。因此，在训练时，学生要养成书写工整、规范，卷面整洁的习惯，在做高考题时，才不致书写潦草、卷面不整洁，从而导致丢失本来不该丢的分。

推荐第9篇：自我介绍书面表达

Good afternoon, everyone! My name is Mary Smith.My first name is Mary.My last name is Smith.My birthday is January 2nd.My telephone number is 13565780924.My favorite food is hamburgers.I like apples best.My favourite subject is English.I have a big family.There are five people in my family.They are my grandparents, my parents and I.I love my family.

I have a good friend.His name is Alan.He eats lots of healthy food.He likes eggs and milk for breakfast.For lunch, he has fish and rice.He eats well.He plays sports every day.He likes science.He thinks it’s very interesting.Thank you!

推荐第10篇：书面表达环境保护

万能模板

环境保护

世界环境存在的问题：There are more and more···in the world.They are bad for our life.

分析出现问题的原因：I think they are caused by human beings.With the development of···more and more···are/is···At the same time，people always···They hardly···So···

解决措施：In order to···we must···

经典范文

你听说过某些濒临灭绝的动物吗？请以“Why should we protect wildlife animals？”为题，用英文写一篇短文，说明为什么要保护野生动物。词数为80左右。

提示：

1、为什么有些野生动物处于危险之中？

2、为什么保护野生动物很重要？

3、我们应该采取什么措施来保护野生动物？

参考词汇：

wildelife 野生的 endangered 濒临灭绝的 destroy破坏ivory象牙 take measures 采取措施

Why should we protect wildlife animals/?

elephants and pandas.When farmers cut down trees，the animals’ living places were destroyed.Elephants can no longer getanimals.

第11篇：书面表达基本技能

书面表达基本技能

常见礼仪文体类型

一、礼仪致辞/表情类：（10）：

1、开幕词

2、欢迎辞

3、贺词

4、闭幕词

5、酒会辞

6、剪彩辞

7、悼辞

8、欢送辞

9、答谢辞

10、告别辞

二、礼仪书信/表情类（2）：

11、感谢信

12、慰问信

三、讲演稿

开幕词

表情——表事——表意

开头：表情（问候、感谢）

主体：表事、表意

1、会议背景

2、工作回顾

3、会议说明（主题、目的、任务、意义、安排）

4、表意

结尾：表情（希望）

开幕词例文

各位参赛选手、各位来宾、同志们：

云南省烟草专卖局（公司）第三届烟叶分级职业技能竞赛今天开幕了。 （表事）本次竞赛为国家烟草专卖局批准的省级二类竞赛。为了举办好这次竞赛，国家烟草专卖局劳动人事司给予了高度重视和支持；国家局职业技能鉴定指导中心组织了本次竞赛理论考试命题，专门下发国烟职技鉴字2006）56号文选派了国家级裁判员担任本次竞赛的裁判工作；中国烟草总公司职工技术培训中心作为协办单位，为本次竞赛成立了专门机构，为竞赛决赛阶段的各项工作做了精心准备，并将提供热情周到服务。在此，我代表云南省烟草专卖局（公司）及本次竞赛组委会向国家烟草专卖局劳动人事司、国家局职业技能鉴定指导中心、中国烟草总公司职工技术培训中心表示衷心感谢！向参加开幕仪式的裁判长、各位来宾、参赛选手、领队和工作人员表示热烈欢迎和亲切慰问！（表情）

本次竞赛以“高技能、新技师”为主题，以加快培训和选拔企业急需的具备高水平烟叶分级技术的高技能人才为目标，以职业技能竞赛为载体，展示云南省烟草公司系统烟叶分级技能人才新风貌，并以此推动全省烟草公司系统高技能人才队伍的建设与发展。同时，也是为明年参加国家烟草专卖局举办的“第三届全国烟草行业烟叶分级职业技能竞赛” 选拔参赛优秀选手做准备。（会议说明：目的）

本次竞赛级分初赛和决赛两个阶段：初赛阶段，14个参赛单位已通过初赛选拔出80名优秀选手参加决赛；决赛阶段；从今天正式开始，将在郑州中国烟草总公司职工技术培训中心进行强化培训和竞赛。（会议说明：过程）

举办这次烟叶分级职业技能竞赛，是为做强做大云南烟草提供高技能人才保障的重要举措，是加快烟叶分级人才的培养步伐，提升烟叶分级人员的整体素质，不断满足各企业（单位）对烟叶分级人才需求的有效手段，是增强行业和企业的核心竞争力及自主创新能力的需要。 （会议说明：意义）

目前，云南烟草专卖局（公司）系统烟叶分级高技能人才的总量、结构、业务素质还不能适应行业持续稳定发展的需要，与全国烟叶大省的地位不相符合。尤其是作为主业把关人员的烟叶分级技术人员中存在着高素质、高技能人才匮乏、年龄结构和技能水平参差不齐等问题。全省烟草公司系统要想持续稳定健康发展、不断提升市场竞争力，培养造就一支高素质、高水平的烟叶分级职业技能队伍就显得犹为紧迫和重要，这次竞赛也为各企业（单位）锻炼队伍、检验水平、发现问题、找出差距、提高技能提供了一次极好机会。（会议说明：背景）

职业技能竞赛是锻炼和培养具有高水平、高技能人才队伍的有效方式之一。过去我们成功举办了两届云南省烟草专卖局（公司）烟叶分级职业技能竞赛，通过职业技能竞赛这个平台，更多的烟叶分级职工展示自己的才能，交流了实践经验，涌现出了一批全国烟草技术能手、省局技术能手；推动了云南省烟草专卖局（公司）烟草系统职工学技术、提素质、练好看家本领良好风气的形成，树立烟草系统职工新形象、努力维护“三个至上”的观念在全省烟草公司系统已深入人心。（会议说明：回顾1）

对这次烟叶分级职业技能竞赛，全省烟草公司系统各企业（单位）给予了高度重视，精心组织、积极准备、踊跃参加。参赛选手分别来自全省烟草公司系统12个州市公司和2个直属单位。许多单位在收购繁忙季节，克服人员紧张等因素，在第一阶段进行了内部选拔赛，选手们都非常珍惜本次竞赛难得的学习交流机会，带着单位的重托努力学习、刻苦钻研，业务技能水平有了新的提高。在竞赛组委会的精心组织下，竞赛各项准备工作进展顺利，今天下午，我们的80名选手将前往郑州，参加第二阶段的强化培训及决赛。（会议说明：回顾2）

在这里，我着重强调三点意见：（表意）

第一，本次职业技能竞赛过程要严格按照《国家有关竞赛规则》的规定进行，严格杜绝任何违规现象的发生，并自觉接受大家监督。（表意1）

第二，要尊重裁判、遵守纪律、服从裁决。每位参赛选手一踏进赛场，你们代表的是云南省烟草专卖局（公司）的形象，要以良好的心态和奋勇拼搏的精神风貌，赛出成绩，赛出水平，赛出风格，把云南省烟草公司系统烟叶分级技术人员的精湛技艺和良好的精神风貌展示出来，把优异的成绩和丰富的实践经验带回来并带回各企业（单位）去。 （表意2）

第三，希望竞赛组委会和全体工作人员认真贯彻《云南烟草专卖局（公司）第三届烟叶分级职业技能竞赛规则》和《守则》，坚持高标准、严要求，一丝不苟地把各项工作扎扎实实做好，恪守职业道德，始终坚持“公平、公正、公开”的原则，为本次竞赛搭建一个好平台、创造一个好环境；也希望通过此次职业技能竞赛的成功举办，在全省烟草公司系统深入掀起学习业务知识、钻研业务技能的新高潮，以提高业务技能为目标，以搞好本职工作为目的，为云南省烟草公司系统持续、健康、稳步发展做出更大贡献！ （表意3）

最后，预祝本次竞赛取得圆满成功！祝各位参赛选手取得优异成绩！（表情）

案例国家烟草专卖局副局长何泽华在中式卷烟大品牌发展高层论坛上的开幕词

尊敬的各位领导、各位嘉宾、女士们、先生们：（敬称 ）

大家上午好！ （问候 ）

“中式卷烟大品牌发展高层论坛”今天在红塔集团召开了。 （表事 ） 我谨代表大会组委会，向前来参加论坛的各位领导、各位嘉宾表示热烈的欢迎！ （表情 ）向支持、关心“高层论坛”的各界人士表示衷心的感谢！ （表情 ）

这次活动，是由国家烟草专卖局、中国烟草总公司和云南省委、省政府共同举办，云南省中烟工业公司和红塔集团承办。举办论坛的主旨在于：在十七大精神的指引下，全面贯彻落实科学发展观，认真总结中国烟草行业的改革发展成果以及“红塔山”等品牌的发展经验，鼓励企业进一步做大作强核心品牌，促进中国烟草行业总体竞争力的提升。通过总结经验、展示成果、深化认识，进一步明确中国烟草行业未来的改革方向和发展目标。（本次会议主题、任务介绍）

云南省委、省政府对此次活动高度重视，白恩培书记、秦光荣省长等领导下午将亲自出席，程映萱副省长将全程参加此次论坛。出席本次论坛的还有云南省改革和发展委员会、经济委员会、财政厅的领导，玉溪、楚雄、大理三市州的市州长以及新闻媒体的各位朋友，我谨代表国家烟草专卖局、中国烟草总公司向云南省委、省政府对中国烟草长期以来的关心、支持，对本次论坛的高度重视表示衷心的感谢！向前来参加论坛的各位领导、各位嘉宾表示热烈的欢迎！

（表情 ）

现在，我宣布：“中式卷烟大品牌发展高层论坛”正式开幕！ （表事 ）

本文思维模型：

一、开头：表情（问候、感谢）

二、主体：表事、表情

1、会议背景？（缺乏背景感、时代性、主流感、敏感性）

？（缺乏连贯性、趋势性）

3、本次会议主题、任务介绍

4、表情

三、结尾：表事（希望）

欢迎辞

表情——表事——表意

开头：表情（欢迎、问候）

主体：表事

1、地区、城市或单位基本情况介绍

2、会议主题背景介绍

3、本单位相关工作情况介绍

结尾：表意（希望）

对会议的希望、祝愿

欢迎辞

尊敬的克明副局长，国家烟草专卖局的各位司局长，各位代表、同志们：

在我们全省上下掀起学习贯彻十七大精神热潮、奋力推进四川经济社会又好又快发展的关键时刻（背景），全国烟草行业质量体系建设研讨交流会在山川秀美的都江堰隆重召开（表事） ，这是中国烟草全面提升企业管理水平、提高整体竞争实力的一件盛事，也是推动四川烟草行业创新管理、实现发展新跨越的难得机遇（意义） 。在此，我谨代表中共四川省委、省政府向会议的召开表示热烈的祝贺！向参加会议的各位领导、各位代表表示热烈的欢迎！（表情）

四川，地处中国西南腹地，长江上游。自古就有天府之国的美誉，这里，沃野千里、江河纵横，历史悠久，钟灵毓秀。这里，风光无限，旅游资源得天独厚，“童话世界”九寨沟、“人间瑶池”黄龙、“佛教圣地”峨眉山-乐山大佛、千年水利工程都江堰、古蜀文化遗迹三星堆等等，驰名中外，美不胜收。这里，人杰地灵，巴蜀文化璀璨夺目。唐代诗人李白曾从这里杖剑远行，杜甫曾在此地望月怀乡；陈子昂、白居易、苏东坡、郭沫若等一代名人，在这里留下了千古佳句。这里，物产丰富，是全国的农产品供应大省，国家最大的粮、油、猪生产基地之一，川菜、川酒、川茶在全国乃至全世界享有盛誉。这里城市清新，人民纯朴，社会充满生机和活力。（地区基本情况介绍：历史文化）

在四川这片热土上，我们紧紧抓住国家西部大开发的机遇，大力实施跨越式发展战略，着力培育电子信息、水电、机械冶金、医药化工、饮料食品、旅游6大支柱产业，经济社会发展突飞猛进，综合经济实力不断增强，今年，全省国民生产总值可望突破万亿大关，将再次抒写四川历史上最为精彩的篇章。当前，四川正坚定不移地以十七大精神统揽全省工作，深入贯彻落实科学发展观，紧紧围绕省第九次党代会确立的“坚持科学发展，构建和谐四川”的主题，认真落实“奔富裕、求发展、促和谐、树新风”四项任务，努力推进“四个跨越”，由传统农业向现代农业跨越，由工业大省向工业强省跨越，由文化大省向文化强省跨越，由旅游资源大省向旅游资源强省跨越，加快富民强省全面小康的进程。 （地区基本情况介绍：当代省情）

我们不会忘记，今年8月中旬姜成康局长来川视察时做了一系列讲话和指示，明确提出把

四川烟叶打造成全国重要的战略性优质烟叶生产基地，把“娇子”培育成全国性重点骨干品牌，为我省“两烟”发展注入了强大动力。（表情1）

我们不会忘记，最近克明副局长在百忙之中两次来川，上月中旬，出席了百万箱娇子工程启动仪式，对我们今后的工作提出了希望和要求，今天又现场指导企业管理工作，让我们倍受鼓舞，更加坚定了建设“两烟强省”的信心和决心。 （表情2）

我们不会忘记，在建设全国优质烟叶基地的进程中，在做大做强“娇子”品牌的战略中，各省市烟草行业对四川烟草给予了全力支持和大力帮助。 （表情3）

借此机会，我再次代表四川省委、省政府，向长期支持、关心四川烟草发展的国家烟草专卖局领导和各省市烟草行业表示最衷心的感谢！ （表情4

万里征程，催人奋进。烟草行业是我省重要的财政支柱。省委、省政府将坚定不移地支持烟草工作，支持省烟草专卖局（公司）和川渝公司的改革与发展，进一步推动四川“两烟强省” 战略的实现。希望四川烟草专卖局（公司）和川渝公司以这次质量体系建设研讨交流会为契机，再接再厉，再鼓干劲，强化管理，提升水平，不断增强四川烟草总体竞争实力。同时，恳请国家烟草专卖局一如既往地关心、支持四川烟草的改革发展，请各省市烟草行业继续支持帮助四川“两烟”做大做强，推动四川烟草实现新的跨越。 （表意1）

最后，祝本次会议取得圆满成功！祝愿烟草行业实现新的发展，再创新的辉煌！祝各位领导、各位来宾在川期间生活愉快、身体健康、万事如意！ （表意2）

谢谢大家！ （表情）

致 辞

表情——表事——表意

开头：表情（祝贺、感谢）

主体：表事

1、目的

2、意义

3、前景

结尾：表意、表情（希望）

案例：

中国烟草博士论坛主持人赵百东先生的致辞

根据2002年广州中国烟草博士论坛的倡议以及国家烟草专卖局副局长、中国烟草学会理事长潘必兴同志的指示精神，在各方面的积极支持下，经过半年的精心筹备，中国烟草网上博士论坛终于开通了。我作为中国烟草博士生的一员和代表，对此表示热烈的祝贺！（表情）

“论坛”将成为国内外烟草科技人员之间加强了解、增进友谊和扩大合作的纽带，办好“论坛”，将给广大烟草行业具有博士学位和正在攻读博士学位的科技人员，提供为一个更加自由、灵活和便利地进行思想交流、学术讨论和展示才华的舞台。 （表事1：意义）

经济全球化、控制烟草运动、深化改革烟草体制、卷烟产品降焦减害、研发中式卷烟产品、推进信息化步伐、提高中国烟草总体竞争实力等重大课题给我们带来了新的发展机遇与挑战。我们要以“三个代表”重要思想为指导，从烟草行业深化改革与平稳发展的大局出发，围绕烟草发展的重大课题，提倡“百花齐放，百家争鸣”的方针，以“论坛”为阵地，积极提出问题、认真思考问题，进行学术和理论的创新。通过“论坛”反映我们的心声、要求、希望、意见、想法、建议，让博士们活跃的思想在行业内发挥先导前瞻作用，为烟草行业的长远发展提供思想支持与理论基础，为中国烟草走向世界作出我们的贡献！ （表事2：目的）

中国烟草行业在党中央、国务院的领导下，取得了举世瞩目的成就。随着人类已经迈入了新的世纪和新的千年，烟草行业面临深刻变化，我们处在中国烟草发展的关键时期，这是呼唤人才的时代，也是烟草英才搏击风浪、施展才华的时代。可喜的是已经有了70多位博士生加盟中国烟草事业。这是烟草行业的希望与未来，但是创造美好的未来还需要我们全体的共；同努力与开拓创新。（表事3：前景）

我受中国烟草学会的委托，将尽全力为办好论坛奉献自己的绵薄之力。让我们携起手来，为烟草行业持续、平稳、健康发展，为开创烟草科技美好的明天而积极努力。 （表意）祝愿“中国烟草博士论坛”不断发展壮大！ （表情）

竞岗讲演辞

大家好！

我叫**，今年33岁，大专文化，中共党员，助理工艺师。87年技校毕业分配进厂，现为一车间制丝班班长。

进厂十八年来，我一直与烟叶、烟丝打交道，长期在制丝车间工作。常烟不断壮大，我也由当初的懵懂少年成长为一名成熟的基层管理骨干。工作中，我始终立足本职工作，大胆创新，特别是在联合工房工作期间，积极探索生产组织、设备保养、现场管理的最优管理模式，积极实施“5S现场管理法”，创造了整洁有序的生产环境，较好的向外界展示了联合工房的窗口形象。三年来，制丝线在我的带领下，烟叶单耗逐年下降，现为36.23kg，达到行业先

进水平，为企业，创造了可观的经济效益。由于工作成绩突出，今年我所管理的制丝班被车间推荐为“特殊贡献集体”侯选单位。 今天，我竞争的岗位是物资采购处业务员，坦然接受检验，自认为有三个方面的优势：

首先是经历与能力优势。我认为自己具备担当此任所必须的经历和能力。我一直在制丝车间，从挡车工干起、做过修理工、设备管理员，特别是在班长和调度的工作岗位上工作后，进一步加深并强化了我对制丝工艺的熟悉程度，熟悉烟叶的物理特性与管理使用，对产地、等级的鉴定也有一定的了解，有助于适应新岗位的需要。

此外本人从事制丝生产与管理多年，积累了丰富的与人打交道的经验，培养了我吃苦耐劳的优良品质，雷厉风行的工作作风，具有较强的分析问题、解决问题的能力，具有很好的协调与管理能力。 其次是年龄优势：我今年33岁，精力充沛、喜爱忙忙碌碌的工作，思想活跃，接受新事物较快，工作中能发挥主观能动性，让我能够为新岗位工作的开展尽全心、出全力。

第三、我具有烟叶业务员所要求的道德品质。在工作中，我始终坚持诚实、正派的做人宗旨，能够与人团结共事。尊重人、关心人，乐于成为大家的知心朋友，能较好的把握情与理的关系，上下级之间的关系，让我在与同事、朋友、领导相处中形成了合力，与各方面的关系协调处理，和睦融洽。

通过竞争如果我能就任业务员这个岗位，我将力争作到如下几点：

1、努力学习，不断进取、充实，勤钻业务，力争快速进入业务角色，为企业严把原料关。

2、坚持党性原则，提高党性觉悟，不断加强自身价值观与世界观的修养。

3、尊敬领导，团结同事，营造良好的工作氛围。

各位领导、各位评委，我深知原料是企业发展的第一要务，烟叶业务员的责任更大。如能成功，我定会尽全力作到最好。最后，在新的一年到来之际，祝在座的各位：“新年快乐，工作愉快！”

谢谢大家！

第12篇：高考书面表达

书面表达（2011辽宁）

假定你是李华，将于今年七月从新星外语学院毕业，你从报纸上得知BB公司要招聘一名中文秘书，你很感兴趣。请给该公司写一封求职信，包括下列要点：

1.年龄；

2.学习情况及英语水平；

3.兴趣和特长；

4.性格特点.

注意：1.词数120左右；

2.可适当增加细节，使行文连贯

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am Li Hua—17 years old,and I ’m a confident and outgoing boy.I’ll graduate from XinXing English School in July.I happened to get the information from the newspaper that you are looking for an English secretary.I’m much too interested in it,so I’d like to apply for the job.

When it comes to my study,I’d like to say that I’m very hard-working and I achieve good results in my study.It has been twelve years since I began learning English and I have had a primary command of the communication and hand-writing of English.What’s more ,I enjoy reading novels and history books ,in addition,my favourite sports is basketball.

Last but not the least,I can most probably meet your demand.I’ll appreciate it if you give me an opportunity to make a contribution to the BB.Sincerely yours,

Li Hua

文章注意事项：

1.17-year-old 不能用作定语修饰Li Hua，

2.I’ll表示一种客观事实而I will多表主观意愿

3.Begin to do表示即将开始而begin doing多用于陈述过去发生的事

4.Enjoy表示做某件事的时候，喜欢享受，也就是边做边喜欢，而like只表示喜欢，没有去做的含义

5.History book直接名词修饰名词,表示直观属性

6.在文章中尽量不要用I think，需用时应该用It’s up to me(如果让我说，做决定的话),In my mind;In my opinion;I’d like to convey my view/point/idea/feeling that....;personally I think来替换

积累句型：

When it comes to....(I would like to say....)

I can most probably meet your demand(我应该比较符合你的要求)

书面表达（2011浙江）

假设你是高中生李越，有感于校园中存在的随意涂写（to scribble）和乱丢垃圾（to litter)的行为，请用英语给校长写一封100—120个词的心。信中应包括以下内容：

1.说明写作目的

2.对这些行为提出批评

3.提出建议

注意：信的开头、落款及信的第一句话已给出

June 8,2011

Dear Mr.headmaster

I feel it a great honour to write to you!The purpose of my writing is simple but the iue is significant I think.

These days,I noticed that some students in the school litter the ground with used paper or scribble on walls at random.After thinking about it for a long a long time.I decide to reflect to you.As far as I’m concerned,such behaviours are very rude manners and have a bad effect on the environment of the campus.

In consequence,It’s high time that we took measures to prevent these phenomena from occuring again.What do you think?For one thing,you are expected to enact severe rules to prohibit littering and scribbling.Meanwhile,publishing the students who have the similar behaviours is also neceary.For another,you may as well call on us to pick up the rubbish on the ground.

How I wish you could take my advice into consideration!I’m really convinced that with the efforts of every body,our school will grow better.Yours faithfully,

LiYue

文章注意事项：

1.第一段最后一句I think 不放在句中要放在句尾，而在疑问句中I think常放在句中

2.没有In recent days要用These days替换

3.Notice指无意中地观察到，而observe多指专门观察（有时用于天文观察、显微观察等）

4.Wall可数the wall表示特指一面墙walls表示泛指

5.一定要注意and连接的两个并列结构或句子，例如连接两句话若同意主语一句用be动词一句用实意动词则and后加出主语，若都是be动词或都是实意动词则省略主语

6.注意主语，一定要看清，若上文没有提到或指代不明容易引起歧义的情况下要补出实实在在的主语，比如such behavious就不能用they来替换

7.Happen和occur

若事件用发生（happen）：accident,incident等

若现象用出现（occur）：phenomenon等

8.you should 如果想表达地更委婉用you are expected to do或you are supposed to do

9.I believe一般换成I’m really convinced that

10.I do wish语气生硬，换成How I wish that....较委婉

11.Grow 比be更加生动形象具体，还含有变的过程

积累词汇、短语、句型：

Reflect反应

For one thing....for another....

May as well不妨...做好

You are expected to do

You are supposed to do你应该...

I’m really convinced that我相信

How I wish that....

With the effort

书面表达（2013-2014全市统考）

据最新统计，目前中国有2/3的城市缺水，大约3亿人喝不上健康洁净的水。你校学生会计划在高二年级开展“节约用水，从我做起”的英语演讲比赛。假如你叫刘畅，请你撰写一篇演讲稿，主题为“Save water,save ourselves”内容主要包括：

1.目前问题

2.提出办法（在家中刷牙，洗手时关闭水龙头：不要使用干净水冲厕所：提醒父母检查是否水管漏水：在学校不要扔掉未喝完的瓶装水等）

3.发出呼吁

注意：

1.信的开头和结尾已经给出，但不计入总词数

2.可根据内容要点适当发挥，但不要逐条翻译

3.词数120左右：参考词汇：瓶装水bottled water：冲洗厕所flush toilet：

I’m LiuChang from Grade 2.The topic of my speech is“Save water,save ourselves”.

As is known for us all,with the development of society,the iue of lacking water is becoming serious day by day.Believe it or not,nearly seventy percent of the cities in China are lacking in water resources and around thirty hundred million people are not able to drink healthful and fresh water.

Consequently,something must be done to solve the problem,for example,taking off the tap when you are washing your hands and brushing your teeth,not using clean water to flush toilets,reminding your parents of checking whether the water pipe is normal.Last but not the least,don’t throw the bottled water away until you have finished drinking the water.

To sum up,only if all of us make contributions to saving water can we eventually solve the water problem.

Thank you for your listening.

第13篇：书面表达感谢信

感 谢 信 dear______, i am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for _________ (感谢的原因).if it had not been for your aistance in ___________ (对方给你的具体帮助), i fear that i would have been_________(没有对方帮助时的后果). every one agrees that it was you who______________(给出细节).again, i would like to expre my warm thanks to you! please accept my gratitude.yours sincerely 你的姓名

extend [?kstend] vt.延伸；扩大；推广；伸出；给予；使竭尽全力；对„估价 vi.延伸；扩大；伸展；使疏开

gratitude [gr?t?tju?d] n.感谢（的心情）；感激 aistance [?s?st(?)ns] n.援助，帮助；辅助设备

感谢信

1）感谢信的写法

人们在交往中常需要相互致谢，收到别人赠送的礼物，得到别人的帮助、受到别人的慰问，都应该表示感谢。感谢信是人们常用的一种感谢方式。

感谢信最主要的特点是真诚。缺乏真挚的感情答谢他人，收信人将对你的谢意产生怀疑，感谢的目的也就失去了。因此，写感谢信首先得真心诚意。

感谢信另一个特点是具体。写感谢信切忌泛泛而谈，而应着重于具体的感谢事由。 其次一个特点是及时。收到别人礼物、得到别人帮助，应及时写信予以答谢。否则，人家会对你的谢意大打折扣。

收到他人赠送的礼物应当及时写封感谢信，感谢信除了应写得真诚、具体、及时外，还应当特别提及所收礼物的具体内容，否则，泛泛而谈，使人觉得你不够真诚。为此，当你写感谢信时，应这样写：“thank you for your beautiful roses.”(谢谢您送的美丽的玫瑰花。)；而不要笼统地写上“thank you for your beautiful gift.”(谢谢您送给我的漂亮礼物。)，这样，使人觉得你既礼貌，又诚心，从而真正达到交往的目的。下面我们来看看具体的范例。

范例1 dear laura, i was truly enraptured beyond expreion to receive your flowers which turned our living room into a garden.how considerate and wonderful of you to remember my birthday.you just couldnt have selected anything i had have liked more! you have a positive genius for selecting the right gift! the four years i spent with you at the college have been the pleasa ntest period in my life.i will cherish this memory forever.how nice it would be to see you again. you have been more than kind, and i wont ever forget it.my love and deepest gratitude, now and always! sincerely yours, jane 范例2 dear dan and laura, jim and i want to thank you for the beautiful salad bowl set.we are looking forward to getting lots of use out of your thoughtful and practical wedding gift. thanks again for the lovely gift. fondly, minnie 范例3 dear mrs.gorden, id like you to know how much the week at your lovely house meant to me.i not only enjoyed myself immensely, but also i felt relaxed a nd refreshed as i havent felt for months. please give my love to helen.it was so nice being with her again just like our old days together at school. many thanks to you and mr.gordon for asking me. sincerely yours， jean brown 2）感谢信模板 date：_________ dear____, ①i am now writing to expre my sincere thanks for____ .②id like you to know how much your _____ meant to me.③you have a positive genius for ______.④i not only enjoyed_____ , but also___.⑤i shall ever remember _____ as one of the most _____ in my life.⑥i _____.⑦i hope to have the opportunity of reciprocating.⑧ would you kindly let me know _____.⑨i will feel very honored and pleased if you have time to _____.⑩ how nice it would be to see you again and i am looking forwards to seeing you next time! i repeat my thanks again for your_____.please give my kind regards to your_____ . yours truly, signature 信息提示

信件启首

①直接表达谢意

②表达出自己非常珍惜对方的付出/礼物 ③对对方一定的赞美

④ 对方的情意对自己的影响

⑤介绍自己的近况

⑥表达出自己希望有回报的机会 ⑦ 询问对方是否有时间

⑧ 表达自己回报的心情

⑨ 提出希望下次见面的愿望

⑩再次表达感谢

最后表达真挚的祝福

信件结尾与签名篇2：高考英语感谢信汇总

感谢信

1.表达感激之情，简单陈述写这封感谢信的原因；2.详细说明要感谢的事由，措词更加具体真诚。再 次表示真诚的感谢； 3.向对方表达自己真诚的祝福，再次道谢。有时可向对方发出邀请。 感谢信模板 1 dear ________，

① i am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for ________(感谢的原因)．

② if it had not been for/had it not been for/ without your aistance in ________(对方给你的具体帮助)， i would (not) have been ________(没有对方帮助的后果)． ③ everyone agrees that it was you who ________ (给出细节)． ④ again, i would like to expre my warm thanks to you! ⑤ please accept my gratitude. yours sincerely, li ming 感谢信模板 2 dear _____________ , ① i am now writing these few lines to expre my sincere thanks for _____________(感谢事由)。② id like you to know how much your meant to me.③ you have a positive genius for_____________(对收信人某一方面的赞美).④ i not only enjoyed _____________, but also_____________.⑤ i shall ever remember _____________as one of the most _____________in my life. ⑥ i hope to have the opportunity of reciprocating(报答).⑦ i will feel very honored and pleased if you _____________ (表达自己回报的心愿)。⑧ i am looking forward to seeing you next time! ⑨ i repeat my thanks for your_____. ⑩ please give my kind regards to your________. yours sincerely li ming 1（2010年浙江省衢州市） 假设你是某中学高三某班学生李华，高二多年来，经历很多次成功与失败的你，觉得自己似乎一下子成熟了许多，有一种真的长大了的感觉，面对紧张的学习，一次次的考试及今后的打算。。。，你有太多的话想对关爱你的父母说。请以书信形式和爸爸妈妈谈谈。 参考词汇 鼓励encourage /encouragement 对。。。感激be grateful to sb.dear mum and dad how are you doing? 参考范文

dear mum and dad how are you doing? how time flies。i am now a senior three student ,enjoying many succees as well as going through a number of failures,which shows that i have really grown up.whenever i am thinking of these,i can’t help feeling grateful to you.it is you who first give me encouragement when i meet with difficulties,especially when i am not getting along well with my my studies.indeed,your inspiration seems to be a lamp,which offers me light of hope,courage and confidence.and more importantly,you are always teaching me to be good to others,and try to contribute to our society. yours sincerely, 2假设你叫王华，家住外地，暑假期间来北京游玩，住在朋友李海家里。李海为你安排了一周愉快的假期生活，还请假带你出去到许多地方玩。李海的母亲做了美味可口的饭

菜款待你。假期期满你回家后写信给李海表示感谢，并请他有机会到你处游玩。

请用英语写一封100词左右的感谢信。 li hua dear li hai, yours, wang hua 3假如你是一名失学儿童，名叫李华，你有幸得到在中国工作的mr.brown的资助，可以重返校园。你给mr.brown写了一封信，内容如下： ★ 收到钱和书后能重返校园，非常感激；

★ 在老师的帮助下，学习有了很大的进步，受到老师的表扬和鼓励； ★ 决心更加努力学习，取得更大的进步；

★ 盼望见到mr.brown，希望他寄来一张照片。

注意：1.书信应包括以上所有要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；2.词数：100左右

dear mr.brown， i am writing to expre my deepest gratitude for the money and books you sent me.i could not have returned to school without your help.thank you so much. i have been working hard since i went back to school.i have made great progre in my studies with the help of my teachers.they often praise me and encourage me.but for your help, i might have left school and couldn’t have got such a good education.i have made up my mind to study harder and make greater progre. how are you getting on with your life and work? i would like to meet you in person, but i have no opportunity to do so.would you please send me a photo of yourself? thank you again for your generous help and best wishes! yours sincerely, li hua 假设你是李华上周参观伦敦时，你父亲的朋友rogers,把你照顾的很好，写一封信给 rogers先生，表达你的感激之情，字数100词左右，不得出现真实姓名与地址。 dear mr.rogers, it is my great pleasure to show my hearty thanks to you for your hospitality and courtesy to me during my stay in london. originally i only wanted to call on you and gave my father’s regards to you, as it had been three years since you and he last saw each other.but you insisted that i stay in your house during my visit in london and took good care of my life as if i were a family member of you instead of the daughter of one of your friends.you really added greatly to my convenience and pleasure of the whole trip. thank you again for your kindne and i hope that i will have the opportunity to return your charming hospitality. yours faithfully, li hua篇3：2014北京书面表达(应用文) 书面表达归类整理

书信类文体：包括求职信、祝贺信、道歉信、询问信、推荐信、感谢信、邀请信、辞职信等多种应用文。每个类别都有相对固定的语言模式，都有固定词语要求。

（一）感谢类

1、假如你叫李平，现在给住在北京的green先生写一封感谢信，green先生曾经是你校的外教，曾花了很多时间辅导你英语口语，使你在全市英语口语竞赛中获得冠军。你对此非常感激。这次听说green夫妇要回到你校访问。你很高兴 dear mr．green, how is your stay in beijing? yours sincerely, li ping

2、假设你是李华，因为英语成绩突出，已经被北京大学提前录取。请用英语给你的高三英语老师mr.zhang写封信。

内容包括： 1.好消息； 2 .感恩， 因为„..;3.你在北大的学习计划或对未来的打算； 4.对老师的关心和祝愿„ dear mr.wang, we haven?t seen each other for ages.how is everything going with you? i am writing to tell you the good news that i have already been admitted into beijing university in advance.actually speaking, you are the very person i should first say thanks to.it is you who helped develop my interest in english.without your help, i would not be good at english.beijing university is a place which i have been longing for.i am sure i will learn a lot there.besides my major, i will take part in all kinds of activities, which will surely do good to my future career. best wishes!

3、假设你叫李华，你在朋友王林家度过一周假期，昨天（2013年11月21日星期三）刚刚返校。现在给你的朋友王林写封感谢信，内容包括：

感谢王林为你安排一周愉快的假期；

简单回忆假期中的愉快生活，感谢王林请假带你游玩了许多地方；

认为王林的母亲是一位非常出色的厨师，美味可口的饭菜使你体重增加了5磅

再次感谢，并希望保持联系。欢迎他有机会来你校游玩。 i?m writing to expre my thanks to you for the wonderful vacation.i spent with you and your family. surely i ?ve spent a happy vacation during which you taught me how to swim, boat ,and fish .i really appreciate your taking time off work to take me around and show me so many places.your mother is a wonderful cook who can cook delicious food and i think i must have gained 5 pounds just a week i spent with you . i hop you ?ll be able to visit our school some time.

（二）求职信、招聘信

假如你是校报负责人，急需在学校内聘一位同学任英文版的编辑，请你用英文以“an english editor wanted”为题，按照以下要点写一则120-150字的招聘启事。 1.描述主要的工作内容。 2.希望该同学应满足的条件与要求。 3.感兴趣的同学请在本周内与学生会（students’ union）联系。 an english editor wanted our school newspaper is looking for an editor for its english edition.the job mainly includes two parts: one is to choose proper english articles from other newspapers, magazines or the internet for us students.the other is to pick out articles from students in our school and edit them for use. we hope that he/she could meet the following requirements.first, he/she is willing to devote some of the those who are interested in the job, please get in touch with the students’ union this week. students’ union

2、假设你是李雷，是北京一中的一名学生, 想要参加北京大厦的招聘工作，请你根据下列内容给公司经理写一份申请。

1.1991年5月1日生于北京；2.今年7月高中毕业，学习英语6年； 3.对英语感兴趣，尤其擅长口语和写作4.熟练掌握电脑操作技术，会编程，打字每分钟100。

注意：1.词数：100字左右；2.可适当加入细节，以使行文连贯； 3.信的开头和结尾已为你写好（不计入总词数）。4.参考词汇：编程make programs dear manager, i am looking forward to your reply. yours sincerely, li lei 假设你是李华，你的美国笔友peter曾表示希望来中国教书。你校现需招聘外教，请给他写封信，告知招聘信息。内容主要包括：

教授课程：英语口语、英语写作、今日美国、今日英国等

授课对象：高中生（至少三年英语基础） 工作量：——每周12学时，任选三门课

——担任学生英语俱乐部或英语校报顾问（advisor）

注意：词数100左右；可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； dear peter, i remember you told me you were interested in teaching in china.our school now is looking for a please let me know if you are interested and if you have any other questions.i’d be more than happy to help. best wishes. li hua

（三）道歉信

道歉信是指因过失或疏忽做错了事，给别人带来了麻烦或损失，发觉后要立即写信给对方赔礼道歉时写的信件。道歉是一种礼貌，道歉信要写得坦率，诚恳。

道歉信通常包括三部分内容：

1、表示歉意，道歉的原由；

2、出现差错的原因，提出弥补措施；

3、

请求原谅。语言要诚挚，解释的理由要真实。好的道歉信不仅会取得对方的谅解，还会增进彼此的感情。 写作三步曲：表示歉意→说明具体原因、提出补救办法→再次致歉，希望得到理解。

注意：理由要尽量合理，违反生活常识将导致扣分；尽量提供一个合适的补救办法，使行文更加顺畅。 道歉信中开头段常用句式和套话 i am writing this letter to expre my regret? i am writing to apologize for ? i would like to give you my apology for? i am very sorry to say that ? i must apologize about (not) doing sth? please accept my sincerely apology for? i am writing to say sorry for? i am terribly sorry, but? 道歉信中结尾段常用句式和套句 once again, i am sorry for any inconvenience caused. please allow me to say sorry again. hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation. i sincerely hope that you will be able to think in my position and accept my apologies. i want to let you know how regretful i am feeling now. i am sorry that i can’t? and trust that you will be able to understand. 书信作文优秀模板——道歉信 dear ______, ①i am truly sorry that ______（道歉的原因）. ②the reason is that ______（介绍原因）.③once again, i am sorry for any inconvenience caused.④hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation. 例文 假设你是新华中学的学生李华，你和在上海上学的英国朋友tom约好下周末去北京旅游，但你因故不能赴约。请根据以下要点用英语给他写一封电子邮件： 1.表示歉意；2.解释原因；3.另约时间。注意：1.词数120~150； how are you going? we made a plan that we would travel in beijing together next week.while, i should apologize to you because i cannot go there on time for the reasons as follows. first, i cannot deny that it can help us broaden our horizon and deepen our mind when we travel in beijing.however, the government encourages us students to go to shanghai due to the fact that the expo is being held in shanghai now.as the saying goes, ’strike while the iron is hot’.after finish my college entrance examination, i am eager to learn something about study from the expo to prepare for my education in college.in addition, i have been busy with the preparation of the college entrance examination for about half a year and got tired.i need some time to relax instead of traveling. for the reasons that i mentioned above, i want to show my apology again.and would you please reschedule your time? shall we travel in beijing after two weeks? i am looking forward to a favorable reply at your earliest convenience. yours, li hua 范文2：

directions: you were unable to attend mr.smiths examination on international busine english writing because you got sick that morning.write a letter to expre the reasons for not being able to attend it and apologize. write the letter with no le than 100 words.do not sign your own name at end of the letter.use wang hua instead.do not write the addre. dear mr.smith, i am indeed very sorry that i mied the examination on international busine english writing you gave last friday.i feel awful about it and want you to know what happened that day. i suddenly fell sick early that morning and my parents had to send me to the hospital.please find enclosed a copy of the medical bill. sincerely yours, wang hua dear susan: we’re planning supper at six; that will give us a nice long evening to talk.if i don’t hear from you before then, i’ll be expecting you on the [twelfth]! affectionately yours, li ming an invitation for a reception dear mr.smith: it would give [me/us] great pleasure to have your presence at a reception in honor of the chinese delegation.the reception will be held in the [the city hall], on [tuesday, october the fourth].cocktails will be served promptly at [six] to be followed b dinner at [eight]. [i/we] sincerely hope you can attend.let [me/us] know. sincerely yours， li ming

（五）投诉信 假设你是卜曼宜，你购买了一部某外国公司生产的手机，因有质量问题，要求该公司更换。请根据下列要点，用英文写一封电子邮件。

要点：1.问题：手机不响铃，不能发短信；该产品已售完，无法更换； 型号新，无配件，无法维修。2.要求：公司应尽快予以更换。

注意：1.词数为100左右；2.参考词汇：配件—— spare part; dear sir， i am writing to you for the mobile phone of dephone-s250 i bought on 20th apr.2008 at tele mall in wuhan, p.r.china.ten days after that, it didn?t ring and send short meages.then i took it to the seller, but was told that the model had been sold out and i had to wait at least three months for a new one.later i went to the repairman.he said since it was a new model in china, it was impoible to fix it without the right spare parts.i was so desperate on hearing that.how can i wait that long? therefore, i require that you send me a new one of the same model within a month. thank you for your consideration. sincerely yours, bu manyi 2\\假如你叫李华，上周日在green supermarket 超市里买了一支“no-spot”面霜，你使用以后发现该产

品并没有广告中所宣传的功效。请根据以下要点向超市经理写一封投诉信，希望能解决此事。需包含下列要点： （1）广告中承诺no-spot 安全有效，能去除斑点；（2）谨遵说明使用，效果并非如此：

①有副作用—举例子说明； ②影响工作。

（3）要求赔偿医疗费；（4）发票保留至今，以备起诉使用。 dear manager, i bought this cream in green supermarket last sunday.i still retain the receipt. last sunday evening, i applied the cream to my face following the instructions carefully.to my great surprise, when i got up the next morning, i felt my face tickling.during the following two days, this symptom became worse and worse, which greatly affected my life and work. yours faithfully, li hua (六）询问信 即寻求信息，征求建议、提议或求助之类的信件。

1、假设你是新华中学的学生张华，班里从外地转来一名同学李明，他一时无法融入到新的班集体中，感到很苦恼。请根据下列要点用英语（q吧）给他写封信。 best regards, zhang hua

2、设你是李华，作为选派的交流学生在美国某中学学习了一年，寄住在mr．brown家里，刚回到国内。回国后，你发现自己的一本英语词典遗忘在他家，因此给他写了一封信，请他帮助寄回词典。信的主要内容如下：

感谢在美国期间他所提供的帮助 一本英语词典忘记带回

词典是美国老师送的，非常珍贵 词典很可能丢在卧室的书架上 邮资自己付 mr．brown， im now safely back home．thank you very much for all the kindne i got from you during my stay．hope everything is fine with you there． now i wonder whether i could ask you a favour．when i came back, i suddenly realizes that i had left my english dictionary behind at your place．it is a precious gift from mu american teacher．would you please be so kind as to send it back to me? ill pay for the postage．the dictionary must be on the bookshelf in my bedroom．it is the one with a red cover． thanks and all the best． yours,篇4：感谢信格式以及范文

感谢信的格式和写法

一、感谢信的概念和主要特点 1.感谢信的含义

感谢信是向帮助、关心和支持过自己的集体（党政机关、企事业单位、社会团体等）或个人表示感谢的专用书信，有感谢和表扬双重意思。写感谢信既要表达出真切的谢意，又要起到表扬先进，弘扬正气的作用。它广泛应用于个人与个人之间、个人与组织之间、组织与组织之间，用以向给予自己帮助、关心和支持的对方表示感谢。 2.感谢信的主要特点

⑪感谢对象要确指

感谢信都有确切的感谢对象，以便让大家都清楚是在感谢谁。

⑫表述事实要具体

感谢别人是有具体的事由的，否则就会显得抽象空洞。

⑬感情色彩要鲜明

感动和致谢的色彩强烈鲜明，言语里充满感激之情。

二、感谢信的种类

感谢信依据不同的标准可以有不同的分法。 1.按感谢对象的特点来分

⑪写给集体的感谢信

这类感谢信，一般是个人处于困境时，得到了集体的帮助，并在集体的关心和支持下，自己最终克服了困难，度过了难关，摆脱了困境，所以要用感谢信的方式表达自己的感激之情。

⑫写给个人的感谢信

这类感谢信，可以是个人也可以是单位也可以是集体为

了感谢某个人曾经给予的帮助或照顾而写的。 2.按感谢信的存在形式来分

⑪公开张贴的感谢信

这种感谢信包括可在报社登报、电台广播或电视台播报的感谢信，是一种可以公开张贴的感谢信。

⑫寄给单位、集体或个人的感谢信

这种感谢信直接寄给单位、集体或个人。

三、感谢信的格式和写法

感谢信通常有标题、称呼、正文、结语和落款五部分构成。 1.标题

感谢信的标题的写法有这样几种形式：“感谢信”——单独由文种名称组成的：“致鬃椎母行恍拧薄筛行欢韵蠛臀

闹置乒餐槌傻模骸白捉值乐伦拙缭旱母行恍拧薄筛行凰胶臀闹置谱槌傻摹?/p> 2.称呼

开头顶格写被感谢的机关、单位、团体或个人的名称或姓名，并在个人姓名后面附上“同志”等称呼，然后再加上冒号。 3.正文

感谢信的正文从称呼下面—行空两格开始写，要求写上感谢的内容和感谢的心情。应分段写出以下几个方面：

⑪感谢的事由

概括叙述感谢的理由，表达谢意。

⑫对方的事迹

具体叙述对方的先进事迹，叙述时务必交待清楚人物、事件、时间、地点、原因和结果，尤其重点叙述关键时刻对

方给予的关心和支持。

⑬揭示意义

在叙述事实的基础上指出对方的支持和帮助对整个事情成功的重要性以及体现出的可贵精神。同时表示向对方学习的态度和决心。 4.结语

写感谢信收束时表示敬意的话、感谢的话。如“此致敬礼”、“致以最诚挚的敬礼”等。 5.落款

感谢信的落款署上写信的单位名称或个人姓名，并且署上成文日期。前者在上，后者在下。

四、写作感谢信的注意事项 1.内容要真实，评誉要恰当篇5：书面表达申请信

英语书面表达训练探讨

失分原因 1.不会审题，偏离主题 2.汉语思维，逐字翻译 3.句子逻辑关系混乱 4.语法错误

书面表达训练建议

(一)多读、多背好文章、范文，听、仿、看全面训练 (二)限时训练 1.读题（定体裁） 2.确定内容 3.确定时态、语态、人称等 4.写：时间（25分钟左右）；（收拢：基本词汇、句型） (附:关联过渡语)

1、时间顺序：first, first of all, at first, in the first place, firstly, to begin/start with, recently, now, at present, in recent years, at present, lately, then, later, meanwhile, in the end, finally, after that, since then, for the first time, at last, as soon as, the next moment

2、平行对等类：and, both„and, as well as, as well, neither„nor„, or, either„ or„.

3、转折关系类：but, yet, while, however, on the contrary, on the other hand,

4、因果关系类: for, so, therefore, as a result, because of, due to, owing to, thanks to

5、空间顺序类: on the right/left, to the right/left of, on one side of, on the other side of, at the top/end of, in the middle of

6、解释说明类: to put it another way, that is (to say), in other words, such as, for example, for instance, and so on 7 表陈述事实的in fact, actually, as a matter of fact, to tell you the truth等。 8.表强调的过渡词：certainly, indeed, above all, surely, most important, in fact, no doubt, absolutely without any doubt, truly, obviously, of course, actually, as a matter of fact, chiefly, especially, in particular,

9、递进关系类: what’s more, what’s worse, what’s better, in addition, worse still, besides, moreover, furthermore, above all, not only...but also, for one thing„for another 10.总结类: in short, in brief, in a word, all in all, on the whole, to sum up, in general, generally speaking, above all, after all, finally, in conclusion, to conclude, at last, in summary, on the whole等。

应用文

书信(letter)、日记(diary)、便条(note)、通知(notice)、请柬(invitation card)、

海报(poster)、致词(speeches)、失物招领（lost and found）

书信

申请信、建议信、感谢信、邀请信、投诉信、求助信、祝贺信、

高考英语求职信（申请信）

求职信的结构及常用句型

一、介绍消息来源;表明求职心愿

二、介绍个人简历，摆出求职优势

三、请求答复联系 表明感激之情

1)开篇点题，交代消息来源、写明写信的目的. 第一段开头：写信的目的（purpose） i’m writing to apply for the job (求职)i learn from/read in the newspaper that„/i was told that„/be experienced in„

/i would be grateful if you could„ 1.i learned from your advertisement that you are in need of a „ 2.i saw from your advertisement in yesterday’s china daily that „ 3.having known that your office needs a „ i would like to apply for the post. 4.i’m interested in the post which you advertised in yesterday’s china daily. 5.i’m looking for a job as a„and would be grateful if you would consider me for such a post in your firm. 2)介绍个人简历，重点放在与所申请的工作相关的知识技能的介绍上，要有详有略. 第二段：自我介绍 （self-introduction）

常用短语: graduate from„ be good / skilled at„ enjoy doing sth / in one’s spare time„ / get on well with„1.i’m good at.../ i do well in.../ i master...well...... 2.i have a good knowledge of.../ i have the ability to... 5.i’ll get on very well with my fellow workers. 6.once i’m hired, i’ll devote myself to the cause of the... 工作经历的常用句型：work experiences 1.i once worked as a ...for two years 2.i was working as a ...during the period of .... 3.in 2000 i worked....4.i’ve had the experience of...5.i’ve been...since... 能力：

1、i have learned english for 8 years.i am very good at english, so i have been an editor of my schools english paper in the past two years.

2、i’m an excellent student, among the top 5 in my cla of 50 students. my grades are among the best ones in my department. 第三段：表达盼望尽快收到答复的迫切愿望并表明感激之情. 常用句式： i would appreciate it very much if you could give me the opportunity. thank you for your consideration./ i am looking forward to receiving your reply. 结尾：

1.if i could have the opportunity to get the job i will be quite appreciative. thank you for your consideration.i look forward to hearing from you. 2.i think i’m suited for the job.if you can let me have this chance i will try my best to do it well.expecting you answer.you can connect me by posting a letter to 3.i will be quite appreciative if i am offered the opportunity. thank you for your consideration.i wish to get your answer soon. 4.i would be very grateful if you could send me more information about the post available. 高考英语建议信

写作要点

1 建议信：作者就有关问题进行分析并针对这些问题提出自己的看法和建议。 2 对象： 1）写给个人，就其遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法和观点。 2）写给某个组织和机构，就改进其服务提出建议或忠告。 3基本框架：

开头（beginning）：开门见山，向对方陈述自己的观点。（state your idea） 主体（body）：对所提出的问题进行分析并说明理由，接着提出自己的建议。（reasons and evidence） 结尾（ending）：呼应开头，重申观点。（restate your opinion）

（说明写信目的； 介绍详情，说明原因；提出建议；希望采纳建议，并盼望回复。） 4 注意事项 1）建议信要写出写信的原因，建议的内容，提出建议的理由，提出的理由要合呼情理，语气要委婉礼貌。 总之要简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力。 2）建议的角度要多样化，避免重复。

第14篇：新课标书面表达

Helping hands

攻克书面表达从背诵开始

—积极背诵，善于总结，你一定行！

1.新课标全国卷假定你是李华，从互联网上得知一个国际中学生组织将在新加坡((Singapore)举办夏令营，欢迎各国学生参加。请写一封电子邮件申请参加。

内容主要包括：

1.自我介绍(包括英语能力)；

2.参加意图(介绍中国、了解其他国家)；

3.希望获准。

注意:

1.词数100左右:

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.邮件开头和结尾已为你写好。

Dear Sir or Madam, countries about China and learn about their countries as well.I hope I will be accepted as a member of your summer camp.Regards,

Li Hua

2.大纲全国卷II假定你是李华。你班同学决定为小明举办生日聚会。请你写信邀请外教Susan参加，要点包括：

1.时间：周五晚8点至9点

2.地点：学生俱乐部

3.内容：生日歌、蛋糕、游戏等

4.要求：备小礼物

注意：⒈ 词数100左右，开头语已为你写好；⒉可以适当增加细节，以便行文连贯。 Hi, Susan, We’d like to invite you to the party.We want to give him a surprise, so please keep quiet about it.We’ll at the Students’ Club at 8 p.m.this Friday, after the evening claes.And it’s going to last about an hour.We each will prepare a little present.When he comes, we’ll together for him.Then the cake will be cut and we’ll sing songs and play games.It’ll be nice to

Yours,

Li Hua

Attitude is everything.You can make it!

第15篇：英语书面表达

2014年济宁市中考英语书面表达

假设你是李华，已报名参加暑期英语夏令营，根据夏令营之活动安排，你需要准备一份关于英语夏令营英语阅读方面的发言稿，具体要求如下：

1.对英语阅读重要性的认识；

2.个人开展英语阅读的情况（1-2点具体做法）及感悟；

3.将来的打算。

参考词汇：play an important part; in the past; borrow books; at the beginning; something easy and interesting, in the future, form a good habit of; read everyday; be helpful for.

要求：1.词数，100词左右；（开头已给出，不计入总词数；）

2.可根据具体要求及参考词汇适当发挥；

3.文中不得出现真实姓名。

Good morning, everybody,

I’m pleased to be here to talk about my English reading.As we know, _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Thanks for your listening.

第16篇：英语书面表达

寒假作业Chinese Young People’s Life Goals Today

A recent survey shows that in today’s society, Chinese young people’s life goals have become more diversified than before.When young people are asked what they will struggle for, more than half of the respondents choose to earn enough money to buy a house and a car for themselves.In addition to this practical goal, some people, about 44%, pick up their life goal as improving their life quality or to be rich while 23.9% of the respondents are simply satisfied to have a good job.As for how to achieve their life goals, most of them prefer struggling to realize their dreams.The survey shows that the society is making progre and people’s life goals have become more practical.

A recent investigation shows that nowadays the young in China have more diversified goals than ever before.More than half of the respondents aim at making more money to buy themselves a car and a house.44% of them want to improve their living standard while 43.3% of them hope to become rich.Besides, about a quarter of them wish to get a good job in the future.To achieve their goals, 71.9% of these young people said that they would struggle to overcome difficulties on their ways to succe.

Keeping optimistic

We can know from the paage if we are optimistic we can conquer different kinds of difficulties in life when we meet them, and we will succeed in the end.

In my study, I will get discourage when I fail in an exam.I think I’m hopele and can’t go to my ideal university.Whenever I am in bad mood, my teachers, especially my homeroom teacher, encourages me to be optimistic by saying the proverb “Nothing is too difficult if you put your heart into it.” They also tell me to study harder and give me good advice on my study.I’m grateful to them and agree with them.From now on, I’ll no longer feel frustrated when I fail in an exam.On the contrary, I will still keep optimistic and study harder because I know failure is the mother of succe.As long as I don’t loose heart and work hard, I’m sure I’ll succeed in the end.第三周：基础写作：

上周六下午，你们宿舍几个同学去森林公园野炊，回来途中淋了雨。晚上李华头疼得厉害。你给她量体温，发现她发高烧。你马上带她去看医生。医生说她得了重感冒，要卧床休息三天。请你代她给刘老师写一张请假条说明情况，并帮她请假两天（周

一、周二），因此她不能参加周二的羽毛球比赛了。

Last Saturday afternoon, I went to Forest Park for a picnic with my roommates.Unfortunately we were caught in the rain on our way home and Li Hua got a dreadful headache.I took her temperature, finding that she was having a fever.So I took her to see the doctor right now and she was advised to be in bed for 3 days.Now I’d like to ask for two days’ sick leave for her, including Monday and Tuesday, and therefore she cannot take part in the badminton game on Tuesday

任务型写作

总结：The writer tried to tell us the importance of setting goals through a beaver’s story.After it built a house for the winter, it set another goal for the spring—to chew down a big tree and succeeded by working hard.

你认为制订目标很重要吗？The quest for succe always begins with a target.Goal setting is the focus of will to move in a certain direction.Without goals, one will never know what he’s doing, neither will he try his best to do it.

你认为制订目标后怎样才能成功？There goes the saying, “Hard work leads to succe.” If we want to achieveour goals, we must work hard.Also, we should stick to our goals and never give up when we are faced with setbacks.举例:Last year I took part in an English speech contest.At the beginning I made up my mind to perform best though my English was not good enough.I tried every means and even stood in front of the mirror to practise again and again.Finally I succeeded and become one of the 10 students in the final competition.第四周：基础写作

社会实践是学校教育的一个重要组成部分；书本知识有限；社会实践有诸多好处，能用所学的知识解决实际问题，获取经验，了解社会，端正学习态度，激励学习。

Most of the students think that social practice is not important.In fact social practice is an important part of school education.After all the knowledge we obtain from books is limited.Participation in social practice does a lot of good to us.For example, We can apply what we’ve learned to practical problems, from which we can get more

experience and have more knowledge about our society.Thus we will take correct attitude towards our studies and work harder.

任务型写作

总结：From this paage,we know sometimes difficult conditions can really make a man strong, so parents should let their children eat bitter foods, do hard work and experience a hard life.

描述你的童年生活 I grew up in an ordinary family, which is notso well off.I could understand the hardshipsmy parents were bearing at that time.Therefore, I work very hard now in the hopeof entering the university and changing thesituation of my family and me.

你对童年生活的认识 我认为从某种意义上来说，艰苦的环境可以激发一个人的潜能，为他的成功铺平道路。I think that in a certain sense, difficult situations can stimulate a person’s potential and pave the way for him to succeed.

一个人在经历了磨难之后可以变得坚强，勇敢和忠实可靠。One can be strong, brave and faithful after all the hardships he has gone through.总而言之，我认为温室里的花朵经受不起风暴的洗礼，艰苦的生活对孩子来说是有好处的。All in all, I think that flowers from a greenhouse can never withstand a storm and that a hard life is good for children.

第四周周六下午

热爱社会工作，性格乐观，富有爱心和责任心；英语口语流利，具有相关的教学经验；工作时间：周六和周日，按每小时5元付费；这份工作给自己在经济和人际关系方面的好处；:表达自己做好工作的决心：把快乐和舒适带给自己工作的对象。

Dear Sir or Madam

I cannot wait to join in the social workers team in our neighborhood.Being optimistic, caring and responsible, I develop a paion for social work.Besides, I am so fluent in spoken English that I was once invited to teach a group of young kids English last summer.What’s more, I have no cla on both Saturday and Sundays.If I’m lucky to get the position, It not only provides me a regular source of income by paying me 5 yuan by the hour but also does a lot to improve my skills in interpersonal relationships.It is certain that I will do what I can to bring joy and comfort to whomever I work for.I’m looking forward to your reply very soon.

Sincerely yours

Ling ming

就学校取消高三音乐课这一事件给校长写一封信

Dear principal ,

I am writing in answer to the decision the school made several days ago .It reminds me of the British school where music plays a big part.

In Britain,pupils can study an instrument like the piano or violin or the guitar.They also play music together as a cla and have fun, even take part in concerts and organize bands.

同学们对学校取消音乐课意见不一Therefore, no sooner had the school announced not to offer music leons to Senior Two and Three students than we held a heated discuion about its advantages and disadvantages.So far, there has been no consensus on it.

你对此决定赞成或反对？Personally, I am among those who argue against the decision largely because music leon provide us with an opportunity to relieve our heavy academic preure and promote the mutual understanding between students.

（理由)以你自己或他人的感受来说明开设音乐课的利或弊。Actually, nothing please me than music leons, for I am completely relaxed, not caring about study for a while.Also, I am ready to bear my heart to my clamates and feel close to each other.It is the charm of music that brings all of us a realization that there is still joy in our dull life.So it is better to continue music leons

汕头一模

1.为何与人合作：现代社会必备；可省时间和精力；更多互相学习的机会

2.与谁合作：A与喜欢的人合作：心情愉快，同甘共苦B与不喜欢的人合作：学会容忍，学会挖

掘其优点

3.你的看法：倾听别人意见，不把你的观点强加给别人，有礼貌地指出别人的错误

Good afternoon,everyone !the topic of my speech today is “being a good parner .”In this busy ,modern world ,if we want to complete our work more efficiently ,we must all learn to cooperate with others ,because not only can cooperation save us a lot of time and energy ,but also we can learn much each other .We`ll be lucky enough to find someone we like to cooperate with due to the fact that we can share our joy and sadne with him .however ,it can be difficult to cooperate with someone we dislike .In this case ,we`ll have to put up with some of his shortcomings and try to discover his advantages .In my opinion ,to be a good partner ,we should try to listen to others`opinions ,never force our ideas on others and if he makes mistakes ,try to point out in a polite way .Thank you for your listening !

失败是件坏事吗？

概括短文要点Failure is a commom thing in life .But there are different attitudes towards failure .Whoever draws a leon from every failure becomes experienced and succeeds .

失败并非坏事，但从失败中站起来并非易事So failure has a different effect on anyone who has a different attitude .As for me ,I like succe .Meanwhile I don`t mind failure because it isn`t a bad matter ,and we cen stand up in the failure ,which isn`t indeed an easy matter .

失败对胜利者是必修课，重要的基本功As is known ,the defeat to a victor is actually an important basic skill and the required course .

你对失败的看法和态度 (1)In my opinion ,we should take a positive attitude towards failure .As a matter of fact ,I think failure can stimulate our potential and from it we can learn a lot ,with which we can achieve succe .Just as the saying goes ,”Failure is the mother of succe .”

(2)In my opinion ,we should take an active attitude towards failure ,because most of us experience the failure thongh few of us are so lucky as to succeed .Failure tells us such things as why we failed and what should we do to correct the mistakes .Failure also tells us how to approach our goals and ensures us failure is the mother of succe .

广州一模

基础写作简介学校的植物园

1.概况：位于校园西南角，面积1000平方米 2.历史：20年的历史，2008年重建 3.特色：各种花卉、树木、药用植物 4.功能：美化校园、研究植物场所、休闲之地 5.其他：观赏至少许一小时

Located at the south-west corner of our school, the botanical garden is spread over an area of approximately 1000 square meters.The garden is over 20 years old and was rebuilt in 2008.as you walk through the garden, you can see various kinds of beautiful flowers, trees and herbs.If you’re planning to explore the garden, set aside at least one hour.The garden makes our schoool more beautiful and it’s a fantastic place for students to study and learn more about plants or simply to relax for a while.

读写任务就学生违纪的处理方式写一篇简评

(1) Should Schools Suspend Troublesone Students?

概括要点：校长的做法、想法、结果I recentl I recently read a news story about a school in Egland whose headmaster often suspends misbehaving students.The headmster believes that strong discipline improves hoth students’ behaviour and academic performance.His school’s exam results have greatly improved during his time in charge.

你是否支持该校长的做法，理由While I congratulate the headmaster on his succe I do not agree with the methods he uses to achieve it.Suspending students should be the final type of punishment used for misbehaving students, not the first.Quickly removing such students from the school may be of some benefit to the remaining students but it doesn’t solve the problem of poor behaviour.It only shifts the problem from the school to the community.If these naughty students are not in school then they will only be making trouble out of school.Moreover, as the parents of many of these students are working, the students are unsupervised and thus are in danger of falling in with local criminals who will only encourage such bad behaviour and even teach them worse things.

假设你是校长，你会如何处理违纪学生？If I was in charge of his school I would place the naughty students in a cla of their own, this way the other students could study in peace but the naughty studetns could remain under the supervision of the school and its teachers.The teachers in the naughty cla would also have more time to focus on correcting the actions of these misbehaving students.

（2） Should Schools Suspend Troublesone Students?

I recently read a news story about a school in Egland whose headmaster often suspends misbehaving students.The headmster believes that strong discipline improves hoth students’ behaviour and academic performance.His school’s exam results have greatly improved during his time in charge.

I believe the headmaster is correct to take this action.If a few students are always behaving poorly in cla then it will negatively affect other students’ learning.As a result, many innocent studetns will suffer and they will fail to achieve their full potential.If the naughty students are removed from the cla then the others can learn in peace.Hopefully the misbehaving students will learn their leons and when they return their behaviour will be better.

If I was in charge of a school I would also be very strict with students who don’t behave well.I would first warn and then suspend students who interrupt the learning of others or disrespect their teachers.But I would also visit the poor student’s home and discu the problem with his paents so we could find a solution.

梅州一模写一篇短文介绍大豆的生长过程

1.发芽的条件：水分充足，温度适宜，种子就开始发芽了 2.第一步：出现幼根，并朝下生长 3.第二步：幼苗出现，并朝上生长，直至变成绿色 4.第三步：主根、旁根、枝叶出现 5.第四步：数月后开花结果

Where there is enough water and the temperature is right, the bean seed begins to grow.In the first stage , a small root comes out and begins to grow downwards.Then a small shoot begins to grow upswards, getting longer and longer until it turns green.At the same time the root continues to grow downward, becoming the main root together with side roots developing around it while the shoot develops leaves all around.It takes only a few months before the plant flowers and bears fruit.

经济危机，大学生就业难

概括材料主要内容This paage mainly tells us…; The story is mainly about…

Increasing unemployment would the biggest challenge for China this year with great numbers of rural and urban workers laid off.The government has launched a stimulus package of 4 trillion yuan to stimulate the country’s economy.

现状：经济危机影响全球，就业机会少，工人工资低As it is known to all, nearly all countries in the world have been hit by the global economic crisis, leaving few job chances and lower wages and salaries for ordinary people.

建议：树立正确的择业观，降低预期工资，先就业再择业，自己创业，开公司，展示自己的才华Under this circumstance, university graduates should have a proper attitude towards their future jobs.It is my suggestion that they should lower their expectation of their future wages or salaries.It’s a good idea for them to take up a job before considering which job to take.To make good advantage of tehir knowledge, they may set up their own busine so as to show off their own talent.

政府提供各种优惠政策，免除各种税费，提供一定数量的无息贷款In order to help those new graduates, the government has offered many favorable policies such as freeing all kinds of taxes.Supplying certain amount of loans without interest.I’m sure they will succeed and can have a bright future with the help of the government.

第17篇：英语书面表达

Dear Andy,

I‘m so glad that you‘ll be here with me and my family for the summer holiday.I‘m writing to expre our warm welcome and introduce the activities during your stay here.

In the morning ,some activities at school will be arranged.You‘ll visit our clarooms, reading rooms, labs, and so on.We‘ll take this opportunity to exchange our views, talking about school life, and so on.

In the afternoon, you can tour around the city.And I‘ll act as your tour guide.Our city has changed a lot and takes on a new look.You can see what is our city like with your own eyes.At night , we can watch TV, play games and talk about what we‘re interested in.I‘m sure you‘ll enjoy yourself.I‘m looking forward to your coming.

Yours sincerely, Li hua [名师点评]

本文行文自然流畅，文章要点齐全，意思表达真切。详略得当，重点突出。从语言使用的角度来说，不但使用了一些生动的动词，准确的名词，同时为了使本文串联自然，又使用了时间状语为连接词，将文章按照时间顺序叙述完整。

第18篇：高考书面表达

书面表达范文

例文一：

据说，中国有一半人在吸烟。许多男孩和女孩都有吸烟的习惯，尽管他们还是中学生。

众所周知，吸烟对人身体是有害的。越来越多的人们认识到这个问题的严重性，但他们仍然乐此不疲。

吸烟能导致很多疾病。由于吸烟，一些人一直在咳嗽。肺癌是吸烟导致的最严重的疾病。同时，吸烟很浪费金钱。除此而外，粗心的烟民还可能引起火灾。

为了保证人们的身体健康，我们应当改掉吸烟的坏习惯。请立即停止吸烟吧。

It is said that there are about half of people in China are smoking.Many young boys and girls have the habit of smoking, though they are middle school students.

As we all know, smoking does great harm to human beings.More and more people have come to realize how serious this problem is.But they are never bored with it.

Smoking causes many illnees.A lot of people always cough because of smoking.The most serious illne caused by smoking is lung cancer.Meanwhile smoking is a waste of money.Besides, carele smokers may cause dangerous fires.

In order to keep healthy, we should get rid of the bad habit of smoking.Please stop smoking at once.例文二：

What is happine in my mind?

Happine means different things to different people.For example, some students, believe that if they have much money, they will be happy.They believe that they will be able to do anything they want to if they have much money.Some students think that they should be in good health, and enjoy whatever they like.Many students wish to have much wealth from their parents.In this way they don’t have to work hard, and they can own everything .

I don’t quite agree with the above points.I don’t think money means happine.We can’t buy many of the things with money, such as health and knowledge, I value knowledge, which makes me happy, for I can do much for mankind with knowledge.Although different people value happine differently, my happine comes from my study.

例文三：

进入2l世纪，环保是引起世界各国重视的大问题。请你根据以下要点写一篇80字左右的短文，谈谈你对环境污染的看法。

1．污染现已成为全球问题。空气、河流、海洋、土壤的污染对人类和动物十分有害。

2．列举2-3种产生污染的原辆以及由此造成的严重后果。

3．希望人们都能采取有效办法，控制污染，净化环境，保护生态平衡。（平衡：balance） In the world today, pollution has become a serious problem facing man and his planet.The air, seas, rivers and soil have been seriously polluted by all kinds of waste and poisonous matter.It does great harm not only to human beings but also to aninmls and plants.We can’t have fresh air.

Fish died front polluted water.It is reported that strange diseases havc appeared in many places

because of pollution.I hope that all the people in the world will take neceary steps and effective

measures to solve this serious problem.We arc looking forward to the coming of the day when we

see pollution effectively controlled and air cleaned.It is indeed our urgent task to do everything

poible to protect our ecological environment and to keep nature in good balance.例文四（2012高考题）

春节是中国的传统节日。请以Spring Festival为题，写一篇英语作文，介绍一下人们是

如何欢度春节的。

作文必须包括以下要点：

1.春节是一个家人团聚的节日，人们从四面八方回到家。

2.除夕夜，家庭成员坐在桌边，享用丰盛美味的食物。

3.在春节期间，孩子们会很开心。他们可以整天地玩耍，不用上学。而且，他们还能

得到许多压岁钱。

4.春节也是人们休闲和走亲访友的日子。人们彼此祝福“新年快乐”，并希望来年有好

运。

The Spring Festival is a traditional Chinese holiday and is celebrated on the first day of the

lunar year.It is a time for family members to get together.People go back home from all parts of

the country.

On New Year’s Eve, the family sit at the table with a lot of dishes and enjoy delicious foods.

During the Spring Festival, school children will have a good time.They can play all day long

instead of going to school.And they can get money from their parents.

The Spring Festival is also a time for people to relax and visit their relatives and friends.

They wish each other “A Happy New Year” and hope they will have good luck in the coming year.

To us Chinese, the Spring Festival is the most important festival throughout the year.

例文五：（2011高考题）

在一个人的成长过程中，常会遇到烦恼。其中之一就是我们的父母亲经常翻看我们的

书包和日记。假设你将参加校园英语演讲比赛，请就这一现象写一篇英语演讲稿，陈述你的

观点。

演讲稿的主要内容应包括：

有些同学觉得父母不尊重我们，没有给我们足够的空间。我们不必为此苦恼，因

为我们还不够成熟，有时，无法作出自己的决定，我们需要父母亲的帮助。同时，我

们必须和父母亲进行交流和沟通。毕竟，我们要成长。我们要发展自己的个性。我们

需要有自己的观点、自己的想法以及自己对事物的判断。但总有一天，我们会相互理

解的。

Good morning, ladies and gentlemen,Some of us are having problems with our parents, as they often look into our school bags or

read our diaries.Some students feel parents don’t respect us and aren’t giving us enough space to

do what we like.In my opinion, we don’t have to be bothered about this.After all, there are times

when we are not old enough to make our own decisions and are in need of our parents’ help.

Meanwhile, we can communicate with our parents, telling them we’re growing up and it’s good

for us to develop our own identity.Besides, we need to have our own opinions , thoughts and form

our own judgement about things.Sooner or later, I believe , we’ll understand each other.

Thank you.

例文六（2010高考题）

假如你是王红，今年暑假即将毕业。请以第一人称给某公司林先生写一封80-100字的

英文求职信。内容要点可用不同方式表达。

求职信必须包括如下要点：

1.今年暑假，我将于东方职业学校毕业。

2.在校期间我的专业是计算机科学。我曾获得计算机辅助设计（CAD）一等奖。

3.去年，在业余时间，我在一家公司兼职，我学了很多东西。

4.我想在贵公司申请一份职位。我相信我能胜任今后的工作。

5.希望林先生能考虑我的申请。期待着公司能给我一次面试的机会。

A Letter of Application

Dear Mr.Lin,

I’m Wang Hong.I’ll graduate from Dongfang Vocational school this summer.My major

is Computer Science and I like it.Once I entered for a CAD competition and I was awarded

the first prize.Last year, in spare time, I took a part-time job in a company, where I learned

quite a lot.Now, I’m writing to apply for a post in your company with the hope that I can do

something for you.With my experience and my knowledge, I’m sure I’ll be qualified for my

future job.I sincerely hope Mr.Lin will take my request into consideration, and I would

appreciate an early interview.

Yours faithfully,

Wang Hong

假如你是李华，请根据提示的要点写一份60～80词的请假条给张老师。

要点：

1、李华病了，感觉不舒服，头痛，疲劳，不想吃东西。

2、从昨晚开始就这样，看了医生。

3、医生仔细地给他作了检查，说他患了重感冒，开了药。要求他卧床休息两、三天，多喝开水。

4、今天不能到校，请假两天

Dear Mi Zhang,

I’m sorry to tell you that I don’t feel well today.My head hurts and I feel tired.I don’t feel like eating anything.I have been like this ever since last night.I have seen the doctor.She looked me over carefully and told me that I have got a bad cold.She gave me some medicine and told me to stay in bed for two or three days and drink much water, so I’m afraid I can’t go to school today.I’d like to take two days off.Thank you.

Yours,Li Hua 例文七：

假设你是李华，在互联网上看到英国高中生David登的一则启事：希望结识一位中国朋友，以便学校中国的语言、文化。请你以李华的名义用英文给David发一封电子邮件，主要内容包括：

（1）你怎样得知David的愿望；

（2）你愿意成为他的朋友；

（3）你打算如何帮助他；

（4）你盼望他的回复。

注意：（1）电子邮件的格式以为你写好，不计入总词数；[来源:学&科&网][来源:Z。xx。k.Com]

（2）词数：100左右。

Dear David,

I’ve learned it from the Internet that you want to make a Chinese friend so as to learn the Chinese language and culture.I’m glad that you show such great interest in China and I world like to be your friend.

I will try my best to write to you as often as poible to introduce you the Chinese culture.When you have an opportunity to come to China, I’ll teach you how to speak Chinese and show you around some famous historical places of interest.Anyway, I am going to help you as much as I can.How do you think?

I’m looking forward to your reply.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

第19篇：书面表达预测

2011年书面表达预测范文

保护环境

( 四川乐山) 从2008年6月1日起，国家将禁止商家免费提供塑料袋，掀起全国“拒塑”的环保运动。假如你是李华，准备以“What Can We Do for the Environment” 为题，写一篇保护环境的英语演讲稿。

内容包含：1.在购物时用布袋子替代塑料袋； 2.尽可能地再利用使用过的课本； 3.离开教室应关灯； 4.最好走路或骑自行车上学； 5.简述理由：保护环境，减少污染，节约能源等

注意：1.词数：80词左右。开头和结尾已经为你写好，不计入总词数；

2.可根据要点适当增加细节，使行文连贯；3.文章中不能出现真实姓名和校名，否则以零分处理。

参考词汇：布袋子cloth bag塑料袋plastic bag保护protect能源energy污染pollution课本textbook

What Can We Do for the Environment

Hello, everyone.I’m Li Hua.It’s nice to speak about what we can do for the environment,and I think each of us can do a little bit to help with this problem.___________________________________________________

In fact, even the simplest everyday activities can make a real difference to the environment.I believe we can make the world a better place to live in.

Thank you for your listening!

参考作文： What Can We Do for the Environment Hello, everyone.I’m Li Hua.It’s nice to speak about what we can do for the environment, and I think each of us can do a little bit to help with this problem.

The first thing we can do is to use cloth bags in stead of plastic bags when we go shopping.It helps to protect the environment.The second thing we can do is to reuse the old textbooks as poible as we can.We should also never forget to turn off the lights when we leave the clarooms in order to save energy.What’s more, it would be better if we walk or ride a bike to school.We should try our best reduce pollution and waste.

In fact, even the simplest everyday activities can make a real difference to the environment.I believe we can make the world a better place to live in.

Thank you for your listening!

环境问题：今天环境变得越来越糟糕,环境问题影响着人们的工作,学习,生活等,而我们的工作,生活,生产等又使环境污染越来越严重..........,如何保护我们的环境?请以“ How to protect/save our environment/world? ”为题写一篇短文。提示:存在问题:1.水污染越来越严重 2.砍伐森林严重 3.大气污染严重 4.白色垃圾等。 要求：如何改善/保护环境?至少:3---4个方面， 80字左右的。

范文： How to protect/save our environment/world?

The environmental pollution is worse and worse /more and more seriously today .Water is polluted ,we have no clean water to drink Many trees are cutting down, some animals is getting le and le.Some factories is poring dirty air in the sky , the population is increasing faster and faster ,resources is getting le and le…etc.Not only does it affect our lives and health, it also has a great affection in the future.people\'s health has been greatly affected by air, noise and water pollution.Many people died of diseases.In order to live a better life, we need protect our world.

We should n’t throw away rubbish everywhere.We want to

recycle ,reduce ,reuse things .Don’t waste things ,This saves money and reduces pollution.Use things for as long as poible.We don’t use plastic bags .We mus plant more trees and stop the people cutting them .We hope our world is more and more beautiful

第20篇：中考书面表达

中考书面表达范文

1.Introduce yourself

My name is Li Lei.I was born in Fuzhou on December 15, 1994.I’m studying at Yucai Middle School.I learn Chinese, math, English, physics, chemistry, politics, and so on.I like English best.My favorite sport is football.My hobbies are drawing and computer.I’m very happy to live in a happy family.There are 3 people in my family.My father is a doctor.My mother is a teacher.We love each other very much .

2．以My Hobbies为题，要求60～80个单词。

I love collecting stamps.I collect all kinds of stamps.I think collecting stamps is great fun.It can bring me happine, friendship and knowledge.I can also learn a lot about people, history and special times from the stamps.Some of them are very valuable.I like them very much.I am going to give you a very nice stamp.I hope you will like it.What are your hobbies? Can you tell me?

3.谈谈如何预防疾病，保持健康，养成良好的卫生习惯。要求60～80个单词。

It’s very important for everyone to keep healthy.We should have good habits.For example, we should wash our hands before meals, wash our clothes often, not drink cold water and so on.At the same time, exercise is also important.We should often take exercise, because it will make us strong and germs(细菌) will have little chance to get through our bodies.We also should eat healthily.We’d better eat fruit and vegetables, because they are good for our health.If we are healthy, we can live a happy life .

4．2008年北京奥运会就要到来，谈谈你将为奥运会作些什么。字数80字左右。 Beijing will host the 2008 Olympic Games.What can we do for the Olympic Games? First , I think we must study hard from now on.We must learn to speak English better that we can help foreign visitors who come to China in 2008.Next, we must behave well and improve our environment.We can plant more trees and gra to make our country more beautiful.Then in 2008, we can go to Beijing to be a volunteer(自愿者).We are sure the 2008 Olympic Games will be succeful.I can’t wait .

5.根据所提示的内容写一篇日记。（字数80左右，要求语法正确，语气通顺。）

1.时间：2007年10月1日2.和同学们去西湖公园游玩。

3．吃完冰激凌后随手把纸扔在地上。4．一个女孩把纸捡起扔进垃圾箱。

5．我们感到惭愧，决定在公园里帮助捡垃圾，为环保尽自己的一份力量。

October l, 2007Sunny

Today is National Day and it is sunny.My clamates and I decided to go to the West lake Park.We had a very good time there.We bought some ice-cream there and after we finished it, we threw the paper to the ground.Just then a little girl ran to us, picked it up and put it into a dustbin nearby.We felt very sorry and decided to help collect rubbish in the park so that we could make contributions to protecting our environment.

6.假设你是李雷，请根据下列内容给你的英国朋友吉姆写一封信．告诉他你和同学们上周去鼓山郊游的活动和感受。字数60－80。要求：意思连贯，符合逻辑，所给的提示词必须

都用上。

你们上午7:00在校门口集合，大约8:00到达鼓山…

meet, arrive, at the foot of, climb, on the top, have a party, play games, see, beautiful, proud, live

Dear Jim,

Last Sunday, my clamates and I went to Gu Mountain.It is a very famous mountain in Fuzhou.We met at the school gate at 7: 00 and arrived at the foot of the mountain at 8: 00.As soon as we got there we began to climb the hill.It took all of us an hour to climb to the top of the mountain.Then we had a party and played games.From the top we could see the beautiful sceneries of Fuzhou.We are proud that we live in Fuzhou.

Write to me soon.

Best wishes.Yours,

Li Lei

7.谈谈如何利用好网络资源，要求60～80个单词。

The Internet is becoming more and more important to us.Without it, we can’t do work better.We can go shopping without going out of our houses.And we can listen to music or watch movies on the Internet.It can also help a lot with our study.We can learn much knowledge on different subjects, and get information as soon as poible.But now, some of us work, study or play on the Internet for long time, especially for young people to play computer games.It’s bad for our eyes and health.If we make good use of the Internet, it will be our best friends and help us a lot .

8．Great changes in my hometown

More than twenty years ago, my hometown was just a small, old and poor town.Most of people were

farmers.There were few factories.The people didn’t have enough food to eat and wore old clothes.They had a hard life .

Great changes have taken place in the past twenty years.The people have found a lot of ways of making money.Now there are many tall buildings.They are very beautiful.Roads are wide and clean.People can take buses or drive their own cars to go to work.Many

people have cell phones and personal computers.People’s living conditions have improved a lot.Thanks to the government’s efforts.my hometown is becoming more and more beautiful.

9．Make our world more beautiful !

Protecting the environment is becoming more and more important to humans.It’s our duty to take care of the nature around us.Animals and plants are our best friends, and we should share the world with them.We shouldn’t kill wild animals, and we must protect forests because they are animals’ home.We must plant more trees and gra, they can make the world greener.The more beautiful the world is, the happier lives we will have.Let’s do our best to make the world beautiful.

10．How to learn English well

As we know, English has become an international language.It is more popular than any other language in China.English is widely spoken in the world and it is the most useful language around the world.But how to learn it well?

The best way is to use it all the time.If we can talk in English, think in English we can learn it well.At school, we should learn to hear, speak, read and write carefully.We should

spend enough time in practicing English.If we keep on working hard at English, we will be able to be good at it one day.

11．根据提示写一篇词数不少于 50左右的请假条。

假如你叫陈飞，母亲病了，医生要她在家里躺两三天。你不得不呆在家中照顾她，因为家里没有其他人。请据此用英文给赵老师写一张假条，请两天的假，要求注意格式；时间是五月九日。

Dear Mi Zhao,May 9th

I’m sorry that I can’t go to school today.My mother is ill.The doctor asked her to stay at home for two or three days.I have to take care of her at home because there is nobody else.

Now, I’mThank you !

Chen Fei

12.根据以下内容以Bill的名义写一篇失物启事。

昨天（3月20日）下午在化学实验室丢了一副太阳镜，请捡到的同学与他联系，电话号码：776600。

Lost

March 21, 2008

Yesterday afternoon (March 20th ) I lost a pair of sun-glaes in the chemistry lab.Anybody who found them will you please ring me? My telephone number is 776600.Thank you very much.

Bill.

13.招领启事

FOUND

A handbag with some money and a notebook was left on the school playground this morning (March 7th).Will the owner please come to Cla 2 Grade3 or call me? My telephone number is 776600.

14.通 知

NOTICE (口头)

Boys and girls :

Your attention, please .Here is a piece of exciting news to tell you.There will be a concert at 7:30 p.m.tomorrow.It will be held in School Hall.Some pop singers will sing then.All of you are welcome.Please don’t forget to take chairs with you.

Thank you for listening\\ your attention .

NOTICE（书面）

A lecture will be given on how to learn English well by Prof.Green from Shanghai Foreign Language Institute in School Hall at 8:00 a.m.on Saturday.Teachers and students are welcome to attend the lecture.

Teaching Affairs

Office

March 3rd ,2007

NOTICE(口头)

Boys and girls :

Your attention, please !

The English corner of our little library in our cla has been opened.We hope these books are helpful and useful to us all.Everybody can borrow books from our little library now.

You should do the following :

a.Borrow only one book every time;

b.Keep the book for just two weeks and return it on time ;

c.Take care of the book .

Welcome to our little library.

Thank you .

Cla1 ,Grade3

15.留言条

Lin Tao :

I arrived here by plane this morning.I am staying at Room 123 of the Friendship Hotel.Please come as soon as poible.Give me a ring \\ call as soon as you read this note.My telephone number is 13502345678.

Li Lei

9:00 a.m.Monday

16.贺 卡

To dear LiLy

Merry Christmas and Happy New Year!

Thank you for helping me with my English !

We hope you will be in good health and do better in study !

Good luck!

Best wishes to you !

From your good friendLi Lei

Dear Mi Zhou,

Thank you for your three-year hard working and teaching us so well.Make our best wishes to you! And Happy Teachers’ Day!

Cla 1,Grade1

17.条例规定

明天，初三（6）班的同学到化学实验室去上开学以来第一节化学实验课。假如你是班长，请将实验课注意事项在班上宣读。80个词左右。

内容要点：①未经许可，不能进入实验室；②必须仔细听，按照要求去做；③遵循老师的指导，不准乱摸任何东西；④实验结束后，请打扫实验室，物归原处；⑤关上灯和窗

户，锁好门后才能离开实验室。

Boys and girls，

May I have your attention, please？I have something to tell you．

1.Don\' t go in if you aren\'t al1owed by the teacher.

2.Listen to the teacher careful1y and do what the teacher tell you to do.

3.Follow the teacher\'s instructions.Don\' t touch other things that have nothing to do with your experiment.

4.Tidy the 1ab and put everything where it was after your experiment.

5.Be sure to turn off the lights, c1ose the window, and lock the door before you leave the lab.

That\'s all, thank you!

18.事故报告

When : 9:30 a.m.April 25th , 2008.

Where : Guangming Road

Who : A girl , she was talking with her friend while they were riding .

What : Her bike hit a car , and she hurt her head and legs badly.

Result : The police came and she was taken to hospital .

19.电话留言条

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