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推荐第1篇：优秀高考英语作文

优秀高考英语作文范文

2004年秋季高考

Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.

老师要求你负责班级墙报( wall newspaper)工作并征求你的意见。在日记中表述你的决定并谈谈想法。

2005年春季高考

Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.

你叫李宏，你校在为一批来自加拿大的交流学生征寻为期两周的住宿家庭。你有意申请，写封信说明你申请的理由。(包括所具备的条件)。

2005春季范文

Dear sir,

I hear that our school will welcome some Canadian students to stay with us for or two weeks.Students who want to invite them to stay can take part in it.I want to try.

First , my parents and I can speak English well.That benefits us to communicate with each other.Second, our house is big enough for he or she to stay.Furthermore , I live near the Huangpu River.It has a good view of Shanghai.

Last but not least , in my home, he or she will enjoy much China culture.My grandpa and grandma are good at handwriting.My grandma also has a good skill in Chinese painting.I think our friendly will give him a both interesting and comfortable experience.

Thank you for your reading during your busy work..I hope that you will agree with me .Yours sincerely,

Li Hong

练习

假如你是王华，18岁生日后，真的有种长大成人的感觉。于是你想就父母对你的关怀和你今后的打算，以书信形式同爸爸妈妈谈谈。信的开头如下：

Dear Mum and Dad,

How are you doing ?

范文

Dear Mum and Dad,

How are you doing ?

I „m writing to you about my gratitude for your having brought me up and my future plan.

Dear Mum and Dad, I am already 18 years old, which shows that I have grown up.Whenever I am thinking of this, I can‟t help feeling grateful to you .It is you who first give me

encoutagement when I meet with difficulties, especially when I am not getting along well with my studies.Indeed, your inspiration seems to be a lamp, which offers me light of hope, courage and confidence.And more importantly, you are always teaching me to be good to others, and try to contribute to our society.

Dear Mum and Dad, I an now a senior three student , who is facing the competitive national college entrance examinations, So first of all, I ought to try my best to pa the exams.I am sure that through my great efforts I can and will be able to realize my beautiful dream of being a key university student.Then, I will strive to be an independent youth.The social situation I will be facing must be more competitive, so I will develop and prepare myself to be a youth with a strong sense of cooperation and competition.Believe in me, Mum and Dad, I will make a difference.

Best regards to you .

Yours sincerely,

Wang Hua

根据报道东方绿洲(Oriental Greenboat)要更名，有外国人建议用”Discovery Land” “Family Park” 或 “Youth Heaven ”。写出你的看法；或者你自己拟个名字，并陈述理由。

范文如下：

As is reported, Oriental Greenboat is planning to change its name.Many citizens as well as the foreigners have great interest in giving a new name such as “Discovery Land” “Family Park” or “Youth Heaven”.

It suddenly occurs to me that why don‟t we call it “The World of Discovery ”.I‟ve got several reasons to account for it.

First of all, the word “world” has a more meaningful definition than “park” or “ land”.According to my visit, Oriental Greenboat covers a vast area, and it is more appropriate to call it a “world” rather than a “park”.

Secondly, Oriental Greenboat provide the chance to enhance the relationship between family members and promote friendship between the youth.We are give the opportunity to relax and enjoy ,thus discovering what is of great importance in our life.Thirdly , students are involved in many activities there.They come to discover how they should cooperate and overcome the difficulties with their own efforts.This is a world for them to discover how wonderful and able they are!

To sum up , I think it would be a wise choice to name it “ The World of Discovery”.

推荐第2篇：高考英语作文：优秀作文

优秀作文

假设你叫王明,昨天收到了笔友David的e-mail,得知他不久要到北京来学习中文.他想了解如何学好中文.请你用英文给他回复一封e-mail,介绍学习中文的体会和方法,提出你的建议,以及表达你帮助他学好中文的愿望.

英语作文网

Dear David,

I\'m glad you\'ll come to Beijing to learn Chinese.Chinese is very useful, and many foreigners are learning it now.It\'s difficult for you because it\'s quite different from English.You have to remember as many Chinese words as poible.It\'s also important to do some reading and writing.You can watch TV and listen to the radio to practise your listening.Do your best to talk with people in Chinese.You can learn Chinese not only from books but also from people around you.If you have any questions, please ask me.I\'m sure you\'ll learn Chinese well.

Hope to see you soon in Beijing.

Yours,

Wang Ming

二

请你根据下面的提纲,以“我的家乡”为题,写一篇100—120字的短文.

提纲：

(1) 家乡的地理位置；

(2) 解放前的情况；

(3) 解放后的变化；

(4) 对家乡的感情.

My Home Town

My home town is a beautiful place.It stands beside a wide river and is rich in fish and rice.

But in the old days it was a poor and backward little town.Many people had no work.They lived a hard life.

In 1949 my hometown was liberated.Since then great changes have taken place there.The streets have been widened.Factories, schools, hospitals, cinemas and theatres have sprung up one after another.The life of the people is greatly improved.

I love my hometown.All the more I love its people.They are working hard so as to make it still richer and more beautiful.

三

健康对于我们每个人来说是非常重要的,但你的父母天天忙于工作而忽略了这个问题,你很为他们担忧.请你以此为话题,并结合提示给他们写一封信.

提示：1.要走路去上班,而不是开车或坐车；

2.每周至少去体育馆锻炼一次,或打球、或游泳；

3.饮食要健康；

4.不要工作太晚,要早休息.

要求：1.短文结构完整,意思连贯,语言流畅,语法准确,符合逻辑；

本卷第1页（共4页）

2.80—100词左右；

3.开头和结尾部分已给出,不计入总词数.

Dear Dad(Mum),

You’re so busy every day that you don’t pay much attention to your health.I’m worried about your health all the time.I’d like to give you some suggestions.I hear walking is the best sport.Your company isn’t far from home, is it? Why not walk to the office? You’d better take exercise at least once a week, such as playing tennis in the gym.Going to swim is also a nice choice, too.What’s more, it’s neceary to have healthy food.Try not to stay up too late.Having enough sleep can help your brain work better.

Dad, please accept my advice.I really wish you healthy!

Your loving son (daughter)

Tom (Mary)

四

Dear Dad(Mum),

You’re so busy every day that you don’t pay much attention to your health.I am worried about you.I hope you can keep healthy.You often drive to your office.It is not far.What about walking there because it can make you much stronger?I’d like you to play basketball or go swimming in the gym at least once a week.It is important to eat healthy food such as vegetables, meat, eggs and fruits.Though your work is hard, I still hope that you can go to bed early so that you can get enough sleep.

I’m looking forward to receiving your letter.

Your loving son (daughter)

Tom (Mary)

五

随着阳光体育运动在全国开展,政府对中学生身体素质有所下降这个问题给予了高度重视,提出了这样的标语：“EXERCISE ONE HOUR A DAY, KEEP ILLNESS AWAY”.同学们参加了各种体育锻炼之后,校园里出现了可喜的变化,强身健体,增强了学习效果,校园生活丰富了.请你报道一下学校开展这一活动的情况.

注意：1.词数80—100左右.

2.要求文章结构合理、内容通顺、句子连贯.

参考词汇：build up one’s body strength 强健身体

reduce diseases 减少疾病

As the Sunny Sports is developing in our country, the government has paid attention to the health of the students and raised, \"EXERCISE ONE HOUR A DAY, KEEP ILLNESS AWAY\".So far our school life has changed a lot.Now we have more time to do sport in the morning or after school.We play football, basketball, badminton and swim.They let our brains relax and make our school life more colorful.We have become more energetic.Above all our study has all been improved.Let’s take exercise every day.It can build up our body strength and reduce diseases.

六

Doing sport builds up our body strength and reduces diseases.

Though we lead a better life, our health is becoming worse now.So \"EXERCISE ONE HOUR A DAY,KEEP ILLNESS AWAY\" has been raised by the government.

At noon or after school we play ball games, swimming and running.Look!The playground seems smaller because lots of students are playing on it.The school life has become colorful and we are

energetic.As a result we study harder and better.

The Sunny Sports has brought an exciting change to us.Let’s keep on doing it.

七

Career or Family: which is more important?

When asked about their opinion of career and family, people always respond differently.Some people deem it more important to pursue their career, while there are always other people who argue that family should be the number one in one’s life.

It goes without any question that career plays a key role in our life.In the very first place, career can give us an aim to live on.Without career, much of our living time will be certainly wasted.What’s more, career can provide us with a means to live on.Most of the people earn their income from a job.On the other hand, family is also an indispensable part of life, as many people will admit.Family is always regarded as a place where we can escape from troubles in life.In addition, we can obtain a sense of belonging to from family.Without it, anyone will feel lonely and desperate.

In my opinion, career and family are not in opposition to each other.Rather, they can enhance each other so that one’s life can become better and better.Therefore, it’s not a choice between right and wrong, but one between ideal and practical.中国公务网 2006-5-28 11:34:59

八

Olympics and I

Dear friend,

I have a great news to inform here.Through long efforts, Beijing has been granted the right to host 2008 Olympic games.As a resident in Beijing, I feel quite excited and like to share with you my happine.

This succe means a lot more than a game to me.In the first place, this Games will definitely promote the development of our economy.According to a recent survey by some experts, this games will raise our GDP by about 3%, and offer about 10,000 jobs.What’s more, our culture will be widely recognized and accepted all over the world through the Games.People will come over from every corner of the world, and experience Chinese culture in every aspect.Besides, through the games, our living environment will be greatly improved.For example, the public transportation system will be up-dated.Moreover, it’s known that more trees will be planted, and graland will be considerably expanded.

My friend, I really look forward to the coming of this great Games.As an individual, I’m all ready to offer my help in any way I can.I also hope to invite you all to come here, and watch the games in 2008.

Sincerely yours,

九

Tourism in China

Recent years have seen a tendency in China that tourism is growing faster.According to a recent survey made by some experts, about 47% urban residents travel regularly, and 28% rural residents also make their tour acro the country.The survey also shows that more people are interested in tourism, and will join the army in the future.

Facing this tendency, we can’t help exploring some underlying factors that are responsible.In the very first place, with the policy of reform and opening up, Chinese people’s living standard has been greatly improved, and therefore, most of them can afford to travel around.What’s more, it is

believed that people now take a more positive attitude to tourism, and regard it as a life style.In addition, tourism facilities are becoming better and better.For example, transportation develops fast, and many scenic spots are available now.

十

What a disaster(灾难)!So far,it\'s reported that more than 60,000 people died in the SiChuan earthquake.What\'s more, millions of people there have become homele.And they are still in the danger of illne and other difficulties.Anyway, thanks to all the kind people, in and abroad,the situation has been changing well.But we still work hard at it,especially to build houses for those homele people and cure the injured people.

What can we do now? Besides doing our own job well,we can donate money to them.We firmly believe that with the party and the government\'s strong leadership, and with the people of all nationalities throughout the country to aid,this earthquake relief will be a victory!

推荐第3篇：高考英语优秀作文

①【试题回放】假定你是李华，正在英国接受英语培训，住在一户英国人家里。今天你的房东Mrs.Wilson 不在家，你准备外出，请给Mrs.Wilson 写一留言条，内容包括：

1.外出购物2.替房东还书

3.Tracy 来电话留言：1)咖啡屋(Bolton Coffee)见面取消

2)此事已告知Susan3) 尽快回电

注意：1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Mrs.Wilson,

I’m going out shopping, and won’t be back until about 5:00 pm.I have taken with me the two books you asked me to return to the City Library.At about 1 o’clock this afternoon, Tracy called, saying that she couldn’t meet you at Bolton Coffee tomorrow morning as she has something important to attend to.She felt very sorry about that, but said that you could set some other time for the meeting.She wanted you to call her back as soon as you are home.She has already told Susan about this change.

Yours,

Li Hua

④【试题回放】鼠标是计算机时代最佳的人机交互工具之一。它极大地方便了人们的计算机操作。但是，过分依赖鼠标的习惯也会带来一些不利影响。请你以鼠标为切入点，根据下表所提示的信息，用英语写一篇短文。

鼠标的必要性对多数人来说，操作计算机，上网冲浪……

鼠标的便捷性点击、移动、插入、拷贝、删除……编辑文本，搜索信息……收发邮件，选购商品……点播音乐，下载电影……

如果过分依赖鼠标…… (请考生结合自身感受，列举两到三点)

注意：1.对所给要点逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。

2.词数150左右。开头已经写好，不计人总词数。

3.作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。

The mouse is a most effective device used by people to communicate with a computer.

For most people, it’s almost impoible to operate a computer without a mouse, let alone surf the Internet.A well-chosen mouse is really handy, flexible and convenient in controlling the screen.With the functions of inserting, deleting, moving and copying, it enables us to edit test, browse web page and download what we want.It can even bring us a flood of music, movies and PC games.Just imagine, all this can be done with a cute mouse.

A convenient tool can certainly make our work easier, but it doesn’t always help in a positive way.Too much ready information on our fingertips leaves little room for knowledge pursuing.Too many ready answers make us le excited in finding truth.

Relying too much on mouse clicking makes us lazier and le creative both mentally and physically.

⑤最近，你校同学正在参加某英文报组织的一场讨论。讨论的主题是：公园要不要收门票?请你根据下表所提供的信息，给报社写一封信，客观地介绍讨论情况。

60％的同学认为

40％的同学认为

1．不应该收门票

2公园是公众休闲的地方

3l如收门票，需建大门、围墙，会影响城市形象

1．应收门票，但票价不要太高

2．支付园林工人工资

注意：1．信的开头已为你写好。2．词数：100左右。

3．参考词汇：门票---entrance fee

Dear editor,

I’m writing to tell you about the discuion we have had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks.60% of us schoolmates think that an entrance fee do not meet people’s expectations, for a park is considered to be a place where the public can have a good time when they are not busy either at home or at work.If an

entrance fee must be paid by the visitors for a park, it will be neceary to build a gate and surrounding walls.In the end a city will take on a bad look.40% of us schoolmates think that an entrance fee can be accepted, but it must not be too expensive.The money from ticket selling can be used for paying the gardeners in the park and buying some other kinds of flowers and trees.

With regard to myself, I think an entrance fee is useful, for it can be used to protect a park.Do we share the same opinion, dear editor?

Yours truly,Li Hua

⑥假设你叫王明，昨天收到了笔友David的e-mail，得知他不久要到北京来学习中文。他想了解如何学好中文。请你用英文给他回复一封e-mail，介绍学习中文的体会和方法，提出你的建议，以及表达你帮助他学好中文的愿望。

英语作文网

Dear David,

I\'m glad you\'ll come to Beijing to learn Chinese.Chinese is very useful, and many

foreigners are learning it now.It\'s difficult for you because it\'s quite different from English.You have to remember as many Chinese words as poible.It\'s also important to do some reading and writing.You can watch TV and listen to the radio to practise your

listening.Do your best to talk with people in Chinese.You can learn Chinese not only from books but also from people around you.If you have any questions, please ask me.I\'m sure you\'ll learn Chinese well.

Hope to see you soon in Beijing.

Yours,

Wang Ming

⑦请你根据下面的提纲，以“我的家乡”为题，写一篇100—120字的短文。

提纲：

(1) 家乡的地理位置； (2) 解放前的情况；

(3) 解放后的变化； (4) 对家乡的感情。

My Home Town

My home town is a beautiful place.It stands beside a wide river and is rich in fish and rice.

But in the old days it was a poor and backward little town.Many people had no work.They lived a hard life.

I love my hometown.All the more I love its people.They are working hard so as to make it still richer and more beautiful.

⑧健康对于我们每个人来说是非常重要的，但你的父母天天忙于工作而忽略了这个问题，你很为他们担忧。请你以此为话题，并结合提示给他们写一封信。

提示：1.要走路去上班，而不是开车或坐车；

2.每周至少去体育馆锻炼一次，或打球、或游泳；

3.饮食要健康；4.不要工作太晚，要早休息。

要求：1.短文结构完整，意思连贯，语言流畅，语法准确，符合逻辑；

2.80—100词左右；3.开头和结尾部分已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Dad(Mum),

Dad, please accept my advice.I really wish you healthy!

Your loving son (daughter)

Tom (Mary)

⑨Dear Dad(Mum),

basketball or go swimming in the gym at least once a week.It is important to eat healthy food such as vegetables, meat, eggs and fruits.Though your work is hard, I still hope that you can go to bed early so that you can get enough sleep.

I’m looking forward to receiving your letter.

Your loving son (daughter)

Tom (Mary)

⑩ 随着阳光体育运动在全国开展，政府对中学生身体素质有所下降这个问题给予了高度重视，提出了这样的标语：“EXERCISE ONE HOUR A DAY, KEEP ILLNESS AWAY”。同学们参加了各种体育锻炼之后，校园里出现了可喜的变化，强身健体，增强了学习效果，校园生活丰富了。请你报道一下学校开展这一活动的情况。

注意：1.词数80—100左右。2.要求文章结构合理、内容通顺、句子连贯。

参考词汇：build up one’s body strength 强健身体reduce diseases 减少疾病

Let’s take exercise every day.It can build up our body strength and reduce diseases.⑾

Doing sport builds up our body strength and reduces diseases.

Though we lead a better life, our health is becoming worse now.So \"EXERCISE ONE HOUR A DAY，KEEP ILLNESS AWAY\" has been raised by the government.

At noon or after school we play ball games, swimming and running.Look!The

playground seems smaller because lots of students are playing on it.The school life has become colorful and we are energetic.As a result we study harder and better.

The Sunny Sports has brought an exciting change to us.Let’s keep on doing it.⑿

【试题回放】假定你是李华，从小喜爱大熊猫（panda）,一直通过有关网站(website)关注三年前在美国圣迭哥动物园出生的大熊猫“苏琳”和她的母亲“白云”。现在苏琳即将三岁。请根据以下要点给动物园工作人员写一封信：

1、自我介绍；

2、祝贺苏琳生日；

3、感谢工作人员；

4、索取苏琳三岁生日照。注意：

1、词数100左右；

2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3、开头语已为你写好。例文：Dear Sir/Madam,Greetings from China!I’m Li Hua, a student in Sichuan.I’ve been a panda lover since I was a child.About three years ago I was delighted to learn that Baiyun gave birth to her daughter Sulin and I’ve been watching her grow on your website,.Now she’s going to be three.I’d like to wish her a happy birthday and to expre my thanks to you for your hard work, because of which Sulin and her parents are living a happy and healthy life in the US.By the way, could I have a photo of Sulin taken on her third birthday? Thank you very much in advance.Yours truly,Li Hua

⒆【试题回放】假定你是李华，亚洲冬季运动会将在你居住的地方举办，现正在招募志愿者，你希望成为其中一员。请按要求用英文给组委会写一封信。内容应包括：1.个人情况：年龄，性别，学历 2.个人条件：英语好，爱好体育，善于交际，乐于助人，熟悉本地情况 3.承诺：提供最佳服务注意：词数100左右，开头语已为你写好；可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；生词：申请—apply (v.), application (n.)，志愿者—volunteerDear Sir / Madam:

I was quite excited when I heard the Asian Winter Games will be held in the city I live.My name is Li Hua.I am an 18-year-old boy student in a senior middle school.And I want to be a volunteer for the games.I like English and sports very much.I like making friends and I am ready to help others.I can be a good interpreter in every sports during the time.Hope the games will be a great succe.Hope I will be chosen to be one.

Yours faithfully,

Li Hua

推荐第4篇：高考英语作文备考优秀

英语作文备考优秀范文

第一篇：

金钱是一切吗？

In Money Everything? I don’t think money is everything, but we can’t do without it.Fox example, money can’t buy us happine and a good education.And for another example, money can’t buy us good health and a long life.But we can not live without money.We need it for our daily neceities such as food, clothes and transportation.What’s more, we need it to live a better life.In short, we should learn the value of money and make the most of its advantages.

第二篇：

1〃一些人喜欢住在城市，因为城市生活有许多便利。 2〃但有些人喜欢住在农村。 3〃我认为，……

Where to live —in the City or in the Country Some people like living in the city because city life has many advantages.They think there are more job opportunities in cities, life there is more colorful and meaningful than that in the country, and there are more modern conveniences in cities for people to enjoy.But some other people prefer to live in the countryside.They say life in the countryside is closer to nature and better for their health, life there is quieter and that country people are more honest than city people.I would like to live in a city when I am young to earn enough money and I live in the countryside when I am old for having a quite life.

第三篇：你叫李平，是英语系学生会主席。写一封信给王教授，请他做一个有关中国历史的报告。注意信中要包括目的、时间、日期和地点。

May 19,2002 Dear Profeor Wang: On behalf of the Student Union of the English Department, I am writing to invite you to give a lecture on Chinese history.We have planned to have such a lecture at 2:30 p• m.in Lecture Hall 419, on May 25.Looking forward to your lecture.Inform us in advance if you can not come.

Sincerely yours, Li Ping

第四篇：

男女应该平等吗？(Should Men and Women Be Equal?)

Should Men and Women Be Equal? People have different ideas about this iue, Some people say that men are superior to women in ability because men are physically stronger, do most of the hard labor in the world and hold most important positions.Other people believe that women have the ability to compete with men.There have been many famous women state leaders and great scientists in the world.We should fully carry out the principle “to each according to his work” so that the enthusiasm of both men and women for work can be fully aroused.

第五篇：

1〃在中国，自行车是最为流行的交通工具。 2〃骑自行车有许多好处。 3〃自行车的未来……

The Bicycle in China The bicycle is the most popular means of transportation in China.China is a country “on bicycle wheels”.People ride them for various purposes such as going to and from school and work.Bicycles are very cheap and easy to buy in China.There are many advantages to riding a bicycle.First, using a bicycle can greatly help reduce the air pollution in many big cities.Second, people can improve their health by riding a bicycle.The future of bicycle will be bright.In some European countries, city governments have arranged pedestrians to use “public bicycles” to travel round the city center free of charge.

第六篇：

1〃假冒伪劣商品是个严重问题。 2〃一些原因导致了这种现象。 3〃为了扫除假冒伪劣商品，……

Fake Commodities Fake and poor quality commodities are a serious problem.Many things can be faked such as soybean sauce, vinegar, bicycles, and many other things. The interests of consumers are affected, and many enterprises keep losing money because of cheap fake commodities.There are some reasons for such a phenomenon.The major one is the desire of some people to “make easy money”.These people think nothing of the law of the protection of intellectual property rights.To get rid of fake and poor quality commodities, the government should educate people to obey the law of the protection of individual intellectual property rights and not to sell any fake goods. The government should punish severely and close down all the factories producing fake goods

第七篇：

你是 Alice。你的朋友 Bonnie 很快就要到你的乡间小屋拜访，但你却要出去一会儿。留一张便条给她，告诉她食品在哪儿，告诉她一个人在屋里时应注意些什么。

May 18, 2002 Dear Bonnie: I will be away for a while. The key to the cottage is under the doormat, and the food is in the refrigerator. After entering the house, lock the door from inside at once.The cottage is far away from the nearest town, and the area is not quite safe from burglars.So I think the saying is right “Where there is precaution, there is no danger”.

Have a nice stay here.

Yours, Alice

推荐第5篇：高考英语作文预测（优秀）

2015年高考英语作文预测

一、雾霾天气：

假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Bill来信询问你家乡是否有雾霾天气，情况如何。请按下面写一封电子邮件：

1.感谢他得关心;

2.介绍情况:(1)去年以来以发生数次雾霾天气(2)人们已认识到雾霾天气的危害，正采取各种举措减少其发生(3)你自己为此做了什么或打算做什么

要求150--200词

【猜题理由】近年来我国多地雾霾天气不断增多，极大地影响了人们的健康与生活。作为环境保护的一个近期热点话题，雾霾天气符合高考考试要求，也能唤起高中生环保意识。

【参考范文】

Dear Bill,

I‟m glad to receive your letter,thank you for your caring for the weather and my health.Now I‟d like to tell you something about the smog.

Since the winter last year,the smog has occurred a lot of times.it has done great harm to our daily life.many traffic accidents happened just because of the heavy smog weather,more and more people have to go to see the doctor because the serious disease caused by the smog,quite a lot of flights have to be put off,a great number of people have to stay at home for fear of the poisonous air caused by the smog.

People have realized the great harm caused by the smog and the importance of protecting the environment.people all over the country are taking measures to reduce the smog weather.the government suggests people go to work or school with the public traffic, such as the bus and the underground.Also we should plant more trees.

According to me, I will go to school by bike or on foot, and I won‟t throw the waste anywhere.in addition, I will tell the people I meet to protect the environment as poible as they can.would you like to tell me some good ideas?i‟m looking forward

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to your reply.

Yours Sincerely

Li Hua

二、调查报告

下表是某校关于中学生双休日活动现状的一份调查，请结合表格内容，用英语写一篇120—150单词的短文，就中学生应如何过双休日发表你的看法。

学习情况

几乎都在学习16% 半天学习半天活动 24%

几乎都在做其他事情 60%

娱乐休闲

体育活动 20%

游玩和购物 40%

上网看电视 40%

去图书馆

经常 5%

偶尔 23%

几乎没有 72%

课外兴趣小组

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经常 10%

偶尔 20%

不参加 70%

【参考例文】

This form displays the result of a survey on how to spend students‟ weekend.It says that few students are glued to their schoolwork any more.Instead, they prefer to surf on the internet, watch TV, go shopping rather than involve in sports games.Library and interest groups are available but not favourable.

Personally I think, students are now freed from heavy burden but their spare time is not well arranged.They are expected to spend some time on what they learn instead of hanging out.More time should be spent not only on green field but also in the libraries to build up themselves physically and mentally.Besides, more interest groups should be established for students to widen their horizon and sharpen their brains so that they can become more creative eventually.All these will contributes a lot to a well-informed and highly qualified teenager.

In conclusion, students should be more scheduled with colorful and fruitful activities.

三、环境保护：

假如你是李华，现任你们学校的学生会主席。你将代表学生会起草一份倡议书，号召全校同学行动起来，为环保运动做出自己的努力。同时下周六学校将组织同学在全市进行环保宣传活动，征召志愿者到校学生会报名。

注意：(1)短文应该包括以上所提供的主要信息，可适当发挥;(2)词数：120左右;(3)倡议书格式以提供，不计入总词数;(4)参考词汇：征召(新人) recruit。

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Dear brothers and sisters,

_____________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

University Students' union 【猜题理由】随着经济的高速发展，社会自然环境遭受严重污染。环保意识的培养和环保工作的开展成为国人，乃至世人共同关注的热点和焦点。对环保问题而言，"只要人人献出一点爱，世界将变成美好人间 !"此话题为学生熟知，与高中生的生活实际贴近，而且具有一定的开放性，使得每个学生都能够有话可说，符合新课标理念下的命题方向。

【构思点拨】首先简要介绍环保问题之重要，号召同学们行动起来，共同参与环保活动;其次就环保发出倡议，并征召志愿者。这样既把考生限定在一定范围之内，又给予了考生相当的发挥的自由，有助于考生的作文脱颖而出。

【参考例文】

Dear brothers and sisters,

On behalf of the University Students' union , I, the Chairman of the union , am earnestly calling for your active participation in our environmental protection campaign.It is the duty of every global villager; man just can not sustain his glorious civilization without a rewarding environment, which will be poible only if man makes considerable efforts to protect the environment.

Do you cherish precio us opportunities to volunteer in our joint efforts in environmental protection? Here is a great one not to be mied by any enthusiastic youth; Right next Saturday, our university is to run a publicity campaign to advocate environmental protection acro the city.The University Students' union will be in charge of recruitment of volunteers.Let's join our hands and take action immediately.

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Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

四、地震

投票结果如下：

No1: 选香港义工黄福荣废墟中舍命救人的占43%

NO2：选为恢复灾区供电，电力职工劳累过度因公殉职的占24%

NO3：选深圳街头卖艺老人两次捐款灾区的占20%

NO4：选全校无一人伤亡的“玉树最牛中学”复课的占13%

请根据以上提示，写一篇120词左右的英语短文，如是你本人，你会选择哪一项，并说明你选择的理由。

提示词：ruins(废墟);捐赠(donation)

【参考例文】

A Strong earthquake hit YuShu and destroyed it seriously.Which event in YuShu do you think is the most moving?There is a survey about this recently.The results can be listed as follows.

43 percent of the people choose the event that HuangFurong who came from HongKong sacrificed his own life to save the students and teachers in ruins.24% support the electricity worker who died of overwork to restore the electricity supply owing to public service.20% are in favor of an old man who made a living by performing in the street in ShenZhen but donated his money to the disaster area twice.13% choose the event that the school at which nobody was injured in the earthquake resumed claes quickly and was called the proudest one.

Different people have different ideas.I will choose the event concerned with HuangFurong.It is my honor to introduce some backgrounds about him.He once participated in the rescue of WenChuan earthquake in 2008.He himself was not healthy enough.But he insisted on public service diligently without any payment for many years .Though not rich, he tried his best to help the people who need help,especially the poor.He was awarded the honorary citizen of HongKong after his death by Government of the Hong Kong Special Administrative Region.To spread his spirit,the young in Hong Kong form an organization named after him now.He is called

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Afu, according to Chinese custom and he will be remembered by all the Chinese people.In my view,Afu is a hero who can move me to tears .Only by learning from him and doing something to help others,can we make contributions to a better society.

五、哥本哈根联合国气候会议

As world leaders are in Copenhagen (哥本哈根)this month，talks about climate change are gathering steam.But is climate change the most preing threat(威胁)for mankind?

Write an eay to show your opinions on the most immediate threat for mankind.

Directions：

1.About 200 words

2.Support your position with reasoning and examples.

3.Give the eay a proper title by yourself

【参考例文】

Love Makes Beauty

With the fantastic spur both in industry and economy，the past 100 years has seen how modernization and civilization has affected mankind.Recently，Copenhagen is being a focus for its Climate Change Conference.A majority of people hold the belief that climate change is the preing threat for mankind.

However，acknowledging the great abundance of harms that the changing climate will bring，I„d say the most immediate threat is just ourselves.I always imagine a view of life filled with fresh air and various flowers swung in gentle wind.But the reality shows this is a real fantasy.With the fantastically developing industry and the rising number of personal cars，not only the air but also the water is at risk universally.For example，what used to be a pride for Ruianees was Tang River，the clean and clear mother river of Ruian.But with time going by，it was seriously polluted and gradually turned into the biggest block of development.What upsets us most is that such a situation is spreading countryside.It seems that citizens on the earth care little about their land，which directly causes further consequences.

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How can we deal with environmental problems?There is no doubt that this topic is complicated and unstable as well.But the irreplaceable way，in my thought，is love，love for the earth.It is love that makes beauty，and nothing else will do.

Some say love is a river that drowns the tender reed;some say love is a hunger，an endle，aching need.I say love is a flower，and you，are the only seed.

保持健康 How Should People Keep Health

Do you want a strong body?Let me tell you how to do.

You should eat lots of fruit and vegetables,and drink lots of boiled water.You should do exercise .You should sleep at least eight in the evening,too.but you shouldn‟t drink coffee or tea before sleep,you shouldn‟t eat too many candies.You shouln‟t work or study too hart.The way can keep your health.

Many students do not have breakfast before they go to school.It‟s a quite bad habit and it‟s bad for your health.Maybe you don‟t have time to have breakfast but you couldn‟t learn well in your claes if you don‟t eat any thing .Keeping in a good health which can help you study well is very important.

陪伴老人 How to Help Old People Live Better 要点：1.年轻人应多与老年人交谈、沟通2.老年人应理解年轻人的压力3.社会应组织相应的活动注意

例文： How to Help Old People Live Better

In the last ten years our society is more advanced.Old people also live more happily.

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But we just noticed old people„s material life.In fact old people„s mental life is more important to them.Because old people are very lonely.I have three methods for this question.Firstly, young people should communicate to old people.They should exchange their ideas.Then they can understand each other more easily.The old people may be happier.

Secondly, old people also should understand young people„s preure.They should know why the young people can„t talk with them.

Finally, society also should hold some activities for old people.To protect their life more colorful and greater!

假冒商品 Fake Commodities

要求：

1.假冒伪劣商品是个严重问题。

2.一些原因导致了这种现象。

3.为了扫除假冒伪劣商品，…… 例文：

Fake Commodities

Fake and poor quality commodities are a serious problem.Many things can be faked such as soybean sauce， vinegar， bicycles， and many other things.The interests of consumers are affected， and many enterprises keep losing money because of cheap fake commodities.

There are some reasons for such a phenomenon.The major one is the desire of some people to “make easy money”。 These people think nothing of the law of the protection of intellectual property rights.

To get rid of fake and poor quality commodities， the government should educate people to obey the law of the protection of individual intellectual property rights and not to sell any fake goods.The government should punish severely and close down all the factories producing fake goods.

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网络舆论On Events of Network Public Opinion

1.如今网络时代，网络舆论事件时有发生

2.网络舆论事件逐渐趋多的原-因

3.网络舆论事件的影响与效果

On Events of Network Public Opinion

Do you still remember the “Guo Meimei Scandal” which has aroused national fury and mistrust toward Red Cro Society of China in 2011? However, it was just a start of the influence of network public opinion of China in changing the society.Now, nearly every day or two, there will be a new event heatedly commented by Chinese netizens through online facilities.

Actually, network public opinion is the co-product of the interaction between two factors.For one thing, the highly developed internet has brought the explosion of information to everybody‟s life.Each piece of information can potentially be an “event”.For another thing, democratic consciousne has grown stronger in minds of Chinese people.Network is the democratic outlet where their free speech can be fully realized.

Now, network public opinion has become the constructive power for a better society, which has been acknowledged by all levels of governments.With overwhelming influence and maive power, it will help a lot in constructing Chinese social equity, including improving Chinese democracy, promoting anti-corruption; bring in judicial fairne, and etc.

团购 Group Purchasing

1.现在团购很流行

2.团购有很多好处，但也有不少问题

3.我的建议

Group Purchasing

In recent years, a new type of online shopping is rapidly gaining popularity — group purchasing, which was originally introduced from foreign countries but is now widely accepted all over China.People can buy not only goods, but also all kinds of services on group purchasing sites.

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Group purchasing is very convenient, and saves people a lot of money.But it also has some problems.Since group purchasing is nothing more than another form of online shopping, the nature of it is no different from other online shopping patterns.Problems that exist in online shopping also can be found in group purchasing, like deceptive advertisements or poor after-sale services.

In my opinion, we should treat group purchasing as a way of shopping and nothing more.We must be careful not to buy something we don‟t need only to follow the fashion.

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推荐第6篇：英语优秀作文(高考必备英语)

10篇英语优秀作文范文(2019高考必备英语模板)

今天分享10篇英语优秀作文范文，拿走背去吧！底下附有高考作文的评分标准以及满分作文标准及策略哦！

要注意，背下来之外要知道大致含义并默写。

你不得不逼着自己更优秀，因为身后许多贱人等着看你的笑话。所以要对自己狠一点，逼自己努力，将来的你将会感谢今天发狠的自己、恨透今天懒惰自卑的自己。

加油哦！ 1.感谢信假设你是李华，梁教授去年六月推荐你去悉尼大学深造，现在你已经被悉尼大学化学学院录取，请写封信向梁教授表示感谢。

【优秀满分范文】

Dear Profeor Liang,

I am writing to extend my gratitude to youbecause with your help I am now a student of Chemistry Department of SydneyUniversity. Last June, when I applied to become agraduate student of Sydney University, you really gave me a lot of valuablehelp.You not only wrote a recommendation（推荐） for me to Profeor Wells who worksin the Sydney University but also gave me careful and patient instructions onhow to fill the application forms and write the application letters.

It is your unreserved(无保留的） help thatenables me to obtain this splendid（极好的）opportunity of further education.For thefollowing two years I will study hard to reciprocate（回报） your sincere help andexpectations with excellent grades.

Yours truly, Zhang Ying 2.道歉信

假设你是李华，你上星期参观伦敦，当时你爸的一个朋友Rogers先生对你照顾有加，请写封信表达你对他的感谢。

【优秀满分范文】

Dear Sarah,

I am terribly sorry to tell you that I am unable toattend your birthday party next Thursday evening.That is owing to（因为） the fact that （同位语从句）my younger brother suddenly fell ill and was taken to a hospital thismorning.I have to go there immediately and take care of him.As told by thedoctor in charge, it will take around five days for him to recover and I haveasked my bo for a leave.

I really regret that I cannot go to celebrate yourbirthday personally and would mi the perfect chance of enjoying myself withall our old friends.I have chosen a small gift for you and will send it to youtomorrow to show my best wishes.Besides, please give my regards to our friendswhen you meet them at the party.

Cordially, （sincerely）

Li Hua

3.申请信

假定你是李华，将于今年七月从新星外语学校毕业。你从报纸上得知B & B公司要招聘一名英文秘书，你很感兴趣，要写一封求职信，包括下列要点： 1．年龄：182．

2.学习情况：班级前5，英语口语好

3．兴趣和特长：打字快，喜欢阅读，听音乐 4．性格特点：积极向上

注意：1．词数100左右；

2．可适当增加细节，以使行为连贯； 3．开头语和结束语己为你写好。

【优秀满分范文】

Dear Sir/ Madam,

I learned from the newspaper that your company needs an English secretary.I’m really interested in this position so I am writing to apply for it.

I’m18 years old and will graduate from Xinxing Foreign Languages School this July.I’m an excellent student, among the top 5 in my cla of 50 students.I’m good at English, especially spoken English.I often use the computer and I type very fast.In my spare time, I read a lot.Poems are my favorite.I enjoy music very much too.Being an active young person, I like sports and outdoor activities.Besides, I’m easy to get along with and I like to make friends.

I hope I may be granted（授予） an interview,when I can explain my qualifications（资格，条件） more fully.I am looking forward to your reply.

Sincerely/Yours,

LiHua

4.通知

假如你是校学生会主席。新年即将到来，为了帮助你校的外国留学生更好地了解中国文化，学生会将为他们举办一个新年晚会。请你根据以下提示，用英语向他们发出口头通知。时间：下周五6：00—8：00 地点：教学楼101室

内容：1．唱中国歌

2．比赛用筷子

3．学习包饺子

注意：1．词数不少于50；2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

【优秀满分范文】

Good afternoon, everyone.May I have your attention, please?

I’m the chairman of the Students’ Union.As the New Year is around the corner（即将到来）, weare going to hold a New Year party for you, which is intended to enable you tohave a better understanding of Chinese culture.

During the party, not only canyou sing a Chinese song, but you will also compete with each other to see howskilled you are at using chopsticks.What’s more, you’ll learn at the party howto make dumplings.Sounds great.doesn’t it? The party is scheduled（计划于） in Room 101of the Teaching Building from 6:00 p.m.to 8:00 p.m.next Friday.

Please make sure you won’t mi it.Thank you for your attention.

5.邀请信

你们班同学打算周六去爬香山。请给外教Chris写一封英文信，邀请他参加此次活动。具体内容如下：

1.时间：8am—5 pm； 2.集合地点：校门口； 3.交通工具：公交车；

4.携带物品：雨具，午餐，相机。注意：1.词数不少于50；

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

【优秀满分范文】

Dear Chris，

I’m writing to tell you that we intend to climb the Fragrant Hill this Saturday and I sincerely invite you to go with us on behalf of our cla.

We are supposed togather at the school gate and set out at 8:00 am sharp.The bus will serve asour transportation.We will climb to the top of the hill and enjoy our picniclunch there, so please take some food with you as lunch.At about 2:00 pm.wewill go down the hill along another path and return to our school at about5.00pm.You may equip yourself with a camera to record the beautiful sceneryand an umbrella or a raincoat is also neceary in case you are caught in arain.Please spare some time to join us.

Your participation can surely addcolor to our trip and we are all looking forward to your involvement.

Yours, Joe

6.建议信

假定你是李华，你所喜爱的Global Mirror周报创刊五周年之际征集读者意见．请你依据以下内容给主编写封信，内容主要包括： 1．说明你是该报的忠实读者

2．说明该报优点：1)兼顾国内外新闻

2)介绍名人成功故事

3．提出建议：

刊登指导英语学习的文章

注意：1．词数100左右，开头语己为你写好；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

【优秀满分范文】

Dear Editor-in-Chief,

Congratulations on the 5th anniversary of Global Mirror!

I’m a regular reader of your newspaper.I like it so much that I hardly mi any copy.

There are many advantages of Global Mirror.Firstly, Global Mirror covers both national and international news.By simply turning the pages, I can know all important things that have happened both home and abroad.Besides, the succe stories of world-famous people are also attractive to me, which help me learn a lot from them.In a word, thanks to Global Mirror, we are well-informed and keep up with the changing world.

As a young student, I wish that I can be a master of English language.Therefore, I suggest that Global Mirror provide articles about English learning for us.Finally, I hope that Global Mirror will become more and more popular.Thank you for your time!

Sincerely yours,

Li Hua

7.求助信

假设你是李华，你的美国朋友Tom上个月来到北京学习。七月份你将去北京参加暑期中学生英语演讲比赛 (speech contest)，你在资料搜集、语言运用等方面遇到了困难。请根据以下要点给Tom写一封电子邮件： 1.询问Tom的生活和学习情况； 2.谈谈你的困难并请Tom帮忙； 3.告诉Tom你打算赛后去看他。注意:

1.词数:120—150；

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

【优秀满分范文】

Dear Tom，

How is it going these days? I keep wondering how you feel about your school life in Beijing.Have you got used to the life in China? Are you enjoying your life? I hope you are.

Let me tell you a piece of good news: I’m going to take part in an English speech contest of middle school students in July in the coming summer vacation.So I’m busy preparing for it.But now I have some difficulty in collecting useful information and using proper English word to expre my thoughts.Besides, I really want to improve my spoken English, especially the pronunciation and intonation（语调）.Of course, as a native English speaker, you can give me some suggestions.

In addition, I’m going to visit you after the contest.I’m sure we will have a wonderful time together in Beijing! I can hardly wait to see you! I am looking forward to your early reply.

Yours, Li Hua

8.投诉信

你是李华，两周前你从网上一套书虫系列读物（BookwormSeries）昨天才到货，且包装破损，数量不足。请就此向网店客服写邮件投诉。要点如下： 1.

介绍购物情况 2.

反映存在问题 3.

提出解决方案注意：

词数100词左右

可适当增加细节，使行文连贯 3.

开头结尾已给出，不计入总词可能用到的生词：投诉complaint n.

【优秀满分范文】

To whom it may concern,

I am one of your customers(顾客).I ordered（订购）a set of(一套) Bookworm Series on your website two weeks ago, but I didn’t receive them until yesterday.And much to my disappointment, thebooks were so poorly packed up that the cover of one book was torn.To makematters worse, it is not a complete set, as I found one book miing.

I am sorry to have received such poor service, and I believe I have every rightto ask you to deal with this problem.I hope that you either return my money ordeliver a new set of books to me.Besides, I’d like to be informed of theproce of your dealing with my complaint.

Lookingforward to your reply.

Sincerely,

Li Hua

9.祝贺信

假如你是李华，你的好友魏芳在中学生英语演讲比赛中荣获一等奖。请你根据以下内容，给她写一封祝贺信。

内容包括：1.表达你的愉悦心情；2.向她表示祝贺； 3.请她介绍成功的经验。

注意：1.词数100左右； 2.开头和结尾已为你写好，但不计入总词数；3.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

参考词汇：英语演讲比赛 the English Speech Contest

【优秀满分范文】

Dear Wei Fang,

I hear that you have won first prize in the English Speech Contest of Middle School Students, so I’m writing to give my sincere congratulations.

You don’t know how excited I was when I heard the good news.As your best friend, I am proud of you! Your pronunciation and fluent English left me with deep impreion.It came as no surprise to me that you won the contest.Could you share with me how you improve your spoken English? Your experience will be of great help to me in learning.

I will be grateful if you can write me back and give me your advice.I am looking forward to your early reply.

Yours, Li Hua

10.求职信

假如你是李华，从报纸上看到中老年英语培训机构Mid．Senior ESCH面向高中毕业生招聘暑期兼职辅导员，负责学员课间服务事项。请根据下面的广告内容用英语写一份求职信。

ASSISITANTS WANTED

Valuable chances are open for high school graduates who are good at English．Their work is to tend the senior students during the break．

Requirements attached：1．Good at English．2．Experienced priority．

注意：1．短文词数100字左右；2．不能使用真实姓名和学校名称；

【优秀满分范文】

Dear Director:

I’d like to apply for the post of aistant which was advertised in the newspaper.I found this position quite appealing to me.

I’ve just graduated from high school.Luckily I am good at English and I can speak English fluently.In addition, I have previous experience.During my stay in middle school, I used to be a volunteer and looked after the old people in a nursing home on weekends.

In short, I believe my experience and fluent oral English will be a great help for me in doing the work.I’m available for interview at any time.It would be appreciated if I can get your offer.

高考作文评分标准

第五档(很好)：(21-25分)

1.完全完成了试题规定的任务;

2.覆盖所有内容要点;

3.应用了较多的语法结构和词汇;

4.语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致;具备较强的语言运用能力;

5.有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑;6.完全达到了预期的写作目的。

第四档(好)：(16-20分)

1.完全完成了试题规定的任务;

2.虽漏掉

1、2个次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容;

3.应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求;

4.语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致;

5.应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑;

6.达到了预期的写作目的。

第三档(适当)：(11-15分)

1.基本完成了试题规定的任务;

2.虽漏掉一些内容，但覆盖所有主要内容;

3.应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求;

4.有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解;

5.应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文内容连贯;

6.整体而言，基本达到了预期的写作目的。

第二档(较差)：(6-10分)

1.未恰当完成试题规定的任务;

2.漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容，写了一些无关内容;

3.语法结构单调、词汇项目有限;

4.有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响了对写作内容的理解;

5.较少使用语句间的连接成分，内容缺少连贯性;

6.信息未能清楚地传达给读者。

第一档(差)：(1-5分)

1.未完成试题规定的任务;

2.明显遗漏主要内容，写了一些无关内容，原因可能是未理解试题要求;

3.语法结构单调、词汇项目有限;

4.较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响对写作内容的理解;

5.缺乏语句间的连接成分，内容不连贯;

6.信息未能传达给读者。

不得分：(0分)未能传达给读者任何信息：内容太少，无法评判;写的内容均与所要求内容无关或所写内容无法看清。

高考作文满分标准及策略

一、满分要求

1.语篇信息齐全;

2.丰富的句式表达;

3.注意句与句之间的连贯性;

4.语句流畅自然，层次清楚;

5.应用较高级词汇;

6.书面整洁。

二、写作策略

1.“五审”定调子写作时，要养成在审题上形成一种定向思维的习惯，做到“五审”：

一审体裁。根据作文材料要求确定文章体裁。然后建立相应体裁的行文模式。我们常用的体裁有书信、日记、通知、发言稿、说明文、记叙文、议论文等。

二审人称。文章中人称选择恰当对表达文章的基本思想、描述事物及情节都很有帮助。应特别注意英文中人称的阴阳是很容易被忽视的。

三审时态。高考评分中，谓语动词形式是被看重的，一篇文章如果多处出现谓语动词错误，就要降等给分。所以我们在审题时要给文章的时态定个位，即过去时、现在时或将来时。再以这个定为时态基础，按需要使用相应时态。

四审要点。高考评卷中，作文的大块得分集中在文章的要点和要点发挥上，一般来说，英语高考作文有4-6个要点，考生在读题时要边读边列出要点并写出要点中的关键词，这样既能保证要点齐全又能节省时间。

五审层次。层次分明，脉络清晰，让读者一目了然。记叙文大多数以人物活动、时间顺序或事情发展过程为线索;说明文大多以时间、空间为线索;议论文的写作一般按先总后分或先分后总的顺序。

2.“韵色”得高分

培养学生在保证文体正确、要点齐全、层次分明的基础上，恰当运用一些漂亮的句式、关联词、插入语和谚语等，能使文章更上档次。

三、注意事项

1.提炼要点

(1)总结归纳要点：不是所有内容都要写出来，而是抓住其中的关键要点、衔接要点!

(2)理顺要点：将提炼的要点按逻辑关系(如时间关系、因果关系、转折关系等)重新安排，这样整篇文章看起来就整体有序，流畅自然，更加容易打动评分老师，从而使作文分数提升一档。

2.遣词造句

(1)遣词

①不出现语言错误;②注意词语和短语搭配使用;③适度使用加分词汇;④避免词语重复，以加分词句：高级词、同义词、短语等替代。

(2)造句 ①表达意思要清楚无误：具体化，细节化;②多种表达方式表达相同含义;③避免句式单调(简单句、并列句、复合句等适度调整);④可以用形象思维来表达(比如说你朗读得“很好听”，用“抑扬顿挫”来表达就是形象思维)。

3.谋篇布局

(1)构思文章提纲：根据题目的要点，安排好段落和主次关系。要形成良好的分段意识，写作分段是必须要进行的(2至4段为佳)，这样显得文章不会拥挤并且层次分明。在行文意识上，要注意突出要点。

(2)分段注意详略搭配、注意连贯;

(3)行文时多用关联词、引导词，把文章句子通过各种关系整合起来，达到起承转合、运用自如的目的，从而获取高分;

(4)具体的连接关系有：并列关系、递进关系、因果关系、转折关系、让步关系、列举关系、条件关系、举例关系、时间关系等。

推荐第7篇：高考英语作文小结[优秀]

高考英语作文小结

1 过渡词

首先类：first of all , for one thing, firstly, in the first place, on the one hand

其次类：what’s more , for another, in addition, secondly, at the same time, meanwhile, on the other hand, furthermore

总结类: in conclusion, finally, at last, last but not least, in a word

2 举例

For example,………/for instance,……/another case is that…..

3 个人观点的总结

As far as I am concerned ,……

For my point of view,…….

In my person opinion,……

4 对于漫画类作文，描述完图片后过渡句

Obviously, the

推荐第8篇：高考英语作文英语美文[优秀]

第1篇

这次我请客！

It’s on me! Thank you for inviting me to eat.it’s my treat this time.please let me pay the bill.you can treat me next time we eat.it has been my dream to meet you.I really enjoyed this meal.I really enjoyed speaking with you.Thank you for your time.we should meet every week and eat dinner together.

谢谢你请我吃饭。这次我请客。请让我来买单，下次我们吃饭你在请吧。我做梦都想见你。这顿饭真的吃的很开心。和你谈话我觉得很惬意。谢谢你花时间来陪我。我们应该每周见面，在一起吃饭。

第2篇

英语和汉语

Chinese and English

Ladies and Gentlemen, today I want to talk about the differences between English and Chinese.English is very different from Chinese.The sounds are different, the grammar is different, and the writing is totally different, it’s very difficult to speak English well.If you want to speak English well, you must forget about the differences.Just practice correct sentences until you’re used to them.The more sentences you can blurt out,the better you can expre yourself.If you believe in yourself and practice crazily every day, you will make it.you will conquer English.Chinese is the most difficult language in the world.If you can speak Chinese, you can speak English .

女士们，先生们，今天我想谈谈英文和中文之间的差异。英文和中文有很大的区别：不同的发音，语法也是不同的，写作更是完全不同，想说出流利的英语是比较难哟。如果你想说流利的英语，你必须忘记的差异。只要操练正确的句子，直到你习惯了。您可以脱口而出的句子越多，你就越能表达自己。如果你相信自己，每天疯狂的操练的话，你一定可以做到。你会征服英语。中文是世界上最困难的语言。如果你能讲中文，你会讲英语。

第3篇如何记单词 Memorizing Words

Many people tell me that it is very hard to remember new words.They complain that no matter how hard they try to memorize new words,they always forger them.The best way to remember new words is to practice them every day.Practice them in sentences and paragraphs.Listen to tapes and read along every day .Otherwise you will forger easily.If you need my help, please call me, we’re friends,friends help each other,let’s conquer new words together.

很多人告诉我记住新单词非常的困难。他们抱怨说无论他们怎样辛苦的去记忆新单词，总是会忘记。记住生词最佳的方式每天将他们练习。实践他们在句子和段并且每天实践他们。听磁带并且每天读。否则您将容易忘记，如果您需要我的帮助，请告诉我，我们是朋友，朋友互相帮助，让我们一起征服生词吧。

第4篇我的一家人

People in my Family

Ladies and gentlemen , let me tell you a little bit about my family.I have a very happy family .my dad is a great man.He has a fantastic job.My mom is a wonderful woman.she has many outstanding talents.My family loves me.My family supports me in good times and bad times.They help me for many good habits .My mom and dad always tell me:If I want to succeed, I need to have good habits.we practice speaking English together every morning.We have dinner together every morning.We have dinner together every night.We talk about our problems.We share our joys.We exercise together.We relax together.The atmosphere in my family is fantastic.

女士们先生们，让我稍微告诉您关于我的家庭。我有一个非常愉快的家庭。我的爸爸是一个了不起的人。他有一个很棒的工作。我的妈妈是一个美妙的妇女。她又许多卓著的天分。我的家人爱我。我的家人和我患难与共。他们帮助我养成许多好习惯。我的妈妈和爸爸总是告诉我：如果我想要成功，我需要有好的习惯。我们每天早晨一起练习讲英语。我们每晚一起共进晚餐，我们谈论我们的问题。我们分享我们的喜悦。我们一起练习。我们一起休息。在我家的气氛是意想不到的。

第5篇我的首次美国之行

My First Trip to America Ladies and Gentlemen, I just got back from America yesterday.This was my first visit to America，I’d like to say a few words about my first trip.Everything was new and fresh.I got up early to exercise in the park .I visited many interesting places.I met a lot of interesting people.I felt a little nervous, but I still talked to people.They were very friendly and helpful.I had a great first impreion of American people.This trip was the first time I had to use English in real life.M y English was not perfect, but I survived.The more I used English, the easier it became.I’m still working very hard on my English.You know, practice makes perfect.Next time I go to America, I won’t feel nervous at all.女士们，先生们，我昨天刚从美国回来。这是我第一次访问美国。我想谈谈我的第一次旅行，一切都是新鲜的。我早上起床后就去公园锻炼。我参观了很多有趣的地方。我遇到了很多有趣的人。我感觉有点紧张，但我仍然和别人交谈。他们都非常友好，乐于助人。我对美国人的第一印象很好。此行是我第一次在现实生活中运用英语。我的英语并不完美，但我挺过来了，用得多了就觉得容易了。我还是非常努力学习英语。你知道，熟能生巧。下一次我去美国，我就不会感到紧张了.

第6篇

母亲节快乐

Happy Mother’s Day Ladies and gentlemen, fathers and mothers have different roles.Here is funny joke to wish you a happy Mother’s Day.Forget about the cooking, forget about the cleaning,forget about the laundry…Just pretend you’’re Dad! Happy Motther’s day!

女士们，先生们，父亲和母亲有不同的角色。谨以此有趣的笑话祝你们母亲节快乐。忘掉烹饪，忘记打扫，忘记洗衣服…就假装你是爸爸！母亲节快乐

第7篇中美关系Sino-US RalationsLadies and Gentlemen, America is a great country.China is a great country.China and America have a long history togegher.Now is the right time to build an even closer and stronger relationship.China is inviting more and more experts from America to share their knowledge.At the same time, America is welcoming more and more talented Chinese to study and work in America.Both countries can gain a great deal from each other.America and china should keep working together to build a peaceful and bright future.thank you.

女士们，先生们，美国是一个伟大的国家。中国是一个伟大的国家。中国和美国的合作已经有着悠久的历史。现在是去建立一个更加紧密关系的时候了。中国邀请越来越多的来自美国的专家来分享他们的知识。同时，美国欢迎越来越多的杰出的中国人在美国学习和工作。两国能够从对方那里得到利益。美国和中国应该共同努力建立一个和平而更美好的未来。谢谢你。

第8篇迎接问题和挑战

Face problems and Challenges Ladies and Gentlemen , I′m honored to have this opportunity to talk to you .Solving problems is the top priority for government officials.We′re not afraid of problems.We consider problems to be challenges.We have lots of confidence in our ability to solve any problem.With your support and understanding, we can do a great job together.Thank you for your cooperation.If you have any problems, stop by our office.女士们，先生们，我很荣幸有这个机会在这里演讲。解决问题，是政府官员的首要任务。我们不害怕问题。我们把问题当作挑战。我们对解决问题有足够的信心。有了你们的支持和理解，我们可以在一起做很多的工作。谢谢你们的合作。如果您有任何问题，请到我们的办室来。

第9篇我要改变我的生活！ I Want to Change My Life! I work extremely hard every day, but I’m very tired.I need to work smarter,not harder.I must find better ways to do my job,I must find more time to enjoy life.I know hard work is a part of everybody’s life.But I work too hard.My hard work goes too far.My hard work is reining my health.Myhard work is killing me.Other people have time for fun,going to bars and going to parties. All I do is get in my car and go to work every day.This life is too hard.I need to make a fresh start.我每天都在非常努力地工作，但我很疲倦。我需要更有条理地工作，而不是更辛苦。我必须找到更好的方式来做好自己的工作。我必须找到更多的时间来享受生活。我知道辛勤工作是每个人生活的一部分。但我的工作太辛苦。我的辛勤工作过度了。我的辛勤工作会伤害到我的健康。我的辛勤工作会损害我的生命。其他人有娱乐的时间，去酒吧活参加派对。我所要做的就是钻进我的车去上班。这种生活太辛苦了。我需要改变我的生活，重新开始。

第10篇如何负责 How to Take Responsibility Ladies and Gentlemen, tonight I am going to talk about taking responsibility.It’s always hard to admit something is your fault.In fact, people rarely say, It’s all my fault.People always make excuses or say it is somebody else’s fault.It is hard to solve problems because people like to blame others.The next time you make a mistake, take responsibility! Four little words can make a big difference.Try saying, “It’s all my fault.”

女士们，先生们，今晚我想谈谈负责的问题。通常承认自己犯错误是很难的事情，事实上，人们很少说：“都是我的错。”人们总是找借口或者说是别人的错。这样很难解决问题，因为人们喜欢责备别人，下次你再犯错误，要勇敢地负起责任！寥寥数语就可以有很大的不同，试着说：“都是我的错。”

推荐第9篇：高考英语作文优秀（材料）

高考英语作文优秀范文：信心与希望

话题写作

有关“信心与希望”话题

例：

1、生活中困难不可避免，面对困难需要信心…

2、试举一例说明信心在学习(考试、生活等)方面的作用…

3、你对困难的态度…

It is well-known that we exist in a dynamic world with various difficulties.When we are faced with them, nothing is more important than hope and self-confidence.With confidence, we can find sometimes the question is not as “huge”as we imagine.

Take most of us for example, the entrance exam to college seems to be a horrible monster.Accordingly, some people give up, some persist.In my eyes, with confidence, right aement of the difficulties, as well as full preparation, try and exert your strength, and then we will overcome all problems and challenges.On the whole, I believe we youngsters should face the difficulties in right manner.And nothing is impoible, brave it out and just do it!

高考英语作文优秀范文：网络话题作文

话题写作有关“网络”话题

例1：报纸和网站是当今两大主要媒体。请根据下表内容，以 “Newspapers and Websites” 为题，用英语写一篇短文，简要介绍这两种媒体的优缺点。

报纸

1.传统媒体，天天更新，信息可靠 2.携带方便，随时随地可以阅读 3.仅有文字和图片网站

1.新兴媒体，信息更新速度快 2.依赖于电脑及互联网

3.包含文字、图片、音频和视频注意：

1.短文必须包括表中所有内容，可以适当发挥;2.词数：100-120

3.参考词汇：更新update;音频audio;视频video

Newspapers and Websites

Newspapers and websites are two major new media in the world today, both of which can provide us with lots of news and information.But they’re different in some ways.

Newspapers enjoy a longer history and often come out daily with more reliable news and information.They can be carried and read almost anywhere you like.So many people like reading them.But they can only contain texts and photos.

On the other hand, websites are quite new and popular, especially among young people.Websites have not only texts with pictures but also audios and videos, which makes stories more interesting.What’s more, they are updated from time to time.So the latest news is always seen on websites instead of in newspapers.But it is not quite convenient for people without a computer connected with the Internet to get information from websites.例2：目前，一些诸如GG, MM, Xia Mi 等网络语言在青少年中极为盛行，并且出现在家庭作业报告，甚至全国入学考试的作文中。请你以 “Should Internet Slang Be Prohibited (禁止)?”为题，根据下表内容用英语写一篇短文，并谈谈你自己的看法。

一些同学认为网络语言生动、时尚网络语言充满幽默与智慧使网上聊天更快捷

另一些同学认为网络语言缺乏思想性没有被大部分人理解、接受过多使用使人不解，甚至误解? 你的看法注意：

1.短文开头已经给出，不计入总词数;

2.词数：100左右 3.参考词汇：生动的vivid;智慧intelligence Should Internet Slang Be Prohibited?

At present, Internet Slang, such as “GG, MM, Xia Mi”， has become popular among the teenagers.There are different opinions on Internet Slang.Some students think Internet Slang is vivid, fashionable and full of humor and intelligence.Besides, it makes chatting on the Internet quicker.

However, some other students think Internet Slang lacks depth of thought and is too simple.Also, it is hard to understand and not accepted by most people.The words sometimes might make people confused, even resulting in misunderstanding.

Every coin has two sides.In my opinion, living in the Information Age, if we don’t know the Internet Slang, we seem to fall behind the times.It will be OK as long as these terms are used correctly in proper situations.例3：假如你是李华，最近你对本班的60名同学(男女各半)进行了上网目的的调查，结果见下表。请你用英语给某报社写一篇报道，反映你调查的内容，以引起公众的关注。

注意：

1.报道应包括图表中的所有内容;

2.叙述中要适当增加个人观点，对学生上网情况进行评论，并提出建议;3.词数：100左右;

4.参考词汇：做调查make a survey

Dear editor,

I have recently made a survey among 30 boys and 30 girls in our cla about their purpose(s) of getting on the Internet.The girls’ favorite is chatting, but few boys like it.What boys like to do most is playing games and the girls also like them.Both boys and girls like to read news or send e-mails on the Internet.Maybe they think it’s the most convenient way to get information or keep in touch with friends.As for studying, the numbers of boys and girls are equal, but altogether only several of them will use the Internet as a tool to study.

高考英语作文优秀范文：文明礼仪话题作文

话题写作

有关“文明礼仪”话题例1：

请根据下列提示用英语在校园网站上报道该校即将举行的一次主题演讲活动。主题：文明校园，我的责任

时间：本周六上午

地点：学校操场演讲者：各年级演讲前两名获胜者

出席人员：全体师生

主要内容：不乱扔废弃物，保持校园清洁; 爱护花草、树木，让校园充满绿色; 不追逐打闹，文明举止;

关爱他人，让校园充满爱。参考词汇：文明civilize

There will be a speech on our school playground this Saturday afternoon, whose theme is “To civilize schoolyard is my responsibility”.All the teachers and students are required to attend.In the activity, the first two winners in each grade will give such valuable advice as follows: we should not litter anywhere in order to keep our campus clean; we should love flowers, gra and trees so that everyone can enjoy the greenne; we should behave well instead of running after one another, quarreling and fighting noisily; we should care for others so that our school will be full of love.We believe our school will become more and more beautiful and peaceful.

例2：

假设你是李明，最近你校的一份英语报纸正在校园出现的“涂鸦”现象开展讨论。请你根据以下要点写一封信给报纸编辑，发表你的看法。

(1)“涂鸦”丑陋难看。 (2)公共建筑物不是表达观点、感情的地方。 (3)禁止“涂鸦”。参考词汇：graffiti 涂鸦，(在墙上的)乱涂乱写 vandalism 对公共财物的有意破坏 Dear Editor,

Recently graffiti has become more noticeable in my college.I feel quite annoyed at them, especially when some of my clamates praise them as a kind of so-called art.Confronted with this impolite phenomenon, I can’t help asking myself: what is wrong with today’s teenagers?

In my opinion, graffiti is a form of vandalism.They are a me and are ugly to look at.Meanwhile, walls are public places, and they should not be used to expre personal views and feelings.

I really think vandalism should be stopped, and those who refuse to stop this bad practice should be punished.We should clear away these ugly expreions and drawings so that our college may return to its true self--a clean, quiet place for study, teaching and research.

高考英语作文优秀范文：人与事件话题作文

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有关“人与事件”话题

例1：The Most Unforgettable Person I Ever knew

(1)我生活中最难以忘怀的人是……

(2)为什么他(或她)一直在我心中

(3)结论

In my life I have met many people who are really worth my recalling.But perhaps the most unforgettable person I ever knew is my Chinese language teacher.

What frequently brings back memories of my school teacher is his special qualities.First of all, I was attracted by his lively wit.I remember we always long for his cla with great eagerne because his lecture were humorously delivered, never failing to provoke loud laughs.Second, he gave us the greatest gift a teacher can offer-- an awakening of a paion for learning.He not only led us to an appreciation of the beauty and perfection of Chinese and literature, but also aroused our great interest in exploring something deeper in this field.Finally, I was deeply impreed by the respect he showed for us, for he treated us like friends rather than students.Although it is nearly 10 years since I attended his last cla, he is the talk of our old clamates, and I know part of him has already stayed in my heart.

例2：

A Leon from My Parents

Parents are your first teachers.Write a short eay to describe one of instructive leons you once learned from your parents, including：

(1)描述一件有教育意义的事情;

(2)它对你的影响。

A distance of 500 miles separates my college from my hometown, an old city, where my parents have been living, but my heart has never been away for a single step, because the leon from them will be a gift of lifetime.When I was still 15, the laid-offs, or rather untimely retirements, of both my Mum and dad, arrived by far earlier than ever expected.Moreover, it could be hardly imagined how much their careers meant to them other than earning money.

Neverthele, it would be not long before they managed to get over such a blow.They thus underwent all kinds of odd jobs they could run into, be they dirty or painstaking.That way with sufficient money for my tuition fee and living expenses I went through my three academic years.

Now one of them is getting weaker and both older, but the leon that God only helps those who help themselves they taught me will endure in my mind despite the paage of time.

高考英语作文优秀范文：健康幸福话题作文

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有关“财富、健康、幸福”话题

例1：根据下面提示，写一篇《财富与快乐》的短文。

(1)一些人认为财富能带来快乐。

(2)另一些人认为钱多了不是一件好事。 (3)提出自己的看法。注意：单词数120个左右。 Wealth and Happine

Some people think wealth can bring happine to them.It is true that most of them try to acquire wealth by means of honest labor.They work hard and overcome many difficulties.After doing this, they feel very happy and pleased.Even their spending money is a kind of happine。

But some people believe wealth can’t bring them happine.For example, when one gets a fortune, the family members will come from different parts of the country and try to share the wealth with him.And afterwards, they will quarrel with one another, trying to share more.And sometimes even appear bloody fight and killing.What a terrible result!

In my opinion, I think there is no doubt that wealth brings happine, especially in the modern society.If you have money you can lead a comfortable and colorful life.But we should take a proper attitude towards wealth.Remember： money is not everything。

例2：

最近，你班同学展开了一场讨论，主题是：Wealth & Health。请你根据下表提供的信息，写一篇100词左右的文章，介绍一下你们讨论的情况。

一些人认为财富更重要一些人认为健康更重要 1.没有钱万万不行2.想办法多挣钱 1.健康是本钱

2.要爱惜身体

个人看法：更看重健康。身体不好，钱再多也无济于事。

Wealth & Health

Which is more important, wealth or health? Different people have different opinions.

Some people prefer wealth, holding that money can not bring everything, but without it, one can do nothing.In order to accumulate more money they can do anything.However, other people regard health as more important.Once health is lost, it is no use having a lot of money.

As far as I am concerned, I love wealth, but I value health more.Everybody wants to live a happy life.So they try their best to earn money which can ensure they lead a comfortable life, but if happine and comfort are achieved at the cost of their health, how can they be happy? Without health money becomes meaningle.In my opinion, no one agrees that a wealthy person without good health can be happy.So, just do our best to keep healthy.

高考英语作文优秀范文：诚实诚信话题作文

有关“诚实、诚信”话题

例：

1、生活中确实存在不讲诚信的现象…

2、举一例说明(如，有毒奶粉、冒名顶替上大学、考试作弊等)…

3、讲求诚信的意义…

Almost all of us heard the story “Here Comes the Wolf” when we were little kids.What we can learn from the story is that we must be honest.However, there’re lots of phenomena of dishonesty nowadays.

Being dishonest does great harm not only to other people but also to yourself.Take the case of fake milk powder for example.After drinking this kind of milk, the babies had big heads while their legs and arms were still thin, which badly affected their health.To our great relief, the producers got accused and punished for all the serious consequences in the end.

Having the reputation of being honest and reliable will make other people trust you, which will provide you many benefits and give you opportunities that others may not get.Being honest, you will find it easier to cooperate with others and people will be friendly to you and support you.In a sense, if life is a longjourney, honesty will be the backpack that should be taken along all the way.

Let’s pick up our “backpack”—honesty, and start the wonderful journey!

高考英语作文优秀范文：信心与希望

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有关“信心与希望”话题

例：

1、生活中困难不可避免，面对困难需要信心…

2、试举一例说明信心在学习(考试、生活等)方面的作用…

3、你对困难的态度…

高考英语作文优秀范文：跨文化话题作文

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有关“跨文化”话题

例：假设你叫李华，你的外国朋友John想了解中国的春节，请根据以下提纲，给他写一封短信：

1、春节在中国人中的地位

2、春节前，人们……

3、春节期间，人们……

参考词汇：对联couplet 爆竹firecracker Dear John,

How time flies! Four moths have paed since we saw each other last time.I cannot helpbut mi you.You asked me about Chinese Spring Festival.Now I would like to tell yousomething about it.The Spring Festival is a Chinese traditional festival.It is the most important and enjoyable one.A few days before the festival, houses are cleaned and red couplets are put up on the doors of every household.They are said to frighten away the ghosts.On that day, people are dreed up.Firecrackers ring out in the air, which adds to the atmosphere of the festival.People after a year’s hard work begin to relax and visit one another.Presents and dinners are given to celebrate the happy reunion of friends and relatives.Families get together.They have jiaozi and enjoy the New Year TV show.Customs may vary from place to place, but the same happy atmosphere is to be found everywhere in the country.

Now, I hope you have some idea of Chinese Spring Festival.Best wishes,

Yours, Li Hu

高考英语作文优秀范文：志愿者话题作文

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有关“志愿者”话题

例1：假设你是健康俱乐部的一位志愿者，根据以下要点，写一篇短文，帮助广大市民更好地了解和预防H1N1流感： (1)该流感已在许多国家爆发，病例每天持续增多;

(2)该流感与其他季节性流感传播方式一样，通过咳嗽、喷嚏等在人群中传播; (3)建议：不随便当众咳嗽、打喷嚏，经常洗手，生病时在家休息……

As we know, a growing outbreak of H1N1 flu has been sparked in many countries.An increasing number of cases are being reported every day。

It’s thought that H1N1 flu spreads in the same way that regular seasonal influenza viruses do, that is, spreading from person-to-person, mainly through the coughs and sneezes of people who are sick with the virus。 Faced with this severe disease, here are some everyday measures we should take to stay healthy.First, cover your nose and mouth with a tiue when you cough or sneeze.Wash your hands often with soap and water, especially after you cough or sneeze.Avoid touching your eyes, nose or mouth.Germs spread that way.If you get sick, stay home from work or school and limit contact with others to keep from infecting them。

Finally, H1N1 flu is not a terribly deadly disease, which is curable.So, don’t be nervous and just keep calm as usual。

例2：

你所在的城市即将举办国际贸易博览会。有关部门现向全社会招聘志愿者。要求： (1)具有为国际友人服务的热情;

(2)掌握丰富的文化知识，既是服务人员，也是文化的使者; (3)具有流利的英语表达能力，能做好沟通工作。

假如你叫李华，请根据以上要求，写一封想作博览会志愿者的申请信。要求：字迹工整，100词左右。开头已写好，不计入总词数。生词：国际贸易博览会 the International Trade Exposition Dear Sir or Madam：

Thank you for taking your time to read my letter.As the coming of the International Trade Exposition, I’d like very much to be a volunteer。

All our citizens are hosts for this special event.Above all, I promise I should endeavor to serve with enthusiasm our distinguished guests from all over the world.Besides, I have a rich knowledge about Chinese history, so I will be not only a servant but also a carrier for our splendid culture.What’s more, as we all know, English as an international language, will play an important role in communication during the Exposition, and I am good at it.I can expre myself fluently and clearly in English。

To sum up, I believe I can be a qualified volunteer.I will value it and do all I can if I could be accepted to be one。

Yours, Li Hua

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学生在做这类题时，必须根据画面，恰当地运用所学的词句表达一个完整的故事。要审清题意，看懂画面所表达的意思，紧扣主题。防止因对画面的错误理解而走题。有些画面上附有提示，注意仔细参阅，正确使用。

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你有过不顺利的一天吗？下面四幅图就是有关张红不顺利的一天。

A Bad Day

I had a very bad day yesterday.Everything went wrong.In the morning, my alarm clock didn\'t ring.So I woke up one hour late.I was in such a hurry that I burned my hand when I was making breakfast.Then I ran out of the house to catch the 8:30 bus, but of course I mied it.I was very unhappy because my teacher gets angry if anyone is late for cla.I ran three miles to the school

only

discover that it was Sunday.

练习

①初春的一天，你们班组织了一次保护环境、清理废弃物的活动。请用英语把图中的事写成日记。

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(字数：100左右)

写作要点：

a．骑车出发

b．到公园

c．捡垃圾

d．树标牌

e．向行人宣传

f．回家

g．感想

用词达意：

树标牌及内容的多种表达，向行人宣传。参考词语出发tostart out 捡垃圾to collect the rubbish 贴通知to put up notice 保护环境to protect the environment ②下列6幅画描述你在4月8日那天的情况，用日记的方式给予表达。(字数：120左右)提示：

a．准备上学；

b．发现一建筑物着火；

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c．报火警。

参考词语

急急忙忙in a hurry 给消防警打电话

to phone to the fire police station 扑灭to put out 英雄行为heroic deed ③下面一组图是Tom上学的路上所见到的不良现象，如常听人吵架生气。请你根据下面提示的内容写一篇题为“礼貌”的短文。(字数：100左右) 提示：

a．未经允许拿走他人东西；

b．因踩了人家的脚，不道歉，发生口角； c．不敲门进入他人房间。

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相处好to get along well with„ 取得允许to ask for permiion 踩脚to step on one\'s foot 敲门to knock at the door 坏行为rude behavior 坏脾气bad temper 因„„争吵to quarrel about„

④在“八一”建军节前夕，某英文杂志征集有关“军爱民”的故事，请按下列图画写一篇短文。(字数：120左右) 提示：

两位老人均80岁。住北京东城区，20年前失去了惟一的女儿。军人李民从1980年至今关心照料老人，传为佳话。

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参考词语夫妻俩a couple 帮忙to give„a hand 照料to take care of 高度评价to praise highly for„

⑤请根据以下6幅图的内容写一篇题为“An Interesting Book”的短文。(字数：100左右) 提示：

要开饭了，等儿子来开饭，儿子在看一本书，把儿子喊来了，父亲又不在饭桌上，干什么去了呢？

参考词语

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坐在地上to sit on the floor 不情愿unwilling 把„„留在„„ to leave„ 吃惊to one\'s surprise 沉浸在„„中to lose oneself in„

⑥请根据下面3幅画的内容写一篇短文。(字数：100左右) 提示：

你班响应号召3月12日组织全班同学参加植树。

参考词语

植树to plant trees 组织to be organized 挖洞to dig holes 使„„直to keep„straight ⑦请根据下面6幅画的内容写一篇日记。(字数：120左右) 提示：

事情发生在一家服装店，我买了一件衣服，不合适要退换，服务员不肯，两人争吵，经理来了，我满意而归。

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态度冷淡to treat„coldly 承认to admit 借各种理由to give various excuses 拒绝要求to refuse one\'s request 批评to criticize 满意地with satisfaction 道别to say goodbye to somebody ⑧请用英语写一篇短文，叙述下面4幅画的内容。(字数：80左右) 提示：

Smith碰到一小偷，视而不见，警察打听，不说真话，回到家发现自家被盗。

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回家路上on one\'s way home 拉下帽子to pull down one\'s hat 假装没看见to pretend not to see 吃惊地„„to be surprised to 抓住小偷to catch the thief ⑨请用英文写一篇短文，叙述下面几幅画的内容。提示：

格林父女俩去钓鱼，鱼没钓着，遇上大雨，淋病了。(字数：80左右)

参考词语

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遇上大雨to be caught in a heavy rain 感冒to catch a cold 发烧to have a fever ⑩下列4幅图是介绍两青年男子在公园散步，开始彼此不认识，也没注意，后来突然发现后面有人要去占一个位子，赶紧走，坐上位子，另一位青年拿“Wet Paint”的牌子给他看。你想象一下坐上位子的人的感受，并根据以上叙述写一篇短文。(字数：100左右)

参考词语

在公园散步to walk in the park 回头to turn round 为了„„in order to 超前ahead of 一„„就Nosooner„than„ 失望disappointed (11)画中女孩杨梅吃过早饭，准备去看电影，上车后一位老奶奶上车，她赶紧让位，„„

请你用英语以第一人称的口吻写一篇短文，叙述一下6幅图的内容。

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决定做„„to decide to„ 上车to get on a bus 道别to say good-bye to„ 挥手to wave to„

(12)请用英语写一篇记叙小红领盲人过桥的经过。(字数：100左右)

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领„„人到„„to take„to„

(13)大水淹没了小明的家和学校，开学无望，八方支援，小明又重新背上书包。请根据这些内容写篇短文。

参考词语袭击to hit 遭受破坏to be seriously damaged 受„„之苦to suffer from 响应号召to answer the call 无私的unselfish (14)下面的图片表明邹南华是如何遇见琼斯夫妇的。

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“I want to thank them for the wheelchair.It is much better than my old one.Now I can move about more easily.I really feel grateful.Ask them if there is anything I can do for them.Oh, yes, tell them I just published a new painting, and I will mail a copy to them.”

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比„„好得多much better than„ 感激to feel grateful 太高兴only too glad to 盼望to look forward to (15)下面两幅画是一位美籍华人所看到的中国妇女地位的变化，请你用第一人称的口吻写一篇短文叙述画中的内容。(字数：120左右) 提示：

第一幅画：指在旧中国；第二幅画：指在新中国。

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解放前before liberation 轻视to be looked down upon 长大to grow up 受高等教育to receive a high education 取得成就to make great achievements 各个领域in every field (16)Peter和你同班，他住友谊宾馆。你到他住处请他参加明天下午同学的生日宴会，他不在家，请你用英语给他留个条，邀请他参加，并给他画好路线图。(字数：60左右)

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径直走to go straight (17)你的同学Black是第一中学的新生，该校位于邮电局的对面，Black要”是过生日的同学家。

到新华书店去买本字典，但不知怎样走，请根据下图，写文告诉Black怎样尽快找到新华书店。(字数：80左右)

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右拐to turn to right 在„„拐角at the corner of 对面opposite to (18)请根据下列图表写一篇该地区煤、油、天然气的发展情况。(字数：100左右) 提示：

a．本地区久负盛产煤、石油和天然气的美名； b．图表已明示这三种燃料每年的生产情况；

c．天然气的生产情况对其他两种燃料的生产有很大影响；

d．1992年努力找到了新的油气田，大幅度地促进了三种燃料生产的增长。

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为„„出名to be famous for 一般说来generally speaking 增加to increase (19)请用英语写一篇短文，描述汽车里发生的事情。(字数：100左右) 提示：

a．在公共汽车里，一位女士的假发套被风吹掉；

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b．乘客们嘲笑，女士很困窘； c．一位小女孩帮女士捡起了发套； d．乘客们无地自容。

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真情sincere feelings 假发false hair 无头发的hairle 治愈to be cured 被吹掉to be blown 捡起to pick up (20)请描述一下公共汽车中让座的情形，注意图中人物的外貌及神态的描写。(字数：100左右)

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让座to offer a seat 白发the grey hair 坐满了人to be full of people 戴眼镜to wear glaes 拐杖a walking stick (21)下面几幅图是你第一次炒菜的过程及感受，请你用英语写一篇短文，叙述一下这次过程及感受。(字数：100左右)

参考词语炒菜to cook 首次for the first time 西红柿tomatoes 倒油to pour oil 在„„帮助下with the help of 表扬to praise sb.for„

(22)请用英语写一篇短文，描述一下以下6幅图的内容。(字数：100左右) 提示：

a．山洪爆发了；

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b．武警战士们去救助被洪水围困的群众。

参考词语洪水flood 处于危险之中to be in danger 毫不犹豫without hesitation 安全地带safe place 带领部队to lead one\'s army (23)请为下面一幅漫画配上英文说明。(字数：120左右) 提示： a．画中人物 Mr and Mrs Turners；他们的儿子John。 b．标题

Extreme Joy Begets Sorrow

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乐极生悲extreme joy begets sorrow 给„„买„„to buy„for„ 放手with one\'s hands off 自豪，得意proud 加速to speed up 兴高采烈地cheerfully 受伤to get hurt 陷入悲伤中to go into deep sorrow (24)下面6幅图是反映学生的课外体育活动的，请你用英语写一篇短文加以描述。(字数：100左右) 3eud教育网 http://www.3edu.net 教学资源集散地。可能是最大的免费教育资源网！ 3eud教育网

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to do exercises and physical training 拔河have a tug-of-war match 出乎意料地unexpectedly 比分score 输了比赛to lose a match

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第11篇：高考英语作文经久不衰的高考英语作文（优秀）

文要天天看,理要天天练

1、观点类：表达自己的观点

（1）Different people have different views on _______.Some people think that ______, while others argue that _______.As far as I am concerned, I agree with the _____ opinion.For one thing, I firmly believe_______.For another___________.Just think of _______ who _______.Taking all these factors into consideration, we may safely come to the conclusion that _________.Only if _______ can we ________., just as the saying goes _________.（2）As we all know, the general public has been debating whether __________ is a bleing or a curse.Scientists have made advances in ________, so some people support ________, saying ________.Other people oppose ________, saying _______.Personally speaking, I approve of _______ only if it is placed under strict control.For one thing ________.For another _________.Only when we exercise extreme care over this delicate matter can we be sure to put it on the right track.

2、提问类：一般疑问句做题目

（1）______ is such a common matter that every one of us may meet it from time to time.People hold different views towards ________.Some people _______ Others laugh at them, they think ________.Personally, I agree with the ____ group of people.Just as ____ once said __________.I think he is right.From now on I will not ________.On the contrary, I will ________.（2）Some people take it for granted that ___________.Neverthele, other people claim that such a brief is subjective and unreasonable even at the first sight.To begin with ________.What makes matters worse _________.I firmly believe that _________.Only when __________.

3、选择类：题目中含有or

（1）Whenever people ________, they will come acro the problem of whether they should ________or _______, and it is natural for different opinions to arise.Some people think we should ________.They say that _______.Further

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more,_________.Therefore, we should ________.But other people think otherwise.The argue that in an age when _______ we should not only ______but also ______.Only when we _____ can we keep up with the pace of social development.In my opinion, we should combine _______with ______.First__________.Second _________.Only in this way can we _____________.（2）When it comes to ________ some of people will choose _______,while others want to _____________.Those people who decide to _______ argue that _______.Further more __________.Those people who prefer _______ maintain that _________.In my opinion, I should _______ whenever ______.To begin with_________.Furthermore____________.

4、批驳类: 批驳现象、观点、做法。

（1）Today more and more people _________.They argue _____ has several advantages.First __________.Second _________.For example, ________.I am afraid I can not agree with their opinions.To begin with, although you may feel___________, it doesn’t mean _________.In the second place , _________.Finally, as to ___________.From the above analysis, we may arrive at the conclusion that ________ is not a wise choice.（2）Nowadays, there is a growing tendency that _________.Personally speaking, I do not agree with this practice at all.First of all________.Second ________.Third_________.To wind up my discuion, my conclusion is that it is not advisable for_______.

5、办法类：解决某种问题。常以How to开头。

（1） ____ has always been important to ______.Although this iue has long been discued, it would not be true to say that unanimous agreement has been reached.In my belief, the more beneficial steps in _______ are as follows.First and foremost,_________.In the second place _________ Last but not least,___________.

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In an era when economy develops at such a high speed, ________is connected with and vital to every citizen in the city.We can never wish to realize our dream of a _________ until all of us take actions to ________.（2）Nowadays_______________.It has become such a serious problem that it has aroused the concern from the whole society.To put an end to such a serious problem, in my mind, calls for the efforts from all sides.First of all _________.Moreover ____________.Last but not least ___________.How can anybody expect to lead a meaningful life if ______________? Only when all of us join in the efforts of ___________at all levels can we expect to have _____ a more beautiful future.

6、原因类：阐述喜欢某事物，人，或做出某种决定的原因。常以Why开头。（1）Some people think ______.Deep in my heart, I also have been asking myself the same question again and again.Why________? The reasons, in my mind, can be summed up in three respects.First of all ___________.In the second place __________.Last but not least __________.So, I firmly believe _________.（2）When asked about my favorite______, I will not hesitate a moment to say it is __________.Although some friends ___________, I have never changed my mind.The reason why __________ are threefold.Firstly,_____________ In the second place__________.Moreover_________.Just like many great men in the world, ________ has become part of my life.I believe I will join it forever, and recommend it to others.

7、谚语类：以谚语作为题目

（1）The well-known proverb________ has long been accepted by all of us.It tells us that ___________.

Let’s take ____ as an example_________.

Judging from the example given above, We may safely come to the conclusion that ________.So why not __________?

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（2）There is a famous saying ___________,which means __________.If you want to be succeful, you should ___________.A case in point is _________.From what has been discued above, we should understand the meaning of ________ more clearly.So the best way is to _____________.

8、图表类：要求描述分析图表

（1）Studying the table carefully, we can see _____________.The most important reason of the change is __________.In my opinion, I think ________ is also an eential reason.To sum up ______________.（2）From the chart we can see clearly that _____________.In my mind, the reasons why ________ are as follows.First__________.In addition __________.So It is easy to make a conclusion that_______________. (3) The chart gives us an overall picture of the __________（图表主题）。 The first thing we notice is that_______________（图表最大特点）。 This means that __________，（进一步说明）。 (4) We can see from the statistics given that ___________（图表细节一）。 After v-ing_________（细节一中的第一个变化）， the ____ （紧跟着的变化：幅度+时间）。 The figures also tells us that______________________（图表细节二）。（数据位置，如In the second column）， we can see that ____________accounts for _______（进一步描述）。 (5) Judging from these figures， we can draw the conclusion that___________（结论）。 The reason for this， as far as I am concerned is that_____________（给出原因）。 / It is high time that we should _________ （发出倡议）

9、书信类：写一封信或回一封信，说明某件事。（1）Dear Mr.______, It’s ages since ________.I’m so pleased to _______.How are you getting on with

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______.I’d like to _______.Can you ________.

I want to invite you to _____ when you are free.My family and I are expecting ________.Don’t hesitate to let me know if you ________. Please pa my love to _______.

Yours, _______

（2）Dear Mi ________, I am so sorry that I won’t be able to________.My uncle is returning home from France, and I have promised to meet him at _______ at ________ tomorrow afternoon.I am very much interested in ________.I wonder if it is poible _________, and if so, could I _________? Many thanks.Best wishes!

Yours sincerely

_________

10、看图说话类：描述图画并加以议论。

（1）One Sunday morning, there were some people in_______.At a stand, a woman was ______.Suddenly ________ .Hearing this, a few people began to_______.Soon _______.Later, _________.Finally, __________.What a _______! I will never forget ______.（2）From these pictures, we can see that _______.This is very common recently.But in my opinion, they should not____________.Here are the reasons.First, ______; second _____________; third, ________; Last but not the least important, ________.Those who _____, remember _______.表达个人理由作文的常用表达句式：

1.It is interesting to speculate what one could do after leaving school.The decision depends on many environmental factors.Whatever it may be, I have made upon my

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mind to become a ______.

A variety of reasons may go as follows.To begin with, __________________________________..Moreover, ____________________¬¬¬__________________.What’s more, ___________________.2.Today, TV is playing a great role in our daily lives.There are many rich and colorful programs on TV every day.Of all these programs, I think the _______________ , especially the ____________, is my most favorite one.Why do I like the __________ best? For one thing, ______________.For another, _______________.The most important reason is, ______________________________________.3.Playing ___________ is my favorite sport.I am so interested in it that every mooring I go to play it in our gymnasium before breakfast.On Sundays I’d rather devote a whole afternoon to it than ____________.It has become an important part of my life.Why did I develop my paion for ___________? First of all _________________________.Also, __________________________.Furthermore, ___________________________.

4.Why have I chosen ________________________? It is a question I have put to myself many times n the past two academic years.But the answer is always the same: ________________________ is something I truly want to do in my life and it is worthwhile.There are many reasons for my choosing to attend college.One reason is, __________________.喜欢某人常用的表达式：

1.In my life I have met many people who are really worth recalling.But perhaps the most unforgettable person I ever knew is ________________________.What frequently brings back memories of ________________________is his/ her special qualities? First of all, I was attracted by his/ her ________________________.Second, he / she gave us ________________________.Finally, I was deeply impreed by ________________________.2.Perhaps the most interesting person I have ever met is ________________________.Although I last met him / her was ten years ago, I have not forgotten his/ her special qualities.

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First of all, I was deeply impreed by his ________________________.Secondly, I admire the fact that he ________________________.Finally, I was attracted by ______________________.喜欢某地常用表达式：

One of the most attractive places I have ever visited is the capital of our country ______________, a world famous historic city/ world-known resort, is located/ lies/is situated ___________.The reasons that I like so much is it because first of all, ___________ abounds with resources/ is a place with rich resource.Secondly, ________________________ it is not only a political and economical center, it is also famous for its historic sites.At the end, and I think which is the most important reason, I was born in _______________.图画作文

This illustration depicts_________ （图画中的人物）V-ing， with______________（补充说明）。 Recently it has become common for people in many ways of life to_____________（进一步阐释）

It seems to me that the cartoonist is sending a meage about _______（图画主题）， which is ______________（进一步的说明）。 He seems to be saying that_____________（给出细节）。 In my opinion， ___________（个人阐述）。 This simple picture is a wake up call for ______（所涉群体，如the whole of the human race）。 Therefore， it is imperative for us to take drastic measures to put an end to ___________（问题所在）。 One the one hand， we must _________________（建议一）。 It is clear that the drawer of the illustration is urging us to _________（进一步说明）。 On the other hand， _______________（建议二）。 Only in this way can we___________（展望前景）。利弊型作文

Recently the iue of whether or not______（讨论话题） has been in the limelight and has aroused wide concern in the public.There are two major arguments that can be made for_______（讨论话题）。 For one thing， __________can bring ____ to_____________（优点一）。 For another， it is widely hold that people usually ____when _________________（优点二）。

But we must not lose sight of the fact that there are also drawbacks to___________（缺点）。 For instance， it can bring __________to _____________（举例说明）。 In addition， many people find it ________（形容词）to _______________（第二个缺点）

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When asked to __________， I tend to ________.This is because I _________（原因一）。 Furthermore， ______________（原因二）。 Finally， ______________（原因三）。展望未来型

With the rapid advances of _____________ in recent years， _____________（引出现象）。 However， _______ has______________， as____________（提出问题）。 As a result， _____has ____________________（指出影响）。

The effects ___________ has produced on____________ can be boiled down to two major ones. First ， _____________（影响一）。 More importantly， ___________（影响二）。 Hence， I believe that we will see a ____________（提出展望）/ Neverthele， I do not think we will see a ______（或反面展望）

There are numerous reasons why ____， and I would like to explore a few of the most important ones here.The first is that the more（比较级）_____， the more （比较级） ______.In addition， we all agree that________________________（第二个原因）

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第12篇：高考英语作文雾霾（优秀）

雾霾：样题一（环境保护类）

假如你是李华，你的笔友Mike从电视上得知前段时间北京多个地方出现雾霾（haze），非常担心，写E-mail询问有关情况，请回复。回复应包括以下要点：

1.实况描述；

2.对生活造成的影响；

3.成因简析与教训；

4.你个人的情况。

要求：1.词数100-120；

2.email的开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

参考范文：

One poible version:

Dear Mike，

Thank you very much for your concern.Last months several places in Beijing were blanketed（覆盖） with thick yellow fog.Everything around disappeared from our sight.Some highways were closed.Traffic jams were commonly seen in the streets.Many people, especially children and seniors, even found it difficult to breathe.As a result, local hospitals were crowded with people who had problems with their noses and lungs.Part of the cause was the dry weather, but the severely damaged environment contributed a lot to this nightmare.Personally I didn’t get any health problems in the haze because I stayed mostly indoors.But to make a significant change we really have to do more to protect our environment.To live a better life we have to push on with the economy, but it wound be meaningle if we have to achieve it at the cost of our breathing air.

Regards!

Yours，

Li Hua

雾霾：样二（环境保护类）

今年（2013年）除夕到正月十五期间，北京雾霾天气出现的天数占到50%以上，严重影响了老百姓的生活和健康。请写一篇短文，描述一下北京雾霾的情况，分析雾霾出现的原因，并提出治理雾霾的措施。

注意：词数不少于100词。

参考范文：

During the 15 days from New Year’s Eve to Lantern Festival, Beijing was affected by smog for more than half the time, because of which people suffered a lot.On the road people drove slowly because they could not see clearly.People also suffered from many illnees caused by smog.

The smog in Beijing has been caused by many factors, in which the increase of cars in the city area plays an important role.The cars send off a lot of poisonous gases, which in turn adds to the already serious air pollution.

In my opinion, the number of cars should be limited.We should call on the people to use more public transport.Only in this way can we expect to have more sunny days.

雾霾：样三（环境保护类）

假设你是李华，David是你的美国网友。他对目前中国出现的雾霆天气很关注，来信向你询问此事。请你给他写封回信。

主要内容如下：

1.感谢他的关注。

2.简介雾霾（smog）天气给人们的身体、生活带来的危害。

3.谈谈你的感想。

注意：可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯流畅；

开头与结尾已写好，不计人总词数；

词数：120左右

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Dear David,

I’m glad to receive your letter.I have learned from your letter that you are concerned about the smog which frequently appears in some areas of China.Thank you for your concern.I’m also very worried about such terrible weather because it has brought much inconvenience or rather harm to people’s health such as traffic jam, road accidents, bad coughs, throat hurts and ever lung cancers and so on.

As everybody knows, a good environment comes from good protection.So we should do what we can to make a difference.Try to drive le and choose air-friendly products.Only when everyone has the environmental awarene can we have cleaner air.

Hoping to hear from you soon and share your good ideas.、雾霾天气：假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Bill来信询问你家乡是否有雾霾天气，情况如何。请按下面写一封电子邮件：

1.感谢他得关心;

2.介绍情况:(1)去年以来以发生数次雾霾天气(2)人们已认识到雾霾天气的危害，正采取各种举措减少其发生(3)你自己为此做了什么或打算做什么

要求150--200词

【参考范文】

Dear Bill,

I’m glad to receive your letter,thank you for your caring for the weather and my health.Now I’d like to tell you something about the smog.

According to me, I will go to school by bike or on foot, and I won’t throw the waste anywhere.in addition, I will tell the people I meet to protect the environment as poible as they can.would you like to tell me some good ideas?i’m looking forward to your reply.

Yours Sincerely

LI Hua

第13篇：高考英语作文评分标准_解析（优秀）

高考英语作文评分标准

一、{各档次的给分范围和要求}详情请看考试说明细则。

二、平时作文应注意：

1、不要出现空白卷或抄袭现象，背诵一些常见作文模板和句式或运用自己的语言老老实实地翻译出几句有效信息，就不难得到5-10分。

2、文章层次一定要分明，常分3-4段。不分段者最高分只能及格。

3、文章超出作答边框者，最高得分只能及格。

4、格式不对或离题者最高只能及格。

5、书写工整，如有改动，所改单词一条斜线划掉，不要涂成一团。改动不超过3次。

高考英语作文评分标准解读

一、如何理解“应用了较多的词汇”

这里所说的“词汇”，可以从高级词汇的使用、同义词的使用、短语的使用等方面去理解：

（一）高级词汇的使用

高级词汇，指的是大纲中没有列入或没有识记要求，但在实际运用中却出现比较频繁的词汇，比如frustration, awkward, awfully, concern等词，都可以算作是“高级词汇”。考生若能够适当地运用一些高级词汇，定会给评卷老师留下深刻的印象。

1.I can’t find any way to solve the problem.(换作高级词汇：I can’t find any solution to the problem.) 2.The pet dog is so lovely that almost everybody likes her.(换作高级词汇：The pet dog is so cute that almost everybody likes her.) 3.The question is really difficult to understand.(换作高级词汇：The question is really confusing.) 4.He had to face all the poible difficulties.(换作高级词汇：He had to cope with all the poible difficulties)

（二）同义词的使用

英语中有些高频词，比如interesting, clever等，在表达时大家都很喜欢用，但这样文章入千人一面。如果我们能够使用它们相应的同义词，就可以做到与众不同，给评卷者带来清新的感觉。例如：

1.It will be very interesting.(换作同义词：It will be a lot of fun.) 2.He was so clever that he could count all the way up to 100 at one year old.( 换作同义词：He was so smart that he could count all the way up to 100 at one year old.) 3.Last summer I visited New Jersey with my parents.(换作同义词：Last summer I toured New Jersey with my parents.)

（三）适当利用短语取代单词

总体而言，使用短语的难度比单词要大一些，因此适当运用短语更能显出作者的功力。例如： 1.Suddenly I had a good idea.(换作短语：Suddenly I came up with a good idea.) 2.Take a moment to see what is happening around you.(换作短语：Take a moment to see what is going on around you.) 3.Everyone should do his or her best.(换作短语：Everyone is supposed to do his or her best.)

二、如何理解“应用了较多的语法结构”

固定句式（如感叹句、复合结构、强调句型等）、定语从句、现在分词短语等都属于较复杂的语法结构。这些结构的正确使用，可以使文章的语言充满层次感，从而较好地反映写作者的语言运用能力。

（一）使用固定句式

1.She was robbed of her purse but she had no time to call for help.(使用before one can do sth.结构：She was robbed of her purse before she could call for help.) 2.The environment will never improve until everybody takes care of it.(使用倒装结构：Not until everybody takes care of it will the environment improve.)

（二）使用现在分词结构

现在分词结构可以表达伴随、原因等状语，因此几乎在任何文章中都可以用得上。现在分词短语可以使句子的表达更加简洁、生动，而且也使前后两个动作的衔接更加紧密。例如：

1.Nowadays, we can easily travel from one place to another and this bridges the gap among different races or cultures.(换作现在分词短语：Nowadays, we can easily travel from one place to another, thus bridging the gap among different race or cultures.) 2.People worked together on the aembly line.(换作现在分词短语：People worked together on the aembly line, moving quickly and efficiently.)

（三）使用定语从句

定语从句的使用，不仅能使上下文更加流畅，也同时能充分展示写作者运用较复杂的语法结构的能力。如： 1.My favorite living writer is Roddy Doyle.I think he is a genius.(使用定语从句：My favorite living writer is Roddy Doyle, who I think is a genius.) 2.My aunt bought me a book.The title of the book is All about USA.(使用定语从句：My aunt bought me a book, whose title is All about the USA.)

三、如何理解“上下文的连贯性”

连贯性，就是指通过连接词（包括并列连词，从属连词和连接性副词）、非谓语动词短语等语法成分，使两个或多个意义相互关联的事情或观点在同一个句子内得以表达，从而使整个段落或篇章浑然一体，连贯流畅。 (一) 连接性副词

连接性副词也被称为过渡词。它们的位置一般以句首居多。连接性副词承上启下，能够令读者对后续的句子产生心理上的期待和准备，因此整个篇章会因它们而紧凑连贯。常见的连接性副词有：also, furthermore, in addition, additionally, hopefully, meanwhile, however, instead, in other words, in brief, in a word, in my opinion, on the whole等等。例如：

1.We have many things to do.We believe we can finish before the day is over.(使用连接性副词：We have quite a lot to do.Hopefully, we will be able to finish before the day is over.)

2.The boy comes from a poor family.The boy does very well in his studies.The boy plans to work his way through college.(使用连接性副词：Even though he comes from a poor family, the boy does very well in his studies; furthermore, he plans to work his way through college.) (二) 使用从属连词

常见的从属连词有after, as, when, while, as long as, as soon as等。例如：

1.You work hard and never give up.You will succeed in your studies.(使用从属连词：So long as you work hard, you will succeed in your studies.)

2.The teacher came in.the students were quiet.(使用从属连词：The students were quiet as soon as the teacher came in.)

高考英语阅卷标准与评分细则

一、阅卷细节与应对策略：

1、阅卷速度以秒计，答题还需有技巧

高考阅卷时间紧，任务重，阅卷进度要求非常快，评一份作文时间以秒计算。应对策略：

面对如此阅卷速度，考生在写作时就要有技巧，尽可能博得评卷老师的好感。卷面要整洁，字迹要工整，段落要清楚。如果书写模糊，涂改很多，会造成难以辨认，得到比较低的分值。

2、阅卷老师抓要点成阅卷关键只有按参考答案的要点答题才给分，因此，阅卷过程中，许多老师实际上就是对某几个关键词进行扫描，从而在部分程度上忽略了对句子的质量的要求。

应对策略：

答题时，不论写长写短，首先要找准要点，把作文的关键段落、关键词写出来，第二步才考虑句子的质量，尽可能表述清晰。这样，不论你怎么答题都不用担心失分过多。

3、阅卷老师往往只盯住考生错误的数量

除了要点之外，评卷者还要看看答题的基本结构是否正确，句子表达是否准确，尤其是在浏览过程中所遇到的阅读障碍，也就是说语言表达错误，如词汇错误、语法错误等等。根据考生出错的数量结合要点表述确定其所属档次。

虽然有些错误被界定为小错误，却能影响得分档次。如：有的考生在作文中相同的单词拼写错误有多处，有的甚至达到十几处，虽然高考评分细则规定：相同的单词拼写错误不累计扣分，但是多次的拼写错误导致文章给人的整体印象不好，因而文章的得分肯定会受影响。

应对策略：

答题纸的书写一定要求规范、认真，特别是字体大小、行间距的设计要求合理。字体、行间距太小，试卷扫描出来以后基本看不清楚，很容易造成失分。

4、评卷老师喜欢条理分明的卷子

评卷老师每天的工作量非常巨大，几秒钟就能翻阅一份卷子，每份卷子光点鼠标就需要四五下，十分辛苦，一天下来手指发麻、眼睛发涩、头昏脑胀，如果遇到的是字迹清晰、思路条理的卷子，无疑会给评卷老师一份好感，即使有问题也都尽量少扣分。如果遇到的是字迹潦草模糊、思路不清晰的卷子，无疑会给让评卷老师失去耐心，狠狠扣分。

应对策略：

答卷时一定要注意条理分明，字迹清晰，让人一目了然。有些考生害怕答题不能抓住采分点，不分重点啰嗦一大堆，这种做法反而会影响阅卷人员的阅题速度，给寻找关键词带来困难，极易引起失分。

5、优秀卷的特点

书写规范；覆盖所有要点，内容充实；词汇丰富，文笔流畅，有修辞意识。应对策略：

书写清晰认真，写作过程中有明确的要点意识，平日对词汇、语法和句型的掌握准确到位，能够对写作中所运用的知识信手拈来。

二、考生在书面表达中暴露的主要问题：

1、审题失误：

市质检作文“青春是什么？”，内容要求结合事例说明，但是很多同学忽略了这点，直接抒发议论或者事例也仅是一笔带过而导致得分不高。又如作文要求中陈述“校报请你写一篇稿件刊登在英文版面上，介绍你课外学习英语的经验。”但是许多考生在写作中却用大量的篇幅介绍学习英语的重要性，只是在写作的最后简单介绍了一下三个要点，这与学习经验介绍有较大的差距。比如说文章最后只有这样简单的表达：If we want to learn English well, we can do it in three ways: Join in English corner; Write English diaries;

2、语言基础知识不扎实:

从卷面上看，相当一部分考生语言表达能力低，功底差。（1）单词拼写错误太多

总共要求写120词左右，有的考生单词拼写错误就有十几处、二十几处，甚至有的考生以汉语拼音来滥竽充数。出现这类情况，该考生的文章档次最多只能被确定为及格档以下。（2）动词用法错误多，时态、语态用法混乱，主谓不一致

Here is my ideas.

I’ll appreciate if….

Want to you can get some help It must to help to improve my spoken English.see/look/read the website stick to write diaries （3）名词单复数形式不确定及冠词使用错误

Have some problem in learn English. My experiences in English learning （4）词性混乱

I’ll glad to share my experience.

May your English becomes better.

search articles

I’m communicate with my friends.insist writing diaries

a English Contest many informations

I hope your English become well.（5）高级用法由于掌握不扎实导致用法错误

There was an English contest was held inour school.In addition to, we can communicate withsome foreigners.As we all known, practice makes perfect.A way which helping you a lot.（6）介词使用错误

with/by English （7）粗心错误

How’s your English learning goes?

3、汉式英语：

In there, you can improve your speaking English.By it, your oral English can improve.Search the website, you can read more articles.

4、缺乏连贯性，不使用关联词或关联词使用错误导致逻辑错误：

写作特别强调行文的连贯性，巧用连接词与过渡语可使句子简洁、明了，句子间的逻辑关系更加密切。所以要加强这方面的训练，以提高作文的档次：On the one hand,…; on the other hand, …./to begin with/what’s more/furthermore/additionally/to sum up/all in all/in addition/apart from/last but not least/in a nutshell

5、缺少高级句式，作文缺乏亮点：

阅卷老师喜爱的高级句型如定语从句、状语从句、非谓语动词、被动语态、插入语等。写作也特别强调所用句型的变化，长短句结合，表达的丰富性。高分段的文章要有出彩点。文章至少要有一两处写的精彩。如一篇文章中用了一个additionally, 专家就认为是精彩点。

但是，不要过度追求高级词汇和复杂句式。如果能驾驭得了，当然无可厚非，如果驾驭不了，则一定不要冒险，怎么安全怎么写，能写明白即可，尽量少出错是关键。

6、写潦草，有涂改、增补现象，书写不规范：

因为书写就是一个门面。按照评分要求：如考生字迹模糊，难以辨认，则在总分的基础上减2分。很多考生的功底不错，作文内容也可以，但是就因为差而被扣分。相反，有的考生字迹工整清楚，给人赏心悦目的感觉，那么无形之中他们的分数也就相对高些。

7、空白卷和抄袭现象：

学生在答主观题时不要出现空白卷或抄袭现象，运用自己的语言老老实实地翻译出几句有效信息，就不难得到5-10分。另外，掌握一些基本的得分方法或技巧，比如第一段的概括怎么写或怎样抄写可得分，第二部分的正文一定要动手自己写内容，只要是自己的语言，符合一些题意就会有分，这样能得5到10分。

As far as I’m concern, ….

with/by this way

第14篇：近三年北京高考英语作文优秀

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摘要：每年高考英语作文，都会出现一些满分作文或者优秀作文在同学们之间传阅。同学们在这些优秀作文中要归纳出一些好的句型、短语为自己所用。

今天文都中小学的老师整理了近三年北京高考英语作文中较为优秀的文章，分享给同学们参考学习，希望对大家的英语写作有一定的帮助!

北京高考英语作文范文

一、

Two weeks before our graduation, some students of our grade gathered together to create a video to commemorate our graduation.An animated discuion was held to work out a detailed plan.With various ideas thoroughly discued, we decided on the theme as showing our gratitude for our beloved school.

We wasted no time commencing collecting materials for our video.Some of us went to shoot video clips on campus, hoping to record the daily scenes of our school life.The others worked on interviewing teachers and students, allowing them to expre their feelings towards graduation and sincere wishes for each other.

With abundant materials ready, we began to create our video.One boy who excelled in computer was engaged in editing, while the rest of us circled him, proposing suggestions on polishing the precious video.In close collaboration, we finished the video within a week, in time for our graduation ceremony.

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On the very day of the ceremony, our video was displayed at the end of it.When the final scene of balloons forming the characters of “Grateful to our school” was presented on the screen, all the audience stood up and gave rounds of thunderous applause.Among them, we were the happiest ones, with tears uncontrollably shedding down.We felt extremely proud of ourselves for having done something meaningful for our beloved school.

This valuable experience shall remain forever fresh in our mind, marking a perfect end of our high school life.北京高考英语作文范文

二、

Recently our cla participated in the Earth Day activity, which granted us a good chance to get involved in the Earth–saving action.

A week before the Earth Day, many of us noticed the new poster with big letters advocating actions to contribute every individual’s efforts to making a difference to the planet we live in.Students in our cla were deeply motivated by the encouraging words and decided to do our part.After a heated discuion, we came up with the idea of inventing a new way of dealing with rubbish and promoting our idea to everyone.We collected deserted cans and cardboard, which normally ends up in the soil and river and pollute the environment, and made delicate handicrafts out of them.After several days of our work, “rubbish” was transformed into art works with our hands.

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Then came the Earth Day, on which we took our artwork into the community and gave them to dwellers who took interest in them.During the proce, we conveyed the idea of recreating usele stuff.Many people were amazed by our work and showed much appreciation to the dolls, handbags and vases made of ordinary used materials.

At the end of the day, I gave a presentation in the school auditorium, on behalf of my cla.Again, I emphasized the significance of changing the usele things into useful stuff.While taking part in the action, I learnt a lot myself.Not only were we able to enjoy the proce of DIY, but we were contributing to the protection of our home planet.北京高考英语作文范文

三、

假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对中国文化感兴趣，计划明年来北京上大学。他向你咨询相关信息。请给他回邮件，内容包括：

1.表示欢迎;

2.推荐他上哪所大学：

3.建议他做哪些准备工作。

注意：1.词数不少于50;

2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Jim，

_______________________________________________________________________________

Yours，

Li Hua

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【范文】

Dear Jim,

I’m so glad to hear your future education plan in Beijing in your last letter.First I would like to expre my warmest welcome to you and I am sure you will have the most unforgettable experience during your college in Beijing.

Learning your keen interest in Chinese culture, I suggest you apply for Peking University, one of the best universities in China.Its Chinese Literature major is perfect for you where you can be completely soaked in Chinese profound history and rich culture.As for preparation, some reading in advance is needed like The Story of the Stone while some online courses of spoken Chinese can be helpful for you to adapt into the Chinese language environment.

I sincerely hope your dream will come true and it’s my pleasure to show you around in Beijing when that day comes.If you have further questions, please feel free to let me know.

Yours,

Li Hua

以上就是近三年北京高考英语作文范文，在这三篇文章中，有很多值得大家归纳学习的短语句型，来看看吧!更多高考英语作文范文，关注文都中小学高考网就可查阅!

第15篇：高考英语作文终极预测（优秀）

2017高考英语作文终极预测

Traffic and Protecting Environment

交通与环保

2015年11月，全国中东部地区17省市持续雾霾，陷入大范围的重度和严重污染。造成这一现象的主要原因是工厂排出的废气和汽车尾气等。绿色低碳，保护环境，从我们身边小事做起。现请你根据以下三个方面的提示，以“Let’s Do Something to Save Our Environment”为题写一篇80词左右的短文。

内容包括：

1.重要性：只有一个地球。

2.主要问题：污染、疾病、灾难。

3.措施：停止污染、保护大自然。

Let’s Do Something to save Our Environment

We all live on the earth.The earth is our home.We have only one earth.We must take care of it.It gives us the best environment.If we harm it, it will be angry.And then we will have a terrible end.There are three problems in our earth, they are pollution, disaster and illne.

It’s our duty to protect our environment.So we must plant more trees, protect the flowers and the trees, save energy, reduce the pollution.We should ask our government to control the pollution from the factories.

Protecting the nature is very important.It’s our duty to keep our environment clean and tidy.

If everyone makes a contribution to protecting the environment, the earth will become much more beautiful.

The Popular Science Knowledge and Science Technology

科普知识与科学技术

历史上有很多发明，起着很重要的作用，其中一些改变了世界。依你之见，什么是最重要的发明，并说明原因，也就是它起的作用(不少于三点)。80词左右。

The Most Helpful Invention

There are a lot of inventions in the history.Some of them play an important role in people’s life and some have greatly changed the world.

In my opinion, I think the most important invention is the car.First, people used to travel by train or by plane.But now, they can go any place by car.Second, when holiday comes, they can visit their family and friends by car.Third, they can also go to many places of interest to enjoy themselves.

In a word, I do agree that cars are the most important invention.

The Environment around You

周围的环境

生活在社区里的孩子们生活单调：几乎不认识周围的邻居，没有兄弟姐妹。社区负责人黄叔叔注意到这个问题，于是向大家征集解决问题的建设性意见。假如你是Li Ping, 请你写一篇80词左右的邮件向他提出你自己的建议。

内容包括：

1.吸引孩子们参加上文提到的社区青年俱乐部并参加其组织的活动

2.给孩子们提供一个娱乐交流的地方。

3.组织社区里的孩子参加清洁本小区的公益劳动

Dear Uncle Huang,

Thank you for reading my e-mail! I am living in this community.I don’t have any sister or brothers.I also have no friends here.Luckily, you want to help us.Here are my suggestions.

First, we can organize the children in this community to clean up our neighborhood.Through this activity, we can know each other and make new friends.Second, I hope we can be offered a room to do homework, and then we can help and learn from each other.Third, I think we can ask children to join our Youth Club.We can take part in a lot of interesting activities, such as holiday camps and discos, regular visit to the old people, evening parties and concerts.

Our life will be fun and colourful.

Best wishes!

Yours truly,

Li Pin

Relationship and Emotional Attitude

人际关系和情感态度

现在社会普遍对90后有一些误解，认为他们自私、无礼，所以不能很好地与人沟通，那么，作为一名90后学生，你又是怎么看待这个问题的呢? 请结合你自己和周围同学的表现，分别列举至少三条优点和两条不足之处进行描述。

As students born after 1990, we have so many advantages.We are usually kind and helpful.When someone is in trouble, we always give him or her a hand.We are also active.We like to do sports and go traveling.Most of us can work hard in cla and play happily after school.Besides, we are imaginative and creative.We always try something new and do everything differently.

On the other hand, we also have some disadvantages.Sometimes we can’t expre our opinions in proper ways; sometimes we are a little over confident.And many students have no brothers or sisters, so they may do evthing for themselves.These problems may make us seem impolite, even we can’t communicate with others well.So it’s the most important for us to learn how to get on well with others.

Interest and Hobby

兴趣与爱好

很多学校根据学生的爱好和兴趣开展了许多有益的课外活动，请你根据以下提示，写一篇不少于80字的短文。

内容包括：

1.列举你们学校开展的三项课外活动。

2.介绍你对哪些活动感兴趣，并说明原因，这些活动给你带来的益处。

3.为同学如何选择课外活动提出两个建议。

4.鼓励同学们积极参加学校课外活动。

Nowadays, after-cla activities are becoming more and more popular in schools.We also have many kinds of after-cla activities in our school, such as English corner, playing basketball and swimming.I am interested in the English corner, because it can help me make some new friends there.

If you also want to take part in after-cla activities, I have some suggestions.You had better choose the activities which are good for you; you had better choose what you like.

Dear friends, please take part in after-cla activities.I’m sure you will learn a lot and you will find it very interesting at the same time.Your school life will be colorful.

第16篇：高考英语作文经典句式（优秀）

英文经典作文句式：

Ⅰ.段首句：

1 关于……人们有不同的观点。一些人认为……

There are different opinions among people as to____.Some people suggest that____.2 俗话说（常言道）……，它是我们前辈的经历，但是，即使在今天，它在许多场合仍然适用。

This is an old saying________.It’s the experience of our forefathers; however, it is correct in many cases even today.3 现在，……，它们给我们的日常生活带来了许多危害。首先，……；其次，……。更为糟糕的是……。 Today,_____, which have brought a lot of harms in our daily life.First,______.Second,________.What makes things worse is that________.4 现在，……很普遍，许多人喜欢……，因为……，另外（而且）……。

Nowadays, it is common to ______.Many people like ____ because _____.Besides,_______.5 任何事物都有两面性，……也不例外。它既有有利的一面，也有不利的一面。

Everything has two sides and_____is not an exception, it has both advantages and disadvantages.6 关于……人们的观点各不相同，一些人认为……，在他们看来，……。

People’s opinions about_______ vary from person to person.Some people say that____.To them,____.7 人类正面临着一个严重的问题……，这个问题变得越来越严重。

Man is now facing a big problem_____ which is becoming more and more serious.8 ……已经成为人们关注的热门话题，特别是在年轻人当中，将要引发激烈的辩论。

_____ has become a hot topic among people, especially among the young and heated debates are right on their way.9 ……在我们的日常生活中起着越来越重要的作用，它给我们带来了许多好处，但同时也引发着一些问题。 ______ has been playing an increasingly important role in out day-to-day life.It has brought us a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well.10 根据图表、数字、统计数字、表格中的百分比、图表、条形图、成形图可以看出……。很显然……，但是为什么呢？

According to the figure/number/statistics/percentages/ in the chart/bar graph/line/graph, it can be seen that____ while.Obviously, _____ , but why? Ⅱ.中间段落句：

1 相反，有些人赞成……，他们相信……，而且，它们认为……。

On the contrary, there are some people in favor of____.At the same time, they say____.2 但是，我认为这不是解决……的好方法，比如……。最糟糕的是……。

But I don’t think it is a very good way to solve_______.For example, _____.Worst of all,________.3 ……对我们国家的发展和建设是必不可少的，也是非常重要的。首先，……。而且……，最重要的是……。 ________ is neceary and important to our country’s development and construction.First,______.What’s more,________.Most important of all,________.4 有几个可供我们采纳的方法。首先，我们可以……。

There are several measures for us to adopt.First, we can___________.5 面临……，我们应该采取一系列行之有效的方法来……。一方面……，另一方面……。

Confronted with______, we should take a series of effective measures to______.For one thing, _________.For another, _____.6 早就该拿出行动了。比如说……，另外……。所有这些方法肯定会……。 It is high time that something was done about it.For example, _____.In additon, ______.All these measures will certainly_______.7 为什么……？第一个原因是……；第二个原因是……；第三个原因是……。总的来说，……的主要原因是由于……。

Why______? The first reason is that _______.The second reason is __________.The third is _____.For all this, the main cause of ___ due to ______.8 然而，正如任何事物都有好坏两个方面一样，……也有他不利的一面，像……。

However, just like everything has both its good and bad sides, ________ also has its own disadvantages, such as_____.9 尽管如此，我相信……更有利。

Nonethele, I believe that ___ is more advantageous.10 完全同意……这种观点，主要理由如下。

I fully agree with the statement that____ because_________.Ⅲ.结尾句：

1 至于我，在某种程度上我同意后面的观点，我认为……。

As far as I am concerned, I agree with the latter opinion to some extent.I think that____.2 总而言之，整个社会应该密切关注……。只有这样，我们才能在将来……。

In a word, the whole society should pay close attention to the problem of______.Only in this way can we______ in the future.3 但是，……和……都有它们各自的优势。例如，……，而……。然而，把这两者相比较，我更倾向于……。 But_____ and _____ have their own advantages.For example,______, while_____.Comparing this with that,____, however, I prefer to____.4 就我个人而言，我相信……，因此，我坚信美好的未来正等着我们。因为……。

Personally, I believe that____.Consequently, I’m confident that a bright future is awaiting us because______.5 随着社会的发展，……。因此，迫切需要……。如果每个人都愿意为社会贡献自己的一份力量，这个社会将要变得越来越好。

With the development of society, ________.So it’s urgent and neceary to ____.If every member is willing to contribute himself to the society, it will be better and better.6 至于我，我认为……更合理。只有这样，我们才能……。

For my part, I think it reasonable to _____.Only in this way can you_______.7 对我来说，我认为有必要……。原因如下：第

一、……；第二，……；最后但同样重要的是……。 In my opinion, I think it neceary to _______.The reasons are as follows.First,______.Second,_______.Last but not least,___________.8 在总体上很难说……是好是坏，因为它在很大程度上取决于……的形势。然而，就我个人而言，我发现……。

It is difficult to say whether____ is good or not in general as it depends very much on the situation of_______.However, from a personal point of view find_______.9 综上所述，我们可以清楚地得出结论…….

From what has been discued above, we may reasonably arrive at the conclusion that______.10 如果我们不采取有效的办法，就可能控制不了这种趋势，就会出现一些意想不到的不良后果，所以，我们应该做的是……。

If we can not take useful means, we may not control this trend, and some undesirable result may come out unexpectedly, so what we should do is__________.

第17篇：高考英语作文万能句子[优秀]

一、引出开头

1：It is well-known to us that……（我们都知道……）==As far as my knowledge is concerned, …（就我所知…）¬ 2：Recently the problem of…… has been brought into focus.==Nowadays there is a growing concern over ……（最近……问题引起了关注）¬

3：Nowadays（overpopulation）has become a problem we have to face.（现今，人口过剩已成为我们不得不面对的问题）¬

4：Internet has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life.It has brought a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well.（互联网已在我们的生活扮演着越来越重要的角色，它给我们带来了许多好处但也产生了一些严重的问题）¬

5：With the rapid development of science and technology，more and more people believe that……（随着科技的迅速发展，越来越多的人认为……）¬ 6：It is a common belief that……==It is commonly believed that……（人们一般认为……）¬

7：A lot of people seem to think that……（很多人似乎认为……）¬

8:It is universally acknowledged that + 句子（全世界都知道...）¬

二、表达不同观点¬

1：People\'s views on……vary from person to person.Some hold

that……However, others believe that……（人们对……的观点因人而异，有些人认为……然而其他人却认为……）¬

2：People may have different opinions on……（人们对……可能会持有不同见解）¬

3：Attitudes towards （drugs）vary from person to person.==Different people hold different attitudes towards（failure）（人们对待吸毒的态度因人而异）¬ 4:There are different opinions among people as to……（对于……人们的观点大不相同）¬

三、表示结尾¬

1：In short, it can be said that……（总之，他的意思是……）¬

2：From what has been mentioned above, we can come to the conclusion that……（从上面提到的，我们可以得出结论……）¬

3：Taking all these factors into consideration, we naturally/reasonably come to the conclusion that……（把所有的这些因素加以考虑，我们自然可以得出结论……）¬

4：Hence/Therefore, we\'d better come to the conclusion that……（因此，我们最好的出这样的结论……）¬

5:There is no doubt that (jo有优点也有缺点）¬

6：All in all, we cannot live without……,but at the same time we must try to find out new ways to cope with the problems that would arise.（总之，我们没有……无法生活，但同时我们必须寻求新的解决办法来面对可能出现的新问题）¬

四、提出建议¬

1：It is high time that we put an end to the (trend).（该是我们停止这一趋势的时候了）¬

2：There is no doubt that enough concern must be paid to the problem of……（毫无疑问，对……问题应予以足够重视）¬

3：Obviously ,if we want to do something … it is eential that……（显然，如果我们想要做么事，很重要的是……）¬

4：Only in this way can we ……（只有这样，我们才能……）¬

5：Spare no effort to + V （不遗余力的）¬

五、预示后果

1：Obviously，if we don\'t control the problem, the chances are that……will lead us in danger.（很明显，如果我们不能控制这一问题，很有可能我们会陷入危险）¬

2：No doubt, unle we take effective measures, it is very likely that ……（毫无疑问，除非我们采取有效措施，否则我们很可能会……）¬

3：It is urgent that immediate measures should be taken to stop the situation（很紧迫的是应立即采取措施阻止这一事态的发展）¬

六、表示论证

1：From my point of view, it is more reasonable to support the first opinion rather than the second.(在我看来，支持第一种观点比第二种更有道理)¬

2：I cannot entirely agree with the idea that……（我无法完全同意这一观点）¬ 3：As far as I am concerned/In my opinion,……（就我来说……）¬

4：I sincerely believe that……==I am greatly convinced (that)子句.（我真诚地相信……）¬

5：Finally, to speak frankly, there is also a more practical reason why ……（最后，坦率地说，还有另外一个实际的原因……）¬

七、给出原因

1：The reason why + 句子 ~~~ is that + 句子（...的原因是...） ¬

2:This phenomenon exists for a number of

reasons .First,…….Second,…….Third，……。这一现象存在有很多原因的，第一……第二……第三……¬

3：For one thing,…… For another thing，…… ==On the one hand,……On the other hand……一方面……另一方面……¬

4：I quite agree with the statement that……The reasons are chiefly as follows.我十分赞同这一论述，即……。其主要原因如下。¬

八、列出解决办法和批判错误观点做法

1：The best way to solve the troubles is……解决这些麻烦的最好办法是…… 2：As far as something is concerned,……就某事而言，……

3;It is obvious that……很显然……

4：It may be true that……but it doesn\'t mean that……可能……是对的，但这并不意味着……

5;It is natural to believe that……but we shouldn\'t ignore that……认为……是自然的，但我们不应忽视……

6：There is no evidence to suggest that……没有证据表明……

九、表示好处和坏处

1：It has the following advantages.它有如下优势

2：It is beneficial/harmful to us.==It is of great benefit/harm to us.它对我们有益处

3:It has more disadvantages than advantage.他有很多不足之处

十、表示重要、方便、可能

1：It is important(neceary/difficult/convenient/poible)for sb to do sth.对于某人做……是……

2：It plays an important role in our life.

十一、采取措施

1：We should take some effective measures.我们应该采取有效措施

2：We should try our best to overcome/conquer the difficulties.我们应该尽最大努力去克服困难

3：We should do our utmost in doing sth.我们应该尽力去做……

4：We should solve the problems that we are confronted/faced with.我们应该解决我们面临的困难

十二、显示变化

1：Some changes have taken place in the past five years.过去五年发生了很多变化

2：Great changes will certainly be produced in the international

communications.在国际交流中理所当然会发生很多大的变化

3：It has increased/decreased from…to…他已经从…增加/减少到…

4：The output of July in this factory increased by 15%.这个工厂7月份产量以增加了15%

十三、表明事实现状

1;We cannot ignore the fact that……我们不能忽略这个事实……

2：No one can deny the fact that……没人能否认这个事实……

3：This is a phenomenon that many people are interested in.

4:be closely related to ~~ （与...息息相关）

十四、进行比较¬

1：Compared with A,B……与A比较，B……

2;I prefer to readrather than watch TV.

十五、常用英语谚语¬

1：Actions speak louder than words.事实胜于雄辩

2：All is not gold that glitters.发光的未必都是金子

3：All roads lead to Rome.条条大路通罗马

4：A good beginning is half done.良好的开端是成功的一半

5：Every advantage has its disadvantage有利必有弊

6：A mi is as good as a mile.失之毫厘，差之千里

7：Failure is the mother of succe.失败是成功之母

8:Industry is the parent of succe.勤奋是成功之母

9:It is never too old to learn.活到老，学到老

10:Knowledge is power.知识就是力量

11:Nothing in the world is difficult for one who sets his mind to it.世上无难事，只怕有心人

12.Where there is a will there is a way.有志者事竟成

批判错误观点和做法:

As far as something is concerned, … 就某事而言，……

It was obvious that …很显然,….

It may be true that …, but it doesn’t mean that …

可能……是对的,但这并不意味着……

It is natural to believe that …, but we shouldn’t ignore that …

认为……是很自然的,但我们不应忽视……

There is no evidence to suggest that … 没有证据表明……

如何连接

强调 still, indeed, apparently, oddly enough, of course, after all, significantly, interestingly, also, above all, surely, certainly, undoubtedly, in any case, anyway, above all, in fact, especially, obviously, clearly.

比较 like, similarly, likewise, in the same way, in the same manner, equally.

对比 by contrast, on the contrary, while, whereas, on the other hand, unlike, instead, but, conversely, different from, however, neverthele, otherwise, whereas, unlike, yet, in contrast.

列举 for example, for instance, such as, take …for example, except (for), to illustrate.

时间 later, next, then, finally, at last, eventually, meanwhile, from now on, at the same time, for the time being, in the end, immediately, in the meantime, in the meanwhile, recently, soon, now and then, during, nowadays, since, lately, as soon as, afterwards, temporarily, earlier, now, after a while.

顺序 first, second, third, then, finally, to begin with, first of all, in the first place, last, next, above all, last but not the least, first and most important.

可能 presumably, probably, perhaps.

解释 in other words, in fact, as a matter of fact, that is, namely, in simpler terms.

递进 What is more, in addition, and, besides, also, furthermore, too, moreover, furthermore, as well as, additionally, again.

让步 although, after all, in spite of…, despite, even if, even though, though, admittedly, whatever may happen.

转折 however, rather than, instead of, but, yet, on the other hand,

unfortunately, whereas

原因 for this reason, due to, thanks to, because, because of, as, since, owing to.

结果 as a result, thus, hence, so, therefore, accordingly, consequently, as a consequence

总结 on the whole, in conclusion, in a word, to sum up, in brief, in summary, to conclude, to summarize, in short.

其他 mostly, occasionally, currently, naturally, mainly, exactly, evidently,

frankly, commonly, for this purpose, to a large extent, for most of us, in many cases, in this case

第18篇：高考英语作文万能句[优秀]

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高考英语作文万能句子可以在每年不同话题的英语作文中用到，而且会加分，以下这些就是常用到的英语作文万能句子。希望能帮助到所有的考生。

1.Recently, the problem of … has aroused people’s concern.

最近,……问题已引起人们的关注.

2.The Internet has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life.It has brought a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well.互联网已在我们的生活中扮演着越来越重要的角色.它给我们带来了许多好处,但也产生了一些严重的问题.

3.Nowadays, (overpopulation) has become a problem we have to face.

如今，（人口过剩）已成为我们不得不面对的问题了.

4.It is commonly believed that … / It is a common belief that … 人们一般认为……

5.Many people insist that … 很多人坚持认为……

6.With the development of science and technology, more and more people believe that… 随着科技的发展,越来越多的人认为……

7.A lot of people seem to think that … 很多人似乎认为……

8.As far as I am concerned, I agree with the latter opinion to some extent.I think that ____.

至于我，在某种程度上我同意后面的观点，我认为……

9.In a word, the whole society should pay close attention to the problem of ______.Only in this way can ______in the future.

总而言之，整个社会应该密切关注……这个问题。只有这样，我们才能在将来……。

10.Recently, the problem of … has aroused people’s concern.最近,……问题已引起人们的关注.

11.The Internet has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life.It has brought a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well.互联网已在我们的生活中扮演着越来越重要的角色.它给我们带来了许多好处,但也产生了一些严重的问题.

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12.Nowadays, (overpopulation) has become a problem we have to face.

如今，（人口过剩）已成为我们不得不面对的问题了.

13.It is commonly believed that … / It is a common belief that … 人们一般认为…… Many people insist that … 很多人坚持认为……

With the development of science and technology, more and more people believe that… 随着科技的发展,越来越多的人认为……

14.A lot of people seem to think that … 很多人似乎认为……

引出不同观点:

People’s views on … vary from person to person.Some hold that ….However, others believe that….人们对……的观点因人而异.有些人认为……，然而其他人却认为…… People may have different opinions on …人们对……可能会有不同的见解.

Attitudes towards (drugs) vary from person to person.人们对待吸毒的态度因人而异.There are different opinions among people as to …关于……，人们的观点大不相同.Different people hold different attitudes toward (failure).对(失败)人们的态度各不相同。

15结尾

Taking all these factors into consideration, we naturally come to the conclusion that…

把所有这些因素加以考虑,我们自然会得出结论……

Taking into account all these factors, we may reasonably come to the conclusion that …

考虑所有这些因素,我们可能会得出合理的结论……

Hence/Therefore, we’d better come to the conclusion that …

因此,我们最好得出这样的结论……

There is no doubt that (job-hopping) has its drawbacks as well as merits.毫无疑问,跳槽有优点也有缺点.

All in all, we cannot live without … But at the same time we must try to find out new ways to cope with the problems that would arise.

总之,我们没有…是无法生活的.但同时,我们必须寻求新的解决办法来对付可能出现的新问题.

16.提出建议:

It is high time that we put an end to the (trend).该是我们停止这一趋势的时候了.It is time to take the advice of … and to put special emphasis on the improvement

of …

该是采纳……的建议，并对……的进展给予特殊重视的时候了。

There is no doubt that enough concern must be paid to the problem of …

毫无疑问,对……问题应予以足够的重视.

Obviously, … If we want to do something … , it is eential that …

显然,如果我们想做某事,很重要的是…

Only in this way can we … 只有这样，我们才能……

It must be realized that …我们必须意识到……

17.预示后果:

Obviously, if we don’t control the problem, the chances are that … will lead us in danger.

很明显,如果我们不能控制这一问题,很有可能我们会陷入危险.

No doubt, unle we take effective measures, it is very likely that …

毫无疑问,除非我们采取有效措施,很可能会……

It is urgent that immediate measures should be taken to stop the situation.很紧迫的是,应立即采取措施阻止这一事态的发展.

18.论证

From my point of view, it is more reasonable to support the first opinion rather than the second.在我看来,支持第一种观点比支持第二种观点更有道理.

I cannot entirely agree with the idea that …我无法完全同意这一观点……

Personally, I am standing on the side of …就个人而言,我站在……的一边.

I sincerely believe that …我真诚地相信……

In my opinion, it is more advisable to do … than to do ….

在我个人看来,做……比做……更明智.

Finally, to speak frankly, there is also a more practical reason why …

19.给出原因:

This phenomenon exists for a number of reasons.First, … Second, … Third, … 这一现象的存在是有许多原因的.首先，……；第二,，……；第三，……

Why did …? For one thing …，for another ….Perhaps the primary reason is… 为什么会……？一个原因是……，令一个原因是……；或许其主要原因是……

I quite agree with the statement that … The reasons are chiefly as follows.我十分赞同这一论述,即……，其主要原因如下:

20.列出解决办法:

Here are some suggestions for handling … 这是如何处理某事的一些建议.

The best way to solve the troubles is … 解决这些麻烦的最好办法是……

People have figured out many ways to solve this problem.人们已找出许多办法来解决这个问题.

21.批判错误观点和做法:

As far as something is concerned, … 就某事而言，……

It was obvious that …很显然,….

It may be true that …, but it doesn’t mean that …

可能……是对的,但这并不意味着……

It is natural to believe that …, but we shouldn’t ignore that …

认为……是很自然的,但我们不应忽视……

There is no evidence to suggest that … 没有证据表明……

如何连接

22.强调 still, indeed, apparently, oddly enough, of course, after all,

significantly, interestingly, also, above all, surely, certainly, undoubtedly, in any case, anyway, above all, in fact, especially, obviously, clearly.

23.比较 like, similarly, likewise, in the same way, in the same manner, equally.对比 by contrast, on the contrary, while, whereas, on the other hand, unlike, instead, but, conversely, different from, however, neverthele, otherwise, whereas, unlike, yet, in contrast.

24.列举 for example, for instance, such as, take …for example, except (for), to illustrate.

25.时间 later, next, then, finally, at last, eventually, meanwhile, from now on, at the same time, for the time being, in the end, immediately, in the meantime, in the meanwhile, recently, soon, now and then, during, nowadays, since, lately, as soon as, afterwards, temporarily, earlier, now, after a while.

26.顺序 first, second, third, then, finally, to begin with, first of all, in the first place, last, next, above all, last but not the least, first and most important.

27.可能 presumably, probably, perhaps.

28.解释 in other words, in fact, as a matter of fact, that is, namely, in simpler terms.

29.递进 What is more, in addition, and, besides, also, furthermore, too, moreover, furthermore, as well as, additionally, again.

30.让步 although, after all, in spite of…, despite, even if, even though, though, admittedly, whatever may happen.

31.转折 however, rather than, instead of, but, yet, on the other hand, unfortunately, whereas

32.原因 for this reason, due to, thanks to, because, because of, as, since, owing to.

33.结果 as a result, thus, hence, so, therefore, accordingly, consequently, as a consequence

34.总结 on the whole, in conclusion, in a word, to sum up, in brief, in summary, to conclude, to summarize, in short.

35.其他 mostly, occasionally, currently, naturally, mainly, exactly, evidently, frankly, commonly, for this purpose, to a large extent, for most of us, in many cases, in this case

第19篇：高考英语作文

高考英语

Please the combination of materials, according to the requirements in English writing.

请结合材料，按要求用英文写作。

A mother said, “My son is always on the phone, sleeping, out with friends, or in his room.He never has time to talk to me.”

母亲说，“我的儿子总是在打电话，睡觉，与朋友，或在自己的房间里。他没有时间和我说话。”

【参考范文】

I must say that I have been behaving this way to some degree.Though I know Mum is the most

important person in my world, I just can not do what she likes me to do.It seems that I quite often stay away from my dear mum in playing my phone,

sleeping, hanging out with my friend, or just shutting out my mum in my room.

Having read about the above common

complaint from so many mothers, I feel ashamed and guilty.From now on, I shall try my best to stay with my dear parents as often as poible.I must confe we young generation must realize that our parents

care for us as well as hoping to share what we have been doing with them.

我必须说，我一直这样的行为在某种程度上。虽然我知道我妈妈是世界上最重要的人，我只是不能做什么她喜欢我做的事。我似乎经常远离我亲爱的妈妈打我的手机，睡觉，和我的朋友出去玩，或是把我妈妈在我的房间里。

读了这么多的母亲以上常见的抱怨，我觉得羞愧和内疚。从现在起，我将尽我最大的努力去陪我亲爱的父母尽可能经常。我必须承认，我们的年轻一代必须认识到，我们的父母对我们的关心以及希望分享我们所做的事和他们。

第20篇：高考英语作文

高考英语作文范文

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假定你是李华，正在英国接受英语培训，住在一户英国人家里。今天你的房东Mrs Wilson 不在家，你准备外出，请给Mrs Wilson 写一留言，内容如下：1.外出购物 2.替房东还书 3.Tracy 来电话留言：1).咖啡屋（Bolton Coffee）见面取消 2）.此事已告知Susan .3)尽快回电

范文：Mrs Wilson ,

I’m going out shopping , and won’t be back until about 5:00 pm.I have taken with me the two books you asked me to return to the city library .At about 1 o’clock this afternoon , Tracy called ,saying that she couldn’t meet you at Bolton Coffee tomorrow morning as she has something important to attend to .She felt very sorry about that , but said that you could set some other time for the meeting .She wanted you to call her back as soon as you are home .She has already told Susan about this change.

LI Hua

(2)

假设你是育才中学学生会主席李华。你校将举办一次英语演讲比赛（speech contest），希望附近大学的外籍教师Smith 女生来做评委。请参照以下通知给她写一封信。

英语演讲比赛

主题：人与自然

时间：6月15日下午2：---5：

地点：501教室

参赛选手：10名

联系人：李华（电话44876655）

范文： Dear Ms.Smith ,

I’m Li Hua , the chairman of the Students’ Union of YuCai Middle School ,which is close to your university .I’m writing to invite you to be a judge at our English speech contest which will be held in our school on June 15.It will start at 2:00 pm and last for about three hours .Ten students will deliver their speeches on the given topic

1 ―Man and Nature‖.We hope that you will accept our invitation if it is convenient for you.Please call me at 44876655 if you have any questions.

I’m looking forward to your reply .

With best wishes

Li Hua

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假定你是李华，正在一所英国学校学习暑期课程，遇到一些困难，希望得到学校辅导中心（Learning Center）的帮助。根据学校规定，你需要书面预约，请按下列的要求写一封信：1.本人简介 2.求助内容 3.约定时间 4.你的联系方式（Email: lihua@1236.com ; Phone:12345678）

范文： Dear Sir ,

I’m LiHua , a Chinese student taking summer course in your university .I’m writing to ask for help .I came here last month and found my courses interesting .But I have some difficulty with note-taking and I have no idea of how to use the library .I was told the learning center provides help for students and I’m anxious to get help from you.I have no cla on Tuesdays mornings and Friday afternoons .Please let me know which day is ok with you.You may email or phone me .Here are my email addre and phone number :lihua@1236.com ; 1234567.

Look forward to your reply .

Yours ,

Li Hua

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假设你正在参加全省中学生演讲比赛，请你针对有些父母经常翻开孩子的日记或书包这一现象，写一篇演讲稿，陈述你的观点。内容包括：1.认为同学们不必为此烦恼 2.希望能够体谅父母的苦衷 3.建议与父母进行交流沟通

范文： Good morning , ladies and gentlemen ,

Some of us are having problems with our parents , as they often look into our school bags or read our

2 diaries .I fully understand why we are not comfortable about it , but there’s no need to feel too sad.Our parents are checking our bags or diaries to make sure we are not getting into any trouble .They have probably heard some horrible stories about other kids and thought we might do the same .Or perhaps they just want to connect with us but are doing it all wrong .My suggestion is : Tell them we want them to trust us as much as we’d like to trust them .If you don’t think you can talk to them , write them a letter and leave it lying around ---they are bound to read it .

Thank you!

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假设你将参加某英文杂志开展的一次征文活动，内容要求你在电视，手机和网络三者中，放弃其中的一个并陈述理由。请你以“which would you give up: TV, cell or Web?” 为题，写一篇短文。

范文：

Which would you give up : TV , cell or web?

We are now living in an information age , in which TV , cells and the web are widely used .It seems that many people can not enjoy themselves with them .

However , if I had to give up one of them , I would turn off TV rather than switch off my cell or cut off the internet .I could do without TV because few TV shows can take my fancy and there’re too many commercials .Besides , most programs on TV are also available elsewhere .

As for cells and the web , they are more neceary to me .I need a cell to keep in touch with my friends and family , and almost all information can be gathered on the internet .

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某校英文报社开设了一个专栏：experience .本期话题是如何解决学习中遇到的困难。请你以“my approach to difficulties in learning” 为题，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈自己的一些做法。

范文：

My approach to difficulties in learning

As school students , we run into one difficulty after another in the proce of learning .Everyone has their own ways to deal with them .Here I would like to share mine.

When I am faced with a difficulty , I usually choose to refer to relevant learning materials or web pages .In this way , I can not only work it out but also improve my ability to overcome problems all by myself .

However , when it is something beyond my competence , I turn to my clamates or teachers for help .Sometimes I also ask my parents for advice .As a result , I have made steady progre in my studies .

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假设你参加所在年级的英文写作比赛，请按下面文字中的道理完成一篇短文：

A drop of water +two drops +many drops =sea

A tree +two trees +many trees = forest

One person +two persons +many persons =society

范文： The picture shows a simple truth : If too many drops of water are put together ,they will become a sea.Many trees standing together form a forest and many people make up a society .It conveys a meage to us : A whole is made up of many small parts that are closely related .Nothing or no one could exist alone .

The picture sets us thinking deeply : our society is made up of many people who have different personality and characters .If we want to create a harmonious society ,we must live in harmony with others .On the other hand , since everybody is related to others , we should be responsible for what we say and what we do so that we can develop a pleasant relationship with others , which makes it poible for us to enjoy life to the fullest .

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假设你和几位同学成了一个英语俱乐部，开展了为期2个月的活动。现在，你将代表俱乐部在课堂上进行经验交流，请写一份英语发言稿。1.简要描述俱乐部开展的一项与英语有关的活动 2.谈谈你们开展活动的收获。

范文：

Boys and girls ,

Today I’ll talk about our English club .Our English club was set up two months ago .Now we have members of 25 .We meet once a week on Saturday afternoon.So far we have conducted a variety of activities on English learning , such as watching English films , holding a Christmas party and getting together with foreign students .

Last week we held an English story-telling competition .We required that the entries be original and interesting and be presented in English within five minutes .Every member took an active part in the activity .Two foreign English teachers were invited to act as judges .At last Li Ping won the first place .Many members said the activity benefited them in many ways .Not only did it improve their spoken English ,but also it brought them much fun .They hope many such activities can be held .

That’s all.Thank you.

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假定你是李华，在一位名叫TigerMom的学生家长的博客上，你看到以下内容。请你根据博客内容，写作要点和要求，给这位家长回复。

I’m the mother of a fourteen-year –old .I have a rule for my daughter :be among the top of 5 students or get punished in one way or another .She has been doing very well in school ,but some of my friends keep telling me that I put too much preure on her .Am I wrong ?

写作要点：1.表明自己的看法 2.陈述自己的理由 3.提出至少2条建议。

范文： Hi, TigerMom ,

What puzzles you is actually a puzzle for many parents in China .My idea is that it is quite right for you to do so .

Although high grades are an important factor in evaluating students and for their future university admiion , development in wisdom emotion ,health and life attitude should never be ignored .There are many examples around us .Some all—A students in school have turned out not to be as succeful in society as they were expected.The reason is often that the preure from their parents allows them almost no time for other activities .Furthermore , punishment is by no means a wise choice to help them grow up mentally and physically .

So I suggest that you take your friends’ advice .More importantly, let her live like a lovely girl ; let her have more friends and social activities ; and let her make mistakes of her own as we teenagers often do .

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假设你是某中学新老师李红，请给你的朋友张华写封信，告诉他你第一天上课的情景，主要内容如下：1.描述

5 一件课堂上令你印象深刻的事情 2.介绍你处理该事的方式 3.谈谈你的感想

范文：

Dear zhuanghua ,

It’s three months since I heard from you last time .Now I want to tell you an impreive story happening on my first leon .

On hearing the bell students ran into the claroom as quickly as they could.But a boy ,LIMing , whose father died a month ago , was late for the cla.He stood outside the claroom silently .I smiled to him and let him come in.After a while ,he cried on his desk .Then I walked to him and asked what had happened .He told me that his mother was ill and he had to take some medicine for her .At the same time ,he apologized to me for his latene .Moved by his words , I praised him for his deeds and decided to sing a song named ―mother‖ for the students .How time flies ! Cla was over before I realized it .

From the story I felt we should respect our parents and do our best to help them .Do you think so ? I’m looking forward to your reply .

Yours truly ,

Li Hong

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