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Genre Writing 2011 FallOP-draft 1-修订稿-郝宇星10151042-GW02 Nov.8 第1页 Pick a Subject.
1) A person you care about and a person close to you & willing
to share his/her life experience with you: my nephew.
2) Label the person stereotypes:
★ He is a naughty and loving baby.
★ He is a troublesome and clever baby.
3) Individualize the person
＊HE IS A UNIQUE baby.
Ask Questions:
-- Where was this person born?He was born two years ago.
-- Where did this person grow up?He grows up in my home.
-- What does/did this person do for a living?He cannot make a living.-- Why is this person famous?He is not famous.
-- What makes this person special or interesting? He is the first
kid in my life to take care of.
What are the adjectives you would most use to describe the
person?Naughty
Select the most interesting ones about your subject：
1.He didn’t eat food sometime.
2.He disturbs my sleep.
3.He didn’t want to dre clothes.
Design where on-scene elements and quotes enter：
1.Where: in my home.
2.When: from two years ago to now.
3.Quotes: he cannot answer a question so I didn’t ask him anything.
Write the outline：
1.My nephew is lovely.
2.He made many troubles for me.
3.it’s very difficult to look after him.
4.I got used to the life with my nephew.
Draft your OP：
My nephew
My nephew, Xiao ran, was born two years ago when we were celebrating the Spring Festival.Like other babies, he has a small face, small eyes, small nose and a small but smart mouth.His eyelashes are long and his skin is smooth, which makes him very lovely.
However, lovely babies can be troublesome.If a baby grows up, it means he will bring us more trouble.Xiao ran learnt to stand up after
six months; then he started to make trouble for us.He walked on his little feet, from the bed to the windowsill, stood on it and hit the windows; if I didn’t taken him off the sill, the windows would have been broken into pieces on the ground.A year later, when he could run and climb the chairs, he ran to the chair, climbed it and sat on my table.What was worse, he picked up my books, my pens, even my most important files and threw them on the floor.Once, he even tore a page of my book off.Frequently, he would open every commode and cupboard and put the stores out on the floor.If I put them into cupboards again, he would just pick them out again.All of this made me nearly crazy.
I believe that everyone will find it difficult to look after a baby when he or she had really done it.Xiao ran could eat normal food six months later, but he didn’t abandon his milk as his real food until one year ago.When the dinner was well, Xiao ran’s mum, my sister would embrace him to the chair and feed him.It was not me to do the work because I could not bear it at all, for I am hungry, too.Every time Xiao ran will make the food and saliva everywhere and sometime he just refused to eat anything.For example, one day we cooked dumplings for lunch.Since Xiao ran has never seen such food before, we taught him to clamp the dumpling into his bowl and clamp it into two pieces.Then he started to put them, one by one, into his little bowl until the dish is
empty.Before we could stop him from doing this, he had smashed all the dumplings in his bowl and on the table.Certainly he couldn’t eat them all, even couldn’t eat one dumpling.When my nephew ate up and went to sleep, the food has been too cold to eat.Once, he broken a bowl and received a beat; however, it didn’t change his manners.
As the days went by, I had got used to the life with Xiao ran.Usually, I dreed him in the morning, though he often waked up before five o’clock and I got up at about seven.It seems that babies like to be naked because when I put his clothes out he would cry and ran away.When he waked up, my sweet sleep would be ruthlely disturbed.He claimed over my belly, tried to stand on my belly and tumbled on my belly again.He lied down and tore my face, pulled my nose, pointed my eyes until I could not stand it and got up.He likes going out and to the park or markets, when I had to take him in my arms since he hated to walk.When he saw a new purchase, he would ask what it was.He wanted to buy all the things he saw, and if the food he wanted was really bought, it would just be wasted, which based on my own experiences this two years.His parents had bought him many toys, but most of them were abandoned one or two days late.So, although Xiao ran ate little, he had spent much money of his parents.
The elf learned to talk one year ago, and he appeared a great talent of talking from then on.Now he can say many words and
understand most of the sentences we said every day.If he could not find me, he would ask my mum “where’s the uncle?” again and again until I came back to him.When he was seated on the back of the bike, he often says hello to the strange paengers and asked them “where are you going?” again and again until the bike went far away.If I told him “go and bring the book to me.” He would run and bring the right one.He was taught patiently by my sister and my mum, who had made him known the numbers, the letters and some claic poems.
It has been decided that Xiao ran will go to kindergarten at the age of three.Then his parents will have more time to make money.However, I will be regretful for I cannot see his little face, hold his little hands, or take his little body in my arms any longer.Although sometime I was fed up with him, I cannot stop loving him when he calls me uncle with lovely smile.
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