五年级上册作文

My English Teacher

Mi Tang is my English teacher.She’s very pretty.She is tall and thin.She has two big eyes and a small mouth.Her hair is long.She likes cats very much.And she likes singing and dancing, too.Her English is very good.We often play games in English claes.She is very kind to us.We all love her.

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这篇作文的题目是“我的英语老师”，是一篇介绍人物的作文。小作者开门见山，直接点题，首先介绍了英语老师的姓名，然后逐一介绍了她的外貌特征、喜好、英语水平、上课特点以及师生情感等。

小朋友们在写作文时，要注意使用自己最熟悉的词[组]，以免写出一些错句子。写作时要注意意思连贯、语句通顺、标点正确、书写清晰、规范等。

My Math Teacher

Mr Zhong is my math teacher.He’s tall and thin.He’s very young.He’s very strict, but he’s very kind.He’s very smart, too.We all like him very much.

My Days of the week

I’m a student and I am in Grade 5.I get up at six o’clock every day.I have breakfast at half past six, and go to school at seven o’clock.I have claes from Monday to Saturday.I have an English cla on Friday and I have a PE cla on Tuesday.I don’t have to go to school on school, and I like to go swimming on that day.

My Days of a Week

On Mondays, I have Chinese and music cla.On Tuesdays, I have art and P.E.cla.On Wednesdays, I have science and Moral Education cla.On Thursdays, I have English and mathcla.On Fridays, I have music and Chinese cla.On Saturdays, I often play ping-pong and watch TV.On Sundays, I often do my homework and help my mother do housework.My favourite day is Saturday, because I like playing ping-pong.

My weekend Hi.I am Tom.I am a student.I am a boy.I don’t go to school on the weekend.I do my homework and read books on Saturday.I watch TV , play puter games and play ping-pong on Sunday.This is my weekend.Weekend is fun for me ! I love my weekend.【要领点评】

这篇作文的题目是“我的一周”，小作者没有说一些空话，而是从自己的亲身经历写起，叙述了自己一周七天的所作所为，并特别强调了星期天的喜好，写得自然、流畅。

小朋友们写作文时要注意人称及谓语动词的变化，要依据提示，结合自己的实际，写自己身边熟悉的事情。

My Favourite Food

Do you know what this is? Gue! Its colour is yellow.It’s long and thin.It looks like a small boat and crescent.Oh, it is a banana.Do you know what that is? Gue again! Its colour is orange.It’s round.It looks like a small ball and a small lantern.Oh, it is an orange.I like then a lot.I like ice-creams.I like to chew gum.Chocolates and candies are yummy.I like them very much. How about you? What’s your favourite food?

My Meals of a Day I often have bread and milk for breakfast.I like milk, because it’s healthy.I often have tofu and fish for lunch.Tofu is my favourite food.It’s tasty and fresh.I have chicken and vegetables for dinner.Vegetables are healthy for us.I like them, too

【要领点评】

My Favourite Food 是一篇很成功的文章，小作者并不是简单地列举出自己最喜欢的每一种食物，而是有详有略地进行介绍。整篇文章用词准确、语言流畅、没有语法错误。另外，文章中出现了一些生词，可见小作者是用心查字典了。

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