成功的作文分为
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成功的作文模板分为
1）基本框架确定文章基本模式，添加精彩词汇和句型
2）润色内容添加精彩句型，增加字数（蓝色部分，若文章已十分饱满，此处可省略）
3）待填充主题细节将题目具体信息加入，确保文章切题
以下蓝色部分为润色内容
三个模板加一篇范文
一、对比观点题型 （老，简单，熟读即可）
（1） 要求论述两个对立的观点并给出自己的看法。
1． 有一些人认为……
2． 另一些人认为……
3． 我的看法……
The topic of ①-----------------（主题）is becoming more and more popular
recently.There are two sides of opinions about it.Some people say A is their favorite.They hold their view for the reason of ②-----------------（支持A的理由一）What is more, ③-------------理由二).Moreover, ④---------------(理由三).
While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons.Firstly,⑤-----------------(支持B的理由一) .Secondly (besides),⑥------------------（理由二）.Thirdly (finally),⑦------------------(理由三).
From my point of view, I think ⑧----------------（我的观点）.The reason is that ⑨--------------------(原因) .As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice.For me, the former is surely a wise choice.二、解决方法题型（进化中，小重点）
要求考生列举出解决问题的多种途径
１．问题现状
２．怎样解决(解决方案的优缺点)
In recent days, we have to face a problem-----A, which is becoming more and more serious.Some people consider it to be an inevitable matter, while others think it in an opposite way.There are many reasons involved.First, ------------(说明Ａ的现状或原因)．Second, ---------------(举例进一步说明原因)
Confronted with A, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation.For one thing, ---------------(解决方法一).For another -------------(解决方法二).Finally, --------------(解决方法三).
Personally, I believe that -------------(我的解决方法).Only in this way，can we solve the problem.Consequently, I’m confident that a bright future is awaiting us because --------------(带来的好处).
三、信件一
1.观点提出
2.详细说明
3.寒暄或感谢
I am ①-------写信to ②----目的.A.Much to my regret, I want to ③投诉或提意见.B.Here I would like to give my advice on ③----问题.C.I’m asking about the
poiblity of providing me with a position as ③---职位.First， I want to ④----建议，then, I’d like to⑤建议或介绍
On⑥-----主题，there are many I would like to state.For one thing, it is ⑦---观点建议或理由.For another, it can ⑧--观点建议或理由二.Additionly, it will⑨----观点建议或理由三
I’m sincerely looking forward to ⑩期待.I hope that A.the above situation will be improved as soon as poible.B.the above can be of some help to you in your decision.C.I will hear from you soon.一篇投诉信
请你以A Worried Mother的名义给中国教育报写一封信，反映如下情况： 1.很多电视节目充满了暴力，儿童常常模仿；
2.不能用儿童来做广告，这样不利于孩子们的成长；
3.一些儿童看了电视里的广告后，要求他们的父母只购买广告里的糖果、玩具等之类的商品；
4.不能把一些著名的儿歌改变成广告词。
注意：
1.信的开头已为你写好；
2.不能逐条翻译；
3.词数100左右。
Dear Editor,
I’d like to tell you something about the effect of television._____________________ Dear Editor,
I’d like to tell you something about the effect of television.I’m sure that this is not only my opinion.In fact, most parents are worried about it.When we turn on the TV, a lot of violence showings will appear.This is not good for children, who are easily to copy what they see.
Today, many children were asked to play the roles in advertisements, which do harm to their development.So many viewers, especially children, asked their parents to buy only what they see on TV, such as candies, toys and so on.What’s worse, some famous children’songs were changed into advertising words.
Are these helpful for children in the course of their growing? Shouldn’t we, grown-ups, do something against these?
Your reader,
A Worried Mother
领军教育2011高考英语高分词汇储备
开始准备了30个常用的，后来删除了几个难度太大的，大家好好看看，要记熟！ 1：individuals，characters， folks替换（people ，persons）
2：positive， favorable， rosy （美好的），promising
（有希望的），perfect， pleasurable ， excellent， outstanding， superior替换good 3：dreadful， unfavorable， poor， adverse， ill （有害的）替换bad
如果bad做表语，可以有be le impreive替换
eg.An army of college students indulge themselves in playing games， enjoying romance with girls/boys or killing time paively in their dorms.When it approaches to graduation ，as a result， they find their academic records are le impreive.4：（an army of， an ocean of， a sea of， a multitude of ，a host of， many， if not most）替换many.
注：用many， if not most 一定要小心，many后一定要有词。
Eg.Many individuals， if not most， harbor the idea that…。同理 用most， if not all ，替换most.
5：a slice of， quiet a few ， several替换some
6：harbor the idea that， take the attitude that，
hold the view that， it is widely shared that，
it is universally acknowledged that）替think
（因为是书面语，所以要加that）
7：affair ，busine ，matter 替换thing
8：shared 代 common
9：reap huge fruits 替换get many benefits ）
10：for my part ，from my own perspective 替换 in my opinion
11：Increasing（ly），growing 替换more and more（ 注意没有growingly这种形式。所以当修饰名词时用increasing/growing.修饰形容词，副词用increasingly.Eg.sth has gained growing popularity.
Sth is increasingly popular with the advancement of sth.
12：little if anything， 或little or nothing替换hardly
13：……beneficial， rewarding替换helpful，
14：shopper，client，consumer，purchaser， 替换customer
15：exceedingly，extremely， intensely 替换very
16：hardly neceary， hardly inevitable …… 替换 unneceary， avoidable 17：
18：capture one‘s attention替换attract one’s attention.
19：
20：
21：give rise to， lead to， result in， trigger 替换cause.
22：There are several reasons behind sth 替换……reasons for sth
23：desire 替换want.
24：pour attention into 替换pay attention to
25：bear in mind that 替换remember
26：enjoy， poe占有，拥有，（之前出现打错版本，现予以更正） 替换have（注意proce是过程的意思）
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句型
高考英语作文常用写作句式句型汇总
一．开头用语：
良好的开端等于成功的一半．在写作文时，通常以最简单也最常用的方式---开门见山法。也就是说, 直截了当地提出你对这个问题的看法或要求，点出文章的中心思想。
１．议论论文：
A.Just as every coin has two sides, cars have both advantages and disadvantages．
B.Compared to/ In comparison with letters, e-mails are more convenient.
C.When it comes to computers, some people think they have brought us a lot of convenience.However,...
D.Opinions are divided on the advantages and disadvantages of living in the city and in the countryside.
E.As is known to all/ As we all know, computers have played an important role/part in our daily life.
F.Why do you go to university? Different people have different points of view.
2.书信：
A.I am writing to you to apply for admiion to your university as a visiting scholar.
B.I read an advertisement in today’s China Daily and I apply for the job...
C.Thank you for your letter of May 5.
D.How happy I am to receive your letter of January 9.
E.How nice to hear from you again.
3.口头通知或介绍情况：
A.Ladies and gentlemen, May I have your attention, please.I have an announcement to make.
B.Attention, please.I have something important to tell you.
C.Mr.Green, Welcome to our school.To begin with, let me introduce Mr.Wang to you.
4.演讲稿：
A.Ladies and gentlemen, I feel very much honored to have a chance here to make a speech on the subject -- A Balance Diet and Health.
B.Good morning everyone! Allow me, first of all, on behalf of all present here, to extend our warm welcome and cordial greeting to our distinguished guest.
二．并列用语：
as well as, not only…but (also), including,
A.Not only do computers play an important part in science and technology, but also play an informative role in our daily life.
B.All of us, including the teachers / the teachers included, will attend the lecture.
C.He speaks French as well as English.=He speaks English, and Frenchas well.=He speaks not only English but also French.
D.E-mail, as well as telephones, is playing an important part in daily communication.
三．对比用语：
on one hand ,on the other hand,on the contrary/contrary to ..., though, for one thing ;for another, neverthele
A.I know the Internet can only be used at home or in the office, but on the other hand, it is becoming more and more popular for much information as well as clear and vivid pictures.
B.It is hard work; I enjoy it though.
C.Contrary to what I had originally thought, the trip turned out to be fun.
四.递进用语：
even, besides, what’s more, as for,so…that…, worse still, moreover, furthermore; but for, in addition, to make matters worse
A.The house is too small for a family of four, and furthermore/besides/what’s more/moreover /in addition/worse still , it is in a bad location.
五.例证用语：
in one’s opinion,that is to say,for example, for instance, as a matter of fact, in fact, namely
A.As a matter of fact, advertisement plays an informative role in our daily life．
B.There is one more topic to discu, namely/that is ( to say ), the question of education.
六.时序用语：
first/firstly, meanwhile, before long, ever since, while, at the same time, in the meantime, shortly after, nowadays,
A.They will be here soon.Meanwhile, let’s have coffee.
B.Firstly, let me deal with the most important difficulty.
七.强调用语：
especially, indeed, at least, at the most, What in the world/on earth.., not at all ,
A.Noise is unpleasant, especially when you are trying to sleep.
B What in the world/on earth are you doing?
八.因果用语：
thanks to, because, as a result, because of/as a result of , without, with the help of..., owe ...to...
A.The company has a succeful year, thanks mainly to the improvement in export sales.
B.As a result, many of us succeeded in paing the College Entrance Examinations.九.总结用语：
in short; briefly/ in brief ; generally speaking, in a word, as you know, as is known to all
A.Generally speaking, sending an e-mail is more convenient than sending letters.
B.In short, measures must be taken to prevent the environment being polluted.
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