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Income Sources of College Students

1.The reasons of this phenomenon can be listed as the following: Above all, the conception of love between American and Chinese is different.American pay more attention to....Another reason is that the policy of education is different.

2.I think Chinese students depend onparents too much.American students are more independent.I think Chinese parents take too care about their children.So students can’t live alonw without parents’ help.And chinese students lack of the spirit of independent.

3.American students get the income from their parents just 50% and 35% comes from part-time job.But the Chinese students get the income from their parents up to 90%.

4.Why so different between American students and Chinese students get the income.

5.Students 50% of the income sources is from their parents.

6.词性使用：There have a big different beween …

7.There is just a/one half income sources come from their parents.

8.The income sources of the Chinses college students is …

9.The income source of American and Chinese students are major form their parents, the former is 50% and the later is 90%.

10.An american students can get income half from their parents 35% their earn by themselves and 15% from scholarship.But the Chinese students’ income are most given by their parents about 90% and the money from part-tome job and scholarship is very small.

11.For most college students, the income must from their parents.

12.So why?

13.First, culture

14.first, different sense..

15.In America, the students ned 50% from their parents, about 35% come from their part-time job.

16.The Chinese college students’ income sources are 90% from parents, 5% from part-time job and 5% from scholarship.

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