高考英语写作——电影评论的写作方法

2009高考英语写作预测系列讲座

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电影评论的写作方法

本讲座的写作任务是为杂志写一篇电影评论。首先要介绍这部电影的类型、主要演员、导演等；然后简要介绍这部电影的情节；最后简要评价这部电影，或发表自己的看法。下面我们以电影《天下无贼》为例来探讨一下如何写好电影评论。

写作指导：

一、审题

本文是一篇电影评论。为体现故事的真实性，介绍电影情节时常用一般现在时。

二、列提纲

Outline of the paage: HEADLINE

Paragraph 1 to introduce the stars and director of the film.

Paragraph 2 to give a brief description of it.Paragraph 3 to make a brief review.

三、所涉及到本单元的词汇

drama, masterpiece, moving, entertaining

四、扩充要点,连词成句。

学生习作

A World Without Thieves is ①Chinese action &drama film, which is directed by Feng Xiaogang, a②director of a number of excellent films in China.It has an all-star cast,including Andy Lau,Rene Liu and Ge You.

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The story is set mainly on a train.Sha Gen (played by Wang Baoqiang), a lovely village boy working as construction worker, is returning home to get married.He carries his five years of saving③worth ¥60,000 with him.Thus, he has attracted the attention of Wang Bo (played by Andy Lau) and Wang Li (played by Rene Liu), a pair of lovers who are also high④skilled thieves.Wang Bo wants to steal the ¥60,000 but Wang Li, moved by Sha Gen\'s innocence(纯真) , decide⑤ to protect the boy.They begin a fight with a small gang of thieves leading ⑥by Hu Li, also known as Uncle Li (played by Ge You)….

The film is moving and entertaining .Ge You’s humorous lines will make you laugh. It is a masterpiece.It shows the theme of human goodne and also uncovers humorously the problem of common thievery on public transport in Mainland China.Go and see A World Without Thieves.It will make your heart shocking⑦.

教师点评：

本篇习作以三段式展开，能使读者对这部电影有个清晰的认识，能激发读者的观看欲望。 本文语言流畅，句式多样, 如使用了非限制性定语从句which is directed by Feng Xiaogang.including结构、现在分词做定语working as construction worker；过去分词做定语moved by Sha Gen\'s innocence(纯真) , also known as Uncle Li (played by Ge You)。在语言的运用上使用了一些较高级的词汇如: a number of; entertaining;masterpiece;shocked等,增加了文章的亮点。当然，文中也存在着一些明显的需要改善的地方，建议修改如下：

①在is后加a。a Chinese action &drama film. ②把a 去掉。在职位、官衔等名词前一般不用冠词。 ③把saving改为savings。savings意思为 “积蓄；存款”。

④把high改为highly。highly意思为 “高度地；非常”，表示抽象意义。 ⑤把decide改为decides。本句的主语为Wang Li，谓语动词用单数。 ⑥把leading改为led 。thieves与lead为被动关系，用过去分词作后置定语。 ⑦把shocking改为shocked。shock意思为 “使震惊；使震撼”。 your heart与shock为被动关系。

【范文】

A World Without Thieves is a Chinese action &drama film, who is directed by Feng Xiaogang,

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director of a number of excellent films in China.It has an all-star cast,including Andy Lau,Rene Liu and Ge You.

The story is set mainly on a train.Sha Gen (played by Wang Baoqiang), a lovely village boy working as construction worker, is returning home to get married.He carries his five years of savings worth ¥60,000 with him.Thus, he has attracted the attention of Wang Bo (played by Andy Lau) and Wang Li (played by Rene Liu), a pair of lovers who are also highly skilled thieves.Wang Bo wants to steal the ¥60,000 but Wang Li, moved by Sha Gen\'s innocence(纯真) , decides to protect the boy.They begin a fight with a small gang of thieves led by Hu Li, also known as Uncle Li (played by Ge You)….

The film is moving and entertaining .Ge You’s humorous lines will make you laugh. It is a masterpiece.It shows the theme of human goodne and also uncovers humorously the problem of common thievery on public transport in Mainland China.Go and see A World Without Thieves.It will make your heart shocked.

巩固写作。

请根据下面的材料, 写一篇介绍电影《夜宴》的短文。 Night Banquet《夜宴》

Stars (Cast ): Ziyi Zhang (章子怡),Daniel Wu(吴彦祖), Xun Zhou(周迅), You Ge(葛优) Director：Xiaogang Feng(冯小刚) Plot：这部电影取材于莎士比亚（Shakespeare）哈姆雷特《Hamlet》。故事以五代十国 (907-960 AD)为背景，通过争斗、舞蹈和讲故事的方式，讲述了宫廷中人与人之间争权夺利的故事，最后在一次夜宴上他们一个一个地死去。

Rewiew&comments：这是一部历史武打题材的电影。著名演员周迅的精彩表演和精湛的舞蹈技艺给我们留下深刻的印象。冯小刚用激动人心的故事向我们诠释了正义和勇气的含义。这部电影堪称精品，百看不厌。

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。 Night Banquet is a history & martial arts film.It is another masterpiece directed by Feng Xiaogang.Ziyi Zhang, Xun Zhou,You Ge ,Daniel Wu star in the film.The plot of Night Banquet ,which is based on Shakespeare’s Hamlet, is set in ancient China during the Period of Five Dynasties and Ten Kingdoms.Through fighting, dancing and story telling, it tells of a fight for rights and interests in the court between different people.Finally they died off at a night banquet.

Chinese mainland actre Zhou Xun will act the leading role.Zhou Xun\'s excellent acting, singing and dancing skills impre us deeply.FengXiaogang has used an exciting story to examine the ideas of courage and justice.It is a masterpiece and worh seeing again and again.

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