高三英语作文教案

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高考复习专题——作文（教案）

作文讲评及练习课杨廷忠2010.04.16

Teachinggoal:Getthe.tolearntowritecomposition.

Teachingimportance: Listthekeypointsandexprethemclearly.

Teachingdifficulties:Avoidthecommonmistakes; Rememberthe important

vocabularyandsentencepatterns

Teachingsteps:

Step One :(Greetthe.asusual)Introducethesituationonwriting inpast

years .Thentalkabouthowtoanalyse the materiel givenin the exam.

Step two : Analyse:

1 .theperson : the1st person

2.thetense: The Present Tense \\The Present Continuous Tense

3.the keypoints （Give some key words, ask .tomake sentences.）

⑴.同学的备考情况be preparedfor \\feelanxious (nervous.confident.positive „) undergreatpreure \\ be worriedabout \\devoteall theirtime to „\\

⑵自己的情况（特点）Everything isgoingwellwithme ,andthe most importantthingishowtoimprovemyweaksubjects: math .\\ thoughmy situation isnotgoodenoughtogotocollege ,I’lltrymybest

⑶ A 如何处理学习和休息的关系 Afterhardwork ,we musthavea goodresttomakesureofhighefficiency(Goodrestmeanshighefficiency )\\ No

matter how busy youare ,youmustspare some time to have arest, whichcan

make your mind get relaxed

B 学习和锻炼的关系.Doingexerciseproperlyis veryimportant ,whichcan

provideenoughenergyforourstudy .such as ,listening to music„\\

Healthybody lay the foundation of our study, so we can’t ignore the exercise.⑷ 对饮食的建议（具体化）Abalanceddiet isneceary ,thatisto say ,milkandeggsaregoodchoicesinthemorning.\\ we must pay attention to the

nutrition, that is to say ,We should eatmorefreshfruitandvegetables

insteadofjunkfood.

Step three : CorrectingNextwewilltalkabouthowtocorrectandwrite

acomposition.

(List the mistakesthey made .)Now please look at the mistakesyou

madeinlastcomposition, andtryyourbesttocorrectthem.

I‘llgiveyou3mins.Then I’ll asksomeonetocorrectthem.

(3minslater ,some.correctthe mistakes.I‘ll give some explanations)

- 1 -

附错点：句子：

1 Theyarestudyveryhardly\\ We are not only study well but also have a good state of health.

Westudying hard.\\We hard work.

2 .AllOfthemhaveagoodprepare for thecomeexam.

3.Ifyoufeelconfidence,youwillsucce\\

4.Do some exercises make us more stronger\\domorning exercise\\ do some mathexercise

They studyhardthan before, alwayslook Chinese and English.

5.You’d better eat eggs and milk as much as poible in the morning, it’s good for our brain.

6.Improving the basis ability can build our self-confidence for every students.\\ a good marks (points)

7.I have learntto a new mean that it can improve my study.

8.WhatImusttostreis that we should making full use of the limiting time.

9.I’llfull of energy \\

短语：a balance diet \\ makearapid progre\\ your dream college—come ture your dream

join the activity (take an active part in-- join us in the game )

必记写作常规词

succe—succeful—succeed\\effect—effective(ly) –efficient—efficiency\\vegetablesfruit

health--healthy—healthily \\until (still) \\ fall—fell--fallen (feel--felt)\\tired(tried)\\

practice n.( practise v.) \\nutrient—nutrients—nutrition \\ basis—base—basic \\ knowledgeattitude

energylazineneceary

Step four :correct their own paage: (They should rewrite it if neceary )

Step five:practice

以“早起是好习惯”为题写一篇议论文。

提示：请围绕以下几方面来写：

1.早起与健康；

2.早起与朗读；

3.早起与一天的工作。

要求：词数控制在 80~120 左右。

作文评讲与练习

一、分析:

1 .theperson : the1st person

2.thetense: The Present Tense \\The Present Continuous Tense

3.the keypoints .

⑴.同学的备考情况（具体）be preparedfor \\feelanxious

(nervous.confident.positive „) undergreatpreure \\ be worriedabout

\\devoteall theirtime to „\\

⑵自己的情况（特点）gowell\\toimprovemyweaksubjects\\ my situation

gotocollege\\trymybest

⑶ A 如何处理学习和休息的关系hardwork \\ havea goodrest \\ tomakesure

ofhighefficiency\\ spare some time \\ make your mind get relaxed

B 学习和锻炼的关系.doexerciseproperly\\provideenoughenergyforour

study\\listen to music„\\ lay the foundation of our study.⑷ 对饮食的建议（可操作性）abalanceddiet \\ pay attention to the nutrition\\ fresh

fruitand vegetables

二、改错

附错点：句子：

1 Theyarestudyveryhardly\\ We are not only study well but also have a

good state of health.Westudying hard.\\We hard work.

2 .AllOfthemhaveagoodprepare for thecomeexam.

3.Ifyoufeelconfidence,youwillsucce\\

4.Dosome exercisesmakeusmore stronger\\domorning exercise\\

do some mathexercise

They studyhardthan before, alwayslook Chinese and English.

5.You’dbetter eateggsandmilk as much as poible in the morning, it’s

good for our brain.

6.Improvingthe basisability can build our self-confidence for every students.

\\ a good marks (grades)

7.I have learntto a new mean that it can improve my study.

8.WhatImusttostreisthat weshouldmakingfull use of the

limiting time.\\I’llfull of energy

短语： a balance diet \\ makearapid progre\\ your dream college—come ture

your dream\\join the activity(take an active part in-- join us in the game )

必记写作常规词

succe—succeful—succeed\\effect—effective(ly) –efficient—efficiency\\

vegetablesfruit \\ health--healthy—healthily \\untill (stil) \\ fall—fell—fallen

(feel--felt)\\tired(tried)\\practice(practise) \\nutrient—nutrients—nutrition \\

basis—base—basic\\knowledgeattitudeenergylazine

附1．范文：时代英语

（一）

Somestudentsare heavilypreedbytheexamandcan’tgetalong well

withtheirstudies ,whileothersworkwithalightheartand are makingmuchprogre.Asforme ,I don’ttakeitseriously.Ihavetriedmybest ,so itdoesn’tmattermuch tomewhattheresultis.

Inmyopinion, as Senior Three students, we shouldmakeagoodbalance amongourstudy ,restand exercise.Onlywhenwesleepbetterandexercisemorecan

westudy moreeffectively.What’s more,a healthydietisveryimportantandI

suggesteatingmorefreshfruitand vegetablesinsteadoffatfood.

I think everyone canbesucceful ifwepreparefortheexamin a properway.

三、练习

以“早起是好习惯”为题写一篇议论文。

提示：请围绕以下几方面来写：

1.早起与健康；

2.早起与朗读；

3.早起与一天的工作。

要求：词数控制在 80~120 左右。

四、归纳：连接性词（必记）

★表列举和顺序的连接性状语：first(ly), second(ly), third(ly)...; one, two, three...; for one thing...(and) for another (thing); for a start; to begin with, to start with; in the first place, in the second place; next, then; finally, last, lastly,last but not the least; to conclude, above all,first of all, in the end, at last

This project won\'t work: for a start, it\'s a bad idea, and secondly, it\'ll cost too much.

They talked about it for hours.Finally, they decided to go.

★表意义增补和引申的连接性状语：also, besides, furthermore, moreover, then, in addition, above all, what is more, what is worse, what is better, as well, etc.

The house is not big enough for us, and furthermore, it is too far from town.

They ate a seven-course meal; in addition, they drank three bottles of wine.

★表同位关系的连接性状语：namely, for example, for instance, that is that is to say, etc.

He is very fat, that is, he weighs 273 pounds.

★表因果关系的连接性状语：consequently, hence, so, therefore, thus, as a result, since, as, because (of), owing to, due to, for, so that, etc.

It rained heavily for three days on end.Consequently, all the land was under water.

The Rainers refused to pay the higher rent when an increase was announced.As a result, they were evicted from their house.

★表意义等同的连接性状语：equally, likewise, similarly, in the same way, etc.

You must pack plenty of food for the journey.Likewise, you will need warm clothes, so pack them too.★表推论的连接性状语：(or) else, otherwise, therefore, then, in that case.

I\'ve never been to Wales, I, therefore, don\'t know much about it.

Do what you are told to; otherwise, you will be punished.

★表换个说法的连接性状语：alternatively, rather, in other words, that is to say, to put it another way, They are enjoying themselves.(Or) Rather, they appear to be enjoying themselves.

A common saying goes, \"knit the brows and you will hit upon a stratagem.\" In other words, much thinking yields wisdom.

★表意义转折对比关系的连接性状语和连词：instead, on the contrary, in contrast, by comparison, (on the one hand...) on the other hand, anyhow, anyway, however, neverthele, still, though, yet, in any case, at any rate, in spite of that, after all, all the same.but, yet, although, different from, in contrast to, despite, in spite of, whereas, unlike, neverthele, not only…but also, here…there, years ago…today, this…that, the former…the latter, then…now, the first…whereas the second, once…now, on the one hand…on the other hand, some…others, in the same way, just like, just as

It was a very complicated test.He, neverthele, paed it with distinction.

The expreion is ungrammatical; all the same it is a part of the common tongue.

★表时间过渡的连接性状语：meantime, meanwhile, in the meantime.

They will be here in 10 minutes.Meantime(meanwhile) we will have some coffee.

Tom was now undergoing many hardships.His brother in the meantime was having an easy time.

★表改变话题的连接性状语：by the way, incidentally.

We shall expect you; by the way, dinner will be at eight.

The airlines charge half price for the students.Incidentally, I\'ve already bought my ticket to New York.

★表总结的连接性状语：then, (all) in all, in conclusion, to sum up, in a word, in short，on the whole, in short, at last, in brief，as I have shown,as has been stated

All in all, their financial condition is not bad.

In conclusion, I\'d like to say how much I\'ve enjoyed staying here.

★表条件关系的连词: if, on the condition (that), as long as, unle, or else,

★表时间关系的连词和副词: when, after, before, until, as soon as, later, afterwards, soon, lately, recently, since, from then on, eventually, in the meantime, then, suddenly, at the same time, next, early this morning/year/century, after an interval, now, after, presently, later, afterward, somewhat later, finally, at last, all of a sudden,★表进行举例说明:for instance, for example, like, such as,

★表陈述事实: in fact, actually, as a matter of fact, to tell you the truth

★表示空间顺序的过渡词：near(to), far(from), in front of, behind, beside, beyond, above, below, to the right/ left, around, outside

★表示目的的过渡词：for this reason, for this purpose, so that

★表示强调的过渡词：in fact, indeed, surely, necearily, certainly, without any doubt, truly, to repeat, above all, most important

★其他常用过渡词语

and then, After that, Shortly/soon after that, In the end,For that reason, Obviously, (Un)fortunately, (Un)luckily, (Un)happily, Apart from…, To make things worse, Even worse, Generally speaking, Frankly speaking, Personally, In my opinion, Of course, By the way,For instance, For example, such as, and so on, such things like that, To one’s surprise (astonishment, delight, disappointment, regret, joy, comfort), As far as I am concerned （就我而言） As a result,To tell you the truth,Meanwhile, To be honest,As everyone knows,As we all know,As far as I know,It is known that… ,As a rule, Judging from…,According to…indeed.surely.certainly.of course.after all.at least.at most ,in general, the worst thing is…,apart from that, the most important is…, more importantly, one problem.., another problem…, the most serious problem

考官们看文章也必然要通过这些关键性的“标签”来判定你的文章是否结构清楚，条理自然。破解方法很简单，只要把下面任何一组的词汇加入到你的几个要点前就清楚了。

1）first, second, third, last（不推荐，原因：俗）

2）firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally（不推荐，原因：俗）

3）the first, the second, the third, the last（不推荐，原因：俗）

4）in the first place, in the second place, in the third place, lastly（不推荐，原因：俗）

5）to begin with, then, furthermore, finally（强烈推荐）

6）to start with, next, in addition, finally（强烈推荐）

7）first and foremost, besides, last but not least（强烈推荐）

8）most important of all, moreover, finally

9）on the one hand, on the other hand（适用于两点的情况）

10）for one thing, for another thing（适用于两点的情况）

高三英语作文