对比作文

推荐第1篇：对比作文

1） 要求论述两个对立的观点并给出自己的看法。

1．有一些人认为。。。 2．另一些人认为。。。3．我的看法。。。 The topic of ①-----------------（主题）is becoming more and more popular recently.There are two sides of opinions of it.Some people say A is heir favorite.They hold their view for the reason of②-----------------（支持A的理由一）What is more, ③-------------理由二).Moreover,④---------------(理由三).

While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons.Firstly,-----------------(支持B的理由一).Secondly (besides),⑥------------------（理由二）.Thirdly (finally),⑦------------------(理由三).

From my point of view, I think ⑧----------------（我的观点）.The reason is that⑨--------------------(原因).As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice.For me, the former is surely a wise choice .2） 给出一个观点，要求考生反对这一观点

Some people believe that ①----------------（观点一）.For example, they think②-----------------（举例说明）．And it will bring them③-----------------(为他们带来的好处).In my opinion, I never think this reason can be the point.For one thing,④-------------(我不同意该看法的理由一).For another thing,⑤-----------------(反对的理由之二)． Form all what I have said, I agree to the thought that⑥------------------(我对文章所讨论主题的看法)． 一．对比选择型作文模板

1． 模板一

1.Different people have different views on…1.开门见山直入主体，表明对某事人们的不同看法。

2.Some people perfer,….2．表明一部分人的看法。 3.Others tend to, ….3．另一部分的看法。

4.As to me, I agree with /to… 4．作者的看法。

5.Of course,….5．承认自己不赞同的看法有一定的合理性。 6.For example,…6.举例说明支持第五句。 7.But,…7 转折指出这种观点的不足。

8.The following reasons can account for my preference… 8 启下句过度到下段具体阐述自己所支持的观点的理由。

9.The main reason is….9.支持观点的理由一。

10.A good example to illustrate is… 10.举例说明理由一。 11.For another,…11.理由二。 12.From the foregoing,… 12.总结全文，从长远看来。

2002年6月真题：Is a test of spoken English neceary?

A test of spoken English will be included as an optional component of the College English Test (CET).Different people have different views on it.Some prefer to have such a test.Others tend to decline any kind of test of spoken English.As to me, I agree with the first statement.

Of course, a test of spoken English is very difficult to handle and the test time is not long enough to fully display participants’ ability to spoken in English.For example, if a candidate draws a topic which he of she is not familiar with, it’s hard to show his or her command of spoken English.But without such a test, some people may not have motivation to practise spoken English.The following reasons can account for my preference.

The main reason is that such a test enhances college students’ awarene of the importance of spoken English.A good example to illustrate is that several rs ago, college students only streed reading and writing skills, ignoring to building up listening and speaking ability.For another, a certificate of such a test will make job-hunting easier.From the foregoing, I think a test of spoken English is of neceity.

2． 模板二

1.There is no complete agreement among people as to ——1．开门见山直入主体，表明对某事人们的不同看法。

2.Some people consider,… 2．表明一部分人的看法。 3.However, others think, ….3．另一部分的看法。

4.Some people may say …4．观点一的理由。

5.They hold this opinion because…. 5．深入阐述观点一的理由。 6.However, others believe…6.观点二的理由。 7.They argue that,…7 深入阐述观点二的理由。 8.Personally,I am in favor of the…

8 我的看法。

9.Firstly,….9.个人看法依据

10.Secondly,…10.个人看法依据二。11.Most important of all …11.个人看法依据三。

12.Taking above-mentioned factors into consideration, we/I may reasonably conclude that …12.总结全文。

3． 模板三

1.When asked about…,different people will offer different opinions.1．开门见山直入主体，表明对某事人们的不同看法。

2.Some people take it for granted that…. 2．提出观点一。 3.In their opinion, ….3．观点一的理由一。 4.Besides …4．观点一的理由二

5.However, others hold… 5．提出观点二。.6.They maintain…6.观点二的理由一。 7.And…7观点二的理由二。

8.Weighing up these arguments, I am for… 8 我的观点。

9.For one thing…9.个人观点理由一。.10.For anther,…10.个人观点理由二。 11.For instance,…11.举例说明。

12.Therefore, as stated above… 12.综上所述再次强调自己的观点。 Is a test of spoken neceary?

A test of spoken English will be included as an optional component of the College English Test (CET).When talking about it, different people will offer different opinions.Some people take it for granted that college students should take a test of spoken English.In their opinion, it is good chance for them to test their spoken English.Besides, it also make them know the importance of the spoken English.

However, others hold that a test of spoken English is unneceary in the university and colleges.They maintain that college students’ practice of spoken English is not for testing but for daily use.And they think it is hard to manage such a subjective test.

Weighing up these two arguments, I am for the first point of view.For one thing, spoken English is very important.For another, a test of spoken English can guide and supervise students to make conversation practice.For instance, when choosing books and other materials, students can pick them according to the bands of the test they want to take.Therefore, as stated above, the first point of view can hold water.

推荐第2篇：作文对比训练

作文对比训练

作文对比训练

一、题目

阅读下面的文字，根据要求写一篇不少于800字的文章。(60分) 弯道超越本是赛车中的专用语，指的是在过弯道的时候超越其他人。弯道是每个车手都要面对的。相对于直道，弯道的困难大。在过弯道的时候，本来落后的可能超越，本来领先的可能被超越。 现在，“弯道超越”有了新的意义，它被广泛地适用于金融、政治等领域。弯道也有了特殊的意义，指充满困难却又蕴含机遇和挑战的时刻。只要把握好了这一时刻，就能超越对手，超越自己。

要求：选择一个角度构思作文，自主确定立意，确定文体，确定标题；不要脱离材料内容及含意

的范围作文，不要套作，不得抄袭

二、佳作点评

直面“弯道”挑战

弯道，是机遇与挑战的并存；弯道，是现实与理想的集结，弯道，是成功与失败的博弈。 弯道，意味着我们应当“不放弃、不抛弃”，不懈努力，超越局限。走好人生的“弯道”，便是敢于直面挑战，勇于超越自我的人生智慧。

史铁生曾在《给盲童朋友》中写道：生命是一个过程，是一个不断超越局限的过程。这便是命运，任何人都一样，在这个过程，我们遭遇痛苦，超越局限，从而感受幸福。史铁生遇到了人生的弯道。当他意识到他的梦想，被残缺的身体所限制，人生的所有光彩仿佛都与他无关，他消极过，他彷徨过。但，最终他选择加足马力，藐视痛苦，在人生的这个“弯道”上，史铁生以一次完美的超越赢得了这场比赛，获得了他独有的幸福。试想，如果史铁生在面对人生的“弯道”时没有直面挑战，而是选择了畏缩不前，那么他终将被对手超越，也无法在人生的跑道上比出自己的精彩。

一个成功的人即使在人生的“弯道”处遇到强劲对手也一样可以靠自己的坚持和努力最终超越梦想。 著名导演李安在小的时候就立志要当一个导演，他努力学习，学成后在好莱坞摸爬滚打多年都没一丝骄人的成绩，他的人生走进了关键的“弯道”——是继续坚守还是放弃理想？李安毅然选择了前者。纵然赛道上高手云集，李安硬是凭不屈不挠的意志在积蓄能量，终于一部《卧虎藏龙》横空出世，昭示了李安的成功。走在人生的“弯道”处，越是竞争激烈，越要不懈坚持，李安就凭他的“不放弃、不抛弃”的精神，赢在人生的“弯道”中。

行走在“弯道”处，“不放弃、不抛弃”，每一个人都会迎来人生的艳阳天。人如此，我们的国家也如此，行走在发展的“弯道”处，团结同心，勇往直前，不断地缔造成功。在“汶川地震”的弯道处，我们化悲痛为力量，见证了“大灾显大爱，大难见真情”，凝聚了华夏的炎黄子孙，铸成了一道摧不垮、压不倒的钢铁长城；在“奶粉事件”的弯道处，我们不遮掩，不恐慌，从“源”上堵，在“结”上解，食品安全意识得以前所未有的内化；在“经济危机”的弯道处，我们化“危”为“机”，调整产业结构，坚持自主创新，走上一条高耗低效的经济振兴之路。在“弯道”处，直面挑战，“弯道”就是一条阳光大道。

走好“弯道”是智慧，是历练；走好“弯道”是坚持，是超越。勇于直面“弯道”，迎接挑战，相信明年春色倍醉人。

【点评】

文章开头提出直面“弯道”挑战的信念“不放弃、不抛弃”，选取史铁生和李安的例子予以佐证，一是逆境中的“弯道”，一是顺境中的“弯道”，之后延伸至国家的“弯道”，强化主题。这篇文章有着很好的标本意义：考生在基本写作能力具备的前提下，拓宽视野，注重厚积，写好一篇文章就在情理之中。文章的选材是最大的亮点：源于文本的“史铁生”、源于积累的“李安”和源于社会生活的“热点”。足见，写好文章，生活处处是素材。

三、病文诊断

把握机遇，不断超越

“当机会来临时，你已经准备好了。”这是世界顶尖学府哈佛大学的校训。只有在不断抓住一个个关键机遇的人才会受到成功的青睐。

当南非第一位总统曼德拉就职后，世界的目光齐齐投向南非，记者们蜂拥而至，曼德拉表示他暂时不想接受任何来访。记者群中发出了失望的叹息声，他们无法采访到第一手资料了。这时，人群中挤出来一位小伙子，他用土著语向曼德拉表示祝贺，曼德拉很好奇，他很奇怪这个黄皮肤的亚洲人怎么会说当地的土著语，于是主动上前和他握手。这时年轻人从怀抱中掏出了话筒，开始采访曼德拉。他就是胡一虎，是第一位采访曼德拉的记者，也是唯一一位采访曼德拉的亚洲记者。人们为胡一虎的机智而赞叹不已，他及时抓住了机遇，使他所在的公司赢得了第一手资料，从而越超了其他传媒。

在生活中，我们不仅要抓住机遇，更要善于发现机遇。大师梅兰芳在一次演出《霸王别姬》时曾被人当场指责，他并不计较，而是千方百计打听老人住址并登门拜访，他的谦虚和热爱艺术的精神感动了老人。老人终于指出：“虞姬是个美人，但你所的剑法却是男人用的。”梅兰芳醍醐灌顶，他更加努力的工作，将其艺术生涯推上了最高峰，从而奠定了他在京剧中至今无人可攻的崇高地位。

只有在社会进程中的某些变化期或人生道路上的一些关键点不畏种种风险与挑战，抓住了种种机遇，才能超越对手，超越自我。就像在赛车运动中，弯道相对于直道其变数多、困难大。但有的车手会在弯道中落后，而有的车手会利用弯道超越对手。

一曲《今夜无人入睡》让保罗誉满全球，他原本只是个普通的手机销售员，但他一直有一个明星梦，他数次努力数次失败，终于有一天，他在“英国有天才”的选秀节目中对歌曲的完美演绎震惊了全世界。

无需胆怯，不要徘徊。善于发现机遇并且敢于抓住，表现真正的自我，这是我们的选择，尝试过，我们不会后悔！

【点评】

这篇文章被专家判为42分，我觉得高了，原因在于文章不是很切题，只抓住了材料的一个方面，实现超越，应要抓住机会；材料的另一面是弯道处，机会与挑战并存。所以第一个升格的地方：论述部分应紧扣“在弯道处抓住机会实现超越”这点展开；第二升格的地方：“胡一虎采访曼德拉”的素材选用不当，胡一虎凭借创意的问好打动了曼德拉，与“弯道”何干。

四、议论性散文开头示范 例1：常识，易知而难行。为何？仔细思索过后，便发现有太多的主客观因素在干扰我们。（2009 年广东高考：《常识，为何易知而难行》）

分析：采用开门见山的方法，考生直接切入话题，亮明观点，单刀直入，让急于知道你的文章是

否符合题意的阅卷教师吃一颗“定心丸”。开篇就从三种味道的不同构筑起一种全新的思想境界，视角独特，放射出强大的思考力。

点拨：

（1）这是高考优秀议论文采用率最高的一种方法。即在文章的一开头就与全文的中心论点保持

一致方向, 不是亮出观点, 就是导出观点。

（2）写作前要认真思考，提炼出引领全文主题的开头。

（3）语言要精练，简洁明了，要有一种使阅卷老师一望便知全文重点的效果。

例2：冰心说：“成功的花儿，人们只惊羡她现时的明艳，然而当初的芽儿却浸透了生命的血雨，

洒满了奋斗的泪泉。”也许花开得艳丽迷人，会出乎人们的意料，然而当你看到花儿所付出的牺牲后，你便会觉得一切尽在情理之中。（2005全国高考：《小议“出人意料与情理之中”》） 分析：考生引用冰心的名言开头，既顺势引出“出人意料与情理之中”这一话题，又彰显出作者

良好的文化素养，一箭双雕，美不胜收。另除引用名言除了引用名言警句，还可以是诗词、歌词等。

点拨：

（1）增加可信度，增强感染力，言约意丰，以势夺人。

（2）可引用诗词、名言警句、熟语、广告、歌词等等可直接引用，也可间接引用。

（3）要贴切得体，切忌张冠李戴，出现常识性错误。: 例3：古人多以“三”为大，大在何处？大在刘备“三顾茅庐”的虔诚，大在孔子“三人行，必

有我师”的谦虚，更重要的则是大在“三省其身”的谦恭和谨慎。古人如此，今人又何尝不是如此？到了今天，我们同样需要这种“三省其身”的道德修养。（2007湖北《自省》） 高考作文开头围绕主题设问，或有问有答，能开启思绪，引人深思，突出主题。在作文之前，我们不妨用几分钟精心构思，用设问置疑的悬念导入，这样容易抓住人们阅读时的好奇心，吸引人们阅读，从而达到良好效果。

例4：一棵小树，自会长入云端，请不要拔苗助长；一个蚕蛹，自会破壳而出，请不要剪破蛹壳；

一个花蕊，自会绽放魅力，请不要拨开花蕊；大自然的一切，都有其规律，没有人能凭自己的意志去改变它，因为大道合乎自然。（2008全国Ⅱ卷《大道合乎自然》）

分析：文势流畅，节奏明快, 文意指向清晰可见。这些整齐的排比句式，有三个优势：其一，是 内容丰富，涵盖面广；其二，语言整齐，富有文采；其三，文章富有气势，扣题简洁明快。所以，语言形象，才华出众，绝妙！

点拨：（1）排比内容要有内在逻辑性；

（2）排比内容一定要扣到观点。

（3）排比只是一种表达形式，并非不可用；但不能只是形式。

例5：生命犹如一列疾驰的列车，常识则是其车轨。生命脱离了常识，就如列车脱离轨道，免不

了受伤，更甚者，列车再也不能行驰。（2009广东高考《生命之轨》）

点拨：

（1）深入浅出，化平淡为生动，化抽象为具体。

（2）用比喻开头，尤其是里一连串比喻句开头，新颖别致优美。

（3）本体和喻体必须是不同类，且存在相似点。

五、个性化写作例文

不朽的昭君

你的人生本是宽阔的直道，不甘平庸的你更是拐出了一个又一个漂亮的弯道。从此，你的人生焕发异样光彩。———题记

或许是上天的无意安排，或许是上天有意要考验你，将你出生在群山万壑之中。那，又何妨？你天生丽质、智慧过人，琴棋书画，样样学，样样通，为的就是要不同凡人，为的就是拐好人生的每一弯道。于是，我们看到绝世才貌的你，小小年龄就美名远扬。

当别人还在家中研习女红的时候，你已拐出了人生第一个弯口：登上雕花龙凤船，入长江，逆汉水，过秦岭来到长安。

当别人争先贿赂画工毛延寿时，你已拐出了人生第二个弯口：绝不贿赂画工，保持自己特立独行的禀性。尽管画布上的你平添了几颗黑痣。

面对和亲，当后宫嫔妃争着躲避时，你又一次拐出了人生第三个弯道：挺身而出，甘愿当和亲的使者。

三个弯道，你已将同时期，同时代的女子远远地甩在了身后；三个弯道，你的人生已达到了新的境界。

别长安，出潼关，渡黄河，过雁门，不知不觉，浩浩荡荡的和亲队伍已驶过了塞外，思念故乡，思念亲人的情怀抒发心中澎湃。凛冽的寒风吹乱了你的秀发，更吹乱了你绵长的思绪。抱起心爱的琵琶，一曲思念，离别之歌悠远响起。大雁低飞，聆听你的心语；明月高照，欢送你的离去。诗人用“千载琵琶作胡语，奉命怨恨曲中论”来写你。我想你不会是这样的，除去淡淡的离别之苦，的则是会心一笑，因为你看到了“城门晏闭，牛马布野，三世无犬吠之警，黎庶忘干戈之役”的场景。

塞外的风不再凛冽，征夫不再抱怨，怨妇不再流泪，他们破涕而笑，无数的家庭结束了不眠之夜。塞外的草长得更茂盛，塞外的羊群长得更加肥壮，塞外的天更高，大雁飞得更高，叫的更响……

昭君，你用智慧拐好了自己人生，更拐好了大汉近半个世纪的和平安宁。

美哉，那绝世的容貌；惊哉，那柔弱的双肩竟能扛住一个王朝的兴旺。

不朽的昭君。

【简评】读过2002年优秀高考作文《昭君的选择》，差点抹煞了今年的这篇好作文。同样以“昭君出塞”为底子，但所不同的是这篇作文是通过第二人称形式，围绕作文材料中的“弯道超越”，仿佛在和“昭君”探讨人生，赞美昭君的超人智慧和抓住的历史机遇的超凡能力，走好了人生中几个重要的关键点。

文章不仅仅是扣题准确巧妙，联想丰富自然，内容别开生面，广阔的历史背景中，一道道绚丽的风景，在凄美的意境中任我们去体验，去感悟。更不必说语言生动优美，结构完整，细节生动的渲染，仿佛作者对着这千古美人的面仰慕、崇敬之情溢于言表，又仿佛是自己最亲密的家人一般，带着无比的骄傲在向别人夸耀。尤其是作者行文的张弛有度的驾驭能力，牵引着读者和他一样仰慕赞美的心。

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班级的差生

“刷、刷、刷”，像在战场上应战似的，同学们小心翼翼地低头在答卷。

考场中，坐着两位具有鲜明对比的学生：

一位是蓝兰，她那黝黑的脸子沁出了一层细细密密的汗，那握笔的手也微微地发抖。她发狠似的紧紧咬住嘴唇，似乎想咬出一个哪怕得分最小的答案来，但……

另一位是班里成绩最优异的杨君君同学，此刻，她早已经答完了试卷上所有的题目。这张试卷对于她来说，好像是太容易了一点。她瞥了一下手表，知道离收卷时间还有二十几分钟。于是，她便无聊地看看这个同学，望望那个同

学。蓦地，杨君君得意洋洋的目光停落在蓝兰的身上，她欣赏似的打量着蓝兰，总觉得蓝兰是班级里的后进生，而且脑子又不聪明。这感觉，使君君想起了……

前几天，数学老师为了使同学们更有把握地考出一个理想的成绩来，特地在黑板上抄了许多难题。

当老师疲惫地伸出沾满粉笔灰和挂满汗水的手要洗时，竟发现了那洗手盆里没有一点水，毛巾也被孤独地冷落在一边。老师不禁责问：

“今天谁值日？怎么不打水？”

值日？打水？噢！为了这复习，考试，再复习，考试的事儿，同学们已经无法腾出时间，也不愿来理这些“闲事”了。

但杨君君心中十分清楚。今天是自己值日，她望了望黑板上那密密麻麻的练习题，又瞟了一眼那个洗手盆，心中着实踌躇了一会：抄练习题，还是浪费时间去打水？

正在杨君君拿不定主意的时候，蓝兰已经放下笔，默默地走过去，双手捧着洗手盆，向门外迈去……

杨君君回过神来，又默默地望着这个差生——蓝兰时，心中猛地一动赶紧撕下一页白纸，迅速而仔细地抄下几个得分最多的题目，然后看准了监考老师转身之际，将白纸捏成一团，准确地扔向低着头，苦苦思考的蓝兰……

收卷时间终于到了，杨君君第一个交上了卷纸，将要迈出教室的时候她又一次有意无意地瞄了蓝兰一眼。恰巧，蓝兰这时也抬起头，若有所思地看了一眼杨君君。她苦笑了一下，也匆匆地交上了卷子。

教室外，蓝兰看到的是一张张喜悦又轻松的脸蛋，听到的是一片“唧唧喳喳”的笑语。

“唉！”蓝兰无声地叹了一口气，默默地走出了这与自己无缘的地方。 “蓝兰，等一下！”杨君君跟上了她，说，“你怎么啦？天天愁眉苦脸的？”

蓝兰诚挚地、轻轻地说：“君君，我总觉得你缺少了点什么。”

“缺少了什么？”君君奇怪地问。

蓝兰塞给君君一张纸，说：“也许你看了这个以后，你会明白的。”接着，便朝前走去了。

君君狐疑地打开纸一看，原来是自己在考试时扔给蓝兰的那张纸，只见背面写了几行工整又大的字：

“对不起，我不能做‘小偷’。我相信，我能补得上成绩。希望你做个名副其实的‘优生’！”

君君好像明白了什么，又好像什么也不明白，她决定追上蓝兰问个清楚。但她在跑的过程中，像喝醉的人迎面淋了冷水似的，她终于赶上蓝兰……

瞧！她们的眼眶中都含着晶莹的泪珠，两双手紧紧地相握在一起，似乎都想从对方寻找什么似的……

简评： 一个是品德优学习差的蓝兰，一个是学习优思想表现一般的君君，性格互补，这是人物的对比。由前面的“互不理解”到“两双手紧紧地相握在一起，似乎都想从对方寻找什么似的”，这是前后事件的对比。

例文二

丑 娘

在村里，没有人不说我娘长得丑的，或许就是这个缘故，在她嫁到李家之后，人们先是叫她丑媳妇，在生下我以后，不管长辈小辈的又都改称她做“丑娘”。

娘说我是日本同中国打仗的第6个年头来到这个世上的，在娘身边我一直长到了8岁，后来才由爹送我到城里的一所小学去念书。当时我不明白丑是什么意思，因为娘待我特别好，临走的时候，她给我做了一双毛边布鞋，一个小书包，书包里除装了一支铅笔外，还塞下了满满一袋鸡蛋。我依稀记得就在她把我送到村口时，我第一次看见她流下了眼泪，泪水大滴大滴地顺着她的脸颊直落到我的小手背上。一件事使我开始认识了我的母亲。

一天，学校上体育课，因为舍不得穿娘做的鞋，当我把它脱下挂在凳子上时，恰巧让老师给看见了，他提过鞋左看右看，随即又把鞋举得高高的，兴奋地说，好漂亮的鞋呀!说

着，又把鞋底端详了半天，数着一层一层连起来的底，足有8层之多，且针脚细密结实，靠脚掌和脚跟的部分都挑上了花。之后，他问我：你娘一定最最漂亮吧!殊不知就在我要回答老师的问话时，同村来的一个同学抢上话头：老师，他娘不漂亮，村里人都叫她丑娘。

之后，我仿佛才知道丑是什么意思。

或许老师说的全错了，而那个同学的话是对的。我的娘确实不漂亮，黑黑的肤色，原本挽成髻的头发在解放的那年她自个改成了齐耳短发，额头上一块大大的胎记，在黝黑的脸上是这样的显眼。为此，我心里像满含着委曲，在公开场合很少提及她，更不愿把同学领到家里，只是在每次放假时呆呆的看着生我养我的她，而这时娘总是像欠帐似的默默地把我揽在她胸前。临别，又拿出一双同样的毛边布鞋给我，那双分外黑亮的眼睛像是两潭水，即使漆黑的夜也能让人感到它的明亮。

许多现实生活中发生的事，往往需要以后才能得到公正的解释。 到60年代末，我已经是一个大小伙子了，娘已苍老了许多，

原来虽黑但还丰满的脸颊已经凹陷了下去，头发变得稀疏而花白，手背上的骨节兀突出来。看着娘养我这么大，一辈子在农村吃苦，且作为一个丑女子面对别人的嘲笑从不与人红脸，对于种种伤心话语所表现出的难能的平静，我的心在发酸。一天，当我把在外边买的几件湖蓝色起暗花的衬衣和两瓶珍贵的雪花膏给她时，她先是一惊，继而情不自禁的又像儿时一样把我拢到她的胸前，嘴里喃喃地说：要那干什么呢?娘是不配了，待以后你相上媳妇了就送给她吧。娘还说到时一定要把姑娘领回家让她看看。

我是70年代初结婚的，按照她的嘱咐。婚前几天我和爱人终于赶到家里。事前我就同爱人讲好，娘一辈子在农村，农村人显丑显老，见了面一定要多说些宽老人心的话。爱人说，谁还没有老的一天，娘一定不丑。

到家了，不知怎么，我发现屋里空荡荡的，看着爹和弟弟的眼睛又红又肿，我一问才知道娘已在一个星期前病逝了，爹

说是娘病重时交待他叫不让我们知道的，要不会冲了我们的喜。望着突然空寂和失去了生气的屋子，我极力控制住自己的感情，当到了娘的床前收拾她的遗物时，我发现一切都是经过精心整理过的，唯见一块红绸布包放在她平时靠头的那一面，我急忙打开一看，原来是两双精致的毛边布鞋，一大一小，显然一双是给我的，一双是给她的儿媳妇的，看着看着，我觉得膝头一阵酸涩，扑通一声跌跪在地上，我和爱人的眼泪如泉涌般直落下来。

我想起了儿时老师说过的话：你的娘一定是最最漂亮的吧!

简评： 《丑娘》的中心是表现“丑娘”外表的“丑”和“丑娘”内心母爱的“美”，所以作者紧扣娘“丑”的特点来展开全篇。这个“丑”首先来自“村里人”的眼光标准，从“丑媳妇”到“丑娘”；来自上学后我对“丑”的“委屈”的印象，“黑黑的肤色”、“额头上一块大大的胎记，在黝黑的脸上是这样的显眼”；其次丑娘自己对“丑”的认同和承受，“总是像欠帐似的默默地把我揽在她的胸前”，这都是生活中种种不真切的表象。为了表现“丑娘”内心母爱的“美”，作者主要描写了丑娘的行动：“满满的一袋鸡蛋”、送别儿子上学时脸颊上“大滴大滴的泪水”、“针脚细腻结实”的“毛边布鞋”、自己病重时也交待不让儿子知道，生怕冲了儿子的“喜”……这样，将 “丑娘”外表的“丑”和“丑娘”内心母爱的“美”形成鲜明对比，突出“丑娘”无私的母爱。全文是把 “丑娘”外表的“丑”和“丑娘”一系列行动所展现出的“美” 并列在一起进行了对比，共同表现了“丑娘”对“我”无私的母爱。

三、衬托法：正衬

一件难忘的事

郑宁和我搭着肩膀高高兴兴地来到教室时，一张断了一只脚的椅子又挡住了我们的去向。忽然，一个同学走过来，用脚一扫，这已难以站稳的瘸脚椅便四脚朝天了。

这张椅子是有一天一个实习老师来听课时带来的，后来没有谁把它送还给教务处。天长日久，椅子上的灰尘慢慢地积起来，以后又不知谁弄断了它的脚，从此它受尽了我们全班同学的折磨。

我看到这瘸脚椅子翻了，不禁高兴起来，前几天，学校正表扬一批同学学习雷锋做好事，我正愁找不到好事呢！对，把它扶起来，让同学们知道我也是九十年代的活雷锋，也让老师夸奖一下。于是我抢上去端椅子，生怕郑宁抢走了我的好事。当我放下椅子时，我希望郑宁尽快去告诉老师，但郑宁没有这样做，我暗地里责怪他，还决心下次他做好事也不告诉老师，使他受不了表扬。

下午第三节课后，我瞟了他一眼，独自儿下楼活动，郑宁没出来，我也不叫他，和其他同学快活地玩着。半个小时后，我玩得筋疲力尽，准备上楼拿书包回家。一进教室，出乎我的意料，郑宁还在，而且在修椅子。他看见我，微笑地说：“等一下，我把椅子修好了，咱们一起走。”说着，他丁丁当当地又敲了起来。

我暗自责备自己怎么这么爱虚荣？做好事是为了表扬……椅子的缺陷就要修好了，可我心灵的缺陷呢？我两腮隐隐约约地感到发热了。

我连忙上前帮他一起修好了椅子，而且悄悄地把椅子送到了教务处，两人搭着肩膀有说有笑地回家了。我想：明天谁也不知这椅子是谁修好的，老师也不会表扬我们，但我心里觉得非常踏实。 评析：

文章中的“我”做好事，品德很好；而“郑宁”比“我”想得更周到，品德比“我”更好；这是正衬法。

四、衬托法：反衬

生活告诉我坦诚

“收废纸！……”门外传来了一阵清脆的叫声。我透过窗，望了望堆积在后院墙角边的废纸，脑里便出现了一个念头：这些废纸放着也白占了地，倒不如卖了，还可以卖些钱来。

于是，我叫住了那收废纸的老妇人，打过招呼，我便到后院去取废纸。我抱起废纸刚要走，忽然发觉这些十分轻，卖不了几个钱。有什么办法在短时间内使纸加重呢？正在这时，一不留神，放在上面的一张废纸滑了下来，掉进了我身旁的一只水桶里，只见，这纸一碰到水，就像见了神仙，快速地吸着水。不到一会儿，纸就全湿了。捡起这废纸时，纸却比刚才沉了许多。对！书上不是明明白白地写着：纸能吸水，可以使纸的份量增加……我何不？

说干就干。我把一部分纸扔进水桶里，浸湿。为了避免收废纸的人怀疑，怕不要纸。我还从中耍了个小聪明，将废纸按两张干夹一张湿的顺序摆放好。这下，可真是棒极了！纸一下子重了好几倍，我抱也抱不动，结果还是拖着出去。

老妇人仍旧不慌不忙地帮我把废纸用绳捆好，用秤称。她似乎对我没有丝毫的怀疑。称完后，也就随手往车上一放，装置好。

嘿！三十斤，五元钱。我高兴地露出一种得意的笑。我拿了钱，便想进屋，心里正暗暗庆幸我这成功的杰作。

“小妹妹！等等……”真是做贼心虚，我愣了一下，不好，难道她知道我的阴谋吗？

“小妹妹，这是你的钱吗？”她打断了我的思绪。幸亏老天爷开恩！我喘了一口气，回过头，望了望她，又望了望她手中的那张“工农兵”，这才恍然大悟。原来，刚才我拖纸到这儿时，不留神把爸爸给我买书的钱掉了。

我接过钱，脸上火辣辣的。也不知哪来的勇气，向她说明的事情的原委，请求退钱。老妇人却笑了笑，说：“没关系，我回家晒晒。”说完，便又拉起了车。

“收废纸了！收废纸了！……”这熟悉的声音又响了。 评析：

文章中写“我”的“贪财”，将废纸浸水出售，而“老妇人”却不介意，说“回家晒晒”，以“我”的“劣”衬托“老妇人”的“优”，这是反衬法。

五、衬托法：欲扬先抑

抑扬法包括“欲扬先抑”和“先扬后抑”，我们平时常见的是“欲扬先抑”。“欲扬先抑”中的“扬”，是指褒扬；“抑”，指贬低。所谓“欲扬先抑”，就是指作者想褒扬某个人或物，却不从他（它）的优点落笔，而是先贬抑他（它），从其不足处写起。用这种手法，形成波澜，使情节富于变化，从而使所写人或物的优点得以突出，同时使读者在阅读过程中，产生恍然大悟的感觉，留下比较深刻的印象。

事例分析： 班 主 任

那天是9月1日，是我去七年级报到的日子。当我第一次看见她——班主任兼语文老师白明芳的时候，心里充满了厌恶。不是因为别的，只是她的长相我不喜欢。心想：这副“尊容”的老师，课肯定也教得不好吧？带着这样的心情，我上了一周的课。

这一周的课下来，我发现白老师“毛病”很多：普通话不标准，作业要求太严格，一周写的作文太多„„天哪，我都要被她这些毛病折磨疯了！而让我对她讨厌到无以复加的地步，是因为那天下午的一件事。

我们正上着自习课，班里闹哄哄的，好多人在说话。后面的同学向我借改正液，之后好一会儿没还，我正好要用，转身伸手问她要。这时，白老师走了进来，班上全都安静了下来。正当我明白发生了什么时，白老师那两道“X”光已经照到了我，并第一个点了我的名：“王昱单，站起来，你在说什么？”面色严肃，目光冷峻，让我的后背直发毛。心想，“我怎么就这么背啊，那么多人老师只批评我一个，太不公平了！”再后来，白老师让我写了700字的检讨！

使我对她的态度发生转变的是那次月考。第三次月考时，我正好分在了白老师监考的考场，心里叫苦不迭，好在白老师没有太注意我，否则„„考英语时，我的卷子很快就答完了，可我的胃部开始隐隐作疼，后来越来越痛。于是，我趴在桌子上，一只手捂着胃。我不知道自己当时的表情是怎样，总之白老师注意到了我。

她快步走过来，关切地问我：“王昱单，你怎么了？哪里不舒服吗？”

“老师，我胃疼。”我有气无力地回答。

“哦，那你先交卷吧，去我办公室坐一下，好吗？”她的目光充满了柔和。

“不了，白老师，我要把这次考试考完，不然我的名次就落后了。”

“那……你坚持一下，我去帮你倒杯水。”说完，白老师就匆匆去了办公室。

旁边的学生注视着我，议论纷纷：“怎么碰上个这么好的老师啊！”“嗯，就是，对学生太关心了！”

不一会儿，白老师端了一杯水回来了。“王昱单，你先把 这杯水喝了，过一会儿要是还不舒服，你就先交卷吧。”“嗯„„”她关心、爱护的目光让我感到了温暖。

这件事，让我转变了对白老师的看法。

此后，我越来越感觉到，白老师先前的“毛病”，实际是对我们好——普通话有时不标准，她会把某些字音强调一下，易于我们记住；作业要求太严格，是为加强平时积累，提高成绩；一周的作文太多，是为锻炼我们的写作水平。

因为理解了白老师，所以我也越来越爱戴她，敬重她。她的语文课上得真的很好，讲解认真，思路清晰，字词扎实，给我留下了十分深刻的印象和美好的回忆。要不是她的严格要求，我今天不会取得这样好的成绩。

虽然我现在不在白老师班了，但是我永远感谢她，感谢她对我的教育，感谢她教会了我这么多！ 评析

《班主任》开头写对班主任白老师充满了厌恶，既不喜欢老师的长相，也不喜欢她的课堂，这是对白老师的贬抑。后来发生的一系列的事情，让“我”明白白老师先前的“毛病”，实际上都是为了我们好，这些所谓的“毛病”，正是她对学生负责的表现。由此，“我”才认识到白老师的可贵品质，进而深深喜欢上了老师。赞美老师，表达对老师的爱，这是文章要表现的中心，但文章开头却写尽了白老师的不足，这就是欲扬先抑的手法。

推荐第4篇：对比选择型作文

对比选择型作文模板 模板一

Topic:_____________ 1 Different people have different views on_________________.2 It is held by some _____________.3 But it is held by others _________.4 Those who hold the first opinion think ___________________.5 In their view, ________________.6 In contrast, others think _______.7 They argue that ______________.8 As for me, I agree with /to ____.9 admittedly, __________________.10 Further more, _______________.11 Finally, _____________________. 12 In conclusion, _______________.

信息提示：

1：两种观点针对的问题或现象 2：观点一

3：以观点一对立的观点二 4：观点一的理由

5：深入阐述观点一的理由 6：观点二的理由

7：深入阐述观点二的理由 8：我的看法

9：个人看法的依据一 10：个人看法的依据二 11：个人看法的依据三 12：个人的结论

模板二

topic: _______________ 1 There is a pair of opposite ideas on________________________.2 Some people consider ____________.3 However, others think ____________.4 Some people may say ___________.5 They hold this view because _______.6 In contrast, others believe _________.7 They argue that _________________.8 As to me, I am in favor of ______.9 First, ________________________.10 second, ______________________.11 The most important of all _______. 12 In a word, ____________________. 信息提示：

1：两种观点针对的问题或现象 2：提出观点一

3：提出以观点一对立的观点二 4：观点一及观点一的理由 5：深入阐述观点一的理由 6：观点二及观点二的理由 7：深入阐述观点二的理由 8：我的看法

9：个人看法的依据一 10：个人看法的依据二

11：个人看法总的依据三或依据三 12：个人的结论或文章的结论

模板三：.Topic:___________________ 1.When asked about___________, different people will offer different opinions.

2.Some people take it for granted that__________________.3.However, others hold_________.4.Some people think__________.5.In their opinion,______________.6.While others maintain_________.7.They believe _________________.8.For my part, I prefer ________.9.For one thing,_______________.10.For another, ________________.11.Therefore, _________________.12.It may be safe to say_________.信息提示：

1：两种观点针对的问题或现象 2：提出观点一

3：提出与观点一对立的观点二 4：观点一及观点一的理由 5：深入阐述观点一的理由 6：观点二及观点二的理由 7：深入阐述观点二的理由 8：我的看法或偏好 9：个人看法的依据一 10：个人看法的依据二 11：个人的结论 12：文章的结论

范文一：

Directions: For this part you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic: Is Test of Spoken English Neceary? You should write at lest 120 words, and base your composition on the outline ( given in China ) below: 1.很多人认为有必要举行英语口语考试，理由是…… 2.也有人持不同意见; 3.我的看法和打算.（模板一）

Is Test of Spoken English Neceary? 1） Different people have different views.on a test of spoken English.2) lt is held by some that adopting such a test in China is absolutely neceary.3)But it is held by others that it is unneceary.4) Those who hold the first opinion think that fluent spoken English is badly needed in today\'s society.5) In their view, a test of spoken English will bring the importance of oral English to the awarene of college students.6) In contrast, others think that good reading and writing skills will be enough for English learners\' task performance.7) They argue that fluent spoken English does not necearily mean a better future.

8) As for me, I agree with the former.9) Admittedly, the test can encourage students to try every means to improve their spoken English.10) Further more, the ability to speak English fluently is a must for us in a highly competitive society.11) Finally, 1 think that the test will help a lot in my job-seeking.12) ln conclusion, a test of spoken English is neceary. 范文二： （模板二）

Is Test of Spoken English Neceary? 1) There is a pair of opposite ideas on test of Spoken English.2) Some people consider it absolutely neceary to adopt a test of spoken English

in

China.3) However, others think that is unneceary.4) Some people may say that is a shame for a Chinese college student with over ten years’ learning cannot even communicate with a native English speaker.5) They hold this view because a test of spoken English will bring the importance of oral English into the awarene of college students.6) In contrast, others believe that many people do not speak English at all work.7) They argue that college students are already under considerable preure from their courses. 8) As to me, I am in favor of the former opinion.9) First, the test can encourage college students to improve their oral English.10) second, the ability to speak English fluently is a must for anyone in the more open society.11) The most important of all, the test will urge me to study harder.12) In a word, the test of spoken English is neceary.

范文三：

Directions: For this part you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic: Reading Selectively Or Extensively? You should write at lest 120 words, and base your composition on the outline ( given in China ) below: 1.有人认为读书要有选择; 2.有人认为应当博览群书; 3.我的看法.（模板三）

Reading Selectively Or Extensively? 1)When asked about reading, different people will offer different opinions.2) Some people take it for granted that students should read selectively.3) However, others hold that students should read extensively.4) Some people think that selective reading is the best way to study with high efficiency.5) ln their opinion, students can never overspend the precious time on non- profeional books because their time is quite limited.6) While others maintain that students should absorb all kinds of knowledge.7) They believe that students cannot get a general view about the world without extensive reading.8) For my part, I prefer the former opinion.9)For ore thing, reading selectively is not equal to reading with discrimination.10) For another, students should devote their limited time and energy to reading relevant and beneficial books.11) Therefore, reading irrelevant books only wastes their precious time.12) It may be safe to say that reading selectively is the best policy for college students to abide by in study. 范文四：

Directions: For this part you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic: Do “ Lucky Number “Really Bring Good Luck? You should write at lest 120 words, and base your composition on the outline ( given in China ) below: 1.有人认为某些数字会带来好运; 2.也有人认为数字和运气无关; 3.试说明你的看法.（模板三）

Do “ Lucky Number “Really Bring Good Luck?

1) When asked about lucky numbers, different people will offer different opinions.2) Some people take it for granted that lucky numbers will bring luck.3) However, others hold that lucky numbers will never bring any good luck.4) Some people think that lucky numbers make one feel lucky and in turn one\'s lucky sense will inspire him to create lucky ideas.5)In their opinion, lucky numbers have been connected with lucks by the God.6) While others maintain that lucky numbers are actually numbers, and some people like lucky numbers just for fun.7) They believe that believing in lucky numbers is no other than a pure super- stition.8)For my part, I prefer the latter opinion.9) For one thing, lucky numbers make some people feel lucky, but a lucky mind will not produce miracles.10) For another, lucky numbers can never change the objective reality.11) Therefore, I believe the truth instead of lucky numbers.12) lt may be safe to say that what contributes to succe most is hard work rather than lucky numbers, so it is yourself who really bring you good luck. 范文五：

Directions: For this part you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic: My View on Job-Hopping.You should write at lest 120 words, and base your composition on the outline ( given in China ) below: 1．有些人喜欢始终从事一种工作， 因为…… 2.有些人喜欢经常更换工作,因为……

3.我的看法 （模板一）

My View on Job-Hopping 1) Different people have different views on job-hopping.2)It is held by some that staying on one post and watching their achievements accumulate is the best policy.3) But it is held by others that job-hopping from time to time can bring a full view of life and challenges.4) Those who hold the first opinion think that frequent job-hopping is imprudent and tactle, for constant practice in a special field makes all experts.5) In their view, the way to succe is sticking to one job for long until retirement.6) In contrast, others think that change means progre.7) They argue that they change their jobs in order to acquire more ability.8)As for me, I agree to the former opinion.9) Admittedly, my profeion leaves me little chance to change my job.10) Further more, I will spare no effort to study in the one field.11) Finally, I am in favor of my present job.12) In conclusion, this permanent job as a teacher of chemistry brings me much pleasure and excitement. 范文六：

Directions: For this part you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic: Why I Take the College English Test Band 6.You should write at lest 120 words, and base your composition on the outline ( given in China ) below: 1.有人认为没有必要参加大学英语六级考试 (简称CET-6) 2.我参加CET-6考试的理由.（模板一）

Why I Take the College English Test Band 6

1) Different people have different views on whether we should take the College English Test Band 6 or not.(2)It is held by some that it is quite neceary because CET-6 is a well acknowledged test.3) But it is held by others that it is unneceary because of various reasons.

4) Those who hold the first opinion think that English is useful to everyone in the long run.5) In their view, CET-6 is an excellent opportunity to train students\' adaptability to examinations.9) In contrast, others think that the test has little effect on improving the study of college students.7) They argue that test scores sometimes even can\'t reflect the true level of\' students.

8) As for me, I agree with the former.9) Admittedly, with the development of our society, English is Becoming more important for us.10) Further more, CET-6 is a good opportunity for us to test our English level.11) Finally, even a failure may stimulate greater progre in our study.12) In conclusion, taking CET-6 is vital for each college student. 范文七：

Directions: For this part you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic: My View on Opportunity.You should write at lest 120 words, and base your composition on the outline ( given in China ) below: 1.有人认为机会是极少的, 另一些人认为人人都会有某种机会; 2.你的看法如何?写出你的观点,说明你的理由,并且适当举例; 3.在你的文章结尾处不要忘记写出你的结论.（模板一）

My View on Opportunity 1) Different people have different views on opportunity.2) It is held by some that only the luckiest can obtain a few opportunities in this world.3) But it is held by others that everybody has his opportunities sometime in his life.

(4) Those who hold the first opinion think that they are not lucky enough to have opportunities.5) In their view, not every- body has an opportunity in his life.6) In contrast, others think that people mied most opportunities just because they had no awarene to seize an opportunity when it came.(7)They argue that wise men catch opportunities rather than wait for them, for example, many people had watched apples falling from the tree, but only Newton discovered the Law of Gravity.

(8)As for me, I agree to the latter opinion.9) Admittedly, no one is denied to opportunities.10) Further more, everybody has an opportunity to be succeful in his life.1l) Finally, I believe that everyone is equal in front of opportunities in many cases.12) In conclusion opportunities are only for the prepared minds

推荐第5篇：对比选择型作文

对比选择型作文：

Reading Selectively or Extensively 1) 有人认为读书要有选择 2) 有人认为应当博览群书 3) 我的看法

Example 1:

There is a heated debate over reading.It is commonly accepted that students should read extensively.In contrast, others think that students should read selectively.Those who hold the first opinion suggest that students should absorb all kinds of knowledge.In their view, students cannot get a general view about the whole world without extensive reading.However, others think that selective reading is the best way to achieve high efficiency.They argue that students should not overspend time on non-profeional books because their time is quite limited.Considering one after another, I stand on the side of the latter opinion.First of all, reading selectively is not equal to reading with discrimination.Furthermore, students must spend their limited time on reading relevant (有关的，中肯的，有重大作用的)and beneficial books.Thirdly, reading irrelevant books only wastes our time.Therefore, reading selectively is the best policy in study.

Example 2

Recently, we may hear quite different opinions on reading.Most people take it for granted that students should read selectively.However, others hold that extensive reading may bring more benefits.A dominant idea is that selective reading is the best way to attain high efficiency.In this opinion, students cannot overspend their time on non-profeional books.Neverthele, the objectors think that students should absorb all kinds of knowledge.They argue that students cannot get a general view without extensive reading.

As to me, I prefer the former opinion.On the one hand, reading selectively is not equal to reading with discrimination.On the other hand, students can only devote their limited time to reading relevant books.Therefore, reading selectively is a practical method in study.In conclusion, reading selectively is the best policy for us.

推荐第6篇：对比选择型作文

结构模板1

1) When it comes to there is no complete agreement among people.2）Some people take it for granted that___

4）Those people who hold the former opinion believe由一 .5) In addition, 观点一的理由二.6) However, still others advocate the later opinion.7) They argue8) Besides, they hold that 9) Weighting up these two arguments, 10) For one thing,11) For another,12) Taking above-mentioned factors into consideration, we/I may reasonably conclude that模板套用

Should the University Campus Be Open to Tourists?

1）名校校园正成为旅游新热点

2）校园是否应对游客开放，人们看法不同

3）我认为。。。 Should the University Campus Be Open to Tourists

1) When it comes to whether the university campus should be open to tourists, as more and more people list famous university as tourist attractions, there is no complete agreement among people.2) Some people take it for granted that the university campus should

embrace tourists acro the country.3) However, others maintain that the university campus should be closed to tourists.

4) Those people who hold the former opinion believe that refusing tourists is contradicting universities proclaimed spirit of openne.5) In addition, as a public place, no university has the right to reject taxpayers to enter its grounds.6) However, sill others advocate the latter opinion.7) They argue that too many tourists will add a burden to the security department of the university.8) Besides, they hold that these tourists will destroy the quiet environment and influence students’ study.

9) Weighing up these two arguments, I prefer the former opinion.

10) For one thing, it enables high school students to get a general understanding of the university and stimulates them to study hard.11) For another, a university should be a public place which imparts the spirit of openne.12) Taking above-mentioned factors into consideration, I may reasonably conclude that the university campus should welcome all tourists.

结构模板2

1）Nowadays still many people believe / For years many people have held2) Even some people 该观点.3) However, I hold the entirely different view.

4) Of course,5) For example,

其合理性的例子/ 进一步阐述其合理性.6)But it doesn’t mean that 8) The following reason can account for my argument.9) Firstly, 理由一.10) A good example to illustrate is 例子.11) In addition / Moreover / What’s more, 理由二.12) To conclude/ From the foregoing, 模板套用

Do “Luck Numbers”Really Bring Good Luck?

1) 有些人认为某些数字会带来好运

2) 我认为数字和运气无关

Do “Luck Numbers”Really Bring Good Luck？

1） For years many Chinese people have held “lucky numbers”

like “8”can bring them good luck.2) Even some people spare no expense to get their telephone numbers or car numbers to include “8”.3) However, I hold the entirely different view.

4) Of course, “lucky numbers” do have an influence on people who believe those “lucky numbers”.5) That’s because with the faith in “lucky numbers”, those people will be in better conditions.6) But it doesn’t mean that “lucky numbers” really bring good luck.7) In my opinion, numbers are only numbers, which have nothing to do with one’ luck.

8) The following reasons can account for my argument.9）

Firstly, any numbers cannot change the reality and make a miracle.10) A good example to illustrate is a seriously injured man should be treated as soon as poible but not wait till his “lucky” date.11)What’s wore, if lucky numbers really worked, nobody would have to work hard any more.12) To conclude, we should work hard instead of depending on lucky numbers to bring us a happy life.

结构模板3

1) Nowadays 提出主题.2) It is no doubt that 该主题 brings / bring about several / many advantages/ benefits to 受益对象.3) Above all, 优点一.4) Furthermore/ Moreover / In addition, 优点二。

5）However, problems may also arise.该主题 has / have also some disadvantages./ is /are also harmful.6) For one thing, 缺点一.

7) For another, 缺点二.

8) Weighing the advantages and disadvantages/ pros and cons, 我的观点.9) Undoubtedly, 我的理由.10) But it is worth nothing that 需要注意到的事项.11) Therefore / To conclude, 总结全文.

The Pros and Cons for College Students to Take Part-time Jobs

1 大学生做兼职的利与弊2我的看法 The Pros and Cons for College Students to Take Part-time Jobs

1） Nowadays many college students take part-time jobs in

their spare time.2) It is no doubt that taking a part-time job

brings about several advantages to college students.3) Above all, part-time job provide students a valuable chance to put their knowledge into practice.4) Furthermore, students can get some money to help relieve the burden on their families.

5) However, problems may also arise.6) For one thing, some students may neglect their studies due to their failure in manage their time spent on part-time jobs.7)For another, not knowing how to protect themselves, some students may be cheated or hurt by their employers.

8) Weighing the advantages and disadvantages, I think that we college students should step out of campus and take some part-time jobs.9) undoubtedly, it offers us opportunity to know the society.10) But it is worth nothing that we cannot put too much time and energy in part-time jobs and neglect our study .

11) To conclude, if the schedule permits, doing part-time jobs in spare time is a good choice for college students.

Making Friends Similar or Different ?

1) 很多人认为交性格相似的朋友比较好

2) 另一些人则认为还是交性格互补的朋友比较好

3) 我的看法

推荐第7篇：作文指导(语言对比)

■ 考场作文指导（切记要反复点题） ．．．．．．．

加强作文文采，体现文字魅力

【寄语】尽管目前我们的作文仍然以记叙为主，但如果不加以描写、抒情等方式来加强文章的文采与内涵，那写出来的文章会和小学生写的文章差别不大的。初中生的作文，是有初中生的要求和标准的。其中文采（即多角度的语言表达能力）和内涵（对人生、生命的认识），是初中生作文的好差的一个分水岭。

★ 考场作文评分标准：

一类作文（36——40分）符合题意，主题深刻、新颖，内容充实，结构巧妙，语言生动，富有文采，书写工整、美观，标点正确，没有错别字，800字以上。

二类作文（32——36分）符合题意，立意正确，中心明确，内容较充实，结构完整，语言基本准确，书写工整，标点正确，几乎没有错别字，700字以上。

三类作文（28——32分）基本符合题意，中心基本明确，内容较充实，结构较完整，语言基本通顺，字迹清楚，标点错误不多，错别字不多，不足700字，但字数相差不大。 四类作文（24——28分）基本符合题意，中心不明确，内容不充实，结构不完整，语句不通顺，语病不多，错别字和标点错误较多，字数相差较大。

五类作文（24分以下）不符合题意，文理不通，结构不完整，层次混乱，错别字和标点错误多，篇幅较短，字数严重不足。

★ 注：

一、加分：只要符合以下任意一条，可酌情加1－3分。

1、构思新颖，有创意；

2、具有浓郁的个性色彩，不人云亦云；

3、体现出较为深厚的文化底蕴；

4、语言优美，富有表现力。

二、缺少题目扣2分。

记住自己坚强的时候（修改前）

06级学生

看着电视剧中那一幕幕生离死别，却因皆是虚幻而不曾伤感。可当自己面对朋友至亲的离别时，却早已涕泗横流，昔日点滴尽浮上心头：

从小，我就倍受外婆的疼爱。我喜欢依偎在她的身旁，听她讲那过去的故事；我喜欢紧握着她的大手，缠她带我去那田畔间；我喜欢嗅闻这她的香味，扯她衣服上的纽扣······

看着病魔将她折磨的身形消瘦，听着她痛苦的呻吟，泪水夺眶。得知她搭乘了开往天堂的火车，泪珠再次滚落。我尝试着不哭，不哭。可是，外婆，对不起，您的外孙女做不到，这好难，对不起，我做不到······

外婆，求您别抛下我。没有您的日子我过的好辛苦，上帝为什么将您从我身边带走？外婆，您在哪？

望着窗外那一盆盆她亲手栽种的菊花，沁人的花香随风四溢，眼前的愁云似乎变淡了，几道光束冲破云霄，愁云消散了，无踪了，我的心豁然开朗。外婆并没有走，她化身成了菊花时刻伴随着我，我要拿出我的坚毅不屈，让外婆笑从双脸生，使菊花开出妖娆，开出娇艳，开出灿烂。

学会坚强，这是我从菊花中撷下的一小片花瓣。外婆的辞世，让我学会了坚强，要笑着面对人生。

习习春风中，我开始走向朝霞。

有人记住了国仇家恨，是为了复国兴邦，救万民于水火之中；有人记住了屈辱岁月，是为了报仇雪恨，以雪自己昔日之耻；而我记住了当我坚强的时候。不为别的，只希望能告慰外婆，给她寄身的菊花绽放出绚丽光芒的一次浇灌。

轻轻折下一枝含苞待放的小雏菊，放入我桌前的小花瓶中：

小雏菊啊小雏菊，请你见证我今后的坚强，替我告慰外婆，她的小外孙女长大了，学会了不屈，懂得了坚强，请她绽放笑容吧！

（字数644）

记住自己坚强的时候（修改后）

06级学生

轻轻折下一枝菊花，淡雅的清香解去心头的一份思念。

看着电视剧中那一幕幕生离死别，却因皆是虚幻而不曾伤感。可当自己面对朋友至亲的离别时，却早已涕泗横流，昔日点滴尽浮上心头：

从小，我就倍受外婆的疼爱。我喜欢依偎在她的身旁，听她讲那过去的故事；我喜欢紧握着她的大手，缠她带我去那田畔间；我喜欢嗅闻这她的香味，扯她衣服上的纽扣······

看着病魔将她折磨的身形消瘦，听着她痛苦的呻吟，泪水夺眶。得知她搭乘了开往天堂的火车，泪珠再次滚落。我尝试着不哭，不哭。可是，外婆，对不起，您的外孙女做不到，这好难，对不起，我做不到······

多少悲，昨夜梦魂中，还似旧时逢佳节，眉开眼笑喜相聚，花月正春风。 多少泪，断脸复横颐，心事莫将和泪说，凤笙休向泪时吹，肠断更无疑。

外婆，求您别抛下我。没有您的日子我过的好辛苦，上帝为什么将您从我身边带走？外婆，您在哪？

望着窗外那一盆盆她亲手栽种的菊花，沁人的花香随风四溢，眼前的愁云似乎变淡了，几道光束冲破云霄，愁云消散了，无踪了，我的心豁然开朗。外婆并没有走，她化身成了菊花时刻伴随着我，我要拿出我的坚毅不屈，让外婆笑从双脸生，使菊花开出妖娆，开出娇艳，开出灿烂。

学会坚强，这是我从菊花中撷下的一小片花瓣。外婆的辞世，让我学会了坚强，要笑着面对人生。

茫茫人海中，我与外婆之间有了一条菊花链。 漫漫人生中，我和坚毅之间有了一架菊花桥。习习春风中，我开始走向朝霞。

有人记住了国仇家恨，是为了复国兴邦，救万民于水火之中；有人记住了屈辱岁月，是为了报仇雪恨，以雪自己昔日之耻；而我记住了当我坚强的时候。不为别的，只希望能告慰外婆，给她寄身的菊花绽放出绚丽光芒的一次浇灌。

轻轻折下一枝含苞待放的小雏菊，放入我桌前的小花瓶中：

小雏菊啊小雏菊，请你见证我今后的坚强，替我告慰外婆，她的小外孙女长大了，学会了不屈，懂得了坚强，请她绽放笑容吧！

······

外婆，方才的一缕清香可是你的回音?

（字数795）

被爱的幸福，如影随形（修改前） 06级学生

很小很小的时候，爸爸就牵着我的手，教我学会走路，领我体会了过马路的感觉„„ 很快到了觉得很光荣的上学年龄，我兴奋而又激动，早早的准备好了新书包，新学具，迫不及待地催促爸爸，蹦蹦跳跳的期盼着去上学。而他却简单一句“我们没空，你自己去上学”后消失在我的视线里。顿时，我有一种哭不出来的难过。一路上，不停地疑惑着爸爸的冷漠，心痛着爸爸的抛弃，甚至涌现出不再需要他们的念头！

我一个人默默地背着书包，幼小的身躯拥簇在众多家长的队伍中，有种浮浮沉沉的感觉，家长的背影，原来像是山。此时，我愈发的孤独，开始在心里不断地发泄不满与不解。沮丧的我只好埋着头，强忍着不去听身旁的一声声关切，不去看身边的一幕幕温馨。但周遭的一切还是不时的一次次撞击着我那时破碎而脆弱的心。

就在我一个不小心跌倒在地上后吃力地爬起来，流着眼泪沮丧抬头的那一瞬间，我却远远的望见了一个熟悉而又渺远的身影——在人海之中若隐若现，但又却镜头定格般紧紧锁定着不肯移动。刺眼的阳光照耀着我看不清前方的眼神，但我能肯定那就是我期盼已久的身影——那个不停张望的身影。我迅速擦干眼泪，却倔强地表现出一种懦弱的坚强，天真的认为他绝对不会来理我，更无知地以为自己不再需要他。

可我还是抵御不住陌生的环境给我带来的恐惧，选择害怕地躲在角落里大声哭了。

直到爸爸急切地跑来紧紧地围抱住我，轻轻地拭去我的眼泪，心疼地抚摸着我的脸，我才得以安心的哽咽在他怀里，渐渐平静下来享受爸爸那熟悉的关爱与呵护。那一刻，全世界的花都开了。

泪水朦胧中，我看到您被无数风霜吹打过的脸庞上，仍然挂着一丝不轻易察觉的微笑。在时光的催促下，您老了，可是您那深沉的爱永远不会老。（字数689） 被爱的幸福，如影随形（修改后） 06级学生

很小很小的时候，爸爸就牵着我的手，教我学会走路，领我体会了过马路的感觉„„从此，你便牵着我的手，走过了车水马龙，走过灯火阑珊，走过青葱岁月。

很快到了觉得很光荣的上学年龄，我兴奋而又激动，早早的准备好了新书包，新学具，迫不及待地催促爸爸，蹦蹦跳跳的期盼着去上学。而他却简单一句“我们没空，你自己去上学”后消失在我的视线里。顿时，我有一种哭不出来的难过。一路上，不停地疑惑着爸爸的冷漠，心痛着爸爸的抛弃，甚至涌现出不再需要他们的念头！

我一个人默默地背着书包，幼小的身躯拥簇在众多家长的队伍中，有种浮浮沉沉的感觉，家长的背影，原来像是山。此时，我愈发的孤独，开始在心里不断地发泄不满与不解。沮丧的我只好埋着头，强忍着不去听身旁的一声声关切，不去看身边的一幕幕温馨。但周遭的一切还是不时的一次次撞击着我那时破碎而脆弱的心。

就在我一个不小心跌倒在地上后吃力地爬起来，流着眼泪沮丧抬头的那一瞬间，我却远远的望见了一个熟悉而又渺远的身影——在人海之中若隐若现，但又却镜头定格般紧紧锁定着不肯移动。刺眼的阳光照耀着我看不清前方的眼神，但我能肯定那就是我期盼已久的身影——那个不停张望的身影。我迅速擦干眼泪，却倔强地表现出一种懦弱的坚强，天真的认为他绝对不会来理我，更无知地以为自己不再需要他。

可我还是抵御不住陌生的环境给我带来的恐惧，选择害怕地躲在角落里大声哭了。此时的我，像一只流浪的猫，孤单地躺在阁楼里黏着伤，细细数着自己的寂寞，心里有点茫然，不知所措。

直到爸爸急切地跑来紧紧地围抱住我，轻轻地拭去我的眼泪，心疼地抚摸着我的脸，我才得以安心的哽咽在他怀里，渐渐平静下来享受爸爸那熟悉的关爱与呵护。那一刻，全世界的花都开了。

六岁，你为了逼迫我练习写字而夜夜作陪，当年的苦不堪言成了我现在得意的资本； 八岁，你为了锻炼我的身体连同自己扔进游泳池，当年你的残忍成就了我现在的健康； 十岁，你为了增强我的胆量强行自己绑上蹦极，当年你的坚持换来了我现在的坚强； „„

现在我十六岁了，一路走过的旅途中，成长的足迹，有我的一半，也有您的一半。 幸福的青鸟就这样，一直陪伴着我走过车水马龙，走过灯火阑珊，走过青葱岁月。 条条皱纹是岁月的见证，丝丝银发是沧桑的印记。泪水朦胧中，我看到您被无数风霜吹打过的脸庞上，仍然挂着一丝不轻易察觉的微笑。在时光的催促下，您老了，可是您那深沉的爱永远不会老。

原来，被爱的幸福，一直以来不是渐行渐远，而是如影随形！（字数999）

推荐第8篇：中国人英国人作文对比

以下两篇文章都是eay类型。内容也一样，都是讨论骑自行车的好处。“bicycle”是中国人写的考试范文，“why cycle?”是一个英国人为“号召伦敦人多用自行车”的活动写给网上读者的。请大家注意下面几个方面

一， 用词

“bicycle”作者的用词是中国式的。从题目就可以看出来。骑自行车的通常说法是 “cycling” 或“riding a bike”,骑自行车的人是“bicyclist”或“cyclist”。如果根据作者的标题，不应该是讨论骑自行车的问题，应该是讨论自行车本身诸如发明、改进、用途、价格、式样、功能等问题。文中其他的用词，大家可以自己找。

二， 句式

“bicycle”的作者句式单一，几乎就是一个又一个简单句顺序排列，而且少有用形容词和副词修饰句子，使句子过于平淡。重点不突出，句式无起伏，词汇有限，并在文章中重复使用，如：“骑自行车”，作者仅用“bicycles”或“riding bikes”或“they”造简单句。而“why cycle?”的作者用同样的词对句子做各种修饰。虽然文体是eay, 但因为是登在网上的，要照顾各个层次的读者，所以作者的句式和用词都趋于简单，但并不单调。

三， 文章结构

“bicycle”作者的思路是清晰的，但表达不明确，所以造成结构混乱的感觉，考试时会吃亏的。

下面就是这两篇文章。

中国作者的Bicycle

Bicycles have become more and more popular in China.People ride bikes to their work places, to shopping areas, to schools, and so on.During the rush hours, you can often see a boiling sea of bicycles running in all directions.With the largest number of bike riders in the world, China is often referred to as the kingdom of bicycles. (主题句不明显，不知道作者想要说什么：自行车越来越流行，要讨论流行趋势？自行车那么多，要讨论自行车对城市的影响？中国是自行车王国，要讨论中国的自行车历史？ )

More and more

Increasing number of bikes

It becomes increasingly significant

Compared with cars, bikes have many advantages（这应该是主题句，在这么短的文章里应该放在第一段）.First, they are not very expensive, and almost every family can afford them.（这句话分成2Second, they are very handy and convenient though they are not so fast as cars.With a bike, you can go anywhere you like, and you don’t have to look for a large parking place.By riding bikes, you can avoid traffic jams and thus save the time and the money for taking taxis（同第一点一样，但这一点思路有些乱）.Third, they do not cause air or sound pollution（没有解释，这一点肯定拿不到好分数）.

Riding bikes does good to your health if you ride it regularly（这应该是文章要论述的第四点，但没有连接词，又分了段，打乱了文章的整体结构）.In modern times, people are usually too busy to spare any time for physical exercise.Riding a bike to your work place

（2个句子的顺序换aeroplane aerobics一下比较好。因为前面已经说了有益于健康，读者等着听解释，但作者却换了话题。第一句话应该是第二句话的原因。）

Therefore, a bicycle is really an important means of transportation in China.It has been very useful, convenient and neceary ever since it was invented.And I do believe it will still be so in the future.（结论态度不鲜明，没有紧扣主题句。 应该重述四个优点，然后给出结论）

英国人写的 Why cycle?

作者： Alix Stredwick， 摘自London Cycling Campaign 的网站。There are many good reasons to cycle.: （第一句话就是主题句，西方人的习惯）Cycling is the most efficient means of getting around London.（好处之一）1 Many journeys we make are shorter than two miles or le and these are usually faster on a cycle than travelling by car, bus, tube, train or taxi.（进一步解释，加强说服力）。3Not only is cycling good for you, it is also fun and available to all（好处之二）.

4It is a chance to get out of the house or workplace, to be active and to be sociable（解释）.5Getting a bike needn\'t be expensive and upkeep is low cost and easy.（好处之三，这三个好处只是泛泛说明，一般是前面的论点比后面的更重要，所以句子一个比一个短）） Save money（开始论述第一点）

Using a bike to replace your regular form of transport is a great way to save money（主句，符合论点）.It\'s well documented that cycling is the best value way to travel around London（引用统计结果，有绝对说服力）.Compared to cars, bicycles are much cheaper to buy and maintain, and you don\'t have all the added costs of fuel, Vehicle Excise Duty and parking.

Save time（论点二）

For a typical London journey, cycling is faster than the car, public transport, taxis or walking（主句，符合论点，第一段）.Remember that cycling is a door to door service.On a bicycle you can easily cover five miles in half an hour and be confident that you\'ll arrive on time（解释如何省时间）.Car or bus journeys take longer and depend on traffic, or irregular bus services行车省时间）.For longer trips, you can combine bike and public transport: leaving your bike at the station or sometimes taking it on the train/tube at off-peak times.See the LCC information booklet \"Transporting Your Bicycle\" for further information.（进一步解释，

帮你解决你有可能遇到的问题，打消你欲辩论的想法）

Become healthier（论点三）

Cycling is an excellent way to get fit and live longer（主句，符合论点）.By riding a bike you\'ll be incorporating exercise into your daily life.Remember that to stay healthy you need 30 minutes of exercise per day: that 15 minute cycle to work is the perfect prescription for losing weight and getting fit（解释。口气不是说教，而像是你的保健顾问，说服力强）attacks, high blood preure and other illnees.The benefits, says the British Medical Aociation, far outweigh any risks aociated with cycling.（论据二）

By getting fitter and escaping the frustrations of traffic jams and enjoy your day more.（论据三）

It has been shown that by cycling you will breathe fewer fumes than those in cars or buses, so are le likely to suffer from respiratory diseases（论据四）.inspire expire

（文章还没完，还有其他方面的好多内容。略）

推荐第9篇：对比选择型作文

对比选择型作文模板：

When it comes to ＿＿＿＿ ,different people hold different views .

Some contend that＿＿＿＿.For one thing,＿＿＿＿ .For another,＿＿＿ .In spite of all these claims, others maintain that ＿＿＿＿，They point out that＿＿＿＿ .Another instance often cited is that＿＿＿＿ .

It’s no easy task to find a satisfactory answer to the iue.As for me, there’s some truth to both arguments .It’s advisable to ＿＿＿＿＿＿.

现象解释型作文模板：

Recently, ＿＿＿＿What amazes us most is＿＿＿＿＿．It is true that ＿＿＿＿＿.

There are many reasons explaining ＿＿＿＿＿＿．The main reason is＿＿＿＿＿ ，What is more, ＿＿＿＿＿，Thirdly, ＿＿＿＿＿．As a result, ＿＿＿＿＿．

Considering all these, ＿＿＿＿＿．For one thing, ＿＿＿＿For another, ＿＿＿＿．In conclusion, ＿＿＿＿．

问题解决型作文模板：

With the ＿＿＿＿of＿＿＿＿，So it is of great importance for us to＿＿＿＿ .On the one hand＿＿＿＿, On the other hand＿＿＿＿,

However, we have figured out many ways to ＿＿＿＿＿．Firstly, ＿＿＿＿So long as＿＿＿＿ .Secondly＿＿＿＿, Thirdly＿＿＿＿．In fact＿＿＿＿, That is because ＿＿＿＿.

In a word,＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ ．

图表作文模板：

As can be clearly seen from the graph/table/chart (As is shown in the table/figure), great changed have taken place in_______, The _________ have/has skyrocketed/jumped from _____ to _____.

When it comes to the reasons for the changes, different people give different explanations.Here I shall just give a few.To begin with, ______What’s more,___________, Last but not least, ________.While it is desirable that ___________, there are still some problems and difficulties for __________ Firstly, __________ ,In addition, __________ ,In a word, __________ .

综合运用篇

1.Along with the advance of the society more and more problems are brought to our aattention, one of which is that....

随着社会的不断发展，出现了越来越多的问题，其中之一便是____________。

2.As to whether it is a bleing or a curse, however, people take different attitudes.aa

然而，对于此类问题，人们持不同的看法。(Hold different attitudes 持不同的看;Come up with different attitudes 有不同的看法)

4.People are attaching more and more importance to the interview during job hunting

求职的过程中，人们慢慢意识到面试的重要性。

5.As to whether it is worthwhile ....., there is a long-running controversial debate.It is quite natural that people from different backgrounds may have divergent attitudes towards it.

关于是否值得___________的问题，一直以来争论不休。当然，不同的人对此可能持不同的观点。

6.In the proce of modern urban development, we often find ourselves in a dilemma.

在都市的发展中，我们往往会陷入困境。

7.Recently the phenomenon has aroused wide concern, some people are in alarm that....

最近，这种现象引起了人们的广泛关注，有人开始担心______________。

8.The human race has entered a completely new stage in its history, with the increasingly rapid economic globalization and urbanization, more problems are brought to our attention.

人类进入了一个历史的崭新的阶段，经济全球化、都市化的速度不断加快，随之给我们带来了很多问题。

9......plays such an important role that it undeniably becomes the biggest concern of the present world, there comes a question, is it a bleing or a curse?\"

_______显得非常重要而成为当今世界所关注的最大的问题，这是无可厚非的。不过，问题是：\"我们该如何抉择?\"

10.Now we are entering a new era, full of opportunities and challenges,

现在我们正在进入一个充满机会和挑战的新时代。

展现问题篇

问题的常用词：question, problem, iue

1.Recently, the iue of ......has been brought into public focus.

近来，_______的问题引起了社会的广泛关注。

2.Now we are entering a brand new era full of opportunities and innovations, and great changes have taken place in people\'s attitude towards some traditional practice.

现在我们进入了一个充满机遇和创新的崭新时代，很多人对某些传统的看法也发生了很大改变。

5.At present, some people think ....while others claim ...Both sides have their merits.

目前，一些人认为_______而另一些人则认为_______。其实，两种观点都其可取之处。

6.People rarely reach an absolute consensus on such a controversial iue.

对于这种极具争议的话题，我们很难作出绝对的回答。

12.There is a good side and a bad side to everything, it goes without saying that...

万事万物都有其两面性，所以，勿庸置疑，____________。

22.People, who advocate that ..., have their sound reasons (grounds)

坚持认为______的人也有其说法(依据)。

观点的用词：Attitude, opinion, 与其搭配的动词以及词组：Take, have, come up with，set forth, put forward等。

28.But on the other hand, there are also quite a few people who strongly advocate that..,.

30.However, there are a large number of people who hold a different view concerning this case.

然而，很多人对此有不同的看法。

问题用词：Iue, phenomenon，后接介词, on, over等。

38.Personally, I side with the latter (former) opinion...就我个人而言，我支持后者(前者)___________。39.Personally, I am in favor of the former point of view.就我个人而言，我较同意前一种看法。40.To my point of view 我认为47.When considering opinions of both sides, I am inclined to ...对两种观点进行综合考虑之后，我较认同_________________。48.If it is up to me to make a choice between ...and ...I would rather choose ...over...如果要我在____和____之间进行选择，我宁愿选择_____而不会选择______。表达不确定的用词：May, seem, be likely to, poible, probably, perhaps, be said that, be said to...

51.in my mind , the following factors/reasons/causes need to be taken into consideration

我认为，我们需要考虑下列因素/原因：

52.There are several reasons for this phenomenon/why...-(as follows).

造成这种现象的原因如下：

53.And I would like to present two explanations for this:

对于此，我有如下两点愚见：

55.There are numerous reasons why ____, and I would like to explore a few of the most important ones here.为什么___________，原因很多，在此列举几个较为重要的原因。

81.As the proverb goes: \"every coin has its two sides\", ....is no exception.

俗语有云：\"万事万物都有两面性。\" ________也不例外。

88.....undoubtedly plays an increasing significant role in modern life.

不容置疑，_______在现代生活中不断显示出起重要性。

89.With the development of the society, ...is increasingly important.

90.The merits of this is obvious...

其好处显而易见。

91.As we know, ...bring many benefits and convenience to people.

众所周知，_______ 为我们的生活带来很多好处。

92.There are no le than three advantages in ..as rendered below.

97.Some people deem it is a dangerous signal and call for public awarene of the negative effects it has brought about.有些人认为这是一种危险的信号，因此需关注其给社会带来的负面影响。

98.Of course, nothing in the world is perfect, so is...

104.From what has been discued above, we may finally draw the conclusion that...

通过以上的讨论，我们可以得出如下结论，___________。

108.From what has been discued above, we can see ...does more harm than good to us.Therefore, I strongly approve of the motion that...

从以上论述可知，_____ 对我们百害而无一利。

\"比如\"的表达方式：

For example,

For instance,

It can be given a concrete example,

Take ...for an example, it is a very obvious case

There is one impreive example I want to mention here.

Let\'s see an example.

It is best illustrated if given the following example.

Let me provide an example.

Perhaps the most important example of ...is that...

As I remember,/ I now still remember that.

I will never forget that

To illustrate this, there is an example that is very persuasive.

An instance that accompanies this reason is that...

An example can give the details of this argument, ...

It is a forceful example to demonstrate the importance of ...

History presented many examples of...

In order to see this point clearly, let us see an example.

推荐第10篇：对比选择型作文

对比选择型作文

I.对比选择型作文时四级考试作文的传统题型，这类考试的写作思路是有章可循的，通常给出两种对立的观点让考生权衡利弊，最后得出自己的结论，即：一些人认为…；另一些人认为…；我认为…。

写作提纲如下：

第一段：引出评论的事物，简要提出人们的看法

第二段：提出一种观点或优点，给出支持性分论点

第三段：承上启下地过渡，提出另一种观点或缺点，给出支持性分论点

第四段：平衡两种看法，给出自己的看法。

其中，在三段式作文的情况下，可以将第二段和第三段合并。

对比选择型作文举例：

1.Should the University Campus Be Open to Tourists?

1）名校校园正成为旅游新热点

2）校园是否应该对游客开放，人们看法不同

3）我认为……

2.Lectures or Discuions?

1）有些学生认为讲授式教学方式更适合自己

2）令一些学生则更喜欢讨论式教学方式

3）我的看法

3.The Pros and Cons of College Students’ Taking Part-time Jobs.

1）分析大学生做兼职的利与弊

2）谈谈我的看法

4.Spring Festival Gala on CCTV

1) 许多人喜欢在除夕观看春节联欢晚会

2) 有些人却提出取消春节联欢晚会

3) 在我看来……

II.对比选择型作文中常用句型

1.There is a general discuion nowadays on the problem of _____.Some argue/ hold that _____, but others set forth a totally different argument about the iue.

如今，_____问题引起了广泛讨论。有些人认为_____，但是其他人则对此持完全相反的观点。

2.In reaction to the phenomenon/ In answer to the problem/ In response to the on-going social change, some people believe _____; in their minds, _____.Others maintain _____; in their eyes, _____.

对于这种现象/对于解决该问题/对于该社会变化，一些人认为_____，在他们看来_____。其他人则认为_____，在他们看来_____。

3.Personally, I side with the former/ latter opinion.

就我个人而言，我支持前/ 后一种观点。

4.I am of the opinion that priority should be given to _____.

我认为我们应该优先考虑_____的观点。

5.When we consider A versus B on the basis of _____, shouldn’t we think that the latter/ former

is a better _____?

在_____的基础上考虑A和B，难道我们不认为后者/前者是一种比较好的_____？

6.With the development of _____, A will prove to hold greater superiority over B.

随着_____的发展，A将比B占更大的优越性。

7.It may be briefly summed up as follows.

简而言之，总结如下。

8.From what has been mentioned above, we can come to the conclusion that_____.

综上所述，我们可以得出结论_____。

9.From my point of view, it is more reasonable to support the first opinion rather than the

second.

在我看来，支持第一种观点比支持第二种更合理。

10.I cannot entirely agree with the idea that_____.

我无法完全同意这一观点_____。

11.In my opinion, it is more advisable to do _____ than to do_____.

在我看来，做_____比做_____更明智。

12.This case has aroused echoes throughout the country, with more and more people following

its lead, but ideas about it vary widely.

这个事件在全国产生了反响，也有很多人纷纷效仿，但是人们对它的看法却极不相同。

13.The other side of the coin has voiced strong opposition saying that_____.

争论的另一方表示强烈反对，他们声称_____。

14.A public debate has arisen as to the phenomenon of_____.

关于_____的现象引发了一场公众讨论。

15.There is a long-running debate as to whether_____.

关于是否_____的论战已经持续了很久。

16.There is no doubt that _____ has its drawbacks as well as merits.

毫无疑问，_____有优点也有缺点。

17.People’s views on _____ vary from person to person.Some hold that _____.However, others

believe that_____.

对_____的观点因人而异。有些人认为_____，然而其他人确认为_____。

18.There are different opinions among people as to_____.

关于_____人们的观点大不相同。

III.范文欣赏

范文一

1.许多人喜欢在除夕观看春节联欢晚会

2.有些人却提出取消春节联欢晚会

3.在我看来……

Spring Festival Gala on CCTV

It has been a hot topic for a long time whether the CCTV Spring Festival Gala should be cancelled or not.Many people hold that CCTV Spring Festival Gala offers a wonderful

opportunity to celebrate this traditional festival, for the Chinese all over the world can share the same happine and excitement brought by the TV program.In addition, many performances are very impreive, and some can even positively affect our life value.

However, every coin has two sides.Some people hold that CCTV Spring Festival Gala should be cancelled.One of the most significant reasons may be that this form of celebration force people to spend the eve more paively.What’s more, a great proportion of the programs are not attractive enough.

As to me, my favor goes to the former opinion, because CCTV Spring Festival Gala gives us another option to celebrate this important moment.However, it is eential to improve the quality of the programs, and I hope some better forms of celebration will be created in the near future.

点评：

本篇文章结构完整，框架合理，主题突出，详略得当。第一段用It has been a hot topic for a long time whether the CCTV Spring Festival Gala should be cancelled or not.引入话题，并根据提纲要求提出支持举办春晚的观点及理由。第二段用However, every coin has two sides.将笔锋一转，提出对立观点和理由。第三段以 As to me, my favor goes to the former opinion,开头，表达自己对春晚的支持，并同时表明对春晚改进的期望。

范文二

1.名校校园正成为旅游新热点

2.校园是否应该对游客开放，人们看法不同

3.我认为……

Should the University Campus Be Open to Tourists?With the development of tourism, many university campuses are open to tourists.

Opinions on whether the university campus should be open to tourists vary from individual to individual.Some people hold the idea that university campus should be open to tourists.In their opinion, the opening of campus will stimulate the tourist industry, which contributes to making more money for renewing teaching buildings and libraries.However, others think differently.Opponents hold that the inflowing of tourists may disturb the normal teaching activities.

In my viewpoint, I prefer the latter one.For one thing, the interests of university and its students should be taken into account seriously.For another, too many tourists will add a burden to the security department of the university and ruin the quiet environment that students need to study effectively.After all, how shortsighted would it be to develop our university at the cost of order and safety.

点评：

纵观全文，论证充分，详略得当。第一段提出话题，即随着旅游业的发展，许多大学校园正成为旅游热点。第二段引出支持方和反对方的对立观点及理由。第三段表明自己的观点，并分两方面进行论证。最后一句话以一个感叹句加虚拟语气总结全文，为画龙点睛之笔，很有说服力。

Aignment: The Pros and Cons of College Students’ Taking Part-time Jobs.

1）分析大学生做兼职的利与弊

2）谈谈我的看法

第11篇：四级作文对比观点

Tips on Writing by Comparison and Contrast

一、写作要诀

正反对比观点的议论文是四级考试中出现最多的一种作文题型，希望能引起大家足够的重视！

1、对比观点型文章的谋篇布局及写作要点：

第一段，提出主题。并阐明在此问题上人们的观点很难达成一致。

第二段，就其中一种观点，进行论据阐述，同学们在套用该模板时应注意，第一个观点阐述的多是从反面进行论证的观点。阐述另一方的观点，论述时要强调这种观点对人的影响和作用，这往往是好的方面的影响和作用。

第三段，阐述自己的立场，我们的模板给出的观点是两者皆有利弊，这种立场阐述技巧顺应现在的命题趋势。

2、取得高分的秘诀：

1）多背诵。多研究和记忆近十年四级真题中该类型的经典范文，掌握其中的经典句型2）用词考究，句式多变。避免重复使用被用烂的词和句子，如：think, first, second, third；和文章脉络；抑或多掌握几个比较经典的作文模板，练习准确套用。 Every coin has two sides等。在句式的使用方面，建议多考虑尝试使用倒装句、强调句等特殊句式。避免出现满篇都是简单句。

3）勤默写。在掌握经典句型和范文的基础上，反复默写核对，查找错误，逐步改进。4）勤仿写。在前面的基础上，参照其它一些模拟题目，利用已熟练掌握的句型或范文5）要有时间和速度概念。考试时要求在30分钟内完成写作部分，所以自己在平时练习最后要做到熟练掌握，不出错。 结构不断练习，达到运用自如的程度。 的过程中务必要注意把握时间和准确度的关系，尽量做到两者呈正比。即：速度快，准确度也高。

二、最新经典模板

模板 1：

When it comes to , people sometimes find it difficult to reach a consensus due to their experiences and different values.

Those who advocate 观点一 believe that it is le likely to 具体内容if 条件, since 原因说明.For one thing, 支持论据一.For another, 影响或方面can appear and even cause 结果.Neverthele, those who insist on 观点二say that people can 支持论据.First of all, one may always go after in order to.Furthermore, onlycan keep one abreast of time.Most important of all,is the source of power.

All in all, I think we should look at both sides of the coin.That is because the significance of观点一can be overvalued as well as that of观点二.Based on the above statements, I do think we should realize that.In conclusion,.6）临场莫紧张，相信自己。 总之一句话，就是“勤能补拙，熟能生巧”。

模板 2：

Recently, there is a prevalent phenomenon that .However, there is no consensus of opinions among all the individuals as to the view of the case.Some would maintian the belief that观点一, while others can’t find their agreement to it.The following lines will convey the arguments of the two sides with discrepancies.

For those who lend their support to the positive trend, their reasons are in varied forms.To begin with,is of extreme significance in the whole view.A prominent example is that实例.Additionally, 论据二 is so indispensable that most individuals would consider it as the major cause of the iue.We can easily notice the fact that .

For those who tend to terminate the iue, they come up with some novel ideas to counter the discuion above.First of all,is always on the top of their list.Take myself as an example, .Furthurmore,provides adequate justifications for the continuence of the iue.For instance, .

As can be concluded from the arguments above.Personally, facing with this controversial matter, what we must insure is that the eence must be absorbed.I sincerely wish that some combinations should be suggested.If it could be realized, our life would be flooded with harmony.

模板3：

There has been an undesirable/growing trend in recent years towards .A recent survey showed thatpercent of respondents rankedas their top priority, compared to the standpoint that.Why is it hard for people to arrive at an agreement on this hot iue ? The views of each side will be illustrated in the following lines.

Those who are on the side of the former view maintain that .First and foremost, .In addition, .However, those who agree with the latter one are of the opinion that.To begin with, .What’s more, .It is self-evident that 事实.

As far as I am concerned, it is sensible that we can see clearly the iue critically.The positive side of it we may make better use of; the negative side of it we may spare no effort to avoid.Only in this way can we guarantee that everything will move forward healthily and smoothly.Thus, the world will be likely to be the one we all are dreaming of.三、常用分段句式

第一段：

1、展现主题、现象或问题类

1) Along with the advance of the society more and more problems/iues are brought to our attention, one of which is that....

随着社会的不断发展，出现了越来越多的问题，其中之一便是____________。

2) As society develops, people are attaching much importance to....

随着社会的发展，人们开始关注____________。

3) As to whether it is worthwhile ....., there is a long-running controversial debate.It is quite natural that people from different backgrounds may have divergent attitudes towards it.

关于是否值得___________的问题，一直以来争论不休。当然，不同的人对此可能持不同的观点。

4) Now we are entering a new era, full of opportunities and challenges.Recently, the iue of ......has been brought into public focus/concern.

现在我们正在进入一个充满机会和挑战的新时代。近来，_______的问题引起了社会的广泛关注。

5) Now we are entering a brand new era full of opportunities and innovations, and great changes have taken place in people\'s attitude towards some traditional practice.

现在我们进入了一个充满机遇和创新的崭新时代，很多人对某些传统的看法也发生了很大改变。

6) Recently the iue of whether or not ...has been in the limelight and has aroused wide concern in the public.

近来，是否_______的问题已经非常明确而且引起了社会的广泛关注。

2、引出不同观点

1) People rarely reach an absolute consensus on such a controversial iue.

对于这种极具争议的话题，我们很难作出绝对的回答。

2) People from different backgrounds would put different interpretations on the same case.不同行业的人对同一种问题的解释不尽相同。

3) When it comes to ..., most people believe that ..., but other people regard ...as ....

提到_________问题，很多人认为_________，不过，一些人则认为______是____.

4) When faced with...., quite a few people claim that ...., but other people think that...

提到_________问题，仅少数人认为________，但另一些人则认为_________。

第二段：论证观点一

Those who advocate ...believe that ....The following factors need to be taken into consideration.One very important argument for .....is that....Besides, another more eential factor is that....The third but not the least to be taken seriously is that....

那些支持观点一的人认为____________。具体原因如下。其中一个很重要的因素就是____________。此外，另外一个更必要的因素是____________。第三个值得认真对待且并非不重要的因素是____________。

第三段：转而论证观点二

1) However, there are a large number of people who hold a different view concerning this case.然而，还有许多人对此持相反观点。

2) Whereas, there are some others who consider it from another or a totally different angle.然而，还有一些人从另外一个角度看待这个问题。

第四段：引出个人观点或结论

1) When considering opinions of both sides, I am inclined to ...

对两种观点进行综合考虑之后，我较认同_________________。

2) Personally, I side with the latter (former) opinion...

就我个人而言，我支持后者（前者）___________。

3) Personally, I am in favor of the former point of view.

就我个人而言，我较同意前一种看法。

4) As far as I am concerned, I am inclined to be on the side of the latter view.

在我看来，我较同意后一种观点。

5) Taking into account all these factors, we may reasonably come to the conclusion that...考虑所有这些因素,我们可能会得出合理的结论...。

四、课后练习

任选模板，完成下列作文题目。

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short eay entitled 1.Some people are strongly against campus love.

2.Some people accept it.

3.My view.Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short eay entitled

1、有些人认为分数体现能力；

2、有些人则认为分数不一定体现能力；

3、你对此问题的看法

【参考范文】 When it comes to , people sometimes find it difficult to reach a consensus due to their experience and different values.

Those who advocatebelieve that it is le likely to if , since .For one thing, .For another, can appear and even cause .

Neverthele, those who insist on say that people can .First of all, one may always go after in order to.Furthermore, only can keep one abreast of time.Most important of all, is the source of power.

All in all, I think we should look at both sides of the coin.That is because the significance of can be overvalued as well as that of .Based on the above statements, I do think we should realize that .In conclusion,

.【附件】

实战备选题目-模板课后反复练习用

【题目01】模拟题目

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short eay entitled

1、有人认为出国留学是个人发展的最佳选择；

2、也有人坚持在国内也能实现自己的理想；

3、我的看法

【题目02】模拟题目

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short eay entitled

1、现在大学生宿舍几乎人手一台电脑；

2、有些人认为会促进学生的学习，有些人认为会影响学生的学习；

3、你的看法

【题目03】模拟题目

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short eay entitled below:

1、对大学生的时间安排有两种看法：有人认为大学生就应该整天读书；有人认为参加体育

锻炼是大学生生活的一部分；

2、你的看法；

3、总结全文

【题目04】模拟题目

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short eay entitled

1、有些人认为挫折是坏事；

2、更多的人并不认为挫折是坏事；

3、你的看法

【题目05】模拟题目

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short eay entitled You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below:

1、有些人决定毕业后读研；

2、有些人决定毕业后工作；

3、我的看法

第12篇：作文指导对比描写

通过对比的方法写一个人。

通过对比方法写一个人，一般有三种：第一种是同一个人前后相比，说明这个人变化；第二种是对一个人的认识前后相比，说明这个人的品质；第三种是一个人同另一个人比，突出歌颂其中一个人。

一、通过对比的方法写一个人要注意：

（1）要突出主要人物及其主要特点。

（2）要写出人物的真实表现，不要捏造事实，采用拔高或贬低的方法。

二、写两个人

写两个人，一般是写《我和**》，**应包括亲人、同学、朋友、老师等熟悉的人，要写好这一类型的作文必须注意：

（一）要写好人物之间的联系。《我和**》，题目中突出了一个“和”字，这就要求从双方写起，通过具体的事例，写出“我”和**之间的联系。在叙事过程中，要写出彼此之间都想了些什么，说了些什么，做了些什么。只有从双方落笔，才能把握住题目要求写的重点。

（二）用对话展开情节。写《我和**》作文时，由于要写出两个人之间的关系，所以一定要写好两个人之间的对话。要用对话展开情节，用对话表现文章的中心。

三、写几个人。

写几个人是比较复杂的以写人为主的记叙文，可以写“一家子”、“这一班”，也可以写“几个小伙伴”。总之，不论是家庭的，学校的、社会的，只要是自己熟悉的几人都行。

这类作文有以下几种写法。

（一）列人物表似的介绍。

（二）有代表性的介绍。

（三）以一件事为线索写几个人。

（四）通过几件事写几个人。

四、对比写人法【示例】

在乡下姑妈家过暑假，和我最要好的当然是春花罗。

春花是姑妈的小女儿，黑黑的脸蛋上，一双大眼睛忽闪忽闪的。虽说年龄比我大两岁，个头却没我高，我俩比了一下，嘿，她还差我两厘米。冲着这点，我不好意思叫她姐姐，也跟着大人们叫她“春花”。

别看我嘴上不愿叫姐姐，可心里却实在佩服她。姑妈家，数春花的奖状最多，她年年被评为三好学生。春花脑子里的新鲜事也特别多，指着路旁的一棵草，她能讲上一段故事，走过公路旁新盖的厂房，她能说上一段经历，惹得我这个故事迷，整天跟着她转。我们一块儿学习，一块儿割草„„简直是形影不离。可渐渐地，我发现了她的一个“缺点”。

一天，大人们出早工，我睡了个懒觉起来，不见了春花，只得吃完饭，收拾了碗筷。我见桌上还放着一碗饭，闻了闻，哎，馊了，倒掉吧。我走到小桥边，蹲下去，刚要倒馊饭，突然听到了一阵急促的叫声：“别倒——”我抬头一看，是春花，她割羊草，正好从这儿路过。我冲着春花说：“是馊饭。”可春花却一个劲地说：“不要倒嘛，不要倒。”她从我手里夺过了我手中的饭碗，像捧宝贝似的捧着它，向鸡棚走去。我望着她的背影，又好气，又好笑，心里暗暗想：“真小气!”

还有一次，我的那双旧凉鞋坏了，就从旅行袋里拿出新凉鞋换上，顺手把旧的往外一扔。可不一会儿，见春花又把我的那双旧凉鞋拾了回来，还一针一线地修补着。我挺纳闷，问春花：“我扔掉的旧鞋，你补它干嘛?”春花说：“这鞋补补，还可穿呢。”说着，她咬断了线，把补好的鞋往我手里一送，说：“应该谢谢我了吧?”我更不乐意了：“谁要这旧东西，我不要，你不嫌，就拿去吧。”可真没想到，几天后，春花果真把旧凉鞋穿上了。我心里暗暗好笑，春花啥都好，就是有点小气。可是，不久又发生了这么一件事。

一天下午，我和春花正在做作业，突然一阵急促的脚步声打断了我的思路：“快，春花，快借根扁担给我。”原来，是队上一个外号叫“坦克”的棒小伙子。只见他敞着胸，额上流着汗珠，两手摇晃着断成两截的扁担：“真倒霉，才挑了几捆稻，就断了扁担。”看他这副模样，再听他这样一说，我就赶紧应道：“哎呀，真不巧，这里没有多余的扁担。”想不到我的话音刚落，春花好像故意和我作对似地，已从里屋拿出了一根扁担：“‘坦克’，这是根新扁担，你拿去挑吧。”“坦克”接过扁担，望了她一眼，惊喜地说：“还是根新的呢!挑断了，要赔吗?”“不要赔!”春花毫不犹

豫地答道。“坦克”走后，我对春花说：“你把新扁担借给别人，真的挑断了，怎么办?”“为集体干活，断就断呗!”春花干脆地答道。

晚上，我翻来覆去睡不着，一个把啥都当宝贝的人，怎么连自己的新扁担也不爱惜了呢?这是为什么?想着想着，我明白了：春花并不小气，在她身上，有一种发光的东西，这就是我国劳动人民勤俭节约，艰苦奋斗，爱祖国、爱集体的好思想呀。想到这里，我一把搂住已经睡着了的春花。

●对比写人法【评点】

这篇文章运用对比的方法赞扬春花勤俭节约、热爱集体的优秀品质。

这篇文章通篇运用对比的方法来写。首先是人物间的对比，即“我”与春花的对比。对待一碗馊了的饭，“我”的态度倒掉算了，而春花却一个劲地说：“不要倒嘛，不要倒。”并夺过饭碗向鸡棚走去;对待坏了的旧凉鞋，“我”的态度是换上新鞋后顺手扔掉，春花却拾回来修补好;对待“坦克”借扁担，“我”有点舍不得，怕真的挑断了，春花却是毫不犹豫地借给他。其次是春花本人所经历的三件事前后态度的对比。春花在“抢馊饭”和“修补凉鞋”两件事上显出“小气”，在“出借扁担”上显出“爽气”。文章通过横比和纵比，充分反映了春花勤俭节约、热爱集体的好品质。这篇文章虽然用了对比方法写，但是在写人物的外貌、语言、动作时，把重点放在春花身上，这样，我们读了以后，春花就在我们头脑中留下很深的印象。

五、阅读训练

两个瓶子

那时候，我的家庭状况不好。我和两个姐姐正好在上学，只靠爸爸一点点工资维持正常生活。于是，有时候我便和父亲在散步的时候捡几个可乐瓶子、矿泉水瓶。

记得又一次，在回家的路上，我和爸爸正在路上寻找瓶子。突然，就在前方几十米的地方出现了两个瓶子，我便兴高采烈地跑过去，可当我跑到跟前时，就是没有勇气捡起来，因为这毕竟是在我们学校的门口，而且学校里还有几个同学在踢球，如果被他们看见了，等一开学他们会怎么说？他们也许会说：“哎呀呀，知道吗，杨莉新放假捡破烂儿来着．．．．．．”

正当我为难的时候，爸爸大步流星地走到我跟前，坦然地捡起这两个瓶子，走了。我忙追了上去。爸爸说：“给你讲个小故事吧”

有一个孩子，他的母亲是个残疾人，他的父亲每天就用一个破三轮车带着他的母亲去上班，每次都会路过孩子的学校，可每次父亲怕给孩子丢面子便很快的骑过去。有一次，正巧赶上孩子和同学放学回家。父亲就低了头故意快骑了几下。谁知，孩子忙跑过来，拉着这个破三轮车，搂住她的母亲，向同学们介绍着父母。爸爸妈妈高兴的流下了眼泪。

从那以后，和同学们一起放学，遇到瓶子我就勇敢地捡起来，我告诉大家，我们家生活困难，两个瓶子可以变成一支铅笔。

贫穷不是过错。

１、我会填。

“困难”一词中有一个多音字是（），它在本词中的读音是（ ）；它的另一个读音是（），按这个音组词是（）。“兴高采烈 ”中的“兴”的读音是（），另一个读音是（），组成一个词是（）。

２、肩并肩，写出下面词语的近义词和反义词。

坦然（） 也许（）反义词：贫穷（）困难（） ３、根据意思选填词语。

故意介绍坦然勇敢

形容心里平静，没有顾虑。（）不怕危险和困难；有胆量。（） 使双方相识或发生联系。（）有意思地（那样做） （） ４、精彩选择。

（１）在学校门口，“我”捡起瓶子了吗？为什么？（）

Ａ、没捡，因为自己太要面子，怕同学们嘲笑。

Ｂ、捡起来了，因为我想告诉大家，两个瓶子可以变成一支铅笔。

（２）爸爸给我讲了一个故事，从故事中我懂得了（ ）

Ａ、贫穷不是过错。

Ｂ、两个瓶子可以变成一支铅笔。

５、标标点点。给下面这段话加上标点。

如果被他们看见了 等一开学他们会怎么说他们也许会说哎呀呀知道吗杨莉新放假捡破烂儿来着

６、大显身手、仿照句子写话，也用标点、

他们也许会说：“哎呀呀，知道吗，杨莉新方家捡破烂儿来着．．．．．．”

六、小练笔。想一想，看一看，我们身边也不乏看似性格矛盾的人，比如妈妈有时对自己温柔体贴，有时又严厉无情；某一位同学的种种不良表现常挨老师批评，经过一段时间的努力，现在反而经常得到别人的夸奖．．．．．．其实，这就是真实的人、真实的生活。世上没有一成不变的人和事，拿起你的笔，运用对比的写法，向我们介绍以为你熟悉的、感兴趣的人吧！

第13篇：观点对比类作文

观点对比类作文

模版一：要求论述两个对立的观点并给出自己的看法。 1．有一些人认为。。。

2．另一些人认为。。。

3．我的看法。。。

The topic of-（主题）is becoming m0re and m0re popular recently.There are two sides of opinions of it.Some people say A is their fav0rite.They hold their view f0r the reason of-（支持A的理由一）What is m0re,-理由二.M0reover,-(理由三).

While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons.Firstly,-----------------(支持B的理由一).Secondly (besides),⑥------------------（理由二）.Thirdly (finally),⑦------------------(理由三).

From my point of view, I think ⑧----------------（我的观点）.The reason is that ⑨--------------------(原因).As a matter of fact,there are some other reasons to explain my choice.F0r me, the f0rmer is surely a wise choice.

模板二：

There is a widespread concern over the iue the -作文题目.But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person.A majority of people think that -观点一.In their views there are 2 factors contributing to this attitude as follows:in the first place,原因一.Furthermore,in the second place，原因二.So it goes without saying that +观点一。

People,however,differ in their opinions on this matter.Some people hold the idea that -观点二.In their point of view,on the one hand,原因一.On the other hand,原因二。Therefore,there is no doubt that 观点二。

Aa far as I am concerned,I firmly support the view that 观点一或观点二。It is not only because _______,but also because_______.The more_______,the more_______.

Chapter One 文章开头句型

1-1 对立法 : 先引出其他人的不同看法,然后提出自己的看法或者偏向于某一看法, 适用于有争议性的主题.例如：

[1].When asked about....., the vast/overwhelming majority of people say that .......But I think/view a bit differently.[2].When it comes to ...., some people bielive that .......Others argue/claim that the opposite/reverse is true .There is probably some truth in both arguements/statements , but (I tend to the profer/latter ...) [3].Now, it is commonly/generally/widely believed/held/acknowledged that ....They claim/ believe/argue that ...But I wonder/doubt whether.....

高三英语作文专题复习

一、常见的插入语有形容词(词组)、副词、不定式、现在分词短语、介词短语、从句以及固定短语。

1.常见的形容词(词组)、副词作插入语的有:sure enough(果然); strange; worse still(更糟糕的是);most important(最重要的是); honestly; obviously; however; otherwise; luckily; unfortunately; besides; first; second; especially; surprisingly等。 例如: Worse still, the lion could even carry off the baby in its mouth.We must do the experiment carefully; otherwise you\'ll get another result. Honestly, I don\'t need it at the moment. He likes the country, especially in spring

2.常见的不定式有:to tell the truth; to be short(简单地);to begin with(首先); to be sure(自然、当然、果然);to be honest/frank; to make things worse; to make a long story short; to speak of(值得一提的是),to be fair ,to sum up(概括地说) 等。这些插入语表示说话人的态度,在句子中作独立成份。例如:

1,________ the truth, this is all Greek to me.

• A.Tell

B.To tell

C.Telling

D.Told

[Key: B] That\'s a good idea, to be sure! To make things worse, many of the men have gone off to cities in search of higher pay.3.常见的现在分词短语有:generally speaking; frankly speaking; judging from/by; talking of(谈到); considering(考虑到,因为是);putting it mildly(说得客气一点)等。这些分词用来修饰全句。例如: Judging from appearance, he seems to be a strong man.4.常见的介词短语有:in fact; in addition; in a word; on the other hand; in other words; in one\'s opinion; in that case; by the way; of course; as a rule(通常);to one\'s surprise; for example; on the contrary(相反);in a way(在某点上、在某种程度上); for one thing; for another (thing)等。例如:In a way, I think we both won in the game

5.常见的从句有:if you don‘t mind; if you like; if you please; if neceary; if any; if I may say so; if convenient; as it happens等。例如:

You can, ________, come to join us in the game.

A.if you please

B.if you poible C.if you happy

D.if you neceary

[Key: A]

6.常见的固定短语:as a result; that is (to say); what\'s more; as above; all in all(总之),等。例如:

All in all, they have had a wonderful time today.

高考英语作文提分句型短语

1.经济的快速发展 the rapid development of economy

2.人民生活水平的显著提高/ 稳步增长the remarkable improvement/ steady growth of people’s living standard

3.先进的科学技术 advanced science and technology

4.面临新的机遇和挑战 be faced with new opportunities and challenges

5.人们普遍认为 It is commonly believed/ recognized that…

6.社会发展的必然结果 the inevitable result of social development

7.引起了广泛的公众关注 arouse wide public concern/ draw public attention

8.不可否认 It is undeniable that…/ There is no denying that…

9.热烈的讨论/ 争论 a heated discuion/ debate

10.有争议性的问题 a controversial iue

11.完全不同的观点 a totally different argument

12.一些人 …而另外一些人 … Some people… while others…

13.就我而言/ 就个人而言 As far as I am concerned, / Personally,

14.就…达到绝对的一致 reach an absolute consensus on…

15.有充分的理由支持 be supported by sound reasons

16.双方的论点 argument on both sides

17.发挥着日益重要的作用 play an increasingly important role in…

18.对…必不可少 be indispensable to …

19.正如谚语所说 As the proverb goes:

20.…也不例外 …be no exception

21.对…产生有利/不利的影响 exert positive/ negative effects on…

22.利远远大于弊 the advantages far outweigh the disadvantages。

23.导致，引起 lead to/ give rise to/ contribute to/ result in

24.复杂的社会现象 a complicated social phenomenon

25.责任感 / 成就感 sense of responsibility/ sense of achievement

26.竞争与合作精神 sense of competition and cooperation

27.开阔眼界 widen one’s horizon/ broaden one’s vision

28.学习知识和技能 acquire knowledge and skills

29.经济/心理负担 financial burden / psychological burden

30.考虑到诸多因素 take many factors into account/ consideration

31.从另一个角度 from another perspective

32.做出共同努力 make joint efforts

33.对…有益 be beneficial / conducive to…

34.为社会做贡献 make contributions to the society

35.打下坚实的基础 lay a solid foundation for…

36.综合素质 comprehensive quality

37.无可非议 blamele / beyond reproach

39.致力于/ 投身于 be committed / devoted to…

40.应当承认 Admittedly,

41.不可推卸的义务 unshakable duty

42.满足需求 satisfy/ meet the needs of…

43.可靠的信息源 a reliable source of information

44.宝贵的自然资源 valuable natural resources

45.因特网 the Internet (一定要由冠词，字母I 大写)

46.方便快捷 convenient and efficient

47.在人类生活的方方面面 in all aspects of human life

48.环保(的) environmental protection / environmentally friendly

49.社会进步的体现 a symbol of society progre

50.科技的飞速更新 the ever-accelerated updating of science and technology

51.对这一问题持有不同态度 hold different attitudes towards this iue

52.支持前/后种观点的人 people / those in fovor of the former/ latteropinion

53.有/ 提供如下理由/ 证据 have/ provide the following reasons/ evidence

54.在一定程度上 to some extent/ degree / in some way

55.理论和实践相结合 integrate theory with practice

56.…必然趋势 an irresistible trend of…

57.日益激烈的社会竞争 the increasingly fierce social competition

58.眼前利益 immediate interest/ short-term interest

59.长远利益.interest in the long run

60.…有其自身的优缺点 … has its merits and demerits/ advantages and disadvantages

61.扬长避短 Exploit to the full one’s favorable conditions and avoid unfavorable ones

62.取其精髓，取其糟粕 Take the eence and discard the dregs。

63.对…有害 do harm to / be harmful to/ be detrimental to

64.交流思想/ 情感/ 信息 exchange ideas/ emotions/ information

65.跟上…的最新发展 keep pace with / catch up with/ keep abreast with the latest development of …

66.采取有效措施来… take effective measures to do sth

67.…的健康发展 the healthy development of …

68.有利有弊 Every coin has its two sides。

No garden without weeds。

第14篇：对比选择型英语作文

对比选择型：

Dictions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic: Is A Test of Spoken English Neceary? You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below: 1） 很多人认为有必要举行英语口语考试，理由是…… 2） 也有人持有不同意见…… 3） 我的看法和打算

Is A Test of Spoken English Neceary? A test of spoken English will be included as an optional component of College English Test (CET).

Model One Is A Test of Spoken English Neceary? A test of spoken English will be included as an optional component of College English Test (CET).This news causes a heated debate over the neceity of the test.It is commonly accepted that such a test in China is very neceary.In contrast, others think it unneceary.Those who hold the first opinion suggest that the speaking ability is very important in today’s society.In their view, a test of spoken English will urge college students to improve their oral English.However, others think that writing skills would be enough for daily use.They argue that spoken English does not necearily mean better opportunities.Considering one after another, I stand on the side of the former idea.First of all, English, as a language is a tool for oral communication.Furthermore, the ability to speak English fluently is a must for us in the more open China.Thirdly, the test will help us in our job seeking.Therefore, the test of spoken English is neceary.

Model Two Is A Test of Spoken English Neceary? A test of spoken English will be included as an optional component of College English Test (CET).We may hear quite different comments on this idea.Most people take it for granted that such a test is neceary for college students.However, others hold a different opinion.A dominant idea is that English as a language is a tool for oral communication.In this opinion, such a test will make college students realize the importance of oral English.Neverthele, the objectors think that many people need not use oral English at work.They argue that the test may not reflect the true level.As to me, I prefer the former opinion.On the one hand, I like exchanging ideas with foreigners.On the other hand, the ability to speak English fluently is a must for us in the more open China.Therefore, the test will give more incentive to our oral English.In conclusion, the test of spoken English is neceary.

Model Three Is A Test of Spoken English Neceary? A test of spoken English will be included as an optional component of College English Test (CET).Different people will offer quite different ideas on this news.Many people aert that such a test is unneceary in China.However, others believe that it is neceary.Some may proclaim that fluent oral English does not neceary mean better opportunities.They maintain such an idea because many people need not use oral English at work.In contrast, the objectors think that a fluent spoken English is badly in need in today’s society.They argue that English as a language is a tool for oral communication.As far as I am concerned, I agree to the latter opinion.First, the test can encourage college students to improve their spoken English.Second, the ability to speak English fluently is a must for us since China will continue her open-door policy.Last but not least, I like exchanging ideas with foreigners.In a word, the test of spoken English is neceary.

第15篇：英语作文对比型论说文

模板一：Nowadays, the influence of _________proves to be profound.And there has been a very controversial debate as to ________.

People in favor ofAalways provide the following evidence.Firstly, ____.Secondly, ______.Finally, ___________.

In short, I agree that _______.

Will Internet Replace Books?

Nowadays, the influence of Internet proves to be profound.And there has been a very controversial debate as to whether or not Internet will replace the book as the main source of information.

People in favor of the traditional information sources always provide the following evidence.Firstly, the history of human civilizaition is the written history.Secondly, people are free to choose any posture and place that make them comfortable when reading.Finally, traditional information sources like books ar relatively stable and reliable to preserve the human information well.

While others prefer the Internet.In the first place, the Internet has been bringing a lot of changes to our life.Secondly, we can find almost all of the information we need from the Internet.At the same time, we are able to proce the data more rapidly and accurately from the Internet than from books.

In short, I agree that as a source of information the Internet will one day replace books.I am eagerly looking forward to that day.

模板三：Those who preferAhave their own reasons, while some other people prefer B.As for me, both A and B have merits and demerits.

First and foremost, _______ .Moreover, ______.Last but not least, _______.

On the contrary _____.In addition, _____.What’s the commonest,_______.

Either __ or ______.I believe______.

Compare Urban Areas with Rural Areas

Those who prefer urvan life have their own reasons, while some people prefer to live in rural areas.As for me, both urvan life and rural life have merits and demerits.

Urban citizens can appreciate a more colorful life than rural citizens.Townspeople are well-informed because they have the easier acce to news.Townspeople can buy what they want at any time of a day as there is an adequate supply of goods.

On the contrary ,medical studies have proved that rural residents can live longer than urban residents, because they are free from a contaminated environment.In addition, the crime rate in the city is several times higher than in the countryside.What\'s the commonest, the life in the city is much more expensive than in the countryside.

Either an urban or a rural area gives pleasure and trouble.But I believe the subruban area has the excellences of both, because people they can appreciate not only the conveniences and variety of urban life but also peace and safety of the country.

模板四:When it comes to ____ , people’s opinions differ.Many people believe that ____ .For one thing, ___ .For the other thing, _____.

Some people, however, take a different attitude.They regard that _____ .In their views, ____ .Furthermore, _____ .

As far as I am concerned, ____ .On one hand, ___ .On the other hand, _____ .So ___ .

模板五:When asked _____ , people have different opinions.Many people believe that _____ .On the one hand,____ .on the other hand, ____ .All these point to the indispensability of ____.

However, others claim / argue that _____ .As far as they are concerned, _____ .Moreover,____.As for me, _____ .Because ____ .What’s more, ______.Therefore, _____.

模板六： There is no consensus of opinions among people as to ____ .Some people who are in favor of the idea of ____ hold that _____ .For one thing, ____ .For another,____ .Therefore,____ .

However, those who insist on ____ argue that ____ .In their opinion, ___ .In addition, ___ .Thus____ .In my viewpoint, _____ .That is to say,_____ .In a word, ____ .

模板七：There is a heated debate over ___.It is commonly accepted that ___ .In contrast, others think __ .Those who hold the first opinion suggest that ____ .In their view, ____ .However, others think ____ .They argue that____ .

Considering one after another, I stand on the side of ____ .First of all,_____ .Furthermore, _____ .Thirdly, _____ .Therefore, ____ .

A Good Major or a Good University.1.学生在报考大学时面临两种选择—选好专业还是好大学。有人认为应该选择好专业2.也有人认为应该选择一所好大学3.我的看法

范文一When asked to choose between a good major or a good university before college enrollment,

people have different opinions.Many people believe that a good university means great advantage for job application after graduation.On the one hand, a good university has good reputations, which adds credits for its graduates.On the other hand, a good university has all sorts of channels to help graduates get a good job.All these point to the indispensability of a good university.

However, others claim that a good major is all that counts.As far as they are concerned, excellent teaching staff of a good major makes sure that the student are sufficiently trained in the chosen field.

Moreover, if one chooses a major that is most needed by the society, not only will he/she find a job easily, but they will contribute much to the society.

As for me, such choice should be made according to our academic interest.Because whether a major or a university is good depends on how we look at it.If certain major or university fits our interest, it will be considered good.What’s more, interest is the best teacher, so a choice of our own interest can help us overcome difficulties in the study.Therefore, let our interest decide for us.

范文二 There is no consensus of opinion among people as to the choice between a good major or a good university before college enrollment.Some people who are in favor of the idea of having a good major hold that it can ensure one’s future succe.For one thing, a good major, even in a common university, can help its students become rare talents, thus gaining in advantages for future competition.For another, a good major boasts various exclusive learning recourses which makes it highly poible for students to further their education.Therefore, a good major is more important.

However, those who insist on choosing a good university argue that graduates from famous

universities are popular in talent market.In their opinions, a good university can give students confidence, which is very helpful in their study and future work.In addition, a good university has a set of educating system, incomparable with common university.Thus it is wiser to choose a good university.

In my viewpoint, a good university should be my only choice.If there is a chance, who doesn’t want to enter Bejing or Qinghua, Harvard or Yale? That is to say, a good university is worthy of every effort.In a word, a good university is of great importance in one’s future development.

The Pros and Cons of Dormitory Life(重要) 1.很多人认为学校应该要求大学生住在宿舍内，赞成理由是…2.很多人认为学校不应该强制要求大学生住宿舍，理由是…3.在我看来，…

范文一：When it comes to whether university authorities should require students to live in dormitory, people’s opinions differ.Many people believe that there are great advantages of dormitory life.For one thing, students have the chance of enjoying the friendship of their roommates.This can be the most

precious memory they have later in life.For another thing, university dormitories do not cost much, while living off campus can be very expensive.Let alone the iue of security.

Some people, however, take a different attitude.They regard dormitory as an undesirable place.In their view, since 4 to 8 people live in one dormitory, there is not enough privacy.Furthermore, dormitory is troublesome because it is very likely that one could have clashes with his dorm mates.

As far as I am concerned, students benefit greatly from dormitory life.On one hand, dormitory life provides precious leons on how to communicate with others.On the other hand, students do not feel lonely.There are always people of the same age around.And when they have trouble, there are always helping hands in the dormitory.So why should students live off campus while there is a good life right in here?

范文二：There is a heated debate over whether students should be required to live in dormitory.It is commonly accepted that dormitory life is a very important part of college life, so students should live in dormitory.In contrast, others think that students have the right to choose other places for accommodation.Those who hold the first opinion suggest that dormitory life is colorful and interesting.In their view, when young people live in one dormitory, they tend to create and enjoy a culture of their own.However, others think dormitory life can be annoying.They argue that dormitory is always crowded and one can hardly feel convenient and comfortable.

Considering one after another, I stand on the side of the first group.First of all, I am interested in living with students from different places so that I can contact with special cultures.Furthermore, I can learn how to get along with other people from dormitory life.Thirdly, I like making friends and dormitory life gives me such chance.Therefore, I think dormitory life is worthy of living.

Marks or Abilities? 1.在大学，一些学生认为学习成绩是最重要的2.在大学，一些学生认为培养个人的能力是最重要的3.你的看法

When it comes to the task of college students, students’ opinions differ.Many students believe that marks are very important.For one thing, they think that their primary task is to study and learn from

teachers and textbooks.For another, they seldom take part in other activities, for they are afraid that those activities will affect their study.

Some students, however, take a different attitude.They regard it is more important to develop one’s own practical ability.In their views, college students should not learn from the textbook knowledge, they should also learn from outside the textbook.Furthermore, one’s own practical ability is of primary importance.

As far as I am concerned, we should first study hard, then try to develop our abilities at the same time.On the one hand, study is our primary task.On the other hand, we shouldn’t neglect our own practical abilities, for when we enter the society, we need various abilities.So the sound foundation of knowledge along with practical abilities is eential for us to be useful for the society.

Electronic Dictionaries Are not Good

1.很多学生喜欢使用电子词典2.使用电子词典的缺点3.正确使用词典学习进步会大得多

There is a heated debate over electronic dictionaries.It is commonly accepted that using the electronic dictionaries has many advantages.In contrast, others think using electronic dictionaries has more disadvantages.

Those who hold the first opinion suggest that it is more convenient to pre some keys on the machine.In their views, they should catch up with the new development of the science and technology.However, others think electronic dictionaries are not good.They argue that constant use of such electronic device may cause side effects.

Considering one after another, I stand on the side of the latter.First of all, electronic dictionaries do not contain as much information as a qualified dictionary compiled by authorities of the field.Furthermore, some explanations in them are so simple that they cam certainly cause misunderstanding.Thirdly, a lazy attitude towards language learning is always most inefficient in the long run.Therefore, a learner should have a good dictionary on hand and treat the electronic dictionary as a makeshift.

Aignments

Communicating by Telephone or by Letter?

主体段落一：电话交流的优点，一笔带过书信交流的缺点。1.有急事时，电话最为快捷；2.生活节奏加快，没时间写信，电话能解决这个问题；3.电话似乎能缩短人与人之间的距离。

主体段落二：电话交流的缺点，从而突出书信交流的优点。1.电话交流让人变得懒惰，人们不愿意提笔组织自己的语言；2.在电话中无法直接表达的话语，可以通过书信传达。

Making friends with people of similar or different personalities

主体段落一：肯定与性格相同的人交友的优势1.容易接近；2.能更好地相互理解

主体段落二：肯定与性格相左的朋友交友的优势

1.性格相左的朋友特质；2.能反映自己的优缺点3.能发现自己的不足与所需。

Reading selectively or extensively?

主体段落一：为何要有选择性地阅读1.时间有限；2.有害书籍的存在

主体段落二：为何要博览群书1.各类知识密切相关，触类旁通；2.开阔眼界。

第16篇：对比选择四级作文文档

对比选择型模板1

Topic

(1) There is a heated debate over __________.(2) It is commonly accepted that __________.

(3) In contrast, others __________.

(4) Those who hold the first opinion suggest __________.(5) In their view, __________.(6) However, others think __________.(7) They argue that __________.

(8) Considering one after another, I stand on the side of __________.(9) First of all, __________.(10) Furthermore, __________.(11) Thirdly, __________.(12) Therefore, __________.

对比选择型模板 2

Topic

(1) Different people will offer quite different ideas __________.(2) Many people aert __________.(3) However, others believe __________.

(4) Some may proclaim __________.(5) They maintain such an idea because __________.

(6) In contrast, the objectors think __________.(7) They argue that __________.

(8) As far as I am concerned, I agree to __________.(9) First, __________.(10) Second, __________.(11) Last but not least, __________.(12) In a word, __________.

第17篇：中西方传统节日对比英语作文

Second English papers Each nation has its own characteristic festivals that reflect the culture of itself.In China, asour country and westerncountries become increasingly closer,more and more chinese accept western culture.However, some western festivals sometimes even more popular than traditional festivals, foreign cultural’s influence should not be underestimated.The main The main group of celebratingwesternfestivals is youth group which takes students as the main force.People celebrate festivals such as Valentine\'s day, mother\'s day, Thanksgiving Day and Christmas Day.In fact, because of the Chinese way of thinking, western holidays in China is just popular for Christmas and Valentine\'s day, not all western holidays attract people\'s attention.According to a survey ofCentral China Normal University, many college students know the existence of western festivals, but little of them know about their cultural connotations.In addition to Christmas, respondents

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freedom.addition, westernholidaysmake people who’re under heavy social preure have a chance to relax.At the same time, some experts believe that the celebration of Western holidays are an inevitable trend of cultural exchanges.Huang Kemin, aSociologistbelieves that celebrating western holidays is aform of cultural communication.In some cases, it’ll fill vacancies inChinese culture.

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that celebratingWestern festivals can enhance the friendship ofclamates and make the claes more solidarity.Duringa festival, Most of the supermarkets and restaurants provide promotions that benefitconsumers, these festivals also has a catalytic role to economic development.Opponents believe thatChina has its own history and local culture for thousands of years, the Western Festival don’t suit China\'s needs for cultural development.Also, due to blind worship,people often losttraditional culture.Celebratingwestern holidayswill shake the traditional culture’tatus in the minds of nationals and endanger the inheritance and development of traditional culture.For example, many young people celebrate Valentine\'s day, but they don\'t knowChinese Lovers’s Day.In addition,owing to the cultural invasion,many countries arewary of foreign holidays .To guarantee Chinese cultural’s independence, western holidays cann’t be allowed to develop freely.At the same time, many people celebrate Western festivals for following the fashion .The effectof cultural exchanges isn’t obvious.In addition, the blind pursuit of consumption and enjoyment causesmoney worship,hedonism and other bad ideas.

Just my personal opinion, we should celebrate western holidays withrational thought, and we shouldn’t lose ourselves.Towards western Festivals, we should take its eence and discard the dregs.For instance,ThanksgivingDaycan be advocated for making our culture advance as it reflects one of Chinese traditional virtues- gratefulne; others, such as Halloween,should be treated calmly because it’s religious.Cultural integration is the trend of the historical development.So we should not implement \"isolationism\".Under the premise of enhancing awarene of traditional culture and revitalizing Chinese culture, we can activelyenter the world that has frequent cultural exchanges.Festivalsare important means of cultural transmiion which host the important cultural.They’re the crystallization of human wisdom.Rich festival lights up our lives, for our life has various colors.Let us take the broad mindand appreciate the colorful festivals!

第18篇：作文正反对比模式讲析

作文正反对比模式讲析

一、正反对比式

题目-------------------

首段：四项内容，引材-议材-点观点-点题目（大多作文合二为一）--------------------------①

主体结构：正面反面

②正面

③正面

④正面

⑤---从正到反 过渡段

⑥ --反面

⑦--------总结以上四层，联系现实，深化中心

尾端：照应首段写 -⑧

二、例文赏析

材料

甲：47%的人相信明星代言，认为可以帮助认识产品，有助于销售；

乙：91%的人认为明星代言有问题，比如\"三鹿\"奶粉，责任就在代言人；

丙：有的明星并不知情，是经纪人代理或朋友介绍才代言的；

丁：明星代言相当于证言，他们挣几十万的广告费，应当负责任；

戊：政府监管不严，舆论、监察部门也有失察；人家好莱坞影星代言就有被罚百万美元的。

针对以上材料，自选角度，自拟题目，文体不限(除诗歌外)，写一篇800字以上的文章。

三、模式范本

愿诚信之花永远开放

一位英国商人曾经说过，品牌就是多年来积累的诚信声誉，是一笔巨大的财富。是啊，对于我们个人以及一个团体而言，诚信何尝不是我们立足社会的根基呢？----------------------------开头

紧握诚信，嘉诚辉煌。如今李嘉诚的生意是越做越火，钱赚的是越来越多。我想起了他曾经说过的一句话，从中我们可以得到他成功的秘诀。他说过，你必须以诚待人，别人才能以诚相报。这可以说就是他从一个名不见经传的人，一跃成为赫赫有名人物的妙招。他把握了诚信，他把握了市场，自然就收获了与他合作的人的信任与支持，可见，一个企业的辉煌一定要有英明带头人的操守，李嘉诚之所以如此辉煌，就是因为他把握了诚信，以诚待人！-------------正面

抛弃诚信，三鹿倒闭。几个月前，人们茶余饭后谈论最多的就是“三鹿毒奶粉”事件。一个曾经辉煌无比的企业，一个曾经日进斗金的企业，一个曾经让百姓放心的企业，倒闭了！它的倒闭，也让一些代言的明星受到了牵连，请问明星们，你们最初代言的时候，是否亲自品尝了“三鹿奶粉”。如果品尝了，你们可能感觉不到“三聚氰胺”的威力，但你们是否找相关的部门进行了鉴定？不管如何，你们是代言了，因为你所说的话与三鹿奶粉的质量之间发生了严重的冲突，你抛弃了诚信，三鹿也抛弃了诚信，三鹿倒闭了，你也倒闭了！-------反面

当然，所有明星的代言都是广告的手段，而“寓教于乐”是自古以来老祖宗就告诉我们的真理。恐怕所有人都得承认，对于一个好产品的宣传，正襟危坐的老专家的呆板说教能起到的效用，与明星、名人相比，显然是远远不及的。所以，只要产品是合格、安全的，理念是健康、惠民的，通过名人影响力这种高效便捷的传播手段，让大家更快地接受，那完全是利国利民的大好事，何乐而不为呢？但是，明星们，当你们决定代言的时候，一定要对得起自己，对得起观众，对得起自己的良心，把握诚信，你就对得起了所有人！----------------联系现实

企业辉煌要诚信，明星代言要诚信，个人立足社会仍然需要诚信！在中国的大地上，在亿万万的中国民众中，愿诚信之花永远开放！---------总结，号召

四、模式点评

这是一篇典型的议论文，结构上呈“总—分—总”式。文章下笔提出“诚信何尝不是我们立足社会的根基”的一论点。继而，从正反两面推出两个热点事例，一则讲李嘉诚因诚信而获得成功，一则讲“三鹿”因抛弃诚信而导致倒闭。最后自然作出总结，“愿诚信之花永远开放”。这一模板的形式和内容都是我们熟悉的，在这一模板的框架下，只要平时多注意素材的积累，对热点和时事进行关注，写出高水平的考场作文是不难的。

第19篇：公立学校对比私立学校的英语作文

For primary and secondary school students, private schools the traditional education teaching methods, private school students to wear school uniforms, obey strict rules, have an after school homework and so on, the old methods and strict teaching students.Parents think for public school students are too indulgent, giving too much freedom, conducive to child growth.Second, the number of private school students per cla rarely, generally not more than 30.Limited teachers, teachers have the energy to take care of each student\'s learning progre.Private school students because of the strict rules and accommodation and food are higher than public schools, parents can rest aured that their children\'s school life.The third, with most of the Comparison of public schools, private school students test scores are relatively high.

However, after entering the University, students to enter the public university to learn more knowledge, because in public universities, teachers are more powerful, more authoritative academic research and discuion, let students have the opportunity to contact with the outside world.School with better facilities, better campus environment, lets the student be able to spend in the beautiful campus rich and beautiful university time.So, public university is student better choice.

Both public schools and private schools are designed to enable students to receive a better education.Therefore, the school itself should conscientiously fulfill their obligations to complete their miion, responsible for every student.

第20篇：英语作文250字两国学校对比

Schools

-_- Max

Education is the problem what is all parents are concerned about.And English, as a communication tool is increasingly being needed, it holds an important position in the world.So lot of parents choose to let their children abroad to study.But compared with foreign schools and Chinese schools, there are many differences, and this proce of adaptation is difficult.

In China, English is not our native language, but English is as important as the other main courses.So, students will pay attention to English.As in Kaplan often practice speaking, always discu a topic in small groups, Is the same in China.And another same point is writing aignment.Whether in China or Singapore, the two schools will often give writing aignment to help students apply their newly learned grammar and vocabulary.

The difference is that ways of learning.In China, the teacher\'s the focus on vocabulary and grammar., and neglect other aspects, such as speaking and listening.But in Kaplan is the development of all aspects, not exam-oriented education.And the other difference is homework.As we all know, the amount of homework Chinese school is among the best in the world.Our school homework also is very much.It makes the students miserable.But Kaplan on the contrary, the right amount of exercise makes the students could learn effectively.

In my opinion, Kaplan’s learning style is more suitable for me to learn English.I like the easy way of learning.

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