创新英语作文大赛范文
推荐第1篇：创新英语作文大赛作文
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第二部分题目
Directions: Addison said,“Every man should have a purpose in life.A man without a purpose lives on, like a cabbage in a field, but he knows no life.” According to him, having a purpose in life is very important for us.With Addison’s words as your point, write an eay with no le than 300 words.You can add a title by yourself.
用法：艾迪生说，“每个人在生活中应该有一个目的。一个人要有目标,否则根本就不懂生活”据他介绍，而有个生活目标对于我们来说是非常重要的。艾迪生的话，你的观点，不少于300个词写一篇文章。你可以自己添加标题。
推荐第2篇：创新英语大赛作文
“The more you do, the more mistakes you will make.” This is true, but we can not avoid making mistakes.Mistakes are indispensable.
When we grow up and on the way to succe, we have to face all sorts of problems and make many choices.Sometimes we make mistakes—we are in big trouble and we However, as long as we are doing what we like, we feel happy.Also, making mistake is a kind of “I was so stupid at that time”, but we will never regret—what we have done are for our dreams! Yes, mistakes may make our life journey difficult and challenging, but that is what really makes life meaningful and beautiful, isn’t it?
But what can we do now? Parents always want to “protect” us from making mistakes, so they don’t give us too many chances to try.They don’t want us to be someone who is “unusual”, but tell us to be what they want us to be.We are in a hard situation—we want to achieve our own dreams, but our parents want us to do things as they tell us to.We also love our parents, we don’t want to let them down.So we choose to listen to them instead of following our heart most of the time.However, I really want to say: dear parents, can you give us an opportunity to be ourselves? We will never really grow up and learn until we start making our own mistakes.Mistakes are our valuable wealth.Without them, our lives will be incomplete.
Finally, it is natural for us to make some mistakes.Though we may be hurt sometimes, we learn more from them.The things we learn and the experiences we have will be of good help in the future, and we will have a better tomorrow.
“The more you do, the more mistakes you will make.” This is true, but we can not avoid making mistakes.Mistakes are indispensable.
When we grow up and on the way to succe, we have to face all sorts of problems and make many choices.Sometimes we make mistakes—we are in big trouble and we really want and need in our lives.Also, as long as we are doing what we like, we feel happy.Many years later, when we think about the mistakes we have made, we may laugh and say: “I was so stupid at that time”, but we will never regret—what we have done are for our dreams! Yes, mistakes may make our life journey difficult and challenging, but that is what really makes life meaningful and beautiful, isn’t it?
But what can we do now? Parents always want to “protect” us from making mistakes, so they don’t give us too many chances to try.They don’t want us to be someone who is “unusual”, but tell us to be what they want us to be.We are in a hard situation—we want to achieve our own dreams, but our parents want us to do things as they tell us to.We also love our parents, we don’t want to let them down.So we choose to listen to them instead of following our heart most of the time.However, I really want to say: dear parents, can you give us an opportunity to be ourselves? We will never really grow up and learn until we start making our own mistakes.Mistakes are our valuable wealth.Without them, our lives will be incomplete.
Finally, it is natural for us to make some mistakes.Though we may be hurt sometimes, we learn more from them.The things we learn and the experiences we have will be of good help in the future, and we will have a better tomorrow.
推荐第3篇：创新英语大赛作文复习资料
第八届创新英语大赛初赛试题
Directions:
Read the following paragraph and write a composition as stated at about 300 words in 60 minutes.Your composition will be graded according to clarity, accuracy and meaningfulne.
Some experts claim that parents` attitudes toward solving teenage problems are crucial determinants of child personality development.Do you agree or disagree? What role does parental attitude play in child rearing and personality development? You writing ought to contain three parts, your viewpoint, the supporting ideas, and the conclusion.
第八届创新英语大赛复赛试题
Directions:
Read the following paragraph and write a composition as stated at about 300 words in 60 minutes.Your composition will be graded according to clarity, accuracy and meaningfulne.
In accordance with CRI news, the spirit of Chinese volunteers, from responding to the May 12 earthquake to the 2008 Beijing Olympic Games, not only touched the Chinese people, but also generated worldwide attention.Official statistics show that china has accumulated about 8 billion hours of volunteer work from 380 million volunteers since 1993 and is going to have more and more volunteers, especially the youth.
How do you understand volunteer work? In what way(s) is it important to promote the well-being of individuals, families, communities and the world at large? Your writing ought to contain three parts, your viewpoint, the supporting ideas, and the conclusion.
第五届创新英语大赛复赛试题
Directions: Some people maintain that universities are the best place for young people to receive higher education; other people believe that young people can be equally educated by taking correspondence courses or going to evening claes and open universities in their spare time.
Write an article of about 300 words in which you compare and contrast the advantages and disadvantages of formal university education and informal higher education.Which do you think is more effective and desirable? Support your argument with appropriate examples or illustrations.命题思路：本试题要求学生对比高等教育的两种主要形式：正规的大学课堂教育与函授、夜大学、电视大学等业余的非正规高等教育。学生必须在对比权衡两种不同模式的利弊后，阐述自己的观点，并有适当的例证。
Informal Higher Education Serves Better
Although most students are still fighting for the diploma in universities after graduation from high school, it has been a clear trend that more and more students choose to start their working career earlier and receive informal higher education, which in my opinion, serves better to build more competition (competitive) and suitable personal abilities.
Informal higher education offers better opportunities to adapt to social life for students, and help them understand better the reality of their social community and responsibilities they are to take.Compared with those who spend entirely their time in the (on) campus, students who take evening claes could contact with more people, develop their communication skills and social behaviors during working hours.They know better how cruel and realistic the society is and that it is your power and capabilities that only speak.They understand and adapt better to the preure of life‟s difficulties which in universities could hardly be realized.
Secondly, after experiencing real working life, these (those) who attend correspondence courses would know better what kind of knowledge and abilities they must master, which definitely help them in future advancement and career choices.Suppose you‟re a graduate from high school and become an aist of a car repairing workshop.Then you‟ll have to know how the engine and different parts of the car works and how to deal with various crisises (emergent problems).Therefore, night schools‟ education (evening claes) would enable you (插入 to) acquire more specialized knowledge which are fit to you.However, in universities, you have to learn a great many courses, some of which are comparatively usele and can even make you bewilded of future
(bewildered to the future).
Furthermore, as they have more time to manage for themselves, students drop higher education in universities could earn some money and gain earlier start in career.These will ease their families‟ burdens and satisfy their desire for basic money needs.As a matter of fact, nowadays, more than a few American teens abandon university‟ s education and try to become a worker like air-conditional repairer (air-conditioner repairman) who can earn as much as $ 30, 000 for the first year.Thus, their decisions benefit themselves and their families.
Conclude (To conclude) from all the facts talked above, we can safely arrive at the summary that informal higher education is more efficient and serves better.It make (makes) you ahead of others in career development with more competitive skills, fit knowledge, pre cious experiences of social life and more leisure to earn some eential financial supports.As we‟ll one day indulge ourselves in the real soci (walk into the realistic society,) informal higher education serves better for our present and future developing.(development)
Universities or Informal Education?
It is an undeniable fact that, nowadays, a controversial debate has (插入 been) risen as to whether universities or informal higher education is more eential for students, (which is more eential for students, universities or informal higher education).People vary in their opinions on this question.
Those who are in favor of universities often provide the following evidence.First of all, universities are run by the government and seem to be more reliable, whereas informal higher education is short of serious disciplines.Moreover universities have the incomparable merits that with students living in their dormitories they provide (are provided) plenty of time to gain the knowledge they long for.
Neverthele, there are also people who set forth a totally opposite idea.They claim that there are various kinds of informal education ranging from correspondence courses to open universities and evening claes, from which students can choose freely according to their own needs and likes.Furthermore, students can get more spare time to step into other activities or continue their work during the daytime.While in universities, students have to stay inside all day.This, of course, will reject those workers who have an appetite for knowledge and want to further their study.
From my perspective, I think the former group‟s idea is more favorable.Three key components account for my choice.First and foremost, with a longer history, universities provide students with more accurate knowledge and can equip them better for their future career.What‟s more, during the four years of acdamic (academic) life, students can broaden their eyes, deepen their understanding, sharpen their mind and maintain specialized training.Last but not least, it is commonly accepted that universities are more experienced in education and have a better environment for students to develop themselves both mentally and physically.
Taking all these factors into consideration, I confidentally (confidently) come to the conclusion that one should give priority to universifies.Only in this way can they arm themselves with more knowledge and perfect their personalities.
Fruit & the Vitamin Medicine
With the world developing in (at) high speed, more and more young people take part in higher educated (education).Some of the (them) choose to go to universities, and the others joined evening claes and open universities or took correspondence courses.I think, if we put the formal university education as the fruits we eat and the informal higher education would be like the vitamin medicine.Both of them could give us what we need.
Let‟s see two examples: The first one is my elder sister, who studyed (studied) very well and went into Beijing University with a high mark.Now, after the four-year university life, she was employed by a lawyer firm and makes a large sum of money every year.
Another example is a girl who used to working in (work in) my father‟s bar.She was a country girl, (插入 and) she worked hard but got little money, so under my father‟s encouragement, she attended an evening cla in spare time.The first two years was a hard time, because on one hand, she must to (去掉) learn knowledge in the evening when she was very tired after one day\'s work; On the other hand, she had to make money to pay for the evening cla.But then her way was wider and wider, and now
she found a better job in a small company and can offer much more money to her poor family.
In my opinion, even both the girl and my sister got a good job at last, but I still think that enter (attending) formal university is better.Because in universities we could make more friends, we could get more chances to communicate with the experienced profeors, we could get more ways to receive information of our future jobs, and we could also send ourselves into the coulful (colorful) groups in the university so that we could have a happier higher educated life.But in the informal education, there could not be so much fun.
Though I thought like this, but I have to say equally that both fruit and vitamin medicine can give us the vitamins we need, the only difference between them is that some people love fruits and the others may thought (think) having medicine is easier.So whatever you choose, the fruit or the medicine (the formal university education or the informal higher education), the most important is that you can get the knowledge you wanted, isn\'t it?
Directions: We can be sure that most people have experienced failure and succe.Most often, when we are succeful we are happy.If we fail, we are sad.Now, you are asked to write an eay on the topic of Failure and Succe.You can give some examples and facts to support your opinion.Your eay should be written in English with on le than 300 words within 60 minutes.
Failure Leads to Succe
Staring at my marks, I was trembling.The highlighted „50‟ was like explosions in the sky (a bolt from the blue) , which suggested I was (去掉) utterly failed.However, to my astonishment, my mother didn‟t keep a straight face with my paper in hand.Slowly she said, “It‟s compulsory to face the music, boy.Always remember: Failure leads to succe.” Ever since then, I committed those words to memory to stand up again after failure.
My dear friends, failure is not dire.What is (去掉) really awesome is giving yourselves over to the bad mood after failure.It‟s a common sense that everybody wants to end up in succe, so sparing no effort to work hard becomes a corollary.In history, examples of peoples who succeeded after failure were as many as stars can be (去掉).
For instance, Edison was kicked out of school on account of his bad grades.However, he immediately overcame the sadne and committed himself to scientific invention.Then, as we all know, he became the greatest inventor after failure and was universally highly though (thought) of.From this, we can see, failure never defeated Edison.On the contrary, failure turned into the power of his succe.
On top of that, I want to mention Alert Einstein, whose life was considered a downright failure by his teachers.Alert‟s teacher used to maintain that he (the boy) was too iconoclastic and inevitable to become a philistine.Alert took a very view of that.He developed his interest in physics and tried his best to do research on some moscopolitan (cosmopolitan) problems.At last, his “Theory of Relativity” made the world convinced that he was succeful.
Depending on my personal experience and emotional concern, failure is totally the darkne before dawn.if (If) we pull ourselves out of the black aby, we will see the sun shining above the horizon.” God helps those who help themselves.” Only when we help ourselves in (out of) failure, it eventually leads to succe (can we eventually achieve succe).
Attitudes towards Failure and Succe
It‟s no exaggeration to compare our life stage to a battle field which is loaded with both failure and succe.From cradle to grave, people from different levels of life, almost everyone has to experience different kinds of battles: the competitions between students, between businemen, even between countries, etc.As a consequence, we will face not only succe but also failure.From the point of my view, proper attitudes should be taken towards failure and succe.
Most often, when we are succeful we are happy.After all, competition means that one do (does) one‟s utmost to reach for things which are wanted by others, blow that you are succeful, it means that you are the winner.So to speak, everyone dreams of succeeding and it‟s common to be happy if your dream comes into reality.However, just as an old saying goes: Pride goes before a fall.We mustn‟t sink our self (ourselves) into the world of flowers and congratulations.Come down to earth, more things of the eence remained to be done yet.History abounds with the example of that.Qing Dynasty fell behind other countries on account of its ridiculous satisfaction.It closed its window to the world and no foreign trades were allowed.Finally, it was beaten
by western countries.
Thus, we must be aware of the circumstances and can‟t be too proud of ourselves.Meanwhile, as failure is unavoided (unavoidable) in our life, more attention should be paid to failure.
First and foremost, we must absorb leons from our failure.One mustn‟t fall in the same place twice.Just as a proverb goes: Fall in a pit gain in your wise (A fall into a pit, a gain is your wit).Besides, everyone makes mistakes.Someone has said that show me a man who never makes mistakes and I will show you a person with two heads.That is to say, it‟s undeniable for one to make mistakes and failure is a piece of dish that everyone must taste, despite (although) you are reluctant to face it.As a result, positive attitude (attiutdes) should be taken towards failure.Failure is the mother of succe.Only if you are aware of that, you will succeed in the end.As is known to all, Napolon (Napoleon) is considered as the greatest person in France.He had experienced numerous wars before he succeeded.I remember that he once said, “You can never find „ failure‟ in my dictionary.“ Yes, he succeeded and he never regreted (regretted) for what he had done.Keep in mind that there is only one winner, but everyone should strive for it.Most often, the obstacle to succe is not our failure, but is our fears.If you failed, cheer up, everthing (everything) will be OK.
All in all, no matter it is sunny or cloudy, as long as we take positive attitudes towards it, succe will finally come.Confidence is the first step to succe.Come on, we are the best.
Failure and Succe
No one can avoid being influenced by failure and succe.As far as I know, there are countle people, who enjoy a high level of reputation, suffering from a great deal of failure and succe.Actually, the road of Life is twittered (littered) with boulders and pitted with holes.It seems the same that life is filled with failure and succe, making it more and more colorful .Because of them, the life is a long wonderful word.
As (插入 the) saying goes that no cro, no crown, failure always wins respect of many great scientists, for it adds color to the dull routine of everyone‟s life.For example, Madam Cuie (Madame Curie) suffered a large number of sufferings, achieving her goals.Eventually, she won the Nobel (插入Prize).Though it‟s poible to measure the value of material goods in terms of money, it‟s extremely difficult to estimate the true value of failure, for it maybe marks the prelude to a series of succe.
Obviously, succe is a shining star sought by a great many people.Some people hold a view that achieving one‟s goals is the only succe that matters.Frankly speaking, achieving one‟s goals is just a personal succe.Whether or not it is accepted by society depends on what the goals are and what the ways are.If your succe is built on another‟s suffering, it‟s not only unacceptable, but also immoral.In the light of this statement, Making (making) a contribution to society is the best way to enjoy succe, for your efforts and values are appreciated by society, so you will be succeful in the eyes of the public.
In the final analysis, failure is connected to succe, and they exert a great influence on us everyday.As a result, the more the failure we suffered, the more (greater) the succe we gained.So, come on, everyone, let‟s be greed of (greedy for) failure so that we can poe a colorful future filled with flowers!
推荐第4篇：英语创新作文大赛题目
题目
Directions: Addison said,“Every man should have a purpose in life.A man without a purpose lives on, like a cabbage in a field, but he knows no life.” According to him, having a purpose in life is very important for us.With Addison’s words as your point, write an eay with no le than 300 words.You can add a title by yourself.人生目标（词语解析）
常常有人问；我从哪里来，我要到哪里去，却不问我到这里干什么，有什么任务 人生目标的不选择，可以看看猪是没有选择的，牛是没有选择的，春去冬来，与叶同腐。是一种自然现象。牛其以耕地却不懂鸟会飞翔。 人生目标的错误选择 人生目标有什么任务呢？当然是来这里适应这个世界，适应及促成这个宇宙的从无到有的规律。如果反对规律，此乃毁灭，这在宇宙没出生之前的时间已经度过了，没意思的，所以一定要促成这个宇宙的从无到有的规律，才有意思，再说反对规律就是到处碰壁，拿石头砸自己的脚，是自毁，是很痛的，是下下策，是不动脑子的，被贫穷所迫的，被自己脑子惰性限制所迫的，被因为选择反对规律被规律折磨的造成脑子惰性限制所迫
概述
每个人都有自己的目标，我所说的人生目标是：作为一名有志之士。
我的目标是成为一个企业家，我的目标是让我的父老乡亲们共同富裕起来。 也可以说，是自己的一个人生规划，这个规划在某种意义上是比较人文化，社会化的。
人生目标使我们在规划人生的同时可以更理性的思考自己的未来，初步尝试性的选择未来适合自己从事的事业和生活，尽早（多从学生时代）开始培养自己综合能力和综合素质。每个人都应该有自己的目标，并为之而奋斗。 上帝让每个人都玩同样的游戏就是“人生”。只要好好走下去就会是最后的赢家！朝着自己的目标奋斗吧！
如何制定
一、你的目标必须是长期的。
没有长期的目标，你也许就会被短期的种种挫折所击倒。设定了长期的目标后，起初不要试图去克服所有的阻碍。就像你早上离家不可能等路口所有的交通灯都是绿色你才出门，你是一个一个地通过红绿灯，你不但能走到你目力所及的地方，而且当你到达那里时，你常常能见到更远的地方。
二、你的目标必须是特定的。
一个猎人，当他面对树上的一群鸟时，如果说他能打下几只鸟的话，那么他肯定不是向这群鸟射击，几只鸟的收获一定是猎人瞄准特定目标的结果。
三、你的目标一定要远大。
一旦你确定只走1公里路的目标，在完成还不到1公里时，你便有可能感觉到累而松懈自己，因为反正快到目标了。然而，如果你的目标是要走10公里路，你便会作好思想及其他一切必要的准备，并调动各方面的潜在力量，一鼓作气走完
7、8公里后，才可能会稍微松懈一下自己。
四、你必须实践自己的目标。
五、你的人生大目标并不一定要详细精确。只要有个较明确的方向和大致程度要求就可以，例如立志做个卓越的科学家、立志做个大企业家或是立志做个改变世界的政治家等等。
成功价值
第一、目标能够使你看清自己的使命；
第二、目标能让你安排事情的轻重缓急；
第三、目标引导你发挥潜能；
第四、目标使你有能力把握现在；
第五、目标有助你评估事业的进展情况；
第六、目标为你提供了一种自我评估的重要手段；
第七、目标使你未雨绸缪；
第八、目标使你把工作重点从工作本身转到工作成果上；
第九、目标能使你认识到自己的人生价值。
推荐第5篇：全国英语创新大赛作文
2013年全国英语创新大赛模板作文（2）
The Difference in Income Sources between American and Chinese Student
As is described in the chart, we can clearly learn that Chinese students depend on parents much more than American students.It is reported that American students get a large amount of income from their part-time jobs rather than from parents which suggests that American students are much more independent.
There are many reasons accounting for that case.First of all, as we all know, Chinese students are ordered to keep on studying for a long time in order to pa exams while American students have much more free time when they can earn money.Secondly American students are taught to be independent when they are young.On the other hand, Chinese students’ priority is to study well since they set foot into schools.Thirdly, American government allows children to do part-time jobs, while Chinese government doesn\'t.Last but not least, the college scholarships in China are not enough to meet most of Chinese students\' needs.As a result, it\'s quite evident that why there exists such a big difference in income sources.As we all know, the way American students use to earn money will make
them much more independent, while we Chinese students will never catch up with up with them.So it’s high time that we were supposed to take measures.
In my opinion, the Chinese should learn from Americans.The students should find more chances for part-time jobs in spite of parents\' help, because they can not only lighten the heavy load of high tuitions fees on their family, but also gain neceary social skills and experience in communication or others.By means of doing part-time jobs, they can also have an objective view on this country, and even develop their creative ability.Therefore, Chinese students\' income source should be diversified.(294)
推荐第6篇：创新英语作文大赛5
Doctor: Hello! What’s wrong with you? You aren’t looking very well.Come here and I’ll give you
a check.
Patient: Yes, I am not feeling very well, do you think I have come here just for fun?
Doctor：Oh, I didn’t mean that! I just want to help you, because I am an expert, I have learnt about
thousands of disease, so I think I can help you.
(A few minutes later…)
Oh, your disease is rare.Let me look over the medical books.Maybe I can find other
disease the same as yours.Don’t worry, I need observe you for some days.
Patient: You have to learn about thousands of diseases, but I only have to focus on fixing what\'s
wrong with ME! Now which one of us do you think is the expert?
Nowadays, health is taken notice by more and more people.Going for doctors is an important part of people’s life.So being a good doctor is neceary, especially being an expert.As every knows, experts have high status and more salaries than ordinary doctors.Experts should being competent for their jobs and reliable for their patients.
Li Shizhen, a famous doctor in Chinese history.He tasted hundreds of herbs and wrote books for helping people.Norman Bethune, he worked selflely in China as a doctor and saved many Chinese soldiers.From this, we can see that they were remembered by people because of their great qualities.
But how to become a competent expert?
First of all, an expert should skilled in the area he studies.He should know the patients’ condition according to his knowledge and rich experience.And he should also know how to deal with the problem and recover patients’ health
.
Besides some eential knowledge, an expert should also have a warm heart.Sometimes, there are some impolite patients.An expert should patiently communicate with them.Some patients think about they know their disease clearly, so they don’t listen to the experts’ advice.When those things happen, the experts should explain to the patients.Because the patient is the expert of god.
All in all, being a competent expert not only for occupation requirements, but also for own’s responsibility.That’s is the most important.
推荐第7篇：创新英语作文大赛作文练习
11 Directions: Would you expect a “thank you” when you give your seat to an old man, or a woman with her baby? How do you feel if they take your seat without even taking a look at you? Would you be angry? You are given 60 minutes to state your view on the topic within le than 300 words.You can add a title by yourself.
“Thank you”—a powerful gift
Recently, some individuals would not give their seats to the old or the pregnant as the result of no reaction given back.Naturally, problems arouses: Must we demand a “thank you” when we give a seat to others? As my opinion, a “thank you” is both beneficial to the seat sharers and the ones who take the seat.
A smile and a “thank you” paid back can promote the phenomenon of giving seats and enhance the moral value of the society.The first time Igave my seats to a pregnant and she smiled to me saying “thank you”.That time I felt the flower of my heart come out and bloomed .So I kept on doing that until an old lady once stared at me without saying a word when I gave my seat to her.I felt as if I would never do that again and got off of the bus.Apparently, the simple smile and words motivate people to do more moral things for the ones needing help while everyone is longing for a “thanks” when they do things for you.Your reactions are really important to others.
If we are ignored by the ones who take your seat, do not be sad and keep on doing the things we think are right.We might be disappointed ,or even sad, when we are ignored as our own view.But have you ever thought that the impolite actions might be reasonable? Maybe those individuals were in a bad mood and did not tend to talk to anyone else.Or maybe they just got some bad news of their body and were extremely week so that they could not make an reaction.Standing in others view can always alleviate our disappointment on them and encourage us to keep on the good things.We should always believe that the world ,with our positive outlook and action, will be increasingly beautiful and warm and advance morally.
In conclusion, we should continue to give seats to others and give others a thank you and a smile when they do the same to us.Like the saying : “Giving others roses and the scent will remain.” Let’s make our slightest action as a gift to others and contribute to a happier world positively.
10 Directions: Chinese people always have the tradition of helping others; regardle of a friend or a stranger.However, in recent years, people find that when they try to help others, some changes are taking places.One of the most common examples is that, a paer-by who sent an injured senior people to hospital would be very likely to be recognized as the accident-maker.This kind of events is being rerun again and again.When trapped in the dilemma of tradition and trouble, what would be your choice?
The rose\'s in others’ hand, the flavor in mine.
News about helping others but getting punished are often seen these days with negative effects.Inevitably, debate has arisen: whether or not we should keep on helping others? People think variously.As far as I am concerned, I would choose to keep on helping others and deepen the Chinese moral value of helping others in my mind for reasons below.
To begin with, helping others, one regarded as our traditionally moral value, enhance the positive power of our society.For example,Lei Feng , one that always help others in his life, behaved as a positive moral role, teaching children of China to help others and awaking public of their social responsibilities.Apparently, we can see that if you do minors to help ones, then those who receive your help are more likely to help others, thus enhancing the positive power of our society.
Furthermore, giving others a hand while they are in need can make ourselves more confident and happy.As a student, have you ever taught your clamates on how to work out a hard exercise? If your answer is yes, then you must have felt the sense of happine and confidence from the bottom of your heart.Similarly, when we give others a hand, regardle of what way you do that, you will feel the real warm and happy like raising a flower till they broom in the spring.
Of course, you do not have to help others every time they need you.Concern about your power carefully before you help others.Do not risk your life to help them impulsively! If you can not help one immediately, you can turn to the adults or think about other ways to make it.
In a nutshell, the major reasons why we should help others, although there are some other minors, have been discued above.What we should do is attempt to help others no matter what the man think of you.Hopefully, the discuion would exert further concern of public in order to search a better answer and many individuals have changed their mind .Is that meaningful?
9Topic:
Should We Follow Fashions?
Directions:
Some people say that fashion is just for selling clothes, so we should not follow it and we should dre what we like and feel comfortable in it.How far do you agree with them? Write an eay on the following topic: should we follow fashions?
Requirements:
Illustrate your view on the topic with no le than 250 words and write down your opinions and reasons so long as they are reasonable.
Should We Follow Fashions?
Chasing fashion is always a hot topic among teenagers and adults.Inevitably, debate has arisen: Whether or not should we follow the fashions? People think variously.As far as I am concerned, We should follow the fashions properly as discued below.
To begin with, following the trend is not just for special outlook, it is also believed as a way of keeping our pace with the world.As is known to all, many individuals are not willing to catch up with the advance trend, leading to their common position all their lives.Obviously, following the fashion is one of the ways to keep pace with the changing world.If you tend to lead the advanced culture and contribute to a new world, you have to follow the fashion first.
Furthermore, chasing the fashion is not a waste of money but a kind of invest to your outlook which enhance your social position.It is accepted by many manager that they would more like staff with fashion outlook than those who are out of fashion as a result of the fashionable ones always come up with more creative ideas and make more innovation.From that we can see that if you follow the trend ,you will get advantages over others in chances and social position.
However, everything is never without its drawbacks.Some individuals, especially teenagers, lack self-control in terms of the money they spend on fashion.We have to know that our chasing fashion is based on our well-being life and enough disposable deposit.Fortunately, schools and medias have taken some measures to addre the iue.
In a nutshell, the major reasons why we should follow the fashion ,although there are some other minors, have been discued above.What we should do is properly follow the fashion .Hopefully, the discuion would exert further concern of public in order to search a better answer and lead public to the real fashion.Is that meaningful?
推荐第8篇：全国英语创新大赛作文
外语屋教育
2013年全国英语创新大赛模板作文
How to Eliminate Fake Diplomas
As is known to us all, jobs or something else.What’s worse, someone even takes faking diplomas as their jobs.
It is generally accepted that faking diplomas does no good to not only the universities or companies but also the owners.The universities or companies may have some low-skilled students or workers, which will make the institutions suffer a lot.For the owners, faking diplomas may cause a bad thought in their mind, because they hold the opinion that faking diplomas can solve all the problems.If this trend came into being, the whole society would be in such a me.Therefore, how to solve the problem is worth paying more attention to.What’s worse, our country may fall behind compared with other countries, if the trend continues.
The following ways can be adopted to eliminate fake diplomas.Firstly, the universities and companies can have a search to see whether the diplomas are real or not online.Secondly, they can give exams to check whether they have skills.Thirdly, our government should take measures.For example, the government can set an online data base store to help universities or company check online conveniently.Last but not least, we, the civil, should set up a proper attitude to faking diplomas, and refuse to do that.And if we see someone is faking diplomas, we should give an alarm to the police in order to make a harmonious society.
It\'s true that we need high-skilled workers, but what we need more is honesty.Only if we treat others in honesty can we set up a world in harmony.However, eliminating fake diplomas is still on the way.We need to spare no effort to do that.Only when we stop this trend can we live in a fair society.
Never Give Up
As an old proverb goes, never give up.At anytime, whether giants in any field or common people, the old saying can refer to them.No doubt, only with the determination of “Never giver up” can we achieve the final succe.
Many remarkable reasons contribute to this argument.First of all, succe usually can’t be achieved until after a lot of failures.It is not unusual for us to fail in our first attempt at something new, so we should not feel discouraged by our failures but should try again, which is the main basic spirit of “never give up”.What’s more, a lot of scientific achievements are created under the spirit.For example, if Edison had given up his research after a few failures, we might not have the electric light today.
If WangXizhi once had given up his ambition to write excellently, I’m afraid we might not have the brilliant handwriting.Besides, we can develop confidence from our mistakes and failures.In addition, it also helps us to improve our skills.
All mentioned above tell us that it is neceary for us to do the right things without giving up.If we give up, we will not achieve anything.Besides, if we give up, it may make us lose heart.And if we always give up when confronted with difficulties, we will not be able to develop new skills and see miracles come out
All in all, “never give up” is a basic requirement for us.Not only can we achieve succe but also make us confident.We should never give up when working towards our goals.Therefore, there is no denying that we should have the determination of “Never give up”, whatever we do.
Only with this belief in mind can we really achieve something.
The Difference in Income Sources between American and Chinese Student
As is described in the chart, we can clearly learn that Chinese students depend on parents much more than American students.It is reported that American students get a large amount of income from their part-time jobs rather than from parents which suggests that American students are much more independent.
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外语屋教育
There are many reasons accounting for that case.First of all, as we all know, Chinese students are ordered to keep on studying for a long time in order to pa exams while American students have much more free time when they can earn money.Secondly American students are taught to be independent when they are young.On the other hand, Chinese students’ priority is to study well since they set foot into schools.Thirdly, American government allows children to do part-time jobs, while Chinese government doesn\'t.Last but not least, the college scholarships in China are not enough to meet most of Chinese students\' needs.As a result, it\'s quite evident that why there exists such a big difference in income sources.
As we all know, the way American students use to earn money will make
them much more independent, while we Chinese students will never catch up with up with them.So it’s high time that we were supposed to take measures.
In my opinion, the Chinese should learn from Americans.The students should find more chances for part-time jobs in spite of parents\' help, because they can not only lighten the heavy load of high tuitions fees on their family, but also gain neceary social skills and experience in communication or others.By means of doing part-time jobs, they can also have an objective view on this country, and even develop their creative ability.Therefore, Chinese students\' income source should be diversified.
Telephone or letter
Quite a few people take it for granted that telephone has taken the place of letters.Even some hold the opinion that we don\'t need letters anymore.On the other hand, some prefer to write rather than make a phone call.In my view, I\'m in favor of the former.
Of course, writing can organize one\'s thoughts more logically.By writing they expre themselves more easily.But writing a letter takes a lot of time and sometimes it makes one so eager to receive his letter that he may get worried.Besides, it will cost us a lot of money if we want to write to a friend far from us.
As we all know, as a convenient way to making a phone call gets more and more popular.The following reasons can account for my argument.First, the telephone provides us a quick way to get connected tothe person who we want to contact.A good example is that it takes us only a few minutes to call an ambulance by phone.Second, by making a call, we can listen to the speaker\'s voice on the line as if we are talking face to face, which, I believe, can strengthen the relationship between each other.Third, it suits the world\'s fast current on economy and life style.If we wrote instead of making a phone call, we would lose chances or right time to earn money or to develop our companies.Last but not least, with the development of Internet, the Internet telephone is more popular, which costs a little.
All in all, I still hold the opinion that writing must be set aside(建议用make way) for making a phone call, because the former doesn\'t suit our fast steps at all.What we need is a much cheaper and fast way for daily life.（302）
爱心用心专心 2
推荐第9篇：创新英语作文大赛作文练习
11 Directions: Would you expect a “thank you” when you give your seat to an old man, or a woman with her baby? How do you feel if they take your seat without even taking a look at you? Would you be angry? You are given 60 minutes to state your view on the topic within le than 300 words.You can add a title by yourself.
―Thank you‖—a powerful gift
Recently, some individuals would not give their seats to the old or the pregnant as the result of no reaction given back.Naturally, problems arouses: Must we demand a ―thank you‖ when we give a seat to others? As my opinion, a ―thank you‖ is both beneficial to the seat sharers and the ones who take the seat.
A smile and a ―thank you‖ paid back can promote the phenomenon of giving seats and enhance the moral value of the society.The first time Igave my seats to a pregnant and she smiled to me saying ―thank you‖.That time I felt the flower of my heart come out and bloomed .So I kept on doing that until an old lady once stared at me without saying a word when I gave my seat to her.I felt as if I would never do that again and got off of the bus.Apparently, the simple smile and words motivate people to do more moral things for the ones needing help while everyone is longing for a ―thanks‖ when they do things for you.Your reactions are really important to others.
If we are ignored by the ones who take your seat, do not be sad and keep on doing the things we think are right.We might be disappointed ,or even sad, when we are ignored as our own view.But have you ever thought that the impolite actions might be reasonable? Maybe those individuals were in a bad mood and did not tend to talk to anyone else.Or maybe they just got some bad news of their body and were extremely week so that they could not make an reaction.Standing in others view can always alleviate our disappointment on them and encourage us to keep on the good things.We should always believe that the world ,with our positive outlook and action, will be increasingly beautiful and warm and advance morally.
In conclusion, we should continue to give seats to others and give others a thank you and a smile when they do the same to us.Like the saying : ―Giving others roses and the scent will remain.‖ Let’s make our slightest action as a gift to others and contribute to a happier world positively.
10 Directions: Chinese people always have the tradition of helping others; regardle of a friend or a stranger.However, in recent years, people find that when they try to help others, some changes are taking places.One of the most common examples is that, a paer-by who sent an injured senior people to hospital would be very likely to be recognized as the accident-maker.This kind of events is being rerun again and again.When trapped in the dilemma of tradition and trouble, what would be your choice?
有一句话推荐你思考一下：Virtue is its own reward.其实这个话题就是对这句话的思考。
The rose\'s in others’ hand, the flavor in mine.
News about helping others but getting punished are often seen these days with negative effects.我知道你开头想表达最近又有什么社会现象„„，这是很常见的开头套路，针对它的翻译也基本很难耍出什么新鲜花样，所以干脆换中文表达：最近我们常常看到这样的新闻„„。这个思路挺好的，但是with negative effects 很奇怪，去掉就可以了。
修改1：News about helping others but getting punished are often seen these days.
但是被惩罚？不确切，应该是付出了代价，没有好下场之类的。
修改2：Good deeds can cost you a large fortune – it is nothing new in today’s China.
Inevitably, debate has arisen: whether or not we should keep on helping others? People think variously.纵观全文，中式英语是硬伤啊，你的词汇量神马绝对不是问题，但是用的是否准确就难说了。解决这个问题的方法很简单啊，积累，不要局限于导致，结果，因此这些逻辑连接词，任何可以精简你的文章的动词和名词都可以啊。
inevitably是个很高大上的单词，但是“难免的”用在这里有点过了。类似于：人们观点各不相同，人们议论纷纷这种很明显是凑字数，完全可以删除的话就扔掉吧，把你的精力用在更实际的演绎推理上。
whether or not后面引导了宾语从句，陈述语序后面你加了问号？口语中可以，但是写作就显得不正式了。
修改：As a result, people often find themselves between a rock and a hard place whenever they run acro a person in need of help.On the one hand, they are in fear of being wrongly identified; on the other hand, they are morally obliged to lend a hand.
其实我修改的内容也是对话题的重复，但是如果你有把握用不同的短语和角度把事情表达一遍也可以，如果没有把握干脆就避开直奔主题。
As far as I am concerned, I would choose to keep on helping others and deepen the Chinese moral value of helping others in my mind for reasons below.
加深我心中的价值观？有点怪怪的„„
修改：As far as I am concerned, despite all the poible consequences, I would still insist on helping others, as ―virtue is its own reward‖.
好了，接下来就有点难在你的文章上动刀了，因为我们俩的出发点不一样。但是，我可以把我的逻辑给你看看。
我的总观点很简单，因为美德本身就是一种奖励（A），所以我愿意继续帮助别人（B）。 那么我接下来必须要证明为什么美德本身就是一种奖励，（好难啊！T^T）
1.帮助别人能让自己快乐。为什么？会给自己有价值的感觉。
2.帮助别人能够帮助自己。为什么？因为能散播正能量，避免自己在需要帮助的时候没人帮助自己；善有恶报的确是很糟糕的事情，但是因为少数人的错误而放弃帮助别人，只会让社会越来越黑暗。
我觉得对于你现在而言，练习不是重要的，重要的修改自己的作文，把你自己觉得不妥的地方画出来，反复替换表达，直到找到最妥帖的为止。然后把这些你觉得特别好的表达和观点总结背下来。同时找一些相关的文章看看，尽量找老外写的。
多积累动词，多造句，多背精炼的名言，并去体悟里面的道理。
好吧，最后讲一下如何修改作文，其实很简单
1.找语法错误
2.找不确定的地方，然后通过英英词典确定用法
以第一段为例，黄色是语法错误，绿色是我不确定的地方
To begin with, helping others, one regarded as our traditionally moral value, enhance the positive power of our society.For example,Lei Feng , one that always help others in his life, behaved as a positive moral role, teaching children of China to help others and awaking public of their social responsibilities.Apparently, we can see that if you do minors to help ones, then those who receive your help are more likely to help others, thus enhancing the positive power of our society.
剩下的你自己先改改看吧，我再给你找一篇参照阅读
我摘录一点给你看看，如果你有兴趣就去看全文把 Basically it means that being a virtuous person is in your self-interest (It would benefit you).In other words being a moral person has a reward on its own.For example If you see an old man fall and you help him up, it would make you feel good about yourself.
对你有好处，这一段就有三种替换方法：be in your self-interest, benefit sb., has a reward on its own
Busine ethics? Hmm..I\'m not sure.You can include what Plato said about being a virtuous person.He said virtues are intrinsic to self-interest; he argued that there are 3 main virtues that we must all have: wisdom, courage and self-discipline.
intrinsic, （价值或性质）固有的，本质的，多么牛掰的一个词，我可以在自己的文章里说： According to Plato, there are 3 main virtues that we must have – wisdom, courage and self-discipline.If we give up extending our kindne to others due to fear, we lose the courage to face the evil, the wisdom to judge, the self-discipline that keeps the society in order.So instead of walking away and being tortured by the guilt brought by our intrinsic virtue, coming to people’s help is beneficial for both the helpers and the ones in trouble.
用上了吧，而且内容立刻深刻了。（我得意的笑~）
还有，这句话我找到了一个完整版
Virtue is its own reward, and brings with it the truest and highest pleasure; but if we cultivate it only for pleasure\'s sake, we are selfish, not religious, and will never gain the pleasure, because we can never have the virtue.
Furthermore, giving others a hand while they are in need can make ourselves more confident and happy.As a student, have you ever taught your clamates on how to work out a hard exercise? If your answer is yes, then you must have felt the sense of happine and confidence from the bottom of your heart.Similarly, when we give others a hand, regardle of what way you do that,
you will feel the real warm and happy like raising a flower till they broom in the spring.
Of course, you do not have to help others every time they need you.Concern about your power carefully before you help others.Do not risk your life to help them impulsively! If you can not help one immediately, you can turn to the adults or think about other ways to make it.
In a nutshell, the major reasons why we should help others, although there are some other minors, have been discued above.What we should do is attempt to help others no matter what the man think of you.Hopefully, the discuion would exert further concern of public in order to search a better answer and many individuals have changed their mind .Is that meaningful?
9Topic:
Should We Follow Fashions?
Directions:
Some people say that fashion is just for selling clothes, so we should not follow it and we should dre what we like and feel comfortable in it.How far do you agree with them? Write an eay on the following topic: should we follow fashions?
Requirements:
Illustrate your view on the topic with no le than 250 words and write down your opinions and reasons so long as they are reasonable.
Should We Follow Fashions?
Chasing fashion is always a hot topic among teenagers and adults.Inevitably, debate has arisen: Whether or not should we follow the fashions? People think variously.As far as I am concerned, We should follow the fashions properly as discued below.
To begin with, following the trend is not just for special outlook, it is also believed as a way of keeping our pace with the world.As is known to all, many individuals are not willing to catch up with the advance trend, leading to their common position all their lives.Obviously, following the fashion is one of the ways to keep pace with the changing world.If you tend to lead the advanced culture and contribute to a new world, you have to follow the fashion first.
Furthermore, chasing the fashion is not a waste of money but a kind of invest to your outlook which enhance your social position.It is accepted by many manager that they would more like staff with fashion outlook than those who are out of fashion as a result of the fashionable ones always come up with more creative ideas and make more innovation.From that we can see that if you follow the trend ,you will get advantages over others in chances and social position.
However, everything is never without its drawbacks.Some individuals, especially teenagers, lack self-control in terms of the money they spend on fashion.We have to know that our chasing fashion is based on our well-being life and enough disposable deposit.Fortunately, schools and medias have taken some measures to addre the iue.
In a nutshell, the major reasons why we should follow the fashion ,although there are some other minors, have been discued above.What we should do is properly follow the fashion .Hopefully, the discuion would exert further concern of public in order to search a better answer and lead public to the real fashion.Is that meaningful?
推荐第10篇：创新英语作文大赛作文试题
11 Directions: Would you expect a “thank you” when you give your seat to an old man, or a woman with her baby? How do you feel if they take your seat without even taking a look at you? Would you be angry? You are given 60 minutes to state your view on the topic within le than 300 words.You can add a title by yourself.10 Directions: Chinese people always have the tradition of helping others; regardle of a friend or a stranger.However, in recent years, people find that when they try to help others, some changes are taking places.One of the most common examples is that, a paer-by who sent an injured senior people to hospital would be very likely to be recognized as the accident-maker.This kind of events is being rerun again and again.When trapped in the dilemma of tradition and trouble, what would be your choice?
9Topic:
Should We Follow Fashions?
Directions:
Some people say that fashion is just for selling clothes, so we should not follow it and we should dre what we like and feel comfortable in it.How far do you agree with them? Write an eay on the following topic: should we follow fashions?
Requirements:
Illustrate your view on the topic with no le than 250 words and write down your opinions and reasons so long as they are reasonable.
8Directions:
Read the following paragraph and write a composition as stated at about 300 words in 60 minutes.Your composition will be graded according to clarity, accuracy and meaningfulne.
In accordance with CRI news, the spirit of Chinese volunteers, from responding to the May 12 earthquake to the 2008 Beijing Olympic Games, not only touched the Chinese people, but also generated worldwide attention.Official statistics show that china has accumulated about 8 billion hours of volunteer work from 380 million volunteers since 1993 and is going to have more and more volunteers, especially the youth.
How do you understand volunteer work? In what way(s) is it important to promote the well-being of individuals, families, communities and the world at large? Your writing ought to contain three parts, your viewpoint, the supporting ideas, and the
conclusion.
Come and join us in volunteer work right now!
7复赛试题：
Directions:
With the development of computers, more and more people are working with computers.But, we know that computers are harmful as well as useful and helpful .Here, you are asked to write an eay on the topic “The Advantages and Disadvantages of Computers”.You can give some examples and facts to support your opinion.Your eay should be written in English with no le than 300 words within 60 minutes.
5复赛试题：
Writing Topic for Semifinals
Directions:
We can be sure that most people have experienced failure and succe.Most often, when we are succeful we are happy.If we fail, we are sad.Now, you are asked to write an eay on the topic of Failure and Succe.You can give some example and facts to support your opinion.You can give some examples and facts to support your opinion.Your eay should be written in English with on le than 300 words within 60 minutes.
第11篇：全国创新英语大赛优秀作文
题目：
Directions:
Read the following paragraph and write a composition as stated at about 300 words in 60 minutes.Your composition will be graded according to clarity, accuracy and meaningfulne.In accordance with CRI news, the spirit of Chinese volunteers, from responding to the May 12 earthquake to the 2008 Beijing Olympic Games, not only touched the Chinese people, but also generated worldwide attention.Official statistics show that china has accumulated about 8 billion hours of volunteer work from 380 million volunteers since 1993 and is going to have more and more volunteers, especially the youth.
How do you understand volunteer work? In what way(s) is it important to promote the well-being of individuals, families, communities and the world at large? Your writing ought to contain three parts, your viewpoint, the supporting ideas, and the conclusion.
Come and join us in volunteer work right now!
On Volunteer
黄昕彤 辽宁省鞍山市鞍山一中108班
The definition of the word volunteer in Lougnan（Longman） Dictionary is someone who helps others sponstaneously（spontaneously） and willingly.That\'s true! Life is a style of enjoying yourself, not only by entertaing and enriding yourself, but also by the proce of helping others.
Undoubtfully, those volunteers reveal their great love and paion for their country.Love is the eternal theme of the world, Without hove(love), it\'s like birds without wings, failing to show its talents of flying, It\'s like spring without flowers, burying is charming fragrants in the deep soil.Their volunty work unites China, shouing the world how united Chinese people are shocking the world of its cooperation.
People around the country are making their efforts to helping others, which leaves the world an impreion that China is a veal country, and all the people here are like brothers and sisters, who cares a lot for others.You can never imagine how touched I was when I watched the TV program called “Moving China”.13 peasants from tangshang volunteered to help those victims of Sichuang on hearing the tremendous earthquake happened there, leaving all their farm work done in the field they sacrifiled anything and helped others at any cost, for they knew the glant pains the earthquake brings to people.They can never forget how much pains they havendertaken in the earthquake and how much help they have received from the world.They compared their own feelings to the victims and paed the splrit on.In this sense, people will pa the spirit from generation to queneration, from China to all over the world.Then, how sweet will the World be!
I have a dream that one day, I will be a member of the volunteer team.I have a dream that oneday, I\'ll make contributions to China however slightest it may be.I have a dream that one day I\'ll be a founder of a world Charity, helping people all over the world.I\'m firmly convinced that it will not only be a drean for me, but also a drean for people all over China, all over the world, and for the great Global Village.
专家建议：
整篇文章条理清晰，结构完整，总体感觉很好。但有个别语法错误，固定搭配有些用得不够准确，建议多用课本学过的固定搭配或是词组造句。
专家点评：
文章语言流畅，运用了修辞手法，展现出一定的语言功底。此外，论据生动有力，让人信服。如果句子之间的多用些关联词就更好了。
陈茜 江苏省哈尔滨市第三中学高三18班
Dear grandfather:
How are you?
I am writing to invite you to join us, in the next year, to be a voluntear in the great event, which is to hold in Shanghai.We, a generation born in the 90s in our city, have made a team to do the volunteer work.And you are welcomed by all our team members awing to your great amount of knowledge about Chinese traditions and culture.Please don\'t tell me you are too old to do this job.I believe you are sure to accept my invitation after reading my following explannation of the importance of the volunteer work.
Nowadays, volunteer work, which has raised public interest and concern, is becomming more and more popular throughout the world.As is known to all, volunteer work is not only meaningful but also neceary.One my personal wete, what\'s more, it\'s interesting and pleasant! It help us develop oursel .
Firstly, for individuals, especially those young, to do volunteer work is an awailuabe wany to goin social experience.By doing volunteer work, they can meet vorrious people and they may run acro all kinds of troubles.They however, can become mature and determined by solving these problems.You know, no pains, no gains.Also, individuals will realize that they do make a difference in someone else\'s life, even the whole event, the world! Their confidence can be rovised and confidence is what it takes to do any job well.
For families, if you\'re the side that received the help of the volunteers, of couse your iue will be more easily dealt with.If you\'re the side who give others your hand, you will realize there exists no better way to educate your children that “a virtwre deserues amother” because you\'ll get the best presentsmall at first, contained within its banks, flood paionally then merged into the sea, for the sense of moral considerations.And now, I quite support to be a volunteer.
We can never forget these moving scenes: A group of adolecents from Beijing dashed to the City of Wenchuan who gave up their comfortable living situations and picked up the heavy burden to save people buried into the ground, while a middle aged white collar who threw away his computer and salary came here to fetch wictims\' lives from the death.It is volunteers who rushed to this place which has suffered from the catastrophe that gave a great help to those victims in need.A volunteer can support a piece of sky, and this one reason I am eager to join them.
Secondly, only a volunteer who is in active part in Beijing Olympic Games will he give a great help to those losers.It is volunteers who gave us a warm welcome to Beijing that put the glorious sports meeting from in chaos to in order.A person, as we know, who hasn’t join into the group of volunteer is one of the unfortunate victims of this society which is occupied with love.All of us are in high preure in this adverse circumstance.Our mind catches hold of something and will not let it go, if we choose the way to argue with the mind, the stronger the will, the more fuitile the task, so we, should choose a way to help others, to see the smile from others.Then the preure get out suiftly.I always go into rapture at a mere mention of being a volunteer and regard it as a person who is eager to help others or a group not in the same cla with the suburban social-climbers.It seems a cliché but a saying which is an infallibility that a splendid case can not leave a volunteer just as a fish can not live without water.
专家点评：作者尽量用到了一些高级词语和句型，表明作者有一定的英语功底，但是小的错误频发，如单词拼写，语法问题，句子逻辑，这在某一方面也表明作者的基本功有待提高，继续努力。
专家建议：用词准确是写作的基础。对于学习英语的中国学生来说，背单词扩大词汇量是有必要的，但遗憾的是，学生们背的大都是单词的“外壳”，记的大都是单词的表意或字典提供的大致意思，而基本上忽视了词在语境中的作用和词的“精神”。这种只记单词表意的学习方法对提高语言的运用能力，特别是写作能力是极其不利的。
Let us shine
徐叶子 江苏省张家港市张家港外国语学校高二4班
Volunteers are just like diamonds in the sun, and the diamonds are forever, especially the youth.Volunteer work is just like a miracle.From the May 12th earthquake to the 2008 Beijing Olympic Games, volunteer work made unbelievable contributions.
60 years ago our country was set up, today we will celebrate its 60th birthday.In this proce, volunteer work did a lot of help and now our country is standing in the world just like a giant.In the past years, volunteers have helped a large number of people, the old, the young, the poor and the homele.All the volunteers know that the road ahead will be long and cragged, but no matter what obstacles stand in their way they will never stop.Because they have a creed and they believe everything is poible.Oh the creed of volunteer work, you make volunteers keep on going without hesitation.Oh the creed of volunteer work, you make volunteers hand in hand and be with together forever.Oh the creed of volunteer work, you make volunteers go to the edge of the world and let them know the true meaning of life.Do you know what the creed is? Yes, it is love.With love, volunteer work makes people open their mind and let them find the sky is theirs.With love, volunteer work makes people look into their hearts and let the sunshine in.With love, volunteer work makes people believe that smilers will never lose and frowners will never win.
I know something has changed because of volunteer work.I know it for real because it feels so right and the world looks so much brighter.Love is important to volunteer work and volunteer work is important to the whole world.
The infinite sky is motionle and the blue ocean is boisterous.This moment is perfect.Let us become volunteers and try our best in volunteer work.It can be the start of something new and it\'s our turn to learn some or win some.So, let\'s make a wish and get ready to shine like diamonds.
专家建议：
建议该考生在语言流畅的基础之上，注意两方面问题。第一，用词更具体些，避免使用语义较为空泛的表达，如learn some or win some。第二，文章华美有余，但逻辑层次不足。需加强句子与句子之间以及段落与段落间的逻辑性。
专家点评：
该作文使用了很多修辞方式，从这一点上看，作者在学习英语的过程中一定是位有心人，注重边阅读边积累背诵。同时能看出，作者一定是一位喜爱英文歌曲的人，文中很多表达都来自于音乐歌词。但在遣词造句时，需要区分口头表达和较书面表达，在这点上，文章还有提高的空间。
第12篇：全国英语创新大赛作文(3)
2013年全国英语创新大赛模板作文（3）
Talent—search Show on Campus
In modern society, talent-search show on campus has been brought into focus, which also arouses hot debate.There have been a number of so-called talent-shows such as “Happy Boys” and “Super Girls”.
Why do such shows come into hotter and hotter situation? In my opinion, firstly, the people who take part own a belief that it\'s an easy way to succeed without working hard.Second, once they succeed indeed, they are sure to get fame and money so that they can live a comfortable life which they have been dreaming all the time.Besides, such shows can rescue students from the burden they get from study.
As everyone knows, the talent-shows bring both good and bad influence.Above all, these activities make students\' after-cla life colorful and provide them opportunities to show themselves.Also, by attending such activities, they will gain more and more confidence.
On the other side, some students will get lazy because they want to achieve fast even they give up study.What\'s worse, the activities will disturb students\' study, which will make a bad trend.
As far as I\'m concerned, we should hold the belief that we should take caution of such activities.The task which the student burden with is study.While we must admit that talent-shows can make our life out of boredom, the overall quality of these activities should be improved in order to suit college students, while the students should be warned to pay more caution to the shows.And our government should restrict its development in case so many shows may leave a bad effect on students\' mind.Last but not least, the students themselves should focus more on their study rather than talent-show.After all, that\'s the traditional way to succeed.After all, university is a place for students to show their talents on study not for sing or dance.(词句作为结尾不好，英文没有紧扣主题。)
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第13篇：创新英语大赛感想
创新英语大赛感想
四月末，我们参加了一年一度的创新英语大赛复赛。作为一名参赛选手，我感到高兴更是荣幸来参加这个赛事。在镇江一中，我们展现出自己的风采，说出心中最想说的英语，写出心中最想写的英文。在这里，我们挥洒汗水，体验面临挑战与享受成功的快乐。
众所周知，创新英语大赛作为一项全国性的重要赛事，对我们的自主招生和高考选取心仪的大学有重要的影响。创新英语大赛由来已久，长期以来，数学、物理、化学、计算机等一系列理科类奥林匹克竞赛为高校选拔具有理科特殊才能的优秀学生做出了极大贡献，它们作为新时期我国招生工作的探索和实践，得到了全社会的广泛认可。然而，此类选拔特殊人才的活动，在文科方面却是一个空白。在中国越来越迈向国际化的今天，英语作为运用最广的世界性语言，它的重要性已经深入到各个领域，具有良好英语素质的各类人才，将在未来的世界性的竞争中发挥出巨大的作用。因此，旨在推进素质教育，培养创新人才，改变以高考分数为惟一选才标准模式，探索多元选拔优秀人才的机制，为在英语方面学有专长的同学提供了一个向高校展示自己才能的“全国创新英语作文大赛”便应势而生了。
“全国创新英语大赛”由教育部高校学生司指导、中国高校招生研究会主办的《高校招生》杂志社与北京大学、清华大学、北京师范大学等数十所名牌高校联合举办，大赛原称“全国创新英语作文大赛”，从2009年第八届开始，大赛增加了听力和口语项目，并正式更名为“全国创新英语大赛”。
“全国创新英语作文大赛”由教育部高校学生司指导、中国高校招生研究会主办的《高校招生》杂志社与北京大学、清华大学、北京师范大学等多所名牌高校联合举办，自2003年起开始举办。为了更深一步和世界接轨，更深一步提高学生的英语技能，从2009年第八届开始，大赛在初赛阶段增加了听力项目，复赛阶段增加了口语项目，更加全面的考察参赛选手的英语能力，促进考生英语水平的全面提高。并正式更名为“全国创新英语大赛”。在各省招生主管部门、各高校、中学的大力支持下，大赛已成功举办了九届，为高校成功推荐了近千名有英语特长的优秀学生，这些英语特长生通过大赛所搭建的捷径，享受了高考加分、降分等不同程度的优惠条件进入了自己心仪的名牌高校，在全国中学生中掀起了参赛的热潮和英语写作的热情，成为了中学生期待和喜爱的一项传统赛事。大赛也以其权威性、公正性得到了高校、中学和社会各界的充分肯定和认同。
大赛坚持每个阶段操作公开、透明。首先，我们在《高校招生》杂志和大赛官方网站“创新英语网”公示了了参与高校给予大赛优胜者的录取优惠条件，让学生充分了解高校的招生政策和注意事项。其次，我们在《高校招生》杂志和官方网站和几大教育门户网站上公示了复赛名单、优胜者名单和录取名单，公开接受社会监督，以确保大赛结果的真实性和严肃性。同时也为高校挑选高素质、高质量的优秀学生奠定了坚实的基础。大赛连续三届在北京林业大学举办，北京林业大学招办主任张闯亲自参与了这两届大赛组织的全过程，他非常感慨的说：大赛组织得很好，让高校很放心，通过这样的大赛选出来的学生我们是满意的。
对来之不易的机会我自然是怀有感激的。然而真正在考桌前，尤其是这种的场合，我的感情似乎总是被收进了抽屉里。在这种场合，只剩下极度的冷静。因而现在回忆起来，对真正重大的时刻--譬如中考、体育考试，我反而没有多么动人心弦的感触。真的提笔，脑海中浮现的都是后台那些生辉的面庞与肆意年轻的声音。一直是这样，想笑也想哭。
因此，我十分珍惜并且享受这来之不易的机会，无论成功与否，我对于英语的学习还仍需加强和巩固。鼓起勇气，坚定自己的意愿。在高一乃至高二剩下的时间里对英语抱有更多的热情，我希望，明年创新英语大赛，我们再会！（梅）
第14篇：第十一届 全国创新英语作文大赛 (经典)
Topic: Moms and dads, please let us fly.
Conversations:
Parents: Take good care of yourself, my boy.
Boy: Yeah, I’ll.And you ，too.
Parents: Don’t forget to check your paport again before boarding the plane.Watch out your belongings, and don’t be shy to ask your host family for help if you make any mistakes, of course you can call us as well.And, oh…
Boy: Don’t worry, mom and dad.I promise to only make mistakes you never made.Composition:
As can be seen in the picture, there stands a merrily boy who is well-packed.Maybe he is going to be an exchange student.And his parents are saying goodbye to him by their house.
This picture conveys the meage that the couple gives the freedom of practice to their child.They allow him to break a path by himself so that he can adapt to the society easily and finally lead a rich and varied life although they worry a lot about their little boy.
Just as the meage above shows, our parents usually think too much of us, because they want us to be a perfect one.They tell us what we should do and what shouldn’t, ignoring our thoughts.They just don’t think what we are interested in is beneficial to our growth.They love us in an unsuitable way.Actually, in our opinions, we think we need chances to make mistakes.Because we will go through a proce of making mistakes, during which we experience
and learn a lot.
So, for this point of view, I advice parents respecting and encourage the personality of their children.And the most effective way is taking part in society activities.For one reason, with the rapid development of information technology in the 21st century, our society needs an increasing number of talents who have not only extraordinary ability of knowledge but also the teamwork spirit and sense of cooperation, but not the ones who are spoilt by their parents.Another reason is that there exists intense competition in modern society.So in order to have our own places in society, we must make full preparations through experiencing setbacks and challenge them.
If parents follow the principles above, there will be a much happier and more harmonious relationship between parents and us.What’s more, for us, these experiences and rebirths will also be invaluable to character building, making them more independent, diligent and enterprising.
Moms and dads, we need opportunities to make mistakes, only in this way can we stand a better chance.So you may rest aured that we will not fail your expectations.If you love us, just let ourselves go!
第15篇：第十届创新英语作文大赛复赛试题
A组
A01.Who, in your view, is the greatest athlete and how does he or she influence the lives of others? Why?A02.What are the negative social effects of advertisements?
A03.Is there a generation gap between you and your parents? What do you think causes this generation gap? What can be done to solve this problem？
A04.What does the recent royal wedding in Great Britain mean to the public? Why were they so excited about it?
A05.If you became the richest man or woman in China, what kind of life do you think you would lead?B组
B01.Should romantic relations among students be encouraged? Why or why not?
B02.What does your parents forbid you from doing when you were in senior high school?
B03.What are some of the effective and ineffective methods people use to cope with stre?
B04.Discu the advantages and disadvantages of using the Internet.Will the Internet isolate us from one another?
B05.If your school asked all the students to wear school uniform, and you were the head teacher.What would you say to persuade the students?
C组
C01.What role does music play in your life? Do you listen to music while studying? Do you think it is a good habit?
C02.Which emperor do you like best in Chinese history?
C03.Some people say.“We learn more outside cla than in it” Do you agree？Why or Why not？
C04.Do you think music can affect people’s lives, for example, calming them down, cheering them up, or increasing efficiency?
C05.What do you prefer, watching movies at home or at the cinema? Why?
Chinese people always have the tradition of helping others; regardle of a friend or a stranger.However, in recent years, people find that when they try to help others, some changes are taking places.One of the most common examples is that, a paer-by who sent an injured senior people to hospital would be very likely to be recognized as the accident-maker.This kind of events is being rerun again and again.When trapped in the dilemma of tradition and trouble, what would be your choice?
第16篇：第八届创新英语大赛初赛作文试题
第八届创新英语大赛初赛作文题
Directions:
Read the following paragraph and write a composition as stated at about 300 words in 60 minutes.Your composition will be graded according to clarity, accuracy and meaningfulne.
Some experts claim that parents` attitudes toward solving teenage problems are crucial determinants of child personality development.Do you agree or disagree? What role does parental attitude play in child rearing and personality development? You writing ought to contain three parts, your viewpoint, the supporting ideas, and the conclusion.
第17篇：第十三界英语作文创新大赛初赛
American TV dramas are quite prevailing in the group of teenagers these days.Some people think it has nothing to do with the students.But in my eyes,I regard them as a tool to learn English and they help me to know different culture.
First American TV dramas can enhance my sense of learning English.Broke Girls is one of my favorite American TV dramas and it shows on every Saturday evening .When it begins, I’ll be concentrated on the screen and too addicted to the drama to hear mom’s instruction I be expected at the dinner table .As soon as it ends, the video will be rewound and I’ll write down some important words,phrases and sentenses that will help me with English.My vocabulary will be expanded with lots of words learned.
Next ,their accent is pretty good in the drama so that it can get my spoken English improved .Only if master the native English expreion will I do better in learning English.
Ultimately ,the most important significance of watching American TV dramas do I think is to know the differences between America and China.There are a large number of stories in Broke Girls permeated with their own culture such as the civil war and Great Depreion .The characters are always talking about the news which is from all over America, most of it about politics.In one episode,the main character Oley walked along the street ,one of his old companions putting his hand on Oley’s shoulder.“hey ,Oley! I’m Thomas Jefferson .We haven’t seen each other for several years!”Oley thought for a while and answered,“Oh, you are the person who writes the declaration!Have you finished writing?”Puzzled by this confusing conversation,I looked through the dictionary.With the unfamiliar words looked up,I realized that the declaration referred to the Declaration of Independence and the great president Thomas Jefferson’s name is the same as the old friend’s.It reminded me of what I had known about Jefferson in my junior high school.My history teacher used to mention the leader of War of Independence..Otherwise,I completely forget about him.As a student of art,it’s neceary to understand their historical background.The more knowledge I gain,the better history and politics grades I get.
Though I benefit from American dramas a lot,there should be a proper limit to them.You will be sure to be addicted to the dramas unle you control yourself.We are supposed to keep a balance between our study and American TV dramas.American dramas should be treated as an important way to improve the level of English or other subjects rather than just for entertainment.
第18篇：第十三届创新英语作文大赛初赛
The Beacon Of Life----Purpose
I think that purpose is very important in life for all of us,or our world won’t get better.The reason why Addison thought so is that he knew that purpose brought some advantages to everybody.We all know that there are many famous inventors in the world.For example:Edison had a purpose of inventing bulbs.Because he saw the disadvantages of living in the night by burning candles.He wanted to invent something bright to make people see something easily in the dark.After Edison invented bulbs, people could do many thingsat night as they did in theday.
The Wright brothers had a purpose of making something to fly in the sky.Becausethey noticed that birds could fly in the sky by their wings.They invented the plane.So we can go any placeswe want quickly by plane instead of taking a carriage.
CaiLunhad a purpose of producing something that couldreplace bamboo.Because he found that bamboo was too heavy to carry for ordinary persons.So we can write words on paper instead of onbamboo.
Thus it can be seen, purpose is like a flame, sooner or later, it can be larger.It can make our society move forward.
Purpose is important.However, if you just think, but not do it right now, all the things that you think will be gone.So if you have something great in your mind,just do it.Don’t wait.Do you want to wait until you are too old to follow your purpose?
The first thing of purpose is that you dare gue.Some people gue that there are alien in the space.Some people gue that there are ghosts in the world.Even Plato once gueed that people would become half robots.That’s really crazy.
Purpose is a prediction of future.What we gue may become what will happen in the near future.Maybe,we are flying in the space several years later.
第19篇：第11届 全国创新英语作文大赛
外语屋教育
第十一届 全国创新英语作文大赛 范文
范文一：
爱心
用心
专心
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外语屋教育
范文二：
Parents: Call us when you are in trouble and we\'ll spare no effects to help you.Boy: No, mom and dad, I will make it by myself.Parents: But you\'ll make mistakes and be hurt.Boy: Don\'t worry, Mom and Dad.I promise to only make mistakes you never made.
Don’ be Afraid of Mistakes
For a long time, we teenagers are looking forward to the outside world.We always think about
爱心
用心
专心
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外语屋教育
the excellent job and the friendly people we will meet.Unknown as they are, we firmly believe that they are always there, appearing sooner or later and helping us live a perfect live.With this sweet expectation about the future, we have grown up day by day, but only to find the huge difference beyond our expectation.We make mistakes and live an unhappy live.Why there is such huge difference between fact and expectation? Teens are unwilling and positive to accept the fact.Couldn’t they change this situation? Personally, too much help from the parents constantly cause a lack of teens’ self-reliance and independence.On the other hand, teens’ lack of confidence and courage narrows themselves down to accept the mistakes they have made.To be honest, parents play an important part in children’s lives because the power of examples is always much stronger than any words.Parents’ action will influence children’s behaviors unconsciously and easily.Did the parents accept ample outside help when they were teens? Most never .It’s their self-reliance and independence that encouraged themselves to carry on when they make mistakes even failed.It’s the never say-die attitude from the depth of their hearts that drove them to try again, Therefore, parents must be strict with teens, encourage them to try again and help them build a independent character.Just let them go and experience failure and succe.If they make mistakes, let them make.Maybe the children would be hurt, but only experiencing the mistakes and correcting them will make their children more independent.What’s worth mentioning is that example is the most powerful thing rather than money and too much help.As for teens, when we make mistakes, should we stop attempting? Should we give up our dreams because of such one mistake? Clearly the answer is no.Life is an endle way with mistakes and the proce of correcting mistakes.Every coin has two sides.We may lose something and become desperate when we make mistakes.However, making the leons we learn from it inside our heart, we will be powerful enough to face the next new problem ahead of us.Greatly approved of this view, we should realize that mistakes are a part of our lives.Try to live with ourselves and don’t be afraid of making mistakes.Face them, experience them, love them and overcome them.If we lack confidence of face mistakes, stop going ahead and give up our beginning goal easily, how hopele our world will be? Youth is the best gift god gives us.There is no reason to fear of making mistakes.All of us are able to correct mistakes, to experience our own lives, to control the fate of our own and beyond ourselves.Objectively, parents shouldn’t offer too much help to children.Subjectively, teens are supposed to aware of the significance of mistakes.When take both two sides into reality, one man can live a real perfect life.
爱心
用心
专心
第20篇：第八届创新英语大赛复赛作文试题
第八届创新英语大赛复赛试题
Directions:
Read the following paragraph and write a composition as stated at about 300 words in 60 minutes.Your composition will be graded according to clarity, accuracy and meaningfulne.
In accordance with CRI news, the spirit of Chinese volunteers, from responding to the May 12 earthquake to the 2008 Beijing Olympic Games, not only touched the Chinese people, but also generated worldwide attention.Official statistics show that china has accumulated about 8 billion hours of volunteer work from 380 million volunteers since 1993 and is going to have more and more volunteers, especially the youth.How do you understand volunteer work? In what way(s) is it important to promote the well-being of individuals, families, communities and the world at large? Your writing ought to contain three parts, your viewpoint, the supporting ideas, and the conclusion.
