提高中考英语作文复习

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中考英语作文复习：怎样才能写出一篇优秀作文？

一、写作要点：

“一审”即审题。 “二写”即列纲。“三连”即连句成文。 “四改”即修改润色全文。审题：做到三审：

体裁看清楚题目要求，读懂题目所表达的含义，抓住要点，注意文体是什么时态、人称如果是日记和故事，宜采用过去时态；介之类的，宜采用现在时态。列纲：做到三思

词汇—>短语—>句式

列个提纲，考虑所要选用的单词、词组、句型，要能根据自己的英语水平，尽量扬长避短，避难就易。遇到想不起的词、句时，就用同（近）义词或同义句代替，不要使用没有把握的词句，并且要综合考虑所涉及到的情景、场合，语言要地道。

连句成文

根据短文的内容要求，确定先写什么，后写什么，按照表述内容的情节发展和实际需要，重新排列组合已写成的句子，划分必要的段落，一般分成三段。但要注意句式的灵活运用，长、短句，简单句，复合句要搭配运用。

文章分3段：

综述：概括性强，最多2句话引入主题；正文——主要内容：层次性强，一定要有过渡型连接词。最多展开3个方面，每个方面最多2句话；结尾：紧扣主题，2句话内结束，尽量升华。

修改润色全文做到三查

要点、拼写、语法是否连贯：

看全文符不符合题目要求，行文是否流畅，有没有遗漏要点；语法是不是正确，包括单词的拼写、大小写、标点符号、时态、语态、单复数、主谓一致、冠词等。

开头用语：

这几年的南宁中考题开头语大都给出，可以略记。但能住最好了。目前请大家先背《决胜新中考作文手册》P18后的描写文和应用文的范文（先读熟，理解其大意，然后再自己默写出来哟！！！）。

关于上下文衔接连贯句子用词的问题：

1)表层次

first, firstly, second, secondly, third,thirdly, what is more, last, also, and then, next,besides， At first; at last; in the end…finallythen/next/after that…

On one hand ....on the other hand，when/while/as soon as/not… until…

2)表转折；but, however, though, although, after all, in spite of， fortunately，unfortunately，at the same time…

3)表递近： besides,what`s more

4)因果 because, so, because of, thanks to, since, owing to, as a result (of),

5)例证 for example,such as

6)表示利弊的：be good/bad for sb.; be harmful to sb.; do harm to sb.; … affect; have

an effect on sb.;

7）表示喜爱的：love/like/enjoy…; be fond of…; be interested in…;show great interest in…; lose oneself in…; put one’s heart into…;

8)总结 As I see, As for me ，As we all know, in general, generally speaking, I think..., in fact ,in a word,in short,.....

二、各类作文常用框架（这里仅作参考，同学们可以多背优秀范文）

1、话题作文，演讲采用：总-分-总

It’s adj for us to…..

On the one hand,…On the other hand,…

What’s more,…

In a word,/In short,….

2、写信，建议用：总-分-总

I’m adj to hear that you… Here is some advice for you.

Firstly,….

Secondly,….

Finally,….

In a word,…If you…, you will…

习作点评：

请给一家学校杂志写一篇文章，告诉读者你的其中一个爱好的情况：要点：

1、你的爱好是什么？

2、你的爱好的时间、你是怎么对这个爱好感兴趣的；

3、爱好的原因；

4、未来你的希望和计划。

写作要求：

1.根据所提供的内容，适当拓展想象空间，灵活地将提供的信息体现在文章中。

2.条理清楚，语句通顺，书写清晰、规范。3.词数60-80.

[学生习作A]

My hobby is read books.When I was seven years old.I became interested in reading books.I like reading books because there are a lot of useful things in books.I can learn a lot of knowledge from books.Books also can teach me how to be a good person.Books even can solve many problems for me.I will read more good books to improve myself.

错点：①改为reading books，动词作表语时应该用动名词。

②also的位置应放在can之后。

[点评]：档次5-6分。

①要点不全，漏掉最后一个要点。②句子基本无误，能正确传递信息给读者但文章不流畅，句子与句子之间过渡不自然，给读者感觉在回答上述问题。 ③有少量错误。

[学生习作B]

I always felt they weren’t enough.interesting things all over the world.I read books, I can enjoy the beautiful I can improve my writing.I want to be a writer in the①开门见山、点题。

②真情流露，理由充分。

③文中下划线连词使用得恰当，使文章过渡自然、

④巧妙使用句型以表决心。

[点评]：档次9-10分。

①清楚表达写作目的，要点齐全。

②语言表达灵活多样，字里行间流露出真情实感，文章有感染力。

③恰当使用连词和从句，语言流畅，且无错误，是一篇高质量的作文。

高分突破

①文体：记叙文。

②要点：what → when →how → why → hope and plan for the future.

③时态：一般现在时，一般过去时，一般将来时的自然变化。

三、提高写作的方法

1、造句（平时多练习用词造句）

2、摘录好句（平时背范文）、积累名言谚语（能用名言的地方可巧用，给文章增色）附一些谚语：

有关学习的：

A good beginning is half done.良好的开端是成功的一半。

An hour in the morning is worth two in the evening.一日之计在于晨。

Doing is better than saying.与其挂在嘴上，不如落实在行动上。

Every minute counts.分秒必争。

Easier said than done.说得容易，做得难。

Failure is the mother of succe.失败是成功之母。

It is never too old to learn.活到老，学到老。

Never say die.永不言败。

No pains, no gains.没有付出就没有收获。

Nothing in the world is difficult for one who sets his mind to it.世上无难事，只怕有心人。

Where there is a will, there is a way.有志者事竟成。

有关健康的：

An apple a day keeps the doctor away.一天一苹果，不用请医生。

Early to bed and early to rise makes a man healthy, wealthy and wise.早睡早起身体好。

Health is better than wealth.健康胜过财富。

Health is happine.健康就是幸福。

3、句型转换，句式多样性如：

Tom is a student.

He is 16 years old.

He likes running

Tom, a 16-year-old student, likes running.

4.多使用短语如：

I got up quickly.

I got up as quickly as poible.

He studies English well.

He is good at English.

He does well in English.

5、学会扩写如：

The girl likes reading.

The pretty girl likes reading novels.

The pretty girl likes reading novels carefully.

The pretty girl who I talked to just now likes reading novels carefully.文章连贯、衔接上下文练习：

In my life, I will thank my mother forever.My mother is busy everyday.she does housework and works hard in the factory.I am in trouble, she always encourages me to overcome difficulties.I am ill, she looks after me carefully.I will thank my mother for giving me life.I willthank her for helping me.I love my mother very much.

使用衔接词以后看看读起来是不是好很多了？？？

In my life, I will thank my mother forever.My mother is busy everyday.(But) she does housework and works hard in the factory.(When) I am in trouble, she always encourages me to overcome difficulties.(When) I am ill, she looks after me carefully.(In a word), I will (not only) thank my mother for giving me life, (but also) thank her for helping me.(So) I love my mother very much.四、卷面、书写要注意！！！

建议平时作业要书写规范，有可能还可以专门练习书写哟，很多示范学校中考前的最后一个月都练习书法的，显然书写的重要性不能忽略。