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新托福独立写作一共有3个评分标准:如
因此,有了以上的大致信息后,考生就应该多思考如何能在30分钟内缔造出完美的文章结构,来获得考官的青睐?一篇好的结构不仅包括必备的连接词和过渡句,自然也离不开永恒的内在统一。
第一,连接词过渡句
任何形式的英语文章中都应该具备一定量的连接词(路标词),因为它们是有助于读者顺利阅读的\"导航坐标\";大多数考生在备考时也的确会准备一系列此类连接词,用于文章每个段落的段首;包括有表示\"第一,第二,第三\"等的连接词。但是单纯有段首连接词还不足以支撑全文的结构,因此考生应该同时准备段中连接词,包括\"比如说,因为,但是,相对比而言\"等,粗略估计,全文完成下来可以达到15个以上的路标词,不仅承接了全文,结构清晰明了,而且也为时间紧张下的写作减轻了不少字数压力。以下为整理的常用连接词:
1,第一:in the first place/ first and foremost/ to start with/ to begin with/ first of all/ first/ firstly
2,第二:in the second place/ secondly and equal importantly/ to continue/ second/ secondly
3,第三:in the third place/ last but not least/ third/ thirdly
4,一方面、另一方面:on one hand/ on the other hand; for one thing/ for another
5,表原因:because/ because of/ since/ due to/ as/ thanks to/ for/ owing to
6,表结果:so/ therefore/ as a result/ consequently/ as a consequence7,表举例:for example/ for instance/ such as/ take…as an example/ to illustrate
8,表承接:besides/ furthermore/ moreover/ what\'s more/ in addition/ additionally
9,表转折:but/ while/ however/ neverthele/ nonethele
10,表比较对比: to compare with/ compared with/ in comparison with/ by contrast/ on the contrary
当然,仅仅依靠连接词是不足以表明全文的连贯性的,适当的添加过渡句也是很好的承接手段,如Official Guide To The New TOEFL P263中有一篇关于DISHONESTY KILLS RELIABILITY 的5分范文中就有出现多处明显的段落过渡句,如第三段首\"After stating that everyone\'s opinion can be different about this, for me honesty, in other words, always telling…\"用来承接上下两段,以引出自己的观点看法;第五段首\"Although I would like to see altruistic, understanding, thoughtful and loyal behavior from people, an instance of the opposite…\"等都明显具备良好的过渡功能,让全文更加流畅舒服,朗朗上口。
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