大学英语写作课教案模板

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（1）模版一There is no consensus among the people as to the view of (主题).Some people hold the idea that (观点A).A case in point is that (支持观点A的例子).

On the other hand, others may have a quite different view.According to them, (观点B).The most typical example is that (支持观点B的例子).

Weighing the pros and cons of these arguments, I am inclined to agree with the latter.Admittedly, the former point of view seems reasonable in saying to some

extent, but the latter is more convincing.2）模版二 (主题) is a common occurrence in our lives.The attitudes toward this iue vary from person to person.Some people tend to ______when they are asked (观点A) because(支持观点A的原因).The most typical example is that (支持观点A的例子).

However, others argue that(观点B).They point out that (重申观点B) for the reason that (支持观点B的原因).

As far as I am concerned, I will choose to (你的观点)because this choice fits my personality and my life-long belief.

2） My View 型 （1）模版一 When asked about (主题), some people hold the idea that 观点A).As far as they are concerned,(展开观点A).But I could not agree with them in several points.In my opinion, (观点B).The reasons for my choice are listed as follows.

In the first place, (支持观点B的理由1).In the second place, (支持观点B的理由2).In the third place, (支持观点B的理由3).

For the reasons mentioned above, I firmly believe(重申观点B).

（2）模版二 Some people believe that (观点A).For instance, they hold the idea that(支持观点A的例子).And it may bring them （A带给他们的好处).

In my opinion, I never think this reason can be the point.For one thing, (我不同意的理由1).For another, (我不同意的理由2).

As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice.For me, I agree to the thought that (重申自己的观点).

3）利弊型 （1）模版一Nowadays many people prefer (主题) because it plays a significant role in our daily life.Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows.On the one hand, (主题的优点1).On the other hand, (主题的优点2).

But everything can be divided into two.The negative aspects are also apparent.One of the important disadvantages is that (主题的缺点1).To make matters

worse,（主题的缺点2).

Through the above analysis, I believe that the positive aspects far outweigh its negative aspects.Whatever effects it has, one thing is certain, (主题) itself is

neither good nor bad.It is the uses to which it is put that determine its value to our society.

（2）模版二With the development of science and human civilization, many formerly unimaginable things come into reality.Some of them have positive effects on our life, but some are distasteful.The phenomenon of (主题现象) is an example of the former / latter one.

There are many factors that may account for it, and the following are the most conspicuous aspects.To start with, (原因1).Furthermore,(原因2).

Eventually,(原因3).

Good as (主题现象) is, it has, unfortunately, its disadvantages.The apparent example is that(缺点例子1).In addition, (缺点例子2).

On the whole, the phenomenon is one of the results of the progre of the modern society.There is still a long way for us to improve / eliminate(主题现象) and make our life more comfortable.

图表式作文 It is obvious in the graphic/table that the rate/number/amount of Y has undergone dramatic changes.It has gone up/grown/fallen/dropped considerably in recent years (as X varies).At the point of X1, Y reaches its peak value of …(多少).

What is the reason for this change? Mainly there are … (多少)reasons behind the situation reflected in the graphic/table.First of all, …(第一个原因).More

importantly, …(第二个原因).Most important of all, …(第三个原因).

From the above discuions, we have enough reason to predict what will happen in the near future.The trend described in the graphic/table will continue for

quite a long time (if neceary measures are not taken括号里的使用于那些不太好的变化趋势).

提纲式作文 1.对立观点式 Some people are in favor of the idea of doing （X）.They point out the fact that 支持（X） 的第一个原因。They also argue that 支持（X） 的另一个原因。

However, other people stand on a different ground.They consider it harmful to do （X）.They firmly point out that 反对（X） 的第一个理由。 An eample can give the details of this argument:

There is some truth in both arguments.But I think the advantages of （X） overweigh the disadvantages.In addition to the above-mentioned negative effects it might bring about, （X） also may （X） 的有一个坏处。

2.批驳观点式Many people argue that 错误观点。By saying that, they mean 对这个观点的进一步解释。An example they have presented is that 一个

例子。(According to a survey performed by X on a group of Y, almost 80% of them 赞成这个错误观点或者受到这个错误观点的影响)。

There might be some element of truth in these people’s belief.But if we consider it in depth, we will feel no reservation to conclude that 与错误观点相反的观

点。There are a number of reasons behind my belief.(以下参照辩论文的议论文写法)。

3.社会问题(现象)式 Nowadays, there exists an increasinglyserious social/economic/ environmental problem.(X has increasingly become a common

concern of the public).According to a survey, 调查内容说明这种现象的情况。(或者是一个例子)。

There are a couple of reasons booming this problem/phenomenon.下面参照辩论式议论文写法。

X has caused substantial impact on the society and our daily life, which has been articulated in the following aspects.参照辩论式议论文的写法。

A dozen of measures are supposed to take to prevent X from bringing us more harm.同上

Based on the above discuions, I can easily forecast that more and more people will ……..

辩论式议论文模版

模版1Some people believe (argue, recognize, think)that 观点1.But other people take an opposite side.They firmly believe that 观点2.As for me, I agree to the former/latter idea.There are a dozen of reasons behind my belief.First of all, 论据1.More importantly, 论据2.Most important of all, 论据3.In summary, 总结观点.As a college student, I am supposed to 表决心.或:From above, we can predict that 预测.

模版2People hold different views about X.Some people are of the opinion that 观点1, while others point out that 观点2.As far as I am concerned, the

former/latter opinion holds more weight.

For one thing, 论据1.For another, 论据2.

Last but not the least, 论据3.

To conclude, 总结观点.As a college student, I am supposed to 表决心.

或 From above, we can predict that 预测.

模版3There is no consensus of opinions among people about X(争论的焦点)。Some people are of the view that 观点1，while others take an opposite side, firmly believing that 观点2。As far as I am concerned, the former/latter notion is preferable in many senses.The reasons are obvious.

First of all, 论据1。 Furthermore, 论据2。

Among all of the supporting evidences, one is the strongest.That is, 论据3。

A natural conclusion from the above discuion is that总结观点。

As a college student, I am supposed to 表决心.或 From above, we can predict that 预测.

(I)说明原因型模块

Currently, XX has been the order of the day.This does demonstrate the theory --- nothing is more valuable than XX

It is clear that (1).If you (2), as a result, your dreams will come true.On the contrary, if you (3).

Failure will be following with you.It turns out that all your plan falls through.

No one can deny another fact that (4).You don\'t have to look very far to find out the truth, in respect that we all know (5).It will exert a profound influence upon

(6).With reference to my standpoint, I think (7).

注释: 1:XX的第一个优点 2:支持XX的做法 3:不支持XX的做法

4:XX的第二个优点 5:举例证明优点二 6:说明XX优点三的影响第三天我写的相应作文:The importance of self-confidence

Currently, self-confidence has been the order of the day.This does demonstrate the theory --- nothing is more valuable than self-confidence.

It is clear that (self-confidence means trust in one\'s abilities).If you (are full of self-confidence, it will bring your creative power to play, arouse your

enthusiasm for work, and help you overcome difficulties), as a result, your dreams will come true.On the contrary, if you (have no confidence in yourself, there is little poibility that you would ever achieve anything ).Failure will be following with you。It turns out that all your plan falls through.No one can deny another fact that

(self-confidence gives you light when you are in dark and encouragement when you are dismayed).You don\'t have to look very far to find out the truth, in respect that we all know (the secret of MMe.Curie lies in perseverance and self-confidence, the latter in particular).It will exert a profound influence upon (the achievement of one\'s ambitions).With reference to my standpoint, I think (he that can have self-confidence can have what he will).

(I)说明原因型模块(2)

In recent years, XX has caused a heated debate on (1).

The factors for (2).First of all, (3).Then, there comes a case that (4).Moreover, (5).Especially when (6).Indeed, these unique points can be collected the remind

people that (7).In this way, we should behave just like (8).

The impact of Television

In recent years, with the development of science and technology, 80 percent of all homes in China have satellite TV, offering as many as 50 channels.It has

caused a heated debate on (the impact of television on children).Many parents are worried about the impact of so much television on children.

The factors for (parents\' worry is that children are indulge in television and spend too much time on it.).First of all, (with so many programs to choose from,

children are not getting as much exercise as they should ).Then, there comes a case that (some studies have show that exceive watching of television by millions of children has lowered their ability to achieve in school ).

Moreover, (the effect on children\'s minds are more serious than the effect on children\'s bodies).Especially when (the children are too small to judge what

programs are suit to them).Indeed, these unique points can be connected to remind parents that (they should pay close attention to and responsibilities for supervising their children\'s TV viewing).In this way, children will not be influenced too deeply.

Nowadays, there are more and more [某种现象] in [某种场合].It is estimated that [相关数据].Why have there been so many [某种现象]? Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows.The first one is [原因一].Besides, [原因二].The third one is [原因三].To sum up, the main cause of [某种现象] is due to [最主要原因].It is high time that something were done upon it.For one thing, [解决办法一].On the other hand, [解决办法二].All these measures will certainly reduce the number of [某种现象].

为便于读者理解，我特意用这个模板，写了一篇关于ghost writer(捉刀代笔的枪手)的示范性小作文，请您观摩一下。

Nowadays, there are more and more [ghost writers / 枪手] in [China\'s examinations / 中国的考场].It is estimated that [5％ examinees are ghost writers / 5％的应试者是枪手].Why have there been so many [ghost writers / 枪手]? Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows.The first one is [hirers\' ignorance / 雇主无知].Besides,

[hirers\' indolence / 雇主懒惰].The third one is [hirers\' obtusity / 雇主迟钝].To sum up, the main cause of [ghost writers / 枪手] is due to [hirers\' low IQ / 雇主智商低].It is high time that something were done upon it.For one thing, [flagellation / 鞭打].On the other hand, [decapitation / 斩首].All these measures will certainly reduce the number of [ghost writers / 枪手].

（I）说明原因型

模块

（一） Nowadays ,there are more and more XX in some big cities .It is estimated that ( 1 ).Why have there been so many XX ? Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows.

The first one is that ( 2 ) .Besides,( 3 ) .The third reason is ( 4 ).

To sum up ,the main cause of XX is due to ( 5 ) .

It is high time that something were done upon it.For one thing ,( 6 ).

On the other hand ,( 7 ).All these measures will certainly reduce the

number of XX .

Generation gap between parents and children

Nowadays , there are more and more misunderstanding between parents and

children which is so- called generation gap .It is estimated that (75 percentages of parents often complain their children\'s unreasonable behavior while children

usually think their parents too old fashioned).

Why have there been so much misunderstanding between parents and children?

Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows .The first one is that ( the two generations,

having grown up at different times, have different likes and dislikes ,thus the disagreement often rises between them) .Besides(due to having little in common to

talk about , they are not willing to sit face to face ) .The third reason is (with the

pace of modern life becoming faster and faster , both of them are so busy with their work or study that they don\'t spare enough time to exchange ideas ).To sum

up ,the main cause of XX is due to ( lake of communication and understanding each other) .

It is high time that something were done upon it.For one thing (children should respect their parents ).On the other hand ,( parents also should show solicitue for

their children).All these measures will certainly bridge the generation gap .

（I）说明原因型 模块（2） In recent years , xx has caused a heated debate on ( 1 ).The factors for ( 2 ) .First of all ,( 3 ).Then , there comes a case that ( 4 ).Moreover , ( 5 ) .Especiallywhen ( 6 ) .Indeed, these unique points can be collected theo remindpeople that ( 7 ).In this way ,we should behave just like ( 8 ).

The impact of Television

In recent years , with the development of science and technology ,80 percent of all homes in China have satellite TV , offering as many as 50 channels .It has

caused a heated debate on (the impact of television on children ).Many parents are worried about the impact of so much television on children.The factors for (parents\' worry is that children are indulge in television and spend too much time on it .) .First of all ,(with so many programs to choose from , children are not getting as much

exercise as they should ).Then , there comes a case that ( some studies have show that exceive watching of television by millions of children has lowered their

ability to achieve in school ).Moreover , ( the effect on children\'s minds are more serious than the effect on children\'s bodies ) .Especially when ( the children are too small to judge what programs are suit to them ) .

Indeed, these unique points can be connected to remind parents that ( they should pay close attention to and responsibilities for supervising their children\'s TV

viewing ).In this way ,children will not be influented too deeply .

（I）说明原因型 模块（3）

Currently,XX has been the order of the day .This does demonstrate the theory --- nothing is more valuable than XX .

It is clear that (1).If you (2), as a result , your dreams will come true.On the contrary, if you (3).Failure will be following with you .It turns out that all your

plan falls through .

No one can deny another fact that (4) .You donn\'t have to look very far to find out the truth , in respect that we all know (5).It will exert a profound influence upon

(6).With reference to my standpoint ,I think (7).

注释：

1 ： XX的第一个优点 2： 支持XX的做法 3：不支持XX的做法 4：XX的第二个优点

5：举例证明优点二6：说明XX优点三的影响第三天我写的相应作文：

The importance of self-confidence

Currently, self-confidence has been the order of the day .This does demonstrate the theory --- nothing is more valuablethan self-confidence.

It is clear that (self-confidence means trust in one\'s abilities ).

If you ( are full of self-confidence ,it will bring your creative power

to play , arouse your enthusiasm for work, and help you overcome

difficulties ), as a result , your dreams willcome true .On the contrary,

if you ( have no confidence in yourself, there is little poibility that

you would ever achieve anything ).Failure will be following with you。

It turns out that all your plan falls through .

No one can deny another fact that (self-confidence gives you light

when you are in dark and encouragement when you are dismayed) .

You donn\'t have to look very far to find out the truth , in respect

that we all know (the secret of MMe.Curie lies in preserverence and

self-confidence, the latter in particular) .It will exert a profound

influence upon ( the achievement of one\'s ambitions ).

With reference to my standpoint ,I think (he that can have

self-confidence can have what he will).

综合运用篇

Along with the advance of the society more and more problems are brought to our attention, one of which is that....

随着社会的不断发展，出现了越来越多的问题，其中之一便是____________。

As to whether it is a bleing or a curse, however, people take different attitudes.

然而，对于此类问题，人们持不同的看法。(Hold different attitudes 持不同的看;Come up with different attitudes 有不同的看法)

As society develops, people are attaching much importance to....

随着社会的发展，人们开始关注.....

As to whether it is worthwhile ....., there is a long-running controversial debate.It is quite natural that people from different backgrounds may have divergent attitudes towards it.关于是否值得________的问题，一直以来争论不休。当然，不同的人对此可能持不同的观点。

Recently the phenomenon has aroused wide concern, some people are in alarm that....最近，这种现象引起了人们的广泛关注，有人开始担心______________。

展现问题篇

Recently the iue of whether or not ...has been in the limelight and has aroused wide concern in the public.

近来，是否_______的问题已经非常明确而且引起了社会的广泛关注。

The iue whether it is good or not to ....has aroused a heated discuion all over the country.______的利与弊已在全国范围内引起热烈的讨论。

At present, some people think ....while others claim ...Both sides have their merits.目前，一些人认为_______而另一些人则认为_______。其实，两种观点都其可取之处。

People rarely reach an absolute consensus on such a controversial iue.对于这种极具争议的话题，我们很难作出绝对的回答。

People from different backgrounds would put different interpretations on the same case.不同行业的人对同一种问题的解释不尽相同。

The controversial iue is often brought into public focus.People from different backgrounds hold different attitudes towards the iue.

这中极具争议性的话题往往很受社会的关注。不同的人对此问题的看法也不尽相同。

When asked ..., some people think.....while some prefer...说到___，有人认为____，而另一些人则认为___。

There is a public controversy nowadays over the iue of ..There who criticize ...argue that ..., they believe that ...,but people who favor .., on the other hand, argue that...目前，___问题争议较大。批判_______的人认为___，他们认为____，不过，另一方面，赞同__的人则认为___。

1、常用与开头的短语、句式

（1） with the （rapidly）growing popularity of （computers/private cars） in China，the quality of our lives has been considerably changed。

（3） With the development of （science and technology/market economy），more and more/an increasing number of people come to realize that …

（4） Currently there is a widespread/serious concern over (illegal publication/drug abuse/negative influence of western cultures).

（5） Nowadays ,a heated debated/discuion about…is under way in China .some people believe that …,whereas others argue that…

（6） There are some reasons for owning (private cars/ personal computers).To begin with,…Next,…Last,…There are, on the other hand, many reasons against it, First,…Second,…Finally,…

（7） There are many advantages and disadvantages in(owning a car).

（8） There are various /at least three ways/poible techniques/problems/methods to do something

（9） Smoking/Alcoholic beverage should be banned from college campuses for toe reasons.The first reason is that …The second reason is that …/On the one hand ,… On the other hand,…

（10） The poible solutions of (the energy crisis/water shortages/these social problems)depend on three factors…

（11） The tow major reasons responsible for(the rapid economic growth /the widespread of fake products )are…

2．常用于结尾的短语、句式

（1） It is hoped that we should place much emphasis on/pay more attention to 。。。

（2） To conclude，we can see that （the best way/the poible solution）is。。。

（3） In short，（shortages of water，decrease of fertile fields and environmental pollution）are the major problems to be solved to（increase rain production）。

（4） In order to make our world a better place in which to live we should make great efforts to。。。

（5） In a word ，there are three suggestions we must follow ，only in this way can we（achieve a great succe）。

（6） It is time for us to take an active part in。。。

（7） Let us work hand in hand in hand to（solve these social problems）

1．表示原因 1）There are three reasons for this． 2）The reasons for this are as follows． 3）The reason for this is obvious． 4）The reason for this is not far to seek． 5）The reason for this is that．．．

6）We have good reason to believe that．．．

例： There are three reasons for the changes that have taken place in our life．Firstly，people’s living standard has been greatly improved．Secondly，most people are well paid， and they can afford what they need or like．Last but not least，more and more people prefer to enjoy modern life．

2．表示好处1）It has the following advantages．2）It does us a lot of good． 3）It benefits us quite a lot． 4）It is beneficial to us．

5）It is of great benefit to us．

例： Books are like friends．They can help us know the world better，and they can open our minds and widen our horizons．Therefore，reading extensively is of great benefit to us．

3．表示坏处1）It has more disadvantages than advantages． 2）It does us much harm． 3）It is harmfulto us．

例： However，everything dividesinto two．Television can also be harmful to us．It can do harm to our health and make us lazy if we spend too much time watching televi- sion．

4．表示重要、必要、困难、方便、可能1）It is important（neceary，difficult，convenient， poible）for sb．to do sth． 2）We think it neceary to do sth． 3）It plays an important role in our life．

例： Computers are now being used everywhere，whether in the government，in schools or in busine．Soon， computers will be found in every home，too．We have good reason to say that computers are playing an increasingly important role in our life and we have stepped into the Computer Age．

5．表示措施1）We should take some effective measures． 2）We should try our best to overcome（conquer）the difficulties． 3）We should do our utmost in doing sth． 4）We should solve the problems that we are confronted（faced）with．

例： The housing problem that we are confronted with is becoming more and more serious．Therefore，we must take some effective measures to solve it．

6．表示变化1）Some changes have taken place in the past five years．

2）A great change will certainly be produced in the world’s communications． 3）The computer has brought about many changes in education．

例： Some changes have taken place in people’s diet in the past five years．The major reasons for these changes are not far to seek．Nowadays，more and more people are switching from grain to meat for protein，and from fruit and vegetable to milk for vitamins．

推荐第2篇：大学英语写作

常用写作句型

1现象解释型

模板一

⑴According to the chart/graph/ table/ picture, it is clear that 图表/画内容总概括.⑵The chart/graph/ table/picture shows .⑶Many reasons contribute to 现象概括.

⑷To begin with, 原因一.⑸进一步阐述原因一.⑹Moreover, 原因二.⑺In addition, 原因三.⑻As a result, 段落总结句.

⑼As to me, I think 我的观点/态度/建议.⑽ First of all, 理由一.⑾ Besides, 理由二.⑿To conclude, 模板二

Topic

⑴From the chart/graph/ table/picture, we learn that nowadays, 总述社会现象/事实现象, which has aroused the great /common concern.⑵what imprees me most is .⑶That are many reasons accounting for .

⑷First of all,原因一.⑸进一步阐述原因一.⑹ What is more, 原因二.⑺ For example, 举例说明原因二.⑻ In addition, 原因三.

⑼As far as I am concerned, 我的观点.⑽For one thing/On one hand 理由一.⑾ For another/ On the other hand, .⑿Thus/In brief/Taking above mentioned factors into consideration, I may reasonably conclude that….

常用句型

⑴As is described in the chart/graph/table/picture, in the past few decades, there have arisen sharp increase in…如图中所示， 在过去的几十年中， ……急剧增长。

⑵The chart/graph/table/picture describes that the figure declines/falls smoothly/markedly, it indicates that…

图表显示数字下降平缓/明显， 这表明……

⑶In the chart/graph/table/picture, we can seen that there was a slight/ marked fluctuation.It reveals that…

在图表中，我们可以看到有细微/很明显的波动，这表明…

⑷Recently, the problems of …has become the focus of the public concern.

近来，…问题引起公众极大的关注。

⑸There may be a combination of factors which contribute to/ are responsible for/ explain… …可能是好几个因素造成的结果。

⑹There may be several poible reasons for which will be demonstrated below.可能有几个原因导致了我们下面所要阐述的问题。

⑺It’s no easy /simple task to offer the reasons for this phenomenon which involves more than one complicated factors.

要解释该现象产生的原因并不容易，因为其中涉及到很多复杂的因素。

⑻ Among all the important/convincing reasons for…,one should be emphasized… 在所有重要/有力的原因中， 我们应当重点关注…

2问题解决型

模板一

Topic

⑴It is well-known that 相关背景, but nowadays 总述不良现象或问题.⑵现象具体表现一.⑶现象的具体表现二.

⑷It should be paid attention to that 该现象 is causing great harm/该现象 is caused for many reasons.⑸On one hand, ⑹On the other hand, .⑺Therefore, it is high time that ⑻First of all, 解决方法一.⑼进一步阐述方法一.⑽Secondly/In addition, 解决方法二.⑾Thirdly/Besides/Morever.解决方法三.⑿Only in this way can we解决问题.

模板二

Topic

⑴There has been a discuion recently about 事实现象.⑵ It is obvious that 危害一/作用一.⑶ Additionally, 危害二/作用二.⑷So how to 解决问题is worth paying attention to.

⑸On one hand/ Firstly, 解决方法一.⑹进一步阐述方法二⑺On the other hand/Secondly,解决方法二.⑻For example,支持该方法的例子.⑼In addition/ Thirdly, 解决方法三.

⑽In fact, more than three ways can be adopted.⑾As for me, 我的思考或看法.⑿All in all, 总结全文.

常用句型

⑴It is important that effective actions should be taken to prevent the situation.

⑵There is little doubt that serious attention must be called to…

⑶There is no immediate solution to the problem of…,but …might be helpful/ but the general awarene of the neceity of…might be the first step.

⑷In order to make our world a better place in which we live, we should make great efforts to… ⑸To conclude, we can see the best way is…

⑹Following these methods may not guarantee the succe in solution to…, but the payoff will be worth the effort.

3对比选择型

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Topic

⑴Different people have different views on看法/问题.⑵Somme prefer 一种看法观点.⑶Others tend to .⑷As for me, I agree to the first/ second opinion.

⑸Of course, 我不赞同的观点的合理性.⑹For example, 支持其合理性的例子.⑺But 我不赞同的观点的不足.⑻The following reason can account for your preference.

⑼The main reason is that 支持观点的理由一.⑽ A good example to illustrate is that 支持理由一的例子.⑾In addition/ What’s more,支持观点的理由二.⑿For the foregoing, 重申观点.模板二

Topic

⑴When it comes to事物/问题, different people will offer different opinions.⑵Some people take it for granted that 观点一.⑶In their opinion, 观点一的理由一.⑷Besides, 观点一的理由二.⑸However, others hold that观点二.⑹They maintain that 观点二的理由一.⑺And 观点二的理由二.

⑻Weighing up these two arguments, I am for 观点一/观点二.⑼ On one hand, 理由一.⑽ On the other hand, ⑾ For instance, 举例说明理由二.⑿ Therefore, as stated above, 常用句式

⑴ There is a general discuion nowadays on the problem of …Some argue that …,but others set forth a totally different argument about the iue.

⑵ In response to the problem, some people believe…,in their minds,…Other maintain that…, in their eyes,…

⑶ Personally, I side with the former/ latter opinion.

⑷ In conclusion, it is clear that

4观点论证型

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⑴ It is true that 普遍的观点.⑵ However, 不同的观点/现象.⑶ I think,我的观点.⑷ 理由或其他论据 can be listed as follows.

⑸ Firstly，论据一.⑹ Secondly, 论据二.⑺ For example, 支持论据二的事例.⑻ Thirdly, 论据

三.⑼ A case in point is 支持论据三的事例.

⑽ There is no doubt that 重申观点.⑾ Therefore, 与该观点相符的做法.⑿ In a word, 总结全文.

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Topic

⑴ Many people believe that 社会现象/事实.⑵The truth is deep and profound.⑶ As we all know,具体表现一.⑷ In addition, 具体表现二.

⑸ There are numerous examples supporting this argument.⑹ A case in point is 阐述第一个例子⑺ For another example, 引出并说明第二个例子.⑻ Moreover, 阐述第三个例子.

⑼All mentioned above that tells us that重申观点.⑽ But (One thing we have to notice is that ) 提出个人建议.⑾ In short,总结全文.

常用句式

⑴ It is well known that …plays an important part in…

⑵ It is believed that …

⑶ There are many reasons explaining …

⑷ From what has been mentioned above, we may safely come to the conclusion that …

5应用文

⑴建议信模板

Date

Dear ___________,

⑴ I am delighted to learn that _________.⑵ It____________.⑶ In my opinion, ________.⑷ On one hand,_________.⑸ On the other hand,_________.

⑹ As to ________, I suggest ___________.⑺ If__________.⑻ It is unneceary for you to _____________.⑼ In addition, ________________.⑽ I am sure _______________.

⑾ Please inform me _________________.

⑿ I amlooking forward to __________.

Sincerely yours,

Signature

常用句式

⑴ I would like to suggest that …/ I am writing with my suggestion that…

⑵ You have asked me for my advice with regard to …and I will try to make some conducive suggestions.

⑶ If I were you, I would…

⑷ As you may agree that...

⑸ I hope you will find these suggestions helpful/ practical/ useful.

⑹ I hope you will take my suggestions into consideration.

⑺ I would be happy to see improvements in this regard.

⑻ I would be ready to discu this matter to further details.

⑵倡议书模板

Date

Dear________,

⑴ I am writing this letter to call on ____________to ____________.⑵ As some of you may know,___________.⑶ In fact,___________.

⑷It is neceary for us to___________.⑸ On one hand,__________.⑹ On the other hand, ______________.⑺ However,___________________.⑻So it is high

time_____________________.⑼ Firstly, ________________.⑽Secondly, _______________.

⑾ If you are willing to ____________, please ______________.⑿ Join us in the action and extend ________into a spirit that dares any poible difficulties.

Thank you.

⑶求职信模板

Date

Dear_______,

⑴ I am applying for the position of _________advertised in _________.⑵ I major in

_____.⑶ My training in ________definitely meet your qualifications.⑷ My complete resume is attached.

⑸ I will graduate on____________ from_________.⑹ In addition to the required courses of this program, I have_________.⑺ I also have some experience in ___________.⑻ I believe my training and experience _________________.⑼ You will find me to be ________________⑽ I hope that you will consider me for your position.⑾ May I have a personal interview at your convenience? ⑿ I can be reached by telephone __________.

Sincerely yours,

Signature

常用句式

⑴ I am writing to apply for the post of …advertised in …

⑵ In reply to your advertisement in…, I beg to apply for the post …in your company.⑶ I feel I have the qualifications and experiences needed for the position of …

⑷ I shall bring with me the full details of my testimonials as you request.

⑸ I hope I may be granted an interview when I can explain my qualification more fully.

⑹ It seems that my experience, together with my education, has given me ideal preparation to aume the role of…in your firm.

推荐第3篇：大学英语写作

1.对立观点式

A．有人认为#是好事，赞成#， 为什么？

B．有人认为# 是坏事， 反对#，为什么？

C．我的看法。

模板:

With the development of our society, # has increasingly become a common concern of the public.(可再加一句情况说明)

Some people are in favor of the idea of doing #.They point out the fact that 支持# 的第一个原因.They also argue that 支持# 的另一个原因.However, other people stand on a different ground.They consider it harmful to do #.They firmly point out that 反对# 的第一个理由.What’s more, 反对# 的第二个理由.

There is some truth in both arguments.But I think the advantages of#/doing # 的好处overweigh the disadvantages.Given more correct directions, all of us can benefit more from it.

(结尾一段也可选用这种方式:

Therefore, in my opinion, although there are advantages of #/doing # 的好处, its negative effects should not be ignored.Given more correct directions, all of us can benefit more from it.)

Colleges Have Opened Their Doors Wider With the development of our society, the fact that colleges have opened their doors wider has increasingly become a common concern of the public.

Some people are in favor of the idea of opening the colleges’ doors wider.They point out the fact that it allows more students to pursue higher education.They also argue that it will provide more talents for our society.However, other people stand on a different ground.They consider it harmful to open the colleges’ doors wider.They firmly point out that it will be much harder for the graduates to find a job.What’s more, it will lead to a social problem.

There is some truth in both arguments.But I think the advantages of

opening the colleges’ doors wider overweigh the disadvantages.Given more correct directions, all of us can benefit more from it.

(141 words) (结尾一段也可选用这种方式: Therefore, in my opinion, although there are advantages of opening the colleges’ doors wider, its negative effects should not be ignored.Given more correct directions, all of us can benefit more from it.)(141 words)

2.社会问题(现象)式

A．一个社会问题或者现象

B．产生的原因

C．我的看法。

Work in the Countryside (positive)

1.许多大学毕业生自愿到农村工作

2.出现这种现象的原因

3.我的看法

Work in the Countryside With more and more university graduates in our society, how to find a good job has increasingly become a common concern of the public.It is reported that many university graduates would like to work in the countryside.

There are a number of reasons for this phenomenon.To start with, it is a fact that with more and more university students graduating each year, the job market competition becomes more and more fierce, and many graduates cannot find jobs in the cities.Secondly, most villages that are trying to employ university graduates have developed well.It makes mot much difference whether to work in the countryside or in the city.Last but not least, some university graduates who come from the

countryside are eager to go back home to contribute to the construction of their hometown.Based on the above reasons, I think university graduates should go to work where they are needed most and where they can make full use of their talents.Working in the countryside can be truly an advisable (明智的) choice.

(170 words) Misleading News (negative)

1.当今社会虚假新闻越来越多

2.分析出现这种现象的原因

3.呼吁社会改变这种不智之举

With the development of our society, misleading news has increasingly become a common concern of the public.It is reported that there are more and more misleading news in our society.

There are a number of reasons for this phenomenon.To start with, it is a fact that there are more and more modern communication tools in the world, misleading news can easily spread.Secondly, some journalists would like to draw public attention and increase the sales by publishing misleading news.Last but not least, the public would like to share some interesting news which may be misleading.Based on the above discuions, I think we should take action to prevent misleading news.Think twice before we speak can be truly an advisable choice.

(124 words)

3.应用文

写信:感谢信, 投诉信，道歉信,邀请信,申请(贷款、入学、求职)，请求别人帮忙（写推荐信，搜查资料)

Dear Sir or Madam,(不知是谁的情况下，如果有要求写给谁要写上具体的名称)

I am a student/customer who….I am writing to thank you for/complain about/apologize for/invite you to do/apply for/ask for your help to do sth.

描述过程或原因.When I …, I was really thankful/upset/sorry /honored/interested/upset.

I sincerely hope that ….

If you can…, I will be really….I am looking forward to your reply.Yours sincerely,Lily

A Letter to Apply for a Student Loan

1.介绍你的个人情况

2.申请助学贷款的原因、数额及用途

3.如何保证专款专用以及你的还款

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am a sophomore in Peking University who majors in Engineering.I am writing to apply for a student loan of 2,000 yuan.

It is hard for me to make the application, but I have to.Last year both my parents were laid off, and what’s worse, three weeks ago my mother was discovered to have caught a serious disease.Therefore, I could not get support for my study form my family any more.When I knew that I have the opportunity to apply for the student loan, I was really happy and excited.So I immediately write this letter to you to ask for your help.I sincerely hope that I can get the loan.I promise that all the money will go to my tuition and fees for the next year, and I will repay it within four years, that is, one year after my graduation.If you can grant my application, I will be really grateful.I am looking forward to your reply.

Yours sincerely,Lily

(166 words)

4.图表作文模板

图表作文提示部分包括图表和文字要点提示两部分。图表的类型主要有：圆形（饼型）图（pie chart）、柱形图(直型图)（graph）、曲线图（chart）和数据统计表(表格)（table）。 ① 描述图表 ②分三方面解释原因 ③下结论

1) As can be seen from the in______.During the period from _______to _______, ________rose from ________to _______, while _______ decreased from _______ to _______.

2) We believe that there are a number of reasons for this phenomenon.To begin with,____.Secondly, ____.Last but not least, _____.

3) In conclusion, ______.We can imagine that _____.

范文： Health Gains in Developing Countries

1．以下图为依据描述发展中国家的期望寿命(1ife expectancy)和婴儿死亡率(infant mortality)的变化情况

2．说明引起变化的各种原因

1960 1990

Health Gains in Developing Countries

life expectancy of developing 40 years nearly 60 years, infant

develops quickly in developing countries during this period, and living quality improves the development of national health care systems.When they become richer and richer, they care more about personal health conditions.medical sciences also develop at a fantastic speed, and it is much safer for mothers to give birth.

the situations in developing countries are changing for the better.

(169 words)

注:还须注意今年的热点问题,如:就业(有关词汇如: graduate, apply for, applicant, candidate等);经济问题(有关词汇如: the financial

crisis/tsunami等);或城市交通问题等.

推荐第4篇：111191429浅谈大学英语写作课[1]

浅谈大学英语写作课教学中教学策略与学习策略

摘要：英语作为世界通用语,在社会交际中显得越来越重要,并得到了社会的广泛重视。但许多学生经过多年的英语学习,英语写作能力仍然很低,写不出像样的英语作文。这种接受能力与产出能力之间发展的不平衡，已经引起了许多专家和学者的注意，本文拟就如何在大学英语写作课教学中提高学生的写作水平作了一些探讨，并提出了一些教学策略和学习策略。

关键词：大学英语写作课教学策略学习策略

在当今时代,随着国际交往的日益频繁,经济全球化方兴未艾。英语作为世界通用语,在社会交际中显得越来越重要,并得到了社会的广泛重视。大学英语教学大纲指出：大学英语教学的目的是培养学生具有较强的阅读能力、一定的听的能力以及初步的写和说的能力。新大纲的公布首次对大学英语教学各阶段读、听、写、说等语言交际教学做出定性、定量的规定。而在学习英语的五项基本技能——听、说、读、写、译中,英语写作是许多大学生面临的难题,许多学生经过多年的英语学习,英语写作能力仍然很低,写不出像样的英语作文,在四级考试中也很难达到大纲要求。学生“高分低能”倾向比较严重，写作的平均成绩比选择题的低。这种接受能力与产出能力之间发展的不平衡，已经引起了许多专家和学者的注意，本文拟就如何在大学英语写作课教学中提高学生的写作水平作了一些探讨，并提出了一些教学策略和学习策略。

一、大学生英语写作的现状

1、思维问题

汉、英思维模式的差异对大学生英语写作的会产生很大的影响。思维是人类语言行为的特征。不同民族存在着共同的思维,但由于所处的地理位置不同,文化传统不同,说英语的民族和说汉语的民族在思维方式上存在着很大的差别。汉语民族思维模式是曲线式的、间接的,更注重综合型思维,注重整体和谐、从多归一,注重人际关系；英语民族的思维模式是直线式的、直接的,更注重分析性思维,崇尚天人对立、征服自然,注重人与物的关系。中国学生用英语写作时大多欠缺这方面的考虑,结果在英语写作中,学生由于受汉语写作惯性思维的影响,很容易在内容挖掘方面进行汉语思维,而不严格地按英语格式用事实论证的方法。因而写出中式英语作文。

2、词汇问题

按照《大学英语教学大纲》(修订本)的要求,学生参加四级考试的词汇量在3600-4200之间,其中积极词汇量在2300左右。但许多学生却达不到《大纲》的要求,他们在写英语作文时往往由于词汇量有限而使作文显得过于单

一、缺乏新意。有的学生虽然在作文中为了避免重复能够用一些同义词,但也会由于用词不当而使作文出现错误。有些学生在作文中则不能正确拼写表达时所用的词汇。所有这些都会大大限制思想的表达和写作能力的发展。

3、缺乏语篇的连贯性

一篇好的英语文章,其结构应该是非常严谨的。这种严谨性体现在标题(title)、中心思想(mainidea)、主题句(topicsentence)和细节(details)之间的层层的联系上,即细节要围绕着主题句进行论述,主题句要紧扣中心思想,中心思想又不能偏离标题。然而许多学生在写作中不会使用主题句,或文中的主题句不明确。逻辑思维能力不强,观点片面且无内在联系,文不对题,无法构成一个完整、连贯、质量较高的篇章。

4、缺乏想象力

在写作中,笔者发现尽管学生头脑中积累了一些表象材料,但由于写作时,学生不能充分发挥想象力,积极性不能被很好地激活,头脑中的表象无法及时地显象出来,结果作文内容空洞,缺乏具体、生动的事实,使人读起来如同嚼蜡,使文章索然无味。

5、文化差异的影响

语言是文化的产物,是文化的重要组成部分,语言使文化得以发展和传播,文化又渗透着语言结构的各个组成部分。文化对语言的影响主要表现在语音语法、词汇等方面。其中,文化对词汇的影响最大、最明显。例如“狗”一词在:汉语中的意思多为贬义词,汉语中常有“狗急跳墙”、“痛打落水狗”等词来形容恶人。而在英语中相对应的“dog”一词却多为褒义词,例如,“luckydog”在英语中指的是幸运儿的意思。对学生来说,写作中如果忽略了一些词所具有的文化内涵,势必会导致表达上的失误。

二、大学英语写作课教学中教学策略与学习策略

当代认知心理学家指出：没有任何教学目标比“使学生成为独立的、自主的、高效的学习者”更重要。联合国教科文组织总干事纳依曼阐述道：“今天教育内容的百分之八十以上都应该是方法„„方法比事实更重要”。因此，教会学生学习，传授有效的学习策略，已被当前教育界视为提高学习效率的有效途径及减轻学生负担，大面积提高教学质量的有效措施。这就是说，在课堂上如何把教学策略与学习策略有效运用就成了一个非常重要的课题。下面我就怎样让学生积极参与到写作课中来，也就是如何运用一些教学策略和学习策略来提

高写作课的效果作一个介绍。

1、提供同类范文

我们以记叙文的写作课为例。教师在上课前可以先准备好两篇记叙文。这两篇记叙文的写作方式是不一样的：一篇是按正叙来写的，另一篇则是按倒叙来写的；一篇以第一人称叙述，另一篇则以第三人称叙述。上课一开始老师就发给学生们这两篇文章，让他们快速去浏览一遍，找出两篇文章写作方式上的不同之处，学生之间可以相互讨论、合作得出结论。学生如果一时找不出来可以采取诱导、启发等方式让学生去发现。学生给出答案后，教师对答案的对错作一个说明，然后对这两篇文章写作方式的不同再作一个总结，这样通过学生自己寻找和老师的点拨、说明、总结就能给学生一个有关记叙文写作的总体印象，在这个过程中也训练了学生的观察力和分析问题的能力。教师给学生一些问题，让学生带着这些问题再去读这两篇文章。这些问题涵盖了记叙文的五要素：where，what，when，who，why．在第一遍阅读的基础上，学生应该很快能找出这五个问题的答案，教师再告诉学生这是英文记叙文写作中的五要素并对这五要素作一个解释、说明。

以上这个步骤中我们运用了认知策略，认知策略是指学生为了完成具体学习任务而采取的步骤和方法,除了认知策略，我们还运用了情意策略。情意策略主要包括下面四个方面：动机、信心、坚持、激情，还有合作。教师在这两个步骤中运用了阅读课教学和写作课教学相结合的策略，使写作课摆脱了以往只讲写作练习的枯燥模式。

2、实战演练

给定学生一个题目，让学生集中一段时间思考，即头脑风暴法。这个方法放在教学上就是指在一段时间内使学生的大脑就某一主题进行密集的想象和思考，即把他们看到这个题目后展开丰富的想象，然后把在他们脑海中出现的，无论是单词、词组还是句子都统统写在 草稿纸上。这些写下来的东西在写文章的时候不一定都能用到，接下去还有一个去粗取精的过程。针对草稿纸上写下的单词、词组、和句子，画出一个树形图，这个树形图比更直观，更方便下面的写作。为了说得明白一点，我举一个例子，假设我们要写的记叙文的题目是： Myfirstdayincollege，我们在可能会写下下列词或词组：date、weather、happy、anxious、beautiful university、high buiding、laughter、colorful flowers、friendly clamates、helpful teacher、dream„„现在我们要做的就是把有用的词找出来。给学生一定的时间让他们自己去写文章。很多学生在等级考试之后都会向我诉苦，说他们写作文的时候感觉时间不够，最后结尾部分草草了事。所以平时训练最好就给他们半个小时时间，训练他们的写作速度。

在这一步骤中运用了提取信息的策略和实践性学习策略。记忆的关键问题不在于贮存，而在于提取。提取信息的策略包括了分析和综合的策略、比较和归类的策略、具体化策略、归纳与演绎的策略等。这些策略的获得会使英语写作质量提高到更高的层次。

3、批改策略

学生写完文章之后，老师不要急于把作文本子收走，十分认真地在他们的本子上圈圈点点，把每个语法错误都很尽责地改好。老师一手包办的结果就是学生这次犯的错误，下次写的时候还会犯，因为印象不深刻。所以最好的方式就是学生写完作文后，同桌对调改。改完之后以四到六个人为一组，讨论里面出现的错误。一般来讲，学生的错误有些是差不多的，所以这么一讨论，别人的错误就是一面镜子，照出了自己的不足。学生通过自己讨论，对自己的错误印象就会深刻得多，这对与写作能力的提高很有帮助。老师在这个过程中起一个引导和解惑作用就可以了。当然，学生改完后老师还是应该把作文本子收上来，免得有学生误改，下次上的时候再把这次的错误给总结一遍。

在这个步骤中我们主要运用了两个策略：元认知策略以及情意策略中的合作策略。合作策略上面已经提到过了，下面我们说一说元认知策略。元认知策略通俗地说就是对自己地学习活动进行反思的策略。许多研究都证明元认知策略对提高外语学习者的效率有着重要意义。学习者的学习是否成功在很大程度上取决于元认知策略使用的成败。文秋芳教授在调查传统与非传统学习方法时发现，对学习成绩起关键作用的变量之一是学生的自我管理策略，而该策略的核心是自我反思与评价能力。所以认识元认知策略的重要性，有效地运用元认知策略对自己的学习活动进行自我管理、自我监控及自我评估很有必要。

每个学生都想提高自己的英语成绩，那就很有必要掌握一些学习策略，提高学习效率和质量；其实很多策略平时我们无意识当中已经在运用了，但这远远不够，我们应不断强化这些策略。英语老师也应多方运用一些教学方法，增加课堂的趣味性，激发学生的学习激情。

参考文献：

1、董宏乐：《概念语法隐喻与英文写作能力的提高》，《国外外语教学》,2002年第3期；

2、左年念：《外语作文评阅与学生写作能力提高之间的关系》，《外语教学与研究》，2002年第5期；.

3、杨淑娴：《英语写作成功者与不成功者在策略使用上的差异》，《外语界》,2002年第3期；.

4、熊美华：《论英语写作课的教学策略和模式》，《赣南师范学院学报》,2001年第2期；

5、叶依群：《影响大学英语写作的因素及对策》，《合肥工业大学学报》,2002年第9期。

推荐第5篇：写作课教案

写作3 授课时间：18周 学时：每周4学时

一、教学目标与要求

在大一写作课的基础上，保持其科学性、延续性、稳定性，形成写作课的教学体系，培养学生逐步掌握并写出舞台剧本或影视剧本。

二、重点与难点

从故事写作（从生活中提炼到素材积累，再到学会结构故事），到独幕剧、单本剧写作的全过程（开端、发展、高潮、结尾）。

夯实独幕剧写作基础，训练好戏剧、影视剧作的开端与高潮的写作。

三、教学方法、手段（课堂讲授、讨论、实验）

每个时段突出一个重点，以学生实践为主，辅以观摩，阅读文学、戏剧、影视作品。

培养学生的观察能力，想象能力，综合能力及写作能力，以培养学生素质为中心，组织读书小组，在规定时间内读完指定书目；每周背诵一首古今中外诗词。

四、

五、参考资料（含参考书、文献或网络等）

（英）阿契尔《剧作法》，（美）劳逊《戏剧与电影的剧作理论与技巧》， （美）悉德·菲尔德《电影剧本写作基础》，宋家岭《电视剧编剧艺术》等

六、教学内容与课件设计

有针对性的观摩DVD

4周 重点：戏剧影视的开端

人物从类型化向个性化转变

第二单元

完成半小时至一小时的独幕剧、单本剧的初稿

有针对性的观摩舞台剧录相

5周

重点：训练场面与段落写作 第一单元

故事、激励事件 思考题、讨论题、作业

每个训练单元留2——3个作业，以便学生写出不同体裁的练习。 期中考试

第三单元

进一步讲解独幕剧、单本剧剧作技巧

观摩与解剖舞台剧与单本剧的剧作技巧

4周

对每一部作业进行讲评，总结出有共性特点的倾向性问题，进行理论辅导。

重点：情节与结构技巧

第四单元：从理论上明确独幕剧、单本剧创作过程及其技巧

观摩东西方经典剧目的演出录相

4周 修改、完善每一部作品

重点：从创作思想到剧作技巧进行总结性阐述，观摩经典作家的作品，借鉴他们的创作道路。

期末考试

1周

选出优秀作品与待修改的作品，进行一学期总结，推荐给分校剧社演出及刊物发表。

推荐第6篇：写作课 教案

写作课——教案

一、教学目的：

1．掌握人物描写的基本方法。（肖像、动作、语言、心理、神态）

二、教学重点：

1．语言描写、动作描写 2．如何让语言贴切

三、教学方法：

1．读写结合，以读促写。先仿写短文，再写整篇文章 2．寓教于乐，以活动促写作，让学生体会写作的乐趣

五、课时安排：一课时

六、教学过程： ●创设情境，导入新课

在上课之前让我们大家先来看一幅图画（展示图画）。请老师和同学们猜猜这幅图画上的人物：他的年龄是多少。（大家竞猜）

这是快50来岁的武打巨星——李连杰。为什么近50岁的李连杰，看起来只有二三十岁的样子了？这是因为经过了包装和打扮。俗话说，人靠衣装马靠鞍，三分人才七分打扮。经过包装、打扮，人漂亮了年轻了。但要怎样包装打扮才会漂亮？今天我们就来学习怎样把作文里的人物打扮得漂漂亮亮的一些方法。

板书课题：生动的描写——让你的人物丰满亮丽（点出课题）

●介绍描写手法

1．肖像描写

设计1：“同学们，我们首先来学习肖像描写。有谁可以告诉我肖像指的是什么呢？” （学生开始发言）

明确：这是对人物外形的描述，包括人物的身姿、容貌、神情、服饰以及随身器物(如孙悟空的金箍棒、张飞的丈八蛇矛)等。描述肖像，是为了使人能由表及里地看出人物的生活经历、身份境遇、性格特征、内心世界，所以要抓住最具个性特征、最能表现人物内在特点的地方，切忌面面俱到，同时还要注意描写顺序及所发生的变化，最终只画出一个“人”的标准像。

举例：

（1）铁匠是个大个儿，当地首屈一指的大个儿，两个肩头长满了肌肉疙瘩，面孔和肩膀被炉火和锤子迸起的铁屑炽染得黝黑。他脑门方方的，一簇乱蓬蓬浓黑的头发下面，一双孩子气的蓝色大眼睛，钢一样明亮。他颔骨宽大，发出笑声和喘息声来，就像他那巨大的风箱在狂欢和呼啸。

（2）他敞着怀，露出宽厚的胸脯，每一下，肋部便显现出久经锻炼的钢筋铁骨般的肋条。他身子向前一倾，猛地一下，把铁锤抡下来，就这样片刻不停地、灵便而持续地晃动着身体，肌肉紧张而有力地伸展收缩；铁锤按照一个有规则的圆圈环转，迸起点点火星，留下条条光尾。

设计2：“来看看以上两个例子，我们一起说说这两段话是怎样描写主人公的啊„„” （教室与学生互动，共同探讨） 2.动作描写。

（1）判断一个人，主要不是看他的声明，他自称如何如何，而是要看他的行为，看他做什么，怎样做。“做什么”，“怎样做”，这就构成了一个人在具体条件下的具体行动。描述行动是人物描述最有力的手段，因为这最能显示人物的思想和个性。

设计1：“如果没有“大闹天官”，没有“景阳岗打虎”，没有“三拳打死镇关西”，孙悟空、武松、鲁智深的形象恐怕要大为逊色。所以，行动描写在刻画人物时是非常重要的一点，大家一定要多多联系、多多运用。”

（2）动作描写应掌握两个原则：

一、人物性格应当从他自己的行动里流露出来；

二、人物的行动应当经过选择，足以表现人物的性格；

三、要注意人物行动的生动性和典型性。所谓生动性，指的是作者不仅要写出人物在做什么，而且要写出他怎样做。所谓典型性，则指的是作者要写出人物为什么这样做，而不那样做。

举例：

他用消毒牙签在自己的口腔内侧壁上粗暴地刮了几下，把牙签上附有碎屑的一端放在载玻片上的生理盐水中轻轻地涂抹几下。我看见他前后动作如此之大忍不住笑出声来。他没有理会我，而是专心致志地用镊子夹起盖玻片，以35°角缓缓地盖到生理盐水上，然后就拿出稀碘液，开始给标本染色。„„进入最后一个程序，他用吸水纸从盖玻片的另一侧吸引，使染液浸润标本的全部。“完成！”他长呼了一口气。„„ 3．语言描写

（1）言为心声，描述人物语言，能直接反映人物的思想和性格，能自然地揭示人物身份以及人物之间的关系。即使同样内容的话，不同身份、不同文化背景、不同性格的人，说出来也会不一样。有一个同学做过这样的观察：马路边，一个个体自行车修理摊刚开张，主人是个瘸子。一位老工人见了说： “残疾人有这个本事，难得!唉，天无绝人之路啊!”一个待业青年见了，说法不一样：“天不灭曹，该他有碗饭吃!我们四肢俱全倒还不如他呢!”一位街道老太太的感想又不同：“老天爷饿不死瞎眼雀儿。”三种说法都有同情主人的意味，但老工人更多赞赏，待业青年有点不服，老太太只是可怜；在表述上都用了格言谚语，却反映了不同的风格。

不同人物的语言表现了什么样的心理？

①没什么大不了的，胜败乃兵家常事，何况只差一分，下次准赢。

②哎，我早就说过，他们有高度，有技术，什么都比咱们强，只差一分已是万幸了。 ③都怪可恶的裁判，要不是他吹“黑哨”，最后赢的肯定是我们。

④输都输了，说什么都没用了，最要紧的是分析失败的原因，争取下次打败他们。 ⑤输了赢了与我无关，反正我不喜欢篮球。 ⑥都怪我，如果不是我漏人，我们肯定不会输。

（2）人物语言的描写要符合人物的年龄、经历、身份、文化教养等特点。人物语言的描写力求反映人物的特征，成功的对话描写，不仅要符合人物的身份、年龄、职业等特点，还要能反映出人物的思想感情，表现出人物的性格特征。语言描写应求简洁，切忌拖泥带水。

4．心理描写。

(1)这是对人物在一定情境中心理活动的描述，如思想、感情、愿望、体验等。人物的言行，包括人物的穿着打扮，无不受思想的支配，所以写言行实际上也是间接地揭示人物的心理。如果直接深入到人物的内心去描述，那就是直接描述。直接描述心理，常用“他想”的形式，描述者把人物所思所想直接标出，一般要加引号。如果转化为写、说者的口吻，就不能再用引号了。通过梦境描写也可以展示人物的心理。日有所思，夜有所梦。梦境不仅可以表现人物易于觉察的心理活动，还可以把他的潜意识表现出来。此外，心理描述也可以通过人物的日记、书信来进行。

(2)举例：这是我第一次上台演讲，第一次一个人站在全校师生的面前，第一次„„我害怕，真的。就这样，我带着恐惧与害怕两个形影不离的“朋友”走向了讲台。当我艰难地抬起头时，我看见了台下黑糊糊的一片脑袋。我用颤抖的双手举起了早已被我汗水浸湿的演讲稿。我努力地试着张嘴，我努力地让自己出声。呵呵，我觉得自己很可笑，因为我做不到。千万只小兔子在我心里狂跳，我像掉进了万丈悬崖，大块的石头压得我无法呼吸。我觉得自己像被什么粘住了一样，一动不动，豆大的汗珠放肆地流淌着。看着台下一双双疑惑的眼睛，一种无色的液滴在我眼眶中酝酿、打转。我转过身，正要跑下台，我只看见我的班主任在对我微笑，并点了一下头。她只是轻轻地点了一下，轻得可能连她自己都感觉不到，可是我感觉到了，那个动作好似给我传达了某种信息，传送了某种力量。我也使劲地点了点头，再次转过身，向全场微笑。

●总结与作业

1.小结：如果我们在描写人物的时候能够细致的观察、抓住特征、合理想象、运用方法、适当扩展，这样我们作文中的人物一定会丰满亮丽，活起来。

2.接下来布置作文：请描写班上的某位同学或某位课任老师，写一篇600字以上的整篇作文。题目自拟。

推荐第7篇：写作课教案

习作内容 ：1.学习写建议书。 课时安排：2习作要求]

1、仔细观察周围的情况，如周围的环境、少年儿童活动场所等，发表自己的看法，学写建议书。

2、格式正确，内容清楚具体。课时安排：两课时习作指导

一、激趣导入：

1、谈话：政教处决定举行盛大的歌舞联欢会，让我们全校两千多名少年儿童欢聚一堂，狂欢节日，可遗憾的是由于学校仅有的且不像样的一个看台被“知识殿堂”的雕塑所占据，没有活动场地，狂欢不得不被取消。看来同学们很扫兴吧！那你们有什么想说的吗？

2、学生自由发表意见。

二、激活思维，拓展建议范围

1、师述：

你们想给学校提建议？很好。你们的建议不仅会改善你们的活动环境，而且为后来的学生创造了良好的环境，真是意义深远啊！不过在我们的学习、生活、休闲、娱乐等方面是否还存在一定的问题，还有你想建议改善的地方吗？

2、学生自由发言，扩展学生思路。（3分钟） 1）周围环境的污染； 2）社区购物的不方便；

3）少年儿童健康活动的场所太少；

3、过渡

这么多方面存在有问题，同学们的建议又这么好，为以示慎重，那我们就以建议书的形式把它提出来吧，不过，该怎样写建议书呢？（请同学们翻开课本94页）

三、激发学习需求，明确看样写建议书。（6分钟）

1、自主阅读“习作”。（2分钟）

2、学生总结写法格式，教师归纳板书。（4分钟）

1）根据建议书的内容先在第一行中间写上“建议书”或“关于„„的建议”作为标题。

2）另起一行顶格写上称呼。建议书是写给谁的称呼就是谁。

3）然后另起一行空两格写正文，写清楚存在的问题、产生问题的原因及解决问题的具体建议。

4）最后写上提建议人的姓名和建议的日期。

四、交流搜集个样，激发写作冲动。（3分钟）

1、交流。

2、教师小结：

从同学们的发言中老师深深是感受到了同学们对我们社会生活的关注，也深深为同学们作为社会小主人的责任感所感动，为了我们的生活更加美好，我们认真诚恳地提出我们的建议吧！

五、学生拟写建议书。

六、师生评议建议书。

七、学习小结。

同学们提出的建议很有价值，希望同学们更加努力学习，更加关注我们生活的社会为创造美好的明天而努力奋斗。

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习作内容：2.写一个熟悉的人 课时安排：2习作要求 １．训练学生通过一两件具体事例，写出人物特点来；学习通过人物外貌、语言、动作等描写突出人物特点的方法

２．作文指导过程中，渗透人的高尚品格的思想教育习作指导

一、审文题明确要求

１．今天这节作文指导课，我们上《基础训练６》的第６题出示小黑板：通过一两件事写一个你熟悉的人，要注意写出人物的特点要求学生默读文题，想想这次作文的要求是什么？

２．这次作文要我们写什么？（写人）写什么人？（写熟悉的人）写几个熟悉的人？（写一个熟悉的人）（师板书习作题）要我们特别注意写出这个人的什么？（写出人物的特点）

二、明白人物特点、拓宽学生思路 １．写出人物的特点是这节课的训练重点什么是人物的特点呢？特点就是一个人与众不同的地方不同的人有不同的特点请说说你熟悉的人有什么特点生自由说，师注意生说的是哪方面的特点

２． 师：现在你能说说你知道人还有哪些方面的特点吗？

（生说）一个人的特点有不少，有„„大家要选最突出的特点来写 品质：助人为乐、大公无私、热爱劳动、工作负责„„

性格：倔强、爱发脾气、好强、爱说爱笑„„

兴趣爱好：爱唱歌、爱集邮、爱踢球、爱种花„„生齐读

三、扣例文借鉴写法

１．师：找准了一个人的特点，怎样写出他（她）的特点呢？

四、列提纲即兴练说 出示小黑板：

１．你准备写谁？他有什么特点？（指一行同学说）

２．请一学生上来按照小黑板上规定的题目、特点、事件、着重描写的方面等项写提纲，其它同学在下面列提纲

３.请演板学生说提纲，评议是否能写出人物特点；请写各方面人物特点的同学说提纲，评议是否能写出了人物特点

五、总结

１.复习一下写作方法，看黑板，跟老师说：外貌抓特征，行动要细致，语言要恰当，神态、心理要真实，具体事例一两件，人物如同站眼前

２.学生自己读一遍

３.师：这节课，我们学习了用一两件具体事例写出人物特点的作文方法，只是起了一个抛砖引玉的作用，以后写人的作文大家还可以多运用，多实践下节课请大家完成这篇习作

六、阅读导引

好友多多

多多是我最要好的朋友他的脑袋圆圆的，浓眉毛没，大眼睛，像卡通人物蜡笔小新（简练，抓住了特点）

多多喜欢打乒乓球，我们都叫他“旋球王”“旋球王”的旋球那可是真“旋”！只要球一出手，就象长眼睛似的，“刷刷”地直向你冲过来，可只要一落到桌面上就会立刻改变了方向你明明看着往左，它却往右飞了等你一接球，才发现扑了个空这样你就输定了每次他赢了球，他都会张开他的大嘴，大叫一声（有声有色，真是写作高手）

我真羡慕他（简洁，自然） 【评语：】小作者写了好朋友的样子，爱好，特别突出了人物的特点，个性非常鲜明所以，话虽不多，却很吸引人

1．学习运用

⑴用波浪线画出“一„„就„„”的句子，体味人物的动作变化并说上一两句话，用上“一„„就„„”

⑵看点评，学写开头和结尾

⑶多多有什么特点？你熟悉的人有些什么特点？如：爱学习、爱劳动、爱帮助人、爱看书、爱清洁、有礼貌，做事认真，幽默，粗心、开朗、大方„„

2．拟题导引 3．写法索引

①抓住人物特点：一人一事，不要面面俱到

②选择典型事例：重点部分要详写，注意把人物的语言，神态，动作，内心写细致写具体

③按一定顺序写：“总分结构”开头概括品质，可结合肖像描写重点部分贯穿人物活动。

4习作内容：3.写自己崇拜的人

课时安排：2习作目标

⒈训练学生写自己喜欢或崇拜的人，提高学生写人的能力；学会通过人物的外貌、动作、语言、神态表现人物的特点，通过具体事例表现人物的品质。

2、继续锻炼、培养学生修改文章的能力。习作指导

一、导入语

⒈在日常生活中，我们接触过许多人：父母、同学、老师„„通过书刊、电视等也了解了很多人：革命前辈、英雄模范、时代精英„在这些人中，相信大家一定有自己喜欢或者崇拜的一个人，今天，我们就来写一写他（她）吧。只要大家好好听，用心想，认真写，说不定你写的作文还能上报呢。

⒉指名若干学生汇报。

⒊教师小结：听得出来，大家心中都有自己喜欢或者崇拜的人，他（她）们不仅仅是我们身边的同学、老师、朋友、亲人„„还有神话传说中的人物，体育健将、影视名人等。

[话题切入一定要结合学生的生活实际，但也不要拘泥于身边的人，要激发学生写作的兴趣，打开学生的思路，让每一位学生都有话可说，为下面学生进一步说做好铺垫。]

二、说说自己喜欢或者崇拜的人

（一）导语：

前两天，就让同学们预习了本次习作要求，大家都作了相应的准备。下面就把你喜欢或崇拜的人给大家介绍一下吧。

（二）提出说的要求：

1、想好要介绍的人有什么特点，他（她）的哪些方面表现出了这些特点，他（她）长什么样？说话有趣吗？有没有在说话、做事方面和他人不一样的地方等等。

2、重点讲清你为什么喜欢或者崇拜他（她），他（她）的哪件事你喜欢或者崇拜？你崇拜他（她）什么？

3、谁都可以，只要是你喜欢或者崇拜的人都行。

（三）、练习说。

1、先想后说。

2、先四人小组练习说，然后选出一名代表准备参加班内比赛。

3、进行班内比赛，一人说，其余评分。

4、师出示评分标准：（满分5分）

a:能抓住特点介绍人物外貌，给人印象深刻。（1分）

b：能把人物的事例介绍具体，从动作、语言、神态几方面来展示人物特点。（2分）

c：事例较典型，能有力突出自己的喜欢或崇拜。（1分）。 d：能按顺序、有条理、较流畅地介绍清楚。（1分）

5、根据学生说的情况，给以相应评判。

6、选出本次说人物的冠军。

[在此环节中，要尽力引导学生将思路打开，通过比赛进一步激发学生习作的欲望，多层次、多渠道地拓宽选材思路，使写作内容走向开放.其次要把握学

5 生的发言，在文章的详略安排、内容的择取等方面给予一些精要的提示，这也是安排比赛环节的初衷，使学生更易于接受，少走弯路。]

三、根据所说，打草成文。

（一）、师相机点拨。

a)导语：把我们喜欢或崇拜的人介绍给大家是一件多么让人愉悦和满足的事情啊！大家拿起笔来，把你心中最喜欢或者最崇拜的他（她）写下来吧！

b)请大家对照评分标准写好本文。

（二）、生列提纲，师巡视。及时给予个别辅导。

四、修改习作交流评议

1、反复朗读细心修改 ⑴、自主修改。 有一句话叫：“文不厌改。”这就是说好文章是改出来的。请同学们把自己写的这篇作文认真地读几遍，把错别字改正过来，把不通顺的地方改通顺，把需要增加的内容加上去，需要删除的地方划掉。

⑵、相互修改。

自己修改满意了，把作文读给同桌听，征求一下别人的意见。

2、交流习作师生评议 ⑴朗读习作。

请愿意将自己的习作读给同学们听的学生读，其他同学注意听，看他哪些地方写得好？哪些地方还需要修改？

⑵学生自评。

让读习作的学生自我评价，体验习作给自己带来的快乐。 ⑶师生评价。

教师与学生一起参与习作的评价，要引导公正客观地评价他人的习作，分享他人习作的快乐。

6习作内容：4学写读后感 课时安排：2习作要求：

1．加深认识、了解读后感这种文体。 2．进一步明确读后感的基本要求和写法。

3．积累将感受写具体的方法，并运用这些方法修改自己的习作。习作指导：

一、出示一篇例文，加深认识读后感和学习读后感的基本写法。

（一）教师出示例文，学生读例文，思考：每一个自然段主要写了什么。勤能补拙

——《爱因斯坦成功的秘诀》读后感

（二）学生反馈，教师检查。

1、刚才我们一起品尝一道“名人招牌菜”，这是一篇什么文章？（读后感）

2、什么叫读后感？（写读后感，就是在读过一篇文章或一本书之后，把获得的感受、体会以及受到的教育、启迪等写下来。）

3、品一品：你觉得这道“美食”怎么样？好在哪里？ 评一评：请你给这道“美食”打分（满分100分）。

4、加深写读后感的基本要求和方法。

（首先一定要读懂文章，领会中心。如果做不到这一点，“感”从何来呢？其次就是要准确选择感受点。读完一篇文章，不同的人会有不同的感受。要选择自己感受最深又觉得有话可写的一点来写。）

5、举例：就拿“滥竽充数”的故事来说吧，我就有两个感受“一个是没有真本领，早晚要“露馅”；另一个就是我们不能给不学无术的人提供吃“大锅饭”的机会。我觉得第一个更贴近我们小学生的实际生活。

6、师小结：一篇好的读后感一定要有真情实感，要联系实际，写出自己真切的感受。而且表达方式也可以多样化，最常见的就是先简述原文，然后谈自己的感受。还可以先写实际生活中的事情，再联系到文章内容，然后谈自己的感想。但写的时候要注意上下文的过渡，还有一种方法，就是将感想与文章内容穿插起来写。一边结合内容，一边谈感想，有点夹叙夹议的味道。

二、读优美词语，积累词语。

学无止境

掩卷长思

手不释卷

茅塞顿开 孜孜不倦

翻来覆去

催人泪下

扪心自问 惭愧不已

难以忘怀

振奋人心

催人奋发 要求：读准确，读流利，懂意思，快速记。

三、阅读美文——流沙岁月

（一）、学生阅读，读完后与小组的同学一起聊一聊：

1、请概括这个故事的主要内容，清楚地写出自己感受的或想到的。

2、你觉得自己是一只正在酝酿“珍珠”的河蚌，还是一只贪玩的河蚌？

（二）读了《流沙岁月》一文，你一定有很多感触吧？心有所思，就诉诸笔端，一吐为快吧，把你的感受淋漓尽致地写出来，可模仿下面的题目自己拟定题目。

1、准备着，时刻准备着 ——读《居里夫人》有感

2、《眼睛的话》读后感

3、

同是除夕夜

——《卖火柴的小女孩》读后感

你拟的题目是

四、学生习作，教师巡逻指导。（第二课时）

五、点评习作，学生再次修改习作。附例文及故事：

勤能补拙

——《爱因斯坦成功的秘诀》读后感

“成功之花，人们只惊异它开时的明艳，却不知当时它的芽，浸透了奋斗的汗水，洒遍了牺牲的血雨。”读了《爱因斯坦成功的秘诀》这篇文章，我深受启发。这句话像火花一样，闪耀在我心间。

成功，是一个多么令人神往的字眼，可是成功的秘诀到底在哪里呢？爱因斯坦对成功的秘诀做了科学的概括：w=x+y+z,即：成功等于艰苦劳动、正确的方法及少说空话。这也正是爱因斯坦的成功之道。我认为，这三个条件中艰苦的劳动，即“勤”是首要的条件。因为勤能补“拙”。

爱因斯坦小时侯也不是超人的“天才”，甚至有人说他是个“笨蛋”。可是促使“笨蛋”成为“天才”的，不正是这个“勤”字吗？爱因斯坦深信天才出于勤奋，他用勤奋去弥补自己的“笨拙”。为了彻底弄清一个问题，他比别人多花几倍的时间，终于用汗水浇开了成功之花，为科学技术的发展做出了巨大的贡献。

对于“勤能补拙”，我也有深深的体会。我有个朋友叫源源，我俩一般大，经常在一起玩。有人说我比她聪明，平时背一篇课文，我总比她先会背。背完后把书一仍，就算完事；源源却拿着书一直在背，直到彻底背熟为止。刚开始写作文，我也每次都比她写得好。后来，她对我说，她一定要把作文水平提高。因为她平时不怎么爱说话，所以我不相信她作文会有多大的进步。但她不管这些，坚持每天写日记，三天写一篇作文。经过一段时间的努力，她的作文水平果然提高了。

这使我认识到：“勤能补拙”，是一条颠扑不破的真理。我们每一个人都应该用勤奋去弥补自己的笨拙，用汗水浇开那美丽的成功之花。

流沙岁月

一群河蚌在一只老河蚌的带领下，在清亮的河水中，欢快地散步。那是一个春日的早晨，暖暖的太阳光照在河水中，微风轻拂，河面上仿佛洒下了一层金子。那是一群年轻的河蚌，它们光洁鲜亮，朝气蓬勃，充满了青春的快乐。就好像从前的我们，背着书包，唱着歌谣，欢快地走在上学的路上一样，未来的道路完全被欢乐的心情照亮。

忽然，在一道河湾里，老河蚌停下来，她回过头语重心长地对小河蚌们说：“孩子们，你们不能光顾着玩，你们应该去捡一粒沙子了。”那副神情，很像当年为我们留作业的那位女老师，脸上既有希望，也有忧虑。

小河蚌们按照老河蚌的要求去做了，它们纷纷捡了一粒沙子，深埋进身体内，就像种下了一粒种子，虔诚地等待它发芽、开花、结果。而那时节，老师也正给我们讲课，语文、数学、物理、化学„„我们把它们捡起来，存在脑海里，就像河蚌们捡的那粒沙子。

可是，一只贪玩的河蚌，不知道是没听见，还是没把老河蚌的话当一回事，在大家捡沙子时，他没有去捡，却也蒙混过关了。就像年少的我们，淘气，逃学，抄别人的作业，篡(cuàn)改通知书上的分数和名次。

8 岁月像那条河的河水，在不知不觉中悄悄地流走了。

很长时间过去了，小河蚌们长大了，甚至它们当中年龄稍长的，有的已像当年那只老河蚌了。河蚌们纷纷打开自己的蚌壳，在里面竟然藏着一颗颗珍珠，它们发着亮，放着光，把满河的水照得通明光亮。那粒小小的沙子，经过时光的洗涤，岁月的磨砺，汗水的灌溉，长年累月的心血，竟然变成了美丽晶莹的珍珠！河蚌们相互拥抱着，欢笑着，一边流着泪，一边庆贺着自己的成果。是啊，当我们一生的酿造，终成醇厚的美酒时，我们又何尝不是如此呢？

然而，就在大家欢呼雀跃之际，那只曾因贪玩而未去捡沙子的河蚌，悄悄地溜走了。没有沙子，他的壳中便没有那颗珍珠，他用什么去庆贺呢？他流泪了，很后悔，可此时衰老已爬上了他的额头，想回头重捡起那份逝去的时光，为时已晚。

当岁月的沙子，同样从你我的指缝中流过时，别人都淘出了金子，而我们却连一粒沙子都没有留住，我们又怎能不痛哭？

9习作内容：5.学写演讲稿 课时安排：2习作要求

1．让学生在交际中学会怎样动之以情、晓之以理地劝说别人，了解规劝语言的特点，体会养成良好的行为习惯的重要性。

2．让学生学会写发言稿，体会发言稿在生活中的作用。

3．继续引导学生练习把自己的意思表达具体清楚，把句子写通顺。习作指导：

一、了解发言稿

1．课前让学生收集发言稿，如：班委竞选发言稿、班队会发言稿等，课堂上让学生在全班朗诵自己所收集的发言稿。

2．师在全班朗诵课前搜集到的发言稿。如：开学典礼上校长的发言、值周老师的发言新生入队时新生代表的发言，教师节表彰的先进教师的发言，厂长任职时的任职演说。以此调动起学生的经验积累，使学生从感性上了解发言稿，体会到发言稿的作用。

二、明确发言稿的写作特点。

1．请写过发言稿的学生讲一讲他们在写某一发言稿的时候要写进哪些内容？（如：为竞选准备的发言稿，要讲清楚为什么竞选这个岗位，自己有哪些优势，如果竞选成功怎样为同学服务）

2．师举例讲一讲在写某一发言稿的时候要写进哪些内容。

3．请学生根据以上例子归纳总结发言稿的写作特点：发言稿的内容要根据具体需要、具体环境而定。（师予以帮助）

三、尝试习作。

1．让学生根据习作提示自己选择写作情景。

2．明确习作要求：①内容具体、适合当时需要；②感情真实；③语句通顺。 3．学生根据自选情景写作。

四、评改、交流

1．全班学生互评互改。

评价方向：不必拘泥于字数多少，以符合当时的发言要求为评价标准，以发言稿内容是否具体、语言是否通顺为评价重点。

2．教师根据巡视观察指名几个学生读习作草稿，让学生结合评改中出现的典型问题自己修改作文草稿。

3．小组交流评改。

4．教师评改后小结作文情况。

10习作内容：6写想象作文 课时安排：

2习作要求：

1引导学生展开想象和幻想，激活学生的思维，丰富学生习作的素材。

2引导学生通过定向阅读．让学生领悟写假设类想象作文的方法。

3采用扶放结合的方法，进步培养学生学写假设类想象作文的能力。

4培养学生独立构思和认真修改习作的良好习惯。习作指导：

有位作家曾经说过：“一个会回忆，会联想，会想像的人，才是会构思的人。”因此，写好想像作文，才能提高学生的想像能力，可是，想象与胡编乱造不同，要在现实的基础上，联系生活展开合理的想象。

一、启发谈话，激发兴趣

在学生美好的心灵世界里一定装满了一个个美好的愿望，当你看到孙悟空变幻无穷的非凡本领时，也许会想，假如我会七十二变该多好；当你学习感到疲倦时，也许会想，假如我是一片自由自在的云该多好；当你看到病魔夺去一个个人的生命时，也许会想，假如我是一名神医该多好„„让你的愿望今天就能实现，当然是不可能的。然而，如果将你的愿望通过自己的想象和幻想，在自己的作文中成为现实是完全可能的。

二、引导走向阅读，领悟写法规律

为了帮助学生领悟假设类想象作文的写法规律，教师课前先布置学生在课前广泛收集有关假设类想象作文，并在浏览的基础上做好摘录笔记，然后组织课堂讨论，揭示其规律。

1．课堂讨论，激活记忆表象

教师布置大家课前收集、阅读了有关假想类作文，想一想：在你读过的这类文章中，哪些人或物给你留下了深刻的印象？你从中受到哪些启发呢？假设类想象作文与一般的写人、记事、写景、状物的文章有什么不同呢？

2．归纳小结，揭示写法规律

教师先组织学生讨论：你认为要写好假设类想象作文，必须把握哪几点呢？在组织学生广泛讨论的基础上，教师进行归纳小结，并揭示以下写法规律：

（1）根据自己的愿望，选择自己理想中的人或物来写。

（2）想象要大胆、合理，假设的推测是有理有据，情节要生动有趣。

（3）所写的理想中的人或物，都应当有人的思维和人的行为。

三、启发点拨，指导选材

1．启发谈话，开拓选材思路

学生写假设类想象作文，写什么都可以。如果你对流逝的时光、对古老的历史有一种“揭开谜底”的欲望，你可以把时光想象成可以倒流；如果你学习感到困倦了，你可以把自己想象成一只鸟，一条鱼，一只老鹰„„；如果你看到一位身患癌症的病人在死亡线上挣扎，你可以把自己想象成一盒药丸，一位名医„„等等。每个人的兴趣爱好不同，生活经历不一样，因此，每个人想象的内容应该是各式各样、丰富多彩的。

2．独立选材，分组互议

出示题目《假如我是„„》，让学生根据自己的兴趣、爱好、印象将题目空白处补充完整，然后引导学生分四人小组讨论，说说自己选择这个材料写的

11 理由。

四、扶放结合，培养能力

为了减缓训练的坡度，教师在指导学生写作文时，采取“根据提供材料写→独立构思表达”这一由扶到放的方法，逐步提高学生的习作能力。

1．指导学生根据提供的材料写假设类想象作文。根据《假如我是一个科学家》提供的开头：假如我是一个科学家，我将发明一些东西贡献给人类。让学生展开丰富的想象，续写成一篇完整的文章。

2．引导学生根据自己选择的材料独立构思表达 。

例文:

假如我有一支神笔

假如我像马良一样有一支神笔的话，我要画一所美丽的学校，我想把世界所有的失学儿童，带进这所宽敞的学校，让他们在这里快乐的生活、快乐的学习，让他们得到老师们的关心、帮助和爱护。

假如我有一支神笔，我要画一股清泉，让它滋润北方那干旱的大地，让万物复苏，让沙漠变成绿洲，到处百花争艳。这样，那北方的老百姓们就能看见一片生机勃勃的景象。

假如我有一支神笔，我要画一个洁净的蓝天，让飞在蓝天的鸟儿和在地上的人们能自由的呼吸，还给世界一个清晰明净的天空。

假如我有一支神笔，我要画一座座粉色的爱心房，让那些失去父母的孩子有一个温暖的家。有一个和我一样精彩的童年。

假如我有一支神笔，我要画一座美丽玩具城堡，能让所有来这里的孩子，过的无忧无虑，并拥有一颗善良的童心

当我看到父母的劳累，就想为父母们画很多很多的机器人，让天下的父母们从劳累中解脱出来，让他们也拥有一个和我们一样快乐的生活。

假如我有一支笔„„

推荐第8篇：写作课教案

小学作文课教案

（一）

教学目的：让学生了解什么是作文，如何爱上写作文，了解描写方法 教学重点：观察事物的主要特征

课时安排：45分钟左右，根据孩子实际可灵活调整 教学内容及步骤：

1、开场白：同学们，大家好，我是你们的写作老师——李老师！我的名字叫**，在上课之前，老师想问下同学们，大家心目的作文是怎样的呢？什么是作文呢？什么又是写作呢？我们对作文是这样定义的：作文是由文字组成，经过人的思想考虑，通过语言组织来表达一个主题的文体。简单的说呢，作文就是把你经历的、知道的或者想象的事情、所有你想表达的东西，以文字的方式讲述出来给别人听，也就是把句子有条理地组合起来，让别人听明白。对于我们小学生来讲，大家年纪小，生活经历少，可写的东西也就不多，同学们害怕写作文，讨厌写作文，这些情绪都是正常的，同学们不要紧张不要害怕，更不要因此而恐惧写作课。李老师会带领大家从最基本最简单的描写方法开始，让大家爱上写作文。

2、如何写作文：那如何写作文呢，写作文与说话又有所不同，我们与人说话的时候，一边想就一边说出来，即使不会写字的人，也能够流利的与人交流，因为运用的是口头语言。而写作文，是用笔写你想说的话，把口头语言变成书面的语言。说起来很复杂，其实很简单，因为老师有两把金钥匙给你们。大家猜猜是什么？一把是抓特点、写主要，一把是细细想、慢慢写。简单的说，抓特点呢，就是把两个或两个以上的事物，通过比较，比出与众不同、不一样的地方。这就是我们所说的“特点”。写作文的时候，一定要用自己的眼睛仔细去观察，去找特点。假如我们现在要写大象，不会有同学说“大象有四条腿，一对耳朵，一个尾巴„„”吧？同学都会抓住大象的特点，大象有什么特点呢？“柱子一样的腿、蒲扇似的耳朵”这样写出的文章才会生动。同学们知道了什么叫特点以后，老师就恭喜你们走进了作文王国的第一步。

慢慢写，不是让大家写得慢吞吞的，半天写不出一个字啊，而是让学生多多的想，具体的写。比如，我们写大象的耳朵，有的同学会说，大象的耳朵很大。那很大是什么概念，同学能从“大”这个词语想象到大象的样子吗？肯定是不能的！那我们怎样把大象的耳朵描写全、描写细、让没见过大象的人，看了你写的话之后，就知道它长什么样呢？这就需要细细想想大象的样子，然后慢慢写出来了，同学们应该都见过大象吧，那请同学们说说，该怎样描写呢？（同学发言）同学说“大象有一对大大的耳朵”，还有同学说“大象有一对大大的像一个蒲扇似的耳朵”，有的同学甚至写了大象走起路来耳朵“呼扇呼扇”的，这样学生在思考的过程中逐渐掌握了慢慢写的要领，在慢慢写的同时又抓住了特点。 那我们平时接触的东西，有哪些特征呢？我们又是用哪些词语来描述的？教学方式：比如老师说（1）视觉形象（眼能看到的）：整体轮廓：高、矮、胖、瘦、厚、薄、大、小；形状：平面——长方形、正方形、梯形、三角形、多边形、圆形、扇形、五角 星形等等；立体——长方体、正方体、圆锥体、棱 椎体、圆柱体、台体、球体、球冠等等

颜色：黑、赤、橙、黄、绿、青、蓝、紫、白、褐、灰、红

光泽：明亮——黑暗、鲜艳——灰暗、灿烂——阴暗、枯燥——滋润、干燥— —湿润、粗糙——细腻等等

状态：老（苍老）、嫩（娇嫩、鲜嫩）、新（崭新、全新、七成新）、旧（陈 旧、半新旧）

速度：快（迅速）——慢（缓慢） （2）触觉形象（手能摸到的）

质地：软——硬、韧——脆、坚硬—— 柔软、结实——松弛、浓稠——稀薄、粗糙——光滑、粘稠——干爽

温度：冷——热、温暖——寒冷、热— —凉、烫——冰 （3）嗅觉形象（鼻子能闻到的） 气味：香——臭

（4）味觉形象（嘴能尝到的） 味道：酸、甜、苦、辣

（5）听觉形象（耳朵能听到的）

声音：嘈杂——悦耳、大声——小声、尖叫、哭声、笑声、还有其他象声词如哈哈、嘎嘎等

二、事物特征的最基本描写方法

教学方法：拿出一个具体的事物，如动 物或植物或日常用品，让孩子按照前面 的特征顺序逐个进行描写训练，老师可以先举例子

1、用形容词

前面阐述事物特征的例词基本说都是形容词

2、用比喻句

例如：瘦得象根火柴棒；圆圆的象个皮球；红红的象火一样；鲜嫩鲜嫩的，就象刚出芽的树叶；跑得象箭一样快；等等

3、作比较

例如：小明比小林高十公分，但却要瘦很多；西瓜圆圆的，有点象皮球，可是它还穿这绿色的花衣服；等等

三、作业布置：

根据老师课上讲的内容，用描写手法，写一段两百字左右的作文，描写出李老师的外貌，和李老师上课的特点。同学们也可以在小作文中谈谈你们希望李老师在哪些地方改进。

推荐第9篇：写作课教案

A teaching plan of writing

蜀河中学

吴相珍

Teaching aims: 1.Get students to master the structure of point contrast composition.2.Make students write a point contrast composition using senior pattern.Teaching important and difficult points: 1.How to arrange a good composition of contrast.2.How to evaluate a composition.Teaching Aids: The blackboard a computer,multimedia Teaching procedures: Step 1 How to arrange a point contrast composition.1.Article structure.2.Words and sentence structure.3.Conjunction and transitional words.4.Handwriting Step 2 Introduction to the structure of the point contrast composition

1.Discuion: What should be included in the point contrast composition?

Summary: part 1: state the topic

Part 2: state the views and reasons of both parties

Part3: draw a conclusion, state the author’s opinion Step 3 Revision 1.Review key words Ask students to translate the words into English, then read and memorize them after showing the answers on the screen.2.Review some conjunction and transitional words.Step 4 Introduction to the pattern of the point contrast composition Recently We have had a heated discuion about ...（论点）.Different people have different opinions on this problem.

Most students are in favor of the idea that… .They think...（理由一）.What\'s more, they can...（理由二） However, about 35% students hold the opposite opinion.For one thing,they say that...（理由一）.For another thing, they think that...（理由二）

As far as I’m concerned, it is (not) a good idea to do...Step 5 Practice writing Ask students to write a point contrast composition according to the composition requirements.Step 6 Evaluation 1.Let students share their compositions with each other.2.Analyse the model eay.Step 7 Homework Finish and improve your composition and hand it in tomorrow.

推荐第10篇：写作课教案

第一课 我的朋友——李明

教学目标

（一）课程介绍，介绍课程的主要特色及课堂操作注意事项。

（二）范文阅读与感悟，把握人物介绍的角度。

（三）范文分析，熟悉范文内容，把握范文写作思路，掌握重要表达范例。

（四）写作实践，通过小组活动，进行语句、语段的综合写作训练。

（五）课后作文布置。课时安排：3课时 教学过程

一、导入新课

1、师生自我介绍

为初次与大家见面，我希望大家也能向我介绍一下你们自己，包括你的姓名，出生日期，平时的爱好，来自哪个国家，学汉语的时间等等。给你们三分钟，准备一下。好，这位同学由你开始好不好？（学生自我介绍）

嗯，同学们都说的非常好，通过刚才的自我介绍，我对你们的汉语水平也有了一定的了解，相信在我们的共同努力下，你们的汉语会有很大的进步。

2、课程介绍及课程的具体要求。

今天是我们的开学第一课——写作课（板书），同学们之前接触过汉语写作吗？据我了解你们之前的课程设置是看图说话和汉字读写课。其实写作课和这两门课的性质还是十分类似的。同学们对这门课不要心怀畏惧，写作课也是一门非常有趣的课，同学们能充分发挥你们的聪明才智。另外，既然是写作课，我们每堂课都会有写作任务，主要包括范文的学习与分析、写作实践训练、课后习作等等。当然许多任务，我们会在课堂上完成，不会占有大家许多的课余时间。

对大家提出几点要求：课下和课上认真阅读、熟悉和体味每一课的范文；积极主动地参与课堂讨论；注重“写”的过程，这是用汉语、学汉语的过程。期待与大家共同进步。

下面就让我们一起走进第一课：我的朋友——李明。（板书）

二、范文阅读与感悟

（一）引导学生默读一遍范文，（5分钟），一些生词可以看文下的注释。提示：对学生不明白的句子、词语等进行简单解释或说明。

加强：jiaqiang strengthen 使更强大，使程度更高。Eg：为了身体健康，我们要加强锻炼。 合作：hezuo cooperate 互相帮助，共同完成某个工作。

特别是：especially，尤其是，表示程度更深，插入语。我喜欢吃水果，特别是苹果。 同行：hang同行业的人。 多音字的考察 摄影：sheying 待：dai，stay 停留。第一声，读的长而平。

（二）教师领读一遍范文（请同学们在朗读的时候，思考这两个问题：这篇文章介绍了李明的哪几个方面，先写了什么，后写了什么）

提问：这篇文章主要介绍了李明的哪几个方面？ （课文右边有答案） 提问：这篇文章的写作顺序是什么？（即先写了什么，后写了什么？） 第一段落：姓名，国籍，出生日期，已婚。 第二段落：身份，职业，学习汉语的时间， 第三段落：兴趣和爱好 第四段落：和“我”的关系

三、范文分析

（一）解读范文《我的朋友——李明》

1.引导学生从文中查找10个问题的答案。

（给大家5分钟的时间填一下这十个问题，请同学轮流回答） （为节省时间，可建议学生不必写下来，直接在文中标注）

（二）引导学生分析文章的写作思路

1.从不同的方面介绍一个人。（在“范文阅读与感悟”环节中，已经初步涉及） 2.参考答案：李明的工作情况、李明的爱好

（三）熟悉《我的朋友——李明》中的表达范例。（教师可提前在黑板上板书重点词语或结构，一是提醒学生注意，二是为后面的环节做准备）

1.引导学生齐读范句

2.点读例句

叫....，来自.....为了......3.如果时间允许，鼓励学生运用这些重点词语或结构造句

四、写作实践

（一）小组活动I：两人一组，试一试，写一写。

1、找出语段中省略的“虽然”、“但是”、“所以”。

提示：先找出转折关系，再找出因果关系。

参考答案： 李明说他喜欢阅读和摄影。„„（虽然）在中国，（但是）李明也有这些兴趣和爱好，（所以）每个周末他都去图书馆看书，看累的时候就去拍照片。

2、用“因为„，所以„”改写句子。

提示：注意关键词“为了”（表示目的），改成因果关系的复句时，第一分句应该增加词语“要”、“想要”等。

参考答案：

因为要了解中医，加强合作，所以医院派他来中国学习汉语。

3、仿照例句，改写句子。

提示：间接引语变成直接引语，注意标点符号，人称的变化（第三人称变成第一人称）。 参考答案：

他告诉我，他们医院和中国的医院有不少联系。→ 他对我说：“我们医院和中国的医院有不少联系。”

4、模仿下面的语段，写一写你熟悉的一个人。

提示：提醒学生注意，给定语段介绍一个人的角度：职业（工作）、在哪儿工作、目的复句（为了一个目的，做一件事）。此题为开放性题目，学生只要把握住段落结构特征即可。

（二）小组活动II：两人一组，练习一下。

提示：完成此练习，一是参考给定的表格，而是参照前面的范文。根据表格内容填上合适的词语，一方面是训练学生的书面表达，另一方面是引导学生借鉴范文的某些表达格式。关于文中的省略问题，关系到汉语行文的基本规律，有时用人名全称，有时用代词指代，有时为了避免重复直接省略。

注意：关于不能省略“（大卫/他）”的地方，应该用“大卫”还是“他”，可能有一定的灵活性（存在两可的情况），教师可灵活处理。

三）小组活动III：两人一组，介绍一下。 提示：

1、根据表格内容介绍王好（人名），可参考小组活动II和范文内容。

2、互相介绍一下自己，开放性题目，引导学生互相介绍，并做简单记录。

3、提醒学生使用下列结构

„叫„，来自„；为了；V＋了＋时间＋（的）名词；特别是；跟„一起＋V

4、如有学生不能按时完成，可留作课下作业。

五、课后作文布置

我的朋友。（300字左右）下次课上交。 关于稿纸的内容安排

1.文章的题目：第一行的中间位置

2.每段的开始空出两格（两个汉字的位置）

第二课 来到中国

教学目标

（一）讲评作文。对上次作文进行总评、展示优佳表达、进行偏误分析，实事求是全面分析得与失。

（二）范文阅读与感悟，在默读与领读的基础上，体会范文《来到中国》的结构特点。

（三）范文分析，熟悉范文内容，把握范文写作思路，掌握重要表达范例。

（四）写作实践，通过小组活动，进行语句、语段的综合写作训练。

（五）课后作文布置。课时安排：3课时 教学过程

一、作文讲评

（一）总评

1、这次作业完成得怎么样？ 总体上有哪些进步？还有哪些共同的问题？

第一次作文，同学们的态度还是十分认真的，书写整齐工整，能基本按照范文的思路来写。但是对于一些表达范例还是不能熟练的运用，这需要在以后的学习中不断加强训练。

（二）优佳表达

1、一起分享学生作文中的精彩语句。

从所有学生作文中精心挑选出几个地道的汉语表达（以句子为主，也可兼顾词语表达），集中展示，一起朗读。同时可建议学生将这些表达形式写在课本的空白处。

他喜欢滑雪；周末，我们一起出去玩；我的汉语还不是很好；我们玩得很开心。

2、请学生结合老师的批改，从自己的作文中找出用词恰当、表达地道的语句，以及一些有用的常用词语、连接成分，也写在课本的空白处。

（三）偏误分析

1、从学生作文中精心挑选出几个典型的汉语偏误（包括语法、词汇、文化等），学生自己作文中的其他错误也可以在这个环节修改，集体展示这些偏误，师生一起分析、改正。可要求学生将这些典型的偏误记下来。

常一起跟他去玩；还不会用汉语交流很好的。

（四）个别指导

对学生的作文进行表扬，鼓励学生继续努力；对个别错误进行单独说明。

下面就让我们一起走进第二课：来到中国（板书）

二、范文阅读与感悟

（一）引导学生默读一遍范文，（5分钟），一些生词可以看文下的注释。

（二）请同学轮流朗读课文，对不正确的发音进行纠正，之后教师领读一遍范文。

（三）对学生不明白的句子、词语、一些表达范式进行解释说明，引导学生运用这些词语、范式进行造句。

1、刚......就...... Just now....be going to

我刚会说简单的汉语，就一个人来到了中国；我刚到中国，就认识了几个新朋友；我刚买过衣服，就打折了；我刚出门就下雨了；我刚开灯就停电了。

2、先.....再.......

First ....then.....一个接一个动作

我的计划是先在朋友家住两天，然后再决定去不去北京；先刷牙后洗脸；

3、预定：正字音，笔顺写法，book in advance 提前订好 我预订了一家餐厅。

4、大巴：正字音，笔顺写法，bus 音译词 扬州大学有许多校园大巴。

5、可是：but 转折词，连接分句。我真的很喜欢他，可是不知道怎么告诉他。我想吃西瓜，可是太贵了。

6、把字句。我把宾馆的名字写在纸上。

我把门关起来。

7、原来......所以.....

原来他一点儿都没看懂，所以一直不回答大家的问题。

原来他已经吃过中饭了，所以才拒绝了我的邀请。

8、帮....忙 离合词 既可以分开使用，又可以合起来使用的词。

虽然她只是帮了我一个小忙，但我却非常感激他。

9、售票员：正字音，笔顺写法，ticket seller 卖票的工作人员。

10、交谈：正字音，笔顺写法，talk，谈话。

（四）梳理字词之后，请同学再次齐读文章，在朗读的时候，思考这两个问题：这篇文章写了一件什么事情，先写了什么，后写了什么？ 提问：这篇文章主要写了一件什么事情？

（记叙文，记叙一件事情的文章，按照事情的先后顺序来写。一件事情发生包含的要素包括：起因reason、经过proce、结果result 第一段交代事情，为什么来中国，什么时候来的：北京留学，晚上十点多。 第二段：来到中国发生的事情：问路 第三段：结果：顺利坐上了大巴

三、范文分析

（一）解读范文《来到中国》

1、引导学生从文中查找10个问题的答案。

（给大家5分钟的时间填一下这十个问题，请同学轮流回答） （为节省时间，可建议学生不必写下来，直接在文中标注）

（二）引导学生分析文章的写作思路

1、时间顺序。（在“范文阅读与感悟”环节中，已经初步涉及）

2、参考答案：我到上海后的计划、我在机场遇到的困难、坐上机场大巴

四、写作实践

（一）小组活动I：两人一组，试一试，写一写。

1、用“原来„„，所以„„”改写语段。

提示：解释格式的意义——表示因果关系，前因后果。可以考虑两种改法： （1）小改：

我和她说了半天，她好像什么都没听懂。原来她不懂英语，所以我就把汉字写在纸上和她交谈，这时我好像感觉不到自己是外国人了。

（2）大改：

原来她不懂英语，所以我说了半天她也没听懂。于是，我就把汉字写在纸上和她交谈，这时我好像感觉不到自己是外国人了。

2、替换时间词“这时”。（答案：“一会儿”→“这时”）

3、用“先„„，再„„”改写句子。

我先把宾馆的名字写在纸上，再拿给附近的工作人员看。

4、找出语段中省略的“因为”、“所以”。提示：引导学生寻找表示因果关系的语句。

女的很客气，用英语告诉我宾馆在哪儿，（因为）怕我不明白，（所以）还在纸上写了宾馆的正确的汉字，应该在哪儿下车。

5、用“刚„„，就„„”、“„„，可是„„”、“帮„„忙”改写语段。提示：语言格式的综合运用，注意离合词“帮忙”的用法。

我刚到中国时，就会说几句汉语。有一次我去银行，我用英语和职员说话，可是他听不懂。后来有一个女职员帮了我的忙，到现在我都记得那个女职员的样子。

6、用“预订好”、“听不懂”、“看不懂”、“写错了”、“感觉不到”改写语段。

提示：补语的用法。

来中国前，我已经预订好了宾馆。为了坐机场大巴，我把宾馆的名字写在纸上，去找工作人员帮忙。工作人员用汉语问我，我听不懂，我说英语，他也听不懂。原来我写错了汉字，所以刚才那个人看不懂。上了大巴以后，我和售票员用汉字“交谈”，这时我已经感觉不到自己是外国人了。

（二）小组活动II：两人一组，说说从“飞机降落”到“你坐上出租车或机场大巴”的过程。

提醒学生使用下列结构。

刚„，就„；先„，再„；可是；原来„，所以„；帮„忙

（三）小组活动III：两人一组，写一写

1、引导学生分组，边讨论边写。在强化语言结构使用的基础上，训练语段表达。

2、提醒学生使用下列结构。

刚„，就„；先„，再„；可是；原来„，所以„；帮„忙

3、如有学生不能按时完成，可留作课下作业。

五、课后作文布置

来到中国（300字左右）

引导学生的写作思路，可模仿范文《来到中国》的时间顺序：交代背景→遇到的困难及解决过程→感想。

第11篇：《写作课》教案

《写作课》教案

—— 一件难忘的事

教师：王萱

一、教学目标：

1、了解作文体裁；

2、了解写事类记叙文的写作方法；

3、了解如何将事件写得精彩、详细。

二、教学重点：

1、了解写事类记叙文的写作方法；

2、了解如何将事件写得精彩、详细。

三、教学难点：

 了解如何将事件写得精彩、详细。

四、教学设计：

1、情景设置法

2、提问、点拨法

3、小组讨论法

五、教学过程：

1、导课：

同学们都知道，在我们日常语文中，作文是最最让大家头疼的一件事。每每要写作文，我想同学们肯定都想着，烦死了，又写作文；作文什么的最讨厌。要不，有的同学甚至想，要是没有作文该多好。

今天呢，老师就给同学们教会一个秘密武器，只要你们能认真学习这个，什么作文的，一定不是难题！

2、教学内容： ⑴了解文章体裁

首先，要把作文写好，就要明白一个问题，同学们知道，我们的作文有哪些体裁嘛？（记叙文、议论文、说明文、应用文）

而在我们小学阶段，主要是记叙文和说明文。在考试中，则绝大多数考的是记叙文，记叙文还分为写人记叙文和写事记叙文。今天，老师就给你们着重讲一下写事记叙文的写法。

⑵了解写事类记叙文的写作方法

首先，我们同学谁知道记叙文的六要素？（时间、地点、人物、事件的起因、经过、结果。这也叫记叙文四要素。）

其次，我们说，文章一般分为开头，中间，结尾。

①开头：A开门见山法：文章第一自然段就介绍时间的时间、地点、人物、起因。（一般少用）

B引用法：引用诗歌、名人名言、歌曲、俗语等。

C议论法：围绕主题议论。比如一件难忘的事。在我们人生的长河中，有许许多多的事情发生，这些事情，像一颗颗闪烁的宝石，留在我的记忆里。有的事情，让我感动，有的事情，让我高兴，有的事情， 让我伤心。而有一件事情，让我久久不能忘怀。

②中间：分段描写事件的起因、经过、结果。

③结尾：围绕主题写出通过这件事给你的启示。通过这件事，我明白了________。我也希望同学们和我一样，_________。

⑶了解如何将事件写得精彩、详细。

了解了记叙文的写作方法，那么我们来讲解一下，如何把文章写得精彩、详细。

首先，我们先分析题目，一件难忘的事。通过题目，我们知道，你描写的事情，一定是要难忘，给你留下深刻印象的。那么，什么叫做难忘？就是，通过这件事，让你明白一个道理。比如：坚持就是胜利，要诚实，要自信，要勇敢，要珍惜时间，要有信念……那么，你就要在这些中，选择一个主题。你在文章中写的事件，举得名人名言，引用的诗歌都要围绕主题。

其次，确定了主题，我们就要去写事件。那么一个事件，包括了时间，地点，人物，起因，经过，结果。而每一个事件，都是人物去做的，那么，我们就要知道，人物描写有哪些方法？（外貌、语言、动作、神态、心理）我们就那爬山，坚持就是胜利来做例子。

① 先说，时间，地点，人物，事件。那是 时候

谁 爬山时发生的。这里的事件，就是直接说是什么事。

爬山，先写自己之间知道这个消息的心情，自己的准备，迫不及待地等待那天到来。然后，到了那天，你什么心情，一家人一起去什么地方爬山。

② 到了山脚下，你看到的环境，山，树，花，水。看到山顶，你下决心，迫不及待要爬。

③ 详细描写爬山，刚开始，你是什么心情，飞快的，等等描写爬山，接着，爬一会是不是累了，你的心理，外貌（脸红红的，气喘吁吁……）看到什么，坚持去爬，又爬了一会，是不是更累了，这时，你的心理，外貌，动作，语言。这是，谁对你说了什么，听了这话，（要和坚持就是胜利有关）你的心理变化，你怎么做的。如何坚持去爬。

④ 最后，你爬到山顶，看到美景，心理。

4、教师总结：

通过本节课，老师相信，同学们对一片写事类记叙文应该比较了解了，接下来，只要同学们勤加练习，一定会有很大的进步的。

5、板书设计：

一件难忘的事

一、开头：①开门见山

②引用法

③议论法：在我们人生的长河中，有许许多多的事情发生，

这些事情，像一颗颗闪烁的宝石，留在我的记忆里。有的事情，让我感动，有的事情，让我高兴，有的事情， 让我伤心。而有一件事情，让我久久不能忘怀。

二、中间：①先说，时间，地点，人物，事件。那是 时候

谁 爬山

时发生的。这里的事件，就是直接说是什么事。 爬山，先写自己之间知道这个消息的心情，自己的准备，迫不及待地等待那天到来。然后，到了那天，你什么心情，一家人一起去什么地方爬山。

②到了山脚下，你看到的环境，山，树，花，水。看到山

顶，你下决心，迫不及待要爬。

③详细描写爬山，刚开始，你是什么心情，飞快的，等等

描写爬山，接着，爬一会是不是累了，你的心理，外貌（脸红红的，气喘吁吁……）看到什么，坚持去爬，又爬了一会，是不是更累了，这时，你的心理，外貌，动作，语言。这是，谁对你说了什么，听了这话，（要和坚持就是胜利有关）你的心理变化，你怎么做的。如何坚持去爬。

④最后，你爬到山顶，看到美景，心理。

三、结尾：通过这件事，我明白了________。我也希望同学们和我一

样，_________。

《写作课》教案

班级：五年级 科目：语文

教师姓名：王萱

第12篇：写作课英语写作课说课稿)

NSEFC BOOK3 新课标必修三 Unit 2 Healthy Eating

From Students’ book P16

Write a short paage to advertise your restaurant and its service.Your writing should:

Explain what kind of food will be offered in your restaurant

Describe their ingredients, flavor, smell and appearance

Explain how they will provide a balanced diet

Explain why your restaurant will provide the best food in the area

Explain how customers will be served

说课稿：

Good afternoon, everyone.I’m so glad to be here to talk about my teaching plan.The teaching plan I ‘m going to talk about is the writing period of Unit2 Healthy Eating taken from NSEFC BOOK3.

I will explain in the following 5 parts:

1.Understanding of the teaching material

2.Analysis of my students

3.Teaching methods and studying ways.

4.Teaching procedure.

5.Blackboard Design

Part 1.Understanding of the teaching material

My Understanding of the teaching material includes 3 parts: the status and function, teaching objectives, teaching important and difficult points.

At the beginning let’s focus on the first part.This unit mainly talks about healthy eating, problems with diet and balanced diet and nutrition.This writing period is about persuasive writing—an advertisement.So this leon plays an important role in this unit---how to use what Ss learnt in this unit to write an advertisement so as to persuade customers.

That’s all for the first part, now let’s move to the second part.According to the teaching material and the new curriculum of English, in order to fulfill the learning task of this leon, I establish the following objectives:

a) Knowledge objectives

By the end of this leon the students will have a better understanding of the structure and characteristics of an advertisement.The students will grasp and can some useful words and expreions to describe a good restaurant such as: fresh, delicious, mouthwatering, home-made food, nutritious, reasonable price … etc

b) Ability objectives

Students will be encouraged to use persuasive sentences.They can make use of the modal verbs which they’ve learnt from last leon: such as should, would, could, will and so on.

Their ability of information gathering, analyzing, comparing and making conclusion will be improved through discuing in groups in pre-writing while the ability of imagination, cohering, creating and persuading will be developed in writing.

c) Moral objectives

I will make full use of this leon to stimulate the students’ learning motivation and make the students confident and improve their ability of cooperating with each other through discuing.

Teaching important and difficult points:

This is a writing cla so the Teaching important and difficult points are how to make use of sentence structures they’ve learnt to write an advertisement of a restaurant and how to improve the Ss’ writing skills.

Part 2.The Analysis of the students:

The students in this grade have known some basic knowledge of advertisement, and they are active in mind.They are able to expre simple ideas in simple English under the teacher’s guidance.And they are more interested in concrete images, so in the proce of teaching, I will make full use of the pictures.

Part 3.Teaching methods and learning ways:

Generally speaking, I will adopt task-based approach, cooperating approach and communicative approach.As for learning, Ss will learn through discuing, information gathering, discuing, comparing and polishing.

Part 4.Teaching Procedure

Here comes the most important part of my teaching plan—my teaching procedure.

It includes 5 steps:

Step1.Revision & lead in.(3M’)

First check the homework of last cla---which was to find out a succeful restaurant advertisement from internet or library.Then let the students swap the homework with each other and discu in groups of 4, take notes, find out and category the impreive sentences into 5 kinds of information:

1.Food (special food, flavor, ingredients, balanced diet etc.)

2.Location

3.Decoration

4.Music

5.Service

6.Price

This step is very important because it can improve the students’ ability to cooperate with each other, prepare them with the information needed and get them interested in the writing proce.

Step2.Discuing (8 M’)

Before they discu in groups of 4, I will show our students 4 pictures of some famous restaurants in Wenzhou-----Shamaohe Sushi Restaurant, Spicy Noodles, Golden Prince Steak House, and Concept Restaurant.Those pictures are placed together with the pictures of their recommended dishes and some key words after (Such as fresh, yummy, nutritious, recommend, specialize, home-made etc.).I will let the students choose one restaurant and suppose they were the owners, then discu how to advertise the recommended food in 3 sentences.

I will ask 3 students to report their work.

In this step, I show them the pictures of their familiar restaurants to stimulate their imagination and attract their interests.

Step 3.Pre-writing (10 M’)

This step includes 2 activities.

Activity one, I will show them the sample advertisement.

Activity two, they will be encouraged to read the advertisement and think over what are the characteristics of a succeful restaurant advertisement.I will encourage some students to analyze and tell me their opinion, so as to improve their ability of analysis, conclusion and imitation.

Then I will give out some suggested points:

Point1.Use the Modal Verb to persuade (Once you’ve tried our food, you will never want to go anywhere else.)

Point2.Use imperative and short sentences to encourage.(Come and eat here! Discounts today! )

Point3.Use questions to arouse interest.(Do you want to have home-made flavor food everyday? )

Point 4.Being creative and catchy.(Do you want to date the fresh sea food with your tongue?)

Point 5.It must have a topic sentence.

Step 4.While-writing.(16 M’)

Before they write I will ask students to read the requirements on page 16.

So they will mainly focus on food and service.

I will ask them to write the topic sentence first, and then write at least 6 supporting sentences to advertise the above 4 restaurant motioned.

During their writing I will walk around them and help them with some vocabulary.

Step 5.Post-writing.(6 M’)

After they’ve done the writing, I will let them swap their paage with each other and recommend 3 most succeful advertisements----the most funny, the most impreive, and the most creative ones.

In this step their ability of comparison and evaluation is developed.And their interest of writing is aroused.

Step 6.Homework.(2 M’)

1.Polish their writing and write some more aspects of their restaurants, such as music, decoration, location, etc.Their final work will be modified and selected, then the most succeful ones will be put up on the English Corner.

2.Review the words and expreions in this unit, and we will have a dictation.

This step plays an important role in improving their writing skills and autonomous learning ability.

The following is my blackboard design:

5 kinds of information could be advertised:

1.Food (special food, flavor, ingredients, balanced diet etc.)

2.Location

3.Decoration

4.Music

5.Service

6.Price

5 Stylish Characteristics of a succeful advertisement

Point1.Use the Modal Verb to persuade (Once you’ve tried our food, you will never want to go anywhere else.)

Point2.Use imperative and short sentences to encourage.(Come and eat here! Discounts today! )

Point3.Use questions to arouse interest.(Do you want to have home-made flavor food everyday? )

Point 4.Being creative and catchy.(Do you want to date the fresh sea food with your tongue?)

Point 5.It must have a topic sentence.

第13篇：大学英语基础写作

大学英语基础写作

大学英语几种常用文体

1.书信作文：

事务信函（busine letter）和私人信函（personal letter）

2.应用文：

便条（病假条，事假条，邀友来访，借物，订票，留言），请柬，单据，启示，海报，通知 （凌茜p110）

3.图表作文：

 常考查的图：餠型图，曲线图，条形图，数据图

 图表作文常用的展开模式

 图表作文常用的表达方式

 图表作文常用的句型

 范文分析

(是文涛p91)

4.留学申请写作

 个人陈述Personal Statements

 推荐信 Letters of Recommendation

 简历resumes

 与外国大学的联系信及自述信和签证申诉信

5.CET4，CET6写作

 写作要求，命题规律及评分标准

 主题句

 段落展开：列举法，对照法，因果推理法，分类法，举例法，综合法

 语篇：结构模式和衔接方法

 CET4,CET6作文分类讲解及范文分析：

论说文的结构

论说文的类型

(是文涛p91)

6.学术交流英语

 SCI 写作规范

 Research report and eay

教学安排

十一周：概况

十二周：书信作文，应用文

十三——十七周：CET4作文，图表作文及练习

十八周：留学申请写作

十九周：学术英语，考试

CET4，CET6写作

一． 语段

1.语段的结构：

Developing Sentence 1(扩展句)

Topic sentence (主题句) ----Developing Sentence 2(扩展句) ---- Terminator(结论句)Developing Sentence 3(扩展句)

2.写好主题句

一个好的主题句必须满足以下基本特征：

 高度的概括性

 主题思想表达明确

 能使读者预测其段落的发展方式

 一般应该是一个观点，想法或意见等

分析下列的例子：

1）It is very neceary to be a good university students.(议论主题句)

2）There are several respects of neceities to be a good university student.(说明体

的主题句)

3）What I will do in the future is the following.(描述体的主题句)

根据要求写出主题句

1）Please write about Study Habits

2）Please write about College Life

3）Please write about Your hobby

扩展下列主题句

例如这样的一篇作文：Good Health

a.Importance of good health

b.Ways to keep fit

c.My own practice(是P59)

3.段落展开

主题句是陈述段落的中心思想。因此，段落的展开（paragraph development）也就是主题句的展开。展开的方式有多种，如：列举法，对照法，因果推理法，分类法，举例法，综合法等。

列举法常用词语：first/second/third/last; firstly/secondly/finally; to begin with/to start with/inthefirstplace/then/next/in addition to/besides/also/moreover/furthermore/what’s more

以下有3篇短文的题目，请用顺序排列法的发展方式完成，每篇要求80字左右： a.Many people now prefer to live in the countryside.The main reasons are… b.Watching TV at home is better than going out to a movie

c.Chatting on line has brought many problems into people’s life

Making a good impreion at an American dinner party is not difficult if you

Follow these instructions.First, you should buy a small gift, such as flowers, candy, or wine for your host or hoste.Second, arrive on time.If the dinner engagement is for 7:00, don’t arrive after 7:00 without telephone.Next, during dinner, be sure to thank your host orhoste on the meal.After you finishing eating, you should not stay more than a few hours.Finally, thank your host or hoste for the dinner when you leave.

比较对照法常用连接词 （transitions for Comparison and Contrast）

Similar to; like; different from; compared with; unlike; more… than…

以下有2篇短文的题目，请用比较对照法的发展方式完成，每篇要求80字左右： a.Advantages and disavantages of living on your own and living with your family b.Life in the city is quite different from life in the suburbs

因果推理法

表结果的连接词：as a result; thus; hence; accordingly; therefore; consequently; then; so;

表原因的连接词：because; for; as; since ; owing to

以下有2篇短文的题目，请用因果推理法的发展方式完成，每篇要求80字左右： a.Migrant workers enter big cities

b.Land shortage in China

分类法

常用的分类表达形式有：divide A into… claify A into… group A into… There are…kinds (groups, categories, sorts, types, claes, sections)

请用分类法的发展方式完成下列题目，每篇要求80字左右：

Write about the different kinds of universities and colleges in China.

Suggested words:

Leading university, provincial key university, local college, comprehensive, science and engineering, foreign language, humanities, public, private.

举例法

常用的引出例证的词有：for example, for instance, for another example, one example is … another example is… to illustrate.

以下有2篇短文的题目，请用举例法的发展方式完成，每篇要求80字左右： a.Give one or two examples to show the conveniences the modern communication

means have brought to us.

b.Give some examples to prove the saying “Haste makes waste” in English language learning.

综合法

综合使用两种或两种以上写扩展句的方法，称为综合法。

以下这段使用了定义，例证，对比和比较等方法。

Synonyms, words that have the same basic meaning, do not always have the same emotional meaning, For example, the words “stingy” and “frugal” both mean “careful with money.” However, to call a person stingy is an insult, while the word

frugal has a much more positive connotation.Similarly, a person wants to be slender but not skinny, and aggreive but not puy.Therefore, you should careful in choosing words because many so-called synonyms are not really synonymous at all.

运用综合法将下列主题句发展成80字以上短文：

a.Computer are playing an important role in modern education.

b.People in different cultures can communicate with each other.

c.I don’t think that examination can determine everything.

4.扩展段的承启方式(ling P8)

扩展段是主题句的延伸，是作文的主体部分，必须紧扣作文主题。一段由一个以上的段落组成，即使只有一个段落，也应该比开头和结尾部分长，否则将失去平衡。主体段落分别论述文章中心主题的某个方面，每个段落的主题必须欲文章的主题相呼应，每个段落都必须保持文章的整体性和连贯性。

（1.）以“举例式”展开段落

Laying-off also bring us some advantages.For example, when a company lays off a number of people, it means that the company will get more profits than ever.As another instance, if a laid-off worker wants to get a newjob, he ought to learn some kind of skill for future use.This action will pave the way for succe in another.

（2.）以“因果式”展开段落

There are two major reason for the change in people’s diet.For one thing, with the improvement in the living standard, people can afford to buy much more expensive food with better nutrition.For another, people now pay more attention to the quality of diet, because they know it is of great benefit to their health to diet in a scientific way.Therefore, they try their best to improve the structure their food.

（3.）以“递进式”展开段落

I don’t teach because teaching is not easy for me.Teaching is the most difficult of the various ways.Nor do I teach bebecause I have knowledge I feel compelled to share.In the first place, I teach because I like the pace of the acdemic calendar, which offers an opportunity for reflection, research and writing.Besides, I teach because teaching is a profeion built on change.Moreover, I teach because I can ask questions that students struggle to answer.What’s more, I teach because I can find ways of getting myself and students out of the ivory tower into the real society.

（4.）以“列举式”展开段落

Traveling benefits us in many ways.First, it is instructive.People can learn a lot about the culture and history of the place they visit.Second, it offers fun.Career people are tired of preures brought by the quickening pace of modern life.By seeing the beautiful landscape of our motherland and our countries, we get relaxed.Third, traveling offers challenge and opportunities of cultivating good character, such as independence, courage and strong-mindene.So more and morepeople are going out to visit the world.

（5.）以“比较式”展开段落

（6.）以“对照式”展开段落

（7.）以“时间标志词式”展开段落

The Effects of Exercise on Our Health（分析建议类）

 1分析体育锻炼给我们带来的益处。

 2.分析体育锻炼给我们带来的坏处。

 3.给出如何参加体育锻炼的建议。

1) As is known to all, exercise does bring a lot of benefits to our health.

2) First, it can greatly strengthen our hearts, lungs, bones and muscles,

thereby changing our whole health for the better.3) Besides, it can make

our brains better able to react to what is going on around us.4) And best

of all, it can help us breed optimism about our tough life

5) But all the above does not mean that we can turn a blind eye to the

negative effects exercise brings about.6) If you are normally inactive and then, contrary to your usual habit, start a program of undue exercise, as a succeion of scientific

studies reveals, there are more chances that you have yourself injured.

7) In addition, the more exercise those on a fat-reducing diet take, the more

lo of iron they will suffer and the worse their health will get.8) And

worst of all, continual as well as exceive exercise can result in sudden death.

9) Therefore, a scientific approach must be adopted to the problem of exercise.

10) On the one hand, our physical exercise must be based on both progreivene and regularity.11) On the other, we must go in for physical exercise according to local as well as health conditions of our own.12) In sum, exercise can do us good or harm, all depending on how we make use of it.

With the rapid improvement of people’s living standard, in cities, many people tend to raise pets.Some people claim that pets such as dogs are dirty and dangerous.They say that raising pets should be banned in urban areas.However, personally I think the merits of raising pets outweigh its demerits.

Firstly, pets like dogs can be a guard for us.As we know, dogs have the natural ability to keep the house of its owners safe.They can send out warning to those burglars who attempt to break into the house, and sometimes even fight against them.Dogs are people’s honest friends.Secondly, pets like dogs are good fellows of people.Accompanied by a dog, old people do not feel lonely.Also children are pleased while playing with pets.They can learn how to look after others by raising pets.

To sum up, Pets give us much happine.I would say that the benefits of raising pets carry more weight than the harms of it.I also wish to suggest that the owners should take much care of their pets.

With the rapid improvement of people’s living standard, in cities, many people tend to raise pets.Some people claim that pets such as dogs are dirty and dangerous.

They say that raising pets should be banned in urban areas.However, personally I think the merits of raising pets outweigh its demerits.

Firstly, pets like dogs can be a guard for us.As we know, dogs have the natural ability to keep the house of its owners safe.They can send out warning to those burglars who attempt to break into the house, and sometimes even fight against them.Dogs are people’s honest friends.Secondly, pets like dogs are good fellows of people.Accompanied by a dog, old people do not feel lonely.Moreover,some young women usually keep their favorite pets to show off their wealth.Also children are pleased while playing with pets.They can learn how to look after others by raising pets.

On the other hand, the critics decry that pets like dogs are dangerous to people, especially to children.They point out that many people have the experience of being bitten by dogs.But I believe that it is not the responsibility of dogs.Indeed, it is the duty of their owners who deliberately train their dogs to attack people.As for the dirtine of the dogs, the owners should also take the responsibily, because they are too lazy to give baths to the dogs.

To sum up, Pets give us much happine.I would say that the benefits of raising pets carry more weight than the harms of it.I also wish to suggest that the owners should take much care of their pets.

第14篇：大学英语写作1234

大学英语写作套路及范文

1.我的观点(MY VIEW)

When asked about a theme, different people will offer different opinions…is no exception.Some people take it for granted that …However, others hold that…

As far as I am concerned, I’m in favor of the second view.The reasons are as follows.

First, there is an element of truth that… but it doesn’t follow that…A case in point is that… Therefore, the first view doesn’t bear much analysis.

In conclusion…

Example:

My View on Adventuring

When asked about a theme, different people will offer different opinions.Adventuring is no exception.Some people take it for granted that human beings should explore the unknown world by adventuring.However, others hold that it is unneceary and insignificant to be engaged in any adventure in modern times.

As far as I am concerned, I’m in favor of the second view.The reasons are as follows.

Firstly, there is an element of truth that to transform the world human beings should know it first, but it doesn’t follow that people need to go adventuring.It is unneceary for modern people to sail around the world in a small boat single-handed, or pa through

the desert of the jungle on foot alone, etc.The reason is that there are hardly any places in the world that have never been discovered.A case in point is that Yu Chunshun, an adventurer from Shanghai, who went adventuring through many provinces in China, died in the desert in the end.Although his adventure caused a stir in society, I think it was worthle and insignificant because the wen adventuring only out of curiosity and didn’t make any valuable discovery as Columbia did.Therefore, the first view cannot bear much analysis.

In conclusion, in modern times common people need not to adventuring.They can hardly make any new discovery because the world has been explored mostly and is still being explored by scientists.

2.优点和缺点(Advantages and disadvantages)

Nowadays, ...plays an important part in ...Like everything else, ...has both favorable and unfavorable aspects.Generally, the advantages can be listed as follows

Firstly, ...Besides ...Most important of all ...

But every coin has tow sides.The negative aspects are alse apparent.To begin with, ...To make matters worse of all ...

Through above analysis, I believe that the advantages aspects outweigh the disadvantages.Therefore...

Example:

On Computers

Nowadays, computers are very popular around us.Like everything else, computer have both favorable and unfavorable aspects.Generally, the advantages can be listed as follows.

First, computers can calculate.They can make work more efficient for they have a high speed of calculation.Besides, people can communicate with each other by E-mail, which costs people le money and le time.Most important of all, computers create wide communication around the world.People can communicate with each other by joining Internet.They can make friends all over the world.

But every coin has tow sides.The negative aspects are also apparent.To begin with, since computers can do a lot of work for us, such as calculation, we may rely too much on them and become lazier and lazier.To make matters worse, although it is convenient for people to communicate with each other by E-mail, the original warm relationship may become cold, for people will have fewer opportunities to talk to each other face to face.Worst of all, computer will have virus caused by electronic hackers so that a lot of important information will be lost.

Through above analysis, I believe that the positive aspects outweigh the negative aspects.Therefore, I believe, computers will have a bright future.

3.怎么办(How to)

Many ways can contribute to solving this serious problem, but the following ones may be most effective.First of all ...Another way to solve the problem of ...is ...Finally...There are not the best and only tow measures we can take.But it should be noted that if we take strong action to ...

Example:

How to solve the Problem of Heavy Traffic

With the booming of the motor industry, there are an increasing number of vehicles on the roads.As a result, traffic jams often occur.

Many ways can contribute to solving this serious problem, but the following ones may be most effective.

First of all, roads should be broadened to lower the degree of congestion and to speed up the flow of heavy traffic.Another way to solve the problem of heavy traffic is to open up more bus routes to reduce bicycles and automobiles.Finally, more underground paages should be developed so that people can commute by metro.

These are not the best and the only three ways we can take.But it should be noted that if the government takes some actions to alleviate the traffic problem, all of us can enjoy more free traffic.

4.选择行动(A or B)

When we ...we will be faced with the choice between A and B.Before making the right choice, we had better make a close comparison and contrast of them.

First of all, A...Also, B...Second, A...likewise, B...Despite their similarities, A and

B are also different in the following aspects.First, A...However, B...Besides, A...on the contrary, B...

Therefore, it depends with ...we should choose.If we…., we should choose A; but if we ...we should turn to B.

Example:

Traveling by Train or by Plane

When we go on a busine trip, we will be faced with choice between traveling by train by plane.Before making the right choice, we had better make a close comparison and contrast of them.

First of all, a train will take us to our target railway station.Also, a plane will take us to the target airport.Second, in a train we can enjoy the beautiful scenery of the countryside.Likewise, in a plane we can command a good view of fields, building, mountains and even clouds below.Despite their similarities, traveling by train and by plane are also different in the following aspects.First, a train ticket is cheap.Most of us can afford it.However, a plane ticket is about twice as expensive as a train ticket.Most of us grudge paying for it.Besides, it is safer to travel by train.If the train gets into some trouble, we may survive by jumping out of it.On the contrary, if we travel by plane, we have to ask God to ble us.Finally, it takes us longer time to travel by train than by plane.Therefore, it depends which transportation tool we should choose.If we just want to save money, we travel by train; but if we want to save time, we will turn to the plane.

第15篇：大学英语写作题材

1 Job interview is very important in job-hunting.Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic to give some suggestions to the interviewees:

The Most Important Thing in a Job Interview

You are to write in three parts.

In the first part, state specifically what your idea is.

In the second part, provide one or two reasons to support your idea or describe your idea.In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.

2.It’s time for senior students to think about their jobs.Some students want to work in developed cities, but others prefer west China.Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic:

Where to Work: Developed Cities or West China? You are to write in three parts.

In the first part, state specifically what your idea is.

In the second part, provide one or two reasons to support your idea or describe your idea.In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.

3.Some people hold that intelligence is critical to one’s succe in study, but others believe that diligence is more important than intelligence.What’s your opinion? Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic:

Intelligence or Diligence: Which One is More Important in Study? You are to write in three parts.

In the first part, state specifically what your idea is.

In the second part, provide one or two reasons to support your idea or describe your idea.In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.

4.“Do you play again?” Many children have heard of such complaints from their parents or teachers, who think that playing games is only a waste of time.Do you agree with them? Do you think games are important in a child’s development? Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic:

Are Games Important in Children’s development?

You are to write in three parts.

In the first part, state specifically what your idea is.

In the second part, provide one or two reasons to support your idea or describe your idea.In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.

5.Wasting has become a serious problem in the present society.For example, half or more than half of the dishes are left on the hotel tables; water is left leaking all day long.Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic:

No Wasting

You are to write in three parts.

In the first part, state specifically what your idea is.

In the second part, provide one or two reasons to support your idea or describe your idea.In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.

6.A hearing (听证会) has been held in Hangzhou recently.It focused on a proposal that the lucky numbers of cars should be auctioned, and the money should be used to public welfare.Some people hold that it will encourage superstition, while others insist that the practice will promote public good.What’s your opinion? Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic:

Should Lucky Numbers be Auctioned?

You are to write in three parts.

In the first part, state specifically what your idea is.

In the second part, provide one or two reasons to support your idea or describe your idea.In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.

7.Featured with pictures, TV, the Internet, and various cartoons have influenced our way to get information and entertainment.It is claimed that we have entered a “picture-reading” time.Some others, however, call on to rediscover the enjoyment of reading printed books.How do you comment on this phenomenon? Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic:Picture-Reading or Word-Reading?

You are to write in three parts.

In the first part, state specifically what your idea is.

In the second part, provide one or two reasons to support your idea or describe your idea.In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.

8.Nowadays students tend to look up for a new word in an electronic dictionary more than in a printed dictionary.So some believe that electronic dictionaries will kill printed ones.What is your opinion? Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic:Will Electronic Dictionaries Kill Printed Dictionaries?

You are to write in three parts.

In the first part, state specifically what your idea is.

In the second part, provide one or two reasons to support your idea or describe your idea.In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.

9.The frequent reports about the extinction of animals have aroused serious reflection among us.Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic: Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic:

Animals, Our Friends

You are to write in three parts.

In the first part, state specifically what your idea is.

In the second part, provide one or two reasons to support your idea or describe your idea.In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.

10.Succe is everyone’s desire.As to the ways to succe, people may have different opinions.What is the most important thing to succe in your eyes? Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic: Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic:The Most Important Thing to Succe

You are to write in three parts.

In the first part, state specifically what your idea is.

In the second part, provide one or two reasons to support your idea or describe your idea.In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.

11.A piece of aphorism may encourage us to go forward or influence our life.What’s your favorite aphorism? Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic: Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic:

My Favorite Aphorism:…

You are to write in three parts.

In the first part, state specifically what your idea is.

In the second part, provide one or two reasons to support your idea or describe your idea.In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.

第16篇：大学英语A写作题目

大学英语A写作题目

1.Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a letter to one of your former clamates.You should write at least 80 words, and base your letter on the Chinese outline below: 1.你的朋友杨英要从另一个城市来看你。

2．你将到机场接她，但由于某种原因，你不能去。 3．写封信给她，解释原因，并告诉她如何到你家。

March 25, 2006 Dear Yang Ying, I am writing to say that I will not be able to meet you at the airport next Monday morning. This morning my bo asked me to go to Shanghai on busine tomorrow.It is something very important for our company and I will have to go.By the way, I will be back within 10 days.When you arrive, please take Bus No.925 and get off at the Yu Garden.The bus station is not far from my house and you will find my house easily.My mother is always at home.I told my mother that you would come already. Looking forward to seeing you. Yours. Li Ming

2.Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a letter to one of your friends.You should write at least 80 words, and base your letter on the Chinese outline below: 1． 你即将参加全国网络学院英语考试，现在正在复习。 2． 说明你在哪些方面还有问题。

3． 请对方所说如何针对这些问题搞好复习。

Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a letter to one of your friends.You should write at least 80 words, and base your letter on the Chinese outline below: 1.告诉对方你将参加英语四级考试 2．询问对方如何做准备 3．请对方建议一些参考书。 March 25, 2006 Dear Mary, I would like to thank you for your nice birthday gift and kindne.It looks very nice and I like them very much. I will attend the English examination that is organized by the National Internet Colleges.I am studying hard and reviewing English.You know, I am very poor in English, especially in listening and writing.I need your help.Could you give some advice on how to review English and how to improve listening and writing. Looking forward to receiving your reply as soon as poible.

Yours

sincerely, Wanglin 3.Directions:For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a letter to one of your former clamates.You should write at least 80 words, and base your letter on the Chinese outline below: 1． 了解对方毕业后的情况。 2． 你的近况

3． 邀请对方方便时来访。 Dear Xiaoping, Hi! How are you getting on? I mi you very much.It is a long time not to contact you since we graduated from our university.I really want to know more about you.After graduation, I attended a big company and I have become a sale manager.I feel very lucky because my bo trusts me very much.If you have free time, please be bound to visit me and we can communicate with each other and show you around our city.Mi you! Yours, Mice March 25,2006

4.Directions: For this part, you are supposed to write an announcement .You should write at least 80 words, based on the following situation.Remember to write it clearly.英语系请著名翻译家李教授为本系学生作一个讲座。请写出一则关于这个讲座的通知，通知内容包括以下几个方面： 1） 讲座的主题和主要内容； 2） 讲座的时间和地点； 3） 参加讲座的对象；

4） 要求学生在讲座之后进行一次讨论。

Notice March 25, 2006 Profeor Li, a famous interpreter, who is invited by our English department, will give a lecture to our students.The topic is how to improve our spoken English.He has rich experience and we believe, we can learn a lot from him.The lecture will be held in Room 201, the Report Hall of the Lab Building at 8:00 pm , Saturday, 26 March.The Freshmen in our department must attend the lecture on time and will be required to have a discuion about it.Be punctual and Welcome all the other students in our college too.

English Department

1.Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write an E-mail to one of your former clamates.You should write at least 80 words, and base your E-mail on the Chinese outline below: 1.了解对方毕业后的情况。 2.你的近况。

3.邀请对方方便时来访。Dear Sam, It is lovely to write to you.I haven’t seen you since we graduated.I\'m told that you are in New York now.What have you been doing these years? Do you keep in touch with other clamates? I am now working in Shanghai JiaoTong University as a teaching aistant.My main duty is to support my teacher with her everyday teaching.The job requires great patience.But it is always a nice thing to work in a college, especially with those kind teachers and lovely students.I mi you very much.I would be very happy if you come to Shanghai and I’m sure we\'ll have a good time then.Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Alex

2.Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write an E-mail to one of your former clamates.You should write at least 80 words, and base your E-mail on the Chinese outline below: 1.告诉对方你最近将出去旅游。 2.了解对方所在地的旅游点。 3.请对方给予帮忙安排。 Dear Susan: How is everything going with you these days? I\'m going to Guilin, your hometown, for a holiday this Friday and stay there for about a week.Guilin is a wonderful place that I have always dreamed to visit.Since you work there right now, could you tell me about where to stay, where to eat and what to see in Guilin? I\'m also told that Yangshuo is the most beautiful place in Guilin, and there are lots of activities you can do, so I plan to stay there for five days.Would you please book a nice hotel for me if it is convenient for you? Well, I feel very excited that we\'ll see each other very soon.Looking forward to seeing you. Love!

Jane 3.Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a letter to one of your friend.You should write at least 80 words, and base your letter on the Chinese outline below: 你的一位外国朋友给你来信，打算到中国旅游。你给他回信，提出旅游建议。你的回信应包括下列内容： 1.接到朋友的来信；

2.你对旅游的安排计划及理由；3.表达你希望见到朋友的心愿。 Dear Tom, I\'m glad to know you want to make a tour in China.Now I\'m living in Shanghai, and there are so many famous places here.I have made a plan for your visit in Shanghai.First we can go to the Peoples\' Square, the most famous place in Shanghai.Then we can go to Yu Garden, which I think you have heard before.In the evening, we may have dinner at my home and you care welcome to stay at my home for several days.I\'m looking forward to your coming to Shanghai.I am sure you will like this city.Yours, Mark 4.Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a letter to one of your friend.You should write at least

80 words, and base your letter on the Chinese outline below: 选择一个你想旅游的地点，并安排旅行计划。你应包括下列内容： 1.说明你想旅游的地点； 2.说明你为什么选择这个地点； 3.描述你的旅行计划。 Dear Alice, How is everything going with you? I plan to go to Sanya in Hainan province for my summer holiday.It\'s a famous seaside resort in China with clear water, beautiful sand and tall palm trees.It’s a wonderful place for a relaxation.You can enjoy delicious seafood and fresh fruits of many kinds.What\'s more, you can do a lot of activities there, you can go swimming, surfing and diving, and you also can have a barbecue on the beach.I plan to stay there for a week and I believe I will enjoy myself there.Regards ever，

Jimmy

5.Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a letter to one of your friend.You should write at least

Yours

80 words, and base your letter on the Chinese outline below: 你的朋友邀请你参加他/她的生日聚会，告诉对方你不能接受他/她的邀请。你应包括下列内容：

1.告诉对方你不能接受他/她的邀请；2.对对方的邀请表示感谢； 3.说明无法接受邀请的原因。 Dear Lily, Thank you very much for the invitation to your birthday party this Saturday evening.But unfortunately I am not able to take part in it, because I have to play a football match this Saturday afternoon.As you know, I am a member of the football team in our university.This weekend we will have matches with all the other universities in Shanghai.We have already been preparing for a few months.I don\'t know how long my match will last.So I can\'t come to your party.I wish you a very happy birthday.Have a good time and a lot of fun! Best regards, Hongli 6.Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition.You should write at least 80 words, and base your composition on the Chinese outline below: 假如你是李明，遗失了一个书包。你应包括下列内容： 1.包在哪里遗失的；

2.这个包对你很重要；3.拾到者应该如何和你联系。 A Schoolbag Lost I carelely left my schoolbag in claroom 811 on the morning of July 3rd, Saturday when I was in a hurry to send a clamate to hospital.I rushed back only to find it gone. It is a black canvas shoulder bag, which has a big pocket on the front with a “friend” logo on it.In the bag there are three textbooks, a Chinese-English dictionary, a bunch /set of keys and a wallet.Inside the wallet there are 225 RMB and an ID card, of which I am in urgent need to register for CET 4.It will be highly appreciated if the finder can get in touch with me as soon as poible.My telephone number is 85488548, or you can find me in Room 210 of the 3rd dormitory building.Your kindne will be rewarded for sure.

7.Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition.You should write at least 80 words, and base your composition on the Chinese outline below: 你应邀到一位好友家吃晚饭。事后给朋友写信表示谢意。你的信应包括下列内容： 1.表达谢意；

2.表达想回请的意愿；

3.期待朋友的光临。Dear Cindy，

Thank you for your invitation to your home for dinner yesterday.It was a beautiful night.I enjoyed the food and the music very much.This Saturday is my birthday, there will be a birthday party at my place, and I will invite some close friends to have dinner at my home.I do hope you can come to join us.We will have a barbecue in my back yard, and one of my friends will play the guitar, he can play very well.We can sing and dance to the music.It would be fun.Please make sure you will come.I am looking forward to having you at my party. Yours， Cathy

8.Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write an E-mail to one of your former clamates.You should write at least 80 words, and base your E-mail on the Chinese outline below:

1、了解对方近来的情况。

2、通知对方同学将在五一举行聚会。

3、请对方参加。

Dear Echo，

It is lovely to write to you.I haven’t heard from you for a long time.How is everything? I am now working in Shanghai JiaoTong University as a teaching aistant.My main duty is to support my teacher with her everyday teaching.The job requires great patience.But it is always a nice thing to work in a college, especially with those kind teachers and lovely students.There will be a former clamates’ get-together during this May Day holiday at our mother school. I mi you and the happy school days we spent together.And I think this get-together would surely bring back a lot of old memories.So do come to the party if you are free. I am looking forward to your reply.Yours truly, Richard

9.Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write an E-mail to one of your former clamates.You should write at least 80 words, and base your E-mail on the Chinese outline below:

1、了解对方最近的学习情况。

2、你的学习情况。

3、请对方说说提高英语水平的经验。Dear Jane，

It’s a pleasure to hear from you.I’m really happy to know that you can continue your study in Oxford, which is a world-known university in Britain.How about your study and life there? Since I am now working in a multinational company in which English is very important in daily life.I have to use English, which I’m not very good at, every day.I begin to study English in Shanghai Jiaotong University recently.But it\'s really hard for me to work in the day and study in the evening or on weekends.And the most difficult thing for me is grammar.You have always been good at English.Would you please tell me your own experience in English study and give me some tips? Looking forward to your reply. Best wishes， Robin

10.Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write an E-mail to one of your former clamates.You should write at least 80 words, and base your E-mail on the Chinese outline below: 1.你的近况。

2.请对方帮你购买英语语法书。3.邀请对方方便时来访。 Dear Eric，

Haven\'t heard from you for a long time.Is everything going well with you? I am now working in a multinational company in which English is very important in daily life.I have to use English, which I’m not very good at, every day.I begin to study English in my spare time, but it\'s really hard for me to work in the day and study in the evening or on weekends.And the most difficult thing for me is grammar.Since you are always good at English, would you please buy a good English grammar book for me? We haven\'t seen each other since last summer.Why not come to Shanghai for some days? It will be great that we can be together again.Looking forward to seeing you. Yours， Mike

11.Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write an E-mail to one of your former clamates.You should write at least 80 words, and base your E-mail on the Chinese outline below: 1．告诉对方你将参加英语四级考试。 2．询问对方如何做准备。 3．请对方建议一些参考书。 Dear Alex，

How is everything going recently? Thanks very much for your tips on improving my oral English.It helps me so much that I become confident enough to take every chance to communicate with foreigners in English. I am going to take CET-4 at the end of this term.Great efforts should be made to pa the test succefully.I know that you paed it last term.Could you please tell me what did you do when you were preparing for the test? I don\'t want to fail it. In order to get well prepared, I need a lot of practice.Would you be so kind to recommend me some books for practice? Looking forward to hearing from you.

Best wishes， Jean

12.Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition.You should write at least 80 words, and the theme of your composition is My Plan for the Spring Festival.The Spring Festival is the most important time of the whole year for Chinese people.We will usually have a long vacation.So it is really a good idea to make my plan for the Spring Festival in advance.On the first day of the Spring Festival, I always go to my grandparents\' home and have a wonderful dinner.So it will be the same this year.After the family get-together, I am going to have a trip with my friends.Qingdao will be a good choice for me at that time.On the last two days of the Spring Festival, I will go back and have a rest.You know, the relaxation is also important for us during the holiday.These are my plans for the Spring Festival, what about yours? May everyone have a great Spring Festival.

13.Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition.You should write at least 80 words, and the theme of your composition is Why I Like Learning English.Nowadays, studying English gains popularity in China.Many rich parents would rather send their children abroad to receive education than let them be educated in China.I am also among the fans of English.First, I like English because

it has become an international language.If I can speak English, then I can go almost anywhere around the world without any communication problem.Secondly, because English sounds so soft, especially American English, I love to hear it and speak it.So I like learning English!

14.Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition.You should write at least 80 words, and the theme of your composition is My Dream.I have a dream that I will be always young.Then I will have enough energy to do everything that I want.Moreover, I don\'t have to worry about being too old to take care of myself, thus becoming a burden to my family.I know that my dream will not come true.However, I think it is lucky that I am young now.So I will treasure my time, enjoy my life and try my best to do everything well.

15.Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition.You should write at least 80 words, and the theme of your composition is About Self-study.We all know that for a school student, the amount of time spent in clarooms with teachers is very limited.It is therefore very important for him to take full advantage of his spare time to

have self-study.To make his self-study succeful, one needs both good methods and perseverance.Before starting his self-study, one should recall the way his teacher gives leons.With those methods in mind, one would study more efficiently.Perseverance is also eential in self-study.Since no one would urge him to finish something in self-study, one can only rely on himself to overcome the lazine to continue with his study.

16.Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition.You should write at least 80 words, and the theme of your composition is The Job I Like.I have decided to take teaching as my life-long career.A variety of reasons have led me to choose this occupation over others.First, teaching is learning.To make my lectures more constructive and stimulating, I have to read more books, explore new knowledge and gain a better understanding of the world.Second, teaching means freedom and independence.As a teacher, I\'m free to use my own ideas and make my own decisions.Finally, I like teaching because it offers certain peace of mind.Nothing, not even a big salary, can equal for the opportunity to continue learning, the satisfaction of being your own bo, and a gentle peace of life.

17.Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition.You should write at least 80 words, and the theme of your composition is My Favorite TV program.I like watching TV very much.And my favorite TV program is news.Because I can know what is happening in our nation and in the world every day through news.And I watch TV for news at the same time every day.I believe that many people like watching TV for news too.I can find some interesting things through news.Also we can know what we can do and what we can not do through news.I can acquire some knowledge from news.

18.Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition.You should write at least 80 words, and the theme of your composition is My Family/ Living in a Big Family.My family is a big family.My father was born in Shaoxing, Zhejiang province in 1946.And he came to Shanghai with my grandparents when he was a little boy.He has two older brothers.One lives in Shanghai, the other lives in Jiangsu now.My mother was born in Anshun city, Guizhou province in 1952.She has one younger brother, and two younger sisters.And In 1960s, she entered the factory where my father was in.At that time, the

factory was in Anshun, then it was moved to Wuhan city.After my parents retired from the work, they came to Shanghai and live with us, their children, my sister and me.Last year, the 13 people of my family including my father\'s brother\'s family went back to Shaoxing to visit our relatives there.It was the second time I had gone there.And we all felt happy! And this year, we plan to go back to visit my mother\'s mother in Anshun.It has been more than 30 years since my father left there.And his brother\'s family will join us together.We are looking forward to their coming.

19.Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition.You should write at least 80 words, and the theme of your composition is About Television. Before the television was invented, many families enjoyed listening to the radio when they were free.Since the television was invented.It has become one of the most popular ways of entertainment for most people.People can acquire every kind of knowledge from the television.We can listen to music, watch movies, listen to the news report, etc.on TV.Nowadays, television has already become part of our life.And it brings us a lot of fun .And the television program is more exciting than before.

20.Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition.You should write at least 80 words, and the theme of your composition is My Clamates.I have many friends in my cla.They’re lovely and interesting.I would like to introduce some of them.Alice is very cute.She＇s also kind to everyone and she＇s very enthusiastic.She＇s always ready to help others, but she is forgetful.She always forgets to bring her textbooks, but our teachers always forgive her.Ben is the most talkative boy in our cla.His nickname is “chatterbox.” He has a great sense of humor and he always makes me laugh.Linda is a quiet student.She is good at every subject but she never shows off.Allen is a very tall boy.He plays basketball very well and he is on our school team.He often says, “Playing basketball is good for your health.” How about your clamates? Do you like them? Try to admire your clamates.You will be happier.5.Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a letter to one of your former clamates.You should write at least 80 words, and base your letter on the Chinese outline below: 1.告诉对方你的近况。

2.介绍你所在城市的旅游景点。3.邀请对方国庆假期来旅游及安排。

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6.Directions:For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a letter to one of your former clamates.You should write at least 80 words, and base your letter on the Chinese outline below: 1． 告诉对方你最近将出去旅游。 2． 了解对方所在地的旅游景点。 3． 请对方给予帮忙安排。

7.Directions:For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a letter to one of your former clamates.You should write at least 80 words, and base your letter on the Chinese outline below: 2.了解对方近来的情况。

3.通知对方同学将在元旦举行聚会。4.请对方参加。

8.Directions:For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a letter to one of your former clamates.You should write at least 80 words, and base your letter on the Chinese outline below:

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1.你的近况

2.请对方帮你购买英语语法书 3.邀请对方方便时来访

9 .Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write an E-mail to one of your former clamates.You should write at least 80 words, and base yo ur E-mail on the Chinese outline below: The importance of English 1.英语在现代社会中占有重要地位。 2.英语对于我有重大意义。

3.我打算如何提高自己的英语水平。

1．（2005年六级真题）

Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write an open letter on behalf of the Student Union asking people to give help to a student who is seriously ill.You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below:

1． 对病人的简单介绍：目前的病情和家庭情况

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2． 目前的困难：无法承担医疗费用，需要护理

3． 希望捐助；联系方式

Your Help Needed

Dear friends,

I am writing to you, on behalf of the Student Union, to ask for your help for Li Ming, a schoolmate of ours from the Department of Computer Science.He is seriously ill now and has to have a heart transplant at once.To make things worse, he comes from the west of our country and his family is quite poor.

Li Ming is now confronted with the following difficulties.To begin with, he can’t afford the medical expenses.His family

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doesn’t have a good financial background.Moreover, his parents have already been deep in debt in order to send him to university.In addition, his family is far away and he needs someone to take care of him day and night.Only with intense care can our friend recover from his disease.

On no account can we see our friend suffer or die.He is in desperate need of your help, especially financial donations to help him pay for his expenses.Let’s all give him our hands.Anyone who wants to offer help can contact us at 88588858 or you can email us by love@sina.com.Please act without delay.

Yours sincerely,

Zhang Hua

Chairman of the Student Union

2．（2005年6月六级真题）

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Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a short eay entitled Say No to Pirated Products.You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below:

1． 目前盗版的现象比较严重

2． 造成这种现象的原因及其危害

3． 我们应该怎么做

Useful words and expreions:

盗版：piracy (n.)

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盗版产品：pirated products

知识产权：intellectual property rights

侵犯版权：infringe sb’s copyright; copyright infringement

Say No to Pirated Products

Piracy is a serious problem with which this country is confronted.In many places we see people peddling pirated books or disks.Actually, piracy has become so widespread that it has severely hindered the development of the nation’s economy.

A number of factors account for the problem, but the following are the most critical ones.First, pirated products are much cheaper than copyrighted ones, so they are very attractive to people, especially youngsters, who are not financially well-off.Secondly, with highly developed technology, it is not difficult

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to manufacture pirated products.With one authorized copy, the illegal producers can make thousands of fake ones at a very low cost, thus making huge profits.

As a result, intellectual property rights are severely infringed upon.Honest producers will lose the motivation to develop new products.Meanwhile, pirated products are often of low quality, thus damaging the interest of buyers.

In view of the seriousne of the problem, it is eential that laws and regulations be formulated and enforced to ban the manufacture and circulation of pirated products.Meanwhile, people should be educated to say no to these products.With these measures taken, we have reasons to believe that the problem can be solved in the near future.

3．（2005年12月六级真题）

Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to

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write a letter to a company declining a job offer.You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below:

1.对公司提供职位表示感谢

2.解释为何不能接受所提供的职位

3.希望予以谅解，并表示对公司的良好祝愿

A Letter Declining a Job Offer

December 24, 2005

Dear Sir or Madam:

I am responding to your job offer on December 20, 2005.I was

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informed that I would be offered the position as an interpreter for your company.I cordially appreciate your trust and I am much obliged to you for providing me with this valuable opportunity.

However, I have to tell you that I cannot accept it.The major reason is that I don’t think I am the most appropriate candidate for this post.As a non-English major, though my written and spoken English are outstanding than most of my peers, I am not well trained in translation, not to mention interpretation, which, I believe is highly demanding.Maybe my performance in the oral examination has misled you.Actually, I am more interested and more competent in my own major, that is, program designing.Last but not least, I happened to have been offered such a position with another company.

Nonethele, I, again, want to expre my sincere gratefulne and I earnestly apologize for any inconvenience hereby caused.Finally, I hope you can find the ideal candidate as soon as poible.

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Best regards.

Yours sincerely

Li Ming

4．（2006年6月六级真题）

Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a short eay entitled Traveling Abroad.You should write at least 150 words based on the chart and the outline given below:

Number of people in City X traveling abroad in 1995, 2000 and 2005

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1.近十年来X市有越来越多的人选择出境旅游

2.出现这一现象的原因

3．这种现象可能产生的影响

Traveling Abroad

It can be seen from the chart that there have been sharp increases in the number of people traveling abroad in City X in the past decade.As the chart shows, the year 1995 witneed only about 10,000 people from this city touring abroad.In 2000, the number soared to nearly 40,000.Last year, more than 120,000 people in the city chose to spend their vacations outside China.

A number of factors account for the change in the chart, but the following are the most critical ones.First, thanks to the policy

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of reform and opening-up, the nation’s economy has been developing at a considerably high speed in the past decades.Therefore, the people have more extra money for traveling.Secondly, other relevant state policies and the boom of touring industry provide citizens with more opportunities to go out and see the world.Last but not least, people have attached greater importance to the quality of life, thus they spend more money and time traveling and sight-seeing.

In a word, this chart is a perfect indicator of China’s fast expanding economy and people’s rising standard of life.The trend of traveling abroad will further stimulate the development of our economy and broaden people’s horizons.

5．（2006年12月老六级真题）

Directions: For this part you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short eay entitled The Celebration of Western Festivals.You should write at least 150 words following the outline given

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below.

1.现在国内有不少人喜欢过西方的某些节日

2.产生这种现象的原因

3.这种现象可能带来的影响

The Celebration of Western Festivals

No one can have failed to notice the fact that an increasing number of Chinese are fond of celebrating some Western festivals today.For instance, on Valentine’s Day, many people give flowers or chocolate to the one they love.Another case in point is Christmas.It seems that people around the country now love to celebrate the festival.

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A number of factors account for the phenomenon mentioned above, but the following might be the critical ones.In the first place, due to the policy of reform and opening-up, Chinese people tend to know more about Western culture and be influenced by it.Secondly, some businemen wish to make money by encouraging people to celebrate those Western festivals.Last but not least, as traditional Chinese festival lose their attraction, many people tend to find joy in Western festivals.

Though we need not criticize people celebrating Western festivals, nor can we stop them, we have to beware of the danger behind it.While enjoying the atmosphere brought by those Western customs, we might well lose our own tradition and identity.

6．（2006年12月新六级真题）

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short eay entitled The Importance of Reading Claics.You

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should write at least 150 words following the outline given below.

1．阅读经典书籍对人的成长至关重要

2．现在愿意阅读经典的人却越来越少，原因是„„

3．我们大学生应该怎么做

The Importance of Reading Claics

Reading claics plays a vital role in a person\'s growth.By reading claic works, either Chinese or foreign, one can learn a great deal about history, geography, politics, wars and customs.Besides, as these claics are the outstanding representatives human language, reading them can enormously improve our ability to read and write and to inherit cultural traditions.

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However, a diminishing number of people would like to read claics now.A variety of factors may have contributed to this phenomenon, but the following are the critical one.In the first place, as the pace of life and work quickens, people can find little time to indulge themselves in thick and serious works.They would rather read light and easy magazines or surf the Internet and do online reading.In the second place, most claics depict things far away from our real life, which makes reading them seem irrelevant.

As college students, we should shoulder the burden of inheriting and developing cultural heritage.Therefore, it is eential that we should make plans to read claics regularly.Besides, we should try to influence people around us into reading them.

六级考试写作备考：新东方课堂讲义(7)

7．Keeping Pets

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There is no denying the fact that keeping pets is a hotly debated topic today.Some people think keeping pets is a good thing to do.They believe that pets, like cats and dogs, can help relieve the loneline suffered by senior citizens and other social members who are confined to their homes for this reason or that.They also argue that keeping pets helps mankind understand animals’ world and develop positive feelings toward them.

Others, however, hold the opposite view.They regard keeping pets as a usele but harmful thing to do.First, pets can transmit diseases.Secondly, the noises and dung of pets are sources of pollution.Last but not least, as many rare birds and animals are kept as pets, they will surely be hunted on a large scale, which means a threat to the balance of the ecosystem.

Weighing the pros and cons of these arguments, I am inclined to agree with the latter.Anyway, we can leen our loneline and expre our love toward animals in other ways.And it is my belief that only by placing man and other species on an equal basis can

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we expect to have a lively and colorful world.

8.Where There Is a Will, There Is a Way

A well-known proverb goes that “where there is a will, there is a way”, which means that one can find a way to succe as long as he or she has a strong will.With a strong will, one can focus all his energy on one point, which makes his succe poible.Without a strong will, however, one can be easily distracted from his goal or discouraged by setbacks, which leads to his ultimate failure.

History abounds with examples of strong-willed figures winning succe.Actually, there is no better illustration of the proverb than the deeds of Gou Jian, king of Yue in ancient China.Defeated by Fu Chai, king of Wu, Gou tried every means poible to steel his will.Eventually, with the help of Fan Li and Xi Shi, he managed to rebuild his country and his armies and had Fu Chai taste the bitterne of failure.

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In short, a strong will is eential if we want to make achievements in our studies or work, or indeed in any other aspect of our lives.One should lose no chance to strength his will and remember, God helps those who help themselves.

9.More Students Pursue Master Degrees

It can be seen from the chart that there have been sharp increases in the number of students attending graduate entrance exams in a college in the past decades.As the chart shows, the year 1996 witneed only 200 students taking part in the exams.In 2001, the number nearly doubled.In 2006, far more students prepared themselves for graduate studies.

A number of factors could account for the change in the chart, but the following are the most critical ones.First, thanks to the policy of reform and opening-up, the nation’s economy has been developing at a considerably high speed in the past decades.

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Therefore, the people have more extra money for education.Secondly, other relevant state policies and the boom of higher education provide students with more opportunities to pursue higher degrees.Last but not least, the increasingly fierce competition forces college students to further their study in order to gain more edge of competition.

In a word, this chart is a perfect indicator of China’s fast expanding higher education.Although many problems have arisen in the proce, we have every reason to believe that they can be solved in the near future with effective measures taken.

10.Studying Abroad: Hardships and Rewards

The recent years have seen a dramatic increase in the number of Chinese studying abroad.Obviously, studying abroad has its rewards.In the first place, a student can have acce to advanced science and technology as well as desirable working conditions which might not be available at home.In the second

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place, he can be exposed to entirely new ideas and trends.Last but not least, by living and studying in a foreign country, one can improve his foreign language much faster than at home.

However, just as every coin has two sides, studying abroad may also confront one with a series of hardships.For one thing, learning a foreign language is far from an easy thing at the beginning for most people.For another, a completely new environment with different customs and habits may also be a barrier to overseas students, especially to the young.An added difficulty lies with finance: it can cost a lot to study abroad.

From my point of view, the advantages of studying abroad outweigh its disadvantages.But it is a big decision to go abroad to study and one should take into consideration his financial conditions and his ability to adapt to new surrounding.Personally, I choose to go abroad and study if I find it neceary.

11．（投诉信）

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Directions: Write a letter of complaint according to the following situation: You bought an air conditioner in Sun Appliance and had it installed the other day, but you found that the fan made too much noise when the machine operated.You demand the store to send a representative to check it up.

Write your letter in no le than 150 words.Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter; use Li Ming instead.You do not need to write the addre.

June 23, 2007

Dear Sir or Madam,

I’m writing to lodge the complaint about the poor quality of an air conditioner that I purchased from Sun Appliance Company.

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Frankly speaking, Sun Appliance has always been my favorite.On April 4, 2007, I bought the air conditioner (serial number 12345) from one of your chain store located in Lang Fang.The machine operated well at first, but ten days later, there was a fault that bothered me, that is, the fan made so much noise that I could not sleep well at night.Worse still, the cooling system didn’t work well and the machine began to leak recently.Its poor quality ruined almost all my previous impreion toward your products.

I strongly suggest that a repairman or a service engineer should be sent to my home without delay.I wonder if you could pinpoint the exact cause of the malfunction as soon as poible.If you can’t, I am afraid that I will request for full amount of refund or a new air conditioner.

I would appreciate all your aistance in this matter.If you have any questions, please don’t hesitate to contact me.Look forward to your reply.

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Yours Sincerely,

Li Ming

12．（邀请信）

Directions: Suppose you are the dean of the History Department, Peking University.You want to invite Profeor Herb Jason, a well-known scholar of Chinese history, to come to attend an international conference on Chinese history.You’ll cover the following points:

1) The purpose of the invitation

2) The time and place of the conference

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3) Ask him a favor of presenting a lecture to your students during his stay

Write your letter in no le than 150 words.Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter; use Li Ming instead.You do not need to write the addre.

June 23, 2007

Dear Profeor Herb Jason,

I am Li Ming, dean of the History Department, Peking University.I am writing to invite you to participate in an international convention that is to be held in Beijing from 22th to 25th, July, 2007.

Since your visit in Beijing last year, all the teachers that attended your lecture have been deeply impreed with your

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thorough knowledge and profound understanding of the subject.We would be pleased if you could come, as our guest of honor, to the International Conference on Chinese History, If poible, would you please deliver a speech on whatever subject that interests you.Enclosed in this letter is a time schedule for the event.You would, of course, receive our standard honorarium to cover traveling and other expenses.When you arrive in Beijing, I will certainly meet you at the airport.

Please let me know your date of arrival if you can come and tell us when you can make the trip.If you have any questions, please don’t hesitate to contact me.Look forward to your reply.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

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13．（感谢信）

Directions: Write a letter of thanks according to the following situation.Once you were ill and were hospitalized for a few weeks in the Chaoyang Medical Center, Taiyuan, Shanxi Province.During your stay the entire staff were kind to you.When you came back home, you wrote them a letter of thanks.

Write your letter in no le than 150 words.Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter; use Li Ming instead.You do not need to write the addre.

June 23, 2007

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Dear Sir/Madam,

I’m writing to extend my heartfelt thanks to all the nurses and doctors in your hospital.

Last month, while I was on a busine trip in Taiyuan, Shanxi province, I suffered from a bad cold and a fever, so I was sent to Ward Rom 201, Chaoyang Medical Center.During my stay at hospital, nurses on duty patiently took my temperature, regularly examined my body, and often fed meals to me.In addition, doctors prescribed me the most effective drugs and gave the best medical advice.Thanks to the constant care from the hospital staff, I recovered quickly.Now that I have returned home, the excellent service of your hospital still imprees me.I believe that as patient, I have received the most profeional treatment and the most considerate care.

Please allow me to convey my sincere greetings toward the doctors and nurses that contribute all their efforts, patience and energy to their patients.Nothing can expre my gratitude

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except my best wishes to them.If you have anything that needs my help, please don’t hesitate to contact me. Yours sincerely, Li Ming Directions: For this part you are allowed thirty minutes to write an E-mail to one of your former clamates.You should write at least 80 words, and base your E-mail on the Chinese outline below: 写一封电子邮件给你的中学同学，表达对过去中学生活的难忘；希望他能给你介绍英语学习的经验。

Hi mate,

I havent seen you for a couple of years.how is everything going on? have you ever met any of our clamates before? I keep memorizing the wonderful life in the high school.I will never forget the time that we led our basketball team to win the champion from the high school basketbal league.

currently, I am seeking a way to learn english.you was the top student in english cla before.I would be much appricated if I can obtain your advise how to improve the english skills.

I am looking forward to receiving your email.

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第17篇：大学英语应用文写作

大学英语应用文写作范文

1.假如你是王林， 李明是你的好友， 他对布朗先生的公司感兴趣，打算到该公司谋职（apply for a position）。请根据下面李明的简历表，用英语为他写一封推荐信。

词数110左右。

姓名 李明 性别 男 国籍 中国

出生地 重庆 婚否 已婚 出生日期 1980.8.21 通讯地址 重庆市人民路148号 电话 023-63335550 职业 律师 学历 大学毕业

外语水平擅长英语，懂一些日语、德语

其他 有三年工作经历，办事认真，待人诚恳，与人和睦相处

Dear Mr.Brown, I’d like to introduce my friend to you, Mr.Li Ming, who is going to apply for a position in your firm.He graduated from college three years ago and has worked as a lawyerever since.He is good at English and knows some Japanese and German.He works hard and is careful in everything he does.He is honest, kind and easy to get on with.He was born on August 21st, 1980 in Chongqing, China.He is married and lives at No 148 Renmin Road, Chongqing city.His telephone number is 023-63335550.He shows great interest in your firm.If he is accepted, he will do his best.I’m sure he will be fit for the position.I’m looking forward to your early reply.Yours, Wang Lin 2.假如你是业余气象员，你从电台天气预报节目得知了今晚和明天上午你处的天气情况，晚饭后6点钟在校广播室用英语向全体师生作天气预报，并提出忠告。要点如下：

①午夜至凌晨两点有强劲北风。 ②气温将下降5-8度。

③明天上午有阵雨。 ④要求同学们今晚离开教室时关好门窗。

⑤明天早上起床时多穿些衣服，以防感冒。 词数100在右。

Attention, please.It is six o'clock in the afternoon.I'm now giving the weather forecast as usual.From midnight to 2:00 tomorrow morning there will be strong north wind blowing acro our town and the temperature will drop by 5-8℃.Also there will be showers tomorrow morning.Therefore be sure to close all the windows when you leave your claroom tonight and when you get up tomorrow morning, please put on more clothes in order to keep yourself from catching cold.That's all.Thank you.3.假设你是浙江大学的老师，你将在开学典礼上向一年级的新生致辞。请你根据下面的提示写一篇演讲稿就大学的学习生活提出几点要求，并适当阐述其重要性。

①．合理安排学习和生活 ②．同学之间关系融洽 ③．积极参加校园社团活动。。。。。。

参考词汇：大学一年级新生 freshman n.社团 society n.注意：1)．演讲稿必须包括所有提示要点，但不要逐条译成英语。

2)．演讲稿的开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数。 3)．词数：100—120 Good morning, everybody.Welcome to Zhejiang University! As a freshman, you are going to have a completely new life.So here is something you should keep in mind.First, arrange your time properly.You’d better make a timetable so that you will know what to do and how to do it and take advantage of every minute.It will make your work more efficient.Living in the university, sometimes you will face some problems that you can’t deal with all alone.Then help from others will make things easy for you.So get along well with all the people around you.Always be open-minded and warm-hearted.Don’t speak ill of others at will.You should always bear in mind that we are in a big family.At last, take an active part in societies.Societies at school are your second teachers.It will not only provide you more chances to make friends and challenge yourself, but make your school life rich and colorful as well.Enjoy your university life! 4.假定你是某市居民，名叫李华。你觉得该市出租车行业问题较多，请写一封信给该市市长，内容应包括：

问题 (1)停靠点太少，不易打的; (2)欺诈外地乘客; (3)车速过快，事故频频; (4)仍有拒载者; (5)深夜聚集在娱乐场所外等客时制造噪音，影响他人休息。

建议 要求加强管理

注意：1.字数100词左右。文章开头已给出。

2.参考词汇：绕道：take a roundabout route 不替别人着想的：inconsiderate (adj.) 行业：trade 加强管理：tighten control over„ Dear Mayor, I’m a resident of the city.I feel there are many problems existing in the trade of taxi in our city.First of all, there are still not enough stops in the streets so it’s not easy to take a taxi.And taxis often run very fast, which causes many traffic accidents.What’s more, some taxi drivers still refuse to pick up some paengers without any reason.Another terrible thing which often happens is that deep at night taxis waiting around the entertainment places make much noise.Many people suffer from this inconsiderate action.A friend of mine living in another city once visited me, and she told me our city’s taxi drivers cheated her by taking a roundabout route.What will a guest think of our city after such a bad experience? I think we must take actions to tighten control over the taxi trade.Maybe the first thing to do is raise the taxi drivers’ profeional morality.We are looking forward to your reply.Sincerely yours, Li Hua 5.假如你是校报负责人，急需在学校内聘一位同学任英文版的编辑，请你用英文以“An English Editor Wanted”为题目写一则招聘启事。内容要如下：

⑴．该工作主要包括两部分：一是从英文报刊杂志及互联网上选择适合学生的文章；二是选择与编辑同学们的来稿。 ⑵．希望该同学满足下列要求：

① 乐意奉献出一些业余时间为同学们服务； ② 英文与美术皆好；能熟练使用电脑。

③ 感兴趣的同学请在本周内与学生会（Students’ Union）联系。

注意：（1）词数100左右；（2）不要逐字翻译，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文。 An English Editor Wanted Our school newspaper is looking for an editor for its English edition．The job mainly includes two parts: One is to choose proper English articles from other newspapers, magazines or Internet for us students.The other is to pick out articles from those written by students in our school and edit them for use．

We hope that he/she could meet the following requirements: First, he/she is willing to devote some of his/her spare time to serving the others．Second, it’s neceary for him/her to be good at both English and fine arts.Besides, the ability to use the computer is important．

Those who are interested in the job, please get in touch with the Students’ Union this week．

Students’ Union

6.请以宿舍管理委员会的名义写一份通知，2007年4月2日发出。内容如下：

① 时间：4月5日晚上7点。 ②地点：3号楼103房间。

③ 内容：学生宿舍安全问题：安全用电、火灾应变、防止失窃等。

④ 参加人员：每间寝室一名同学。

⑤ 要求：带笔记本，按时到场，做好记录，并传达给室友。

注意：1）通知的格式已经为你写好，不计入总词数；2）词数：100左右。

参考词汇：学生宿舍 dormitory，盗窃theft（n.）

Notice A meeting is going to be held in Room 103 of Building 3 at 7 on the evening of April 5.Problems to be talked about at the meeting include the safety of the dormitories, proper use of electricity, what to do in case of fire, prevention of theft and so on.A member of each dormitory is required to be present.They should take notebooks with them and arrive on time.They should take notes carefully and after the meeting they are to inform their roommates of what is discued and what measures will be taken.The Dormitory Committee April 2nd, 2007 7.假如你是一名大学生叫李华，对近年来大学毕业生就业情况颇有已见，请根据下面提供的信息向报社写信谈谈你的看法。字数100左右。开头已给出。

学生心态 向往城市，不愿下乡。

就业现状 城市人才过剩；农村渴求人才。

就业前景 农村天地广阔，可施展才华。

Dear editor, I am writing to you to talk about taking up occupations for college graduates.Nowadays many graduates are looking forward to obtaining employment in big cities, not willing to work in the countryside.As a matter of fact, there are not enough opportunities to satisfy most of the hunters in big cities while in the countryside talented people are badly needed and a lot of posts are waiting for us.Rural areas are a vast world, where you can put your abilities to good use and you’ll be able to make greater contributions to the building of new countryside.Therefore, I believe we can have as bright a future in the country as we have in the city.Yours, Li Hua 8.假设你的英文名为Jack，是英国诺丁汉大学的中国留学生。你负责为在该校就读的32名中国学生筹划圣诞节期间的苏格兰之行，为期7天，请你给诺丁汉的STA（Students’Travel Agency）经理Phil发一封电子邮件，联系有关事宜。要点如下：

（1）希望能够派车接送； （2）需要一名说标准英语，并非常熟悉苏格兰的导游；

（3）请求告知旅行日程及就餐、旅馆、费用等情况；

（4）你的联系方式：电子邮箱地址：Jackwang@yahoo.com.cn或电话号码：07747745007 注意：（1）词数：100词左右；（2）开头和结尾已为你写出，不计入总词数；

（3）参考词汇：旅馆住宿accommodation；旅行日程安排itinerary；长途客车coach Hi, Phil, I’d like you to organize a trip to Scotland for us.I have here a group of 32 Chinese students studying in Nottingham University, who want to go on a seven-day tour during the Christmas days.I hope we can have a coach which will take us to Scotland and then bring us back to Nottingham.We also need a guide who speaks standard English and knows Scotland well.I would be very grateful if you can work out an itinerary as soon as poible and tell me about our accommodation, meals as well as how much each of us has to pay.If you have any information, please either email me to Jackwang@yahoo.com.cn or call me at 07747745007.Looking forward to your early reply.Yours Truly.Jack 9.外籍教师Lynne任教期满准备回国，学校答应派车送她去机场。她在临行前一天写了张便条提醒办公室李老师：

1)．请检查(check on)明天的车是否落实，提醒司机(remind sb.of sth.提醒某人做某事)。

2)．她之所以要确定一下，是因为太早不好叫出租车。 3)．感谢费心，并感谢一年来的关心。

4)．在学校一年来，生活愉快、难忘，很可能再来。

5)．留下一些英语书给贵校图书馆，希望对学生有用。 字数：100—120个词。

Hi, Mr.Li, Could you please check on the car to take me to the airport? Please remind the car driver of this.I want to be sure of this car, because it will be too early in the morning to call a taxi if the school car doesn’t show up.I am sorry to trouble you again.Here I thank you again for all that you have done for me during my stay in your school.I really enjoy teaching here, and will never forget the day I spent with my students.Probably I will come back some day.I leave some English books to your library.I hope they will be useful to your students.Yours Lynne

10.致歉信

语言注意点:致歉信必须写得坦诚，表达出真心的歉意。 Directions ：Suppose you have accepted Mr.Zhangs invitation to dinner, but you have to change your plan for some reason.Write a letter in about 100 words to make an apology to him.Do not sign your own name at the end of your letter, using Li Ming instead.Sample: Dear Mr.Zhang, It was very kind of you to invite me to dinner in your house the day after tomorrow and I originally accepted it with great pleasure.But now, much to my regret that I may not be able to keep my promise because my sister was injured in a car accident and I must look after her in the hospital for several days.The accident happened suddenly and all my family are now busy dealing with it and caring for my sister.So I don't think I will have the time to go to the dinner and even if I go, I am afraid I will hardly be in a cheerful mood, which may spoil the party.I am very sorry for that and really regret that I would mi such an excellent chance of enjoying the perfect dishes with friends.Besides, please give my regards to Mr.and Mrs.Rogers when they come to dinner.Sincerely yours, Li Ming

应用文写作（书信）http://wenku.baidu.com/

第18篇：大学英语议论文写作.

大学英语议论文写作模板

一、不同观点列举型（选择型）

There is a widespread concern over the iue that 作文题目.But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person.A majority of people think that观点一.In their views there are 2 factors contributing to this attitude as follows：in the first place,原因一.Furthermore,in the second place,原因二.So it goes without saying that观点一.People,however,differ in their opinions on this matter.Some people hold the idea that观点二.In their point of view, on the one hand,原因一.On the other hand,原因二.Therefore, there is no doubt that 观点二.As far as I am concerned, I firmly support the view that观点一或二.It is not only because ________, but also because _________.The more _______, the more ________.

二、利弊型的议论文

Nowadays,there is a widespread concern over （the iue that ）___作文题目______.In fact,there are both advantages and disadvantages in __题目议题_____.Generally speaking,it is widely believed there are several positive aspects as follows.Firstly,___优点一______.And secondly ___优点二_____.Just As a popular saying goes,every coin has two sides,__讨论议题______ is no exception,and in another word,it still has negative aspects.To begin with,___缺点一______.In addition, ____缺点二______.To sum up,we should try to bring the advantages of __讨论议题____ into full play,and reduce the disadvantages to the minimum at the same time.In that case,we will definitely make a better use of the ____讨论议题___.

三、答题性议论文

Currently,there is a widespread concern over （the iue that ）__作文题目_______ .It is really an important concern to every one of us.As a result,we must spare no efforts to take some measures to solve this problem.As we know that there are many steps which can be taken to undo this problem.First of all,__途径一______.In addition,another way contributing to succe of the solving problem is ___途径二_____.Above all,to solve the problem of ___作文题目______,we should find a number of various ways.But as far as I am concerned,I would prefer to solve the problem in this way,that is to say,____方法_____.

四、谚语警句性议论文

It is well know to us that the proverb：___谚语_______has a profound significance and value not only in our job but also in our study.It means ____谚语的含义_______.The saying can be illustrated through a series of examples as follows.（also theoretically ）

A case in point is ___例子一______.Therefore,it is goes without saying that it is of great of importance to practice the proverb ____谚语_____.With the rapid development of science and technology in China,an increasing number of people come to realize that it is also of practical use to stick to the saying： ____谚语_____.The more we are aware of the significance of this famous saying,the more benefits we will get in our daily study and job.

五、图表作文的框架

As is shown/indicated/illustrated by the figure/percentage in the table （graph/picture/pie/chart）,___作文题目的议题_____ has been on rise/ decrease （goesup/increases/drops/decreases），significantly/dramatically/steadily

rising/decreasing from______ in _______ to ______ in _____.From the sharp/marked decline/ rise in the chart,it goes without saying that ________.There are at least two good reasons accounting for ______.On the one hand,________.On the other hand， _______ is due to the fact that ________.In addition,________ is responsible for _______.Maybe there are some other reasons to show ________.But it is generally believed that the above mentioned reasons are commonly convincing.1.利弊议论文 Model 1 It is a new thing that_____.Many people welcome this new development while others have expreed their concern about this.Those who take sides against this new trend believe that _____ because_____.One common argument, however, for ____ is that_____.Of the two views discued above, I am in favor of the _____.My reason is that____.Model 2 As is known to all, there has been a wave of ____.There are many advantages / disadvantages of this modern way.First of all, _____.In the second place, _____.Lastly, _____.In a word, ____.Model 3 When asked about ____, different people will offer different opinions.Some people take it for granted that _____.In their mind, ____.Besides, ______.However, others hold that ____.They maintain that ____.Weighting up these two arguments, I am for the first one.For one thing, ____.For another, _____.Therefore, as stated above, ____.Model 4

____ is becoming more popular in ____, especially among ____.Today, it’s certainly difficult to think of ____.There are several reasons for its popularity.First, ____.Second, ____.However, in terms of _____.2.个人观点议论文 Model (1 Nowadays more and more people pay more attention to _____.Some people argue that ____ while others firmly hold that _____.In my opinion, I think this question should be probed in depth.On one hand, the first group is not totally correct because ____.On the other hand, the second group seems ____ because ____.In a word, we can see clearly that the key lies in ____.Otherwise _____.Model (2 It becomes a common tendency these days for people to ____.Many people are opposed to ____ because they think_____.They also argue that ____.In my mind, however, I can’t agree with ____.At the same time, _____.In addition, ______.In conclusion, ______.Model (3 ____ has been one medium of communication that has connected all the people around world.More and more people tend to concern the ____, because it is so _____ that _____.The advantages of ____ are obvious to some people.For one thing, in terms of ____, _____.As a result, _____.Consequently, _____.For another thing, _____.Personally, I side with the former opinion.Because _____.However, _____.Model (4

Presently, one phenomenon calls for people’ s attention that ____.In general, ______.For one thing, _____.(For example, _____.For another, _____.As far as I am concerned, _____.To sum up, _____.3.解决方法类议论文 Model (1 If you ____, what will you feel? Of course, you will feel ___ because _____.Besides this, ____.For one thing, ____, For another, _____.No easy solution can be taken to cope with the problem of ____, but ____.Therefore, my viewpoint is that _____.There is no doubt that ____.Model (2 Most of us today recognize that ____ has been a greatly serious problem.Therefore, _____.From above, we can find that the reasons why ____, are as follows, the primary reason, I think, _____.For example, _____.However, ____.Second, _____.The third reason actually is the result of ____.Therefore, _____.Moreover, _____.Let’s make our good efforts, and _____.

第19篇：大学英语四级写作

Exercise

For this part, you are allowed 30minutes to write a short eay on the topic of Due Attention Should Be Given To Spelling.You should write at least 120words following the outline given below:

1.如今不少学生在英语学习中不重视拼写

2.出现这种现象的原因是……

3.为了改变这种状况，我认为……

Outline：

I.fewer and fewer students pay attention to their word-spelling

1.can only imitate the pronunciation of a word but be incapable of spelling it

II.There are some causes for it

1.fewer and fewer students need to write English eays

2.the goal of most students to learn English is to speak it and pa the examination

3.the wide use of electronic devices such as e-dictionaries and computers

III.Measures should be taken to solve the problem.

1.we need to attach great importance to word-spelling.

2.should write English as much as they can

3.the dictations should be reinforced in the cla.

满分范文：

Due Attention Should Be Given To Spelling

Nowadays, students attach le importance to the spelling of words in the proce of English study.This phenomenon greatly influences students’ writing and brings on worries among teachers.

There are poibly three reasons contributing to this phenomenon.First, exam-oriented education makes the students pay le attention to spelling.Second, some teachers should also be responsible for it because they don’t emphasize the importance of spelling during teaching.Last but not least, some students are too lazy to recite words.

Since spelling is one of the most important factors in English study, due attention should be given to it.As for me, I think, first, exams should be modified to add some factors into it, which would help student pay more attention to spelling.Then, schools should also set effective mechanisms to help teachers as well as the students to realize the importance.Finally, for students themselves, they can, through other ways, make them be interested in word spelling.Only by these can we surly realize the importance of spelling and make improvement.

大学生应该学选择什么书读？

Reading regularly has long become a common part of people’s life.And reading preference has always aroused the greatest concern.What imprees us most is according to the table, the percentage of book circulation in an American university library, which shows that the circulation of popular fictions, general nonfictions, science/technology/education books and art/ literature/poetry books accounts for 65.9%,18.2%,10.8%and 5.1% respectively.The reasons for the phenomenon are varied.

Among the various reasons, the appealing content of the popular fictions plays an important part.That is to say, thanks to its appealing plot, popular fictions attract more people than other

types of books do.What is more, science and art books which require readers’ knowledge on

relevant fields are highly demanding.For example, it’s hard for students majoring in chemistry to

understand Browning’s poems, and vice versa.

When talking about my reading preference, I think I prefer to science books.On the one hand,

in order to deepen what I’m specializing in, I need read more books relevant to my major.On the

other hand, these books can also broaden our horizons.In brief, college students should choose

books according to their interests and needs.

2.对比选择型作文模板

1.Different people have different views on——

2.Some people prefer,——.

3.Others tend to, ——.

4.As to me, I agree with /to ——

5.Of course,——.

6.For example,——

7.But,——

8.The following reasons can account for my preference——

9.The main reason is ——.

10.A good example to illustrate is ——

11.Fur another,——

12.From the foregoing（综上所述）,——

1．开门见山直入主体，表明对某事人们的不同看法。(上述12点译文)

2．表明一部分人的看法。

3．另一部分的看法。

4．作者的看法。

5．承认自己不赞同的看法有一定的合理性。

6.举例说明支持第五句。

7 转折指出这种观点的不足。

8 启下句过度到下段具体阐述自己所支持的观点的理由。

9.支持观点的理由一。

10.举例说明理由一。

11.理由二。

12.总结全文，从长远看来。

Is a test of spoken neceary?

A test of spoken English will be included as an optional component of the College English

Test (CET).Different people have different views on it.Some prefer to have such a test.Others

tend to decline any kind of test of spoken English.As to me, I agree with the first statement.

Of course, a test of spoken English is very difficult to handle and the test time is not long

enough to fully display participants’ ability to spoken in English.For example, if a candidate

draws a topic which he or she is not familiar with, it’s hard to show his or her command of spoken

English.But without such a test, some people may not have motivation to practise spoken English.

The following reasons can account for my preference.

The main reason is that such a test enhances college students’ awarene of the importance

of spoken English.A good example to illustrate is that several years ago, college students only

streed reading and writing skills, ignoring to building up listening and speaking ability.For

another, a certificate of such a test will make job-hunting easier.From the foregoing, I think a test

of spoken English is of neceity.

3.问题解决型作文模板

1.Withthedevelopment/improvementof ——,——.

2.It is neceary that——.

3.On the one hand, ——.

4.On the other hand, ——

5.Therefore, how to —— is worth paying attention.

6.Firstly——7.Secondly——

8.For example,——9.Thirdly, ——.

10.In other words,——

11.In fact, ways to —— are countle.

12.It’s time that ——

1．空格一处铺垫，空格二处填写某一问题。

2．关注解决现象引出的问题很必要

3．解决问题很必要的理由一。

4．解决问题很必要的理由二。

5．承上启下，填要解决的问题。

6.解决办法一。

7 解决办法二。

8.举例解释解决办法二。

9.解决办法三。

10.阐明解决办法三。

11.指出解决问题的办法多种多样。

12.强调解决问题时不可待。

Reduce Waste on Campus

With the improvement of living standard, waste on campus is increasingly serious.It is

neceary that something should be done to reduce waste on campus.On the one hand, our waste

has already caused a great lo of precious resources, such as water and electricity.On the other

hand, our waste adds our parents as well as our society a burden.

Therefore, how to eliminate waste on campus is worth paying attention.Firstly, we should

turn off the light when we leave our dorms or clarooms so as to save electricity as much as

poible.Secondly, we should stop wasting water when we bath, or wash clothes and dishes.For

example, we should use a basin when we clean faces.Thirdly, we should be economical.In other

words, when go shopping, we should buy only what we really need.

In fact, the ways to reduce waste on campus are countle.It’s time that we cultivate the

habit of thrift in every poible way.

4.观点论证型作文模板

1.It is true that——.

2.However,——.

3.I think——.

4.—— can be listed as follow.

5.First of all, ——

6.Secondly ——

7.For example——

8.Thirdly,——

9.A case in point is ——.

10.It goes without saying that ——

11.There is no doubt that ——

12.In conclusion ——

1．提出普遍存在地观点。

2．谈不同地观点。

3．自己地观点，即文章地论点4．过度句，转折到观点地论证，由题目选择具体的词。5．论

证理由一

6．论证理由二。

7．举例具体说明理由二。

8.论证理由三。

9.举例说明理由三。

10.提出执行该观点时应注意的事项。

11.得出结论。

12.总结全文。

It Pays to Be Honest

It is true that most of us value honesty highly.However, nowadays we often confront

confidence crisis such as cheating, overcharging, fake commodities, etc.I think that we should be

honest.The reasons can be listed as follows.

Firstly, only honest people can be truly respected by the others and can make more friends

over a long period of time.Secondly, honesty, which is the traditional virtue of the Chinese people,

can make our life easier and more harmonious.For example, consumers will not be afraid of being

overcharged if dealers are honest, and on the contrary dealers can win more customers.Thirdly,

honesty can make our society more stable.A case in point is that Singapore which is a society of

trustworthine and integrity has a comparatively low criminal rate.

It goes without saying that being honesty is of benefit to both the collective and the

individual.There is no doubt that we should foster the spirit of honesty.In conclusion, laying

stre on honesty will become the public morals in our society.

应用文作文模板

建议信模板

Dear——

1.I am delighted to learn that——.

2.It——.

3.In my opinion,——.

4.On the one hand,——.

5.On the other hand, ——

6.As to the——, I suggest——.

7.If ——

8.It is unneceary for you to——

9.In addition,——.

10.I am sure——

11.Please inform me ——

12.I am looking forward to ——

1．写信的原因。

2．引出作者的建议。

3．表达建议内容。

4．提出建议的理由一。

5．建议的理由二。

6．具体到某一方面的建议内容。

7．供被建议人选择的条件。

8．建议内容的另一方面。

9．其它的建议。

10．对建议内容的评价。

11.对建议内容所做出的承诺。

12.表达个人的愿望。

Sincerel

Signature:(个人签名)

A Letter to a Schoolmate

June 7th, 2010

Dear Wang,

I am delighted to learn that you will visit me for a week during this national days.It has been

several years since we departed last time, and I am looking forward to your visit.In my opinion,

Nanjing is your best choice for this holiday.On the one hand, there are many places of interest and

historical sites in Nanjing.On the other hand, Nanjing is a cultural center with various artistic and

musical performances.

As to the famous sites, I suggest that you should visit the Confucius Temple and Dr.Sun

Yat-sen Mausoleum.If you are interested in parks, the XXX park will be your best choice.It is not

neceary for you to bring anything except your sweaters since it is a little chill in the evening.In

addition, as there will be many people at the railway station, you should not leave your belongings

unattended! I am sure you will enjoy your visit in Nanjing.

Please inform me once you have made your decision.I am looking forward to seeing you

soon.，yours

Sincerely Yours,

Zhang Ying

第20篇：大学英语四级写作

大学英语四级写作

议论文

议论文是作者对某个问题或某件事进行分析、评论，表明自己的观点、立场、态度、看法、主张的一种文体。写议论文要把握三性和三要素。三性指准确性、鲜明性和生动性。三要素指论点、论据和论证。

论点的基本要求：观点正确，概括全面，见解新颖，有实际意义，要恰当地综合运用各种表达方式。

论据的基本要求，真实可靠、充分典型。

论证的基本要求：推理必须合乎逻辑，论证要讲究顺序，论证要符合正确的推理形式。简而言之，英语议论文共有三大特点：

1、观点鲜明的开头；

2、紧扣主题的结尾；

3、有主题句并且衔接自然的中间段落。

这三点当中，第

1、2点早已为绝大多数中国学生所熟知，因为开头点题和结尾扣题同样也是汉语文章的要求。

另外，英语文章和汉语不同的是段落的主题句一定要放在段首，而不能按照中文的写作习惯放在段落的中间或者最后，在英文应试写作中更加如此。正因为没有“主题句”的思想，所以中国学生在写英语文章时经常“想到什么，就写什么”，这在英语议论文中是不能接受的。

常用的关联词分为四类：

1、列举类

列举法常用在议论文中，当作者提出一个论点后，可通过列举出一系列事实对其进行说明或论证。

列举类关联词有：

first(ly), second(ly),...finally; for one thing, for another; on the one hand, on the other hand; moreover; furthermore; what\'s more; in addition; besides; first of all; in the first place, in the second place; (at)last; then; next; the last but not the least

2、举例类

举例法是用事例或数据对中心观点进行说明论证的方法，举例类关联词有：

for example; for instance; such as; like; take...for example; a case in point; namely; in other words; that is; especially; in particular

3、比较和对比

比较是把两种或两种以上的事物进行比较，以辨别出它们的相似之处；对比是将这些事物进行对照，辨别其差异而指出各自的特征和本质。这类关联词有：

but; however; yet; otherwise; while; in contrast; by contrast; on the contrary; similarly; likewise; like; conversely; rather than; instead; on the other hand; equally; neverthele; nonethele; unlike; still; in the same way; compared with...

4、因果类

as a result; since; because(of); thanks to; due to; owing to; for this reason; hence; thus; therefore; on this/that account; on account of; consequently

5、总结类

总结法是指在表达了一个观点或举了一个例子后，进行总结、给出概括，这类关联词有： in this case; according to; in a word; in brief; in short; to sum up.

范文1：

Career or Family: which is more important?

When asked about their opinion of career and family, people always respond differently.Some people deem it more important to pursue their career, while there are always other people who argue that family should be the number one in one’s life.

It goes without any question that career plays a key role in our life.In the very first place, career can give us an aim to live on.Without career, much of our living time will be certainly wasted.What’s more, career can provide us with a means to live on.Most of the people earn their income from a job.On the other hand, family is also an indispensable part of life, as many people will admit.Family is always regarded as a place where we can escape from troubles in life.In addition, we can obtain a sense of belonging to from family.Without it, anyone will feel lonely and desperate.

In my opinion, career and family are not in opposition to each other.Rather, they can enhance each other so that one’s life can become better and better.Therefore, it’s not a choice between right and wrong, but one between ideal and practical.

作文中可用的谚语或句子：

As a saying goes:俗话说

1、A good beginning is half done.良好的开端是成功的一半。

2、An hour in the morning is worth two in the evening.一日之计在于晨。

3、A good idler ,an old beggar.少壮不努力，老大徙伤悲。

4、Do as the Romans do .入乡随便俗。

5、Each coin has two sides.有利必有弊。

6、Failure is the mother of succe.失败是成功之母。

7、It is never too old to learn.活到老学到老。

8、Like father, like son.有其父，必有其子。

9、No cro, no crown.不见风雨，怎见彩虹。

10、Practice makes perfect.熟能生巧。

11、Where there is a will, there is a way.有志者事竟成

12、Time flies.....时光飞逝。。。

13、Look before you leap.(三思而后行。)

14、“No pains, no gains”.（没有付出就没有收获）

15、As a proverb says, “Everything has two sides”.On the one hand, physical exercise is good for your health.On the other hand, if you don’t deal with it properly, it will do harm to your health.So we should look at the matter from two sides.一．The main types of guided writing:

1.提纲式作文：

Directions:

Women make a great contribution to the progre of modern society.But there are still some people who don’t agree with it.

There has been a discuion recently on the iue in a newspaper.Write an eay to the newspaper based on the following outline.

1.Role of women in modern society

2.Prejudices and discrimination against women

3.My comment

You should write about 200 words within 40 minutes.

Women play an important part in modern society.Now many women are going into profeions, such as medicine, law and engineering.They comprise a large part of the workers in offices and factories.Many jobs they are engaged in are in line with their special capabilities of their sex.In addition, some of are working up to important positions which used to be held mainly by men.There are even some businees which are run completely by women.It is obvious that women are making an outstanding contribution to the progre of modern society.There are, however, still some people who aert that men are superior to women in many ways.In the first place, many jobs men do can hardly be done by women, who are physically not strong enough.They believe that women are the weaker one, both physically and emotionally.According to them, a woman’s place is within the protective environment of the home.Secondly, most of the world-famous scientists and statesmen are found to be males.Finally, the whole society seems to have always been dominated by men only.In their opinion, men should enjoy more rights than do women.

Personally, I’m firmly standing on the side of those women right defenders.Since both men and women are equally important in human activities, they should be on an equal footing.

二、The structure of a paragraph and its development:

1.Structure of a paragraph: topic sentence, development sentence and concluding sentence.

2.Ways of developing a paragraph:

1)Comparison and contrast (对比法)

2)Cause and effect (因果法)

3)Exemplification (举例法)

4)Generalization and qualification (概述法)

5)Argument (议论法)

三、Some sentence patterns commonly-used in controlled writing : ---关于利弊、优缺点的句型：

have the advantage of „..(有„.方面的长处)

benefit sb/sth.(对„有好处)

benefit from sth.(由于„.而受益)

do (a lot of) good to sb.(对„.有许多好处)

be good for sb./sth.(对„.有益)

do damage to sth./damage sth.(对„.造成损害)

be as(not so) good/great as „„

not so much „ as „(与其说„,不如说„)

---说明原因的句型：

1.There are some \\manygood reasons for„\\ to do sth

Example: There are two reasons for the changes in people’s living conditions.First, we have been carrying out an opening and reform policy.Second, our national economy is developing rapidly and the birth rate has been put under control.

2.We have two good reasons for „

3.The reasons for „ is that + 从句

--表示不同看法的句型：

1.Different peoplehave\\ hold different opinion\\viewon

this question\\problem

Some believe that „Others argue that „Still others maintain that „译：人们对国际文化交流的看法各不相同。有些人认为，国际文化交流能促进各国人民之间的友谊和了解。另一些人则争辩说，中国是一个具有5000年历史的文明古国，并且有自己的传统文化，它和西方文化截然不同。因此，他们反对国际文化交流。我认为，第2种看法是片面的。现在国际文化交流是非常重要的。各国人民应该互相了解、互相学习以便增进友谊。

People differ in their opinions on the international cultural exchange.

Some believe that international cultural exchange contributes to the friendship and understanding of the people all over the world.Others argue that China is an ancient civilized nation with a history of 5000 years and has its own

traditional culture, which is quite different from that in the western countries.Therefore, they are opposed to the international cultural exchange.In my opinion, the second view is one-sided and partial.The international cultural exchange is of great importance now.People of all countries should understand each other and learn from each other to enhance the friendship among them.1.They are quite different from each other in their opinions.

2.Some people hold the opinion that it is good to have a small family.Example: Parents and children think differently on this question.Parents hold that children should work hard and do well at school.Children, however, maintain that they should have freedom to spend their leisure time and to plan for their own future.

---表示必须、紧急、有困难做某事的句型：

1.It is important (neceary, urgent, difficult, easy, convenient, comfortable, expensive, desirable, advisable) for sb.To do sth.

2.have trouble\\ difficulty (in) doing sth.(有困难做某事)

have trouble with sth.(对„有困难，不好对付)

---关于因果关系的句型：

1.The reason for higher prices was an increase in demand.

because \\as \\since \\causes\\result in\\ therefore\\as a result\\because of---辩论中常用的句型：

1.There is no doubt that „毫无疑问 2.It is obvious/clear that 明显„

3.As is known all众所周知4.(It’s) no wonder„(难怪)

5.It goes without saying that „ (不成问题，很自然)

6.What is more important更重要的是7.I am convinced that我坚信

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